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Arakawa Chika - Purely Sky (Short Ver.) [Osu|Taiko]

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Topic Starter
- Kevin
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on domingo, 22 de dezembro de 2013 at 04:18:38

Artist: Arakawa Chika
Title: Purely Sky (Short Ver.)
Source: GJ-bu
Tags: anime ending - Raul club good job
BPM: 130
Filesize: 4212kb
Play Time: 01:30
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4,54 stars, 212 notes)
  2. Insane (4,99 stars, 272 notes)
  3. Normal (2,78 stars, 107 notes)
  4. Taiko Musukashii (4,63 stars, 294 notes)
  5. Taiko Oni (4,89 stars, 424 notes)
Download: Arakawa Chika - Purely Sky (Short Ver.)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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NOT WORKING FOR RANK YET

=^.^=
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06/13/2013 - Added Guest insane by raulmax319
07/18/2013 - Changed diff name for raulmax319 Guest map.
07/21/2013 - Uploaded with Kiiwa Mod and Added Taiko Musukashii.
07/23/2013 - Uploaded with luxoDeh Mod
07/24/2013 - Uploaded with Alarido Mod
07/29/2013 - Uploaded with TeriosShadow Mod
12/02/2013 - Uploaded with raulmax319 Self Mod
12/10/2013 - REMOVED Guest insane by raulmax319
12/17/2013 - Uploaded with a Few aesthetic improvement
12/22/2013 - Added Custom SB/BG for Taiko Diffs.
raulmax319
Normal

tudo certo aos meus olhos e ouvidos lol

Hard

00:18:307 (14) - Add a circle

00:25:230 (1) - Adicione um spinner com final 00:26:384 - add finish

00:39:076 (4) - Add a circle

00:39:538 (6) - Add a circle

00:39:769 (7) - Troque o circulo por um slider ate 00:40:230 - http://puu.sh/3cRPe.png

00:53:846 (7) - Add a circle

00:54:538 (1) - diminua o tamanho do spinner para 00:55:922 -

00:56:153 (1) - Add a circle

00:57:538 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Confuso sem stack > _ <

01:14:153 (1) - Remova este spinner, tente trocar por dois sliders http://puu.sh/3cMI3.png

01:18:999 - Add a circle



Insane

00:08:153 - Add a circle

00:34:230 (10) - Extenda o slider para 00:34:461 -

00:39:307 (1,2,3,4) - Adicione circulos entre estes, está muito vago para o ritmo

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Boa sorte o/
Topic Starter
- Kevin
Thx for modding~


English ver.
Normal

As i can see its everything ok lol

Hard

00:18:307 (14) - Add a circle - No Change

00:25:230 (1) - Add a spinner until 00:26:384 - add finish - Ok

00:39:076 (4) - Add a circle - Ok

00:39:538 (6) - Add a circle - Ok

00:39:769 (7) - Turn into a slider until 00:40:230 - No change




00:53:846 (7) - Add a circle - Ok

00:54:538 (1) - Reduce this slider until 00:55:922 - - No change

00:56:153 (1) - Add a circle - No change

00:57:538 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Confuse without stack > _ < - No change

01:14:153 (1) - Remove spinner, try to replace with 2 sliders - No change




01:18:999 - Add a circle - Ok



Insane

00:08:153 - Add a circle - Ok

00:34:230 (10) - Finish this slider at 00:34:461 - - Done

00:39:307 (1,2,3,4) -Add circles among these for better rhythm - No change

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Good luck o/ Thx~ o/[/quote]

raulmax319 wrote:

Normal

tudo certo aos meus olhos e ouvidos lol

Hard

00:18:307 (14) - Add a circle - Sem mudança

00:25:230 (1) - Adicione um spinner com final 00:26:384 - add finish - Adicionado

00:39:076 (4) - Add a circle - Adicionado

00:39:538 (6) - Add a circle - Adicionado

00:39:769 (7) - Troque o circulo por um slider ate 00:40:230 - Sem mudança




00:53:846 (7) - Add a circle - Adicionado

00:54:538 (1) - diminua o tamanho do spinner para 00:55:922 - - Sem mudança

00:56:153 (1) - Add a circle - Sem mudança

00:57:538 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Confuso sem stack > _ < - Sem mudança

