22:19 Tari: well
22:19 Tari: I have something you could change
22:20 UnitedWeSin: kkk
22:20 Tari: spacing needs to be increased here
22:20 Tari: 01:03:889 (1) -
22:20 Tari: T_T
22:20 UnitedWeSin: how so?
22:20 Tari: inconsistent
22:21 UnitedWeSin: same as 01:02:334 (1) - x_x
22:21 Tari: same as 01:14:556 (1) -
22:22 Tari: which is not
22:22 UnitedWeSin: -.-
22:23 UnitedWeSin: did you mean 01:18:111 (1) - ?
22:23 Tari: stuff out of the kiai is really mixed rhythm
22:23 Tari: no
22:23 Tari: but stuff in kiai you need to make sure you use consistent spacing
22:23 Tari: because stuff in there repeat
22:24 UnitedWeSin: spacing can be different in the second half x.x
22:24 Tari: 0.0
22:24 UnitedWeSin: the first half is less jumpy
22:24 UnitedWeSin: on downbeats
22:25 Tari: if you really want to keep thats
22:25 Tari: its fine
22:27 Tari: and I feel you should swap the position of these two notes
22:27 Tari: 01:24:556 (4,5) -
22:27 Tari: besides that
22:27 Tari: rhythm seems fine in insane
22:28 Tari: one more thing that caught my mind
22:28 UnitedWeSin: hrm
22:29 UnitedWeSin: my intention there is a jump on the bass beat
22:29 UnitedWeSin: and then a jump into the finish
22:29 UnitedWeSin: so jump on the 6 seems more fitting
22:29 Tari: you should really try something else here
22:29 Tari: 01:03:223 (3,4,5) -
22:29 Tari: the back and fash circle jumps seem abusive
22:29 Tari: should only represent certain parts in the music
22:30 Tari: and fix this too
22:30 Tari: 01:17:445 (3,4,5) -
22:30 Tari: if you do that
22:31 UnitedWeSin: maybe
22:31 Tari: and the combo's are too short for insane
22:32 Tari: some people will say so too.
22:32 UnitedWeSin: =w=
22:32 Tari: you can possibly remove it
22:32 Tari: here
22:32 UnitedWeSin: which these? 01:18:111 (1,2) -
22:32 Tari: 01:03:889 (1) -
22:32 Tari: no
22:32 Tari: oh well yeah
22:33 Tari: both parts should have nc's
22:33 Tari: LOL
22:33 Tari: I mean removed nc's*
22:33 Tari: if you make a note a separate combo
22:33 Tari: you should make it stand out more
22:34 UnitedWeSin: lemme try
22:34 Tari: i'd watch your spacing sometimes
22:34 Tari: its very inconsistent
22:35 Tari: thats why I say Blanket abuse@UWS
22:35 UnitedWeSin: you don't really need consistent spacing to make a map play well
22:36 Tari: talking about flow movement
22:36 Tari: but whatever
22:36 UnitedWeSin: ;_;
22:36 Tari: but its not big deal on this song
22:36 Tari: its anime tv size map
22:36 Tari: so you can really expirement with it
22:36 Tari: unlike long songs
22:36 Tari: lol
22:37 Tari: its just the kiai
22:37 Tari: that has really similar rhythms
22:37 Tari: everything else as I said
22:37 Tari: you can play around with
22:38 UnitedWeSin: yea
22:38 UnitedWeSin: the kiai has simple rhythms
22:39 Tari: sure but spacing helps with reading and that is part of flow lol
22:39 Tari: but yeah
22:39 Tari: map seems nice
22:39 Tari: just some rhythms shouldn't be like the others
22:40 Tari: and could of been mapped a little differently
22:40 UnitedWeSin: in kiai?
22:40 Tari: yeahhh
22:41 UnitedWeSin: it's just the same music repeated -.-
22:41 Tari: well yeah
22:41 UnitedWeSin: placements are way different
22:41 UnitedWeSin: in each half
22:41 Tari: placements are similar
22:42 Tari: well
22:42 Tari: yeah they're different
22:42 Tari: exept I really want you to change some rhythms
22:42 Tari: cause
22:43 Tari: I'm pretty sure 01:17:445 (3,4,5) - isn't very similar to 01:13:889 (3,4,5) -
22:43 Tari: but I guess its just me
22:43 Tari: just to make the map more interesting.
22:43 UnitedWeSin: ?
