1. Easy (2.58 stars, 184 notes)
2. Hard (4.85 stars, 383 notes)
3. Normal (4.17 stars, 265 notes)

yfvail wrote:

柑橘今后要成为名图先抢了2L再说

mintong89 wrote:

E喵神麻婆！ ;w;

Fycho wrote:

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Hi~E喵咱来帮你mod图了

Black: feel free to ignore
Blue: might consider
Red: Unrankable issue

[General]
Hard和Normal出现了变速滑条，加NC，或者干脆别变速感觉不需要 Nromal去掉了变速 HardNC表示

[比较H的]

• 00:13:757 - 加note+clap和前面一样音效对称点 fixed
  00:16:114 (1) - 转盘好别扭感觉漏了好多音，00:16:114 (7) - 这里加滑条到00:16:542 -，然后再转盘好点，接下去的休息时间map下吧 前面转盘拿掉 break后面一半map了
  00:37:757 (1) - 加个滑条到后面红线把红线上的1去掉 考虑中 如果还有人提再改
  00:51:257 - 加note fixed
  00:51:471 - 去掉note 跟上面一起改滑条了
  01:04:114 - 加note 跟歌词
  01:07:114 (5) - 改成短滑条 fixed
  01:34:114 - 加note 考虑中
  02:07:007 (5) - 虽然音准不过读起来好别扭，要不要跟鼓点试试 ;w;骗人1PC多好
  02:14:400 - 加个note，这类没音的地方加个note打起来顺点 个人觉得不怎么坑
  02:21:257 - 同上 个人觉得不怎么坑
  02:24:042 - 加note 没鼓点没人声加了会很奇怪的样子？
  02:47:185 (2) - 最好别stack fixed
  02:49:971 (5) - 间距，读图容易出错 fixed
  02:58:114 - 加note 考虑中
  02:58:328 - 去掉note 跟BG鼓点;w;

[比较N的]

• OD-1 AR+1 fixed
  00:37:757 (2) - 这个滑条往后移半拍,并NC，00:37:114 (1) - 去掉NC 保留空拍，在后面加了
  00:37:114 (1) - 加note ^
  00:51:257 - 重音不要空，加note fixed
  01:05:828 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 换个梗吧感觉节奏单一比较枯燥 换了个梗（什么是梗._.
  01:12:685 (1,2,3,4,5) - n难度这样难了吧？ fixed
  01:26:400 (5) - 拉对称.. fixed
  02:13:542 (3) - 改成单折返，02:14:185 - 加滑条到后面一根红线，02:14:828 - 加滑条到后面白线 fixed
  02:16:971 (3) - 漏音，改成短滑条并02:16:971 (3) - 加个note 跟歌词
  02:33:257 (1) - O.O 肿么了
  02:36:685 (1,2,3,4,5) - ;w; fixed
  03:04:114 - 重音上放个note，转盘后移半拍，类似最好也改下w 再说

[比较E的]

• 00:10:114 (3) - 这种在EZ大丈夫？只有一只大概没问题吧？
  00:12:685 (4) - 感觉音效略吵啊~ fixed
  00:37:542 - 加note fixed
  00:40:971 (3) - 中间明明是一句话结束，感觉不要用折返比较好
  00:49:542 (3) - 滑条到白线结束，00:49:542 (3) - 加滑条到后面第二跟白线结束 跟人声
  中间KIAI做的不错，就是感觉那个whistle有点吵 坐等音效大神
  02:05:400 (1,2) - 这样在EZ大丈夫，觉得有点难了 砍掉一个
  02:29:400 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1) - EZ不要出现这么多单点 fixed

[Other]
喵~音效什么请大神们帮mod吧，我觉得有点吵，我就主要mod节奏了，排列和滑条美观度稍微修改修改吧，滑条那个点点拉拉好;w;我的镜音不可能发出这么萌的声音

祝早日ranked 借你吉言了~

yusoman wrote:

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说好的来帮你mod，你也来帮我mod哦
[EZ]
cs-1 EZ CS3不少见吧？
01:34:328 (5) - 这个条听起来好别扭的，改短或者变成circle吧 fixed
02:00:900 (4) - 同上 跟着人声倒是不怎么别扭
02:14:614 (4) - 同上 ^
02:58:328 (6) - 同上 fixed
02:33:257 (2) - 长度改短一半，然后后面可以加个circle，或者连着后面的3一起变成滑条，感觉那么长节奏完全没了 有二分拍太难了
02:47:828 (4) - 这地方是两句话啊，用一个折返总感觉不舒服 fixed
另外整体感觉空拍不太够，排的有点太紧凑了，可以适度的减少点circle

[NM]
00:09:257 (1,2) - 这地方换折返吧 考虑一下
00:13:114 (3) - 这个还是和前面的一样用短滑条吧 fixed
00:35:400 (1,2) - 换滑条 哈？这里有(1)么。。
00:41:400 (3) - NC从这开始比较好吧 fixed
00:58:114 (1) - 缩短一半移到后面的红线（00:58:328）掉音了不好
01:00:685 (2) - 缩短一半，然后把它挪到后面的红线上（01:00:900）^
01:04:114 (1) - 移动到后面红线上（01:04:328）节奏fixed
01:10:971 (1,2) - 都换成半拍的短滑条 增大难度了吧
01:16:757 加个circle fixed
01:20:828 (4) - 换成两个circle 改成单个circle了，后面没音 放note没道理
01:57:900 加circle fixed
01:59:400 (2) - 折返不舒服，取缔 考虑一下
02:07:542 (1) - 取缔NC fixed
02:14:828 (5) - 长条换circle 换成短滑条了
02:19:971 (2) - 缩短到一半 会漏音
02:57:257 (2) - 这个双折返换成单折返+circle比较好 fixed
02:58:757 (4) - 没这个节奏吧，取缔这个circle fixed
03:01:328 (3) - 感觉上改变下弯曲方向比较舒服 不怎么反人类了

[HD]
00:16:114 (1) - 缩短到前面红线（00:16:757）跟人声
00:17:185 加circle 没东西可跟啊._.
00:26:185 (2,3,4) - 整体往前挪半拍（2挪到00:25:971）你去掉note听听BGM
00:48:685 (2) - 出界 开EZ测试过没有note出界
00:50:185 (1,2) - 取缔circle，拖长滑条 考虑一下
00:51:042 (3) - 速度在这就恢复吧 ._.想不明白为啥
00:52:542 (3) - 取缔往返，保留滑条长度不变 漏音了。。
00:58:542 (1) - 听起来好乱，取缔 把没有音的地方去了
01:09:257 (2) - 出界
01:27:578 (2) - 取缔，把三连变二连 不太合适
01:37:542 (4) - 出界
02:04:114 (2) - 出界
02:36:685 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这五边形不对称重新做一下 fixed
02:37:971 (1) - 取缔NC 五边形的颜色跟背景视频外面的点颜色一样，中间跟视频中间的心颜色一样
02:40:971 (4) - 出界

差不多就这样了，总体上感觉挺好的，不过我觉得这图可以再往后做一点吧
总之祝早日rank了

gxytcgxytc wrote:

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[Easy]
02:48:685 (5,1) - 1的尾巴和5重合一下? fixed
[Normal]
00:34:542 (1,2,3,4,5) - 把4往右挪挪弄个五边形?现在这个有点歪233 哦槽 你一说我才发现我居然做成了五边形 fixed
00:41:828 (2,4,5,1,2) - ^2的尾巴歪了 fixed
01:13:971 (4) - 和02:37:971 (1) - 一个NC一个不NC 闹那样=A= fixed
02:10:971 (1) - NC貌似没必要的样子? fixed
02:17:828 (1) - ^ fixed
[Hard]
00:07:542 (2) - 和00:09:471 (3) - 重合一下? fixed
00:56:400 (4,5) - 把4复制粘贴成5吧=-= 稍微有点不一样 fixed
01:07:542 (6) - NC fixed
02:28:757 (1) - Moved NC?意义何在? 表示变速._.
02:51:685 (4,5,6,7,1) - 这5个间距不一样=A= 6 7 1之间的间距略大了 fixed
02:53:400 (3,4,5,6) - 结束的位置不在一个点=A= 建议从一个点往外拉然后Ctrl g fixed
没了
我还是个渣渣;_; 已经很不错了~