01:14:153 (1) - Remova este spinner, tente trocar por dois sliders - Sem mudança




01:18:999 - Add a circle - Adicionado



Insane

00:08:153 - Add a circle - Adicionado

00:34:230 (10) - Extenda o slider para 00:34:461 - - Feito

00:39:307 (1,2,3,4) - Adicione circulos entre estes, está muito vago para o ritmo - Sem mudança

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Boa sorte o/ Valeu~ o/
[Seraphin]
From #modreqs

General

Breaks?

Normal

OD+1 (if you want), feels a little easy for normal

Hard

01:02:157 (4) - x256y288 - doesn't snap with distance, but is easier to read and looks better

Great map, I really could not find anything else :P
I may have missed something though, sorry.
Topic Starter
- Kevin

[Seraphin] wrote:

From #modreqs

General

Breaks? - It's fine cos low BPM and Short Ver.

Normal

OD+1 (if you want), feels a little easy for normal - No change because i dont have a Easy dif.

Hard

01:02:157 (4) - x256y288 - doesn't snap with distance, but is easier to read and looks better - Moved

Great map, I really could not find anything else :P Thx~
I may have missed something though, sorry.
Kiiwa
Hi~

[General]
  1. Add "Club" to tags, because English title is "GJ Club". Add "Good" and "Job" since that's what i'm guessing the title stand for too.
  2. Combo colours 1, 2 & 3 might as well be deleted.
  3. If you include one Taiko difficulty, you must include another for this to be rankable. Please refer to the Ranking Criteria for more information.
  4. You have a very long Kiai time. I would suggest to end it at 01:14:850 -

[Another319]
  1. 00:19:465 - Add finish.
  2. 00:23:157 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - Make it so that this stream doesn't overlap with 00:22:465 (8,9,10) -
  3. 00:30:311 (1,4) - Switch new combo between these two notes.
  4. 00:37:119 (1,2,3,4) - Don't place these notes under the slider track.
  5. 00:56:388 - Add finish.
  6. 01:03:773 - Add finish.
  7. 01:14:850 - Add finish.

[Insane]
  1. 00:15:311 - Add a note.
  2. 00:15:773 (6) - New combo.
  3. 00:52:696 (11) - Change whistle to finish.
  4. 00:55:465 (1) - This spinner is unrankable because it can't achieve 2,000 bonus score on auto.
  5. 01:03:773 (1) - Add finish.
  6. 01:20:388 - Add finish.

[Hard]
  1. 00:11:157 (1) - Too short for a Hard. I would suggest deleting and mapping through it instead.

Good luck~
Liiraye
Hi, Mod 4 mod #modreqs!
My map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/104151

Normal
As this is your easiest diff I either suggest/recommend that you make an easier and keep it or making this one easier because for an easy map it's pretty hard! :)
01:17:619 (1,3) Fix this overlap
01:27:311 (2,4) stack these two

Hard
00:05:611 (2) unsnapped slider
00:05:611 (2) Looks better if this note is at the same height as the pattern it's in. Try placing it at x:128 y:60
As you can see here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/878883 there are lots of places like these that have irregular distance spacing even though it's on the same beat. I highly recommend reviewing your make note by note and snap them accordingly
00:16:234 (7,8) stack better
00:30:311 (6,7) Always avoid starting sliders on red ticks unless they follow certain special vocal parts. On this part both sliders run on parts that have no music according to how they're put. Remove both sliders and start a slider from here 00:30:542 that ends here 00:31:003 (how I did it http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/878890) It follows the music much better! Also check the distance for the next combo.
00:41:734 (4) Overmapped triple, remove note
00:42:311 (5) NC
00:42:888 place note here and take combo 00:43:003 (7) and stack it together with the one you just placed on the end of slider 00:42:311 (6), like this:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/878897
00:45:311 (1,2,3,4) These overlaps are unnecessary and doesn't look good, you can just move them a little apart and it will be much better! :)
00:49:003 (3,4,5,6) Coat this better
00:57:080 (2,3,4) Also missfit slider, remove 3 and 4 and start combo 2 from 00:57:311 and end it here 00:57:773 so that it fits the vocals
01:01:003 (5) Unsnapped note, a solution could be to stack it on note 4
01:01:465 (1,2,3,4,1) This pattern looks pretty messy, maybe make it a bit more symmetrical?
01:02:388 (1) remove nc
01:02:619 (1) remove slider and start on white tick instead and follow the vocals
01:10:696 (1,3) stack better
01:17:157 fill this section please, it's in the middle of a kiai and a break like this is not that great
01:19:465 (1) NC
01:20:619 (3) remove NC

