Hello~

As m4m req :>
And just mod as suggestions, not necessary. : )


[General]

1. Flow and parttern is good, so only give some rythem suggestions

[Easy]

1. first, Drum-whistle sounds bad in this diff
2. 00:03:593 (3) - not good.... plz don't paste 00:00:011 (1) -
3. 00:48:369 (3) - use 1.0 ds?

[Normal]

1. 00:21:056 (5) - 00:21:280 (6) - I think follow the vocal in normal is better and I haven't pointed all

[Hard]

1. 00:21:056 (5,6) - add? if you do this delete the finish in 00:20:384 (4) - and add to 00:21:056 (5) - also delete finish in top of 00:21:504 (1) - and add whistle

[Survive]

1. 00:58:220 (3) - try this http://puu.sh/3888B.png
2. 00:26:877 (5) - delete nc
3. 00:30:235 (6) - ^

fin... sry I'm a newbie mapper D:

hello yasora!

I try to m4m with you.


[General]

-How about using this custom hitsound?(soft hitclap) http://puu.sh/389BX.wav

-Using hitclap in KIAI time sound better imo. Clap sound will makes player more fun.
And Kiai time is highlight of song, so it needs various hitsound.



[Easy]

-00:42:996 (1) - remove NC

-00:44:339 (2) - Add NC

-00:48:369 (3) - Ctrl + g?

-01:12:548 (1,2,3) - it would be childish suggesion... how about this?



[Normal]

-00:03:593 (1,2,3) - follow the whistle with this part 00:00:011 (1,2,3)

-00:16:130 (1) - lengthen this slider 1/4 more, and add clap on middle of slider + delete clap on end.

-00:42:996 (1) - delete NC

-00:44:339 (2) - Add NC

-00:48:369 (1,2) - How about this rhythm?



-01:14:787 (6) - ctrl + g would be better.


[Hard]

-01:02:698 (4) - remove one repeat and add a slider on 01:03:145
and I suggest two rhythm : 01:03:145 (5) - end this slider or 01:03:369 or 01:03:593(and delete circle)



[Survive]

-00:04:936 (7,8,1) - I think his antijump will make player confuse. give more distance would be better.

-00:58:220 (3) - lengthen this slider 1/4 more.(like this one 01:12:548 (5,6))



Hard and Survive diffs are look fun

Good luck!

m4m from your queue :3

[Survive]
00:06:056 (7,8,9) - 153|130 , 138|132 , 125|138 for more beautiful shape
00:33:369 - try this beat? http://puu.sh/38by7.jpg also u can change slide to note instead.
00:47:250 (3) - 324|260 looks better

[Hard]
00:06:280 - add slider, end it at about 00:06:616 ?
00:18:257 / 00:18:369 - add note? and add clap at 00:18:369
00:39:190 (4) - 168|108 for blanket
01:07:847 (4) - 2 grid down and move 01:08:071 (1) to 124|288

[Normal]
looks fine 0.0

[Easy]
00:16:578 (4) - move center to 272|88 and move tail to 220|88
00:30:459 (1) - distance error
01:09:414 (2,3,4) - 205|89 , 305|89 , 205|89
01:20:608 (1) - a bit touch hp bar. move it down a bit or move to other place

that's all good luck

Hello! From ffstar & lemi's modding queue

[Easy]
Nice one.

[Normal]
00:09:862 (3) - Low AR makes it confusing imo. Move somewhere. (First impression)
00:48:369 (1) - Makes it a 1/1 slider.

[Hard]
00:06:280 (3) - Add a 1/1 slider here. Remove this 00:06:727 (4) - .
00:28:668 (5) - Pull this to a 1/1.
00:39:414 (1) - The blanket. Edit it nicely
00:42:101 (4) - You can just do it like this for this slider
00:58:668 (4) - Why don't just move this backward for a 1/4 beat, and extend for 1/4 beat too. Since you did this at the later part of the map.
01:00:907 (1) - Move the end to x:276 y:108
01:07:175 (3,1) - Make it a better blanket shape.

