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Your M4M request~
I do rhythm modding so here are my suggestions and advice for your notes.
sister
00:00:746 - add a note
00:03:207 - ^
00:08:012 (3) - a silder and a circle instead of just a slider
00:22:191 (6) - shift circle to 00:22:426
00:23:012 (1) - shorten slider to end at 00:23:715 and then add 1 new slider that starts from 00:23:949 and ends at 00:24:418
00:37:426 - add a note
00:38:129 - add a spinner that ends at 00:39:887
00:50:199 (2) - shorten slider to end at 00:51:137
00:53:949 (2) - shorten slider to end at 00:54:887
01:02:387 - add a note
01:02:855 (1,2) - remove
01:05:551 - add a note
01:20:902 (5) - shorten slider and add 2 circles:
01:21:722 - add a note
01:22:660 - ^
01:23:480 (1) - shorten slider end at 01:23:715 add circle at 01:23:949
01:29:340 - add a note
01:44:574 (8) - NC
01:46:918 (1) - remove NC
01:47:387 (2) - NC here
From 02:11:293 (1) to 02:16:215 (11) - use this rhythm:
02:23:012 (1) - first repeat at 02:24:418 and slider ends at 02:25:824
02:31:215 - add a note
02:33:910 - add a note
02:34:262 (1) - first repeat at 02:34:965 and slider ends at 02:35:668
02:35:902 - add a note
02:36:137 - ^
02:38:363 - ^
02:43:285 - ^
02:44:457 - ^
02:47:035 - ^
02:47:152 - ^
02:47:269 - ^
03:25:355 - ^
03:25:472 - ^
03:25:707 - ^
03:25:824 - ^
03:26:410 - ^
03:27:465 (2) - slider ends at 03:27:699 and add a circle at 03:27:933
03:28:637 (4) - shift sldier to start at 03:28:871 and end at 03:29:105 then add a circle at 03:28:637
03:32:035 - add a note
03:40:941 - ^
03:41:176 - ^
03:45:394 - ^
04:31:801 - ^
04:47:269 - ^
04:49:496 (9) - remove
04:50:433 (4) - replace with circle
04:52:543 - add note
04:56:176 - ^
04:56:410 - ^
04:56:644 - ^
04:59:457 - ^
05:01:215 (2) - shorten slider to end at 05:01:449 and add circle at 05:01:683
05:04:496 - add a note
05:04:730 - ^
05:06:136 (4) - replace with circle
05:18:090 - add a note
05:33:441 (6) - shift to 05:33:676
05:45:160 - add note
06:00:160 - ^
06:03:558 - ^
06:03:676 - ^
06:06:605 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - don't spam NC
06:09:066 (2) - shift to 06:08:832
06:10:004 (2) - shift to 06:09:652
06:10:590 - add a note
06:13:519 - add a note
Whew. That's it for now for my rhythm suggestions. Good Luck with it. Gambatte~
I do rhythm modding so here are my suggestions and advice for your notes.
sister
00:00:746 - add a note
00:03:207 - ^
00:08:012 (3) - a silder and a circle instead of just a slider
00:22:191 (6) - shift circle to 00:22:426
00:23:012 (1) - shorten slider to end at 00:23:715 and then add 1 new slider that starts from 00:23:949 and ends at 00:24:418
00:37:426 - add a note
00:38:129 - add a spinner that ends at 00:39:887
00:50:199 (2) - shorten slider to end at 00:51:137
00:53:949 (2) - shorten slider to end at 00:54:887
01:02:387 - add a note
01:02:855 (1,2) - remove
01:05:551 - add a note
01:20:902 (5) - shorten slider and add 2 circles:
01:21:722 - add a note
01:22:660 - ^
01:23:480 (1) - shorten slider end at 01:23:715 add circle at 01:23:949
01:29:340 - add a note
01:44:574 (8) - NC
01:46:918 (1) - remove NC
01:47:387 (2) - NC here
From 02:11:293 (1) to 02:16:215 (11) - use this rhythm:
02:23:012 (1) - first repeat at 02:24:418 and slider ends at 02:25:824
02:31:215 - add a note
02:33:910 - add a note
02:34:262 (1) - first repeat at 02:34:965 and slider ends at 02:35:668
02:35:902 - add a note
02:36:137 - ^
02:38:363 - ^
02:43:285 - ^
02:44:457 - ^
02:47:035 - ^
02:47:152 - ^
02:47:269 - ^
03:25:355 - ^
03:25:472 - ^
03:25:707 - ^
03:25:824 - ^
03:26:410 - ^
03:27:465 (2) - slider ends at 03:27:699 and add a circle at 03:27:933
03:28:637 (4) - shift sldier to start at 03:28:871 and end at 03:29:105 then add a circle at 03:28:637
03:32:035 - add a note
03:40:941 - ^
03:41:176 - ^
03:45:394 - ^
04:31:801 - ^
04:47:269 - ^
04:49:496 (9) - remove
04:50:433 (4) - replace with circle
04:52:543 - add note
04:56:176 - ^
04:56:410 - ^
04:56:644 - ^
04:59:457 - ^
05:01:215 (2) - shorten slider to end at 05:01:449 and add circle at 05:01:683