KevinKang wrote:

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希望我的mod能有点帮助XD
[Easy]
00:12:685 (4) - 的尾感觉可以放在00:13:542 (4) - 听起来在那里已经结束了这一段
然后为了easy的连贯性在后面加两个slider和一个note吧 fixed
00:44:828 (4) - 跟前面的00:37:542 (4) - 一样干脆也加个note吧 fixed
00:49:542 (3,4) - 我觉的放在easy里有点难了 试试http://puu.sh/3dVcp 觉得不坑
00:56:400 (3,4) - 同理可得 缩短slider在00:57:257 (4) - 加个note吧 ^
01:10:971 (1) - 这个在下一个白条就结束了吧~中间那段小旋律什么也不做留着听听也不错XD fixed
01:33:257 (4) - 缩短slider 同上我觉得这种节奏没什么好坑的
01:34:114 (5) - http://puu.sh/3dVtq.PNG
01:39:257 (1) - 前面缩短加个slider（不是很确定这样好不好XD）
01:59:828 (3,4) - 同理可得
02:13:542 (3,4) - 同理
02:20:400 (3,4) - 同理
02:33:257 (2) - 可以下面去点三个点成一个三角形 加那么多单点干啥
02:34:971 (1) - 到下一个白线就停了吧 fixed
02:38:400 (1) - 这里开始是副歌部分减小一点音量大概好一点吧 fixed
02:57:257 (5,6) - 换成来回的slider和一个note 考虑中
03:03:257 (1) - 同01:39:257 (1) -
改完以后star rating狂涨啊

[Normal]
00:12:257 (1) - 我觉的这个不需要哨音 fixed
00:57:257 (3) - 跟后面的01:03:042 (2) - 一样 加个note感觉更好打一点 fixed
00:59:614 (4) - 这里还是来个note吧 fixed
01:01:328 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/3dW4X.PNG
01:04:114 (4) - 加note更好打一点 没东西跟啊
01:09:900 (2) - 追求鼓点的话放01:09:685 (2) - 再想想
01:15:257 (3) - 总觉得有点不顺; ; 拐回来了
01:38:828 (3) - 快结束了还是别放哨音吧 fixed
02:00:257 (4) - 结尾可以拖长一点 那个音其实拖长了所以没关系吧 0.0不太合适
02:14:828 (5) - 这个slider我会拖长把前面的那个slider的尾给包住 我更喜欢切分
normal后半段那个音效超级喜欢

[Hard]
00:10:971 (1) - 这个加速打得我措手不及 加了过渡
00:13:114 (3) - 这个感觉不需要哨音 fixed
00:24:042 (1,2) - 这里两个拍手的音加note吧 从乐句起比较好的样子？
00:25:971 (2) - 加个note吧 fixed
00:26:185 (3) - 去掉 跟背景视频的星星~
00:26:400 (3) - 开头的重音加个note吧 ^
00:35:828 (1,2,1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/3dWxU.PNG 更好看一点 太跳了吧 不过换了种改法
01:10:114 (4) - 我应该会被这个坑到的~我感觉加速做为一种哽在no mods 玩的时候还是不要这么难~建议稍微减缓一点 ok不加速了
01:27:471 (1,2,3) - 我觉得可以铺开来 考虑
02:24:685 (1,2) - 这个渐进提速 没什么意义啊
02:38:400 (1) - 副歌减点音量吧 fixed
02:46:114 (3) - 这个我觉的有点别扭（我也不怎么擅长排布，尽量忽略掉吧） 微调
02:57:685 (3) - 这个歪了复制前面的第一个slider吧 fixed

