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Lee Hyolee - Bad Girls

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Angelina_Rocca
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年6月17日 at 15:04:22

Artist: Lee Hyolee
Title: Bad Girls
Tags: Monochrome LeeHyolee 이효리 K-pop
BPM: 150
Filesize: 5143kb
Play Time: 03:24
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.43 stars, 214 notes)
  2. Hard (4.84 stars, 519 notes)
  3. Normal (3.64 stars, 270 notes)
Download: Lee Hyolee - Bad Girls
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唔,这算是挖的新坑吗?黑历史什么的❤最喜欢了❤
李孝利的新歌~
个人蛮喜欢的~~
SPOILER
感谢帮助我支持我的朋友~我会努力进步的
Pink Agate
李孝利!顺便说一下我是KPOP爱好者
Melt
Mod as request :3

[General]
  1. 修正一下重音 offset:656
[Easy]
  1. easy里面不要用这么多短的折返slider,除了像00:41:456这种明显跟vocal的。
  2. 00:12:656(1)从这里起有点奇怪,不过好像从vocal开始的00:12:856起也有点奇怪
  3. 00:31:456(1)这个spin在00:34:256结束就可以了,easy别接的太紧
  4. 00:44:656(4)这个slider我还是倾向于少折一次跟一下vocal
  5. 00:59:856(3)这折的太多了(感觉偷懒了
  6. 01:09:056(4)稍微修一下
  7. 01:18:656(3)这一段试试弄成这个样子
  8. 01:27:056(1)这个spin可以像上面一样拉短点,个人感觉01:28:656结束比较好
  9. 02:05:256(1)这个note的音应该在02:05:456
  10. 02:25:456(2,5)没叠好
  11. 03:03:056这里可以再加个circle然后上一个finish音效
  12. 03:24:256(1)结尾spin末尾可以减点音量,其他难度也是
[Normal]
  1. 00:09:056(2,1)没叠好
  2. 00:20:656(3)感觉有点没拉好的样子,个人觉得中间缺一块不好看
  3. 00:25:056(1,2,3)nazi 尾部没弄好
  4. 01:10:656(6)nc?
  5. 01:59:056这里也试试加个circle然后finish
  6. 02:05:256(1)同easy
  7. 02:29:456(3,4)中间空一个感觉有点奇怪,试试这样
  8. 02:37:456这里听音乐的话很明显有个重音但是你却静音了orz
  9. 03:08:456(4)这slider不够美型 /me runs
[Hard]
  1. OD+1
  2. 00:16:256(8)nc
  3. 00:29:456(7)^ 后面太长的combo自己查一下
  4. 01:25:856(1,2,3)摆成正三角形试试?
  5. 01:42:856(1,2,3)这压蓝线听着太不舒服 只是个建议
  6. 02:06:056(2)这个slider可以前移到02:05:856
  7. 02:34:056(1,2,3)同前
  8. 02:36:056(1)在02:37:456结束就行了
  9. 02:51:656(4)这个slider没在节奏上啊...
还不错的样子,easy有些地方节奏有点奇怪
差不多就这样,GL~
Zero__wind
可恶 妹尔特居然抢了1st mod
不幸福