05:04:496 - add a note
05:04:730 - ^
05:06:136 (4) - replace with circle
05:18:090 - add a note
05:33:441 (6) - shift to 05:33:676
05:45:160 - add note
06:00:160 - ^
06:03:558 - ^
06:03:676 - ^
06:06:605 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - don't spam NC
06:09:066 (2) - shift to 06:08:832
06:10:004 (2) - shift to 06:09:652
06:10:590 - add a note
06:13:519 - add a note
Whew. That's it for now for my rhythm suggestions. Good Luck with it. Gambatte~
Hai Hai From My Queue
Sorry if my mod sucks
[General]
Rename The Difficulty:
- You Must Name The Difficulty From Sister ----> Marathon, Because this is app map and you must name it Marathon so you can upload it to pending maps
suggestions: (I thinks that you must do them)
- Your Map lacks from Hits sound use some
- Your Map lacks from breaks add some
- Disable Letterbox during breaks
- Make Audio in lead 2 (2000ms)
Rename The Difficulty:
- You Must Name The Difficulty From Sister ----> Marathon, Because this is app map and you must name it Marathon so you can upload it to pending maps
suggestions: (I thinks that you must do them)
- Your Map lacks from Hits sound use some
- Your Map lacks from breaks add some
- Disable Letterbox during breaks
- Make Audio in lead 2 (2000ms)
[SB]
Multiple .osb Files
There should only be one .osb file in a folder (this folder has 2).
Multiple .osb Files
There should only be one .osb file in a folder (this folder has 2).
[sister]
Breaks
You need a break before 02:15:504.
You need a break before 05:13:732.
Non-Downbeat Kiai Times
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:09:175, ends on 00:41:754
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:39:175, ends on 02:11:285
Kiai #3: Starts on 03:42:925, ends on 04:13:629
Kiai #4: Starts on 05:05:425, ends on 05:34:136
My Mod:
- 00:04:722 - Add a slider from here until 00:04:956.
- 00:04:722 (3) - Remove this circle.
- 00:05:894 - Add a slider from here until 00:06:128.
- 00:05:894 (5) - Remove this circle.
- 00:08:472 - Add a slider from here until 00:08:589.
- 00:08:472 (4) - Remove this circle.
- 00:14:566 - Add a slider from here until 00:14:800.
- 00:14:566 (6) - Remove this circle.
- 00:16:441 - Add a slider from here until 00:16:675.
- 00:16:441 (5) - Remove this circle.
- 01:17:144 - Add a slider from here until 01:17:378.
- 01:17:144 (7) - Remove this circle.
- 01:17:847 - Add a slider from here until 01:18:081.
- 01:17:847 (9) - Remove this circle.
- 01:26:754 - Add a slider from here until 01:26:988.
- 01:26:754 (10) - Remove this circle.
- 01:45:504 - Add a slider from here until 01:45:738.
- 01:45:504 (8) - Remove this circle.
- 01:45:972 - Add a slider from here until 01:46:206.
- 01:45:972 (9) - Remove this circle.
- 01:46:441 - Add a slider from here until 01:46:675.
- 01:46:441 (10) - Remove this circle.
- 04:28:160 - Add a slider from here until 04:28:628.
- 04:28:160 (6) - Remove this circle.
- 05:05:425 - Add a circle at {x:256 y:88}, with a NC.
- 05:05:425 (1) - Remove this slider.
- 05:05:659 (2) - Remove this slider.
- 05:05:660 - Add a circle at {x:160 y:184}.
- 05:05:894 - Add a circle at {x:352 y:192}.
- 05:05:894 (3) - Remove this slider.
- 05:06:129 (4) - Move to {x:256 y:192}.
- 05:31:910 - Add a slider from here until 05:32:144.
- 05:31:910 (9) - Remove this circle.
- 05:48:785 (1,2) - Make Them --> http://puu.sh/338oS.jpg
- 05:52:535 (1,2) - ^ ^ ^
Breaks
You need a break before 02:15:504.
You need a break before 05:13:732.
Non-Downbeat Kiai Times
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:09:175, ends on 00:41:754
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:39:175, ends on 02:11:285
Kiai #3: Starts on 03:42:925, ends on 04:13:629
Kiai #4: Starts on 05:05:425, ends on 05:34:136
My Mod:
- 00:04:722 - Add a slider from here until 00:04:956.
- 00:04:722 (3) - Remove this circle.
- 00:05:894 - Add a slider from here until 00:06:128.
- 00:05:894 (5) - Remove this circle.
- 00:08:472 - Add a slider from here until 00:08:589.
