asd123iii wrote:

不能有 Breaktime 不要問為什麼 我不知道;w;

4KEZ

基本上沒什麼問題
有些地方可以考慮跟著Vocal
可以參考4KNM的一些部分再簡化

4KNM

基本上沒什麼問題

4KHD

00:33:945 加一顆變成二連打
fixed

00:34:462 (34462|2) - 移到 00:34:410 (34410|2) - (開1/8)
痾，這邊我覺得還是對拍子比較好，不要對Vocal的提早

01:20:289 - 可以在麵條旁邊加單鍵
fixed

01:29:496 (89496|3) - 這麵條要從 01:29:393 - 開始
噢噢，是我疏忽了，fixed !!

4KMX

00:54:117 (54117|1,54221|2,54324|3) - 好像沒東西
這邊是順應背景吉他聲然後填塞16分note來增加散打的感覺


00:54:427 (54427|0,54531|1,54634|0,54738|1,54841|0) - 同上
同上ww，主要是譜面密集度在這附近的區間有密-疏-密-疏的感覺

太密會過難，太稀疏則過於簡單

00:57:117 -00:59:393 - 我有點不知道打什麼(是我太弱嗎@@)
這邊單純只是塞16分音符而已...可以讓HD和MX造成難度上顯著的差別

01:29:496 (89496|3) - 同4KHD
真的感謝你幫我聽出來，fixed!!

01:32:289 (92289|0) - 可以考慮改成在 01:32:703 -單顆
我在原先想表現出的按下去的手感和你的建議之間衡量，覺得你的提議比較好， fixed!!

01:46:979 - 01:52:772 -希望手可以休息一下的話 改成電吉他 單條有點懶XD
有道理XD，fixed!!

02:15:427 (135427|2) - 沒有這個
fixed!同理，我想 02:17:083 (137083|0) - 這邊也沒有，所以一並fix


4KMX密度有點高 我自認打不起來;w;

以上都是建議 (除了 breaktime 以外)

c36098651 wrote:

來這邊MOD一下(只看MX難度 可能會變難喔=W=
OK的，MX再重口一點點我想也是可以增加趣味性的ww

00:28:565 這邊他歌詞one的鼻音有往下降 所以可以加NOTE fixed
00:33:945 有音 fixed
00:56:807 可以不用為了打拍子而不放=W= OK, fixed!
01:48:945 到 01:48:945 我覺得是連續4個電吉他音 可以加NOTE
這邊和下面一行提到的算休息區，所以note比較不密集XD

01:51:117 有電吉他音~

02:01:255 (121255|3,121669|1,122083|2) - 可以換成3個3連拍
噢噢！這邊忘了是因應誰講的所以改成這樣，但我也不太滿意，感謝提點，fixed!!

02:05:031 (125031|2) - 我感覺這音是從02:04:979 開始的(歌詞 好像跟"馬"同音
啊，當初改BPM的時候沒有改到它，感謝！fixed!!

02:20:341 (140341|1) - 這洗蝦密@@
一個轉音，但我現在看它也不知道是蝦密，覺得修掉會好點，感謝XD， fixed！！

大致上就這樣 至於譜面放置我覺得作者想放啥就放啥 所以就不MOD了~

DJKero wrote:

Add 7K Diff PLEASE! LOVE THIS MAP :3

Luyuja wrote:

7K MX
01:08:083 - 变速建议从这里开始 减慢 这之前的变速感觉不太需要
其他方面都很好，很顺手，排列也很有亮点，歌也好听 fixed

Remillion Cross wrote:

Since now your map is having 7K, i like it, nice map, i love this song too hehe :3
But 4K maps is also good for my practice ~ good for it
Hope this will be ranked soon, i can't wait XD haha

Roxas wrote:

[General]
Remove "nico nico douga" from tags since it's in the source
I think you should change bg, the actual size is unrankable imo (has 1:1 proportion - 600x600 size)
Source shouldn't be "Nico Nico Douga"?
Are you sure that "katakiri rekka" is not capitalized?
I think "setsuna Trip" should be "Setsuna Trip" just like here
Add "Megpoid Gumi" and "vocaloid" to tags?
Inconsistency in Kiai Times, check that
Put the preview time here? 01:21:117 - (1st chorus)
OK, all fixed