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20:28 Zero__wind: ~~~~
20:28 Angelina_Rocca: 诶嘿~
20:28 Zero__wind: 101走起系哟~
20:28 *Zero__wind is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/257536 Lee Hyolee - Bad Girls [Hard]]
20:29 Angelina_Rocca: 恩哼~~~
20:30 Zero__wind: 首先 bg和mp3文件符合规格
20:30 Angelina_Rocca: 恩捏~
20:30 Zero__wind: 然后OD建议6
20:30 Zero__wind: AR7
20:31 Angelina_Rocca: 恩恩?我看看哈~
20:31 Zero__wind: 00:16:656 (10) - NC
20:32 Zero__wind: 00:20:656 (6) - 尾巴clap
20:32 Zero__wind: NC
20:33 Zero__wind: 00:25诶 上面一行的NC是说00:21:256 (7) - NC
20:33 Angelina_Rocca: 恩哼~改掉了0 0
20:33 Zero__wind: 我咋没贴出来……
20:33 Zero__wind: 00:25:056 (1,2,3,4) - 唔 洗衣机仍然很给力
20:33 Zero__wind: 00:29:456 (7) - NC
20:33 Angelina_Rocca: 噗- -这个。。
20:34 Angelina_Rocca: 诶?因为这里是遮挡了吗?
20:34 Zero__wind: 00:37:656 (1,2,3,4) - 这个叠得很好
20:34 Zero__wind: 嗯
20:34 Angelina_Rocca: 嗯嗯嗯。。
20:34 Zero__wind: 你说什么地方是遮挡 00:29:456 (7) - 么?
20:34 Zero__wind: 这个只是因为一个combo set太长了 应该拆一下
20:34 Angelina_Rocca: 对呀0 0感觉那里vocal是连着的0 0
20:34 Zero__wind: 不是为了可读
20:34 Angelina_Rocca: soka
20:35 Zero__wind: 那里是重音
20:35 Angelina_Rocca: 恩恩
20:35 Zero__wind: 00:48:456 (9) - NC
20:35 Zero__wind: 也可以不
20:36 Zero__wind: 00:38:656 (5) - 尾巴finish
20:36 Zero__wind: 加normal finish还是soft finish感觉效果都还可以 看你自己意思
20:36 Angelina_Rocca: 啊,这点确实- -我没注意这个的细节。。
20:36 Zero__wind: 00:51:456 (5) - 这个尾巴同上
20:36 Angelina_Rocca: 我感觉一下
20:37 Zero__wind: finish是新人最容易漏的
20:37 Zero__wind: 嘛 我也容易漏……
20:37 Zero__wind: 00:53:456 (5) - 折返clap
20:37 Angelina_Rocca: 恩。。注意了比较明显的。其他的没怎么注意
20:37 Zero__wind: 00:59:056 (4) - 尾巴clap 如果不是故意没加的话
20:38 Zero__wind: 01:03:456 (3) - 这个finish可以不要 有1的就够了
20:38 Zero__wind: finish音的持续时间很长
20:38 Zero__wind: 01:04:656 - 这里可以加一个note 看个人意思
20:38 Angelina_Rocca: 诶?因为这里是duangduang两下
20:38 Zero__wind: 嗯
20:39 Zero__wind: 我感受一下
20:39 Angelina_Rocca: 嗯嗯嗯~~
20:39 Zero__wind: ok
20:39 Zero__wind: 01:07:056 (1) -
20:39 Zero__wind: 缩短成二分拍滑条比较合适
20:39 Zero__wind: 01:07:256 - 这里开始 同一个点结束
20:39 Zero__wind: 现在起早了
20:40 Angelina_Rocca: 改成2分拍滑条+个note吗?
20:40 Zero__wind: 不加
20:40 Zero__wind: 哦我脑子进水了
20:40 Zero__wind: 1/1 slider
20:40 Angelina_Rocca: 啊我明白了
20:41 Angelina_Rocca: 对对对- -我想起来当时我是非得给白线加东西。
20:41 Zero__wind: 总之是缩短二分拍
20:41 Angelina_Rocca: 所以往前移动了一格
20:41 Zero__wind: 按你的NC习惯 01:15:256 (8) - 这里NC
20:41 Angelina_Rocca: 恩哼
20:41 Zero__wind: 01:24:056 (6) - NC
20:42 Zero__wind: 01:24:256 (7,8,9) - 距离感有点儿微妙
20:42 Zero__wind: 建议等距
20:42 Zero__wind: 01:25:856 (1,2,3) - 这种地方也是
20:42 Zero__wind: 直接CTRL+SHIFT+D就好了 方便省事
20:43 Angelina_Rocca: 恩恩
20:43 Zero__wind: 01:33:056 (4) - 同样 finish
20:43 Zero__wind: 后面类似的不说了
20:43 Angelina_Rocca: 恩恩
20:44 Zero__wind: 对比01:34:256 (2,3) - 和01:38:256 (4,5,6) - 又是微妙的距离差异 我看你前面都是开1.2x的ds摆的 不知道这里为什么有了几处1.1
20:44 Zero__wind: 虽然关系不是很大吧 不过保持一致性还是好的
20:45 Angelina_Rocca: 恩
20:45 Angelina_Rocca: 本来是1.1后来觉得断了。改1,2
20:45 Angelina_Rocca: 有的貌似没改掉0 0
20:45 Zero__wind: 嗯
20:45 Zero__wind: 01:42:856 (1,2,3) - 这个节奏真心略猎奇
20:46 Angelina_Rocca: - -貌似是跟vocal。。
20:46 Angelina_Rocca: 诶 诶 诶~~
20:46 Angelina_Rocca: 哈哈
20:46 Zero__wind: 我来救救你吧
20:46 Angelina_Rocca: 噗 - -好。。
20:47 Zero__wind: 建议节奏http://puu.sh/34oMq.jpg
20:47 Zero__wind: 排版再相比
20:47 Zero__wind: 想吧
20:47 Angelina_Rocca: 恩恩
20:47 Angelina_Rocca: 我一会研究下
20:47 Zero__wind: 另外 这样的节奏最好让前面2个滑条的尾巴改成soft
20:48 Angelina_Rocca: 恩哼
20:48 Zero__wind: 02:05:256 (1) - 这个应该往后移二分拍
20:49 Zero__wind: 现在的节奏太诡异了
20:49 Angelina_Rocca: 噗- -对。。是这样- -
20:49 Zero__wind: 02:15:056 (6) - NC
20:49 Zero__wind: 02:16:456 (11) - 这个方向比较诡异
20:49 Zero__wind: 调过来改成 ) 这样
20:49 Zero__wind: 包住(9)吧
20:50 Angelina_Rocca: 我看看哈0 0
20:50 Zero__wind: 02:34:056 (3,4,5) - 这个地方的节奏和我前面那个地方建议的一样
20:50 Zero__wind: 一会儿自己研究研究
20:51 Angelina_Rocca: 恩恩~
20:51 Zero__wind: 02:36:056 (1) - 提前二分拍结束
20:51 Zero__wind: 诶 我突然意识到一个很严重的问题
20:51 Zero__wind: 嘛 这个最后说
20:51 Angelina_Rocca: 诶?
20:51 Zero__wind: 没事 继续
20:52 Angelina_Rocca: 恩
20:52 Zero__wind: 从02:37:856 (1) - 这里开始 你的clap都飞了
20:52 Zero__wind: 02:47:056 (7) - NC
20:52 Angelina_Rocca: 噗- -
20:53 Zero__wind: 02:51:656 (4) - 这个节奏又极其不在点儿上
20:54 Zero__wind: 改成这样http://puu.sh/34oXw.jpg
20:54 Zero__wind: 02:52:456 - 这里可加note
20:54 Angelina_Rocca: 恩恩~
20:55 Zero__wind: 802:59:656 (8,9,10) - 还是和前面一样的建议 之前有两处一样的了
20:55 Zero__wind: 另外 Nc
20:55 Angelina_Rocca: 恩恩
20:56 Zero__wind: 03:08:456 (8) - 缩短四分拍 然后03:09:456 - 加note
20:56 Zero__wind: 蓝线折返的滑条刚开始作图的时候一定尽量少用
20:56 Angelina_Rocca: 恩哼。记住了~
20:57 Zero__wind: 03:09:856 (1,2) - 这后面也完全可以map的 空着略奇怪
20:57 Zero__wind: 03:20:256 (1) - 03:21:856 (1) - 放跳
20:57 Angelina_Rocca: 噗- -(嘘。我是懒了那里- -
20:57 Angelina_Rocca: 恩恩
20:58 Zero__wind: 03:24:056 (1) - 在03:25:456 - 结束
20:58 Angelina_Rocca: 恩恩
20:58 Zero__wind: 在结束的地方插一根绿线10% volume SC2
20:58 Zero__wind: 不要spinner最后那声响
20:59 Angelina_Rocca: 恩恩
20:59 Zero__wind: 好 现在我们开始说重点问题
21:00 Angelina_Rocca: 恩
21:00 Zero__wind: 好吧 顿时感觉mod炒鸡不专业 我一直看到kiai才发现问题 omg
21:00 Zero__wind: 你offset改了之后绿线没有resnap
21:00 Zero__wind: 另外
21:00 Angelina_Rocca: 诶?每个绿线都要吗?
21:00 Angelina_Rocca: 检查的时候只说了kiai
21:01 Zero__wind: 当然
21:01 Zero__wind: 绿线一定要snap
21:01 Angelina_Rocca: 恩恩。
21:01 Zero__wind: 而且
21:01 Angelina_Rocca: 恩哼?
21:01 Zero__wind: 02:37:456 - kiai应该在这里起
21:01 Zero__wind: 一定记住kiai要起在副歌第一个重音
21:01 Zero__wind: 不要管vocal
21:01 Angelina_Rocca: 恩恩
21:01 Zero__wind: 要听鼓
21:01 Angelina_Rocca: 记得了
21:02 Zero__wind: kiai结束的地方虽然不是那么讲究 不过最好放在02:50:256 - 这里 有拍子的地方
21:02 Zero__wind: 一般是放在副歌结束之后的第一个重音
21:03 Zero__wind: 嘛 Hard就这些
21:03 Angelina_Rocca: 恩恩~
21:03 Zero__wind: 记得绿线和kiai是所有diff的事情
21:03 Angelina_Rocca: 好~
21:03 Zero__wind: 各个diff见一一定要统一
21:03 Angelina_Rocca: 了解0 0
21:03 Zero__wind: 这个CTRL+SHIFT+里面可以查
21:04 Angelina_Rocca: +?
21:04 Zero__wind: A
21:05 Zero__wind: 好吧 我今天怎么了
21:05 Angelina_Rocca: 恩恩
21:05 *Zero__wind is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/257537 Lee Hyolee - Bad Girls [Normal]]
21:05 Angelina_Rocca: 恩哼。
21:05 Zero__wind: 00:20:656 (3) - 形状还需考究
21:05 Zero__wind: 唔 差点打成烤鸡
21:05 Angelina_Rocca: 哈哈
21:05 Zero__wind: 00:25:056 (1) -
21:05 Zero__wind: 00:24:656 (4,1) - 这种结构在E/N都不要出现
21:05 Zero__wind: 会被吐槽到抬不起头的
21:06 Angelina_Rocca: 噗好- -我n出现了。e克制住自己了。。
21:06 Angelina_Rocca: 我再看看怎么放比较好
21:06 Zero__wind: 你就让1和4叠着就可以 2 和3 跟着1一起挪
21:06 Zero__wind: 或者你换摆法
21:06 Zero__wind: 随意
21:06 Angelina_Rocca: 恩恩
21:07 Zero__wind: 00:32:656 (4) - 这个节奏很棒
21:07 Angelina_Rocca: 0 0
21:07 Zero__wind: 00:36:656 (3) - 少折返一次
21:07 Angelina_Rocca: 我看看哈
21:07 Zero__wind: 不要管那个vocal
21:08 Zero__wind: 哦还有 记得reverse的折返次数调整之后它上面的所有音效都要重新加
21:08 Angelina_Rocca: 诶恩恩
21:08 Zero__wind: 00:37:456 (1) - 一样 finish 不说了
21:08 Angelina_Rocca: 恩
21:09 Zero__wind: 00:39:456 (1,2,3,4) - 这几个调整一下布局
21:09 Zero__wind: 让00:39:456 (1) - 离中心近一些
21:09 Zero__wind: 低难度spinner之后的note一定要靠近中心
21:09 Angelina_Rocca: 恩恩
21:09 Zero__wind: 不一定要正中间但是要靠近
21:09 Angelina_Rocca: 恩恩~~~get it
21:10 Zero__wind: 00:44:656 (5) - 少折返一次00:45:456 - 这里加note
21:10 Zero__wind: 记得这种长度的reverse一定避免多次折返
21:10 Zero__wind: 迷惑性太强
21:10 Angelina_Rocca: 恩恩~
21:11 Angelina_Rocca: 完了- -我easy各种折返哈哈哈。。
21:11 Zero__wind: 01:00:656 (4,5) - 拉开
21:11 Zero__wind: 全程要跟ds
21:11 Angelina_Rocca: 恩
21:11 Zero__wind: 你画一个弧度小一点的blancket就是了
21:11 Angelina_Rocca: 恩恩
21:12 Zero__wind: 01:03:856 (1) - 这个spinner的长度很容易被吐槽
21:12 Zero__wind: 虽然我不是很确定
21:12 Angelina_Rocca: 太短了?
21:12 Zero__wind: 嗯
21:12 Angelina_Rocca: 我开dt玩是有点不好转
21:12 Zero__wind: 建议处理方法是
21:13 Angelina_Rocca: 恩哼?
21:13 Zero__wind: 从起spinner的地方起长滑条 到01:04:656 - 结束
21:13 Angelina_Rocca: 我看看
21:13 Zero__wind: 就是画一个时长两拍的滑条
21:14 Angelina_Rocca: 恩恩~
21:14 Zero__wind: 01:07:056 (1) - 和Hard一样的意见 起早了
21:15 Zero__wind: 01:10:656 (6) - NC
21:15 Zero__wind: 01:15:856 (5,1,2,3,4,5) - clap又飞了
21:15 Angelina_Rocca: - -
21:16 Zero__wind: 01:32:256 (1) - 和前面一段副歌统一
21:16 Zero__wind: 01:31:056 (4) - 少折返一次 01:32:256 (1) - 提前一拍起
21:16 Angelina_Rocca: 恩哼
21:17 Zero__wind: 01:33:856 (1) - 同样 靠近中心 不说了
21:17 Zero__wind: 嘛 somehow 01:41:456 (3,4) - 这个还算比较好接受的
21:17 Zero__wind: 不过个人意见还是少折返一次 换个摆法
21:18 Zero__wind: 01:43:056 (5) - NC
21:18 Angelina_Rocca: 恩捏
21:18 Zero__wind: 01:46:656 (1) -
21:18 Angelina_Rocca: 也是靠近中心~~~= =
21:18 Zero__wind: 01:55:856 (5) - 这种长度的滑条多次折返还稍微好一些
21:18 Zero__wind: 这个有反应时间
21:19 Zero__wind: 02:05:256 (1) - 一样的问题 往后挪二分拍
21:19 Angelina_Rocca: 明白了,就是说看不清折返数目的少量折返为佳这样么。
21:19 Angelina_Rocca: 懂了0 0
21:20 Zero__wind: 对于所有时长的滑条来说 二分拍滑条是最不适合多次折返的
21:20 Angelina_Rocca: 恩~
21:20 Zero__wind: 因为不像四分拍短滑条按住了可以不移动 也不像更长的滑条有反应时间看是否需要再折返
21:20 Zero__wind: 二分拍滑条来不及反应 完全是猜
21:21 Angelina_Rocca: 恩
21:21 Zero__wind: 02:17:056 (1,1) - 衔接太紧密了 危险系数高
21:21 Zero__wind: spinner后面一整拍内不要有东西最好, 在E/N中
21:21 Angelina_Rocca: 恩。。
21:21 Zero__wind: H以上这样还可以
21:21 Zero__wind: 如果不很远离中心的话
21:21 Angelina_Rocca: 明白~
21:22 Zero__wind: 02:29:456 (3) - 拆成一个和02:28:656 (2) - 一样的reverse 再加一个隔整拍的note
21:23 Zero__wind: kiai记得调整
21:23 Angelina_Rocca: 恩~
21:23 Zero__wind: 所有的timing调整 offset什么的 都要所有diff一起改
21:23 Zero__wind: 当然还有source和tag 如果需要改的话 也记得所有diff都要改得一样
21:23 Angelina_Rocca: 恩捏
21:24 Zero__wind: 02:39:856 (4) - 这个虽然后面没东西 危险系数相对低一些 不过依然建议少折返 在02:40:656 - 加note
21:24 Zero__wind: 02:45:456 (3) - 一样 拆长只折返一次的 和一个note
21:24 Angelina_Rocca: 恩恩~
21:25 Zero__wind: 我刚才还在想你这N怎么可能星数这么低
21:25 Angelina_Rocca: = =
21:25 Zero__wind: 原来后面好多空
21:25 Angelina_Rocca: - -
21:26 Zero__wind: NC呀
21:26 Zero__wind: 03:16:256 (4) -
21:26 Zero__wind: 我没记错的话 你Hard里的03:23:856 (1) - 是有finish的
21:26 Angelina_Rocca: 是的- -
21:26 Zero__wind: 03:24:256 (1) - 最后的spinner记得统一 我刚才在Hard里面说了怎么改了
21:27 Angelina_Rocca: 恩~
21:27 Angelina_Rocca: 后来想到的。加的。。normal忘了改了。。
21:27 Zero__wind: 哦三维忘了说了
21:27 Zero__wind: HP4 OD4
21:27 Angelina_Rocca: 恩恩
21:28 *Zero__wind is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/257535 Lee Hyolee - Bad Girls [Easy]]
21:28 Zero__wind: 00:31:456 (1) - 早一拍结束
21:28 Angelina_Rocca: 恩~开开了0 0
21:28 Zero__wind: 00:35:856 (2) - 一样的修改意见 拆成3+1
21:28 Zero__wind: 00:41:456 (5) -
21:29 Angelina_Rocca: 恩恩~
21:29 Zero__wind: 都是一样的问题 你基本知道怎么改了
21:29 Angelina_Rocca: 恩对~~
21:29 Zero__wind: 01:10:256 (5) - NC
21:30 Angelina_Rocca: (⊙o⊙)…
21:30 Zero__wind: 01:19:856 (1) - 提前一拍结束
21:30 Zero__wind: 01:27:056 (1) - ^
21:30 Angelina_Rocca: 恩
21:31 Zero__wind: 02:05:256 (1) -
21:31 Zero__wind: 02:11:456 (1) -
21:31 Zero__wind: 和其他两个diff对照一下 开始时间一样不一样
21:31 Angelina_Rocca: 明白- -
21:31 Angelina_Rocca: 恩
21:31 Zero__wind: 我不记得了
21:31 Angelina_Rocca: 那俩不是转盘
21:32 Zero__wind: 我知道不是spinner
21:32 Angelina_Rocca: 恩恩。。
21:32 Zero__wind: 我是说开始的时间要相、同
21:32 Angelina_Rocca: 嗯0 0
21:32 Zero__wind: 02:37:856 (1,2,3,4) - 这样的节奏是好评的
21:33 Angelina_Rocca: 恩恩
21:33 Zero__wind: 02:48:656 (1) - 这个可以直接快马加鞭日理万机地滚了
21:34 Zero__wind: NC
21:34 Angelina_Rocca: 0 0
21:34 Zero__wind: 03:23:856 (1) -
21:34 Zero__wind: 03:24:256 (1) -
21:34 Zero__wind: 一样的
21:34 Zero__wind: 三维
21:34 Zero__wind: HP2 OD2
21:34 Angelina_Rocca: 恩恩
21:34 Zero__wind: 就可以了
21:34 Zero__wind: 其实 还有一点
21:35 Zero__wind: 不过其实不是很有所谓
21:35 Angelina_Rocca: 恩?
21:37 Zero__wind: offset最好设成2256
21:37 Zero__wind: 这样重音可以对准长白线
21:37 Zero__wind: 这是timing的时候的好习惯
21:38 Zero__wind: 就这些了

good luck~
Topic Starter
Angelina_Rocca

Pink Agate wrote:

李孝利!顺便说一下我是KPOP爱好者
诶嘿嘿~~~我蛮喜欢这首歌的~歌词和mv都蛮有趣
Topic Starter
Angelina_Rocca

Melt wrote:

Mod as request :3

[General]
  1. 修正一下重音 offset:656
恩呢,修改了

[Easy]
  1. easy里面不要用这么多短的折返slider,除了像00:41:456这种明显跟vocal的。
  2. 00:12:656(1)从这里起有点奇怪,不过好像从vocal开始的00:12:856起也有点奇怪 这里不想起蓝线,所以。。
  3. 00:31:456(1)这个spin在00:34:256结束就可以了,easy别接的太紧 修改了
  4. 00:44:656(4)这个slider我还是倾向于少折一次跟一下vocal 恩哼
  5. 00:59:856(3)这折的太多了(感觉偷懒了 被发现了- -修改了
  6. 01:09:056(4)稍微修一下
  7. 01:18:656(3)这一段试试弄成这个样子
  8. 01:27:056(1)这个spin可以像上面一样拉短点,个人感觉01:28:656结束比 较好 修改了
  9. 02:05:256(1)这个note的音应该在02:05:456 修改了
  10. 02:25:456(2,5)没叠好 修改了
  11. 03:03:056这里可以再加个circle然后上一个finish音效 修改了
  12. 03:24:256(1)结尾spin末尾可以减点音量,其他难度也是
修改了

[Normal]
  1. 00:09:056(2,1)没叠好 修改了
  2. 00:20:656(3)感觉有点没拉好的样子,个人觉得中间缺一块不好看 修改了
  3. 00:25:056(1,2,3)nazi 尾部没弄好 修改成另外一种了
  4. 01:10:656(6)nc? 修改了
  5. 01:59:056这里也试试加个circle然后finish 修改了
  6. 02:05:256(1)同easy 修改了
  7. 02:29:456(3,4)中间空一个感觉有点奇怪,试试这样 修改了
  8. 02:37:456这里听音乐的话很明显有个重音但是你却静音了orz 修改了(忘了加了)
  9. 03:08:456(4)这slider不够美型 /me runs
恩~确实是太丑了

[Hard]
  1. OD+1 修改了
  2. 00:16:256(8)nc 修改了
  3. 00:29:456(7)^ 后面太长的combo自己查一下
  4. 01:25:856(1,2,3)摆成正三角形试试? 摆的时候没注意修改了
  5. 01:42:856(1,2,3)这压蓝线听着太不舒服 只是个建议 修改了
  6. 02:06:056(2)这个slider可以前移到02:05:856 修改了
  7. 02:34:056(1,2,3)同前 修改了
  8. 02:36:056(1)在02:37:456结束就行了 修改了
  9. 02:51:656(4)这个slider没在节奏上啊...
修改了

还不错的样子,easy有些地方节奏有点奇怪
差不多就这样,GL~
恩恩~~~我研究一下哦~~~
Topic Starter
Angelina_Rocca

Zero__wind wrote:

可恶 妹尔特居然抢了1st mod
不幸福

irc mod
20:28 Zero__wind: ~~~~
20:28 Angelina_Rocca: 诶嘿~
20:28 Zero__wind: 101走起系哟~
20:28 *Zero__wind is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/257536 Lee Hyolee - Bad Girls [Hard]]
20:29 Angelina_Rocca: 恩哼~~~
20:30 Zero__wind: 首先 bg和mp3文件符合规格
20:30 Angelina_Rocca: 恩捏~
20:30 Zero__wind: 然后OD建议6
20:30 Zero__wind: AR7
20:31 Angelina_Rocca: 恩恩?我看看哈~
20:31 Zero__wind: 00:16:656 (10) - NC
20:32 Zero__wind: 00:20:656 (6) - 尾巴clap
20:32 Zero__wind: NC
20:33 Zero__wind: 00:25诶 上面一行的NC是说00:21:256 (7) - NC
20:33 Angelina_Rocca: 恩哼~改掉了0 0
20:33 Zero__wind: 我咋没贴出来……
20:33 Zero__wind: 00:25:056 (1,2,3,4) - 唔 洗衣机仍然很给力
20:33 Zero__wind: 00:29:456 (7) - NC
20:33 Angelina_Rocca: 噗- -这个。。
20:34 Angelina_Rocca: 诶?因为这里是遮挡了吗?
20:34 Zero__wind: 00:37:656 (1,2,3,4) - 这个叠得很好
20:34 Zero__wind: 嗯
20:34 Angelina_Rocca: 嗯嗯嗯。。
20:34 Zero__wind: 你说什么地方是遮挡 00:29:456 (7) - 么?
20:34 Zero__wind: 这个只是因为一个combo set太长了 应该拆一下
20:34 Angelina_Rocca: 对呀0 0感觉那里vocal是连着的0 0
20:34 Zero__wind: 不是为了可读
20:34 Angelina_Rocca: soka
20:35 Zero__wind: 那里是重音
20:35 Angelina_Rocca: 恩恩
20:35 Zero__wind: 00:48:456 (9) - NC
20:35 Zero__wind: 也可以不
20:36 Zero__wind: 00:38:656 (5) - 尾巴finish
20:36 Zero__wind: 加normal finish还是soft finish感觉效果都还可以 看你自己意思
20:36 Angelina_Rocca: 啊,这点确实- -我没注意这个的细节。。
20:36 Zero__wind: 00:51:456 (5) - 这个尾巴同上
20:36 Angelina_Rocca: 我感觉一下
20:37 Zero__wind: finish是新人最容易漏的
20:37 Zero__wind: 嘛 我也容易漏……
20:37 Zero__wind: 00:53:456 (5) - 折返clap
20:37 Angelina_Rocca: 恩。。注意了比较明显的。其他的没怎么注意
20:37 Zero__wind: 00:59:056 (4) - 尾巴clap 如果不是故意没加的话
20:38 Zero__wind: 01:03:456 (3) - 这个finish可以不要 有1的就够了
20:38 Zero__wind: finish音的持续时间很长
20:38 Zero__wind: 01:04:656 - 这里可以加一个note 看个人意思
20:38 Angelina_Rocca: 诶?因为这里是duangduang两下
20:38 Zero__wind: 嗯
20:39 Zero__wind: 我感受一下
20:39 Angelina_Rocca: 嗯嗯嗯~~
20:39 Zero__wind: ok
20:39 Zero__wind: 01:07:056 (1) -
20:39 Zero__wind: 缩短成二分拍滑条比较合适
20:39 Zero__wind: 01:07:256 - 这里开始 同一个点结束
20:39 Zero__wind: 现在起早了
20:40 Angelina_Rocca: 改成2分拍滑条+个note吗?
20:40 Zero__wind: 不加
20:40 Zero__wind: 哦我脑子进水了
20:40 Zero__wind: 1/1 slider
20:40 Angelina_Rocca: 啊我明白了
20:41 Angelina_Rocca: 对对对- -我想起来当时我是非得给白线加东西。
20:41 Zero__wind: 总之是缩短二分拍
20:41 Angelina_Rocca: 所以往前移动了一格
20:41 Zero__wind: 按你的NC习惯 01:15:256 (8) - 这里NC
20:41 Angelina_Rocca: 恩哼
20:41 Zero__wind: 01:24:056 (6) - NC
20:42 Zero__wind: 01:24:256 (7,8,9) - 距离感有点儿微妙
20:42 Zero__wind: 建议等距
20:42 Zero__wind: 01:25:856 (1,2,3) - 这种地方也是
20:42 Zero__wind: 直接CTRL+SHIFT+D就好了 方便省事
20:43 Angelina_Rocca: 恩恩
20:43 Zero__wind: 01:33:056 (4) - 同样 finish
20:43 Zero__wind: 后面类似的不说了
20:43 Angelina_Rocca: 恩恩
20:44 Zero__wind: 对比01:34:256 (2,3) - 和01:38:256 (4,5,6) - 又是微妙的距离差异 我看你前面都是开1.2x的ds摆的 不知道这里为什么有了几处1.1
20:44 Zero__wind: 虽然关系不是很大吧 不过保持一致性还是好的
20:45 Angelina_Rocca: 恩
20:45 Angelina_Rocca: 本来是1.1后来觉得断了。改1,2
20:45 Angelina_Rocca: 有的貌似没改掉0 0
20:45 Zero__wind: 嗯
20:45 Zero__wind: 01:42:856 (1,2,3) - 这个节奏真心略猎奇
20:46 Angelina_Rocca: - -貌似是跟vocal。。
20:46 Angelina_Rocca: 诶 诶 诶~~
20:46 Angelina_Rocca: 哈哈
20:46 Zero__wind: 我来救救你吧
20:46 Angelina_Rocca: 噗 - -好。。
20:47 Zero__wind: 建议节奏http://puu.sh/34oMq.jpg
20:47 Zero__wind: 排版再相比
20:47 Zero__wind: 想吧
20:47 Angelina_Rocca: 恩恩
20:47 Angelina_Rocca: 我一会研究下
20:47 Zero__wind: 另外 这样的节奏最好让前面2个滑条的尾巴改成soft
20:48 Angelina_Rocca: 恩哼
20:48 Zero__wind: 02:05:256 (1) - 这个应该往后移二分拍
20:49 Zero__wind: 现在的节奏太诡异了
20:49 Angelina_Rocca: 噗- -对。。是这样- -
20:49 Zero__wind: 02:15:056 (6) - NC
20:49 Zero__wind: 02:16:456 (11) - 这个方向比较诡异
20:49 Zero__wind: 调过来改成 ) 这样
20:49 Zero__wind: 包住(9)吧
20:50 Angelina_Rocca: 我看看哈0 0
20:50 Zero__wind: 02:34:056 (3,4,5) - 这个地方的节奏和我前面那个地方建议的一样
20:50 Zero__wind: 一会儿自己研究研究
20:51 Angelina_Rocca: 恩恩~
20:51 Zero__wind: 02:36:056 (1) - 提前二分拍结束
20:51 Zero__wind: 诶 我突然意识到一个很严重的问题
20:51 Zero__wind: 嘛 这个最后说
20:51 Angelina_Rocca: 诶?
20:51 Zero__wind: 没事 继续
20:52 Angelina_Rocca: 恩
20:52 Zero__wind: 从02:37:856 (1) - 这里开始 你的clap都飞了
20:52 Zero__wind: 02:47:056 (7) - NC
20:52 Angelina_Rocca: 噗- -
20:53 Zero__wind: 02:51:656 (4) - 这个节奏又极其不在点儿上
20:54 Zero__wind: 改成这样http://puu.sh/34oXw.jpg
20:54 Zero__wind: 02:52:456 - 这里可加note
20:54 Angelina_Rocca: 恩恩~
20:55 Zero__wind: 802:59:656 (8,9,10) - 还是和前面一样的建议 之前有两处一样的了
20:55 Zero__wind: 另外 Nc
20:55 Angelina_Rocca: 恩恩
20:56 Zero__wind: 03:08:456 (8) - 缩短四分拍 然后03:09:456 - 加note
20:56 Zero__wind: 蓝线折返的滑条刚开始作图的时候一定尽量少用
20:56 Angelina_Rocca: 恩哼。记住了~
20:57 Zero__wind: 03:09:856 (1,2) - 这后面也完全可以map的 空着略奇怪
20:57 Zero__wind: 03:20:256 (1) - 03:21:856 (1) - 放跳
20:57 Angelina_Rocca: 噗- -(嘘。我是懒了那里- -
20:57 Angelina_Rocca: 恩恩
20:58 Zero__wind: 03:24:056 (1) - 在03:25:456 - 结束
20:58 Angelina_Rocca: 恩恩
20:58 Zero__wind: 在结束的地方插一根绿线10% volume SC2
20:58 Zero__wind: 不要spinner最后那声响
20:59 Angelina_Rocca: 恩恩
20:59 Zero__wind: 好 现在我们开始说重点问题
21:00 Angelina_Rocca: 恩
21:00 Zero__wind: 好吧 顿时感觉mod炒鸡不专业 我一直看到kiai才发现问题 omg
21:00 Zero__wind: 你offset改了之后绿线没有resnap
21:00 Zero__wind: 另外
21:00 Angelina_Rocca: 诶?每个绿线都要吗?
21:00 Angelina_Rocca: 检查的时候只说了kiai
21:01 Zero__wind: 当然
21:01 Zero__wind: 绿线一定要snap
21:01 Angelina_Rocca: 恩恩。
21:01 Zero__wind: 而且
21:01 Angelina_Rocca: 恩哼?
21:01 Zero__wind: 02:37:456 - kiai应该在这里起
21:01 Zero__wind: 一定记住kiai要起在副歌第一个重音
21:01 Zero__wind: 不要管vocal
21:01 Angelina_Rocca: 恩恩
21:01 Zero__wind: 要听鼓
21:01 Angelina_Rocca: 记得了
21:02 Zero__wind: kiai结束的地方虽然不是那么讲究 不过最好放在02:50:256 - 这里 有拍子的地方
21:02 Zero__wind: 一般是放在副歌结束之后的第一个重音
21:03 Zero__wind: 嘛 Hard就这些
21:03 Angelina_Rocca: 恩恩~
21:03 Zero__wind: 记得绿线和kiai是所有diff的事情
21:03 Angelina_Rocca: 好~
21:03 Zero__wind: 各个diff见一一定要统一
21:03 Angelina_Rocca: 了解0 0
21:03 Zero__wind: 这个CTRL+SHIFT+里面可以查
21:04 Angelina_Rocca: +?
21:04 Zero__wind: A
21:05 Zero__wind: 好吧 我今天怎么了
21:05 Angelina_Rocca: 恩恩
21:05 *Zero__wind is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/257537 Lee Hyolee - Bad Girls [Normal]]
21:05 Angelina_Rocca: 恩哼。
21:05 Zero__wind: 00:20:656 (3) - 形状还需考究
21:05 Zero__wind: 唔 差点打成烤鸡
21:05 Angelina_Rocca: 哈哈
21:05 Zero__wind: 00:25:056 (1) -
21:05 Zero__wind: 00:24:656 (4,1) - 这种结构在E/N都不要出现
21:05 Zero__wind: 会被吐槽到抬不起头的
21:06 Angelina_Rocca: 噗好- -我n出现了。e克制住自己了。。
21:06 Angelina_Rocca: 我再看看怎么放比较好
21:06 Zero__wind: 你就让1和4叠着就可以 2 和3 跟着1一起挪
21:06 Zero__wind: 或者你换摆法
21:06 Zero__wind: 随意
21:06 Angelina_Rocca: 恩恩
21:07 Zero__wind: 00:32:656 (4) - 这个节奏很棒
21:07 Angelina_Rocca: 0 0
21:07 Zero__wind: 00:36:656 (3) - 少折返一次
21:07 Angelina_Rocca: 我看看哈
21:07 Zero__wind: 不要管那个vocal
21:08 Zero__wind: 哦还有 记得reverse的折返次数调整之后它上面的所有音效都要重新加
21:08 Angelina_Rocca: 诶恩恩
21:08 Zero__wind: 00:37:456 (1) - 一样 finish 不说了
21:08 Angelina_Rocca: 恩
21:09 Zero__wind: 00:39:456 (1,2,3,4) - 这几个调整一下布局
21:09 Zero__wind: 让00:39:456 (1) - 离中心近一些
21:09 Zero__wind: 低难度spinner之后的note一定要靠近中心
21:09 Angelina_Rocca: 恩恩
21:09 Zero__wind: 不一定要正中间但是要靠近
21:09 Angelina_Rocca: 恩恩~~~get it
21:10 Zero__wind: 00:44:656 (5) - 少折返一次00:45:456 - 这里加note
21:10 Zero__wind: 记得这种长度的reverse一定避免多次折返
21:10 Zero__wind: 迷惑性太强
21:10 Angelina_Rocca: 恩恩~
21:11 Angelina_Rocca: 完了- -我easy各种折返哈哈哈。。
21:11 Zero__wind: 01:00:656 (4,5) - 拉开
21:11 Zero__wind: 全程要跟ds
21:11 Angelina_Rocca: 恩
21:11 Zero__wind: 你画一个弧度小一点的blancket就是了
21:11 Angelina_Rocca: 恩恩
21:12 Zero__wind: 01:03:856 (1) - 这个spinner的长度很容易被吐槽
21:12 Zero__wind: 虽然我不是很确定
21:12 Angelina_Rocca: 太短了?
21:12 Zero__wind: 嗯
21:12 Angelina_Rocca: 我开dt玩是有点不好转
21:12 Zero__wind: 建议处理方法是
21:13 Angelina_Rocca: 恩哼?
21:13 Zero__wind: 从起spinner的地方起长滑条 到01:04:656 - 结束
21:13 Angelina_Rocca: 我看看
21:13 Zero__wind: 就是画一个时长两拍的滑条
21:14 Angelina_Rocca: 恩恩~
21:14 Zero__wind: 01:07:056 (1) - 和Hard一样的意见 起早了
21:15 Zero__wind: 01:10:656 (6) - NC
21:15 Zero__wind: 01:15:856 (5,1,2,3,4,5) - clap又飞了
21:15 Angelina_Rocca: - -
21:16 Zero__wind: 01:32:256 (1) - 和前面一段副歌统一
21:16 Zero__wind: 01:31:056 (4) - 少折返一次 01:32:256 (1) - 提前一拍起
21:16 Angelina_Rocca: 恩哼
21:17 Zero__wind: 01:33:856 (1) - 同样 靠近中心 不说了
21:17 Zero__wind: 嘛 somehow 01:41:456 (3,4) - 这个还算比较好接受的
21:17 Zero__wind: 不过个人意见还是少折返一次 换个摆法
21:18 Zero__wind: 01:43:056 (5) - NC
21:18 Angelina_Rocca: 恩捏
21:18 Zero__wind: 01:46:656 (1) -
21:18 Angelina_Rocca: 也是靠近中心~~~= =
21:18 Zero__wind: 01:55:856 (5) - 这种长度的滑条多次折返还稍微好一些
21:18 Zero__wind: 这个有反应时间
21:19 Zero__wind: 02:05:256 (1) - 一样的问题 往后挪二分拍
21:19 Angelina_Rocca: 明白了,就是说看不清折返数目的少量折返为佳这样么。
21:19 Angelina_Rocca: 懂了0 0
21:20 Zero__wind: 对于所有时长的滑条来说 二分拍滑条是最不适合多次折返的
21:20 Angelina_Rocca: 恩~
21:20 Zero__wind: 因为不像四分拍短滑条按住了可以不移动 也不像更长的滑条有反应时间看是否需要再折返
21:20 Zero__wind: 二分拍滑条来不及反应 完全是猜
21:21 Angelina_Rocca: 恩
21:21 Zero__wind: 02:17:056 (1,1) - 衔接太紧密了 危险系数高
21:21 Zero__wind: spinner后面一整拍内不要有东西最好, 在E/N中
21:21 Angelina_Rocca: 恩。。
21:21 Zero__wind: H以上这样还可以
21:21 Zero__wind: 如果不很远离中心的话
21:21 Angelina_Rocca: 明白~
21:22 Zero__wind: 02:29:456 (3) - 拆成一个和02:28:656 (2) - 一样的reverse 再加一个隔整拍的note
21:23 Zero__wind: kiai记得调整
21:23 Angelina_Rocca: 恩~
21:23 Zero__wind: 所有的timing调整 offset什么的 都要所有diff一起改
21:23 Zero__wind: 当然还有source和tag 如果需要改的话 也记得所有diff都要改得一样
21:23 Angelina_Rocca: 恩捏
21:24 Zero__wind: 02:39:856 (4) - 这个虽然后面没东西 危险系数相对低一些 不过依然建议少折返 在02:40:656 - 加note
21:24 Zero__wind: 02:45:456 (3) - 一样 拆长只折返一次的 和一个note
21:24 Angelina_Rocca: 恩恩~
21:25 Zero__wind: 我刚才还在想你这N怎么可能星数这么低
21:25 Angelina_Rocca: = =
21:25 Zero__wind: 原来后面好多空
21:25 Angelina_Rocca: - -
21:26 Zero__wind: NC呀
21:26 Zero__wind: 03:16:256 (4) -
21:26 Zero__wind: 我没记错的话 你Hard里的03:23:856 (1) - 是有finish的
21:26 Angelina_Rocca: 是的- -
21:26 Zero__wind: 03:24:256 (1) - 最后的spinner记得统一 我刚才在Hard里面说了怎么改了
21:27 Angelina_Rocca: 恩~
21:27 Angelina_Rocca: 后来想到的。加的。。normal忘了改了。。
21:27 Zero__wind: 哦三维忘了说了
21:27 Zero__wind: HP4 OD4
21:27 Angelina_Rocca: 恩恩
21:28 *Zero__wind is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/257535 Lee Hyolee - Bad Girls [Easy]]
21:28 Zero__wind: 00:31:456 (1) - 早一拍结束
21:28 Angelina_Rocca: 恩~开开了0 0
21:28 Zero__wind: 00:35:856 (2) - 一样的修改意见 拆成3+1
21:28 Zero__wind: 00:41:456 (5) -
21:29 Angelina_Rocca: 恩恩~
21:29 Zero__wind: 都是一样的问题 你基本知道怎么改了
21:29 Angelina_Rocca: 恩对~~
21:29 Zero__wind: 01:10:256 (5) - NC
21:30 Angelina_Rocca: (⊙o⊙)…
21:30 Zero__wind: 01:19:856 (1) - 提前一拍结束
21:30 Zero__wind: 01:27:056 (1) - ^
21:30 Angelina_Rocca: 恩
21:31 Zero__wind: 02:05:256 (1) -
21:31 Zero__wind: 02:11:456 (1) -
21:31 Zero__wind: 和其他两个diff对照一下 开始时间一样不一样
21:31 Angelina_Rocca: 明白- -
21:31 Angelina_Rocca: 恩
21:31 Zero__wind: 我不记得了
21:31 Angelina_Rocca: 那俩不是转盘
21:32 Zero__wind: 我知道不是spinner
21:32 Angelina_Rocca: 恩恩。。
21:32 Zero__wind: 我是说开始的时间要相、同
21:32 Angelina_Rocca: 嗯0 0
21:32 Zero__wind: 02:37:856 (1,2,3,4) - 这样的节奏是好评的
21:33 Angelina_Rocca: 恩恩
21:33 Zero__wind: 02:48:656 (1) - 这个可以直接快马加鞭日理万机地滚了
21:34 Zero__wind: NC
21:34 Angelina_Rocca: 0 0
21:34 Zero__wind: 03:23:856 (1) -
21:34 Zero__wind: 03:24:256 (1) -
21:34 Zero__wind: 一样的
21:34 Zero__wind: 三维
21:34 Zero__wind: HP2 OD2
21:34 Angelina_Rocca: 恩恩
21:34 Zero__wind: 就可以了
21:34 Zero__wind: 其实 还有一点
21:35 Zero__wind: 不过其实不是很有所谓
21:35 Angelina_Rocca: 恩?
21:37 Zero__wind: offset最好设成2256
21:37 Zero__wind: 这样重音可以对准长白线
21:37 Zero__wind: 这是timing的时候的好习惯
21:38 Zero__wind: 就这些了