- 00:08:472 (4) - Remove this circle.
- 00:14:566 - Add a slider from here until 00:14:800.
- 00:14:566 (6) - Remove this circle.
- 00:16:441 - Add a slider from here until 00:16:675.
- 00:16:441 (5) - Remove this circle.
- 01:17:144 - Add a slider from here until 01:17:378.
- 01:17:144 (7) - Remove this circle.
- 01:17:847 - Add a slider from here until 01:18:081.
- 01:17:847 (9) - Remove this circle.
- 01:26:754 - Add a slider from here until 01:26:988.
- 01:26:754 (10) - Remove this circle.
- 01:45:504 - Add a slider from here until 01:45:738.
- 01:45:504 (8) - Remove this circle.
- 01:45:972 - Add a slider from here until 01:46:206.
- 01:45:972 (9) - Remove this circle.
- 01:46:441 - Add a slider from here until 01:46:675.
- 01:46:441 (10) - Remove this circle.
- 04:28:160 - Add a slider from here until 04:28:628.
- 04:28:160 (6) - Remove this circle.
- 05:05:425 - Add a circle at {x:256 y:88}, with a NC.
- 05:05:425 (1) - Remove this slider.
- 05:05:659 (2) - Remove this slider.
- 05:05:660 - Add a circle at {x:160 y:184}.
- 05:05:894 - Add a circle at {x:352 y:192}.
- 05:05:894 (3) - Remove this slider.
- 05:06:129 (4) - Move to {x:256 y:192}.
- 05:31:910 - Add a slider from here until 05:32:144.
- 05:31:910 (9) - Remove this circle.
- 05:48:785 (1,2) - Make Them --> http://puu.sh/338oS.jpg
- 05:52:535 (1,2) - ^ ^ ^
More difficult to this map
Only one comment
HP drain 6->7~8
CS 4 -> 5~6
---------------------------------------
[Sister]
In order to further drain, Please add a "Finish" hit sound
Please put "Clap" hit sound every 1/4 beat ~It would be nice to hear
01:28:629 (6) - Please correct the shape of the slider http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/781176
00:24:879 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Is irregular links Distance//Please adjust the distance between the slider
01:32:144 (8,9) - Move this way >> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/781193
03:00:269 (3,1) - insert break time
03:56:754 (9) - The shape of the slider to add more variety// EX) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/781200
04:00:035 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Has to be repeated on purpose? >>> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/781202
05:23:238 (7) - Add circle >>> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/781206
05:49:254 (2),05:53:004 (2) - Get this fixed pattern of the slider >> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/781210
Only one comment
HP drain 6->7~8
CS 4 -> 5~6
---------------------------------------
[Sister]
In order to further drain, Please add a "Finish" hit sound
Please put "Clap" hit sound every 1/4 beat ~It would be nice to hear
01:28:629 (6) - Please correct the shape of the slider http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/781176
00:24:879 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Is irregular links Distance//Please adjust the distance between the slider
01:32:144 (8,9) - Move this way >> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/781193
03:00:269 (3,1) - insert break time
03:56:754 (9) - The shape of the slider to add more variety// EX) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/781200
04:00:035 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Has to be repeated on purpose? >>> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/781202
05:23:238 (7) - Add circle >>> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/781206
05:49:254 (2),05:53:004 (2) - Get this fixed pattern of the slider >> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/781210
2sister
OEvil wrote:
Hai Hai From My Queue
Sorry if my mod sucks[General]
Rename The Difficulty:
- You Must Name The Difficulty From Sister ----> Marathon, Because this is app map and you must name it Marathon so you can upload it to pending maps---done
suggestions: (I thinks that you must do them)
- Your Map lacks from Hits sound use some---done
- Your Map lacks from breaks add some---done
- Disable Letterbox during breaks---done
- Make Audio in lead 2 (2000ms)---done[SB]
Multiple .osb Files
There should only be one .osb file in a folder (this folder has 2).---done[sister]thanks for modding
Breaks
You need a break before 02:15:504.---done
You need a break before 05:13:732.---x
Non-Downbeat Kiai Times
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:09:175, ends on 00:41:754
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:39:175, ends on 02:11:285
Kiai #3: Starts on 03:42:925, ends on 04:13:629
Kiai #4: Starts on 05:05:425, ends on 05:34:136
---keep
My Mod:
- 00:04:722 - Add a slider from here until 00:04:956.---done
- 00:04:722 (3) - Remove this circle.
- 00:05:894 - Add a slider from here until 00:06:128.---done
- 00:05:894 (5) - Remove this circle.
- 00:08:472 - Add a slider from here until 00:08:589.---done
- 00:08:472 (4) - Remove this circle.
- 00:14:566 - Add a slider from here until 00:14:800.---done
- 00:14:566 (6) - Remove this circle.
- 00:16:441 - Add a slider from here until 00:16:675.---done
- 00:16:441 (5) - Remove this circle.
