MuryokuP - Frozen World · forum

Max Black_old

Topic Starter

Max Black_old 2013-05-25T13:44:21+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年12月12日 at 20:51:23

Artist: MuryokuP
Title: Frozen World
Source: Resonance
Tags: max_black lmh0901 regou kawaiwkyik fanzhen0019 mahua 615915887 jelly
BPM: 140
Filesize: 7229kb
Play Time: 04:20
Difficulties Available:

615's Normal (1.77 stars, 259 notes)
Easy (1.38 stars, 229 notes)
Extra (5.05 stars, 1126 notes)
FROZEN (5.27 stars, 1099 notes)
Jelly's Hard (3.58 stars, 641 notes)

Download: MuryokuP - Frozen World
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
Redownload Please!!!
if you got it before 2014-9-21!!!

Easy by me Done

615's Normal by 615915887 Done

Jelly's Hard by - Jelly - Hitsound by me Done

Extra by me Done

FROZEN by Regou Kawaiwkyik fanzhen0019 Mahua Done
StoryBoard by me Done

Some osbcHelper code

-----------------------------dot project
time=233389
while time<259103
do
local x=math.random(0,640)
local y=math.random(400,480)
local s=math.random(20,75)
local y1=math.random(50,250)
dot=Sprite('Foreground','Centre','"SB\\dot.png"',x,y)
dot:M(0,time,time+1714,x,y,x,y-y1)
dot:C(0,time,time,74,255,255)
dot:S(0,time,time,s/100)
dot:F(0,time,time+215,0.000,0.75)
dot:F(0,time+1714-215,time+1714,0.75,0.000)
time=time+214
end

time=233389
while time<259103
do
local x=math.random(0,640)
local y=math.random(400,480)
local s=math.random(20,75)
local y1=math.random(50,150)
dot=Sprite('Foreground','Centre','"SB\\dot.png"',x,y)
dot:M(0,time,time+1714,x,y,x,y-y1)
dot:C(0,time,time,74,255,255)
dot:S(0,time,time,s/100)
dot:F(0,time,time+215,0.000,0.75)
dot:F(0,time+1714-215,time+1714,0.75,0.000)
time=time+214
end

Special thanks!~

- Jelly -
Awaken
10crystalmask01
sammy711
Spring Roll
Hollow Wings
Sun Rainbow
z1085684963
Zantaria
neonat
Rush_FTK
mangocurry
Autumn

Last edited by Max Black_old 2014-12-12T12:52:06+00:00, edited 233 times in total.

- Jelly -

30 posts

Joined April 2013

- Jelly - 2013-06-10T13:48:46+00:00

[Another]

Song Setup

ar10太难 orz

Object

00:52:509 (3,4,5) - 柑橘做移动连打会好一点，叠在一起有点不舒服。
01:21:974 (2) - 再稍微排上去一点..果然我是奇怪的审美观。。
03:17:509 (4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - 间距变大却加速了。。。。
03:26:795 (3,4) - 可以做个小跳
03:27:652 (1,1,2,1,1,1,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 很奇怪。是没排？
03:30:115 (1,1,2,1,1,1,2,1,1,1,2,1) - 神combo不能多说
03:41:366 (1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - 没对准

hitsound

整体音量稍大了点
02:37:938 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - 可以做一个渐变的鼓声
01:34:509 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) -

音效减小也许会有奇效
01:40:081 (2,3,4,5) - 音效减小也许会有奇效
02:00:224 (1) - 最后一个可加重音
02:13:937 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - 改为soft音
03:04:509 (1,1,1) - 做个渐变
03:14:795 (1,1,1,1) - 神音效！