good luck~
基本上修改完毕,感谢你的mod~抱抱!
Pink Agate

Angelina_Rocca wrote:

Pink Agate wrote:

李孝利!顺便说一下我是KPOP爱好者
诶嘿嘿~~~我蛮喜欢这首歌的~歌词和mv都蛮有趣
你也太快下手了吧,这首歌才发布多久啊你就做了,为何不加MV上去?喜欢KPOP顺便求勾搭
Topic Starter
Angelina_Rocca
诶?因为一开始听歌的时候没看mv,然后听着觉得不错,就考虑作图,做完了hard了才想起来看mv。结果mv不是比歌曲多了些东西嘛。不知道怎么加,就不了了之了~~诶嘿嘿~加你好友了哦~~~勾搭勾搭~~~
Kinomi
Hi~from my queue

general
节奏没什么问题,我自己做图的时候低难度还好,INSANE总要踩不准节奏OTL
这两天坑一首3分半的歌了,感觉蛋疼

easy
00:45:056(5) 这个没叠好
01:04:056 finish
01:09:856(1,2)没包好
01:39:456 (4,1,2)难看了,不要让4挡到2
02:13:056 拉到02:13:456 加finish
03:18:856 感觉换一点滑条进去或者摆个更好看的形状比较好
00:23:856(2,3,4,1) 1的尾部离2远一点

normal
01:18:456(4)改成弯的
01:39:217(3,4)无谓遮挡
01:45:656 finish
01:47:856 (4,5)5尾端离4远点
02:05:807(2)歪了
02:37:256 finish
03:16:256(3,1,2,3)遮不好干脆别遮了。。
03:23:903和easy一样

hard
02:16:656 6有点歪
02:23:256(1) 没叠好
02:53:456(1) ^
02:11:357(2,3)无谓遮挡
02:39:856(8,9)歪了

最后说一下我自己关于残影这个玩意的看法,虽然说打图的时候是看不到残影只会显示lighting的,不过我个人觉得下note能不压到残影尽量不压lignting 整齐打图的时候会感觉到
Topic Starter
Angelina_Rocca

baldrace wrote:

Hi~from my queue

general
节奏没什么问题,我自己做图的时候低难度还好,INSANE总要踩不准节奏OTL (唔,感觉不懂的地方好多,做图的时候也感觉小心翼翼的,不是很敢做in呢)
这两天坑一首3分半的歌了,感觉蛋疼

easy
00:45:056(5) 这个没叠好 修改了
01:04:056 finish修改了,
01:09:856(1,2)没包好修改了,噗,我作图太粗心了
01:39:456 (4,1,2)难看了,不要让4挡到2修改了,之前的地方也改了下,多谢建议哦~
02:13:056 拉到02:13:456 加finish修改了感觉加finish以后跟vocal不是很相符,就没加
03:18:856 感觉换一点滑条进去或者摆个更好看的形状比较好修改了
00:23:856(2,3,4,1) 1的尾部离2远一点修改了
normal
01:18:456(4)改成弯的修改了,(啊嘞,话说就这么掰弯他没问题吗?)
01:39:217(3,4)无谓遮挡修改了
01:45:656 finish修改了
01:47:856 (4,5)5尾端离4远点修改了
02:05:807(2)歪了修改了,好仔细诶,thx
02:37:256 finish修改了
03:16:256(3,1,2,3)遮不好干脆别遮了。。遮好了;_;
03:23:903和easy一样修改了

hard
02:16:656 6有点歪修改了
02:23:256(1) 没叠好修改了
02:53:456(1) ^修改了
02:11:357(2,3)无谓遮挡修改了
02:39:856(8,9)歪了修改了

最后说一下我自己关于残影这个玩意的看法,虽然说打图的时候是看不到残影只会显示lighting的,不过我个人觉得下note能不压到残影尽量不压lignting 整齐打图的时候会感觉到
恩~第一次做图很多东西都不太懂,而且也没注意,感谢你的mod~抱抱~~
Zweib
Hi~

Red = Unrankable
Blue = You should consider
Black = My suggestion

General

  1. Easy和Normal都用的x1.00的sv,hard是x1.40,spread不太好
  2. 检查了下metadata基本没什么问题,就是hard难度里的background color设置跟另外两个难度不一样,不懂这个有没关系
    //Background Colour Transformations
    3,100,163,162,255

Easy

  1. 一般说来难度三围设置AR≥OD,你可以再考虑下
  2. 00:23:056 (2) - 给slidertick补个clap音效?新人的的话在音效上尽量少偷懒,可以给人留下好印象的
  3. 00:35:856 (2) - 尾巴不加clap吗?
  4. 00:41:456 (5) - ^
  5. 00:44:656 (4) - ^
  6. 01:15:856 (4) - 跟前面三个间距比起来是不是远了?
  7. 01:41:456 (3,4,5) - 可以摆成三角形的

Normal

  1. 00:20:656 (3) - 不科学的slider orz
  2. 00:48:456 (5) - 这个也不好看,要注意到圈大了,弯好看slider的难度也变大了
  3. 01:13:056 (4,1) - 漏clap
  4. 01:59:056 (4) - 这个左移点不是可以blanket上了嘛。。
  5. 02:50:256 (1,2) - 不美观,试试(1)跟(2)的边缘blanket

Hard

  1. 00:25:056 (1,2,3,4) - 还没放弃这个啊orz (4)长度不一样是个问题,思考
  2. 01:58:956 (1) - 请从白线起
  3. 02:05:356 (1) - ^
  4. 02:40:656 (9) - 这个要是能保持前面的对称就美观了

Comment:进步挺快的ww, 在以rank为目标的前提下做着做着慢慢有一些亮点出来了,不过还是有很长路要走啊
许多地方pattern还有blanket不是很好,回头QQ上跟你说下怎么做blanket还有slider上音效的事。感觉我好懒orz

Good luck~
Topic Starter
Angelina_Rocca

Zweib wrote:

Hi~

Red = Unrankable
Blue = You should consider
Black = My suggestion

General

  1. Easy和Normal都用的x1.00的sv,hard是x1.40,spread不太好
  2. 检查了下metadata基本没什么问题,就是hard难度里的background color设置跟另外两个难度不一样,不懂这个有没关系修改了
    //Background Colour Transformations
    3,100,163,162,255

Easy

  1. 一般说来难度三围设置AR≥OD,你可以再考虑下 修改了ar现在是357
  2. 00:23:056 (2) - 给slidertick补个clap音效?新人的的话在音效上尽量少偷懒,可以给人留下好印象的啊!我没想到这个,太感谢了,我把所有的都修改了
  3. 00:35:856 (2) - 尾巴不加clap吗?修改了
  4. 00:41:456 (5) - ^这里背景已经没有鼓点了,加上去显得突兀了
  5. 00:44:656 (4) - ^这里背景已经没有鼓点了,加上去显得突兀了
  6. 01:15:856 (4) - 跟前面三个间距比起来是不是远了?修改了
  7. 01:41:456 (3,4,5) - 可以摆成三角形的
修改了

Normal

  1. 00:20:656 (3) - 不科学的slider orzorz
  2. 00:48:456 (5) - 这个也不好看,要注意到圈大了,弯好看slider的难度也变大了不知道怎么改啊
  3. 01:13:056 (4,1) - 漏clap把easy的修改了,忘了统一了
  4. 01:59:056 (4) - 这个左移点不是可以blanket上了嘛。。修改了
  5. 02:50:256 (1,2) - 不美观,试试(1)跟(2)的边缘blanket
修改了

Hard

  1. 00:25:056 (1,2,3,4) - 还没放弃这个啊orz (4)长度不一样是个问题,思考orz,不知道怎么弄啊,不想改成blanket
  2. 01:58:956 (1) - 请从白线起修改了
  3. 02:05:356 (1) - ^修改了
  4. 02:40:656 (9) - 这个要是能保持前面的对称就美观了
修改了

