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Toyosaki Aki - Cagayake! GIRLS (TV Size)

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Papysh
259 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
Papysh
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 1 lipca 2013 at 20:08:44

Artist: Toyosaki Aki
Title: Cagayake! GIRLS (TV Size)
Source: K-ON!!
Tags: HTT Harez Houkago Tea Time
BPM: 170
Filesize: 7676kb
Play Time: 01:22
Difficulties Available:
  1. Extra (5 stars, 229 notes)
  2. H'z Hard (4,98 stars, 197 notes)
  3. Insane (5 stars, 212 notes)
  4. Normal (4,37 stars, 100 notes)
Download: Toyosaki Aki - Cagayake! GIRLS (TV Size)
Download: Toyosaki Aki - Cagayake! GIRLS (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Mapset
Suzutsukikanade Easy - Done by suzutsukikanade need hitsounding (still not uploaded)
Normal - Done by me
H'z Hard - Done by harez
Insane - Done by me
Extra - Done by me
I know this song is mapped already but i used to add my version of the song
Moe Moe changeLog :3
SPOILER
2013/05/24 --- added kiai sections
2013/05/24 --- finished insane (ready for modding)
2013/05/24 --- added normal
2013/05/25 --- updated normal
2013/05/25 --- finished normal ready for modding
2013/05/26 --- added extra difficulty (moe jumps :3)
2013/05/26 --- updated extra
2013/05/26 --- Updated extra with stream fixes
2013/05/26 --- Extra - Lowed hp to 7
2013/05/27 --- Normal/Insane/Extra - offset -25
2013/05/27 --- Added H's Hard diff By harez
2013/05/28 --- updated extra
2013/05/29 --- updated extra
2013/06/06 --- finished extra
2013/06/06 --- Updated H's hard
2013/06/08 --- Lowed OD to 9 in extra diff
2013/06/17 --- Lowed Od to 8 in extra diff
2013/06/17 --- added irreversible mod
2013/06/17 --- Added hitsounding to extra
2013/06/18 --- Added hitsounding on Insane
Mod list
SPOILER
1. Irreversible
2. RikiH_ fagt <3
3. Onisakura
4.jonathanlfj
5.-Bakari-
6.Sala-
7.toloveruu
Last edited by Papysh , edited 36 times in total.
suzutsukikanade
653 posts
Joined July 2011
suzutsukikanade
Can i make a Easy?
Papysh
259 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
Papysh

suzutsukikanade wrote:

Can i make a Easy?
Sure if i will like your diff :3
wendao
1,638 posts
Joined August 2012
wendao
update my diff please http://puu.sh/34hbe.osu :o
suzutsukikanade
653 posts
Joined July 2011
suzutsukikanade
will finish easy soon
Irreversible
osu! Alumni
4,315 posts
Joined December 2011
Irreversible
will finish easy soon she said 15 days ago :3

[General]

The kbit/s rate of your map is 128 kbit/s.. recommend is 192 kbit/s :/ Try to ask someone for a better mp3, i'm sure you can find someone (it's just, the mp3 is really bad quality)
Weird solution of your BG, try cut it down to 1024x768
You added some nice finishes! But I think some whistles would emphasize the song as well :P Try it, if you need help, ask me.
Preview time isn't the same in all diffs, please make it right!
Tags aren't the same in all diffs, please make them right! (Well, this is what it says in AI mod.. maybe it's only a spac,e please check it.) Maybe add some other tags as well.. maybe from the anime it comes from.. is it k-on? omg pls don't hit me i'm an anime noob

I make some OD AR HD suggestions, for a better map spread. feel free to ignore though


[Extra]

HP 8 please

Gameplay: XD Lol very fun i have to say! But sometimes the jumps are just way too extreme xDDD I help you getting them down somehow xD

00:09:109 (4) - If you look closely, there isn't a nice blanket, make it nicer papysh, nicer!!! xD
00:26:580 (4) - Hmm.. i like mapping to the vocals, so in my opinion this slider doesn't really fit. Try shorting it and add some more stuff to fit to the lyric!
00:32:227 (5) - moving this some grids down will create a good looking blanket :P
00:35:403 (1,1) - The stream between this. Could you try something, that looks like a nice path? Because when the slider ends, and you start the stream, well, it doesn't look good. For example: http://puu.sh/3hR0k.jpg this looks nicer than http://puu.sh/3hR1O.jpg (Please, watch over all your streams!)
00:38:227 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Nice pattern you've tried there, but it a bit overmapped. Please delete 00:39:109 (2,3,4) - and add something that fits!
Well, same as above, vocals and stuff xD What did you map this long slider to?