[4K EZ]
This easy is too hard, I suggest you how to fix this:
00:32:910 (32910|3,33117|1,33324|2) - Here, if you wanna follow vocals, delete those 00:34:979 (34979|2) - 00:33:324 (33324|2) - and add 1 note 00:33:531 - here and 00:34:979 (34979|2) - here, or you can follow thw 1/1 drum
00:39:324 (39324|2) - remove
00:39:945 (39945|0) - ^
00:40:358 (40358|1) - Move |1|
00:41:600 (41600|3) - There are two options here: Remove the hold or remove some circles during the hold (00:42:014 (42014|1,42841|1,43669|1) - ) If you do the second choice, move this 00:42:427 (42427|0) - in |2| and this 00:44:083 (44083|2) - in |2| too
I do the second choice, and fixed

00:44:289 (44289|0,44703|0) - Remove
00:44:496 (44496|2) - Move |1|
00:45:324 (45324|0) - Move |2|
00:47:600 (47600|3,48014|2) - Remove them
00:50:910 (50910|1,51324|0) - ^
00:50:289 (50289|0) - Move |2|
00:51:117 (51117|3) - Move |1|
00:52:358 (52358|0) - Remove
00:53:186 - Do a pattern like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/888105 (edit: add a circle 00:54:841 - in |3| here - there should be 2 circles in this manner!)
00:55:255 (55255|0) - Move |2|
00:56:496 (56496|1,56496|2) - You don't need 2 circles :/
00:58:565 - Here too, choose if you want to follow vocals or drum and fix this, because you don't need 3 circles 1/2 for following vocals and drum
01:00:841 (60841|1,61255|0) - Remove
01:03:117 (63117|2,63117|3,63531|0,63531|1,63945|2,63945|3,64358|0,64358|1,64772|3,64772|2) - Not sure if here 2 circles fits well, remember it's a easy diff
01:06:427 (66427|0,66427|1,66841|1,66841|2,67255|3,67255|2) - Same
01:08:083 (68083|1,69945|1) - Remove holds
01:08:703 (68703|3,69324|2) - Move left for one column
01:09:945 - Add circle in |2|
01:09:738 (69738|3) - Remove
01:10:358 (70358|2) - Move |4|
01:10:565 (70565|2) - Move |1| or |2|
01:11:393 - Like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/888129
01:14:703 - From here to 01:19:255 - here it's too hard, I'd change like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/888146 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/888148
01:21:324 - I'd follow vocals here during the chorus. By the way, it's too hard the way you mapped the chorus, try do map that easier
01:52:772 - Change like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/888182
02:01:462 (121462|2,122289|0) - Remove
02:04:358 (124358|1,125600|2,126014|0,126841|3) - ^Same
02:10:152 - Add circle
02:12:634 (132634|2) - Change with a circle in 02:12:634
02:13:462 - Surely too hard from here to 02:19:255 - , fix this please
02:20:496 (140496|0) - Remove
02:26:703 - Add circle in |4| (by the way, I think the same thing as the 1st chorus, I'd follow the vocal)
02:52:358 - Too hard here too (do like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/888198 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/888200)
03:07:255 - I think you can keep those 1/2 in this solo, or maybe you can make triplets of 1/2 circles
here I keep the original style

03:22:152 (202152|1,202979|2,203807|1,204634|2) - Remove
03:27:117 (207117|2) - Remove and change with a circle
03:29:186 (209186|1,209186|2) - No need to double circle
03:31:669 (211669|0,211669|1,212496|2,212496|0,212910|1,212910|2) - Same
03:33:738 - Here you should doublecircle, just put a circle in |1|
03:37:048 - Here you need a double
03:38:083 (218083|0,218289|1,218289|3,218496|0) - Too hard, the double is not needed
03:41:186 (221186|1,221393|2,221807|2) - Remove those and 03:41:600 (221600|1) - Move right
03:46:152 (226152|1) - Remove
03:46:979 (226979|0) - Move |4|
03:49:462 - I'd change those 1/2 circles
03:56:600 (236600|2) - This shouldn't be in 03:56:496 - ?
oh, you're right! fixed

the other part all fixed.

It took me so long, I'll finish mod later x_x
I feel so sorry . It's surprise to me that my map is not good as I think to be.