Ugh it's getting very late, I'll mod the rest tomorrow!
raulmax319

Kiiwa wrote:

Hi~

[Another319]
  1. 00:19:465 - Add finish.Fixed.
  2. 00:23:157 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - Make it so that this stream doesn't overlap with 00:22:465 (8,9,10) - I removed the stream, overmap~
  3. 00:30:311 (1,4) - Switch new combo between these two notes.Changed.
  4. 00:37:119 (1,2,3,4) - Don't place these notes under the slider track.Fixed~
  5. 00:56:388 - Add finish.Fixed.
  6. 01:03:773 - Add finish.^
  7. 01:14:850 - Add finish.^
Thanks.
http://puu.sh/3HSyP.osu
Topic Starter
- Kevin
Thx for Modding Kiiwa~

Kiiwa wrote:

Hi~
General
[General]
  1. Add "Club" to tags, because English title is "GJ Club". Add "Good" and "Job" since that's what i'm guessing the title stand for too.
  2. Combo colours 1, 2 & 3 might as well be deleted.
  3. If you include one Taiko difficulty, you must include another for this to be rankable. Please refer to the Ranking Criteria for more information.
  4. You have a very long Kiai time. I would suggest to end it at 01:14:850 -
Added Tags, Kiai have changed.

Insane
[Insane]
  1. 00:15:311 - Add a note. Added
  2. 00:15:773 (6) - New combo. OK
  3. 00:52:696 (11) - Change whistle to finish. OK
  4. 00:55:465 (1) - This spinner is unrankable because it can't achieve 2,000 bonus score on auto. Fixed
  5. 01:03:773 (1) - Add finish. OK
  6. 01:20:388 - Add finish. OK
Hard
[Hard]
  1. 00:11:157 (1) - Too short for a Hard. I would suggest deleting and mapping through it instead. Mapped
Good luck~ Thx~
luxoDeh
Hi! mod from my queue

NORMAL

00:21:773 (5,6) - maybe move them like this, it's more symmetrical 00:34:696 (1) - move it one grid up, so it's at the same high as 00:33:311 (3,4) -
00:37:926 (1) - why don't stack it with 00:36:542 (3) - ?
00:59:157 (5) - I suggest to move this to x:336 - y:352 so it will make a sort of blancket with 00:58:234 (3) -
01:00:080 (1) - maybe don't leave this slider with this inclination...
01:19:465 (3) - try not to make this touch 01:17:619 (1) -
01:27:311 (2,4) - try to stack them

HARD

00:16:696 (8) - stack also this one with the others
00:19:465 (2) - make this symmetrical to the Y axe
00:20:388 (3,4,5,6,7) - I think you can make this better, like this (I used grid level 4) 00:34:696 (3,3,4,5,6) - I think here the rythm should be like this 00:53:850 (7,8) - I don't know how much this can be good... maybe someone can be confused on where the slider really start... dunno... maybe it's better change this
00:57:542 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - try to make some different shape instead of leaving all these note on the same points, there are so meny notes and you can create lots of better things with them
01:01:003 (5) - maybe it's better keep the spacing consistent
01:10:696 (1,3) - stack them better

INSANE

00:14:619 (4) - I think there should only be a note here instead of a slider
00:26:850 (1,2) - why don't you try to make a blancket with these 2?
00:27:773 (3) - and also try to avoid overlsp with the previous one
00:45:311 (1,3) - try to stack them better
00:59:503 - add a note here?

