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rank this pls
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ljqandylee wrote:

Great song and cool map!
Just a few suggestions xD

[4K Spring]
01:22:561 - 01:23:394 This part is a bit strange for me. How about this:
looking good~! i use that
03:01:727 - The LNs from here give me a sense of auto converted map, I suggest either make them 1/1, or add notes at every end of them ok, add a note looks better
03:08:394 - ^ ^
[5K Summer]
02:58:394 - 03:01:727 Listen carefully (may use 50% playback), the violin sound isn't always 1/3, actually it follows as 1/3, 1/4, 1/4, 1/4, 1/3, 1/4, 1/4, 1/4, a bit complex but I think since you're following the violin, it would be better if you could rearrange this part.
And the same problem also occured in 6K and 7K. awrhhh this really complicated, but i renoted that part... including 5,6,7K ( i hope this grid better )

[6K Autumn]
00:49:436 - 00:50:061 The pattern is good, but I couldn't find the meaning of the 3 LNs clearly. To fit the music you'd better change to something such as this:
fixed weird LN, i use that your suggestion

[7K Winter]
01:45:061 (105061|0,105477|2,105894|4,106311|6) - I prefer not to use LN, the sounds are crisp xD removed LN short, and add a note some
Good mod, Thanks.

iantanye wrote:

rank this pls
i try....
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lemau, forget to mod this aldy.

will edit this post with an essay of full of mods. wkwkwk

star given. kkkkkk
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ishimaru94 wrote:

lemau, forget to mod this aldy.

will edit this post with an essay of full of mods. wkwkwk

star given. kkkkkk
thanks et.....dafuq dont essay plzz wkwkwkw
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mark a star, mod comes later.
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woc2006 wrote:

mark a star, mod comes later.
good to hear that.....
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osu!mania mod! :3 M4M In-Game
[4K Spring]
00:18:394 I noticed something complicated, Best test well http://puu.sh/3zONP
00:23:394 Delete |1|2|3|4| Note
00:25:894 Add note in |1|2|3|4|
00:39:852 Add note, May in |1|2|3|4| or |1|2|3|4|
00:49:227 http://puu.sh/3zOWW.png
00:51:311 Move to |1|2|3|4|
00:54:644 ^
01:08:602 Delete \:D/
01:14:852 Delete |1|2|3|4|
01:25:061 Move to ^ Note
01:35:894 http://puu.sh/3zP6q.png
01:39:227 http://puu.sh/3zPlq.png

  1. Many patterns are repetitive, boring and complicated thing, is what I see


[5K Summer]
  1. Repetition, repetition, repetition everywhere ..., I feel a lot of for unnecessary repeat, you can make beautiful patterns .. especially for this map which is quite cute


[6K Autumn, 7K Winter]
\:D/ That's good! :D

Good luck! (:
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ThoomyyxD wrote:

osu!mania mod! :3 M4M In-Game
[4K Spring]
00:18:394 I noticed something complicated, Best test well http://puu.sh/3zONP - very well.... changed
00:23:394 Delete |1|2|3|4| Note - removed
00:25:894 Add note in |1|2|3|4| - added
00:39:852 Add note, May in |1|2|3|4| or |1|2|3|4| - ok
00:49:227 http://puu.sh/3zOWW.png - ok i follow the beat this
00:51:311 Move to |1|2|3|4| look weird this if move 4
00:54:644 ^ ^
01:08:602 Delete \:D/ - okay,
01:14:852 Delete |1|2|3|4| nope
01:25:061 Move to ^ Note nope let it keep 4 3 4 3....
01:35:894 http://puu.sh/3zP6q.png - fixed
01:39:227 http://puu.sh/3zPlq.png - fixed

  1. Many patterns are repetitive, boring and complicated thing, is what I see


[5K Summer]
  1. Repetition, repetition, repetition everywhere ..., I feel a lot of for unnecessary repeat, you can make beautiful patterns .. especially for this map which is quite cute
yeah....but i have no idea this xD

[6K Autumn, 7K Winter]
\:D/ That's good! :Dthx

Good luck! (:
Thanks for mod :3
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General
4K: HP6.
7K: consider OD6 because of o2 style(more holds)
Turn off "letterbox"

There're some diff spread issues. 4K feels like 4K normal+, and 5K feels like 5K hard. So it's better to cut some holds in 4K and 5K to make them much eaiser.
Reference: cut 10% notes on 4K, and 15% on 5K.
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woc2006 wrote:

General
4K: HP6. - done
7K: consider OD6 because of o2 style(more holds) - yes i really want it OD6
Turn off "letterbox" - done

There're some diff spread issues. 4K feels like 4K normal+, and 5K feels like 5K hard. So it's better to cut some holds in 4K and 5K to make them much eaiser.
Reference: cut 10% notes on 4K, and 15% on 5K. done but i still cant decrease note on 5K any idea?
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ExPew wrote:

woc2006 wrote:

General
4K: HP6. - done
7K: consider OD6 because of o2 style(more holds) - yes i really want it OD6
Turn off "letterbox" - done

There're some diff spread issues. 4K feels like 4K normal+, and 5K feels like 5K hard. So it's better to cut some holds in 4K and 5K to make them much eaiser.
Reference: cut 10% notes on 4K, and 15% on 5K. done but i still cant decrease note on 5K any idea?
you have 1300 notes in 5K which is more than 2 times than 4K (500 notes), so this is a gap and shouldn't happened.
Basically it means you have to add another 5K diff with fewer notes, but consider to your diff naming, there's no season for 5th diff.
So I think the best way for the issues is cutting notes, apparently, holds.
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woc2006 wrote:

There're some diff spread issues. 4K feels like 4K normal+, and 5K feels like 5K hard. So it's better to cut some holds in 4K and 5K to make them much eaiser.
Reference: cut 10% notes on 4K, and 15% on 5K. done but i still cant decrease note on 5K any idea?

you have 1300 notes in 5K which is more than 2 times than 4K (500 notes), so this is a gap and shouldn't happened.
Basically it means you have to add another 5K diff with fewer notes, but consider to your diff naming, there's no season for 5th diff.
So I think the best way for the issues is cutting notes, apparently, holds.
done, 5K turn to Hard now
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[7K Winter]
00:19:227 (19227|0) - Short it, it's not fitting to the music for me. Cut the 2nd half of it and it should be better.
00:55:581 (55581|3,55686|1,55790|3,55894|1,55894|5,55998|3,56102|1,56206|3) - Maybe shuffle that notes?
01:40:061 (100061|0,100477|1,100894|2,101311|3) - What?
02:43:290 (163290|4) - Should make 2 Holds for fitting the Violin?

Really good map, you rock! 8-)
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[6K Autumn]
00:19:436 (19436|1) - Not needed hold, recheck music, it have a silent space there.
00:21:727 (21727|3,22561|0) - I would short the hold to where the note is, just a feeling~
00:46:415 (46415|4) - I suggest to remove that one.
00:46:727 (46727|2,49436|0) - Between those I should add a long note, fits to the violin...
01:46:936 (106936|3) - From here until 02:05:061 (125061|5,125061|2) - LACK of longnotes, OMG!

02:34:436 (154436|0,154436|1,154540|2,154644|0,154748|2,154852|0,154956|2) - ????
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DJKero wrote:

[6K Autumn]
00:19:436 (19436|1) - Not needed hold, recheck music, it have a silent space there. - changed, i think got missing 1/4 there
00:21:727 (21727|3,22561|0) - I would short the hold to where the note is, just a feeling~ - ok
00:46:415 (46415|4) - I suggest to remove that one. ^
00:46:727 (46727|2,49436|0) - Between those I should add a long note, fits to the violin... fixed ( but i prefer use previous, because that pattern very fit )
01:46:936 (106936|3) - From here until 02:05:061 (125061|5,125061|2) - LACK of longnotes, OMG! :O i better keep this, dont too many LNs everywhere :d

02:34:436 (154436|0,154436|1,154540|2,154644|0,154748|2,154852|0,154956|2) - ???? - em...i removed 1 note before new measure

[7K Winter]
00:19:227 (19227|0) - Short it, it's not fitting to the music for me. Cut the 2nd half of it and it should be better. changed, i think got missing 1/4 there
00:55:581 (55581|3,55686|1,55790|3,55894|1,55894|5,55998|3,56102|1,56206|3) - Maybe shuffle that notes? fixed
01:40:061 (100061|0,100477|1,100894|2,101311|3) - What? :P
02:43:290 (163290|4) - Should make 2 Holds for fitting the Violin? but note bit messed

Really good map, you rock! 8-) - no, im paper.... :D thanks bro
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mod by request \:D/

[4K Spring]
00:12:769 (12769|2) - This note is not consistant with before and after...
I suggest move 00:12:144 (12144|1) - to 00:11:727 and move 00:12:769 (12769|2) to 00:12:977 to follow the strings

