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Dee! feat. Nomiya Ayumi - Hito Ayumishi Unmei ni Yosete
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From my queue of normal mod
Sorry for late.
[General]
Looks fine.
[Easy]
00:35:622 (1) - 00:37:507 (1) - RNC (remove NC)
00:36:479 (2) - NC
00:41:107 (1,2,1) - ^
00:49:850 - to 01:08:707 - too much similar flow, be creative~
01:13:507 (1) - RNC
01:18:993 (1) - ^
01:24:479 (1) - ^
01:29:965 (1) - ^
01:30:993 (2) - delete the note and begin the spinner
01:51:565 (1) - RNC
01:53:965 (1) - ^
01:52:936 (3) - NC
01:55:679 - to 01:55:679 - Also too much similar flow, make some changes will be better
02:38:193 (1) - RNC
03:41:279 (2) - former sliders use NC, so please NC this
Objects are placed in a same style makes the map looks boring maybe.
[Normal]
4.5★ Normal ..
AR 5 pls with 175bpm
Suggest that every 2 long white lines, use NC
remove NC in 00:29:279 (1) - ,00:32:022 (1) - ,00:35:107 (1) - ,00:37:507 (1) - and so on
NC 00:36:479 (2) - and so on.
Remap with DS×1.0 pls
(just change the flow)
01:30:993 (2) - Also delete the note and begin the spinner
02:38:193 (1) - Not beautiful
If you'd like to make a 4.5 stars' normal, you can try more like 02:32:707 (1,2,3) -
[Hard]
01:30:993 -
02:05:279 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - a little hard to play in a hard diff
02:39:222 (1) - RNC
03:00:479 (4,5,6) - make like this pls
03:06:650 (1) - RNC and 03:06:993 (2) - NC
03:22:765 (1,2,3) - a little hard to play in a hard diff, suggest like this
[Lunatic]
Nice diff but some problems and some my suggestions.
00:49:165 (1,2,3,4) - - make players too easy to miss combo here(with the breaktime before, easy to make players fail), although 00:49:165 (1) - fit the rhythm, I suggest to change it to a 1/4 slider
03:22:765 (9) - NC
03:32:536 (4) - ^
That's all.
Good Luck with your song wwwwwwwwwwwwww.
Sorry for late.
[General]
Looks fine.
[Easy]
00:35:622 (1) - 00:37:507 (1) - RNC (remove NC)
00:36:479 (2) - NC
00:41:107 (1,2,1) - ^
00:49:850 - to 01:08:707 - too much similar flow, be creative~
01:13:507 (1) - RNC
01:18:993 (1) - ^
01:24:479 (1) - ^
01:29:965 (1) - ^
01:30:993 (2) - delete the note and begin the spinner
01:51:565 (1) - RNC
01:53:965 (1) - ^
01:52:936 (3) - NC
01:55:679 - to 01:55:679 - Also too much similar flow, make some changes will be better
02:38:193 (1) - RNC
03:41:279 (2) - former sliders use NC, so please NC this
Objects are placed in a same style makes the map looks boring maybe.
[Normal]
4.5★ Normal ..
AR 5 pls with 175bpm
Suggest that every 2 long white lines, use NC
remove NC in 00:29:279 (1) - ,00:32:022 (1) - ,00:35:107 (1) - ,00:37:507 (1) - and so on
NC 00:36:479 (2) - and so on.
Remap with DS×1.0 pls
(just change the flow)01:30:993 (2) - Also delete the note and begin the spinner
02:38:193 (1) - Not beautiful
If you'd like to make a 4.5 stars' normal, you can try more like 02:32:707 (1,2,3) -
[Hard]
01:30:993 -
02:05:279 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - a little hard to play in a hard diff
02:39:222 (1) - RNC
03:00:479 (4,5,6) - make like this pls
03:06:650 (1) - RNC and 03:06:993 (2) - NC
03:22:765 (1,2,3) - a little hard to play in a hard diff, suggest like this
[Lunatic]
Nice diff but some problems and some my suggestions.
important
put some notes/sliders (bottom/top) (left/right) to make your map not too close together.
put some notes/sliders (bottom/top) (left/right) to make your map not too close together.
00:49:165 (1,2,3,4) - - make players too easy to miss combo here(with the breaktime before, easy to make players fail), although 00:49:165 (1) - fit the rhythm, I suggest to change it to a 1/4 slider
03:22:765 (9) - NC
03:32:536 (4) - ^
That's all.
Good Luck with your song wwwwwwwwwwwwww.
Topic Starter
Insane and Hard were fixed some.
thx for mod~
thx for mod~
Decided to mod this, since I like the song.
Please take the time to answer to my suggestions, thanks!
Let's goo!
General thoughts:
Please take the time to answer to my suggestions, thanks!
Let's goo!