- 01:17:144 - Add a slider from here until 01:17:378.---here is a slider
- 01:17:144 (7) - Remove this circle.
- 01:17:847 - Add a slider from here until 01:18:081..---↑
- 01:17:847 (9) - Remove this circle.
- 01:26:754 - Add a slider from here until 01:26:988.---done
- 01:26:754 (10) - Remove this circle.
- 01:45:504 - Add a slider from here until 01:45:738.---done
- 01:45:504 (8) - Remove this circle.
- 01:45:972 - Add a slider from here until 01:46:206.---done
- 01:45:972 (9) - Remove this circle.
- 01:46:441 - Add a slider from here until 01:46:675.---done
- 01:46:441 (10) - Remove this circle.
- 04:28:160 - Add a slider from here until 04:28:628.---done
- 04:28:160 (6) - Remove this circle.
- 05:05:425 - Add a circle at {x:256 y:88}, with a NC.---keep
- 05:05:425 (1) - Remove this slider.---↑
- 05:05:659 (2) - Remove this slider.---↑
- 05:05:660 - Add a circle at {x:160 y:184}.---↑
- 05:05:894 - Add a circle at {x:352 y:192}.---↑
- 05:05:894 (3) - Remove this slider.---↑
- 05:06:129 (4) - Move to {x:256 y:192}.---↑
- 05:31:910 - Add a slider from here until 05:32:144.---↑
- 05:31:910 (9) - Remove this circle. ---↑
- 05:48:785 (1,2) - Make Them --> http://puu.sh/338oS.jpg---↑
- 05:52:535 (1,2) - ^ ^ ^---↑
2sister
thanks for modding >w<S e e U wrote:
More difficult to this map
Only one comment
HP drain 6->7~8 ->7
CS 4 -> 5~6 x
---------------------------------------
[Sister]
In order to further drain, Please add a "Finish" hit sound---add
Please put "Clap" hit sound every 1/4 beat ~It would be nice to hear---add
01:28:629 (6) - Please correct the shape of the slider
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/781176---done
00:24:879 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Is irregular links Distance//Please adjust the
distance between the slider---done
01:32:144 (8,9) - Move this way >> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/781193---hmm,good
03:00:269 (3,1) - insert break time---done
03:56:754 (9) - The shape of the slider to add more variety// EX)
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/781200---yep,good
04:00:035 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Has to be repeated on purpose? >>>
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/781202---very nice!
05:23:238 (7) - Add circle >>> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/78120---done
05:49:254 (2),05:53:004 (2) - Get this fixed pattern of the slider >>
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/781210---consider and change
Hi from my Queue.
Mod with grid level 3.
[General]
I give you a better mp3, louder, 192 kbps. => http://puu.sh/36gL4.mp3
[Marathon]
AR9 ? i prefer AR8 it's better for playing low BPM.
00:08:004 (3,4) - Remove these objects, and add a circle here : 00:08:004 and 00:08:472
00:17:379 (1) - Add finish at the beginning of the slider.
00:19:957 (8) - (reverse) x352 y248, it's more cute
like this :
00:23:004 (1) - Add finish at the end of the slider.
00:24:879 (1) - ^
00:29:566 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - start these objects from 00:30:504
00:30:504 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - start these object from 00:29:566
00:32:379 (1) - Finish instead of clap.
00:41:519 (2) - Remove circle.
00:53:941 (2) - Add finish at the end of the slider.
01:21:129 (7) - ^
01:26:754 (10) - Add finish at the beggining of the slider
01:30:504 (4) - ^
01:31:675 (7) - 1 grid left for a better pattern.
01:32:144 (8) - Finish
01:33:550 - Add a note here
01:33:785 (11,12,13) - i suggest your to delete these circles and add a slider like this :
01:35:894 (1) - Finish at the beggining of the slider.
01:37:300 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - i suggest you this :
01:39:879 (4) - Add finish.
01:47:379 (1) - ^
01:47:379 (1) - Add finish at the beginning of the slider.
01:53:004 (9) - Shorten the slider on the first red tick on the left and add finish at the end. and add a circle here : 01:53:941
02:02:379 (1) - Add finish at the beggining of the slider.
02:08:004 (1) - ^
02:15:504 - Add a circle here with finish.
02:23:004 (1) - Further than 02:22:769 (15)
02:30:504 (13,14,15,16) - I suggest you
(16) stacked on (13)
02:30:504 (13) - Add finish
02:34:254 (1) - Add finish at the beggining of the slider.
02:40:347 (3) - Add finish
02:39:879 (2) - 1 grid left + 1 grid down
02:42:457 (5) - Add Finish at the end of the slider.
02:45:035 (3) - Add finish
02:59:332 (1,2,3) - I suggest to make this :
03:09:879 (6) - Add finish at the beggining of the slider.