Hmm well it's pretty hard and it looks kinda good. . i'm wondering how it turns out after a bunch of other mods!

[Insane]

OD 8, please

00:08:933 (4) - -_- This long slider is going to annoy me. xDDD
00:30:550 - This circle is just wrong. Delete it! If you listen closely, you hear it yourself that it is weird.
Is it just me or did you add whistles here? And you didn't at extra? confused :O
Btw, try to map with 4 Grid snap, you'll get nicer blankets, and even patterns!
00:38:756 (4) - Blanket again, try move it a bit to the left and down. Not much!!
00:54:286 (6) - To the left, for blanket.
00:59:403 (10) - I feel NC here! It's just a little break, i think it would be nice to see here.

Your mapping style is pretty clean.. >< I haven't got many suggestions as well, the song is fast, your map is fast.. i like it? /me runs I think the only way to improve your map is to create something special. I saw you using many bow-shaped sliders, why not something special? Or a special rhtyhm, special streamDS, something like this.

[H'z Hard, Shouldn't it be H's Hard? xD]

AR 7, please

00:19:168 (6) - mh.. what did you map to? here? I would remove it, since i can't really see a reason why you added here.
00:38:932 (1) - Please, add some finishes here. I'm really bad at hitsounding :C And i can't see all these hitsounds errors, but i think there could be some more. (this finish is one of many, please check it again!) If you added some more, i can have a look over it if it sounds nice, if you want.

Hm it was fun to play it, and it looks clean as well.. PAPYSH HOW MANY RANKEDS DO YOU ALREADY HAVE, SAME QUESTION TO H? (who is H) Please make a spoilerbox for all changes and write something like H's Hard : by ..Mr. H xD

[NONONO, i mean NORMAL]

CS 3? This would be normal for normal.

00:29:050 (8) - NC
00:30:109 (10) - Adding a circle here would be great to lead in the next part of the song!

Well, it lacks of hitsounsd here as well. Please add some more, i can't mod it if there aren't any hitsounds!! xD
01:01:168 (3) - IN EVERY DIFF YOU USED THIS LONG SLIDER OMG -dkajsdklfjasdf-

..really nice why did you want me to mod pls


So my mod in short words: Check yo blankets and hitsounds please! The rest is super fine. Call me for a recheck after you received other mods and the Easy GD!! Good luck man, take my star!!


I need to eat, i will mod afterwards
RikiH_
1,149 posts
Joined February 2011
RikiH_
hi slavebitch<3

General

Normal is the lowest diff and it's 4,34 star rating. You must map an easy with star rating < 3 or decrease the star rating under 3

Normal

00:08:580 (2) - Please make something like this
00:47:050 (5) - Finish in the end
From here 00:47:756 to here 00:59:756 where are the hitsounds? :< Please put claps on 2nd and 4th white tick like you did before
00:57:462 - The green section is unsnapped, snap it on the red line please

H'z Hard

00:11:226 (2,1) - Stack them properly
00:14:756 (1,2) - This is weird, you should make it this way
00:18:991 (5) - Add a finish here
00:42:991 (4,5) - Please make the blanket better
01:14:226 (1) - It feels empty, I'd add a finish on the beginning maybe
01:22:609 - It sounds empty, add a note here, or add a repeat to the slider... Well, add something

Insane

00:12:639 (3) - Plz use ctrl+g on this because it flows bad :< And also stack it perfectly with previous slider
00:17:580 (1) - Terrible flow, use ctrl+j, it should fix. Add also a finish to the end
00:49:168 (1) - Move this to 91|153 for a better pattern
00:58:697 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Please avoid claps spam, my ears are hurting!
01:00:462 (2,4) - Stack these properly
01:21:109 (1) - Please make this symmetric o the center

Extra

00:14:756 (1) - Ctrl+g or it totally breaks the flow
00:15:991 (5) - The same ^
00:16:344 (1,2,3) - Please put them this way if you fixed that ^. It will help a lot the flow
00:18:991 (1) - Add a note with finish here and let the spinner start 1/4 later
00:45:286 (3) - Ctrl+g for flow
00:48:639 (3) - ^
00:50:933 (3) - ^
01:07:521 (3) - Clap at the beginning, instead of whistle
01:13:168 (6) - What? This clap is different from the others D:
01:22:344 (4) - It sounds bad, end it 1/2 earlier and add a finish in the end