Comment:进步挺快的ww, 在以rank为目标的前提下做着做着慢慢有一些亮点出来了,不过还是有很长路要走啊
许多地方pattern还有blanket不是很好,回头QQ上跟你说下怎么做blanket还有slider上音效的事。感觉我好懒orz

Good luck~
Leader
Hello, from my Modding Queue

[Easy]
  1. 00:10:256 (1,2) - 1 grid up
  2. 00:24:256 (3) - New players can get confused because it's under (1), move to another place
  3. 00:31:056 (4) - x:172 y:84 for a better flow
  4. 00:40:656 (4) - I'd move it right under (3), not a big deal but..
  5. 00:42:256 (6) - Confusing, move to another place
  6. 00:48:656 (6) - Too many repeats! Replace it with a spinner or change the pattern
  7. 00:50:256 (?) - Add spinner from here to 00:51:456 -
  8. 01:11:856 (3) - Again, too many repeats
  9. 01:40:256 (1,2) - Change (2)'s shape or move (1) elsewhere, this is confusing
  10. 01:44:656 (1) - Same of 00:50:256 - ?
[Normal]
  1. 00:07:456 (2) - Move second slider point to x:20 y:192
  2. 00:50:256 (6) - NC?
  3. 00:58:656 (1) - Place it right under the middle of the slider before
  4. 02:05:456 (1,2) - Aaah ;_; place them better in the middle of the screen
  5. 02:16:256 (5) - Stack on (2)
  6. 02:53:456 (1) - It almost touches the slider before, increase spacing a bit
  7. 02:57:056 (1,2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/796473
[Hard]
  1. 03:09:856 (1,2) - Reduce spacing? It fits bad as it is now :<
Great hitsounds and rhythm a nice map, good luck :3
Topic Starter
Angelina_Rocca

Leader wrote:

Hello, from my Modding Queue

[Easy]
  1. 00:10:256 (1,2) - 1 grid up OK
  2. 00:24:256 (3) - New players can get confused because it's under (1), move to another placeOK
  3. 00:31:056 (4) - x:172 y:84 for a better flowyou are right,thank you
  4. 00:40:656 (4) - I'd move it right under (3), not a big deal but..
  5. 00:42:256 (6) - Confusing, move to another placeOK,I change 5 to another direction
  6. 00:48:656 (6) - Too many repeats! Replace it with a spinner or change the patternOK
  7. 00:50:256 (?) - Add spinner from here to 00:51:456 -OK,added
  8. 01:11:856 (3) - Again, too many repeatsOK
  9. 01:40:256 (1,2) - Change (2)'s shape or move (1) elsewhere, this is confusingOK
  10. 01:44:656 (1) - Same of 00:50:256 - ?
OK

[Normal]
  1. 00:07:456 (2) - Move second slider point to x:20 y:192OK
  2. 00:50:256 (6) - NC?OK
  3. 00:58:656 (1) - Place it right under the middle of the slider beforeOK
  4. 02:05:456 (1,2) - Aaah ;_; place them better in the middle of the screenhaha,I'm so sorry,I will put them into the middle of the screen
  5. 02:16:256 (5) - Stack on (2)OK
  6. 02:53:456 (1) - It almost touches the slider before, increase spacing a bitOK
  7. 02:57:056 (1,2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/796473
OK

[Hard]
  1. 03:09:856 (1,2) - Reduce spacing? It fits bad as it is now :<
OK

Great hitsounds and rhythm a nice map, good luck :3
thank you very much for your mod~
mintong89
黑历史4M (详情问凌风)

[General]强烈建议加静音的sliderslide.wav

[Hard]

00:13:456 (3) - CTRL+G, 没的话感觉不是很好.
00:17:056 (2,6) - 你确定要用这种slider拉法?
00:18:656 - 可以调音量小声
00:22:056 (5) - 尾端移作一个,因为不平衡
00:25:056 (1,2,3) - 你确定要坑人?这种不是很好吧...
00:40:656 (4) - NC
01:07:256 (1) - 换个三个note还是1/2 repeat slider吧...
然后之后为啥要两个break而没做了

[Normal]

00:20:656 (3) - 吓尿 感觉normal还是别拉这种slider比较好

先这样了~
Losertic
M4M newbie modder!


modding

General

  1. I want many kiai time o.o

Easy

  1. 01:04:856 - break time
  2. 01:25:856 (4,5,6) - accurate triangle
  3. 03:19:056 (1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4) - maybe... it's too hard. mix slider ex)http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/802356 your work. 03:12:656 (1)
    if you think "Monotonous pattern." just stay there.


Normal

  1. check distance.
  2. 01:01:256 (5) - slider move 01:01:256 end at 01:03:056
  3. 02:46:856 (6) - umm.. not reverse. long slider ex) 00:48:456 (5) // special slider
  4. 02:56:656 - create a note
  5. create slider start at 03:06:256 end at 03:06:656

Hard

  1. 00:12:656 (1) - start time move 00:12:856 // vocal start this time 00:12:856
  2. 00:20:656 (6) - start time move 00:20:856 // vocal start this time 00:20:856 and this slider end at 00:21:256
  3. 02:42:856 (6) - reverse slider end at 02:43:256
  4. 03:01:656 - create a note

pretty,simple beatmap.... i envy you :(
Topic Starter
Angelina_Rocca

mintong89 wrote:

黑历史4M (详情问凌风)

[General]强烈建议加静音的sliderslide.wav
好的

[Hard]

00:13:456 (3) - CTRL+G, 没的话感觉不是很好.
00:17:056 (2,6) - 你确定要用这种slider拉法?
00:18:656 - 可以调音量小声好的
00:22:056 (5) - 尾端移作一个,因为不平衡好的
00:25:056 (1,2,3) - 你确定要坑人?这种不是很好吧...感觉还好吧,能打的上,毕竟是滑条,可以离开的早点
00:40:656 (4) - NC之前的都没有nc啊
01:07:256 (1) - 换个三个note还是1/2 repeat slider吧...
然后之后为啥要两个break而没做了

[Normal]

00:20:656 (3) - 吓尿 感觉normal还是别拉这种slider比较好


先这样了~
Topic Starter
Angelina_Rocca

Losertic wrote:

M4M newbie modder!


modding

General

  1. I want many kiai time o.o
OK

Easy

  1. 01:04:856 - break timeHmmm,"break time" there are not allow.
  2. 01:25:856 (4,5,6) - accurate triangleOK
  3. 03:19:056 (1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4) - maybe... it's too hard. mix slider ex)http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/802356 your work. 03:12:656 (1)
    if you think "Monotonous pattern." just stay there.
OK

Normal

  1. check distance.OK
  2. 01:01:256 (5) - slider move 01:01:256 end at 01:03:056OK
  3. 02:46:856 (6) - umm.. not reverse. long slider ex) 00:48:456 (5) // special slidersorry
  4. 02:56:656 - create a noteOK
  5. create slider start at 03:06:256 end at 03:06:656
OK

Hard

  1. 00:12:656 (1) - start time move 00:12:856 // vocal start this time 00:12:856starting at blue line is not so good
  2. 00:20:656 (6) - start time move 00:20:856 // vocal start this time 00:20:856 and this slider end at 00:21:256starting at blue line is not so good
  3. 02:42:856 (6) - reverse slider end at 02:43:256hmm?
  4. 03:01:656 - create a note
It's flowing the drum

pretty,simple beatmap.... i envy you :(
Hinsvar
Hi; modding for M4M here.

*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the harder diffs of the mapset.

>General
  1. Add kiai times at 00:39:056 - 00:50:256, 00:51:856 - 01:03:056, 01:33:456 - 01:44:656, and 01:46:256 - 01:57:456 since they're the spots where the choruses/refrains of the songs are located.
>Easy
  1. 00:23:056 (2) - Move the anchor point on the middle to (408,208) and the last one to (400,88) so the 00:22:656 (1,2) blanket will look neater? Remember to make the spacing between 00:23:056 (2,3) the same.
  2. 00:40:656 (4,5) - Make them look like this so it will look tidier?
  3. 00:49:056 - Add clap to make the hitsound pattern consistent? I don't see why should you leave them out.
  4. 00:49:856 - ^
  5. 00:50:256 (1) - Lengthen the spinner to 00:51:856? It feels weird to have that tall white tick empty, and it fits anyway.
  6. 00:59:856 (3,4) - This kind of pattern is extremely not recommended in an Easy diff as it can be really confusing. Just move out (4) from (3)'s repeat.
  7. 01:04:756 - Add break here because the time of emptiness is too long and can unnecessarily drain the HP bar.
  8. 01:13:456 (1,2) - Swap NC since it's (2) that's at the beginning of a stanza?
  9. 01:15:856 (4) - This kind of repeating slider is just not recommended, as the second repeat is unexpected and unreadable. Making a 3/2 slider would do.
  10. 01:31:056 (4) - ^
  11. 02:05:456 (1,2) - These two notes... I recommend you to remove them, since they feel really randomly placed and cuts the break weirdly.
  12. 02:22:256 (6) - Same as 01:15:856 (4).
  13. 02:32:656 (3) - ^
  14. 02:35:656 (1) - Lengthen the spinner to 02:37:456?
  15. 02:43:056 (4) - Same as 01:15:856 (4).
  16. 02:47:056 (5) - Move the middle anchor point to (352,252) and the last one to (316,196) so the 02:46:656 (4,5) blanket pattern will look nicer?
  17. 02:58:656 - Missed clap?
>Normal
  1. 00:17:456 (5) - Place the repeat on the right side instead on the left? Looks better that way.
  2. 00:20:656 (3) - Placing the red notes like that can confuse Normal players a bit, but it's passable... maybe.
  3. 00:25:056 (1,2) - Swap NC? I think it's already obvious why.
  4. 00:45:056 - Missing clap?
  5. 00:48:256 - ^
  6. 00:49:856 - I think you should add a clap here to keep the consistency of the hitsound pattern.
  7. 00:50:256 (1) - A short slider with two repeats is still not recommended here.
  8. 00:50:656 - Same as 00:49:856.
  9. 00:51:456 - ^
  10. 01:21:856 (4) - Looks way better if you placed it at (408,220). Remember to adjust the spacing between 01:21:856 (4,1) if you do this.
  11. 01:23:856 (1) - Since you added NCs every two stanzas before, shouldn't the NC here be removed?
  12. 01:33:456 - Adding a note is very recommended here, since this is supposed to be the beginning of a chorus, which means there will be a heavy beat that really "demands" to be mapped.
  13. 02:05:456 (1,2) - Remove? Same reason as Easy.
  14. 02:19:456 - Missing clap?
  15. 02:39:856 (4,5) - This pattern still can be confusing in a Normal diff, so move them out from each other so they won't touch?
  16. 02:40:256 - Missing clap?
>Hard
  1. 00:22:656 (1,3) - Swap NC?
  2. 00:25:056 (1,2,3) - This pattern can be confusing, and I think you should refrain from using it. This is only a Hard diff, btw...
  3. 00:41:856 - Add clap?
  4. 00:48:256 (8) - ^
  5. 00:49:856 (6) - ^
  6. 01:02:656 - ^
  7. 01:03:856 (5) - Make it repeat one more time?
  8. 01:17:856 (4,6) - They slightly touch each other.
  9. 02:05:456 (1,2) - Same as previous diffs.
  10. 03:09:856 (1) - Add clap?
  11. 03:11:456 (2) - ^
  12. 03:12:256 (5) - ^
  13. 03:13:056 (2) - ^
  14. 03:19:056 (1) - Finish to follow the cymbal sound?
Overall still needs a bit more work. But yeah, okay I guess.

