Aso Natsuko - Perfect-area complete! (TV Size) · forum

Kawayi Rika

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Kawayi Rika 2013-05-27T19:49:28+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013년 6월 5일 수요일 at 오전 12:21:56

Artist: Aso Natsuko
Title: Perfect-area complete! (TV Size)
Source: Baka to Test to Shoukanjuu
Tags: opening No_Gu alacat バカとテストと召喚獣
BPM: 183
Filesize: 19605kb
Play Time: 01:25
Difficulties Available:

alacat's Easy (2.77 stars, 104 notes)
Gu's Hard (5 stars, 241 notes)
Normal (4.46 stars, 163 notes)
Rika (4.88 stars, 345 notes)

Download: Aso Natsuko - Perfect-area complete! (TV Size)
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Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 46th Ranked beat map.

バカとテストと召喚獣 season 1 opening ~ For fun <3

Rika(Insane),Normal by me.

Hard by No_Gu.

Easy by alacat.

Last edited by Kawayi Rika 2013-06-04T15:23:41+00:00, edited 6 times in total.

No_Gu

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No_Gu 2013-05-30T10:29:00+00:00

http://puu.sh/34lyP.osu
done

Last edited by Kawayi Rika 2013-05-30T11:59:12+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

HelloSCV

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HelloSCV 2013-06-01T01:17:04+00:00

General

add tag No_Gu

Hard

00:40:968 (1,2,3) - touching HP bar
00:53:919 (5,1) - reverse rhythm? much better imo
00:53:263 (3,4) - you tried to fit with vocal? then try thishttp://puu.sh/35y9f.jpg
00:59:165 - need note?

Insane

00:04:903 (6) - 끝에도 피니시 넣는게 좋지 않을까요?
00:08:181 (5) - 느낌상 여기서 뉴콤넣고 00:08:345 (1,2,3) - 이런 패턴 시작해야 할지 않을까요?
00:10:476 (3) - 전부 클랩?
00:22:116 (4) - 여기는 1/2 슬라이더보다 00:21:788 (3) - 이걸 1/1까지 늘리시고 00:22:280 (5) - 여기에 노트 추가하심이? 아니면 00:22:116 (3) - 여기 노트 넣으시고 00:22:280 (4) - 이걸 점프로 주신다던지?
00:22:444 (1,2,3) - 노트2개하고 슬라이더 앞쪽에 노말 샘플셋 넣으심이? ( 볼륨도 줄이시면 좋을꺼 같아요 )
00:46:870 (4) - 뒤에 냥~ 소리가 있는데 힛사가 없으니 좀 허전한듯해요, 휘슬?

Gloria Guard

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Gloria Guard 2013-06-01T01:20:54+00:00

[Rika]

00:02:280 (3) 제 개인적인 의견입니다만.. 뒤에 배치하신 박자랑 일치시키는것은 어떨가싶네요..
박자에는 큰문제가없지만.. 특이한 피아노소리가 이 슬라이더 사이에서 나기때문에.. 노트 2개를 넣는게
더 좋다고 생각합니다
01:02:935 (4,5) 여기는 가사를따라가시다가 갑자기 드럼으로 바뀌니까 박자가 혼란스럽네요..
이어서 가사를따라 박자를 이어가는게 좋다고생각합니다 그래서 추천드리는 박자

SPOILER

01:07:690 (5) Ctrl+G를 하신다면 좀더 흥미있는 대칭패턴이 될것같네요
01:10:968 (6,1) 이 부분의 박자는 드럼을 따라가신건가요..? 저는 가사를 따라가는게
곡흐름에 더좋다고 생각합니다 그래서 저는 이박자를 추천합니다

SPOILER

01:22:280 뒤에 01:21:624 (1,2) 이 박자와 같게하는것도 좋을것같아요 가사도 일치하는것 같구요

SPOILER

[Gu's Hard]

00:15:722 (6) i think this pattern beat one repeat remove and blue (1) slider move 00:15:886
and 00:16:378 add note is better beat

꾸웃러억트 乃

Raose

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Raose 2013-06-03T00:28:53+00:00

trying for M4M. Hope my mod's helpful! ><

alacat's Easy
00:31:132 (3) - clap on head and tail for consistency with the other diffs?
00:36:378 (2) - add a clap
that's all i can find sorry ;;

