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Dr. Flowershirts - Duel(O2 Version)

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Yuukari-Banteki
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Yuukari-Banteki

Nexy wrote:

^Thanks everyone! Fixed almost everything and I also remade [Soft] and the endings for all of them. Hopefully it's a lot better. One thing I didn't get:

01:44:47 (2,3) - delete 3 and move 2 half a beat later etc.
Why? It sounds fine the way it is.

:)

i believe our reasoning behind that was that we didnt think 2 sounded good beginning on an offbeat
Polaris03_old
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Polaris03_old
I like this beatmap!!! star! :)
Layola_old
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Layola_old
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Gabi
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Gabi
The ending BPM/Offset is good but not correct. i cant really figure out the perfect bpm myself, but ill try to see if i can get any help on the main o2jam forum.

it plays good though so i guess theres not to much to worry about, nice map.

stär
DeathxShinigami
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DeathxShinigami
ba boom~
Yuukari-Banteki
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Yuukari-Banteki
aside from the slowdown....eh...

i cant bubble b/c its obvious that the slowdown is still not timed right

sorry
Hikato
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Hikato
The 4th of the last 5 offsets(113:023) should be: 113,032.
Sounds right to me. x-0 Hope it helps. ^o^
mosluv
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mosluv
Changed :D!
Yuukari-Banteki
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Yuukari-Banteki
[Soft]
a bit whistle-heavy but meh


[Relax]
mmk

[Nuts]
cool

[Kirby]
the hitvolume at the end is a bit loud


...*gloom* you need a timing god for the slowdown though
mosluv
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mosluv
I toned down the whistles a bit in Soft and Relax. Hopefully, it's a bit better now o.o!
Starrodkirby86
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Download: Dr. Flowershirts - Duel(O2 Version) (Nexy) [Kirby].osu
mosluv
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whymeman
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whymeman
Timing check..... (Second try)


The 3rd offset sounds like it should be at 109,125ms 109,096ms
Then the 4th: 110,325ms 110,296ms
The 5th: 111,658ms 111,629ms
The 6th: 113,069ms 113,040ms
The 7th: 114,669ms 114,640ms.....

Edit: The last two offsets feels like it needs a slight BPM increase. But i'm still checking to see if those are right.
Scratch that, I think I know what it is. You're acually missing the 8th offset at 01:56:14. Try adjusting 01:55:44 (3) by shortening it by 1/8, then insert the offset and adjust the notes after it. It should sound better after.

That's my best guessed scan. I hope it helps.
mosluv
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mosluv
Updated ^o^!
Gens
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mosluv
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mosluv
^Didn't really work well, but thanks for trying :3!
nsane
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awp
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Change the last timing point to 77.000 BPM - the rest sounded okay to me
mosluv
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mosluv
Changed.
Orkel
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Orkel
Played this several times already. Awesome map. Starred.
DaRRi
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DaRRi
good!


soft
01:23:49 (1,2) - remove 1 repeat from (1) and add it to (2), and reverse (2) --that goes better with 01:17:09 (1,2)
01:45:89 (1,2) - separate them
01:57:75 (1) - end at 02:00:678

relax
01:28:29 (3) - make a different pattern to the previous 3 would be better, or replace with 4 circles
01:57:75 (1) - end at 02:00:678

Nuts
00:06:69 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - whistle on slider end, not head
01:29:49 (5) - remove 2nd and 3rd finish sound
01:57:75 (1) - end at 02:00:678

Kirby
01:26:29 (7) - remove whistle from slider end
01:29:49 (7) - same
01:41:89 (1) - make it horizontal and place it on the right of the centre to make it visible
01:57:75 (5) - remove whistle
mosluv
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mosluv

DaRRi MIx wrote:

relax
01:28:29 (3) - make a different pattern to the previous 3 would be better, or replace with 4 circles

Nuts
01:29:49 (5) - remove 2nd and 3rd finish sound
Only 2 things I didn't do. I like these the way they are.

*Waiting on Kirby's changes, if he does them.

Thanks for the mod! :D
aio_sama
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:!:
dkey
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dkey
nice map^^
Diasios
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Diasios
Soft:

it's ok

Relax:

it's ok

Nuts:

01:10:896 (6) = new combo

Kirby:

01:49:096 (1, 2, 3, 4 || 1, 2, 3, 4) = confusing :S

I love the song~
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mosluv
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mosluv
Thanks for the mod, but I don't agree with the 2 suggestions you made. D:

<3 :)
yeahyeahyeahhh
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Mystearica
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Set a preview time for your map!

[Soft]

01:13:49 - This break is off by like a sliver, lol.

[Relax]

01:15:09 - lol break off by like a tiny sliver again ;_;

[Nuts]

Awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

[Kirby]

The last part was pretty tricky, perhaps just repeat your pattern? I got tripped up there ;_;

00:37:09 - Reinsert break
01:15:89 - Reinsert break

Yeah suckage mod post but this map is so good that I have nothing else to say really, nice job.
mosluv
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mosluv
^Thanks both of you. ^__^!
gdeath
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random star
PicoLo
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PicoLo
~Star. ;)
Takuma
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>O<~~
m980
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Not sure about the timing at the end of [Kirby]. It's no playability problem in the other difficulties (because of spinners), but Kirby actually mapped that part with notes. I think you should get someone to check that out.

Pin + Star
greendamn
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8-)
Starrodkirby86
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Download: Dr. Flowershirts - Duel(O2 Version) (Nexy) [Kirby].osu
mosluv
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mosluv
Updated. *Waits for a BAT*

:?
Kubu
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Star :3
ztrot
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Bubble timing looks fine to me <3
RemmyX25
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Timing is good on my end as well.

Ranked.
mosluv
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