Roxas wrote:

[General]

Kiai times: Change them as I say now, they're better imo
from 01:21:324 - to 01:34:358 -
from 01:34:565 - to 01:47:807 -
from 03:27:531 - to 03:40:152 -
from 03:40:358 - to 03:42:014 -
from 03:43:669 - to 03:43:876 -
all fixed, and deleted my original kiai time

It took me so long, I'll finish mod later x_x

[4K NM]

00:33:634 (33634|0) - I'd remove this
00:46:565 (46565|0) - ^ same
fixed, and removed them
00:39:738 - Remove 1 circle here, you don't need a triplet
00:43:255 (43255|0,43255|1,43669|1,43669|2) - I'd remove the doubles and put only 1 note
00:44:289 (44289|1,44703|2) - Remove these
00:50:703 (50703|2,50703|3,50910|1,50910|0,51117|1,51117|2,51324|0,51324|3) - I think 1/2 doubles doesn't fit, put single circles
00:51:531 (51531|1) - Here you need a double because it's a strong note
00:54:014 - Do a thing like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/889576
00:58:152 - Add a circle for strong note
01:00:221 (60221|2) - Move 01:00:117 -
01:00:634 (60634|3) - Move 01:00:531 -
01:18:427 (78427|2,78427|0,78427|3,79255|3,79255|0,79255|2) - Don't put triplets but only doubles
01:21:324 - The chorus is okay, just watch out for the doubles that doesn't fit, put the doubles on strong notes like 01:24:634 - here
OK, fixed
02:01:462 (121462|1,121462|0,121462|2,121876|3,121876|1,121876|2,122289|0,122289|2,122289|3,122703|0,122703|1,122703|3) - Here triplets doesn't fit
02:04:358 (124358|1,124358|2,124358|3) - ^
02:35:807 (155807|2,155807|1,155807|0) - Triplet here? Make a double
03:25:462 - Here's too hard imo :I remove holds
03:32:703 (212703|2,213117|0) - Remove circles
03:27:117 (207117|2) - This should end in 03:27:531 -
03:33:738 - Strong note
03:37:048 - ^
03:40:358 - ^
03:42:014 - ^
03:50:496 (230496|2,230496|3,230703|1,230910|2,231117|0,231117|1,231324|3,231531|1,231738|3) - I think it's too hard this part, but if you wanna keep this, move 03:50:496 (230496|3) - this 03:50:289 - here and let the hold finish as before
oh, the hold's start point is my carelessness, and I wanna keep this, fixed !!

03:56:600 (236600|3,236600|2) - These should be in 03:56:496 -
the other all fixed


[4K HD]
This diff is nice! I think the mod for this diff will be shorter xD
thanks

Put 1/4 as snap divisor

00:38:703 - Add a circle in |1|
00:39:738 (39738|2) - Remove
00:48:221 - Maybe too streamy? Just follow the instruments
00:54:014 (54014|2,54427|3) - Do a thing like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/894383
00:55:979 (55979|3,56186|2) - Remove those?
01:14:083 - Add circle in |4|
01:14:496 - Add circle in |1|
01:18:841 (78841|2,79255|2) - Delete them
01:22:772 (82772|1) - Ends in 01:23:186 -
01:24:221 (84221|2) - This is useless imo D:
01:24:014 - Add circle
01:26:496 - ^
01:40:565 - ^
01:42:738 (102738|1) - Move 01:42:634 - here and finishes 01:43:048 - here
02:37:255 (157255|3,157669|1,158083|3) - I don't like those holds, they're inappropriate for me
03:20:807 (200807|3,200807|1,200807|0,200807|2) - Only a double here
03:21:634 (201634|3,201634|2,201634|0,201634|1) - ^
03:31:255 - Double here for consistency
03:43:255 - Add circle
03:43:669 - ^
all fixed~

[4K MX]
00:32:083 - Add 2 circles (in this way you'd fill all the 4 keys)
00:32:703 - Do the same here
02:39:324 (159324|2,159324|1) - Move both left
02:39:531 (159531|1) - Move left
03:50:289 - The guitar snapping here is strange... I found like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/894559 (look only the sliders), maybe chonicle can look this better x_x
umm, if I want to match all the sound of guitar, it would be too hard, so I would change some parttern

the other part are all fixed.

[7K MX]
01:32:083 - Add 2 circles
01:34:565 - Same, add some circles, strong note
01:35:393 - ^
01:36:014 - ^
01:41:186 - Add a circle in |3|
01:42:014 - ^ in |2|
01:42:841 - ^ in |7|
01:44:496 - ^ in |7|
01:46:152 - ^ in |2|
01:51:117 - ^ in |3|
02:01:048 (121048|3,121048|1,121048|2,121048|5,121048|6) - Maybe too many notes?
02:03:945 (123945|6,123945|2,123945|4,123945|3) - ^
02:04:358 (124358|3,124358|2,124358|1,124358|4,124358|0) - ^
02:50:703 (170703|5,170703|1) - Remove
03:05:255 (185255|0,185324|1,185393|2,185462|3,185531|4,185600|5) - They're not snapped correctly.. x_x (this silly guitar xD)
03:50:289 - Same as before, the guitar has a strange snap
this part I would be keep that.