[Survive]
00:04:936 (7,8,1) - Stack these maybe.
00:06:056 (7,8,9) - Curve it more.
00:22:847 (3) - This is weird, try this (combo 2 is on 00:22:623 (2) - )
00:26:877 (1) - Change to a circle, leaving a gap after sounds better imo.
00:29:563 (3,4,5) - Remove 4 and 5 and make a 1/2 single reverse slider on 3.
00:30:795 (2) - Remove.
00:32:698 (2) - Change to one circle and add a 1/1 slider after that.
00:34:041 (1) - I suggest this changes. 00:34:041 (1) - Circle 00:34:265 (2) - Circle 00:34:489 (3) - 1/1 slider.
00:47:026 (2,3,4,5) - Remove 3,4 and 5. Make 2 a 1/1 slider.
00:48:369 (1,2,3,4,5) - Remove and add spinner from 00:47:922 (3) - until 00:48:817 (4) -
00:58:220 (3,4) - Remove 4 and make 3 to this thing (Idk what it's called)
01:21:951 (13,14) - 14 should be placed at 13. Add one more repeat at the end too.

thanks all~ your mod is useful
sorry didn't reply cuz I'm lazy hehe xD

o.o

ohai ~
from my queue

[General]
Remove "op" in tags? soalnya udh termasuk opening

[Easy]
00:01:802 (2) - 424,284? biar gk kerasa random aja skalian dikit branket (if yes fix branket after this ~)
00:11:653 (2) - change to whistle?
00:25:086 (4) - NC for consistency
00:35:832 - finish?
00:38:519 (4) - hmm d pindah? nyentuh durasi waktunya
00:42:101 (2) - whistle?
00:44:339 (2,4) - use normal spacing?
00:51:951 (3) - nazi, 1 grid up
01:00:907 (3) - NC for consistency?

[Normal]
00:01:802 - whistle?
00:08:519 (2) - spacing 1,09x?
00:32:922 (2) - 1 grid down? avoid touched with previous (if yes fix spacing after this)
00:35:832 - same with easy
00:35:832 (1) - 220,304 for stacked with 00:33:817 (4) - ?
00:49:713 (3) - spacing 0,92x?
00:57:324 (3,1) - swap NC?
00:59:116 (4) - NC for consistency
01:09:862 (3) - ^
01:13:444 (3) - ^
01:14:787 (6) - spacing 1.06x?

[Hard]
00:09:862 (3,4,1) - make all slider have same shape? it's better imo
00:25:757 (5) - NC?
00:28:668 (5,1) - swap NC?
00:34:265 (4) - NC?
00:35:832 - same as easy
00:39:414 (1) - spacing 1,03 in here itentional? you can put 00:39:190 (4) - 168,100
00:42:660 (5) - use 0.9x as spacing? you did it before and in 01:12:884 (4) -
00:44:787 (3) - NC?
00:59:116 (5) - ^
01:03:145 (5) - same as 00:42:660 (5) - , also 01:02:698 (4) - NC
01:22:399 (5) - maybe NC?

[Survive]
HP-1? too much hard HP 7 with CS5
00:04:936 (7) - NC? due anti jump
00:14:675 (2,3,2,3) - this 1/4.. itentional to make different spacing?
00:44:227 (4) - same here, spacing?
01:02:250 (3) - spacing issue (0,93x)
01:03:145 (5) - ^ (0.94x) i think better use normal spacing
01:06:616 (6) - same with 00:14:675 (2,3,2,3) -
01:21:504 (9) - how about NC in here?

okedeh segitu aja
udh keren mappu nyaa
Good Luck Yasora (:

fixed some~
makasih :3

Easy
00:30:459 (1) - reconsider the shape of slider?

Normal
00:38:295 (5) - change rhythm
00:48:369 (1) - move to X:276 y:248
01:00:907 (1) - better be same shape as 01:01:802 (3) -

Hard
00:52:623 (1) - change rhythm

Survive


good mapset。And good luck

fixed thing in normal and some in survive diff
thanks~

Hi Hi~from my queue

nm 0w0

good map,kiss

genersl

a custom soft sliderslide is necessary,sliders' hitsound now is noisy

easy

00:02:922 ctrl j ,take full use of space

00:47:922
00:52:847
normal

;w; great diff so just sth nazi


hard

good diff too ;w; hard to mod sth

00:41:429

Survive

01:11:653(1) make it smoothly

01:20:608 try this rhythm
00:21:056 - 00:21:280 add sth, I think

00:44:004(3,1) I think then are not pretty.;w;

overlap can be more perfect imo

for example

01:02:810(5,3)

01:15:795(1,4)

fixed thing in normal and some in survive diff~
thanks a lot xD!