Another319

00:32:388 (4) - this is really too high in the map it touch the top of the screan, so move it a bit down

that's all, good luck with this map! ;)
raulmax319

luxoDeh wrote:

Another319

00:32:388 (4) - this is really too high in the map it touch the top of the screan, so move it a bit down Moved.

that's all, good luck with this map! ;)
http://puu.sh/3JvVl.osu
Topic Starter
- Kevin
Hi, Thx for modding.

luxoDeh wrote:

Normal
NORMAL

00:21:773 (5,6) - maybe move them like this, it's more symmetrical OK

00:34:696 (1) - move it one grid up, so it's at the same high as 00:33:311 (3,4) - OK
00:37:926 (1) - why don't stack it with 00:36:542 (3) - ? Stacked
00:59:157 (5) - I suggest to move this to x:336 - y:352 so it will make a sort of blancket with 00:58:234 (3) - OK
01:00:080 (1) - maybe don't leave this slider with this inclination... OK
01:19:465 (3) - try not to make this touch 01:17:619 (1) - OK
01:27:311 (2,4) - try to stack them OK
Hard
HARD

00:16:696 (8) - stack also this one with the others OK
00:19:465 (2) - make this symmetrical to the Y axe OK
00:20:388 (3,4,5,6,7) - I think you can make this better, like this (I used grid level 4) OK

00:34:696 (3,3,4,5,6) - I think here the rythm should be like this No change

00:53:850 (7,8) - I don't know how much this can be good... maybe someone can be confused on where the slider really start... dunno... maybe it's better change this No change
00:57:542 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - try to make some different shape instead of leaving all these note on the same points, there are so meny notes and you can create lots of better things with them No change
01:01:003 (5) - maybe it's better keep the spacing consistent No change
01:10:696 (1,3) - stack them better OK
Insane
INSANE

00:14:619 (4) - I think there should only be a note here instead of a slider OK
00:26:850 (1,2) - why don't you try to make a blancket with these 2? No change
00:27:773 (3) - and also try to avoid overlsp with the previous one OK?
00:45:311 (1,3) - try to stack them better OK
00:59:503 - add a note here? OK
that's all, good luck with this map! ;) Thx~
Alarido
Hi ^^
A Free Mod from Coffee Party Queue -- ROUND V

Legenda wrote:

:!: → Coisas que tem que ser consertadas -- a não ser que não queira rankear.
:?: → Minhas dúvidas e coisas afins. Sou humano, sabe?
:idea: → Dicas e Truques pra fazer seu mapa ainda melhor
♥ → Elogios
* → Comentários
Linhas sem ícones → Mods
* Nada a declarar sobre as coisas em geral (BPM/offset/tags/etc...) Parece tudo em ordem.

* A diff [Normal] está ótima! (:

[Hard]
00:39:080 (4,5,6,7) - Por que não fazê-las ficarem como nesta foto? → http://puu.sh/3L4lz.jpg

[Insane]
00:27:311 (2,3) - Por que não fazê-los ficarem assim? → http://puu.sh/3L4y6.jpg

[Another319]
♥ 01:09:311 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - LINDO !!!!!

Mapa muito bom, muito bem feito ^^
merece uma estrelinha!

E que ranqueie logo!

Att.
Topic Starter
- Kevin
Thx for Modding

English ver.

Alarido wrote:

Hi ^^
A Free Mod from Coffee Party Queue -- ROUND V

Legenda wrote:

:!: → Unrankable Things -- unless you dont want it to get ranked.
:?: → My doubts. After all I am human.
:idea: → Hints for a better map
♥ → Cheers
* → Comments
No icon Lines → Mods
* Nothing to sayl (BPM/offset/tags/etc...) Its seems everything okay.

