Luyuja wrote:

lzwoaini
LV22
HP+1

Hanyuu wrote:

Hard:

00:21:110 (21110|3) - move to column 6 ×
00:21:884 - Add note column 3 fixed,but not column 3,thx
01:57:690 (117690|3) - Replace with note? ×

Normal:

00:42:594 - Add note column 4 ×
01:49:852 (109852|3,110045|5) - Delete fixed
01:51:303 (111303|1,111400|2,111497|3,111594|4) - Move all 1 or 2 columns to the right ×
01:52:561 (112561|5) - delte ×
01:57:497 - add note ×
01:57:690 - ^ ×

Easy:

00:03:303 (3303|6,3497|4,3690|0,3884|2,4077|5,4271|4,4465|1,4658|2) - How about putting those notes not all over the place in the beginning for the easy? maybe keep a more easier to read pattern ×
00:23:432 (23432|1,23723|3,24013|5,24303|3,24594|4,24787|2) - This part looks a bit weird since all the notes just keep in the middle and in the next part it all still plays on middle keys ×
00:36:400 - add note ×
00:36:787 - ^ ×

Overall:

I think all of this mapset is done too easy. I would have loved if you bring in the piano pattern into this song since it adds alot to the repeative beat. Also in the song there are rarely and places you play 1/2 notes on the same keys and most of the time it is changing from column to column so its just alternativing between keys and single note pressing for the most of it and its a bit too relaxing in my opinion lol. Still a good map allthough i wished for more complex pattern to play.
OD for easy and normal i would both raise by one aswell.

Roxas wrote:

Some little advises, don't kudo me

[General]
Disable letterbox during breaks in LV.5 and LV.12
You can't find a bigger bg? :/

[LV.5]
00:05:626 - Add circle in |2|
00:37:368 - Add a note for the crash

good luck o/

Simple_Star wrote:

感觉打下来特别舒畅 毫无死角(?)的感觉/..\窝是来凑人头的(pia)

LV.5
打下来感觉没有问题/..\

LV.12
HP7
00:10:271 (10271|3,10465|3,10658|3,10852|3) - 可以考虑换一下键位
01:36:110 (96110|3,96206|5) - 都往右移1格

LV.22
OD8
00:46:852 (46852|3,47239|2,47336|3,47432|4) - 感觉有些微妙···

实在找不到可以吐槽的地方/..\ 纳米姐加油ww

Spy wrote:

納米姐我來幫忙湊人數，阿不是，mod啦~
放置好久的Sweet Rain終於繼續開工了，加油!
以下mod不一定地要採納，不過有什麼想法可以告知一下!

[LV.5]
01:22:271 - 感覺可以再加上。
01:23:819 - ↑
01:26:916 - 可以試試加上長條。
01:28:465 - ↑

其他的感覺都還可以，但主要還是打不起
加油啦!

ExPew wrote:

Hi, from ♪ ♫~O2Jam-based Style Modding Team~♫ ♪

suggestion kiai

00:49:755 to 01:14:529
01:33:110 to 01:45:497 hm...I don't like Kiai :P


[Lv.5]

01:42:981 (102981|2) - move on 4 looks better
-feel dont want to touch more

[Lv.12]

00:59:626 (59626|3) - move 6
01:01:948 (61948|4,62045|2,62142|1) - too weird here, how about this? http://puu.sh/44QlF.png or http://puu.sh/44Qmd.png or http://puu.sh/44QmU.png < mirrored too also can
01:07:368 (67368|0,67368|4) - move right 2 times
01:07:755 (67755|2) - move 5 if you changed ^ that note
01:07:948 (67948|3) - move 2
01:12:013 (72013|5) - move 7
01:12:981 (72981|3,73174|3,73368|3,73561|3) - how about this? http://puu.sh/44TRk.png
01:14:626 (74626|2) - move 2 ( it fit with 01:14:432 (74432|4,74529|5) - )
01:14:819 (74819|4,75013|3,75206|2) - move left 1x
01:16:465 (76465|3) - move 3
01:30:013 - add 1 full hold measure for bass (you add hold for synth and and still have bass sound there, dont miss it)
01:57:884 (117884|3) - hold end 02:00:981 - (02:00:594 there still have sound yet when you 50%) I don't think so

[Lv.22]

-bumps/gimmicks suggested on this diff

OD 8 Please

01:00:884 (60884|4) - misplace? No,not misplace~~
01:30:013 - missing bass hold note
01:57:884 (117884|2,117884|0,117884|6,117884|4) - hold end 02:00:981