Hi ,

M4M:

[General]

1. The Hard diff has differents tags.

[Easy]

1. 00:16:578 (4) - Curved it a little bit because of 00:17:922 (1). It looks better like this imo:
   
2. 00:33:593 (4) - NC? This combo is a little bit long for an easy diff.
3. 00:37:623 (3,1) - Try avoiding the overlapping.
4. 00:46:130 (4) - Maybe a 1/2 beat long slider starting from 00:45:907 instead?
5. 01:20:608 (1) - I think this slider should have a hitsound at the end. Not a Finish but maybe a Whistle or a Clap.

[Normal]

1. 00:15:235 (3,4,2,3) - Did you try some sort of symmetry with these notes?
2. 00:34:489 (1,2,3,1) - It's nearly a square. Move 00:35:832 (1) to x=228 y=300 if you want one.
3. 00:41:653 (5) - Same here. Move it to x=276 y=92 for a square.
4. 00:46:130 (2,3) - Try doing a blanket here.
5. 00:55:533 (1,3) - Maybe you could make it at the same high as well as 00:56:877 (2,1).
6. 01:21:727 (3) - Same remark as in the Easy diff.

[Hard]

1. 00:32:250 (1,2) - Why not making an overlapping like 00:18:817 (1,3)?
2. 00:52:623 (1,2) - It would be better imo if they were the same slider but rotated 180°.
3. 01:22:399 (5) - This time you put something! Try being consistent in all diff for the hitsounds.

[Survive]

1. 01:22:399 (5) - A Finish here too......

~Good Luck~

hi hi here from your queue ;3

Let'su go !





that's all, Fighto !

fixed some
thank you~~

Hey~ Lets mod this map!

(Btw, this is M4M)


[Easy]

[Normal]

[Hard]

[Survive]


Insane was nicely done!

Good Luck ><

fixed some
thanks for mod :3

Hey there!

Omg this map is so nice ;w; prepare for th weak mod~

[Easy]
01:17:026 (3,1) - Nazi beat blanket >-> http://puu.sh/3eIJ8.jpg

[Normal]
00:24:638 (4,1) - The end of the slider touches the next one :c nazi again, get the last anchor a bit to right
00:32:250 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/3eINg.jpg detail at the blanket ._.
00:33:593 (3,4) - The end of the slider is closer to the circle than the beginning of the slider, just move a bit the last anchor
00:46:130 (2,3) - ^
01:14:787 (3,1) - ^ and bit of the blanket >.>

[Hard]
00:27:772 (4,1) - The beat blanket needs work here .-.
Nothing else, well done~

[Survive]
00:22:623 (2,3) - The end of the slider 3 could be a better curve for the previous one in my opinion
00:27:324 (1,2) - You could make blanket there
01:15:235 (1,2) - The curve could be better blanket for the circle


Well nothing else, the mapset has potential, well done Yasora Get a star~

okay fixed some blanket thing
thank you :3

Yo m4m o/


[Survive]

1. 00:17:250 (5) - I guess the repeat should have a drum finish to keep it consistent.
2. 00:30:795 (2) - Try removing this note, it sounds oddly overmapped.
3. 00:32:250 (1) - Remove whistle on body and add it on start and end xD
4. 00:57:324 (1) - Finish the start instead of whistle?
5. 00:59:451 (2,4) - The drum finishes are coming far too sudden, try whistles instead?
6. 01:11:653 (1) - Finish on the start instead of whistle?
7. 01:14:339 (2,4) - Same as for the finishes before.
8. 01:15:235 (1) - Add a finish to the start, or at least a whistle.

[Hard]

1. 00:04:936 (5,6) - Move both a bit down? Would flow better I guess.
2. 00:09:862 (3,4) - Clap on 3's end and 4's start?
3. 00:13:668 (2) - Clap?
4. 00:24:638 (1) - Add a whistle to the repeat? Sounds empty due to the piano.
5. 00:32:026 (1) - Whistle on the end?
6. 00:59:116 (1,2) - Replace drum finishes with whistles?
7. 01:00:907 (1) - Finish instead of whistle on the head?
8. 01:08:071 (1) - Same as above.
9. 01:13:444 (1,2) - Same thing about the drum finishes.
10. 01:15:235 (1) - Either add whistle or finish to the start.
    