Good luck on the way 8-)
Pipse Cola
My Mod

GENERAL:

Think about resizing your BG, the recommended size is 1024x768.


Easy

Nice Diff, not much to say about.

00:39:856 (3,4) - Maybe use the 4 for the 3, too, so both are the same. Creates a better Flow imo.
03:02:256 (3,4) - I suggest placing the 4 right of the 3 here.
03:20:256 (1) - Unnecessary NC.
03:21:856 (1) - ^
03:24:056 (1) - Let this end with the Lyrics on 03:25:856 - .


Normal

00:11:456 (4,5) - Keep the spacing of previous Notes.
00:36:656 (3) - Add a Reverse.
00:44:656 (5) - ^ Youre missing the Cha in the Lyrics what makes the 6 being strange.
00:47:856 (4) - Rotate this by 45/90° Counter-Clockwise, better imo.
00:54:656 (4) - Shorten this Slider to 00:54:856 -.
00:57:056 (4,5) - I'd suggest to delete 4, Move 5 to 00:57:056 - and add a Note at 00:58:056 - . Fits better I think.
01:04:856 - 01:06:856 - I like this ^^
01:17:456 (2,3) - Are they supposed to be the same height? Because they are not.
01:48:656 (5) - Shorten this to 01:48:856 - and add a Reverse, harmonies better with the lyrics.
01:52:256 (5) - Shorten this to 01:52:456 - .
02:26:256 (3,4,5,6) - Remove 5,6 and repeat 3,4 instead, fits a lot better.
02:30:256 (4,5) - Remove 4, Use 5 instead, but keep the original 5 as well, fits better.
02:33:856 (5,6) - To make it fit to the building up sound in the background, delete 6, Add a Note to 02:33:856 - and move the big reversed Slider to 02:34:256 -.
02:39:856 (4,5) - Add reverse to 4, delete five, again ur missing the Cha Vocal.
02:43:656 - Again this is not that good imo, leaving out the Cha is kinda strange to play.
02:46:856 (6,7) - Why don't you just use the cool building up sound in the song here? Starting at 02:47:056 - ?
03:24:056 (1) - End this like in Easy Diff.


Hard

00:25:056 (1,2,3,1) - I don't really like the Spacing Change here between 1,2,3 and the last 1... but that's just what I feel about it.
00:58:056 (8,1) - Maybe keep the previous Distance Snap?
01:19:456 (1,2,3,1) - Same as 00:25:056 (1,2,3,1) -.
02:10:656 (1,2,3,4) - Overlapp these, the song definitly does not force to devide them.
02:20:856 (3) - NC? Because Lyrics start here.
02:34:256 (4,5,6) - Overlapp, same reason as before.
02:58:256 (1,2,3,4) - You serious with this? I highly suggest not to use this pattern, it's one of the Hardest in osu, not suiting for a Hard Diff.
02:59:856 (2,3,4) - Again no overlapp, same reason as before.
03:08:456 (8,9,1,2) - Use the same Distance between 1,2 as u do between 8,9.
03:24:056 (1) - End this the same as in Easy Diff.


I like this song :D And the Diffs look cool to me, so have fun going on and getting ranked !
Selisi
咱也来看看 > <
[General]
咱感觉最后的转盘是一个很大声的finish会很好的 不喜欢的话还是坚持自己的> <
[hard]
  • 00:58:056 (8,1,2) - 这个之间的距离好像不太一样 是故意的么? 感觉有些怪怪的
  • 00:59:056 (4,1,2) - 这个同上
  • 01:07:256 (1) - 这个好难读 建议改成和后面一样的单点加一个滑条的形式
  • 02:59:656 (1) - 这个建议可以叠到滑条2上 单点的距离变化太厉害惹
  • 03:09:456 (9) - 这个可以加finish 加不加乃自己决定喽> <
  • 03:12:656 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - 这些位于长白线上的点要加类似于finish的音效 会很有特色 不加感觉会很可惜
  • 03:21:856 (1) - 这个的音效没有看懂> <为什么要这个
[normal]
  • 00:36:656 (3) - 这个要改成四折 因为音乐里面明明就是这样的 后面转盘的开始时间调到37:656
  • 01:01:456 (5) - 这个为什么不做那个大波浪了呢> <
  • 01:31:056 (4,1) - 这个地方是不是有些简单了呢
  • 02:43:456 (5,1) - 这个之间为什么要空出来> < 跟节奏走就要加上 跟歌词走就要前面的三折滑条改成四折
  • 02:45:456 (3) - 这个感觉也要四折
  • 03:08:456 (4) - 末尾加finish
[easy]
  • 01:35:856 (5) - 这个有漏节奏 希望改一下
  • 02:32:656 (3) - 这个实在不知道加什么的话就按节奏来吧 千万不要空那么大一块出来> <
就这么多惹 希望能帮到乃> <
Topic Starter
Angelina_Rocca

Hinsvar wrote:

Hi; modding for M4M here.

*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the harder diffs of the mapset.

>General
  1. Add kiai times at 00:39:056 - 00:50:256, 00:51:856 - 01:03:056, 01:33:456 - 01:44:656, and 01:46:256 - 01:57:456 since they're the spots where the choruses/refrains of the songs are located.
OK.

>Easy
  1. 00:23:056 (2) - Move the anchor point on the middle to (408,208) and the last one to (400,88) so the 00:22:656 (1,2) blanket will look neater? Remember to make the spacing between 00:23:056 (2,3) the same.done
  2. 00:40:656 (4,5) - Make them look like this so it will look tidier?done
  3. 00:49:056 - Add clap to make the hitsound pattern consistent? I don't see why should you leave them out.well,I hope they are the same as other difficulty
  4. 00:49:856 - ^^
  5. 00:50:256 (1) - Lengthen the spinner to 00:51:856? It feels weird to have that tall white tick empty, and it fits anyway.well,maybe it's a little bit hard for easy
  6. 00:59:856 (3,4) - This kind of pattern is extremely not recommended in an Easy diff as it can be really confusing. Just move out (4) from (3)'s repeat.OK,done
  7. 01:04:756 - Add break here because the time of emptiness is too long and can unnecessarily drain the HP bar.OK,done
  8. 01:13:456 (1,2) - Swap NC since it's (2) that's at the beginning of a stanza?well,it's following the vocal
  9. 01:15:856 (4) - This kind of repeating slider is just not recommended, as the second repeat is unexpected and unreadable. Making a 3/2 slider would do.OK
  10. 01:31:056 (4) - ^ok
  11. 02:05:456 (1,2) - These two notes... I recommend you to remove them, since they feel really randomly placed and cuts the break weirdly.
  12. 02:22:256 (6) - Same as 01:15:856 (4).done
  13. 02:32:656 (3) - ^done
  14. 02:35:656 (1) - Lengthen the spinner to 02:37:456?same
  15. 02:43:056 (4) - Same as 01:15:856 (4).done
  16. 02:47:056 (5) - Move the middle anchor point to (352,252) and the last one to (316,196) so the 02:46:656 (4,5) blanket pattern will look nicer?done
  17. 02:58:656 - Missed clap?
done

>Normal
  1. 00:17:456 (5) - Place the repeat on the right side instead on the left? Looks better that way.done
  2. 00:20:656 (3) - Placing the red notes like that can confuse Normal players a bit, but it's passable... maybe.done
  3. 00:25:056 (1,2) - Swap NC? I think it's already obvious why.;_;
  4. 00:45:056 - Missing clap?done
  5. 00:48:256 - ^did it in another way
  6. 00:49:856 - I think you should add a clap here to keep the consistency of the hitsound pattern.did it in another way
  7. 00:50:256 (1) - A short slider with two repeats is still not recommended here.done
  8. 00:50:656 - Same as 00:49:856.same
  9. 00:51:456 - ^same
  10. 01:21:856 (4) - Looks way better if you placed it at (408,220). Remember to adjust the spacing between 01:21:856 (4,1) if you do this.done
  11. 01:23:856 (1) - Since you added NCs every two stanzas before, shouldn't the NC here be removed?
  12. 01:33:456 - Adding a note is very recommended here, since this is supposed to be the beginning of a chorus, which means there will be a heavy beat that really "demands" to be mapped.done
  13. 02:05:456 (1,2) - Remove? Same reason as Easy.well,i don't want to remove it
  14. 02:19:456 - Missing clap?done
  15. 02:39:856 (4,5) - This pattern still can be confusing in a Normal diff, so move them out from each other so they won't touch?done
  16. 02:40:256 - Missing clap?
done

>Hard
  1. 00:22:656 (1,3) - Swap NC?well,flowing the vocal
  2. 00:25:056 (1,2,3) - This pattern can be confusing, and I think you should refrain from using it. This is only a Hard diff, btw...maybe it's not so hard as it looks like
  3. 00:41:856 - Add clap?done
  4. 00:48:256 (8) - ^sorry
  5. 00:49:856 (6) - ^sorry
  6. 01:02:656 - ^sorry
  7. 01:03:856 (5) - Make it repeat one more time?ok
  8. 01:17:856 (4,6) - They slightly touch each other.ok
  9. 02:05:456 (1,2) - Same as previous diffs.do it in another way
  10. 03:09:856 (1) - Add clap?done
  11. 03:11:456 (2) - ^done
  12. 03:12:256 (5) - ^done
  13. 03:13:056 (2) - ^maybe not
  14. 03:19:056 (1) - Finish to follow the cymbal sound?
OK

Overall still needs a bit more work. But yeah, okay I guess.

Good luck on the way 8-)
Topic Starter
Angelina_Rocca

InC0nceNtrateD wrote:

My Mod

GENERAL:

Think about resizing your BG, the recommended size is 1024x768.


Easy

Nice Diff, not much to say about.

00:39:856 (3,4) - Maybe use the 4 for the 3, too, so both are the same. Creates a better Flow imo.
03:02:256 (3,4) - I suggest placing the 4 right of the 3 here.
03:20:256 (1) - Unnecessary NC.
03:21:856 (1) - ^
03:24:056 (1) - Let this end with the Lyrics on 03:25:856 - .