03:23:004 (11) - Add Finish
03:25:113 (9) - ^
03:26:754 (18) - ^
03:28:863 (6) - 2 grids up.
03:29:566 (8) - 2 Grids left + 1 down
03:29:800 (9) - 2 Grids left + 2 Down
03:30:035 (10) - Like this
03:35:894 (6) - Add finish
03:39:644 (5) - Add finish at the beggining of the slider.
03:44:097 (4) - Add finish
03:44:566 (6) - Add finish at the beggining of the slider.
03:48:082 (4,5) - ctrl+g
03:51:129 (1) - Add Finish
03:52:066 (3,4) - 2 grid up (both)
03:53:004 (5,6,7) - ^
03:56:754 (9) - add finish at the reverse.
04:06:129 (1) - Add Finish at the beggining of the slider.
04:11:754 (9) - Add finish at the beggining, the reverse, the end.
04:15:504 (2) - I suggest you something like this...
Awh shiet how to do this ?! => i will help you. First, the beggining of the slider x336 y344.
12 Points.
Second point : x328 y296, third (red point) : x352 y264, fourth x384 y208, 5th point : x408 y136, 6th point x344 1y6, 7th point x168 y16, 8th point x104 y136, 9th point x128 y208, 10th (red point) x160 y264, 11th point x184 y296, last point x176 y344
04:19:254 (2) - Flip vertically this ^
04:31:910 (7) - Add finish at the end of the slider
04:47:614 (6) - Add finish
04:48:550 (1) - ^
04:49:254 (7) - Add finish
04:49:371 (8) - Remove circle.
04:52:769 (12) - Finish instead of clap at the end of the slider.
04:56:754 (7) - Finish instead of whistle at the beggining of the slider.
04:58:394 (5) - Finish
05:02:379 - 05:05:191 You can map this part.
05:06:129 (4) - Finish instead of clap.
05:13:629 (1) - Add finish at the beggining of the slider
05:21:129 (1) - Finish instead of clap
05:28:629 (1) - Add Finish at the beggining of the slider.
05:56:754 (2) - Add Finish
06:00:504 (6) - Add finish at the beggining of the slider
06:03:550 (1,1,1) - Do not abuse of NC.
06:04:254 (1) - Finish instead of clap
06:06:597 (1) - ^
06:08:941 (5) - Finish instead of whistle
06:11:285 (3) - Finish instead of clap
06:13:629 (1) - Silent this Spinner.
Nice song, Nice SB
Not bad, but your map needs more working...
Good luck
Mod with grid level 3.[General]
I give you a better mp3, louder, 192 kbps. => http://puu.sh/36gL4.mp3
[Marathon]
AR9 ? i prefer AR8 it's better for playing low BPM.
00:08:004 (3,4) - Remove these objects, and add a circle here : 00:08:004 and 00:08:472
00:17:379 (1) - Add finish at the beginning of the slider.
00:19:957 (8) - (reverse) x352 y248, it's more cute
like this :
00:23:004 (1) - Add finish at the end of the slider.
00:24:879 (1) - ^
00:29:566 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - start these objects from 00:30:504
00:30:504 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - start these object from 00:29:566
00:32:379 (1) - Finish instead of clap.
00:41:519 (2) - Remove circle.
00:53:941 (2) - Add finish at the end of the slider.
01:21:129 (7) - ^
01:26:754 (10) - Add finish at the beggining of the slider
01:30:504 (4) - ^
01:31:675 (7) - 1 grid left for a better pattern.
01:32:144 (8) - Finish
01:33:550 - Add a note here
01:33:785 (11,12,13) - i suggest your to delete these circles and add a slider like this :
01:35:894 (1) - Finish at the beggining of the slider.
01:37:300 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - i suggest you this :
01:39:879 (4) - Add finish.
01:47:379 (1) - ^
01:47:379 (1) - Add finish at the beginning of the slider.
01:53:004 (9) - Shorten the slider on the first red tick on the left and add finish at the end. and add a circle here : 01:53:941
02:02:379 (1) - Add finish at the beggining of the slider.
02:08:004 (1) - ^
02:15:504 - Add a circle here with finish.
02:23:004 (1) - Further than 02:22:769 (15)
02:30:504 (13,14,15,16) - I suggest you
(16) stacked on (13)
02:30:504 (13) - Add finish
02:34:254 (1) - Add finish at the beggining of the slider.
02:40:347 (3) - Add finish
02:39:879 (2) - 1 grid left + 1 grid down
02:42:457 (5) - Add Finish at the end of the slider.
02:45:035 (3) - Add finish
02:59:332 (1,2,3) - I suggest to make this :
03:09:879 (6) - Add finish at the beggining of the slider.
03:23:004 (11) - Add Finish
03:25:113 (9) - ^
03:26:754 (18) - ^
03:28:863 (6) - 2 grids up.