[Normal]

1. 00:13:668 (3) - Clap the tail?
2. 00:24:638 (4,1) - Totemo nazi, but disable grid snap and prevent them from touching.
3. 00:26:429 (3) - Whistle?
4. 00:57:324 (3) - Finish instead of whistle?
5. 01:08:071 (1) - Same as above.

[Easy]

1. 00:57:324 (5) - Finish instead of whistle?
2. 01:08:071 (1) - Same ~
3. 01:09:414 (2,3,4) - Highlight them and pull them to the middle of the grid to make them symmetrical.
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:19:265 (3) - Try to make a blanket with 4? Would look more pleasing I guess.
   

Nice mapset Yasora xD

Good luck ~

if you finished update ^, i will mod this

fixed some
thanks konei :3

Hi, from #modreqs

Easy:
AR+1 seems better, the beginners can do it!

Normal:
00:07:623 - Add a circle
All clear the rest is good


Hard:
00:07:959 - Add a circle, triplet seems better here
00:16:466 - Add a circle with clap
00:17:922 (5) - replace this reverse slider for a common with 2 circles in 00:18:257 - and 00:18:369 - and add clap
00:21:056 - Add a circle

Survive:

HP-1
AR+1
OD+1
seems better.

00:00:795 - Add a circle or a reverse slider
00:01:914 - Add a circle
00:02:362 - Add a circle
00:02:586 - Add a circle
00:04:936 (1,2) - Look for the spacing here, after (2) starts a stream and confuses > _ <
00:21:056 - Add a circle
01:00:795 - Add a circle, seems better
01:04:713 (2) - change this slider for a triplet
01:16:466 - Add a circle, seems better also

~Good luck!~

just fix ar in easy and do something with 00:04:936 (1,2) - circle in survive diff
the rest seems fine for me
thank you~

Mod req from my queue~

1. Red - Unrankable
2. Purple - Highly recommended
3. Black - Just suggestion

• General

1. 00:21:504 - Volume here 40% is light for me. How about 50%?
   
   Easy
2. 00:11:653 (2) - whistle instead of clap
3. 00:20:608 (4) - delete NC?
   
   Normal
4. 00:09:190 (2) - turning point move to 420:288
5. 01:08:071 (1) - whistle at end
6. 01:10:533 - try to place something here
   
   I can't find problem in Hard and Survive..
   Sorry about the poor mod.. Shoot a star instead.
   Nice song and nice map. Hope soon ranked! Good Luck~!

fix all except general and last point in normal diff
thanks a lot~

Hi~

[General]
01:04:489 - restart a new kiai? still in chorus

[Survive]
00:01:802 (3,3) - NC
00:06:280 - finish?
00:10:086 - add clap?
00:13:668 - ^
00:42:101 (4,5) - blanket?
01:22:063 (14) - make the tail point up and curve down, which looks better, like

[Hard]
NC quite messy before 00:21:504 - . please check.
00:10:086 - clap?
01:07:175 (3) - blanket better

[Normal]
recommend adding more NCs, as current combos are too long imo. no other things to mention.

[Easy]
Fine.

Good luck~

ok fixed some
thanks~

from my queue~


General

1. i think 00:39:302 is a better preview point, this one is after kiai, not good!

Survive

1. hp+1 or +2 (surviving at hp7 too easy, it doesn't feel like the diff name!
2. 00:06:392 (1) - slider begin here? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/821084 you can here a sound at the blue tick
3. 00:09:862 (4,5) - hitsounds feel empty, i think adding clap on slider ends are better
4. 00:13:668 (5) - clap at beginning and end
5. 00:17:250 (5) - ^
6. 00:23:966 (1) - i think better flow to put this note to x:192 y:172 and 00:24:414 (3,4) - ctrl+G ww
7. 00:39:302 - add note? that triple stream sounds lonely
8. 00:51:727 (5) - put it here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/821091 ww
9. 01:04:265 - add stream? o.o

Hard

1. 00:42:101 (4) - too short on the left.. try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/821100
2. 00:51:951 (1) - jump on the left may be confusing with the next one o.o

Normal

1. 01:06:280 (1) - this goes out of the world

Easy

1. 00:03:593 (3) - this looks like a bad blanket, i would suggest a pattern of http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/821108
2. 00:48:369 (3) - rotate 5 degrees (selection center), prev/next distance is not even

gl~

fixed all except preview time cuz I want that in there \:3/
thanks a lot~

Yo.