Normal
00:18:673 (1,2) - adjust the curves & positions of these sliders so that (1) blankets (2)? It probably won't ruin the distance snap with the next sliders.
00:35:067 (3) - move up a bit so that (1,2,3) make a nice curve?
00:54:083 (5,6) - shape like this for smoother curve? (sorry, (6) is supposed to be the repeating slider, how you originally had it, I just wanted to show the shape

)

image

01:14:739 (2) - move to x:444 y:150 for perfect stacking

Gu's Hard
00:08:345 (1,2) - I think it'd fit the vocals better if you made (1) a circle instead of a slider, and move up (2) to 00:08:509
00:09:657 - 00:10:312 - y u no map?

00:15:968 - add note here? D: bg music kinda starts here
00:23:099 (1) - finish sounds weird here D:
00:31:460 (4) - clap on tail
01:07:034 (1) - blanket 01:06:214 (2)?

Rika
00:30:722 (3) - not sure this note is necessary D:
00:43:591 - 00:44:093 - I think whistles should be added here
01:03:263 (5) - move to blue tick to fit vocal?

goodluck!

biwako

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biwako 2013-06-03T00:40:24+00:00

from m4m queue

[alacat's Easy]
00:09:493 (2) - drum sound like other diffs?
00:10:149 (3) - remove whistle?
00:23:919 - add soft finish?

[Normal]
00:05:231 - add finish
01:18:837 - add clap
01:24:083 - add clap

[Gu's Hard]
OD-1? I think OD7 is high for Hard diff
00:23:099 - i think this finish is not fit

[Rika]
HP Drain-1? (for sort diffs)
00:03:919 - add finish
00:05:231 - add finish
00:14:903 - add clap(with reduce volume?)
00:51:952 - add clap
00:54:657 - follow here sound?(expand 00:54:411 (2) - etc...)
01:05:394 - add clap
01:05:722 - ^
00:59:985 (4,5,6) - want to impact like jumps
01:05:476 (4) - don't need this note imo
01:17:526 - add clap or normal sample set
01:18:837 - ^
01:20:149 - ^
01:21:460 - ^
01:22:772 - ^
01:24:083 - ^

Megurine Luka

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Megurine Luka 2013-06-03T01:16:08+00:00

m4m =.=

[G]

nah

[E]

00:19:329 (2) - I think curve up might be better
00:23:919 (1) - fin on head
00:48:837 (2) - try

00:56:706 (3) - fin on head?
01:09:493 (2) - add fin on tail and fin on head of 01:10:476 (3) -
01:15:722 (4) - fin on head

[N]

除了前奏/kiai以外所有fin的声音都听不太清，我觉得你要么用default的fin要么调高音量
我的建议是把你那个hitfinish的音拉出来，单独组成一组音效，然后就前奏部分也就是开头到重鼓点响起的地方用，其他地方就直接用默认，默认的和这首歌非常合拍的
当然动音效set所有maoset都有影响，也可以插点绿线就是，比较烦了

00:19:329 (2) -

00:35:722 (1,2,3) - 每个加个default fin试试，我觉得这里重音蛮明显的
00:48:181 (2) - 为啥把头静音，太奇怪了
01:11:788 (2) - 做和3一样的形状
01:14:739 (2) - 感觉没stack好

[H]

00:16:050 (1) - fin
00:20:476 (3) - 下来一点吧相对其他感觉太突起了
00:29:165 (1) - fin
00:31:788 (1) - ^
00:34:411 (1) - ^
00:37:034 (1) - ^ 很明显很多可以加fin的地方为什么不加呢-.- 难道是default fin被讨厌了么(ノω<。)ノ)) 后面不说了，不加fin 打击感会少很多所以再斟酌一下吧
00:39:657 (1) - 尾巴稍微往左上一格
00:41:624 (3,4,5,6) - 强烈建议还是等距
01:16:378 (1) - fin

[R]

