Updated!

wow only thing I can point out is that on the hardest difficulty when the section slows down the HP drain is a little harsh, things like one miss take a huge hit on your HP.

Some of the errors posted are suggestions, not directions. Edit to whatever you see fit.

[Soft] (Done)

Looks good so far. Clean and nicely done.

[Relax] (Done)

01:45:47 (3) - Its slightly peeking out from under the slider.
01:49:07 (1) - It doesn't sound right...

Other than that, seems good.

[Nuts] (Done)

00:24:27 (1,3) - Uneven stack.
00:28:67 (3,2) - Unevenly stacked.
01:06:87 (4) - Looks a bit uneven under the slider.
01:08:07 (6) - Slightly peeking out from under the slider.
01:29:07 (4,1) - Looks unevenly stacked here too.
01:43:07 (3,1,1) - kinda bottomed out...

Nothing major from here.

[Kirby] (Done)

01:17:67 (3,4) - Looks a bit uneven under the slider (2).
01:20:87 (3,4) - ^

Everything else looks okay so far.

Stickynote: This song made me think of gears turning in my mind (especially for the harder levels... ). Nicely done and I can see those jumps are quite insane as well. I'll throw a star in for this map.

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Soft
Eh, pretty large distance snap for Easy...
01:49:07 (1,2) [and onwards] - I combobroke here The slow speed completely catches you off guard if you don't know the song. Could you make the slowdown a little more obvious? One way would be to have a slow slider be the first section of the slowdown.

Relax
00:29:47 (1,2,3,4) - ok this is realllly nazi but keep in mind I only point out what I notice while playing The square is slightly off, could you move 4 a tiiiny bit to the left to make it at right angles to 3 and 1?
Ahh, see THATS how the slowdown should be done

Nuts
01:15:07 (x) - Add another beat here stacked onto 5?
01:49:079 - Meh, mean slowdown again, but it's Insane, so your call I guess

Kirby
01:36:07 (4,1) - This is kinda mean:P
01:41:87 (1) - The position if this kinda feels weird, but if you centred it you wouldnt be able to see the repeat... so idk
01:49:079 *sigh*

Yay for funky classical music

*

Thanks, I'll work on the slowdown a bit more.

Love your style.

[Soft]
00:00:30 (1) - Wut?
00:03:50 (1) - ^
00:14:27 (2) - Clap.
00:15:07 (4) - Clap on star and end.
00:16:27 (1) - Clap on end.
00:17:07 (2) - Clap on return.
00:18:27 (3) - Clap on stars.
01:45:07 (3) - Make slider shorter (Red stick), add clap on end of slider add note here 01:45:47 and clap.

[Relax]
You can improve hitsounds alternating normal and soft hitsounds.
00:32:27 (4) - Finish.
00:41:27 (2) - Clap here, I think.
00:43:47 (4) - Finish on end of slider.
01:49:07 (1) - Why?
01:51:62 (1) - Why?

[Nuts]
00:06:679 - Normal.
00:06:909 - Soft.
00:07:509 - Normal.
00:07:709 - Soft.
00:08:309 - Normal.
00:08:509 - Soft.
00:09:109 - N.
00:09:309 - S.
00:09:909 - N.
00:10:259 - N.
00:10:659 - N.
00:11:059 - N.
00:11:459 - N.
00:11:87 - N.
00:12:27 - N.
00:12:509 - N.
00:12:709 - N.
00:12:909 - N.

[Kirby]
GREAT HITSOUNDS! But... Lower volume a tick?
No problem.

Btw, Nexy, Who your favorite mapper?

Star.

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Thanks nsane! Also tieff, I just couldn't get a feel for the normal and soft on Nuts. I left it as it was.

Thanks for modding !

Easy
00:46:67 (5) - to me combo goes to high, u know what to do New Combo
00:49:87 (5) - ^
00:59:87 (4) - maybe ^
01:02:27 (8) - ^
01:49:07 (1) - from here on, I can't make a decision on those notes that a placed off 1/4 on the timeline, just make sure
it sounds right to u, also u did this to the other diffs, I don't wanna point em out, just make sure they are
right.