This is the weirdest artist I've ever seen. :V

[General]

1. Please, check if your Caps Lock works correctly. I'm sure that correct source is Devil Survivor 2 The Animation
2. Add some more tags, so we'll be able to find your map faster! For example Bridge (name of the studio). Also you can add some character names.
3. you should think about using slider tick rate 2 here. It fits with music better, imo.

[Survive]
Mention in creator's word that [Survive] is [Insane] diff :<

1. Reduce HP Drain by two ticks to make diff and diff spread better balanced. There's no reason to use THAT high HP Drain at all!
2. 00:13:444 (4) - whoaa. x2.7 jump which doesn't really fits with music and feels too unexpected here. Why is it here? You really should reduce distance of this jump because it is really confusing!
   Note: if you're that lazy, just Ctrl+G 00:13:668 (5) - it'd work here, too!
3. 00:24:414 (3) - wild jump again. I don't mnd jumps, but they should be reasonable and fit with music! That one is too fast + I can't hear anything jumpy in music!
4. 00:39:302 (8) - in fact, there's no ANY beat at 00:39:302! So, please, do not overmap and remove that circle!
5. 00:43:332 (2) - same sound appears at 00:42:660 - but there it is mapped with 1/4 reversed slider. Do the same here? yeah, just replace 00:43:332 (2) with reversed 1/4 slider
6. 01:22:063 (8) - second reverse arrow here isn't readable and doesn't flows so good. How about starting that slider 1/4 later + adding a circle at 01:22:063 - ? example
   Note: probably you should place NC at 01:21:504 (9) - because rhythm changes here a bit + combo comes out the way too long!
   
   Just some strange jumps and nothing else. Pretty nice diff!

[Hard]

1. 00:49:265 (1) - x0.75 SV Multiplier would be better here. THis slowdown is too sudden and too unexpected here. I really don't like the way how you use it here. :<
   
   Really nice and enjoyable [Hard]. Except for one slowdown, that bugs me.

[Normal]

1. 00:00:011 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - I'd recommend you to end this sliders 1/4 later. You shouldn't use too many 3/4 sliders here, because this is a [Normal]diff and tricky thythm is confusing for players. Simple 1/2 rhythm will fit here + it's much easier to play!
2. 00:08:071 (2) - it's a bug. Place NC here to fix it.
   Note: just in case if you've never seen these bugs before: circle has number 1 but C here isn't enabled. See?
3. 00:26:653 - you've missed a circle here, right? Circle here will fit with music, vocals and it'll make your rhythm more consistent and easier understandable!
4. 00:34:489 (1,2) - please, replace them with 1/1 slider. (2) sounds too quite, so it's hard to hear/feel that beat while playing. Slider will make rhythm here a bit easier
5. 00:50:160 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - this pattern looks too hard, imo. You shouldn't overuse 1/2 beats here, this is still a [Normal] diff, remember?

[Easy]

1. AR4 is the way too fast! This is the easiest diff! Do you really think that beginners are able to read AR4? Do you think that AR4 fits with slow BPM and Slider Velocity? Please, reduce AR by one tick!
2. 00:00:011 (1,2) - no-no-no! - (2)'s tail is TOO close to (1). So, players may mistakenly hit (2)'s tail after (1). It's all about your flow, that is really weird here. Consider moving (2)'s tail somewhere else. You shouldn''t use such patterns just because it "looks cute with your style"!
3. 00:30:459 (3) - nazi - the way how slider changes its direction isn't really really readable for beginners, please change its shae to something smoother, maybe something like this
4. 00:40:310 (2) - instead of having that gap in your consistent 1/1 rhythm, you could add reverse to this slider. So, you'll follow vocals better + it will make your rhythm more consistent!
5. 00:49:265 - don't ignore vocals there! At least try to hitsound slider-tick or sliderslide. But I'd recommend you to completely re-do this slider, it sounds unfitting, imo. see if you like this or not
6. 00:57:772 - you could place here a circle to follow music, it'll make your rhythm more consistent and a bit easier understandable for beginners!
7. 01:17:474 (1) - you've placed NC to emphasize vocals here, right? Then, why you didn't do the same to 01:15:683 (2)? So, yeah swap NC on 01:15:235 (1,2) - from (1) to (2)! It'll bring some consistency to your comboing
8. 01:20:608 (1) - can't say that I like how this slider change its direction, it's kinda too curvy. That'd be great if you'll make it's shape to something more readable instead. ;_;
   
   This is too hard for an [Easy]diff! Please, reduce your diff settings and work on your rhythm a bit more!