______________________

Nice map, but I hate the song, my ears are bleeding. Good luck bitch<3
Irreversible
osu! Alumni
4,315 posts
Joined December 2011
Irreversible

RikiH_ wrote:

hi slavebitch<3

General

Normal is the lowest diff and it's 4,34 star rating. You must map an easy with star rating < 3 or decrease the star rating under 3
how could I not get that u.u xD
Onisakura
170 posts
Joined October 2012
Onisakura
IRC modding
23:36 Onisakura: hi :3
23:36 Onisakura: have a sec?
23:36 Papysh: sure :3
23:36 Papysh: o3o
23:37 Papysh: mod for mod right
23:37 Papysh: ?
23:37 Papysh: XD
23:37 Onisakura: as u wish
23:37 Onisakura: so
23:37 Onisakura: normal
23:38 Papysh: so normal?
23:38 Papysh: XD
23:38 Papysh: oh wait
23:38 Papysh: hmm?
23:38 Papysh: o3o
23:38 Onisakura: check 1 kiai
23:39 Papysh: wai
23:39 Papysh: wait
23:39 Papysh: are you modding?
23:39 Papysh: now
23:39 Papysh: XD
23:39 Onisakura: yep..irc modding
23:39 Papysh: oh yeah
23:39 Papysh: wait
23:39 Papysh: then clean window
23:39 Papysh: ;_;
23:39 Papysh: please
23:40 Papysh: sorry that temperature is going
23:40 Papysh: i mean its making me insane
23:40 Papysh: so hot
23:40 Papysh: oh yeah
23:40 Papysh: im ready
23:40 Onisakura: ok..so first kiai in normal..u set starts at 00:08:075
23:41 Onisakura: 00:07:874 - correct
23:42 Papysh: it was
23:42 Papysh: like this
23:42 Papysh: wait
23:42 Papysh: i accidently
23:42 Papysh: putter
23:42 Papysh: the
23:42 Papysh: slidertick clap
23:42 Onisakura: look in timing setup
23:43 Onisakura: http://puu.sh/3l3YM.jpg
23:44 Papysh: when i do it it breaks
23:44 Papysh: XD
23:44 Onisakura: anyway it needs fix...
23:44 Papysh: its k
23:44 Papysh: i will call my timing slave
23:45 Papysh: o3o
23:45 Onisakura: dude..it's not ok at all..kiai unsnapped
23:46 Papysh: what is
23:46 Papysh: unsnapped kiai
23:46 Papysh: XD
23:46 Onisakura: (-_\\)
23:46 Papysh: ;_;
23:46 Onisakura: ok..let me start over
23:47 Papysh: oh yeah :3
23:48 Onisakura: first kiai time unsnapped..so it means he starts not at tick...on timeline
23:48 Onisakura: u set start first kiai here
23:48 Onisakura: 00:08:075
23:48 Papysh: oh yueah got it
23:49 Papysh: i dcant fix it
23:49 Papysh: ;_;
23:49 Onisakura: and your white tick here 00:07:874 -
23:49 Papysh: well
23:49 Papysh: my timing slave is ready to mess with that kind
23:49 Papysh: of kiai
23:51 Onisakura: gosh..dat english :3
23:52 Papysh: well at least i know what is the difference between your and you're
23:52 Papysh: XD
23:52 Papysh: so dont be so mean :'<
23:52 Onisakura: wow wow wow..wait..i have idea..but kinda crazy
23:53 Papysh: i wont kill myself
23:53 Onisakura: poland can understant russian? or it just my imagination
23:53 Papysh: yhhh
23:53 Papysh: uncle roman
23:53 Onisakura: ok
23:54 Onisakura: cuz i just know some poland who know russian)
23:54 Papysh: im 14 years old
23:54 Onisakura: ok..so u know how fix starts of kiai....?
23:55 Papysh: well when i try to fix it
23:55 Papysh: it breaks
23:56 Onisakura: cuz u have 2 more unsnapped green sections...
23:56 Onisakura: 00:07:975 - snap to 00:07:962
23:56 Onisakura: 00:08:075 - snap to 00:08:050
23:56 Papysh: i deleted it
23:56 Papysh: since i added it by accident
23:56 Papysh: dont know when
23:59 Onisakura: also.. not sure about kiai
00:00 Onisakura: sec
00:00 Papysh: kiai is k
00:00 Papysh: MAN
00:01 Papysh: wait no
00:01 Papysh: if oyu dont want to mod it feel free
00:01 Papysh: XD
00:01 Papysh: my mod may be not that good
00:01 Onisakura: hey..c'mon)
00:02 Papysh: brb 10 mins
00:03 Onisakura: i see more worse situation))
00:06 Onisakura: in H'z Hard
00:09 Onisakura: 00:45:285 (3) - that slider touch HP...so move this a little below...http://puu.sh/3l555.jpg