03:29:566 (8) - 2 Grids left + 1 down
03:29:800 (9) - 2 Grids left + 2 Down
03:30:035 (10) - Like this
03:35:894 (6) - Add finish
03:39:644 (5) - Add finish at the beggining of the slider.
03:44:097 (4) - Add finish
03:44:566 (6) - Add finish at the beggining of the slider.
03:48:082 (4,5) - ctrl+g
03:51:129 (1) - Add Finish
03:52:066 (3,4) - 2 grid up (both)
03:53:004 (5,6,7) - ^
03:56:754 (9) - add finish at the reverse.
04:06:129 (1) - Add Finish at the beggining of the slider.
04:11:754 (9) - Add finish at the beggining, the reverse, the end.
04:15:504 (2) - I suggest you something like this...
Awh shiet how to do this ?! => i will help you. First, the beggining of the slider x336 y344.
12 Points.
Second point : x328 y296, third (red point) : x352 y264, fourth x384 y208, 5th point : x408 y136, 6th point x344 1y6, 7th point x168 y16, 8th point x104 y136, 9th point x128 y208, 10th (red point) x160 y264, 11th point x184 y296, last point x176 y344
04:19:254 (2) - Flip vertically this ^
04:31:910 (7) - Add finish at the end of the slider
04:47:614 (6) - Add finish
04:48:550 (1) - ^
04:49:254 (7) - Add finish
04:49:371 (8) - Remove circle.
04:52:769 (12) - Finish instead of clap at the end of the slider.
04:56:754 (7) - Finish instead of whistle at the beggining of the slider.
04:58:394 (5) - Finish
05:02:379 - 05:05:191 You can map this part.
05:06:129 (4) - Finish instead of clap.
05:13:629 (1) - Add finish at the beggining of the slider
05:21:129 (1) - Finish instead of clap
05:28:629 (1) - Add Finish at the beggining of the slider.
05:56:754 (2) - Add Finish
06:00:504 (6) - Add finish at the beggining of the slider
06:03:550 (1,1,1) - Do not abuse of NC.
06:04:254 (1) - Finish instead of clap
06:06:597 (1) - ^
06:08:941 (5) - Finish instead of whistle
06:11:285 (3) - Finish instead of clap
06:13:629 (1) - Silent this Spinner.
Nice song, Nice SB
Not bad, but your map needs more working...
Good luck
2sister
thanks for modding , Cherry Blossom >w<Cherry Blossom wrote:
Hi from my Queue.
[General]
I give you a better mp3, louder, 192 kbps. => http://puu.sh/36gL4.mp3 download twice ，still is 128 kbps
[Marathon]
AR9 ? i prefer AR8 it's better for playing low BPM.---ok AR8
00:08:004 (3,4) - Remove these objects, and add a circle here : 00:08:004 and 00:08:472---done
00:17:379 (1) - Add finish at the beginning of the slider.---done
00:19:957 (8) - (reverse) x352 y248, it's more cute
like this :
00:23:004 (1) - Add finish at the end of the slider.---done
00:24:879 (1) - ^---done
00:29:566 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - start these objects from 00:30:504 ---i can't understand this with next ↓
00:30:504 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - start these object from 00:29:566
00:32:379 (1) - Finish instead of clap.---done
00:41:519 (2) - Remove circle.---done
00:53:941 (2) - Add finish at the end of the slider.---done
01:21:129 (7) - ^---done
01:26:754 (10) - Add finish at the beggining of the slider---done
01:30:504 (4) - ^---done
01:31:675 (7) - 1 grid left for a better pattern.---done
01:32:144 (8) - Finish---done
01:33:550 - Add a note here---done
01:33:785 (11,12,13) - i suggest your to delete these circles and add a slider like this :
01:35:894 (1) - Finish at the beggining of the slider.---done
01:37:300 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - i suggest you this : ---nice,jumpping is so good!