General thoughts:
- Nothing I guess
- Why are you using OD1 and HP1? I think you could raise these two (OD and HP) by one tick because it would make the diff spread more equal and Easy-Diff wont feel ''so easy''.
- 00:29:279 (3,1) - Not sure if this blanket is perfect, I think it could use some improvement but not sure :3
- 00:51:222 (1,2,1) - I wouldn't do this, maybe like this? It would also improve the flow I think! (remember to create a perfect blanket with (1) and (2) after this!)
- 01:01:850 (2) - The current placement isn't that great imo, since you haven't used much of downcurve I suggest you move this note somewhere around x:168 y:112
- 01:07:679 (1,2,1) - It's kinda like the suggestion before, but let me show you an example how I would do it, it would also improve the flow I think! Make sure to create a pefect blanket with 1 and 2 then.
- 02:07:679 (2) - I dislike the place of this note, I suggest you move this note to x:112 y:72 for better flow?
- 02:11:793 (2) - Same as above^ Move a bit right.
- 03:03:907 (4,1) - I think this blanket could use some improvement
- 03:09:050 (3,1) - ^
- 03:17:622 (3,1,2,3,4) - Here's how I would arrenge them because this way I wont feel the awkward with 03:17:965 (1,2,3) -
- 03:44:022 (1) - How about add a finish?
- I actually liked this normal, didn't find anything much, just fix these:
- 03:02:878 (1) - Object's end not snapped
- 03:04:935 (2) - ^
- 03:05:621 (1) - ^
- 03:09:735 (1) - ^
- 03:10:421 (2) - ^
- 03:12:478 (1) - ^
- 03:15:221 (1) - ^
- 03:17:279 (2) - ^
- 03:19:335 (1) - ^
- Use Ar8 because it's easier to read this!
- I really don't want to change your mapping style here so I won't bother modding it like I would prefer, you understand? So I'm gonna point out some things or errors~
- 00:49:165 (2) - Pretty sure you could NC here.
- 01:14:193 (3) - I think you could use the same shape of slider like 01:13:507 (1,2) - . It really doesn't fit (atleast for me)
- 01:17:279 (1,2,3) - I think this would fit much better:
- 02:05:965 (1,2) - I honestly think you could use just a normal stream here, I think it's rather boring that you're using this same thing over and over again.
- 02:22:765 (3) - I suggest you move this note to x:256 y:40 because it would be equal distance between (1)'s start and (3)'s end, also it wouldn't seem so stuffed with (1).
- 03:20:022 (2) - Might look good but distance?
- Check AiMod because there's alot of unsnapped things!
- 00:32:193 (1,2) - I think you have missed a note between these notes since the music screams for triple.
- 00:33:736 (2,3) - Unnecessary overlap
- 00:36:136 (2,3) - ^
- 02:48:136 (2) - Move it a bit closer to (1) because then people notice it better that this slider is on blue tick and not red
- 02:57:651 (2) - ^
- 02:58:336 (5) - ^
- I really liked your patterns when the kiai ended :3
- I enoyed this diff :3
Topic Starter
SPOILER
[quote="Asphyxia"]Decided to mod this, since I like the song.
Please take the time to answer to my suggestions, thanks!
Let's goo!
General thoughts:
Normal>
Please take the time to answer to my suggestions, thanks!
Let's goo!
General thoughts:
- Nothing I guess
- Why are you using OD1 and HP1? I think you could raise these two (OD and HP) by one tick because it would make the diff spread more equal and Easy-Diff wont feel ''so easy''. okayy~
- 00:29:279 (3,1) - Not sure if this blanket is perfect, I think it could use some improvement but not sure :3
- 00:51:222 (1,2,1) - I wouldn't do this, maybe like this? It would also improve the flow I think! (remember to create a perfect blanket with (1) and (2) after this!) fixed
- 01:01:850 (2) - The current placement isn't that great imo, since you haven't used much of downcurve I suggest you move this note somewhere around x:168 y:112 fixed
- 01:07:679 (1,2,1) - It's kinda like the suggestion before, but let me show you an example how I would do it, it would also improve the flow I think! Make sure to create a pefect blanket with 1 and 2 then. fixed
- 02:07:679 (2) - I dislike the place of this note, I suggest you move this note to x:112 y:72 for better flow? fixed
- 02:11:793 (2) - Same as above^ Move a bit right.
- 03:03:907 (4,1) - I think this blanket could use some improvement fixed
- 03:09:050 (3,1) - ^ fixed
- 03:17:622 (3,1,2,3,4) - Here's how I would arrenge them because this way I wont feel the awkward with 03:17:965 (1,2,3) - improved
- 03:44:022 (1) - How about add a finish?