00:10 Papysh: im back, sorry
00:10 Onisakura: ok
00:10 Onisakura: and...for you..add H in tags for all diff
00:11 Papysh: i added harez
00:11 Onisakura: ok)
00:13 Onisakura: in insane..
00:13 Papysh: yesg?>
00:13 Papysh: yes?
00:14 Onisakura: 00:08:933 (4) -
00:14 Onisakura: this slider "eat" beat
00:15 Papysh: oh i fixed one clap
00:15 Papysh: just after that slider
00:15 Papysh: thanks
00:15 Papysh: XD
00:15 Onisakura: so i think it was batter if u cut this it half 00:09:109 - ..and add circle 00:09:286 -
00:16 Onisakura: circle with clap, ok
00:16 Papysh: i will fix it
00:16 Papysh: but now i will write it on the paper
00:17 Onisakura: 00:11:756 (1) - same thing... but here need short sloder with reverse
00:18 Papysh: ok
00:18 Papysh: i fix it in other way
00:18 Papysh: moving in time that lsider by 1/2
00:18 Papysh: and placing note at 00:11:756 (7) -
00:18 Onisakura: 00:26:580 (8) - this just need cut..so end was here..00:26:756 -
00:19 Onisakura: for rhythm
00:20 Onisakura: 00:30:109 (1,2,3,4,5) - that creepy stream...
00:20 Onisakura: set like semicircle...
00:21 Onisakura: http://puu.sh/3l5E5.jpg something like this
00:21 Papysh: i wont cut
00:22 Papysh: that first
00:22 Onisakura: u miss beat...
00:22 Onisakura: but u r boss...
00:22 Onisakura: and last word - it's you
00:23 Onisakura: i just suggest
00:24 Papysh: ok i did that stream
00:25 Onisakura: 01:12:462 (4) - and again need cut...
00:25 Onisakura: 01:12:639 - end
00:26 Papysh: i will keep it but i noted
00:26 Onisakura: 01:12:815 - cuz here a void not vocal..not drum..nothing
00:27 Papysh: what should i do?
00:28 Onisakura: as i say above....end of slider need cut...(not remove or detele)
00:29 Onisakura: so end will been a little close
00:30 Papysh: ok
00:33 Onisakura: extra...
00:33 Papysh: yewsh
00:33 Onisakura: hm...
00:33 Onisakura: in test play..
00:33 Onisakura: 00:47:756 (2) - like in hard..too hight
00:34 Onisakura: this slider take HP
00:35 Papysh: ?
00:35 Papysh: the area
00:35 Papysh: where i place
00:35 Papysh: things right?
00:36 Onisakura: play exstra with autopilot..or here..test..and press TAB
00:36 Onisakura: and u see..
00:37 Papysh: oh
00:37 Papysh: i got it
00:37 Onisakura: 00:35:844 (2,3,4,5,6) - this stream overcup
00:38 Onisakura: need delete 00:36:197 (6) -
00:38 Papysh: fixed it
00:39 Papysh: thanks
00:40 Onisakura: 00:51:991 (1,2,3) - fix this...or for wave...or for slider
00:41 Papysh: noted
00:42 Onisakura: 00:58:697 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
00:42 Onisakura: ...
00:42 Papysh: ?
00:42 Onisakura: gosh...it's awesome :3
00:42 Papysh: <3
00:44 Onisakura: and..
00:44 Onisakura: BG size
00:44 Onisakura: you have 1228x768
00:44 Papysh: oh yeah
00:44 Papysh: i know
00:44 Papysh: my friend is goign to help me
00:45 Onisakura: so...1024x768 pixels for 4:3, 1366x768 pixels for 16:9
00:45 Onisakura: yep
00:45 Papysh: ekhm?
00:45 Papysh: XD
00:45 Papysh: anyways converting picture
00:45 Onisakura: also..
00:45 Onisakura: checking distance...
00:45 Papysh: yes?
00:46 Onisakura: if in normal - just one object....
00:46 Onisakura: in hard insane and exstra map has come more and more unreadable...
00:47 Onisakura: so use distance snap...
00:47 Papysh: i do
00:48 Onisakura: so i geas i'm done)
Zetera
Medal Hunter
1,019 posts
Joined November 2010
Zetera
Well, everything I needed to say was already said ingame, concerning the Drain and the positions of circles etc.
This map has potencial! :>
wendao
1,638 posts
Joined August 2012
wendao
sorry for late reply, Papysh doesn't tell me anything for checking mods
for Papysh, please don't edit my diff without my permissions again.. :c i'd appreciate you if you told me there's a mods for my diff