nice map ww

Awaken

858 posts

Joined February 2012

Awaken 2013-06-10T13:57:44+00:00

[Another]
卧槽..自己打开aimod检查一下一大堆unsnapped
这图的音效建议用soft normal太吵
音效太少了
AR-1
OD+1
HP+1
00:47:581 (3,4,5) - 等距
03:51:652 (1) - 略丑
01:17:366 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这里音密集间距搞小而且你后面搞小了前面怎么没弄
01:31:938 (6,7,8,9,10) - ^
01:40:081 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:13:937 - 02:27:223 这里音乐这么慢加02:15:437 (1) - 类似这样的破坏气氛而且这段音量太大了滑条拖着的声音不觉得很难听么233
02:27:652 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 复制差评
03:48:296 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - ^
02:37:938 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - 每四个NC一次
02:55:079 (3,1,1,1,1) - clap吓尿
03:14:795 (1,1) - ^
02:55:830 (1,2) - 1的方向指的是下面诶..快ctrl+g
04:01:722 (1,1) - ^
03:15:438 (1) - 莫名whistle
03:39:509 (1) - ^
03:29:795 (1,1,2,1,1,1,2,1,1,1,2,1,1,1,2,1,1,1,2,1,1,2,3,1,2) - 乱NC
04:03:224 (1) - 去NC
04:34:508 卧槽从这里开始280连打是要闹哪样

就看这么多了 Good Luck

Max Black_old

Topic Starter

Max Black_old 2013-06-10T14:31:41+00:00

[quote

Awaken wrote:
[Another]
卧槽..自己打开aimod检查一下一大堆unsnapped
这图的音效建议用soft normal 太吵我觉得这样不错啊
音效太少了这歌自带音效
AR-1
OD+1
HP+1
00:47:581 (3,4,5) - 等距 OK！
03:51:652 (1) - 略丑 OK！
01:17:366 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这里音密集间距搞小而且你后面搞小了前面怎么没弄 OK！
01:31:938 (6,7,8,9,10) - ^ - ^
01:40:081 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^ - ^
02:13:937 - 02:27:223 这里音乐这么慢加02:15:437 (1) - 类似这样的破坏气氛而且这段音量太大了滑条拖着的声音不觉得很难听么233 - ^
02:27:652 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 复制差评这段搁置
03:48:296 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - ^ 应该改成什么？
02:37:938 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) -每四个NC一次 OK！
02:55:079 (3,1,1,1,1) - clap吓尿 - ^
03:14:795 (1,1) - ^ - ^
02:55:830 (1,2) - 1的方向指的是下面诶..快ctrl+g - ^
04:01:722 (1,1) - ^ - ^
03:15:438 (1) - 莫名whistle - ^
03:39:509 (1) - ^ - ^
03:29:795 (1,1,2,1,1,1,2,1,1,1,2,1,1,1,2,1,1,1,2,1,1,2,3,1,2) - 乱NC 每4个NC算是有规律吧
04:03:224 (1) - 去NC 感谢指出
04:34:508 卧槽从这里开始280连打是要闹哪样搁置（求灵感！

就看这么多了 Good Luck

][/quote]

Max Black_old

Topic Starter

Max Black_old 2013-06-10T14:35:53+00:00

Blize wrote:
[Another]

Song Setup

ar10太难 orz OK！

Object

00:52:509 (3,4,5) - 柑橘做移动连打会好一点，叠在一起有点不舒服。OK！
01:21:974 (2) - 再稍微排上去一点..果然我是奇怪的审美观。。OK！
03:17:509 (4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - 间距变大却加速了。。。。这段在很多MAP里很常见
03:26:795 (3,4) - 可以做个小跳 OK！
03:27:652 (1,1,2,1,1,1,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 很奇怪。是没排？OK！
03:30:115 (1,1,2,1,1,1,2,1,1,1,2,1) - 神combo不能多说没看懂
03:41:366 (1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - 没对准求指点！

hitsound

整体音量稍大了点配合这歌的曲风嘛
02:37:938 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - 可以做一个渐变的鼓声 OK！
01:34:509 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 音效减小也许会有奇效OK！
01:40:081 (2,3,4,5) - 音效减小也许会有奇效OK！
02:00:224 (1) - 最后一个可加重音OK！
02:13:937 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - 改为soft音OK！
03:04:509 (1,1,1) - 做个渐变OK！
03:14:795 (1,1,1,1) - 神音效！OK！

nice map ww

10crystalmask01

10crystalmask01 2013-06-11T02:17:52+00:00

Uh-oh, did you re-check with your AiMod before uploading? Cause it seems that almost all your hit circles/sliders are off timing

You may not see it, but click Ctrl + Shift + A and it'll show you. AiMod is really handy for identifying common issues that might prevent a beatmap from getting ranked, so mappers and mods alike should consider using it.