* [Normal] Diff is Ok (:

[Hard]
00:39:080 (4,5,6,7) - You should try this → http://puu.sh/3L4lz.jpg
No Change

[Insane]
00:27:311 (2,3) - You should try this → http://puu.sh/3L4y6.jpg
Done

[Another319]
♥ 01:09:311 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Bealtiful !!!!!
Envy =(

Too good Map, Very well ^^
Deserve a star!

Hope it get ranked soon!
Thx~

Alarido wrote:

Hi ^^
A Free Mod from Coffee Party Queue -- ROUND V

Legenda wrote:

:!: → Coisas que tem que ser consertadas -- a não ser que não queira rankear.
:?: → Minhas dúvidas e coisas afins. Sou humano, sabe?
:idea: → Dicas e Truques pra fazer seu mapa ainda melhor
♥ → Elogios
* → Comentários
Linhas sem ícones → Mods
* Nada a declarar sobre as coisas em geral (BPM/offset/tags/etc...) Parece tudo em ordem.

* A diff [Normal] está ótima! (:

[Hard]
00:39:080 (4,5,6,7) - Por que não fazê-las ficarem como nesta foto? → http://puu.sh/3L4lz.jpg
Sem mudança

[Insane]
00:27:311 (2,3) - Por que não fazê-los ficarem assim? → http://puu.sh/3L4y6.jpg
Feito

[Another319]
♥ 01:09:311 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - LINDO !!!!!
Inveja =(

Mapa muito bom, muito bem feito ^^
merece uma estrelinha!

E que ranqueie logo!
Valeu
Att.
TeriosShadow
From #modreqs

General - I really dislike that most of the notes aren't stacked, they're all exactly on top of one another. This is especially so in your Hard, the notes on top of each other really should be stacked.

Normal

I don't have anything to say on this one, done well!

Hard

00:21:773 (8,9,10) - It seems odd that these have greater distance spacing than everything previously, I think you should keep the spacing the same here.
00:35:388 - Add a note here?
00:38:850 (3,4,5,6,7) - I think you should keep the same distance spacing that you have previously in this section. (I think it should 1.2x, here it's 2.4x)
00:43:465 (1,2,3,4) - Make this diamond symmetrical, perhaps?
00:58:926 (9,1,2) - I think it would sound better if the slider was half a beat later so it matched with the vocals, like this: http://puu.sh/3OHOG.jpg
01:01:465 (1,2,3,4) - Symmetrical diamond?
01:02:388 (1) - Why is there a NC here?
01:02:619 (1) - This slider feels awkward, nothing in the music warrants it note there. Maybe change the rhythm to this? http://puu.sh/3OHB9.jpg
01:05:157 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - This diamond is symmetrical, but none of the others are xD
01:21:542 (1) - This spinner feels awkward to me in all the difficulties.

Overall, the OD, CS, and drain rate all seem a little low to me, especially coupled with the approach rate.

Insane

00:05:157 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - The first combo doesn't follow the lyrics, but the second one does. I'd change the first combo so it follows the lyrics as closely as the second combo does.
00:13:234 (5,6) - These feel awkward to me.
00:20:388 (3,4,5) and 00:21:311 (6,7,8,9) - The difference in distance between these sets of notes is weird. (the first looks like your previous streams, but the second one is spaced out more and then is stacked at the end)
00:26:850 (1,2) - Make the first slider the same speed as the second one.
00:59:157 (1,2,3,4) - I'd move 1 to be off of the triple, or manually stack the triple to go up and to the left, the way it is now looks bad, because the first note isn't stacked with the rest. Example of what I mean by manually stack: http://puu.sh/3OJwj.jpg (Use a grid level of 4)
01:23:157 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I'd make the sliders symmetrical vertically as well.
01:29:619 (1) - Make this note symmetrical with the rest of the combo. (Use 5 as a guide point, reflect it vertically and move 1 to match it)

Another319

I have no comments, very well done! (I do realize you're the person who asked for the mod, but I have nothing to say... (._.) )
Topic Starter
- Kevin
Thx for modding TeriosShadow, Followed everything.
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