Papysh wrote:

H'z Hard - Done my harez
my
my
my
MY

Irreversible wrote:

[H'z Hard, Shouldn't it be H's Hard? xD] H'z stand for Harez

AR 7, please hmm no. but i decrease HP by 1

00:19:168 (6) - mh.. what did you map to? here? I would remove it, since i can't really see a reason why you added here. changed already by Papysh
00:38:932 (1) - Please, add some finishes here. I'm really bad at hitsounding :C And i can't see all these hitsounds errors, but i think there could be some more. (this finish is one of many, please check it again!) If you added some more, i can have a look over it if it sounds nice, if you want. i think Finish isn't fit here :c

RikiH_ wrote:

H'z Hard

00:11:226 (2,1) - Stack them properly fixed already by Papysh
00:14:756 (1,2) - This is weird, you should make it this way ^
00:18:991 (5) - Add a finish here ^
00:42:991 (4,5) - Please make the blanket better i not sure are Papysh fixed this, but i change it more better flow
01:14:226 (1) - It feels empty, I'd add a finish on the beginning maybe fixed by Papysh, but i think it's doesn't fit to song, and keep consistency with 01:02:932 (1), 01:08:579 (1), and 01:19:873 (1)
01:22:609 - It sounds empty, add a note here, or add a repeat to the slider... Well, add something no, i like that way
thanks for modding, sorry Papysh i couldn't mod your map, i've got a bit stress :? :?

here's the update http://puu.sh/3mZGw.osu
riffy
osu! Alumni
8,060 posts
Joined December 2010
riffy
yo. just takin' a quick look :3/

[General]
  1. Artist is incorrect, it meant to be 豊崎 愛生 (romanised title stays the same)
  2. Your source is incorrect. It's should be K-on![/b, not [b]K-ON!!
  3. Add more tags, suh as character names and kyoto animation (you use thei animatios as r background video, after all)
  4. Find a betterBG video if you can, current one doesn't looks good, imo.
  5. Please, map a diff, that will be easier than 3,24 stars. You must have AT LEAST ONE diff underf 3,24 star rating. :<
    Note: or you can make[Normal] diff easier, but that isn't a good idea, imo.
  6. Your colours don't fit with BG or Video - so, they look strange here. What's more, bright colours can hurt players eye :<
  7. Please, make sure that letterboxes are DISABLED for ALL diffs (including GDs).:<
[Normal]
  1. Please, use AR5 since it fits with your slider velocity and also, it also makes diff spread more balanced.
  2. Quite often you map off vocals. Map still fits with background music, but still.. I guess, that best solution here is to map instrumental parts (lead in, 00:20:610 - and final part). Once you'll do it - diff will be much better!
  3. 00:57:286 (4) - nazi - it'd be great, if you change your flow a bit here. Trty to make it smoother by reversing and swapoping sliders, like this
  4. 00:58:697 (1,1) - if this is the easiest diff of the mapset break between spinner and object-after-spinner should be bigger. I guess 2/1 space would be cool here

