fixed some~
makasih :3
makasih :3
I'm dying xDMiya wrote:
add crap, oh rofl xD
thanks xDRandomEffect wrote:
Thank you for your visit to my queue!
[Easy][Normal]
- it is better that Kiai-time end at 01:21:951, isn't it? (all diff same this) nope weird to me
- 00:08:071 (1) - move to x:264 y:224. it looks good, I think ok
- 00:53:295- add crap nope, weird for me lol crap.. you mean clap?
[Hard]
- 01:07:623- add crap same as easy
01:11:205 (3) - ^ ^[Insane]
- Good! yay \:3/
"Ranked" is near !
- 01:00:011 (4,5,6) - move to x:208 y:316. it looks good, I think ok
~Good Luck~
Oh god xDRandomEffect wrote:
add crap
thanks~Miya wrote:
Rawr, sorry, im late =3=
GeneralEasy
- The source should be Devil Survivor 2: The Animation (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Devil_Surv ... _Animation , http://myanimelist.net/anime/16512/Devi ... _Animation) now I'm confused with this.. alright, after discussing in game, I follow you
Normal
- 00:31:803 (4) - Add a whistle here, not consistent with your whistle rhythm. already whistle in there .-.
- 00:57:773 (5,1) - Switch NC here, doesnt consistent with other NC pattern especially 01:12:101 (1,2) -
- 01:19:265 (3) - Add a whistle here since you constantly fill 3rd beat with whistle but not here.
- 01:19:265 (3) - Put NC here since you add NC at 01:17:474 (1) - and this note has similar vocal at that note.
Hard
- 00:24:191 (3) - I don't hear any rhythm here thus this note doesn't follow anything from the music. To make better rhythm, you can delete this circle, then make 2 new circle at 00:23:967 - and 00:24:414 - because i can clearly hear piano sounds at that time. It will be good if you add whistle at both of those circles too~ that's too hard imo, but I add slider in there
- 00:26:877 (1) - This slider doesnt follow the music properly too because there is no beat nor rhythm at 00:26:871 -. It will be better if you just delete this slder, then add a new slider at 00:26:653 - to 00:27:325 - then you can add a new circle at 00:27:773 - or if you want to follow the vocal, you can add another circle or new slider here 00:27:549 - changed into another pattern~
- 00:30:907 (2) - Move this circle to 00:31:131 -, or delete this circles, and make a new 1/2 slider at 00:31:131 - if you want more simpler pattern. You can add a repeat to the new slider too to follow the vocal more properly.
- 00:38:519 (1) - This slider start should have a soft whistle at slider start according to your previous rhythm at 00:36:728 (2) - . Both of this note has similar rhythm in vocal.
- 00:36:728 (2) - I think soft whistle at slider repeat will give you better and more consistent whistle rhythm here.
- 00:47:474 (4) - Same, add a soft whistle at this slider start too.
- 00:57:997 (2) - Add another whistle at this slider end, feels empty here.
- 01:09:862 (3) - Whistle here, it's very not consistent since you always put a whistle at every long downbeat except here.
Insane
- 00:01:019 (4) - Ok, tbh, this note is very hard to read, it requires me a few try to understand what rhythm it is. A note that very hard to read doesn't make sense here since the part itself is calm. I really encourage you to just change these circles 00:00:683 (3,4,1) - into a slider with repeat instead., since it's much much easier to read.
- 00:13:892 (3) - A note below slider is unrankable except insane diff. Change this pattern.
- 00:16:467 - How about a circle here? I can clearly hear a 1/4 rhythm here.
- 00:24:638 (1) - Skipping a vocal at 00:24:862 - is not a good idea because at the last part 00:23:967 (3,4) - you clearly follow the vocal here. Changing the rhythm so suddenly while the vocal still on going is very not good idea. So, map this slider instead. Delete this slider, then add a new 1/2 slider at 00:24:638 - then you can add a 1/1 slider at 00:25:086 - to create more better rhythm.
- 00:52:623 (3) - This clap at slider start is overused and doesn't make sense. Remove it. noo, I want follow vocal and same in here 00:55:534 (1) -
- 01:06:728 (2) - Ctrl+g for better flow?
That's all i think. Overall, this is a good map, but more work can be done. I'll leave my star for now.
- 00:25:758 (3) - Add a whistle here at slider start, it similar with 00:23:071 (3) - start.
- 00:29:340 (4) - Add a whistle here too, it have similar rhythm with point above.
- 00:42:549 (5) - According to previous hitsound 00:38:967 (5,6) - this slider hitsound should be normal. Remove the whistle if you do this.
- 00:55:086 (5) - Add a whistle at this slider repeat too to be consistent with previous whistle rhythm.
- 01:11:206 (6) - The hitsound here should be clap, not whistle. It's very not consistent. ngg following piano and same in hard diff
- 01:21:392 (8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Okay, this stream is very very very overmapped. If you hear clearly to the music, the 1/4 rhythm end here 01:21:280 -. It doesn't make sense if you extend the stream until here 01:22:400 -. It doesn't fit with the music too.
but this stream is epic </3kay added into some notes
Good luck Yasora~
/me play the game
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