我是新人~万一有什么不对的~忽略了吧
祝愿神麻婆EmingK越来越神XD

1. Red - Unrankable
2. Purple - Highly recommended
3. Black - Just suggestion

• General

1. Unrankable check: No unrankable
2. Timing check: Fine
   
   Easy
3. 01:37:971 (1) - turning point move to 392:344
4. 对我来说这个难度已经做的相当好了，音效也还不错，就是Normal时clap声音小了点
   1PC 3模式差点ss

   
   
   Normal
5. CS-1
6. 00:37:757 (6) - clap at turning point
7. 00:51:257 (7) - 移到00:51:471 - 更好
8. 01:29:400 (3) - 滑条whistle
9. 01:31:971 (2) - delete whistle
10. 02:53:828 (4) - delete whistle at end
11. 03:01:971 (1) - 开头whistle
    
    Hard
12. 00:10:971 (1) - delete whistle at end
13. 00:11:828 (4) - whistle
14. 00:14:400 (2) - ^
15. 00:15:257 (4) - ^
16. 00:16:114 (1) - 整个滑条whistle
17. 00:17:828 - add a note
18. 00:31:542 (1) - finish
19. 00:45:257 (1) - 开头finish
20. 00:59:400 (1) - delete NC
21. 01:02:828 (1) - ^
22. 01:05:400 (1) - NC move to 01:05:828 (2) -
23. 02:15:685 (1) - NC move to 02:16:114 (2) -
24. 02:28:757 (1) - delete NC
25. 02:53:828 (4) - 整个滑条whistle
    
    总得来说谱的很好了，至少我打着蛮舒服的
    加油~祝早日ranked

OniJAM wrote:

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Mod req from my queue~

1. Red - Unrankable
2. Purple - Highly recommended
3. Black - Just suggestion

• General

1. Unrankable check: No unrankable
2. Timing check: Fine
   
   Easy
3. 01:37:971 (1) - turning point move to 392:344
4. 对我来说这个难度已经做的相当好了，音效也还不错，就是Normal时clap声音小了点
   1PC 3模式差点ss

   
   
   Normal
5. CS-1
6. 00:37:757 (6) - clap at turning point
7. 00:51:257 (7) - 移到00:51:471 - 更好
8. 01:29:400 (3) - 滑条whistle
9. 01:31:971 (2) - delete whistle
10. 02:53:828 (4) - delete whistle at end
11. 03:01:971 (1) - 开头whistle
    
    Hard
12. 00:10:971 (1) - delete whistle at end
13. 00:11:828 (4) - whistle
14. 00:14:400 (2) - ^
15. 00:15:257 (4) - ^
16. 00:16:114 (1) - 整个滑条whistle
17. 00:17:828 - add a note
18. 00:31:542 (1) - finish
19. 00:45:257 (1) - 开头finish
20. 00:59:400 (1) - delete NC
21. 01:02:828 (1) - ^
22. 01:05:400 (1) - NC move to 01:05:828 (2) -
23. 02:15:685 (1) - NC move to 02:16:114 (2) -
24. 02:28:757 (1) - delete NC
25. 02:53:828 (4) - 整个滑条whistle
    
    总得来说谱的很好了，至少我打着蛮舒服的
    加油~祝早日ranked

GrayKaiser82 wrote:

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Hi, from this queue

[Easy]
00:43:542 (3,4) - A REALLY tiny overlap, just move 4 grid left.
01:05:400 - Add note?

[Normal]
00:08:828 (5,2) - Don't let the note touch the slider.(another tiny overlap)
00:43:971 (2,1) - Overlapped, How about making a blanket?
02:12:257 (1,2) - This is confusing to players, try making another blanket.
----------------------
Sorry if my mod is short since your map is perfect, but it needs more checking.