03:56:910 - Add the same hold in |1| and |4|

the other part are all fixed.


Finished! Starred the map \o\

thank you very much for your modding and star, Roxas

- R u m i a - wrote:

[7k MX]
feel the beat o/ some strong beat doesnt feel in ur map
00:14:703 (14703|2) - move to 2nd fixed.

00:15:738 - add fixed.
00:15:945 (15945|0,15945|5,15945|4) - this 3 notes should refer to the snare notes fixed.
Note: feel the beat . . bass/snare is strong beat but the feel in ur map is missing - recheck
this part for example : 00:28:772
00:17:600 (17600|5,17600|2,17600|6,17703|0,17807|5,17807|2,17807|6,17910|0,18014|2,18014|6,18014|5,18117|0,18221|6,18221|2,18221|5,18324|0,18427|5,18427|2,18427|6) - this 1 the pitch rises, not suitable to repeat the patterns (this pattern usually use in drum stream pattern)my personal hope is the parttern like this, so I don't accept this

00:53:186 (53186|0,53186|6,53186|4,53393|3,53393|1,53600|2,53600|0,53600|5,53807|6,53807|4) - this part has same pitch and u mapped it random pattern as before, at this part I want to use this random pattern.
this part for example : 00:28:772
00:55:255
00:55:565
00:54:117 (54117|4,54221|2,54324|0) - remove
this part have sound, so I woudn't remove it.

01:01:462 whoa this beat is strong how come there is no note here? OK, fixed.

01:20:289 (80289|2,80289|4) - honestly i think this hold starts at 01:20:096
I don't match the background's sound effect.., but to match the vocal at an suitable push time

01:59:393 mini stream here fixed.

03:14:289 (194289|5,194910|5,195014|1,195117|5) - remove fixed.

03:13:876 till 03:27:117 should'nt be included in kiai , this part is called break down the bpm is low so fix this
OK, I use Roxas's Kiai time suggestion.

u need a lot more exp to map 7k ur 7k map has many flaws unlike your 4k map, ur 4k map is good (Y)
anyway i'll be modding other diffs later and this diff a bit more detail...gtg for now ^^, /
OK...this time I want to keep my original pattern's style, next time I would learn about it
thank you, rumia~

- R u m i a - wrote:

[4k EZ]
add notes to these -
01:07:669 - fixed
01:07:876 - fixed
02:07:462 - fixed, all of them are good ideas

[4k NM]
00:17:393 - add
nope, if I add note here, as the same, 00:20:703 - , 00:24:036 -, 00:27:356 - should add note, too
but I do not want to match the sound at these place. I see 00:17:600 (17600|0,17600|3,17807|1,18014|0,18014|3,18221|2,18427|3,18427|0) - as a whole part.


00:35:393 (35393|1,35807|3,36221|0) - move to other collumn ( different pitch )
OK, fixed

02:08:496 - add 1 more OK, fixed
02:11:807 - ^ fixed~
03:26:807 - add
nope, I think my NM diff shouldn't appear continuous 1/4 timing notes
03:27:014 - add
nope, as before

03:37:876 (217876|1,217876|0,218083|2,218289|3,218496|0) - these follow vocals rite? if it so , drop them 1/4 (at the blue lines) the accurate sync
nope, these notes are just for player to beat the rhythm.

03:56:496 (236496|2) - ends here 03:56:910 fixed~
03:56:910 - add hold till here 04:05:186 fixed~
[4k HD]
01:12:634 (72634|3) - if this not follows vocal it should end here 01:12:945
nope, I think end at red line is better for the feeling to the rhythm
though it's start point followed the vocal.

01:19:255 i think add the drum notes better
nice idea!, fixed

01:52:255 (112255|2) - change as hold?
nice idea, fixed

02:12:221 (132221|1) - ends here 02:12:634
fixed

02:19:669 - add
nope

[4K MX]
00:29:910 - addfixed
00:30:014 - addfixed
00:33:324 - addfixed
01:01:462 - addfixed
01:03:531 (63531|0,63841|0,64358|0) - add 1 more note herefixed
01:08:703 (68703|1,68910|1) - add 1 morefixed
01:59:496 - add nope, I can't heard any clearly sound here
02:04:772 - add 1 morefixed
02:09:324 - this beat is stronger than this vocal 02:09:531 even if you play you will feel something wrong.. fix this
fixed