Please, get some more mods for [Easy] diff before calling a BAT. I'm really sure that [Easy] needs more work, sorry ;_;
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Good luck!

fixed some..
btw I'm following source from here
thanks a lot~

in new page again

Thank you for your visit to my queue!

[Easy]

1. it is better that Kiai-time end at 01:21:951, isn't it? (all diff same this)
2. 00:08:071 (1) - move to x:264 y:224. it looks good, I think
3. 00:53:295- add crap

[Normal]

1. 01:07:623- add crap
   01:11:205 (3) - ^

[Hard]

• Good!

[Insane]

1. 01:00:011 (4,5,6) - move to x:208 y:316. it looks good, I think

"Ranked" is near !
~Good Luck~

add crap, oh rofl xD

Miya wrote:

add crap, oh rofl xD

I'm dying xD

RandomEffect wrote:

Thank you for your visit to my queue!

[Easy]

1. it is better that Kiai-time end at 01:21:951, isn't it? (all diff same this) nope weird to me
2. 00:08:071 (1) - move to x:264 y:224. it looks good, I think ok
3. 00:53:295- add crap nope, weird for me lol crap.. you mean clap?

[Normal]

1. 01:07:623- add crap same as easy
   01:11:205 (3) - ^ ^

[Hard]

• Good! yay \:3/

[Insane]

1. 01:00:011 (4,5,6) - move to x:208 y:316. it looks good, I think ok

"Ranked" is near !
~Good Luck~

thanks xD

RandomEffect wrote:

add crap

Oh god xD

Hi there, I love that song.

Summoned via Konei, Irre and Luka's Modding Queue
Feel free to ignore anything, they are only suggestions based on my personal feelings. Please don't feel offended.

[General]

Tags+Source: ✓
Picture: ✓
mp3: ✓
Preview Point: ✓
Diff spread: ✓
Offset: http://puu.sh/3l2R1.png Why does it say 12 here? i'm confused.
Other stuff: add some craps Maybe write that 'Survivor' is the Insane diff, in your creator's words.

For the hitsounds of the map, I ask a friend if he could mod them for you more focused.

[Insane]

Gameplay: Well, it's okay I suppose. The hitsounds were annoying me very much if I'm honest, I try to give you suggestions about that.. well, at least my personal suggestions (it doesn't mean that they are bad). But overall, it looks okay, even if the rhythm is a bit monotone. It has some nice jumps :3 There were no very bad parts too.

About the hitsounds: I really suggest you not using drums. In my opinion another hitsound, maybe only claps and whistles (the clap is very good though) would fit much better.

Modding: 00:00:011 (1,2,3) - Hmm, this part, I'm not sure about it. If you listen closely, you can hear that everything is kinda together, and the way how you placed it doesn't really fit it..And after all, it's a bit hard to get it, because the placing of 00:00:907 (4,5) - confuses me too. Try to place it a bit different at least, please. A suggestion would be if you would make a slider of instead of a circle here 00:00:011 - .. I hope you can try it.
00:03:929 (4,5,6) - Make this to a nice triangle please, while you add a NC 00:03:929 (4) - here. The player will get (most of the cases, I suppose) that there is another rhythm.
00:05:384 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - Moving this combo would create a nice triangle as well, it would be a nice overall-triangle pattern in this part. (mark everything and move it to x:316 y:136)
00:06:392 (1) - Let this circle end at 00:06:616 - and add a 1/4 slider from 00:06:727 - here on? It would sound pretty cool! But that's not really necessary.
00:19:041 (5) - Move the second white point to x: 416 y:156, I think the flow would be better then.
00:23:966 (1,2,3,4) - Really nice pattern you created there!
00:26:653 (5,6) - What about mapping this a bit more to the vocals? the current rhythm gives it a stress, which is weird to play.
00:29:004 (2,3) - Hm, it sounds nice but it's not in the song itself. It's up to you if you leave it or not, just wanted to mention .
00:37:959 (2,3) - The fact, that the slider is gonig to the left and the circle is on the right gives everything a weird flow. Please try to get a better one, if you use a curve flow it will be better
00:38:966 (5,6,7) - If you want something to use like this there please make this:
Yes, two 1/4 sliders, if you listen to the background closely, you'll know why.
00:42:548 (5) - Ctrl + G please, and move 00:42:996 (1) - please to x: 256 y: 300. It will look cool I hope it works for you.
For the KIAI: The clap doesn't sound good to my ears. It's definetly too loud, try to lower the volume at least, maybe even look for a new one, it's up to you.
00:53:742 (1) - Add parts like this, please use finish! It will empathise the song pretty good.
00:58:444 (3) - x:396 y:244, for a better looking
00:59:451 (2,3,4) - The drums.. why did you use them just there? xD Please don't.
01:20:608 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Nice finish of the map

That's it! The map itself is well made I hope you think some suggestions can help you to make it even better!