Good luck ~

baldrace wrote:

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Hi~
reply to mod req

General
最后一段为什么不做了。。一开始两声clap声音太大，把那个音量调小一点 fixed

低难度好像没什么好说的了

Easy

01:55:542 (1) - 不是很好看，建议换个形状 fixed
00:31:542 (1) - finish fixed
00:37:971 (1) - finish fixed
01:34:971 (1) - finish fixed
01:55:542 (1) - 头finish fixed
02:02:400 (2) - 头finish fixed
02:16:114 (2) - 头finish fixed
02:37:971 (1) - finish fixed
02:58:971 (1) - finish fixed

Normal

00:31:542 (1) - finish
00:38:400 (1) - ^
还有漏的不说了
全都重加了一遍

Hard

漏finish检查一下。。 fixed

NC混乱 一般一个长白线或者两个长白线加一次，另外歌曲的调子相似的时候NC位置有必要一样，或者用作难梗提示 rechecked 全部跟句子 除了变速必需的之外都同步了

00:36:257 (1,2,3) - 不好，这三个间距可以渐大，但是3不要突然跳 fixed
00:46:757 要加个note吧 没有声音和鼓点啊._.
00:51:042 (3) - 间距，和前面保持一样吧，无谓的变间距没有意义 fixed
00:55:114 (1) - 让这个尾部和前面的2尾部叠在一起 fixed

不错了
good luck

shikyu wrote:

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Hi, from my queue
[General]
I prefer soft hitsound sampleset, it's more fit with song. this song good with combination of custom hitsound that you already use and soft hitsound fixed
if you mind to change it, change all timing to soft sampleset and rename custom hitsound to soft-hitclap, etc.
it's up to you, but if you don't want to change it, at least delete normal-hitwhistle as you can use soft whistle like this osu.ppy.sh/ss/842103 (click any note and change additon tab on left side, ex: if you change to drum, it will become drum-hitwhistle, try it)

[Easy]
avoid use 1/2 slider (like 01:20:400 (4) or 01:37:971 (1) ), not friendly with beginner, you can change it to 1/1 slider (like 01:31:542 (2) )
00:42:471 (1) - this is confusing for beginner, move to 00:42:257 and lenghten it to 00:42:685
01:10:971 (1) - this part doesn't fit with spinner, remove and fill it, maybe something like this? http://puu.sh/3shWp.jpg
01:37:971 (1,2,1) - not friendly (for (1)) and sound weird (for rest), something like this? http://puu.sh/3siay.jpg
02:22:971 (2) - again, not recommended. mapping easy should be easy of couse, so use blue tick in easy is no no. you can just make it like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/842140 and this should be applied at sliders like 02:24:685 (2) and others
I see the rest has same problem like I said above, I think you fix it by your own
all fixed

[Normal]
normal... but it's pretty streamy.
02:51:685 (3) - no, 1/4 slider like this in normal is hard, make it like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/842148 (make slider from 02:51:685 to 02:51:900 and add note at 02:52:114 ) fixed

[Hard]
I don't see why change of SV (slider velocity) multiplier should be this much, it change not in good pace of song.
00:10:971 - what 1,15x doing here? just change it to 1,3x fixed
01:34:971 (1) - confusing and not really fit, change timing to 1,3x fixed
don't forget to snap notes after change timing

Sorry not go to detailed mod but those things I mentioned above should be changed first. if there's any question don't hesitate to ask me in-game or forum PM~
that's all, good luck~

quantum-rose wrote:

调教的好残念啊

ts8zs wrote:

Hard
00:34:971 (2) - 撒……换成新的？
00:49:757 (5,6) - 换个位置？ fixed
01:13:971 (1) - 放在5下面？
话说flow很奇怪啊……
Normal
还行……有几个地方没包好……玩的时候应该不会被发现吧
00:10:971 (1) -
01:07:971 (5) - fixed
话说flow还是很奇怪啊……新一代鬼畜mapper要登场了么
算你合格吧 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/848055
Easy
00:10:114 (3) - 嘛
还有就是break太长了……一直逆时针转是错觉么？嘛……也没什么不好的……不过感觉乃的路还很漫长，加油:3