Hope this helps~!

Max Black_old

Topic Starter

Max Black_old 2013-06-12T08:23:52+00:00

10crystalmask01 wrote:
Uh-oh, did you re-check with your AiMod before uploading? Cause it seems that almost all your hit circles/sliders are off timing

You may not see it, but click Ctrl + Shift + A and it'll show you. AiMod is really handy for identifying common issues that might prevent a beatmap from getting ranked, so mappers and mods alike should consider using it.

Hope this helps~!

Thank you for mod!

Max Black_old

Topic Starter

Max Black_old 2013-06-22T10:21:05+00:00

已把Another更名为Extra

Last edited by Max Black_old 2013-07-08T08:18:18+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Spring Roll

230 posts

Joined April 2013

Spring Roll 2013-06-25T14:32:27+00:00

Hi~Hi~白天突然有点事。现在来给你mod了
不过打了一遍感觉没有特别多的地方可说= =或许是我连打太渣，简单的说一说吧

首先吐槽为什么TAG是空的。。。
01:17:365 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 感觉这一段连打没开DS，有点难看（我是强迫症
01:32:044 (7) - 毫无预兆的连打变速，建议变速的时候NC一下
01:52:937 (1,1,1,1) - 1/3十分炫酷，总之我被坑了，包括后面那些，点个赞
03:35:367 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - 卧槽人性泯灭(╯‵□′)╯︵┻━┻
03:42:975 (16,1) - 这个跳的距离有点大
04:34:510 (1) - 从这里开始。。。我好悲伤

说一下感想，很人性的连打图。1/3和1/6的合理运用给这图增加了不少耐玩之处
~~↑以上是表面话~~
-------------------------------------------------------------------------
~~↓以下是真心话~~

真心话

wqnmlgb这游戏能玩？

以上。

看了看发现这mod有点短了，再唠叨几句。我只是个普通的新mapper，可能不太了解麻婆的世界，不过BAT们都很喜欢钻牛角尖还是听说过的。我觉得这么多的1/6肯定会被他们拿来说这说那（大概），感觉rank的道路十分坎坷，~~壮士走好~~hope this helps

Max Black_old

Topic Starter

Max Black_old 2013-07-02T13:23:47+00:00

Spring Roll wrote:
Hi~Hi~白天突然有点事。现在来给你mod了
不过打了一遍感觉没有特别多的地方可说= =或许是我连打太渣，简单的说一说吧

首先吐槽为什么TAG是空的。。。
01:17:365 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 感觉这一段连打没开DS，有点难看（我是强迫症 Done
01:32:044 (7) - 毫无预兆的连打变速，建议变速的时候NC一下 Done
01:52:937 (1,1,1,1) - 1/3十分炫酷，总之我被坑了，包括后面那些，点个赞 lol
03:35:367 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - 卧槽人性泯灭(╯‵□′)╯︵┻━┻ lol
03:42:975 (16,1) - 这个跳的距离有点大 Done
04:34:510 (1) - 从这里开始。。。我好悲伤 lol

说一下感想，很人性的连打图。1/3和1/6的合理运用给这图增加了不少耐玩之处 lol
~~↑以上是表面话~~
-------------------------------------------------------------------------
~~↓以下是真心话~~
真心话
wqnmlgb这游戏能玩？

以上。

看了看发现这mod有点短了，再唠叨几句。我只是个普通的新mapper，可能不太了解麻婆的世界，不过BAT们都很喜欢钻牛角尖还是听说过的。我觉得这么多的1/6肯定会被他们拿来说这说那（大概），感觉rank的道路十分坎坷，~~壮士走好~~hope this helps

Thank you for mod!

