Hi thanks requests :p mayotyou
¨vn¨ remove it from tags just 2 characters dont gonna be looked also you already got visual novel in tags
00:10:612
i preffer if you change this slider in 2 circles cuz the sound in this point 00:10:792 is so strong for finish just a slider maybe is nice for a circle or the start of a new slider imo00:16:542 i thing finish fit alot better here
00:21:513 i dont feel sound in this point you should reconsider a new rhythm maybe this:
00:25:166 (1,2,3,4) -
can you align they in a perfect square actually feel weird when you play it00:50:861 (1,3) - in my opinion this 2 slider look so bad i mean the shape actually look bad why you dont try to copy past from 00:50:143 (5,6) - look alot better for me
00:55:803
add a circle here for transition and better flow and play with the previous triplet on 00:54:994 (1,2,3)
01:05:775 (2,3) -
can you align 2 with the center of grid like you did on (3) gonna look better orz01:09:728
also why you dont add a circle here and then start spinner here 01:09:818 gonna fit alot better with music imo01:14:400 move x: 209 y:261 to be perfect stacked with slider tail so nazi i feel like hitler now T-T
01:28:715
same as 1:09:728
also if you do this add a circle with finish imo01:09:728 (3) - Consider adding a NC on this spinner. (You know aimod orz)
01:28:715 (3) - Consider adding a NC on this spinner. ^
thats all here very fun diff also i thing od 7 to low maybe try od 8
00:01:448
This have to finish in this point 00:01:673 same some other point on the beggining of song check the insane diff and compare it00:08:366
spinner should start here orz..
00:21:453
rhythm is wrong here has to be 1/6 here00:30:018
why you ignore music here? maybe make a 1/2 slider with previous (5) gonna be nice if you do00:39:541 also adjust the distance of (4) with previous this is nazi
00:40:619 (3,4) -
the rhythm you use here is not good at all i dont like how you ignore the long vocal orz maybe try this one:
00:54:994
add clap in the repeat too like the insane diff fit better01:09:369
also the repeat slider got no sense here should be a slider + circle here 01:09:728 also spinner have to start in 01:09:818 following vocals try this:
01:17:994 clap + finish in the tail like insane
01:28:415
also rhythm is wrong here cuz you are using a repeat slider in 2 timing points gonna be confuse orz better use 3 circles here01:28:804
try to reduce the volume of spinner here maybe like insane cuz feel better imo00:10:792 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
00:25:166 (1,2) -
about this stack can be not only confuse that break the flow of previous pattern i suggest you to unstack it00:28:760
add 1/1 slider here then add a circle here 00:29:479 gonna fit better the vocals i really want you to fix thisspinner should finish here 00:33:252
with vocals gonna fit alot better with the song00:34:330
adding a circle here following vocals gonna be nice too00:46:369
why you ignore vocals here add a circle plz01:08:291 i really dont thing this kind of slider fit with the song and the way you design the diff maybe try another shape
01:14:040 (2,3,4,1) - also this can be confuse for a normal try another way
01:28:056
make it 2 circle better cuz finish it on a timing line gonna be confuse for new players00:16:182 (1,2) -
can you unstack they this gonna be really confuse for easy imo you know when you start playing this that stacks make you fail orz00:24:807 (3,1) - ^
00:27:682 (3,1) - im being annoying with this
00:33:073
spinner should finish here then add a circle with finish here 00:33:791
gonna fit the song better01:02:900 maybe add a 1/1 slider here folowing vocals
01:27:696
delete one reverse then add a circle here 01:28:415
i mean gonna be better for timing lineneed some works,good luck