Frostmourne wrote:

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just change BG to 1024x768 and I will bubble

1. Why don't you add " ending " to tags ? As you know, it is ending song of this game.

1. HP Drain rate -1. The same as it is a little difficult for beginners. i guess it prevents the player from fail.
2. 00:30:334 (3) - Flow suggestion: feels better to move (3) up like this my suggestion ,it will flow more naturally.
   
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3. 00:34:334 (1) - add a whistle to the head of the slider.
4. 01:07:788 (3) - hmm.. it is better to bend slider to the opposite direction for the flow and design imo.
5. 01:49:970 (1) - ^ same as above

1. 00:07:243 (4) - i don't know why you followed the vocal only here. it is better to follow the background sound same as your previous part. so you should consider remaking 1/2 slider here, like this
   
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2. 00:19:243 (4,5) - i prefer to put more jump :3 same as here 00:27:970 (4,5) -
3. 00:51:061 (1,2,3,4,5) - 5 hits ... i wish you will remake this part. but this is a matter of taste. aha
4. 01:26:697 (1) - missing a clap
5. 01:41:061 (4,5) - ^ please put more jump again.
6. 01:57:606 (2) - remove a finish here since it follows nothing.
7. 02:30:697 (1) - add a finish to the head of the slider here to follow the crash cymbal in the music.
8. 02:49:970 (2) - same
9. 02:59:606 - i feel kinda empty here, it is better to use 1/2 rhythm for playing same as your previous 5-hits part (00:51:424 (5,6) - ,02:07:061 (5,6) - ). so please put a note here.
10. 03:18:515 - how about adding more finish sound for the climax ? will be more interesting

1. 00:53:424 (2) - add a whistle. please check here 00:58:879 (1,2) -
2. 00:59:606 - ^
3. 01:05:061 (2) - ^, and you should be able to apply my suggestion for the rest of the all part ... #2 kiai, #3
4. 03:20:152 - finish
   nothing to say ... excellent :3

alacat wrote:

Hi

[Hard]

1. 00:07:243 (4) - i don't know why you followed the vocal only here. it is better to follow the background sound same as your previous part. so you should consider remaking 1/2 slider here, like this nice!
   
   img

   
2. 00:19:243 (4,5) - i prefer to put more jump :3 same as here 00:27:970 (4,5) - fixed!
3. 00:51:061 (1,2,3,4,5) - 5 hits ... i wish you will remake this part. but this is a matter of taste. aha fixed!
4. 01:26:697 (1) - missing a clap nice!
5. 01:41:061 (4,5) - ^ please put more jump again. fixed!
6. 01:57:606 (2) - remove a finish here since it follows nothing. fixed!
7. 02:30:697 (1) - add a finish to the head of the slider here to follow the crash cymbal in the music. nice!
8. 02:49:970 (2) - same fixed!
9. 02:59:606 - i feel kinda empty here, it is better to use 1/2 rhythm for playing same as your previous 5-hits part (00:51:424 (5,6) - ,02:07:061 (5,6) - ). so please put a note here. nice! add note!
10. 03:18:515 - how about adding more finish sound for the climax ? will be more interesting fixed!スライダーの頭にfinish追加しました!

that's all i got. whenever you're ready, call me back for recheck.

alacat wrote:

Hi

[General]

1. Why don't you add " ending " to tags ? As you know, it is ending song of this game. fixed

[Normal]

1. HP Drain rate -1. The same as it is a little difficult for beginners. i guess it prevents the player from fail. fixed
2. 00:30:334 (3) - Flow suggestion: feels better to move (3) up like this my suggestion ,it will flow more naturally. fixed
   
   img

   
3. 00:34:334 (1) - add a whistle to the head of the slider. ここはno changeでorz
4. 01:07:788 (3) - hmm.. it is better to bend slider to the opposite direction for the flow and design imo. fixed
5. 01:49:970 (1) - ^ same as above ^

[Insane]

1. 00:53:424 (2) - add a whistle. please check here 00:58:879 (1,2) - fixed
2. 00:59:606 - ^ fixed
3. 01:05:061 (2) - ^, and you should be able to apply my suggestion for the rest of the all part ... #2 kiai, #3 fixed
4. 03:20:152 - finish fixed
   nothing to say ... excellent :3

that's all i got. whenever you're ready, call me back for recheck.

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alacat wrote:

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