10crystalmask01

10crystalmask01 2013-08-23T02:17:07+00:00

IRC mod

21:42 *Max Black is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/255855 Muryoku P - Frozen World]
21:42 Max Black: You can mod it?
21:43 10crystalmask01: ok
21:44 Max Black: Thank you very much.>_<
21:44 10crystalmask01: no prob :)
21:45 10crystalmask01: IRC mod?
21:46 Max Black: Yes
21:46 10crystalmask01: ok
21:47 10crystalmask01: I'mchecking the extra diff right now
21:47 10crystalmask01: 00:43:294 (2) and 00:42:651 (4) should look alike, so it can make a small symmetry there.
21:47 10crystalmask01: http://puu.sh/48yN1/8fd83fd1d7.jpg something like this
21:48 10crystalmask01: 00:54:437 (10) - New combo
21:49 10crystalmask01: 00:57:544 (4,5) - switch timing spots
21:52 10crystalmask01: 01:00:652 - 01:01:509 try this rhythm here: http://puu.sh/48z02/2e83fa4ae9.jpg
21:53 10crystalmask01: 01:07:080 (1) - Remove NC, it should start at 01:07:508 (2) instead.
21:54 10crystalmask01: 01:03:545 try adding a note, it'smissing a beat here.
21:55 10crystalmask01: 01:03:545 - Sorry
21:56 10crystalmask01: Oops  forgot! 00:48:116 - Also add a note 
21:58 10crystalmask01: And 00:50:473 - too
21:59 10crystalmask01: 00:50:580 (4) - Move to 00:50:795 
21:59 10crystalmask01: No, wait, not 00:50:795. Sorry I meant 00:50:688.
22:00 10crystalmask01: 00:50:688 - 
22:03 10crystalmask01: 02:13:937 (1) - and 02:15:651 (1) - would look better if they were simliar in shape. It would form another pretty good symmetry here.
22:06 10crystalmask01: 03:03:653 (16) - NC instead of 03:03:760 (1) - 
22:06 10crystalmask01: 03:10:510 (9) - NC
22:08 10crystalmask01: 03:52:725 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - All these objects looks to crowded here, it looks terrible >< Space'em out please.
22:12 10crystalmask01: 04:46:510 (1) - Try adding a finsih to the head of this slider. Also do it for:
22:12 10crystalmask01: 04:46:938 (4) - 
22:12 10crystalmask01: 04:47:367 (1) - 
22:12 10crystalmask01: 04:47:796 (4) - 
22:13 10crystalmask01: And for 04:48:081 (6) - finish sounds better on the tail
22:13 10crystalmask01: Makes a better finish for this insane song! @.@
22:13 10crystalmask01: And that's it :3
22:14 Max Black: OK!

Good luck!

Last edited by 10crystalmask01 2013-09-21T01:40:44+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Max Black_old

Topic Starter

Max Black_old 2013-08-25T08:10:58+00:00

10crystalmask01 wrote:
IRC mod
[]21:42 *Max Black is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/255855 Muryoku P - Frozen World]
21:42 Max Black: You can mod it?
21:43 10crystalmask01: ok
21:44 Max Black: Thank you very much.>_<
21:44 10crystalmask01: no prob
21:45 10crystalmask01: IRC mod?
21:46 Max Black: Yes
21:46 10crystalmask01: ok
21:47 10crystalmask01: I'mchecking the extra diff right now
21:47 10crystalmask01: 00:43:294 (2) and 00:42:651 (4) should look alike, so it can make a small symmetry there.
21:47 10crystalmask01: http://puu.sh/48yN1/8fd83fd1d7.jpg something like this
21:48 10crystalmask01: 00:54:437 (10) - New combo
21:49 10crystalmask01: 00:57:544 (4,5) - switch timing spots
21:52 10crystalmask01: 01:00:652 - 01:01:509 try this rhythm here: http://puu.sh/48z02/2e83fa4ae9.jpg
21:53 10crystalmask01: 01:07:080 (1) - Remove NC, it should start at 01:07:508 (2) instead.
21:54 10crystalmask01: 01:03:545 try adding a note, it'smissing a beat here.
21:55 10crystalmask01: 01:03:545 - Sorry
21:56 10crystalmask01: Oops forgot! 00:48:116 - Also add a note
21:58 10crystalmask01: And 00:50:473 - too
21:59 10crystalmask01: 00:50:580 (4) - Move to 00:50:795
21:59 10crystalmask01: No, wait, not 00:50:795. Sorry I meant 00:50:688.
22:00 10crystalmask01: 00:50:688 -
22:03 10crystalmask01: 02:13:937 (1) - and 02:15:651 (1) - would look better if they were simliar in shape. It would form another pretty good symmetry here.
22:06 10crystalmask01: 03:03:653 (16) - NC instead of 03:03:760 (1) -
22:06 10crystalmask01: 03:10:510 (9) - NC
22:08 10crystalmask01: 03:52:725 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - All these objects looks to crowded here, it looks terrible >< Space'em out please.
22:12 10crystalmask01: 04:46:510 (1) - Try adding a finsih to the head of this slider. Also do it for:
22:12 10crystalmask01: 04:46:938 (4) -
22:12 10crystalmask01: 04:47:367 (1) -
22:12 10crystalmask01: 04:47:796 (4) -
22:13 10crystalmask01: And for 04:48:081 (6) - finish sounds better on the tail
22:13 10crystalmask01: Makes a better finish for this insane song! @.@
22:13 10crystalmask01: And that's it :3
22:14 Max Black: OK![/code]

