done (fixed a mistake in kiai time in Normal and two awful sliders in Hard too z_z)
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Fear, and Loathing in Las Vegas - Just Awake (TV Size)
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bubbled.
[Saten]
Consider lowering the HP Drain by 1. It drains rapidly because of how short your combos are.
00:02:995 (3,4) - Beat placement here is pretty weird. Slider should start on the red tick instead. Switch these two objects around on the timeline and rearrange them accordingly on the playfield to follow the vocals better.
00:27:655 (2,3) - Same as above, really. Better to follow the vocals here -- besides, you follow the vocals in the next measure anyways ww
00:47:289 (1,2,3) - Not sure what you're following here. Try something like this (http://puu.sh/3RhwZ.jpg) instead. Add sliders wherever you want as long as that one 1-beat slider is on the downbeat to follow the music properly. (5) on the screenshot is at 00:47:289 (1,2,3).
[Hard]
00:06:765 (6,7,8,9) - I'm not feeling these hitsounds. You should place a clap at every white tick here (the ends of those kick sliders). If you're going to do that, don't forget to remove the clap from the start of (8).
[Normal]
00:45:875 (2,3) - Finisher should go on (3) instead -- that's when the music crashes
[Lally's Easy]
00:38:493 (1) - Rework this slider a bit. It should be starting on the red tick to follow the vocals.
00:41:163 (1) - End this spinner at 00:43:676 instead. It's pretty long, especially considering that it's an easy difficulty. Fill in the gap after that.
01:11:634 (1) - Same as 00:38:493 (1). I realize you're trying to keep a simple beat here but it's not worth sacrificing the music for.
no pop, just suggestions. call me back for a recheck and I'll rank
Consider lowering the HP Drain by 1. It drains rapidly because of how short your combos are.
00:02:995 (3,4) - Beat placement here is pretty weird. Slider should start on the red tick instead. Switch these two objects around on the timeline and rearrange them accordingly on the playfield to follow the vocals better.
00:27:655 (2,3) - Same as above, really. Better to follow the vocals here -- besides, you follow the vocals in the next measure anyways ww
00:47:289 (1,2,3) - Not sure what you're following here. Try something like this (http://puu.sh/3RhwZ.jpg) instead. Add sliders wherever you want as long as that one 1-beat slider is on the downbeat to follow the music properly. (5) on the screenshot is at 00:47:289 (1,2,3).
[Hard]
00:06:765 (6,7,8,9) - I'm not feeling these hitsounds. You should place a clap at every white tick here (the ends of those kick sliders). If you're going to do that, don't forget to remove the clap from the start of (8).
[Normal]
00:45:875 (2,3) - Finisher should go on (3) instead -- that's when the music crashes
[Lally's Easy]
00:38:493 (1) - Rework this slider a bit. It should be starting on the red tick to follow the vocals.
00:41:163 (1) - End this spinner at 00:43:676 instead. It's pretty long, especially considering that it's an easy difficulty. Fill in the gap after that.
01:11:634 (1) - Same as 00:38:493 (1). I realize you're trying to keep a simple beat here but it's not worth sacrificing the music for.
no pop, just suggestions. call me back for a recheck and I'll rank
fixed all all slider suggestions but i'll leave my spinner how it is now i like it how it is and i like to use long spinners in the easier diff so i think is not a big problem,ty for modding :3!
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o3oSync wrote:
[Saten]
Consider lowering the HP Drain by 1. It drains rapidly because of how short your combos are. I could swap it with OD for some compensation.
00:02:995 (3,4) - Beat placement here is pretty weird. Slider should start on the red tick instead. Switch these two objects around on the timeline and rearrange them accordingly on the playfield to follow the vocals better. I don't really wanna sacrifice the drumbeat
00:27:655 (2,3) - Same as above, really. Better to follow the vocals here -- besides, you follow the vocals in the next measure anyways ww I mainly prioritizing the music first, and then the vocals.
00:47:289 (1,2,3) - Not sure what you're following here. Try something like this (http://puu.sh/3RhwZ.jpg) instead. Add sliders wherever you want as long as that one 1-beat slider is on the downbeat to follow the music properly. (5) on the screenshot is at 00:47:289 (1,2,3). There is a clear pattern here as you can see 00:46:032 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
http://puu.sh/3Rt9m/80753215cb.osu
btw Leader, are you gonna add a video? because you said that you might do it some time ago.
Topic Starter
yea, I totally forgot, let's wait bliss' video before ranking this (fixed everything in my diffs, thank you Sync)Saten wrote:
btw Leader, are you gonna add a video? because you said that you might do it some time ago.
Sorry for taking so long http://puu.sh/3Svrr.avi. If there is anything wrong, please tell me.
Topic Starter
Added video, thank you bliss!
Guardati l'anime please nabbo
PS: Aggiungi i nomi dei protagonisti principali dell'anime nei tag?
Gon, Killua, Kurapika, Leorio, Hisoka
PS: Aggiungi i nomi dei protagonisti principali dell'anime nei tag?
Gon, Killua, Kurapika, Leorio, Hisoka
ranked
wow gratz!
congratz :3/
Congratz! 
another Just Awake yay \:D/
Gratz!!
Gratz!!
gratz Leader <3
congrats lasagna-chii o3o
pro leader grats :3
\o3o/ yay
Topic Starter
thank you everyone \;w;/
pls stay there xD
wasn't it popped? o.o oh nvm, he popped it only with adding video.Sync wrote:
ranked
Bravo nabbo :3 Ma avresti potuto aggiungere i Tag.
YES finally ranked! been waiting~ Gratz guys!
been waiting~ Gratz guys!Star rating system drunk pls
Nice song but the thing is it need to be full