Normal>
- I actually liked this normal, didn't find anything much, just fix these: fixed all
- 03:02:878 (1) - Object's end not snapped
- 03:04:935 (2) - ^
- 03:05:621 (1) - ^
- 03:09:735 (1) - ^
- 03:10:421 (2) - ^
- 03:12:478 (1) - ^
- 03:15:221 (1) - ^
- 03:17:279 (2) - ^
- 03:19:335 (1) - ^
- Use Ar8 because it's easier to read this! ok
- I really don't want to change your mapping style here so I won't bother modding it like I would prefer, you understand? So I'm gonna point out some things or errors~
- 00:49:165 (2) - Pretty sure you could NC here. fixed
- 01:14:193 (3) - I think you could use the same shape of slider like 01:13:507 (1,2) - . It really doesn't fit (atleast for me) fixed
- 01:17:279 (1,2,3) - I think this would fit much better:
- 02:05:965 (1,2) - I honestly think you could use just a normal stream here, I think it's rather boring that you're using this same thing over and over again. improved
- 02:22:765 (3) - I suggest you move this note to x:256 y:40 because it would be equal distance between (1)'s start and (3)'s end, also it wouldn't seem so stuffed with (1). fixed
- 03:20:022 (2) - Might look good but distance?
- Check AiMod because there's alot of unsnapped things! ok
- 00:32:193 (1,2) - I think you have missed a note between these notes since the music screams for triple. not need. I caught other sound in here.
- 00:33:736 (2,3) - Unnecessary overlap but nothing problem.keeping for now.
- 00:36:136 (2,3) - ^ ^
- 02:48:136 (2) - Move it a bit closer to (1) because then people notice it better that this slider is on blue tick and not red not problem imo
- 02:57:651 (2) - ^
- 02:58:336 (5) - ^
- I really liked your patterns when the kiai ended :3
- I enoyed this diff :3
thx for mod~
:3
Cool map.
Things to consider:
Offset 5959 (-6).
[Lunatic]
01:58:422 (1) - Clap at the end.
02:11:108 (4) - Consider adding a clap here.
02:26:536 (1,2) - Very hard to read and plays bad. Suggested pattern: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1005891
02:27:565 (3,4) - This spacing also feels too far. Easy to fix though: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1005893 , NOTE: I moved (6) as well, to keep the spacing.
02:43:851 (2,3,1) - This spacing feels too close and weird, I suggest you move the slider 3 further away from both previous slider and the next circle.
Suggested pattern: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1005894
02:44:708 (3) - Consider removing this clap because you didn't use it from 02:42:307 ~ 02:44:536. Better consistency.
02:50:193 (5) - Consider removing this clap too, you didn't use it in the patterns before it.
02:58:765 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Needs bigger spacing between each note. It's very hard to read and plays awkward. Just make them bigger squares and it's nice.
Nice job, loving it!
Things to consider:
Offset 5959 (-6).
[Lunatic]
01:58:422 (1) - Clap at the end.
02:11:108 (4) - Consider adding a clap here.
02:26:536 (1,2) - Very hard to read and plays bad. Suggested pattern: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1005891
02:27:565 (3,4) - This spacing also feels too far. Easy to fix though: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1005893 , NOTE: I moved (6) as well, to keep the spacing.
02:43:851 (2,3,1) - This spacing feels too close and weird, I suggest you move the slider 3 further away from both previous slider and the next circle.
Suggested pattern: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1005894
02:44:708 (3) - Consider removing this clap because you didn't use it from 02:42:307 ~ 02:44:536. Better consistency.
02:50:193 (5) - Consider removing this clap too, you didn't use it in the patterns before it.
02:58:765 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Needs bigger spacing between each note. It's very hard to read and plays awkward. Just make them bigger squares and it's nice.
Nice job, loving it!
Topic Starter
so fast w
choosen v2! thank you!
choosen v2! thank you!
wow thank you too!Frostmourne wrote:
also mod from me to come maybe next week~
Hi Mixagji,
The colours you're using seem a little iffy to me, I'm not feeling the florescent picks for this background (which I love btw). I'd suggest something like red, crimson and maybe purple/orange.
Normal
All good!
Hard:
2.06.664 feels really awkward to move too.
The colours you're using seem a little iffy to me, I'm not feeling the florescent picks for this background (which I love btw). I'd suggest something like red, crimson and maybe purple/orange.
Normal
All good!
Hard:
2.06.664 feels really awkward to move too.
Sorry for late
General
great
Easy
00:32:016 (2) - clap repeater
00:34:759 (3) - clap tail
00:35:616 (1) - whistle tail?
00:36:473 (2) - clap tail
00:41:101 (1) - whistle tail?
They feel empty and shouldn't be like that.
Normal
later
Hard
later
Insane
Amazing
Will be back soon!
General
great
Easy
00:32:016 (2) - clap repeater
00:34:759 (3) - clap tail
00:35:616 (1) - whistle tail?