Normal
01:00:27 (5) - just new combo, if not, I find this difficulty just fine ^^
01:03:67 (6) - ^

Nuts
I love Nutts

Kirby
00:19:87 (4) - new combo
00:21:47 (4) - new combo
00:45:87 (3) - ^
00:52:27 (3) - ^
00:58:67 (3) - ^

well that's all too kirby's diff, most of the New combos I posted, I think is needed to the jumps that are really fast(^^ me like fast) but the jumps seem too hard to figure out without the new combos


*Star

Thank You! Didn't change all the combos though.

Timings for slow part:
109,079 100 BPM
110,279 90 BPM
111,612 85 BPM
113,023 75 BPM
114,579 75 BPM
These are Close Enough, hopefully.

see sfg's post. i helped teammod. kudosu plx

team mod members: SFG, strager, supergarlic, Ryuukun, eee, animask

[Soft]
first two sliders - lengthen by 1/2 and repeat once less
spacing is too far for an easy (disputed 50/50)
00:09:07 (2) - feels off balance (strager only)
00:38:67 (1,2,3,etc) - too fast-paced for the lowest diff; agreement that you should use a series of one-beat sliders instead "three one-beat sliders and two repeats on the third one"
<Ryuukun> about 00:38:67 (1) i think kicking out 2 and 4 and lengthen 1 and 2 about 1 1/2 is better
Reverse of direction at 00:48:27 (1) seems too difficult (disputed 50/50)
00:51:47 (1) - shorten the slider by 1/2 and add a repeat (strager disputes)
00:54:67 (1) - ^
00:57:87 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This pattern goes off kinda like 00:06:67 (1,2) did (strager only)
01:17:07 (1,2) - Add repeat to (1) and remove one from (2)
01:21:87 (5) - new combo + whistles on 5,(6),7,(8) (disputed)
01:25:07 (2) - ^
01:18:27 (2) - ^
01:40:67 (4,5,1) - the spacing gets large and small here
01:23:47 (1) - claps on every other single beat starting here
01:25:07 (2) - ^
Make 01:40:27 (3,4) a repeating slider
01:45:07 (3,4) - make a single slider, either repeating or straight (preferably repeating with the same hitsound pattern)
01:36:27 (2,1,2,3) - stack and make one combo
01:47:47 (2) - making this a no repeat slider and put in a 1/2 tick slider with repeat on 01:48:27() like 01:45:07 (3,4)
01:49:07 (1) - slowdown is unintuitive and untimed. Suggestion: make new combo'd 1-beat sliders and a bunch of timing points


[Relax]
00:00:30 (1,1) - 1/2 shorter
00:10:67 (1,2,3,4,1) - make it like 00:01:10 (2,3,4,5,6)
00:15:07 (2,3,1) - illogical note placement (disputed by supergarlic)
check your spacing
00:29:47 (1,2,3,4) - And similar; not an EXACTLY perfect square (strager) (strager edit: but it really doesn't matter; was just pointing it out)
00:34:07 (2,2,2,2) - delete, etc.
00:45:47 (1,2) - Parallel please
00:45:47 (1,2,3,4) - remove claps from the start of 2 and the second hit of 4
00:50:27 (4,5,6) - remove all finishes but the one at the end of 6
00:49:47 (3) - switch on timeline with 2
00:53:87 (4,5) - finish only on 4, whistle only on 5 (or the other way around)
00:56:67 (4,5,6) - alternate whistle and finish
00:58:67 (2,3) - feels weird (animask disagrees)
01:18:67 (3) - start all these with a whistle
01:32:07 (1,2,3,4) - starting on offbeats; feels wrong, please remap
01:44:47 (2,3) - delete 3 and move 2 half a beat later etc.
01:49:07 (1) - make this twice as long and not repeat OR 1/8 long and repeating to the same endpoint
01:57:67 (1) - finish (disputed)


by general agreement we will finish modding some other time, since its late for most of us. in the meantime have a star ^_^

team for part two: SFG, blissfulyoshi, mtmcl, Alace

suggested offset: +17ms to second section

[Nuts]
00:09:87 (5) - should this be aligned with 2
00:27:07 (3) - should be farther west to line up with 2, and also parallel to 1
00:29:07 (4) - parallel to 2
00:29:49 (1,2,3,4,5) - should these form a square?
00:42:47 (3,4) - sliders not quite parallel
00:58:47 (2) - finish on an off-beat sounds bad
01:31:47 (5) - parallel to 3