    Anyway, for now map feels kinda strange because you didn't map instrumental parts. :< Song is short, so do it, please! Once you map these parts, you'll get amazing diff.
[H'z Hard]
  1. The diff itself is pretty neat and well mapped, but I'd like to see it more balanced. Try to increase OD and HP by one tick to make this diff a bit more playable.
  2. I'd recommend youto avoid using ANY 1/4 triplets and replace them with 1/4 sliders instead. It will make diff easier. In fact, you have Insane and Extra here, so having 1/4s even in [Hard] is a bit too much. :<
[Insane]
  1. Same as extra about jump abuse as on [Extra]diff
  2. Also AR looks too low while OD looks too high while HP is too low. If you set both of them to 7 or 8, that'd be great, i think.
[Extra]
  1. HP and OD also are too high. I guess you're doing it to keep balance, but it's topo much. Reduce them by 1-2 ticks :<
  2. First of all, make sure that jumps actually fit with music. Unreasonable jumps are annoying, and ruin all the fun. So, try to avoid them!
  3. 00:30:197 (2) - do not overmap. It plays weird, breaks your rhythm and it's simply a bad idea because people mostyly hate overmap. Try to check your 1/4s again.

    Yes, overmap and overjump ruins this map. :< Well, maybe it's just me but still.Anyway, get some more opinions from modders about thid diff.

Note: if you agreed to map instrumental parts on [Normal], map it for others diff, as well!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Just a quick opinion,. anyway.

Good luck!
jonathanlfj
Elite Mapper
2,568 posts
Joined February 2010
jonathanlfj
modding~
k-on gg :D

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
-Bakari- above basically pointed out everything that needed to be fixed so i wont comment more
i will just leave a correctly resized bg here (1280*768):
SPOILER

[Normal]
AR-1 like the previous mod post suggested
00:35:403 (4) - finish on slider end
00:41:050 (4) - start this on the red tick before so you follow the vocals, keeping consistency with 00:37:697 (3)
00:54:815 (3) - blanket can be improved
00:58:697 (1) - start the spinner at 00:58:521 feels better to me
01:00:109 (1) - starting from here you basically mapped all white beat rhythms (instrumentals), it would be better if you can fit a few vocal beats in there to correspond with early parts of the map

[H'z Hard]
HP+1
00:13:873 (2) - ctrl+g flows better here
00:35:226 (5) - lower this a bit since it is touching the HP bar
00:41:403 (8) - take off the clap on the first repeat sounds better here
00:59:226 (2,4) - clap sounds nice on these two notes
01:04:168 (6,8) - beizer sliders? use new algorithm here looks better
01:11:403 (1,2,3) - try switching the position of 2 and 3:
SPOILER

[Insane]
OD-1 or 2, AR8 and OD9 is not a good combination; and this is to also differentiate Insane better with Extra
00:08:580 (3,4,5) - plays better like this:
SPOILER
00:36:109 (1) - add finish on start
00:47:050 (3) - finish on end
00:47:756 (4) - NC here instead of 00:46:874 (1)
00:58:697 (5) - NC to avoid large combo count
00:59:933 - missing a note
01:07:874 (1) - unnecessary NC
01:21:109 (1) - finish on end

[Extra]
i was wondering why you followed DS so strictly in Insane, until i saw this diff...
00:18:991 (1) - make this a jump feels better to play (i personally always get a 50 here while testing orz)
00:24:815 (1) - add finish
00:26:050 (1,2,3) - this jump feels a bit random and out of place, its better if you reduce the jump intensity here or just rid the jump as a whole
00:36:815 (3) - not perfectly centered for blanket, also 00:36:286 (1) feels better to play if you place it on the other side (so no stack with previous stream)
00:38:933 (1,2,3,4) - this square jump feels quite out of place too, but its not as bad as 00:26:050 (1,2,3) since it is following a jump pattern (so no suprise)
00:47:403 (1) - finish on slider start
00:54:815 (4) - make it blanket 00:54:109 (2) better
00:58:344 (3,4) - since you jump so often, why not do ctrl+g on this or rearrange it so the jump intensity increases here? it fits quite nicely with the change in the vocals
01:01:874 (2,3) - ctrl+g for a better flow onto 01:02:227 (4)
01:19:168 (4,5,6) - you jumped at the wrong time; the jump should be arranged like this:
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this way the note jumps correspond with "here we go!" in the lyrics, and the repeat slider would act as a slow down
01:21:639 (1) - unnecessary NC

Overall the mapset is fine (except waiting for Easy); Extra feels a bit out of place due to the rather random jumping, however if jumps were placed correctly it will be a very fun map
Well here is a star, and good luck in ranking~
wendao
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Joined August 2012
wendao