02:10:048 - add fixed
[7k MX[
juz light mod
02:35:807 (155807|1) - remove doesnt suit the music with 3 holds here fixed
03:04:152 (184152|1) - idk this hold for wat fixed

ok done mod other diffs ^^ gl on ranking this

xxbidiao wrote:

7KMX 小建议：
00:50:910 (50910|2,51324|2) - 原来在空格上的两个按键，建议移动到第三列，手感会好很多。

加油！好图！

chonicle wrote:

mod by request~

[4k EZ]
00:33:531 - add a note on 3rd column(voice)
fixed

01:00:014 - add a note on 2nd column
fixed

[4k NM]
00:34:048 (34048|2) - refer to your previous part.. 00:34:255 (34255|0) you don't need a double note here
fixed

00:46:565 - add note on 1st column
fixed

00:47:807 (47807|0) - move to 2nd column
fixed

01:00:841 (60841|1) - move to 01:00:738
fixed

01:00:945 (60945|2) - add this note
fixed

01:01:048 (61048|2) - move to 2nd column
fixed

01:07:876 (67876|2) - move to 01:07:669 (67669|2) -
fixed

02:00:014 (120014|2) - add this note
fixed

02:10:152 (130152|2) - add a note on 4th column(finish)
fixed, and add finish hitsound

02:22:358 - add a note on 4th column
fixed

02:45:324 - add a note on 1st column
fixed

03:06:117 (186117|3) - move to 3rd column
fixed

03:06:221 (186221|0) - delete this note(no guitar sound)
fixed

03:06:427 (186427|3) - move to 03:06:324 (186324|3) - also change to hold, ends at 03:05:910(emphasize)
fixed!!

03:27:117 (207117|1) - change to hold like the 3rd column hold
fixed


[4k HD]
00:54:427 (54427|2) - starts at 00:54:324 (54324|2) -
fixed

00:55:772 - add one note on 1st column
fixed

00:55:876 (55876|1) - move to 3rd column
fixed

01:34:669 (94669|1) - move to 01:34:565 (94565|1) -
fixed

02:47:962 (167962|1) - snap to blue line
!!, fixed

02:52:979 (172979|1) - move to 02:52:876 (172876|1) -
fixed

02:53:134 (173134|3,173341|2) - snap to blue line
fixed

02:53:652 (173652|2) - snap to white line
fixed

02:54:738 (174738|0) - change to hold, end at
fixed

02:54:841 (174841|2) - delete this hold
fixed

02:54:841 (174841|3) - move to 02:54:945 (174945|3) -
fixed

02:55:876 (175876|0) - move to 02:56:083 (176083|0) -
fixed

02:56:393 (176393|0) - change to hold, end at 02:56:600
fixed

02:57:117 (177117|1) - delete this note
fixed

02:57:531 (177531|3) - move to 02:57:738 (177738|3) -
fixed

03:21:324 - add a note on 1st column
03:49:358 (229358|1) - add a note here(This is the ending guitar note and also finish)
fixed

03:49:462 (229462|0,229462|3) - delete these two
fixed

[4K MX]
00:55:876 (55876|2) - move to 00:55:772 (55772|0) -
fixed

00:55:979 (55979|3) - move to 00:55:876 (55876|3) -
fixed

00:57:324 (57324|1) - delete this note
fixed

01:31:669 - add one note on 1st column.
fixed

You need to be more careful about the double notes in this part.
OK..

Like this: 01:33:117 (93117|3,93117|2,93324|3,93324|2) - why they are double notes? inconsistent with other single notes and these are not necessarily to be emphasized.
fixed, change the doulbe to single, it just an noob mapper want to add beat feeling ;w;

01:34:669 (94669|2) - move to 01:34:565 (94565|2) -
fixed

02:06:738 (126738|2) - move to 02:06:841 (126841|2) - Like these double notes should be consistent with before
fixed

02:47:962 (167962|1) - snap to blue line
fixed

02:52:979 (172979|1,173134|3,173341|2,173496|1,173652|2) - refer to 4K HD
fixed

02:56:393 (176393|0,176600|2) - This part is the same with before. Why you are omitting some notes?
fixed, this question is hard to reply...
I think, at this part, I want to beat with vocal point subjectively, after many times play test by myself, I choose to omit some note

03:12:117 (192117|2) - move to 03:12:221 (192221|2) -
fixed

03:17:910 (197910|3,197910|0) - delete one of the notes
fixed

03:21:324 - add a note on 2nd column
fixed

03:49:358 (229358|1,229462|0,229462|3) - refer to 4K HD
fixed

7K MX might need more mods T.T
Ok;w;, I will ask modder to mod this diff