-pattern all looks okay for me but some ladder note are not following the rhythm
-and am i seeing looks like Mirrored / Repeating notes

victorica_db wrote:

lv.5 感觉很好= =没什么问题。。



LV12 00:24:594 (24594|1,24787|5) - 这边的note数量是不是应该和下面的一样。
00:36:787 (36787|3) - 换成条会好些吗（雾 像这样 你貌似没看明白写的是什么啊>.>

LV22 00:24:787 (24787|3) - 变成双note （雾
00:37:174 - 这边有鼓点 不抓吗 舍弃了
00:47:819 - 这边的抓上去会好些把。。 唔……
00:57:303 (57303|3) - 这个条子是不是有错误？ 没有错误哦

不成器的mod /。\ 祝纳米姐早日rank

- R u m i a - wrote:

w back from the ded
throw star~

[Shi-Ra] wrote:

Hi Liese, there are mods for your mania chart ^w^

Shi-Ra's Pattern Review:
(notice that columns are following like 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 for 7K diffs)
LV.5

Inside :3

From 00:03:303 to 00:04:852 - I recommend you to use smth like this pattern, it'll be more hand balanced and comfortable for novices both are good,I choose to keep current pattern

00:18:594 (18594|3) - move this one to 2nd column please, it'll be more comfortable transition for your pattern hereI'm not catch drum,and I just make it for nice look

00:22:852 (22852|4) - I suggest you to move this note to 5th column and perform some alternation here×

00:41:819 (41819|3) - maybe move this note to 0 column? it'll be more comfortable to play it here with notes into 2nd and 4th columnsI just make it for nice look

01:17:723 (77723|1,77916|2,78206|4) - I suggest you to remodel this part and place these notes to 2nd>4th>6th columns, it'll be well suitable with your next going pattern here×

LV.12

Inside :3

00:04:658 (4658|2) - move this note to 3rd column according to your next going pattern here, it'll be comfortable here
both are good
00:13:465 (13465|2) - I suggest you to place this note into 1st column, it'll be more suitable for your triplet here to play all notes with distance in one column between themI don't think so,It is uncomfortable for beginner

00:22:465 - seems like you've missed note here according to the sound, if it's right, place note here to 5th column hm...I don't miss any notes,Seems you don't understand what I Catch

00:36:981 - you can add LN here to 4th column and then end it here 00:37:368 according to the sound, it'll be good with your pattern here look LV.22,I don't catch this sound

01:01:948 (61948|4,62045|2,62142|1) - I recommend you to remodel this part and place notes to 0>1st >2nd columns accordingly, it'll be more suitable here ×

01:48:110 (108110|4,108303|1,108400|5) - and these notes I suggest you to re-arrange like 1st>5th>4th columns accordingly×

LV.22

Inside :3

00:00:400 - add one more note here to 4th column according to the sound There is not any other sound

00:29:239 (29239|3) - I recommend you to move this note to 0 column, it'll be suitable with your previous LN with such ending both are good

00:33:497 (33497|1) - and this one I suggest you to move to 0 column too, you've leaved it empty for a long time and such position is well suitable here×

01:16:948 (76948|0) - maybe move this note to 1st or 3rd column, it'll be more comfortable to play with other notes here×

Good luck :3/

[Shi-Ra] wrote:

Patterns are checked. No other problems. Bubbled!
Parallel bubble with Acceleration xD

ljqandylee wrote:

[LV.22]
00:12:981 (12981|2) - 感觉在00:13:174这里结束就可以了，然后00:13:174加个note 这里还是想保持原样
00:16:465 - 鼓点不多加个note么w 比如7 这里不用了吧，只有轻鼓点一个
00:19:561 - ^，比如1 同上
00:22:755 (22755|5,22755|1,22852|3) - 感觉应该先1个note再2个note 已改

[LV.12]
HP改成7吧 这样三个难度多整齐ww 已改
01:15:884 (75884|3) - 应该在01:15:981吧 已改

[LV.5]
01:56:916 (116916|3,117206|4) - 改到5和3？都可以的，这种排列选择多了去的

YunoFanatic wrote:

Im gonna be the first to say it Coooooooooongratssssss! For rank liese. /me bites lieselotte!

ljqandylee wrote:

Source and Tags problem resolved, ranked~

PROGUY wrote:

Hi there. Here's my check as reques-
...Oh. Okay then.

*walks away*

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Hi there. Here's my check as reques-
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*walks away*

PROGUY wrote:

Hi there. Here's my check as reques-
...Oh. Okay then.

*walks away*