22:43 UnitedWeSin: those are different verses
22:43 UnitedWeSin: oh
22:43 UnitedWeSin: yea
22:43 UnitedWeSin: same rhythm
22:43 UnitedWeSin: it's fine
22:44 UnitedWeSin: both parts have 3 vocal hits
22:44 UnitedWeSin: in the same way
22:44 UnitedWeSin: so 3 circles is a simple rhythm
22:44 Tari: yeah its fine
22:44 Tari: don't need to ignore me
22:44 Tari: but there could be more creativity in that.
22:45 UnitedWeSin: yea ;_;
22:45 UnitedWeSin: but it's simple and plays really nice t ome
22:45 UnitedWeSin: to me*
22:45 Tari: okaaaay
22:45 UnitedWeSin: which is what I was going for
22:45 UnitedWeSin: too many of my other maps play like trash
22:47 UnitedWeSin: what do you think about adding note at 00:51:667 (1) -
22:47 Tari: map seems fine
22:47 UnitedWeSin: and 00:53:223 -
22:47 Tari: but seems to be blanket abuse still
22:47 Tari: but not an issue
22:47 Tari: just me
22:47 UnitedWeSin: <3
22:47 UnitedWeSin: you and your hatred of blankets
<3
22:47 Tari: don't hate them
22:47 Tari: just too much not pretty
22:48 Tari: oh yeah that should be fixed
22:48 UnitedWeSin: but what do you think about adding circle there?
22:48 Tari: that slow slider ruins flow
22:49 Tari: yeah talking about this one
22:49 Tari: 00:51:667 (1) -
22:49 UnitedWeSin: ruins flow?
22:49 UnitedWeSin: orz
22:49 UnitedWeSin: that the highlight of the map
22:49 Tari: fine
22:49 UnitedWeSin: percussion stops
22:49 UnitedWeSin: so does flow -.-
22:50 Tari: but trust me
22:50 Tari: only because of this section in the music
22:50 Tari: 00:55:223 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1) -
22:50 Tari: it fits
22:50 Tari: if that section was gone
22:50 Tari: that would feel really bad
22:50 Tari: it fits
22:50 UnitedWeSin: yea the build up was the intention there
22:52 Tari: 9h4h
22:52 Tari: bleh
22:52 Tari: well
22:53 Tari: one more thing
22:53 Tari: 00:41:667 (3) - this slider
22:53 Tari: needs to be the same as
22:53 Tari: this slider 00:41:000 (1) -
22:53 Tari: which it is
22:53 Tari: but I feel it should go in the same direction
22:53 Tari: QAQ
22:54 Tari: can you possibly Ctrl+G that?
22:54 UnitedWeSin: 00:40:778 (8,1) - pattern is repeated at 00:41:445 (2,3) -
22:54 UnitedWeSin: just reversed
22:54 Tari: yeah
22:55 Tari: well ok
22:55 UnitedWeSin: which is following the vocals in that she jumps high on the 2 and holds again for the 3
22:55 UnitedWeSin: was the intention -.-
22:55 Tari: ok ok ok
22:55 Tari: just wanted to make sure
22:55 Tari: because those are two similar vocal points
22:56 UnitedWeSin: :3
22:56 Tari: so copy-pasting them would make sense too
22:57 Tari: and be wary about
22:58 Tari: this note
22:58 Tari: 00:54:334 (1) -
22:58 Tari: because its not part of vocals
22:58 UnitedWeSin: true
22:58 Tari: so it should be really stand out ><
22:58 UnitedWeSin: mostly following bgm build up here
22:59 UnitedWeSin: the 2 long sliders
22:59 UnitedWeSin: then when the music starts to pick up
22:59 UnitedWeSin: the clacking in the bgm
22:59 UnitedWeSin: idk
22:59 UnitedWeSin: that's when we start clicking on this white tick
22:59 Tari: ok
22:59 UnitedWeSin: vocals are ignored through the whole combo
22:59 Tari: you can keep that too
22:59 UnitedWeSin: I haven't seen anyone miss there
22:59 Tari: jeez
22:59 UnitedWeSin: <3
22:59 Tari: you were prepared for the things I was going say LOL
22:59 UnitedWeSin: great point though
23:00 Tari: hehe
23:00 Tari: lets see what else I can find
23:00 Tari: well
23:01 Tari: personal preferance
23:01 Tari: but I prefer you use color hax here
23:01 Tari: 00:57:889 (1,2,3,4) -
23:01 Tari: it looks pretty
23:01 UnitedWeSin: speaking of colors xD
23:01 UnitedWeSin: i'm still using default
23:01 UnitedWeSin: I need new ones ;_;
23:02 Tari: actually
23:02 Tari: current colors seem fine
23:02 Tari: pink and green should be in there for sure
23:02 Tari: LOL