Good luck!

Thank you for mod~

Hollow Wings

1,514 posts

Joined July 2010

Hollow Wings 2013-08-27T14:08:46+00:00

你的意思是说你mod一个diff我还你两个diff吗www
嘛其实也无所谓啦233

红色全部unrankble

General

timing我都听出来错开了，我听下来红线offset改成40960比较靠谱，绿线相应移动并resnap。不过我还是建议比较专业的给你搞一下timing
还有，所有diff的红线必须数量数据完全一样，你即使不改也unrank

Extra

既然diff叫extra那就无所谓了，凭我的感觉给你mod
00:43:723 (3) - reverse
00:59:817 (6,7) - ^
01:17:366 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - 你这串绝对unrank，钢琴只有前面两个音是倚音所以挨的很近，其余和前面的是一样的，个人认为必须改掉
01:34:531 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 这里就比较对的上，排列上建议此处和之前之后的连打稍微分开一些，或者让这串的note之间ds更小些
02:13:960 (1,1,1) - blanket
03:17:390 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这串前面8个对的上，后面四个显然是1/4，前八个建议一色
03:18:247 (1,2,3,4) - 这些显然应该是1/4而不是1/6
03:28:961 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 这串应该是1/8，但显然不能放连打，混几个1/8折返吧
03:33:676 (9) - nc
03:48:354 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这串是1/4节奏，全都改掉
03:51:676 (1,2,3) - ds改大一点
04:06:890 (1) - 不能遮折返箭头，尾巴拖到右上角去
04:40:764 (1,1,1) - 太高了，建议往下挪一点
04:42:264 (1,1,1,1) - 为何不统一ds
04:43:961 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 人性？建议改掉
04:44:836 (1) - 告诉我从这个note开始后面放1/6连打的理由，在曲子鼓点分明是1/4的情况下

为何要滥用1/6，fear的曲子已经是活生生的例子，不和曲子的1/6基本上就是被抓把柄unrank的节奏，难道你也要直接改mp3？

Another

ar7人性？ar8都够呛，要么改成ar8要么就直接ar9，这是another好吧
timing问题见general
既然没做完那就不mod了，看了前面一段做的没什么问题

其实这个曲子可以做的更精彩一些的，连打的地方用婆婆梗真是蛋疼无比
再次强调不要乱用1/6，除非非常合曲子，建议看看类似的例子
good luck

Regou

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Regou 2013-08-28T02:56:22+00:00

Hollow Wings wrote:
你的意思是说你mod一个diff我还你两个diff吗www
嘛其实也无所谓啦233

红色全部unrankble
General
timing我都听出来错开了，我听下来红线offset改成40960比较靠谱，绿线相应移动并resnap。不过我还是建议比较专业的给你搞一下timing 紅線在41388沒錯不然重音offbeat
还有，所有diff的红线必须数量数据完全一样，你即使不改也unrank

Another
ar7人性？ar8都够呛，要么改成ar8要么就直接ar9，这是another好吧你要明白小圈圈加ar7逼人家開HR才是蛋疼
timing问题见general
既然没做完那就不mod了，看了前面一段做的没什么问题
其实这个曲子可以做的更精彩一些的，连打的地方用婆婆梗真是蛋疼无比
再次强调不要乱用1/6，除非非常合曲子，建议看看类似的例子
good luck