01:39:879 (4) - Add finish.---done
01:47:379 (1) - ^---done
01:47:379 (1) - Add finish at the beginning of the slider.---done
01:53:004 (9) - Shorten the slider on the first red tick on the left and add finish at the end. and add a circle here : 01:53:941---done
02:02:379 (1) - Add finish at the beggining of the slider.---done
02:08:004 (1) - ^---done
02:15:504 - Add a circle here with finish.---done
02:23:004 (1) - Further than 02:22:769 (15) ---here is no problem
02:30:504 (13,14,15,16) - I suggest you ---nice
(16) stacked on (13)
02:30:504 (13) - Add finish---done
02:34:254 (1) - Add finish at the beggining of the slider.---done
02:40:347 (3) - Add finish---done
02:39:879 (2) - 1 grid left + 1 grid down---done
02:42:457 (5) - Add Finish at the end of the slider.---done
02:45:035 (3) - Add finish---done
02:59:332 (1,2,3) - I suggest to make this : ---nice
03:09:879 (6) - Add finish at the beggining of the slider.---done
03:23:004 (11) - Add Finish---done
03:25:113 (9) - ^---done
03:26:754 (18) - ^---done
03:28:863 (6) - 2 grids up.---done
03:29:566 (8) - 2 Grids left + 1 down---done
03:29:800 (9) - 2 Grids left + 2 Down---done
03:30:035 (10) - Like this---nice
03:35:894 (6) - Add finish ---done
03:39:644 (5) - Add finish at the beggining of the slider.---done
03:44:097 (4) - Add finish---done
03:44:566 (6) - Add finish at the beggining of the slider.---done
03:48:082 (4,5) - ctrl+g---done
03:51:129 (1) - Add Finish---done
03:52:066 (3,4) - 2 grid up (both)---done
03:53:004 (5,6,7) - ^---done
03:56:754 (9) - add finish at the reverse.---done
04:06:129 (1) - Add Finish at the beggining of the slider.---done
04:11:754 (9) - Add finish at the beggining, the reverse, the end.---done
04:15:504 (2) - I suggest you something like this...---nice,i like this very much ,thank you >w<
Awh shiet how to do this ?! => i will help you. First, the beggining of the slider x336 y344.
12 Points.
Second point : x328 y296, third (red point) : x352 y264, fourth x384 y208, 5th point : x408 y136, 6th point x344 1y6, 7th point x168 y16, 8th point x104 y136, 9th point x128 y208, 10th (red point) x160 y264, 11th point x184 y296, last point x176 y344---thank you
04:19:254 (2) - Flip vertically this ^---done
04:31:910 (7) - Add finish at the end of the slider---done
04:47:614 (6) - Add finish---done
04:48:550 (1) - ^---done
04:49:254 (7) - Add finish---done
04:49:371 (8) - Remove circle.---done
04:52:769 (12) - Finish instead of clap at the end of the slider.---done
04:56:754 (7) - Finish instead of whistle at the beggining of the slider.---done
04:58:394 (5) - Finish---done
05:02:379 - 05:05:191 You can map this part.---yep,i map >w<
05:06:129 (4) - Finish instead of clap.---done
05:13:629 (1) - Add finish at the beggining of the slider---done
05:21:129 (1) - Finish instead of clap---done
05:28:629 (1) - Add Finish at the beggining of the slider.---done
05:56:754 (2) - Add Finish---done
06:00:504 (6) - Add finish at the beggining of the slider---done
06:03:550 (1,1,1) - Do not abuse of NC.---done
06:04:254 (1) - Finish instead of clap---done
06:06:597 (1) - ^---done
06:08:941 (5) - Finish instead of whistle---done
06:11:285 (3) - Finish instead of clap---done
06:13:629 (1) - Silent this Spinner.---done
Nice song, Nice SB
Not bad, but your map needs more working...
Good luck
2sister
i get the best mp3 form my friend asakurafuko >w<
Edit:so if you download this map berofe 2013 June 2 17:46:31.pm , please redownload it , thanks
here is the mp3 - 55.55MB size -> http://puu.sh/36xET
Edit:so if you download this map berofe 2013 June 2 17:46:31.pm , please redownload it , thanks
here is the mp3 - 55.55MB size -> http://puu.sh/36xET
Hi~from my queue
normal mod
general
感觉饼和滑条的比例不太平衡，note太多，大量不fit的串，永远不要为了放串而放串。。其他梗也一样
clap放的很乱
00:03:785(11)感觉折返一次+1note比较好
00:22:183(6) 多余音符，删去
00:44:683(2,1)没包好
01:18:199 不Fit的串
00:28:629 ^
01:43:629 ^
03:54:879 ^
04:09:879 ^
04:56:050 ^
05:17:379 ^
00:59:979 要不要换个自定义的soft clap，感觉很吵啊;_;
01:59:566 new combo
02:07:183(6,10)删了
02:22:652(14,15) 2连放这感觉很奇怪，建议单点
04:46:910 这边开始的节奏
05:33:902(9) 删去
唉再吐槽一下单点太多了。。
good luck
normal mod
general
感觉饼和滑条的比例不太平衡，note太多，大量不fit的串，永远不要为了放串而放串。。其他梗也一样
clap放的很乱
00:03:785(11)感觉折返一次+1note比较好
00:22:183(6) 多余音符，删去
00:44:683(2,1)没包好
01:18:199 不Fit的串
00:28:629 ^
01:43:629 ^
03:54:879 ^
04:09:879 ^
04:56:050 ^
05:17:379 ^
00:59:979 要不要换个自定义的soft clap，感觉很吵啊;_;
01:59:566 new combo
02:07:183(6,10)删了
02:22:652(14,15) 2连放这感觉很奇怪，建议单点
04:46:910 这边开始的节奏
05:33:902(9) 删去
唉再吐槽一下单点太多了。。
good luck
2sister
thanks for modding , baldrace >w<baldrace wrote:
Hi~from my queue
normal mod
general
感觉饼和滑条的比例不太平衡，note太多，大量不fit的串，永远不要为了放串而放串。。其他梗也一样
clap放的很乱---嗯>w<
00:03:785(11)感觉折返一次+1note比较好---可以
00:22:183(6) 多余音符，删去---ok
00:44:683(2,1)没包好---调好了
01:18:199 不Fit的串---修成一些单点和滑条
00:28:629 ^ ^
01:43:629 ^^
03:54:879 ^^
04:09:879 ^^
04:56:050 ^^
05:17:379 ^^
00:59:979 要不要换个自定义的soft clap，感觉很吵啊;_;---还行吧
01:59:566 new combo---ok
02:07:183(6,10)删了---ok
02:22:652(14,15) 2连放这感觉很奇怪，建议单点---ok
04:46:910 这边开始的节奏---ok
05:33:902(9) 删去---ok
唉再吐槽一下单点太多了。。---好吧>w<
good luck
Verlaren
From Aincrad's Modding queue
[General]
i'm not shure about timing...likely to your bpm is correct, but offset - no. Check your timing again.