音效部分基本同N，我感觉现在打起来就是软绵绵的没什么音效感

00:18:509 (4) - 感觉怪怪的，我觉得还不如放在前一个slider头上顺手
00:19:001 (1) - 我的建议是少点一格折返然后在00:19:493 (2) - 下面顺势加个circle，更符合背景音乐，不然相当于你硬把一个从00:19:329开始的小音阶拆掉了
00:35:722 (1,2,3) - 建议等距
00:38:673 (3,4) - 干嘛不摆和1 2 差不多的，我感觉因为Vocal 的关系，和1,2 一样的梗会比较好玩类似于

个人认为后面那个slider也可以这么玩不过随意啦这个倒是
00:46:050 (1) - 这个spacing毫无道理啊建议用正常spacing
01:01:460 (4) - 错觉么感觉没stack好

差不太多了，我觉得音效还是需要再斟酌，太软了。

Broccoly

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Broccoly 2013-06-03T01:29:16+00:00

안녕하세요~
엠포엠 시도!

[Rika]
리플레이 ~~으 너무몬함~~
00:17:034 (4) - 요 노트를 약간 왼쪽 아래로 옮겨보시는건? 00:17:034 (4) - 요기에 큰 다운비트가 빰 하고 있으니깐 약간의 점프를 만들어주시면 더 재밌어질것 같아요. 또한 00:16:378 (2,3) - 이 점프에서 갑자기 4번으로가는 거리가 줄어들어서 어색한 느낌도 나네요~
00:24:821 (12,1) - 요 스트림 마지막 노트에서 1번까지의 거리가 조금 넓은것 같아요. 물론 스트림 블랭캣 모양은 좋은데 저도 치긴 했지만 무빙을 갑자기 과하게 꺾어야 했어가지고 불편한 느낌이 들었어요. 1번을 12번에 붙여서 전체적으로 동그랗게 만든다거나 하는걸 추천합니다
01:01:788 (5,6) - 3/4 슬라이더를 쓰셨는데...죄송하지만 음악에 잘 어울리지 않는것 같아요 imo.. 그냥 슬라이더 한개 + 서클 두개로 대체하시는게..? 그게01:09:657 (1,2) // 01:17:034 (3,4) // 01:11:132 (1,2) - 이런곳은 보컬이나 음악이 3/4 슬라이더에 맞게 있어서 아주 좋지만 저쪽은.. 음~ 조금 오묘(?)한 느낌이 드네요
01:20:968 (3,4) - 각각 Ctrl + G? 재밌는 점프~
좋은맵!!

[Gu's Hard]
00:07:526 (2) - how about dividing this slider into a circle and a slider? like this↙ i think the rhythm gets more clear this way~

(end slider here: 00:08:017 (3) // and place 3 here: 00:08:017 (3) // )
00:35:558 (4,1) - this jump might be too big suddenly for hard players. How about rotating 00:35:722 (1,2,3,4) - this 30 degrees and place them like this↙?

(use ctrl + shift + R for rotating, and add a new combo on 00:36:378 (1) - to make it neater~)

(looks good~)
00:40:968 (1,2,3) - these three notes are way too high; the HP bar actually covers the notes when using the map's custom skin x(
good diff!

[Normal]
00:07:526 (3,5) - 요기 리듬이 쪼끔 이상한것 같네요. 00:07:526 (3) - 이걸 00:07:853 - 여기서 끝내보시구, 00:08:017 (1,2,3) - 이걸 틱 하나씩 당겨보신다음, 00:09:001 (4) - 요기에 서클을 다음 슬라이더 머리에 겹쳐보시는건 어떠세요?

00:09:657 - 요기에 서클하나 추가? 나-! 에 아무것도 없으니 허전한 느낌이들고 약간 헷갈려요~
00:21:296 (1,1) - 이 사이에 ↙ 이 리듬 한번 써보세요~ 제 생각엔 더 노래에 잘맞는것 같아요

01:03:263 (1) - 음.. 가사의 '이~~' 는 01:03:099 - 요기서 시작을 하는데 반박자 느리게 슬라이더가 나오니 조금 이상한듯 하네요~
01:09:657 (1,4) - 요기 - 이렇게 한번 바꿔보세요~ 더 음악에 잘 맞아떨어지는것 같네요

[alacat's easy]
00:09:493 (2) - make this into a slider that ends on 00:09:657 - here? then it can include the vocal too xD
good easy!!