[Hard]

00:00:235 (2) - I prefer the method you used afterwards, please do so as well as you did there.
00:05:384 (1) - What about ending the spinner here? 00:06:727 -
00:13:892 (3) - It would be nice if you would rotate this slider a bit, for something like 20°. or maybe only 15.
00:42:660 (5) - Well, that's just some personal mapping style, but for things like this i use less DS. If you wanna try it, move it to x: 424, y: 124
00:50:832 (3,4,5) - Try this! It looks nice and has a good flow.
01:17:026 (1) - Well, it's the only 'special' slider you used.. it looks a bit weird to me. Please try to use a regular shape, like you've did before. It's nothing bad to use it! But if you do, try to do it more.

[Normal]

Wow, very high SV. If you're not lazy try to reduce it by 0.2, but if you are, leave it.
00:22:847 (2) - This slider really doesn't fit the rhythm at all. Try listen to the vocals a bit more, since this part definetly should be calmed.
00:26:653 (4,1) - If you listen again, .. she says something like dee, and this starts at 4. So the slider should be at the place of 4, obviously.
00:33:817 (4,1) - Nice pattern~
01:05:832 (4,1) - Try to get a better flow here, remember: it's not good to get something like this in a normal, it will look very quickly a bit odd. Try to get a nice path between circle > slider, or even slider > slider.

[Easy]

00:16:578 (4) - Try this?
01:12:548 (1) - o.o Well.. xD What about going on with the rhythm you used before?

Really nice job here!


I hope i could help you! that big mod, sorry. xD star because naisu song *-*

Hey
From my modding queue~

Just some suggestions.

[Survive]
00:03:929 (4) - Consider adding a NC here.
00:12:884 (2) - That slider looks a bit too crumbled. :c
00:32:250 (1) - Remove the whistle on the slider trail? It doesn't really fit imo.
00:39:190 (7) - One gird right and one up.~
00:58:668 (4) - Ctrl+G?
01:04:489 (1) - Remove this NC and add one here if you did so 01:04:713.
01:07:175 (8) - Remove the clap on the slider start and add a whistle instead? It sounds better imo.
01:11:205 (6) - Remove the whistle and add a clap instead?
01:11:653 (1) - Remove this NC and add one here 01:12:324 (11).

[Hard]
00:00:235 (2) - A bit too crumbled. How about making it straight?
00:19:713 (3) - Add a clap on the slider end? I think it sound pretty nice.
00:26:653 (1) - Remove the NC and add one here 00:27:324 (5)
00:28:444 (1) - If you applied the NC's i've mentioned above delete this NC and add one here 00:29:339 (6)
00:30:235 (1) - Same as above. If you applied the NC's remove this one here and add a NC here 00:31:130 (1). Also remove this NC 00:32:026 (1).
00:41:429 (2,5) - They are a bit too crumbled. It doesn't look so nice. :c
00:56:877 (4) - Remove the whistle and add a clap instead~
01:00:011 (2) - Sampleset: Soft with a whistle instead?
01:07:175 (3) - Remove the whistle on the slider end and add a clap instead?~
01:11:205 (4) - Remove whistle and add a clap?

[Normal]
00:10:310 (4) - Add a clap instead? Sound better imo.
00:34:489 (1) - Blanket better with 00:33:593 (3)~
00:52:847 (2) - Clap on the slider end instead~
00:55:533 (1) - I think you are missing a whislte on the slider end.
01:07:623 (3) - Clap on the slide start instead~
01:11:205 (3) - Missing clap.

[Easy]
00:17:922 (1) - I think you can make the wave a bit more nicer. http://puu.sh/3lcVg.jpg
00:19:713 (3) - Add a clap on the slider end~
00:52:847 (5) - Add a clap on the reverse instead.
00:58:220 (1) - Remove the whistle on the reverse and add a whistle on the end instead.
01:07:623 (4) - Clap instead
01:12:101 (5) - Consider adding a note here. This part feels a bit weird without one.
01:19:265 (3) - Add a Whistle on the slider end.