Soft
01:52:30 (2) - Not snapped
01:53:81 (2) - Same as ^.

Relax
Are you sure they're snapped in the ending sections?

Nuts
Same spots as above difficulties.


Kirby
Are they snapped?

starred' I'm not sure on those slowing down sections...

+STAR

Second offset +17ms
The last part is really hard to map IMO XD

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Nexy wrote:

^Thanks everyone! Fixed almost everything and I also remade [Soft] and the endings for all of them. Hopefully it's a lot better. One thing I didn't get:

01:44:47 (2,3) - delete 3 and move 2 half a beat later etc.

Why? It sounds fine the way it is.

i believe our reasoning behind that was that we didnt think 2 sounded good beginning on an offbeat

I like this beatmap!!! star!

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The ending BPM/Offset is good but not correct. i cant really figure out the perfect bpm myself, but ill try to see if i can get any help on the main o2jam forum.

it plays good though so i guess theres not to much to worry about, nice map.

stär

ba boom~

aside from the slowdown....eh...

i cant bubble b/c its obvious that the slowdown is still not timed right

sorry

Changed !

[Soft]
a bit whistle-heavy but meh


[Relax]
mmk

[Nuts]
cool

[Kirby]
the hitvolume at the end is a bit loud


...*gloom* you need a timing god for the slowdown though

I toned down the whistles a bit in Soft and Relax. Hopefully, it's a bit better now o.o!

!

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Timing check..... (Second try)


The 3rd offset sounds like it should be at 109,125ms 109,096ms
Then the 4th: 110,325ms 110,296ms
The 5th: 111,658ms 111,629ms
The 6th: 113,069ms 113,040ms
The 7th: 114,669ms 114,640ms.....

Edit: The last two offsets feels like it needs a slight BPM increase. But i'm still checking to see if those are right.
Scratch that, I think I know what it is. You're acually missing the 8th offset at 01:56:14. Try adjusting 01:55:44 (3) by shortening it by 1/8, then insert the offset and adjust the notes after it. It should sound better after.

That's my best guessed scan. I hope it helps.

Updated ^o^!

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^Didn't really work well, but thanks for trying :3!

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Change the last timing point to 77.000 BPM - the rest sounded okay to me

Changed.

Played this several times already. Awesome map. Starred.

good!


soft
01:23:49 (1,2) - remove 1 repeat from (1) and add it to (2), and reverse (2) --that goes better with 01:17:09 (1,2)
01:45:89 (1,2) - separate them
01:57:75 (1) - end at 02:00:678

relax
01:28:29 (3) - make a different pattern to the previous 3 would be better, or replace with 4 circles
01:57:75 (1) - end at 02:00:678

Nuts
00:06:69 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - whistle on slider end, not head
01:29:49 (5) - remove 2nd and 3rd finish sound
01:57:75 (1) - end at 02:00:678

Kirby
01:26:29 (7) - remove whistle from slider end
01:29:49 (7) - same
01:41:89 (1) - make it horizontal and place it on the right of the centre to make it visible
01:57:75 (5) - remove whistle

DaRRi MIx wrote:

relax
01:28:29 (3) - make a different pattern to the previous 3 would be better, or replace with 4 circles

Nuts
01:29:49 (5) - remove 2nd and 3rd finish sound

Only 2 things I didn't do. I like these the way they are.

*Waiting on Kirby's changes, if he does them.

Thanks for the mod!