Alright~~ that's about it! Hope this helps~
Good solid mapset. Good luck!!

Umi

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Umi 2013-06-03T01:45:31+00:00

hi hi o/ here from your queue, and because it's one of my favorite anime :3

Alacat's easy

- 00:17:362 (3) - finish
- 00:18:017 (5) - finish at the end
- 00:36:050 - add a note ?
- 01:22:935 (3) - delete reverse and add slider 01:23:919 - end 01:24:247 -
- 01:24:575 (1,2) - exchange position ( slider before circle) result => http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/791017

Normal

- 00:08:181 (1,2,3) - this pattern is a bit confused with the vocal, something that follow the voice could be better here
- 00:21:624 (2) - end of slider 1/2 earlier (first step)
- 00:22:280 (3) - move 1/2 ealier (second step)
- 00:22:444 (4) - move 1/2 ealier and end at 00:22:935 - (Third step) => it give something like that http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/791046
- 00:48:837 (3) - end of slider 00:49:493 - then add a note 00:49:821 - x256y36
- 00:50:149 (1) - same as above add a note 00:51:132 - x256y36 => http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/791052
- 01:10:149 (2) - end 1/2 earlier and move it at 01:10:312 -

Gu's Hard

this is a Hard/insane, right ? x)
- AR - 1
- 00:07:526 (2) - change into circle then add a 1/2 slider 00:07:853 -
- 00:25:394 (1,2,3,4) - same spacing ? i know that it's intentional but it's a bit confused
- 00:36:870 (8,1) - what about stack this 2 notes
- 00:41:624 (3,4,5,6) - same spacing ?
- 01:00:476 (1) - add finish

Rika

- 00:15:149 (4) - delete
- 00:15:640 (8) - ^
nothing else to say ^^

That's all !

I hope it'll be helpfull

Go go ranked take my star (soon)

No_Gu

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No_Gu 2013-06-03T04:14:25+00:00

HelloSCV wrote:
Hard
00:59:165 - need note?nice

Zhengster wrote:
Gu's Hard
00:23:099 (1) - finish sounds weird here D: seems so

http://puu.sh/37bXS.osu
others were not fixed

Last edited by Kawayi Rika 2013-06-04T08:21:07+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

alacat

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alacat 2013-06-03T08:14:19+00:00

mods

Zhengster wrote:
alacat's Easy
00:31:132 (3) - clap on head and tail for consistency with the other diffs? no.
00:36:378 (2) - add a clap ^
that's all i can find sorry ;; Thanks :3

biwako wrote:
[alacat's Easy]
00:09:493 (2) - drum sound like other diffs? ok!
00:10:149 (3) - remove whistle? no.
00:23:919 - add soft finish? ok!

Megurine Luka wrote:
[E]

00:19:329 (2) - I think curve up might be better keep on now.
00:23:919 (1) - fin on head ok~
00:48:837 (2) - try no change.

00:56:706 (3) - fin on head? no.
01:09:493 (2) - add fin on tail and fin on head of 01:10:476 (3) - not fit.
01:15:722 (4) - fin on head no.

Broccoly wrote:
[alacat's easy]
00:09:493 (2) - make this into a slider that ends on 00:09:657 - here? then it can include the vocal too xD keep on now.
good easy!! Thanks :3

-Umi- wrote:
Alacat's easy
- 00:17:362 (3) - finish ok~
- 00:18:017 (5) - finish at the end ok~
- 00:36:050 - add a note ? emm it's nice But I want to put 1/2 rhythm.
- 01:22:935 (3) - delete reverse and add slider 01:23:919 - end 01:24:247 - not fit for me.
- 01:24:575 (1,2) - exchange position ( slider before circle) result => http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/791017 ^

Thank you for modding :3

http://puu.sh/37hYj.zip

Last edited by Kawayi Rika 2013-06-04T08:21:16+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Kawayi Rika