That's all.
Nice map!

Good luck

fixed some \:3/
thanks both of you~

updated~

Rawr, sorry, im late =3=

General

1. The source should be Devil Survivor 2: The Animation (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Devil_Surv ... _Animation , http://myanimelist.net/anime/16512/Devi ... _Animation)

Easy

1. 00:31:803 (4) - Add a whistle here, not consistent with your whistle rhythm.
2. 00:57:773 (5,1) - Switch NC here, doesnt consistent with other NC pattern especially 01:12:101 (1,2) -
3. 01:19:265 (3) - Add a whistle here since you constantly fill 3rd beat with whistle but not here.
4. 01:19:265 (3) - Put NC here since you add NC at 01:17:474 (1) - and this note has similar vocal at that note.

Normal

1. 00:24:191 (3) - I don't hear any rhythm here thus this note doesn't follow anything from the music. To make better rhythm, you can delete this circle, then make 2 new circle at 00:23:967 - and 00:24:414 - because i can clearly hear piano sounds at that time. It will be good if you add whistle at both of those circles too~
2. 00:26:877 (1) - This slider doesnt follow the music properly too because there is no beat nor rhythm at 00:26:871 -. It will be better if you just delete this slder, then add a new slider at 00:26:653 - to 00:27:325 - then you can add a new circle at 00:27:773 - or if you want to follow the vocal, you can add another circle or new slider here 00:27:549 -
3. 00:30:907 (2) - Move this circle to 00:31:131 -, or delete this circles, and make a new 1/2 slider at 00:31:131 - if you want more simpler pattern. You can add a repeat to the new slider too to follow the vocal more properly.
4. 00:38:519 (1) - This slider start should have a soft whistle at slider start according to your previous rhythm at 00:36:728 (2) - . Both of this note has similar rhythm in vocal.
5. 00:36:728 (2) - I think soft whistle at slider repeat will give you better and more consistent whistle rhythm here.
6. 00:47:474 (4) - Same, add a soft whistle at this slider start too.
7. 00:57:997 (2) - Add another whistle at this slider end, feels empty here.
8. 01:09:862 (3) - Whistle here, it's very not consistent since you always put a whistle at every long downbeat except here.

Hard

1. 00:01:019 (4) - Ok, tbh, this note is very hard to read, it requires me a few try to understand what rhythm it is. A note that very hard to read doesn't make sense here since the part itself is calm. I really encourage you to just change these circles 00:00:683 (3,4,1) - into a slider with repeat instead., since it's much much easier to read.
2. 00:13:892 (3) - A note below slider is unrankable except insane diff. Change this pattern.
3. 00:16:467 - How about a circle here? I can clearly hear a 1/4 rhythm here.
4. 00:24:638 (1) - Skipping a vocal at 00:24:862 - is not a good idea because at the last part 00:23:967 (3,4) - you clearly follow the vocal here. Changing the rhythm so suddenly while the vocal still on going is very not good idea. So, map this slider instead. Delete this slider, then add a new 1/2 slider at 00:24:638 - then you can add a 1/1 slider at 00:25:086 - to create more better rhythm.
5. 00:52:623 (3) - This clap at slider start is overused and doesn't make sense. Remove it.
6. 01:06:728 (2) - Ctrl+g for better flow?

Insane

1. 00:25:758 (3) - Add a whistle here at slider start, it similar with 00:23:071 (3) - start.
2. 00:29:340 (4) - Add a whistle here too, it have similar rhythm with point above.
3. 00:42:549 (5) - According to previous hitsound 00:38:967 (5,6) - this slider hitsound should be normal. Remove the whistle if you do this.
4. 00:55:086 (5) - Add a whistle at this slider repeat too to be consistent with previous whistle rhythm.
5. 01:11:206 (6) - The hitsound here should be clap, not whistle. It's very not consistent.
6. 01:21:392 (8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Okay, this stream is very very very overmapped. If you hear clearly to the music, the 1/4 rhythm end here 01:21:280 -. It doesn't make sense if you extend the stream until here 01:22:400 -. It doesn't fit with the music too.

That's all i think. Overall, this is a good map, but more work can be done. I'll leave my star for now.
Good luck Yasora~
/me play the game