[5K Summer]
00:42:352 (42352|4,42769|0) - um.. the string is 6-7-1 (42:352,42:873,43:186)
01:10:894 (70894|4) - This violin starts at 1:10:686

2:58:394 - 3:00:477 1/3
3:00:477 - 3:05:061 1/4(xxx_)
3:05:061 - 3:08:394 1/3
after 3:08:394 1/4(xxx_)
Here is the original violin chart:(it's all 1/3 in the original chart, but the violinist apparently didn't completely follow the chart...But 3 notes for each beat is right.)
http://puu.sh/3HvH3.png
adjust other diffs too~

03:14:227 (194227|1,194644|3) - the background string is 3---212---, so I don't suggest put 2 holds there, maybe one hold?

[6K Autumn]
00:12:144 (12144|1) - um..what is this correspond to?
00:19:227 (19227|5,19331|5) - is this for show the flute is a short note?
00:42:144 (42144|1) - both the violin and string starts at 42:352
00:42:977 (42977|5) - 7 starts at 42:873
00:49:227 (49227|0,49436|1,49748|4) - 5-6---7-
01:15:894 (75894|2,76311|1,76519|5) - I feel it is 5--6--7-, not 5---6-7-
02:34:436 (154436|3) - start at 2:34:540, as you mapped in 7K
02:51:623 (171623|5) - move to 02:51:727 (171727|5) -
02:54:331 (174331|3) - move to 02:54:227 (174227|3) -

[7K winter]
00:19:227 (19227|5,19331|5) - is this for show the flute is a short note?
00:30:061 (30061|5,30061|1) - um.. feels a little strange they don't end at the same time.
00:59:227 (59227|0,59331|3,59436|5,59540|6,59748|3) - I feel it is 327-6-7-(listen at 100% not 25% because 25 might distort ;w;)
02:40:686 (160686|3) - 2---7---5---4---, start at 2:40:477
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chonicle wrote:

mod by request \:D/

[4K Spring]
00:12:769 (12769|2) - This note is not consistant with before and after...
I suggest move 00:12:144 (12144|1) - to 00:11:727 and move 00:12:769 (12769|2) to 00:12:977 to follow the strings - fixed

[5K Summer]
00:42:352 (42352|4,42769|0) - um.. the string is 6-7-1 (42:352,42:873,43:186) - this might bit complicated to me...but when you give the timing now i get it....
01:10:894 (70894|4) - This violin starts at 1:10:686 - moved

2:58:394 - 3:00:477 1/3
3:00:477 - 3:05:061 1/4(xxx_)
3:05:061 - 3:08:394 1/3
after 3:08:394 1/4(xxx_)
Here is the original violin chart:(it's all 1/3 in the original chart, but the violinist apparently didn't completely follow the chart...But 3 notes for each beat is right.)
http://puu.sh/3HvH3.png - oh my, only musician know this ;w; (im not)
adjust other diffs too~ - ok thanks for looking up this

03:14:227 (194227|1,194644|3) - the background string is 3---212---, so I don't suggest put 2 holds there, maybe one hold? ahh....this i already fixed up but not updated :x thanks for looking.

[6K Autumn]
00:12:144 (12144|1) - um..what is this correspond to? - long flute but when i recheck again bit mess there ( there 2 flute note with LN and normal note)
00:19:227 (19227|5,19331|5) - is this for show the flute is a short note? - yes i think not fit well if making short hold for there, any idea? if ignore it the 2nd flute this 00:19:331 (19331|5) - ?
00:42:144 (42144|1) - both the violin and string starts at 42:352 - moved
00:42:977 (42977|5) - 7 starts at 42:873 ^
00:49:227 (49227|0,49436|1,49748|4) - 5-6---7- fixed
01:15:894 (75894|2,76311|1,76519|5) - I feel it is 5--6--7-, not 5---6-7- - ^
02:34:436 (154436|3) - start at 2:34:540, as you mapped in 7K - ok but mirrored it,
02:51:623 (171623|5) - move to 02:51:727 (171727|5) - moved
02:54:331 (174331|3) - move to 02:54:227 (174227|3) - ^

[7K winter]
00:19:227 (19227|5,19331|5) - is this for show the flute is a short note? same reason with 6K
00:30:061 (30061|5,30061|1) - um.. feels a little strange they don't end at the same time. - fixed on |2| hold
00:59:227 (59227|0,59331|3,59436|5,59540|6,59748|3) - I feel it is 327-6-7-(listen at 100% not 25% because 25 might distort ;w;) - you're too sharp.. ;w; thanks, fixed
02:40:686 (160686|3) - 2---7---5---4---, start at 2:40:477 ^
very et mod...
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03:00:477 (180477|6,180477|5,180581|4,180686|2,180790|1) - Doesn't the violin play three 1/3 notes this bar? You have four 1/4 notes.
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iantanye wrote:

03:00:477 (180477|6,180477|5,180581|4,180686|2,180790|1) - Doesn't the violin play three 1/3 notes this bar? You have four 1/4 notes.
oh i forgot >< btw it should be 1/4 (3 notes) , but put 4 notes on 1/4.... fixed this and rearranged
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You might know I'm picky, but here goes nothing.

First, have a new soft-hitnormal. http://puu.sh/3Kqg0.wav (Tested with 4k spring, other modes might be too dense... but it does the job, as a rhythm aid. Point is, default soft-hitnormal is so bad x.x)

[4k Spring]
Suggestions, take them seriously though. Their goal is a 4k that feels more solid.
00:12:977 (12977|2) - Remove.
00:15:894 (15894|3) - ^
00:19:227 (19227|3) - ^
00:19:644 (19644|0) - ^
00:42:873 (42873|0) - ^ (Simplifies rhythm a LOT taking out these)
00:46:727 (46727|0) - Turn to 1st and 3rd lane jump
00:48:811 (48811|3,49227|2,49540|1,49540|3,49852|2,50061|3,50477|0) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/885350 Change to this.
00:56:727 (56727|2) - Add note in lane 2.
00:59:852 (59852|2) - Remove
01:00:061 - Add onto lane 3.
01:10:061 (70061|0,70061|3,70477|1,70894|0,70894|3,71311|1,71727|0) - Switch the [14] with the [2].
01:13:811 (73811|2,74227|0,74227|3) - Switch as well.
01:23:811 (83811|3,84227|2,84644|3,85061|2,85477|3) - Distribute instead of loading onto right hand.
01:26:311 (86311|3,86311|1,86519|2,86727|0) - Switch [24] with [1].
01:37:144 - Insert note.
01:42:873 (102873|0,102977|1) - Switch to right hand.
01:46:727 - Difficulty jump is HUGE. lessen plz
02:41:311 (161311|0,161311|2,161727|3) - Switch.
02:47:769 (167769|2) - Remove
02:47:977 (167977|0,167977|3,168186|2,168394|1) - Switch
02:51:727 - Insert note
03:03:973 - This whole section would play better as a series of long notes, and you also get to introduce your main 7k's map mechanic better! Win-win.

[5k Summer]
00:19:852 (19852|1) - I get that you want to add symmetry with the previous pattern but the player's ready. Remove this so that whole pattern follows the flute.
01:37:162 - Add note.
01:41:936 (101936|4,102144|3,102352|4,102561|3,102769|4) - Distribute and add notes to white ticks.
03:17:665 (197665|4,197769|3,197873|2,197977|3,198081|4,198186|3,198290|1,198394|4,198394|0) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/885370 change to this for better pitch relevancy.

[6k Autumn]
00:13:081 (13081|1,13290|2) - Remove.
00:19:227 (19227|5,19331|5) - Ugly! (As well as the minijacks. Distribute plz)
00:52:561 (52561|0) - Change to 6th lane.
00:53:394 (53394|0) - Change to 3rd lane and move notes currently in 3rd lane to 1st lane.
00:55:894 (55894|4,56727|2) - Lane switch. Pitch relevancy.
00:57:977 - Add note as previous patterns had 2 notes. Same ahead.
01:32:769 (92769|2) - Switch to lane 2
01:33:186 (93186|3) - lane 5
01:33:394 (93394|2) - Lane 4
01:35:894 (95894|5,95894|3,96102|3,96311|0,96311|2,96519|2,96727|3) - ^
02:05:894 (125894|3) - Lane 6
03:01:727 - You were using 1/3 just before. Why not now?
03:06:848 - Even more so if you start using it back again!
(I know why but still... it's kind of weird.)

[7k Winter]
00:19:227 (19227|5,19331|5) - eww jack
02:31:519 (151519|2) - Turn into hold for extra oomph.
03:24:852 (204852|0,204852|6) - Shorten by half so you can...
03:25:061 - Add a note here and end with some extra oomph as well

\o\.
That 1/3 1/4 switch you do before is also here. Hnnnnng.
other than that this diff is perfect ... (if only for that ugly soft-hitnormal... hmm)
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