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Topic Starter

Kawayi Rika 2013-06-04T07:02:50+00:00

HelloSCV

HelloSCV wrote:
Insane

00:04:903 (6) - 끝에도 피니시 넣는게 좋지 않을까요? ok.
00:08:181 (5) - 느낌상 여기서 뉴콤넣고 00:08:345 (1,2,3) - 이런 패턴 시작해야 할지 않을까요? 그렇네요 ㅋㅋ fixed.
00:10:476 (3) - 전부 클랩? ok.
00:22:116 (4) - 여기는 1/2 슬라이더보다 00:21:788 (3) - 이걸 1/1까지 늘리시고 00:22:280 (5) - 여기에 노트 추가하심이? 아니면 00:22:116 (3) - 여기 노트 넣으시고 00:22:280 (4) - 이걸 점프로 주신다던지? 흠 여기는 보류.
00:22:444 (1,2,3) - 노트2개하고 슬라이더 앞쪽에 노말 샘플셋 넣으심이? ( 볼륨도 줄이시면 좋을꺼 같아요 ) ok.
00:46:870 (4) - 뒤에 냥~ 소리가 있는데 힛사가 없으니 좀 허전한듯해요, 휘슬? 넣으면 이상할꺼 같아서 일부러 비움 ㅋ.

Gloria Guard

Gloria Guard wrote:
[Rika]

00:02:280 (3) 제 개인적인 의견입니다만.. 뒤에 배치하신 박자랑 일치시키는것은 어떨가싶네요..
박자에는 큰문제가없지만.. 특이한 피아노소리가 이 슬라이더 사이에서 나기때문에.. 노트 2개를 넣는게
더 좋다고 생각합니다 그다지 의미가? ㅜ
01:02:935 (4,5) 여기는 가사를따라가시다가 갑자기 드럼으로 바뀌니까 박자가 혼란스럽네요..
이어서 가사를따라 박자를 이어가는게 좋다고생각합니다 그래서 추천드리는 박자 일부러 바꾼거요.
SPOILER
01:07:690 (5) Ctrl+G를 하신다면 좀더 흥미있는 대칭패턴이 될것같네요 흐름이 조금 안좋네요.
01:10:968 (6,1) 이 부분의 박자는 드럼을 따라가신건가요..? 저는 가사를 따라가는게
곡흐름에 더좋다고 생각합니다 그래서 저는 이박자를 추천합니다 드럼이요.
SPOILER
01:22:280 뒤에 01:21:624 (1,2) 이 박자와 같게하는것도 좋을것같아요 가사도 일치하는것 같구요 너무 중복해서 다른 박자 쓴거에요.
SPOILER

꾸웃러억트 乃

Zhengster

Zhengster wrote:
trying for M4M. Hope my mod's helpful! ><

Normal
00:18:673 (1,2) - adjust the curves & positions of these sliders so that (1) blankets (2)? It probably won't ruin the distance snap with the next sliders. nope.
00:35:067 (3) - move up a bit so that (1,2,3) make a nice curve? already looks fine IMO.
00:54:083 (5,6) - shape like this for smoother curve? (sorry, (6) is supposed to be the repeating slider, how you originally had it, I just wanted to show the shape ) nope.

01:14:739 (2) - move to x:444 y:150 for perfect stacking ok.

Rika
00:30:722 (3) - not sure this note is necessary D: it's fits with music.
00:43:591 - 00:44:093 - I think whistles should be added here don't like add to here.
01:03:263 (5) - move to blue tick to fit vocal? followed drum.

goodluck!

biwako

biwako wrote:
from m4m queue

[Normal]
00:05:231 - add finish ok.
01:18:837 - add clap ok.
01:24:083 - add clap ok.

[Rika]
HP Drain-1? (for sort diffs) nope, 7 is enough.
00:03:919 - add finish ok.
00:05:231 - add finish ok.
00:14:903 - add clap(with reduce volume?) ok.
00:51:952 - add clap ok.
00:54:657 - follow here sound?(expand 00:54:411 (2) - etc...) ok.
01:05:394 - add clap ok.
01:05:722 - ^ ok.
00:59:985 (4,5,6) - want to impact like jumps no jump to here.
01:05:476 (4) - don't need this note imo removed and sound better.
01:17:526 - add clap or normal sample set added clap.
01:18:837 - ^
01:20:149 - ^
01:21:460 - ^
01:22:772 - ^
01:24:083 - ^ ^^^
Really big thanks for nice hitsound mod <3