[Marathon]
First thing - IMO you use almost all the time randomly spacings, and this should not be. Fix it please
00:07:183 - add note, sounds is really good. You have to listen to the song better.
00:07:418 - ^
00:07:652 - ^
00:07:886 (2) - remove note
00:08:238 - add note
00:07:769 (1) - move NC on 00:08:004(2)
02:07:652 (9) - move note on 02:07:769
02:07:301 (6,7,8) - stack notes pls
02:19:254 (11) - NC
02:28:629 (10) - ^
03:06:949 (4) - remove this note
03:56:050 (2,3,4) - maybe stack notes?
04:21:129 - add note
05:18:668 (4,6,8) - remove notes
[hitsounds]
Here you have the full problem - you are wrong to have placed almost all hitsounds. Try to arrange the claps on 2 and 3 ticks (1/1 snap) and whistles 4 (1/1 + you can use whistles on 1/2 snap). Finishes only on a strong beat.
I hope this can help you. GL
If you do not understand something, you can ask me in game. I'll try to help.
[General]
i'm not shure about timing...likely to your bpm is correct, but offset - no. Check your timing again.
[Marathon]
First thing - IMO you use almost all the time randomly spacings, and this should not be. Fix it please
00:07:183 - add note, sounds is really good. You have to listen to the song better.
00:07:418 - ^
00:07:652 - ^
00:07:886 (2) - remove note
00:08:238 - add note
00:07:769 (1) - move NC on 00:08:004(2)
02:07:652 (9) - move note on 02:07:769
02:07:301 (6,7,8) - stack notes pls
02:19:254 (11) - NC
02:28:629 (10) - ^
03:06:949 (4) - remove this note
03:56:050 (2,3,4) - maybe stack notes?
04:21:129 - add note
05:18:668 (4,6,8) - remove notes
[hitsounds]
Here you have the full problem - you are wrong to have placed almost all hitsounds. Try to arrange the claps on 2 and 3 ticks (1/1 snap) and whistles 4 (1/1 + you can use whistles on 1/2 snap). Finishes only on a strong beat.
I hope this can help you. GL
If you do not understand something, you can ask me in game. I'll try to help.
Timing:
BPM is fine.
Offset should -21~23.
BPM is fine.
Offset should -21~23.
2sister
00:07:864 - add a circle or don't stack 00:07:747 (10,1) -
00:07:747 (10,1) - use same shape
00:22:161 (6) - remove
00:58:841 (7) - remove
00:59:075 (8) - NC
00:59:310 (1) - cancel NC
01:02:825 - add a circle
02:15:482 - add a circle
04:06:107 (1,2,3) - 04:48:880 (4,5,6,7) - 05:18:294 (1,2,3,4) - change rhythm
good mapset and good luck
00:07:747 (10,1) - use same shape
00:22:161 (6) - remove
00:58:841 (7) - remove
00:59:075 (8) - NC
00:59:310 (1) - cancel NC
01:02:825 - add a circle
02:15:482 - add a circle
04:06:107 (1,2,3) - 04:48:880 (4,5,6,7) - 05:18:294 (1,2,3,4) - change rhythm
good mapset and good luck
good luck
2sister
All Done , thanks , Jemmmmy , >w<Jemmmmy wrote:
00:07:864 - add a circle or don't stack 00:07:747 (10,1) -
00:07:747 (10,1) - use same shape
00:22:161 (6) - remove
00:58:841 (7) - remove
00:59:075 (8) - NC
00:59:310 (1) - cancel NC
01:02:825 - add a circle
02:15:482 - add a circle
04:06:107 (1,2,3) - 04:48:880 (4,5,6,7) - 05:18:294 (1,2,3,4) - change rhythm
good mapset and good luck
good song
hope it will be rank
hope it will be rank
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