00:36:473 (2) - clap tail
00:41:101 (1) - whistle tail?
They feel empty and shouldn't be like that.
Normal
later
Hard
later
Insane
Amazing
Will be back soon!
sorry for late orz.....
checked out and ok! so here
checked out and ok! so here
really nice
star before ranked
star before ranked
Hello Mixagji!
[General]
Awesome map. ^_^
[General]
- Inconsistency in widescreen storyboard support. Please uncheck this option in Easy, Normal, and Hard difficulties.
- 03:23:444 - Didn't you want to end the kiai here? If not it's fine, I just thought it could be mistake.
- 00:33:216 (5) - Remove whistle? It's loud and not in pattern.
- 00:33:387 (1) - Whistle missing from head perhaps.
- 00:37:501 (1) - Clap on end.
- 00:44:701 - How about use 1.25 SV here. Then 1.5 SV at 00:45:044. Then 2.0 at 00:45:387. Will be more smooth.
- 00:44:801 - Unused green line. It's also unsnapped. Might as well remove it.
- 00:45:730 (5) - I like NC here it is more clean imo. Also you can try to shape stream to follow pattern given from 00:44:359 (1,2,3,4). It might look nicer:
- 00:59:959 (5) - Clap here on purpose?
- 01:44:359 (1) - Clap?
- 01:54:301 (1) - Whistle on head.
- 01:55:673 (1) - Finish on head.
- 02:43:844 (2,3) - Hard to understand this rhythm because music makes player want to click at 02:44:016 because that is strong beat. I suggest use different rhythm. Maybe move 3 to 02:44:016 and extend by 1/4.
- 00:44:787 - Useless green line. Also unsnapped.
- 00:44:701 - Same suggestion as Insane: use 1.25 SV here. Then 1.5 SV at 00:45:044. Then 2.0 at 00:45:387. Will be more smooth.
- 00:45:730 (5) - NC if you do so in Insane. Is nice for new downbeat also.
- 01:33:844 - The break is delayed in this diff, maybe is accident. Right click to remove it.
- 01:43:330 (1) - Clap on end is nice.
- 02:57:387 (5) - NC is nice here with vocals.
- 03:00:130 (3) - NC here so change from 3/4 rhythm is more natural.
- Consider AR+1 and OD+1. Current settings are too low.
- 00:29:273 (1) - Current pattern is confusing for new players because 1 points completely away from 2. Consider this pattern instead:
- 01:33:844 - Same as Hard, remove delayed break.
- 01:52:930 (1) - Try whistle on the end.
- 01:54:987 (1) - A 1/2 slider with repeat might be better here.
- 03:00:130 (3) - Finish on head? Feels weak without imo.
- 03:44:016 (1) - Soft finish on end.
- 00:44:359 (1) - Finish missing?
- 02:20:016 - Consider adding a note for consistency.
- 03:00:130 (3) - Finish on head?
Awesome map. ^_^
Topic Starter
omg what a helpful mod!!!
thank you for modding!!
all fixed!
thank you for modding!!
all fixed!
gratz!!!
good map!!!
good map!!!
Isn't singer name around the wrong way? Album also missing from tag http://vgmdb.net/album/30816
Topic Starter
おめでとうございます〜
album in tag not needed, but it can be
I'm aware that 野宮あゆみ is in the order or Nomiya Ayumi, but her preferred romanization seems to be the opposite order, from the english itunes release of the bemani cds and almost every result for her name online.
I'm aware that 野宮あゆみ is in the order or Nomiya Ayumi, but her preferred romanization seems to be the opposite order, from the english itunes release of the bemani cds and almost every result for her name online.
Congratz!!! <3 I like this song
cool song congratz
おめでとうございます
Gratzz!! Mixagji and Frostmorune!!
gratzs
I found that I have modded it before >.<
I found that I have modded it before >.<
omedeto
congratz~
YES!
wish it could have a note at 02:00:044 because I keep hitting that ghost triplet almost every time
still a great map tho
still a great map tho
Instant favorite! Where can I buy this song? Seems like it was at a comic market, but there's nothing else on the site http://includeore.net/archives/1076
You download it, illegally. Most comiket goods are difficult/impossible to obtain after the event. You could try melonbooks, or perhaps jp yahoo auctions for a second-hand copy.HiddenSwan wrote:
Instant favorite! Where can I buy this song? Seems like it was at a comic market, but there's nothing else on the site http://includeore.net/archives/1076
Ahh, that sux, but thanks!Lach wrote:
You download it, illegally. Most comiket goods are difficult/impossible to obtain after the event. You could try melonbooks, or perhaps jp yahoo auctions for a second-hand copy.HiddenSwan wrote:
Instant favorite! Where can I buy this song? Seems like it was at a comic market, but there's nothing else on the site http://includeore.net/archives/1076