-Bakari- wrote:

yo. just takin' a quick look :3/

[General]
  1. Artist is incorrect, it meant to be 豊崎 愛生 (romanised title stays the same) fixed
  2. Your source is incorrect. It's should be K-on![/b, not [b]K-ON!! Comfirmed via MAL so Fixed
  3. Add more tags, suh as character names and kyoto animation (you use thei animatios as r background video, after all) to make it same with other diff, i will wait Papysh's update :lol:
  4. Find a better BG video if you can, current one doesn't looks good, imo. i leave it to Papysh
  5. Please, map a diff, that will be easier than 3,24 stars. You must have AT LEAST ONE diff underf 3,24 star rating. :< ^
    Note: or you can make[Normal] diff easier, but that isn't a good idea, imo.
  6. Your colours don't fit with BG or Video - so, they look strange here. What's more, bright colours can hurt players eye :< wait for Papysh's update
  7. Please, make sure that letterboxes are DISABLED for ALL diffs (including GDs).:<
check below your quote ;w;

[H'z Hard]
  1. The diff itself is pretty neat and well mapped, but I'd like to see it more balanced. Try to increase OD and HP by one tick to make this diff a bit more playable. HP+1, OD 6 hard enough for Hard diff, so stay at 6
  2. I'd recommend youto avoid using ANY 1/4 triplets and replace them with 1/4 sliders instead. It will make diff easier. In fact, you have Insane and Extra here, so having 1/4s even in [Hard] is a bit too much. :<
it's actually only 2 triplet :? , but okay, fixed
i can't disable Letterbox :c
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jonathanlfj wrote:

[H'z Hard]
HP+1 okay
00:13:873 (2) - ctrl+g flows better here yeah i feel better nowbut, i will come thinking about it, coz now it's has 2.01x DS
00:35:226 (5) - lower this a bit since it is touching the HP bar okay
00:41:403 (8) - take off the clap on the first repeat sounds better hereb-but why? ;w;
00:59:226 (2,4) - clap sounds nice on these two notes imo it's doesn't fit
01:04:168 (6,8) - beizer sliders? use new algorithm here looks better have any idea? :o
01:11:403 (1,2,3) - try switching the position of 2 and 3:
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:c too hard imo
thanks for modding :)
update here http://puu.sh/3opMH.rar
walao
248 posts
Joined April 2013
walao
M4M~ Small modding here done by an amateur modder. Just a few suggestions I got, take whichever ones you like, don't take whichever ones you don't like \(^.^)/

~ General ~
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Source/Unicode Conflicts with H'z Hard.
Disable letterboxes.

~ Extra ~
SPOILER
00:36:286 (1) - I feel like CTRL+ G here would be better.
00:46:697 (7) - Split combo here.

~ Insane ~
SPOILER
00:10:697 (3, 5) - CTRL+ G here maybe.
00:30:639 (1, 2) - ^^^
00:57:109 (1) - ^^^
01:17:050 (1) - ^^^
01:19:874 (1, 2) - ^^^

~ Hard ~
SPOILER
00:26:226 - Split combo.
00:29:050 - ^^^

~ Normal ~
SPOILER
01:21:286 - Move spinner and change slider to:
Spinner starts at 01:22:874, ends at 01:24:109
wendao
1,638 posts
Joined August 2012
wendao

toloveruu wrote:

M4M~ Small modding here done by an amateur modder. Just a few suggestions I got, take whichever ones you like, don't take whichever ones you don't like \(^.^)/

~ General ~
SPOILER
Source/Unicode Conflicts with H'z Hard. Papysh doesn't fix the Artist Unicode :c
Disable letterboxes. see above post

~ Hard ~
SPOILER
00:26:226 - Split combo. no.
00:29:050 - ^^^ ^^
No change, thanks for modding~ ;)
Papysh
259 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
Papysh

Harez wrote:

toloveruu wrote:

M4M~ Small modding here done by an amateur modder. Just a few suggestions I got, take whichever ones you like, don't take whichever ones you don't like \(^.^)/

~ General ~
SPOILER
Source/Unicode Conflicts with H'z Hard. Papysh doesn't fix the Artist Unicode :c
Disable letterboxes. see above post

~ Hard ~
SPOILER
00:26:226 - Split combo. no.
00:29:050 - ^^^ ^^
No change, thanks for modding~ ;)
What the fuck unicode is
wendao
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Joined August 2012
wendao

Papysh wrote:

What the fuck unicode is
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good job,i very like the songs,ranked it!!!!! :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)
emm,thank you to make it
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