Megurine Luka

Megurine Luka wrote:
m4m =.=

[N]

除了前奏/kiai以外所有fin的声音都听不太清，我觉得你要么用default的fin要么调高音量
我的建议是把你那个hitfinish的音拉出来，单独组成一组音效，然后就前奏部分也就是开头到重鼓点响起的地方用，其他地方就直接用默认，默认的和这首歌非常合拍的
当然动音效set所有maoset都有影响，也可以插点绿线就是，比较烦了不喜欢吵的音效，麻烦的音效.

00:19:329 (2) - 故意没弄blanket.
00:35:722 (1,2,3) - 每个加个default fin试试，我觉得这里重音蛮明显的不用.
00:48:181 (2) - 为啥把头静音，太奇怪了不是静音是跟着insane 来的线，总之删掉了.
01:11:788 (2) - 做和3一样的形状故意没做弯的.
01:14:739 (2) - 感觉没stack好在前面的mod里改了.
[R]

音效部分基本同N，我感觉现在打起来就是软绵绵的没什么音效感

00:18:509 (4) - 感觉怪怪的，我觉得还不如放在前一个slider头上顺手不觉的.
00:19:001 (1) - 我的建议是少点一格折返然后在00:19:493 (2) - 下面顺势加个circle，更符合背景音乐，不然相当于你硬把一个从00:19:329开始的小音阶拆掉了就是拆的啊.
00:35:722 (1,2,3) - 建议等距跟BG 音乐歌词没必要等间.
00:38:673 (3,4) - 干嘛不摆和1 2 差不多的，我感觉因为Vocal 的关系，和1,2 一样的梗会比较好玩类似于 slider就好.

个人认为后面那个slider也可以这么玩不过随意啦这个倒是
00:46:050 (1) - 这个spacing毫无道理啊建议用正常spacing 你会听见‘wa’的歌词.
01:01:460 (4) - 错觉么感觉没stack好叠了一下.

差不太多了，我觉得音效还是需要再斟酌，太软了。

Broccoly

Broccoly wrote:
안녕하세요~
엠포엠 시도!

[Rika]
리플레이 ~~으 너무몬함~~
00:17:034 (4) - 요 노트를 약간 왼쪽 아래로 옮겨보시는건? 00:17:034 (4) - 요기에 큰 다운비트가 빰 하고 있으니깐 약간의 점프를 만들어주시면 더 재밌어질것 같아요. 또한 00:16:378 (2,3) - 이 점프에서 갑자기 4번으로가는 거리가 줄어들어서 어색한 느낌도 나네요~ 보류할게요.
00:24:821 (12,1) - 요 스트림 마지막 노트에서 1번까지의 거리가 조금 넓은것 같아요. 물론 스트림 블랭캣 모양은 좋은데 저도 치긴 했지만 무빙을 갑자기 과하게 꺾어야 했어가지고 불편한 느낌이 들었어요. 1번을 12번에 붙여서 전체적으로 동그랗게 만든다거나 하는걸 추천합니다 이간격 문제없어요.
01:01:788 (5,6) - 3/4 슬라이더를 쓰셨는데...죄송하지만 음악에 잘 어울리지 않는것 같아요 imo.. 그냥 슬라이더 한개 + 서클 두개로 대체하시는게..? 그게01:09:657 (1,2) // 01:17:034 (3,4) // 01:11:132 (1,2) - 이런곳은 보컬이나 음악이 3/4 슬라이더에 맞게 있어서 아주 좋지만 저쪽은.. 음~ 조금 오묘(?)한 느낌이 드네요 긴음이라 무방함.
01:20:968 (3,4) - 각각 Ctrl + G? 재밌는 점프~ ㄴㄴ.흐름안좋음.
좋은맵!!

[Normal]
00:07:526 (3,5) - 요기 리듬이 쪼끔 이상한것 같네요. 00:07:526 (3) - 이걸 00:07:853 - 여기서 끝내보시구, 00:08:017 (1,2,3) - 이걸 틱 하나씩 당겨보신다음, 00:09:001 (4) - 요기에 서클을 다음 슬라이더 머리에 겹쳐보시는건 어떠세요? 아녀,지금꺼 좋아요.