Normal

00:11:456 (4,5) - Keep the spacing of previous Notes.
00:36:656 (3) - Add a Reverse.
00:44:656 (5) - ^ Youre missing the Cha in the Lyrics what makes the 6 being strange.
00:47:856 (4) - Rotate this by 45/90° Counter-Clockwise, better imo.
00:54:656 (4) - Shorten this Slider to 00:54:856 -.
00:57:056 (4,5) - I'd suggest to delete 4, Move 5 to 00:57:056 - and add a Note at 00:58:056 - . Fits better I think.
01:04:856 - 01:06:856 - I like this ^^
01:17:456 (2,3) - Are they supposed to be the same height? Because they are not.
01:48:656 (5) - Shorten this to 01:48:856 - and add a Reverse, harmonies better with the lyrics.
01:52:256 (5) - Shorten this to 01:52:456 - .
02:26:256 (3,4,5,6) - Remove 5,6 and repeat 3,4 instead, fits a lot better.
02:30:256 (4,5) - Remove 4, Use 5 instead, but keep the original 5 as well, fits better.
02:33:856 (5,6) - To make it fit to the building up sound in the background, delete 6, Add a Note to 02:33:856 - and move the big reversed Slider to 02:34:256 -.
02:39:856 (4,5) - Add reverse to 4, delete five, again ur missing the Cha Vocal.
02:43:656 - Again this is not that good imo, leaving out the Cha is kinda strange to play.
02:46:856 (6,7) - Why don't you just use the cool building up sound in the song here? Starting at 02:47:056 - ?
03:24:056 (1) - End this like in Easy Diff.


Hard

00:25:056 (1,2,3,1) - I don't really like the Spacing Change here between 1,2,3 and the last 1... but that's just what I feel about it.
00:58:056 (8,1) - Maybe keep the previous Distance Snap?
01:19:456 (1,2,3,1) - Same as 00:25:056 (1,2,3,1) -.
02:10:656 (1,2,3,4) - Overlapp these, the song definitly does not force to devide them.
02:20:856 (3) - NC? Because Lyrics start here.
02:34:256 (4,5,6) - Overlapp, same reason as before.
02:58:256 (1,2,3,4) - You serious with this? I highly suggest not to use this pattern, it's one of the Hardest in osu, not suiting for a Hard Diff.
02:59:856 (2,3,4) - Again no overlapp, same reason as before.
03:08:456 (8,9,1,2) - Use the same Distance between 1,2 as u do between 8,9.
03:24:056 (1) - End this the same as in Easy Diff.


I like this song :D And the Diffs look cool to me, so have fun going on and getting ranked !
I'm very very sorry about that my reply was lost,your mod is really useful to me.Your mod is very seriously,I have revised most of them,Thank you very much
yeah,I changed02:58:256 (1,2,3,4),but maybe 03:17:656 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - is more hard to me~>.<
Topic Starter
Angelina_Rocca

Sweet Vanilla wrote:

咱也来看看 > <
[General]
咱感觉最后的转盘是一个很大声的finish会很好的 不喜欢的话还是坚持自己的> <
[hard]
  • 00:58:056 (8,1,2) - 这个之间的距离好像不太一样 是故意的么? 感觉有些怪怪的
恩,修改了
  • 00:59:056 (4,1,2) - 这个同上
恩恩,2和1换了下位置
  • 01:07:256 (1) - 这个好难读 建议改成和后面一样的单点加一个滑条的形式
因为vocal从蓝线就开始起了,权衡之下只能用这样的slider了
  • 02:59:656 (1) - 这个建议可以叠到滑条2上 单点的距离变化太厉害惹
嘛嘛~前面修改了
  • 03:09:456 (9) - 这个可以加finish 加不加乃自己决定喽> <
orz,太懒了,soft的finish不太舒服听起来
  • 03:12:656 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - 这些位于长白线上的点要加类似于finish的音效 会很有特色 不加感觉会很可惜
诶?这里多谢建议~
  • 03:21:856 (1) - 这个的音效没有看懂> <为什么要这个
因为是类似拍板定音(开玩笑)的样子
[normal]
  • 00:36:656 (3) - 这个要改成四折 因为音乐里面明明就是这样的 后面转盘的开始时间调到37:656
恩,改了,转盘那个就算了-.-
  • 01:01:456 (5) - 这个为什么不做那个大波浪了呢> <
波浪虽好,可不要贪杯哦~(大误)
  • 01:31:056 (4,1) - 这个地方是不是有些简单了呢
恩。修改
  • 02:43:456 (5,1) - 这个之间为什么要空出来> < 跟节奏走就要加上 跟歌词走就要前面的三折滑条改成四折
柑橘改的面目全非了orz
  • 02:45:456 (3) - 这个感觉也要四折
恩哼~
  • 03:08:456 (4) - 末尾加finish
加了~,果然好多了
[easy]
  • 01:35:856 (5) - 这个有漏节奏 希望改一下
恩~
  • 02:32:656 (3) - 这个实在不知道加什么的话就按节奏来吧 千万不要空那么大一块出来> <
纳尼?时间标错了吗- -这里有东西啊
就这么多惹 希望能帮到乃> <
wantuole
from my queue
random mod
[General]
ok
[Easy]
01:13:456 (1,2,3) - 显得拥挤了
01:35:856 (5,1) - DS没必要小
02:50:256 (1,1,1) - 去了NC 低难度不适合nc梗
[Normal]
00:17:456 (5) - 折返多了

00:44:456 (4,5,6) - 有点难读了
01:01:456 (5) - NC 01:03:856 (1) - removeNC
02:18:856 (1,2,3) - 拥挤了
[Hard]
ok
整体排列僵硬了 01:51:056 (4,5,6,7,8) - 类似这种遮盖要斟酌下


good luck :)
Topic Starter
Angelina_Rocca

wantuole wrote:

from my queue
random mod
[General]
ok
[Easy]
01:13:456 (1,2,3) - 显得拥挤了
01:35:856 (5,1) - DS没必要小
02:50:256 (1,1,1) - 去了NC 低难度不适合nc梗
[Normal]
00:17:456 (5) - 折返多了

00:44:456 (4,5,6) - 有点难读了
01:01:456 (5) - NC 01:03:856 (1) - removeNC
02:18:856 (1,2,3) - 拥挤了
[Hard]
ok
整体排列僵硬了 01:51:056 (4,5,6,7,8) - 类似这种遮盖要斟酌下


good luck :)
改好了~
jyu
Hi~ mod from Zero__wind request via queue :3


[General]

  • only suggestion, but might as well add 'k-pop' to the Tags /runs

    overall seems fine

[Easy]

  • 00:11:856 (5) - nc? to match previous combo pattern 00:07:056 (1,2,1,2) -
    00:37:056 (4,1) - don't change the distance snap here
    01:52:256 (4,1) - ^
    01:55:456 (5) - doesn't fit the song imo, only suggestion
    01:57:456 (1,2) - the rhythm seems hanging off :< why not add a note 01:59:056 -
    02:21:456 (4) - nc
    03:24:056 (1) - ends at 03:25:456 - ?
[Normal]

  • 00:11:856 (5) - nc to match previous combo pattern 00:07:056 (1,2,3,1,2,3) -
    00:51:856 - add a note here? to improve the rhythm flow
    01:03:456 (6,1) - switch nc seems better
    01:31:856 (1,1) - why the sudden change in distance snap?
    02:19:656 (3,1) - use the distance snap. the current one isn't intuitive, confusing when i play this and the placement is really close when they are 2 beats away
    02:27:056 (5,1) - ^
    02:43:856 - add a note here to improve rhythm flow
    03:06:256 (6,1) - switch nc
    03:07:656 (2) - not really visible since it's hidden by previous slider. i suggest to move it up a bit
    03:24:056 (1) - ends at 03:25:456 - ?

[Hard]

  • 00:11:856 (5) - nc to match previous combo pattern 00:07:056 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
    00:25:056 (1,2,3) - idk but it feels weird to hear rather audible hitsound at the blue tick, this is only a mere suggestion, but i suggest to mute the slider's tail (preferrably 15%), but still keep the audible hitsound at the slider's head
    01:19:456 (1,2,3) - ^
    01:43:056 (2,3) - ^
    02:10:656 (1,2,3) - ^
    01:27:056 (1) - should end at 01:29:256 - since this spinner 00:32:656 (1) - ends at red tick
    01:58:256 (5,1) - kinda weird anti-jump. i prefer this slider 01:59:056 (1) - to be a bit far from the previous slider
    02:11:856 (4) - nc, since you nc at 00:26:256 (1) -
    03:24:056 (1) - ends at 03:25:456 - ?
that's all. nice song :3 and your mapping is great, so i'm sorry if my mod is poor x.x
good luck~
Topic Starter
Angelina_Rocca

AlpacaCokelat wrote:

Hi~ mod from Zero__wind request via queue :3


[General]

  • only suggestion, but might as well add 'k-pop' to the Tags /runs

    overall seems fine

[Easy]

  • 00:11:856 (5) - nc? to match previous combo pattern 00:07:056 (1,2,1,2) - OK
    00:37:056 (4,1) - don't change the distance snap here OK
    01:52:256 (4,1) - ^
    01:55:456 (5) - doesn't fit the song imo, only suggestion
    OK
    01:57:456 (1,2) - the rhythm seems hanging off :< why not add a note 01:59:056 - OK
    02:21:456 (4) - nc OK
    03:24:056 (1) - ends at 03:25:456 - ?OK
[Normal]

  • 00:11:856 (5) - nc to match previous combo pattern 00:07:056 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - OK
    00:51:856 - add a note here? to improve the rhythm flowOK
    01:03:456 (6,1) - switch nc seems betterOK
    01:31:856 (1,1) - why the sudden change in distance snap?well, I haven't change the distance snap,maybe looks like ><
    02:19:656 (3,1) - use the distance snap. the current one isn't intuitive, confusing when i play this and the placement is really close when they are 2 beats awayOK
    02:27:056 (5,1) - ^OKOK
    02:43:856 - add a note here to improve rhythm flowOK
    03:06:256 (6,1) - switch ncOK
    03:07:656 (2) - not really visible since it's hidden by previous slider. i suggest to move it up a bitOK
    03:24:056 (1) - ends at 03:25:456 - ?
OK


[Hard]

  • 00:11:856 (5) - nc to match previous combo pattern 00:07:056 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - OK
    00:25:056 (1,2,3) - idk but it feels weird to hear rather audible hitsound at the blue tick, this is only a mere suggestion, but i suggest to mute the slider's tail (preferrably 15%), but still keep the audible hitsound at the slider's headOK
    01:19:456 (1,2,3) - ^01:43:056 (2,3) - ^OK
    02:10:656 (1,2,3) - ^OK
    01:27:056 (1) - should end at 01:29:256 - since this spinner 00:32:656 (1) - ends at red tick;_;
    01:58:256 (5,1) - kinda weird anti-jump. i prefer this slider 01:59:056 (1) - to be a bit far from the previous sliderOK
    02:11:856 (4) - nc, since you nc at 00:26:256 (1) - OK
    03:24:056 (1) - ends at 03:25:456 - ?
OK

that's all. nice song :3 and your mapping is great, so i'm sorry if my mod is poor x.x
good luck~
yurunneram
Sry Zero__wind , I didn't like the song so ain't modding. but 02:34:256 (6) in Easy has a spacing infringement.
Pink Agate
卧槽要了这么多MOD之后你就坑了?赶紧救图!
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