1. Inconsistency in widescreen storyboard support. Please uncheck this option in Easy, Normal, and Hard difficulties.
   
2. 03:23:444 - Didn't you want to end the kiai here? If not it's fine, I just thought it could be mistake.

1. 00:33:216 (5) - Remove whistle? It's loud and not in pattern.
   
2. 00:33:387 (1) - Whistle missing from head perhaps.
   
3. 00:37:501 (1) - Clap on end.
   
4. 00:44:701 - How about use 1.25 SV here. Then 1.5 SV at 00:45:044. Then 2.0 at 00:45:387. Will be more smooth.
   
5. 00:44:801 - Unused green line. It's also unsnapped. Might as well remove it.
   
6. 00:45:730 (5) - I like NC here it is more clean imo. Also you can try to shape stream to follow pattern given from 00:44:359 (1,2,3,4). It might look nicer:
   
   Example

   
7. 00:59:959 (5) - Clap here on purpose?
   
8. 01:44:359 (1) - Clap?
   
9. 01:54:301 (1) - Whistle on head.
   
10. 01:55:673 (1) - Finish on head.
    
11. 02:43:844 (2,3) - Hard to understand this rhythm because music makes player want to click at 02:44:016 because that is strong beat. I suggest use different rhythm. Maybe move 3 to 02:44:016 and extend by 1/4.
    
    Suggestion

    

1. 00:44:787 - Useless green line. Also unsnapped.
   
2. 00:44:701 - Same suggestion as Insane: use 1.25 SV here. Then 1.5 SV at 00:45:044. Then 2.0 at 00:45:387. Will be more smooth.
   
3. 00:45:730 (5) - NC if you do so in Insane. Is nice for new downbeat also.
   
4. 01:33:844 - The break is delayed in this diff, maybe is accident. Right click to remove it.
   
5. 01:43:330 (1) - Clap on end is nice.
   
6. 02:57:387 (5) - NC is nice here with vocals.
   
7. 03:00:130 (3) - NC here so change from 3/4 rhythm is more natural.

1. Consider AR+1 and OD+1. Current settings are too low.
   
2. 00:29:273 (1) - Current pattern is confusing for new players because 1 points completely away from 2. Consider this pattern instead:
   
   Example

   
3. 01:33:844 - Same as Hard, remove delayed break.
   
4. 01:52:930 (1) - Try whistle on the end.
   
5. 01:54:987 (1) - A 1/2 slider with repeat might be better here.
   
   Example

   
6. 03:00:130 (3) - Finish on head? Feels weak without imo.
   
7. 03:44:016 (1) - Soft finish on end.

1. 00:44:359 (1) - Finish missing?
   
2. 02:20:016 - Consider adding a note for consistency.
   
3. 03:00:130 (3) - Finish on head?

HiddenSwan wrote:

Instant favorite! Where can I buy this song? Seems like it was at a comic market, but there's nothing else on the site http://includeore.net/archives/1076

Lach wrote:

HiddenSwan wrote:

Instant favorite! Where can I buy this song? Seems like it was at a comic market, but there's nothing else on the site http://includeore.net/archives/1076

You download it, illegally. Most comiket goods are difficult/impossible to obtain after the event. You could try melonbooks, or perhaps jp yahoo auctions for a second-hand copy.