00:09:657 - 요기에 서클하나 추가? 나-! 에 아무것도 없으니 허전한 느낌이들고 약간 헷갈려요~ 일부러 비운거임 너무 연속해서.
00:21:296 (1,1) - 이 사이에 ↙ 이 리듬 한번 써보세요~ 제 생각엔 더 노래에 잘맞는것 같아요 ㄴㄴ

01:03:263 (1) - 음.. 가사의 '이~~' 는 01:03:099 - 요기서 시작을 하는데 반박자 느리게 슬라이더가 나오니 조금 이상한듯 하네요~ 노멀이라 박자 복잡하게 할 필요는 적당한데서만요.
01:09:657 (1,4) - 요기 - 이렇게 한번 바꿔보세요~ 더 음악에 잘 맞아떨어지는것 같네요 ㄴㄴ

Alright~~ that's about it! Hope this helps~
Good solid mapset. Good luck!!

-Umi-

-Umi- wrote:
hi hi o/ here from your queue, and because it's one of my favorite anime :3

Normal
- 00:08:181 (1,2,3) - this pattern is a bit confused with the vocal, something that follow the voice could be better here nope,not good.
- 00:21:624 (2) - end of slider 1/2 earlier (first step) ^
- 00:22:280 (3) - move 1/2 ealier (second step) ^
- 00:22:444 (4) - move 1/2 ealier and end at 00:22:935 - (Third step) => it give something like that http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/791046 ^
- 00:48:837 (3) - end of slider 00:49:493 - then add a note 00:49:821 - x256y36 ^
- 00:50:149 (1) - same as above add a note 00:51:132 - x256y36 => http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/791052 ^
- 01:10:149 (2) - end 1/2 earlier and move it at 01:10:312 - ^

Rika
- 00:15:149 (4) - delete why? i don't think so.
- 00:15:640 (8) - ^ ^
nothing else to say ^^

That's all !

Thanks for mod guys ~ Updated ~

kanpakyin

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kanpakyin 2013-06-04T09:34:32+00:00

[Gu]

00:56:706 (1,2,3,4,1) - spacing不太一致
00:00:313 (1) - finish?
00:02:935 (1) - ^

mei le

Kawayi Rika

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Kawayi Rika 2013-06-04T09:49:51+00:00

kanpakyin

kanpakyin wrote:
[Gu]
00:56:706 (1,2,3,4,1) - spacing不太一致看起来都差不多啊,音效是大格子.
00:00:313 (1) - finish? added
00:02:935 (1) - ^ ^
mei le

Also offset +3 changed ~ thanks for mod ~

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kanpakyin 2013-06-04T14:40:12+00:00

Bubbled.

Strawberry

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Strawberry 2013-06-04T15:17:10+00:00

Did some mod by irc before rank.

SPOILER

2013-06-04 23:03 Strawberry: 00:26:545 (1) - 这个尾的锚点貌似能往左边移一格..
2013-06-04 23:04 Kawayi Rika: fixed
2013-06-04 23:05 Strawberry: 00:40:479 (4) - 这里spacing有点怪.. 在接(5)的时候尤其感觉略卡手.. 其实我觉得移到x~224 y~248和前面00:39:660 (1) - 的开头叠一下就挺好的
2013-06-04 23:06 Strawberry: 00:59:988 (4) - 这里我觉得加个nc挺好
2013-06-04 23:06 Strawberry: 恩
2013-06-04 23:06 Strawberry: 01:07:693 (5) - 这个ctrl+g?
2013-06-04 23:07 Strawberry: 01:20:971 (3) - 这个也ctrl+g试试看? 感觉flow好点lol
2013-06-04 23:08 Strawberry: 另外hard用od7好像有点丧失……
2013-06-04 23:08 Strawberry: 感觉od6就好了
2013-06-04 23:12 Kawayi Rika: 00:40:479 (4) - 改了
2013-06-04 23:12 Kawayi Rika: 00:59:988 (1) - 加了 NC
2013-06-04 23:13 Kawayi Rika: 那两个ctrl+g 不先改