- Racoon - wrote:

Hi~ From my queue~ Hey!

Muzukashii

00:06:894 - delete? - I think this note is not necessary Okay.
00:10:394 - d? - Same pattern and rhythm about 00:06:394(14,15) Okay.
00:10:644(27) - k? - ^ Okay.
00:27:894(79) - d? - Low tone than 00:27:394(78,80) Okay.
01:42:454(101,102) - Ctrl+G? - Guitar Rhythm is tone up Okay, sounds better.

Good Luck~

DakeDekaane wrote:

well, looks like a circle was put here.

[General]
You don't seem to be using the drum-hitwhitstle file, so remove it.
Taiko custom hitsounds for a beatmap doesn't work, se remove them too. (idk if it's a bug or intended though).
Make letterboxing consistent in all diffs.

[ Easy]
00:02:144 (1,2) - I think it'd be better to have a slider here, as there's no music lead-in, making it a bit hard to catch.
I'm going to suggest to remove a few notes, to create 2/1 rhythm which would help to represent the song better, as having full 1/1 in some parts isn't really nice.
00:10:144 (4) - Remove it or make 00:09:144 (3) - a 2 beats slider.
00:25:144 (4,5) - ^
00:40:144 (4) - You should have a 2 beats slider here, to have consistency in hitsounds like in 00:43:144 (3) - and 00:47:644 (4) - I don't think it won't work, [/color]
01:00:144 (4) - Use a single circle in 01:00:644 - instead this slider.
01:17:144 (3,4) - Use a 2 beats slider here, for hitsounding.
01:30:204 (4) - Use a single circle in 01:30:704 - instead this slider.
01:38:204 (4) - Something similar.

[ Normal]
I'd suggest to use a CS around 3.5-3.7, it'll make the map look less cluttered as it'll reduce the overlaps in 1/2 notes. I'll put the CS to 3.5, I'll let a little overlap on objects.
00:45:894 (2) - You're missing a clap here, I think.
00:47:894 (7) - ^
01:11:144 - Snap the timing point here properly.

[ Hard]
00:14:144 (8,9) - How about moving this 1/2 beat later and have the circle go first? It'd follow better the song imo.

00:27:144 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - You should make the spacing consistent here, looks a bit messy the first objects having 1.1x and the others 1.0x I'll put a gap between (4,5) because of the downbeat.
00:46:644 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^Something similar.
00:45:894 (3) - Didn't you miss a clap here?
01:06:144 (3) - This one is touching the HP bar considerably.
01:07:144 - Not using 40% volume here? Though you'd want to try 35% in non-kiai and 40% in kiai. I think the 35% volume was for finish, but I'll put to 40%.
01:15:144 (1,2,3,4) - What I said about spacing above.
01:19:144 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:35:704 (2) - ^Something similar, but moving this above, around 380,344 is enough

[ Oni]
I feel the difficulty a bit hard for the song, as it is really calm, so it'd be better to have less dense rhythm.

Doubles like 00:07:019 (22,23) - and 00:08:019 (26,27) - aren't really suitable, as they doesn't give the emphasis the note needs, it does the opposite as the strong beat it's being opaqued, a single note there is enough to achieve that. tl;dr no doubles like this one.

Some notes can be easily removed without changing the map too much. This would create small gaps between phrases, helping to represent the song better.
00:08:894 (29,30) -
00:10:144 (33) - ^
00:12:144 (45) - ^
00:16:144 (63,65) - ^
00:17:394 (69) - ^
00:24:519 (99) - ^
00:26:144 (107) - ^
00:28:144 (115) - ^
00:32:144 (131) - ^
00:36:894 (148) - ^
00:38:144 (154) - ^
00:44:894 (182) - ^
00:49:394 (198) - ^
The rest is mapped in a similar way so you could have an idea for what to remove.

Adding some change for patterns
00:02:144 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I think kkddkkddd would fit better here.
00:15:394 (59,60,61,62) - This could be better as asimple d k d, as you're breaking the consistency in kats on 2nd and 4th beat here.
01:26:204 (341,342,343,344,345,346,347,348) - As in the first stream.

[ Muzukashii]
As you'll be making Oni a bit easier, you'd probably want to make Muzukashii easier by removing a few notes too. Just going to drop some suggestions for patterns.

00:05:394 (11) - This note can be removed.
00:11:144 (29,30,31,32,33,34) - I'd suggest to change this pattern a bit, feels a bit weird to play as it's changing from mapping to the main beat to mapping only for vocals, while vocal mapping isn't bad itself, changing from mapping to the main beat is a bit misleading while playing, either continue mapping the instrumental, or do something like this, which uses both layers and wouldn't be that weird while playing.

00:16:894 (44) - Something similar as above. move this to 00:16:644 - .
00:18:394 (49,50,51,52,53) - ddk should be avoided as posible in Muzukashii, you could try a kkk k D pattern here.
00:22:894 (64) - This could be better in 00:23:394 - .
00:26:894 (76,77,78,79,80,81) - Something similar as in previous part.
00:32:894 (91) - ^Similar.
00:37:144 - 00:53:144 - You should change a bit the whole thing here, same reason I said above about changing to vocal mapping
00:47:269 (33) - The triple here is unnecesary imo.
00:52:144 (47,48,49,50,51) - k kkk k D would work nicely here and it isn't hard.

00:53:144 - (end) the map went really inconsistent for main beat mapping, so I'm a bit confused on what you tried to do, a pattern looks like following the main beat, then the other for vocals, and looks like other one for guitar x_X
I'll give you a sample of what you could do if you want to mix everything

We keep the kats on 2nd and 4th beats for drums, as well as dons on the bassy drum sounds, and then we have some spots where there's two/three kats in a row, which matches nicely for either the guitar or the vocals. We also have a pattern for vocal mapping in the middle, while following the main beat too. For reference, sections between vocal phrases, like 01:06:894 (93,94,95,96,97,98,99,100,101,102,1,2,3) - are good to keep.

00:59:519 (72) - While this triple fits, it's really not good considering the song and difficulty.
01:15:019 (17) - ^
01:26:204 (48,49,50,51,52,53) - You could add a note in 01:26:329 - and make it kkk kkk D, or do k kkk k D, like I suggested before. I'll put k k kkk . In my opinion, it would fit with the song. It goes lower then higher.[/color]

Also, if possible, try to have some gaps larger than 1 beat between patterns when possible, for example, you could delete notes like 00:22:394 (62) - to create a 3/2 gap, representing nicely the space between vocal phrases.

I hope it helps you, any doubt you have you can poke me in-game or a forum PM.

mingmichael wrote:

wogh i remembered that i ever modded this a year ago. so then, let me take care your taikos :3 Thank you!

Red ~> unrakable issue, must be changed
Blue ~> highly suggested, consider to use it
Black ~> suggestion, just free to choose it


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[ Muzukashii]

General

☞ first, this timing point is useless 00:03:144 - , just delete this one. the offset doesn't change and it becomes meaningless for using it Fixed

☞ change OD to be 4. make it different from Oni Okay.

Notes Structure

☞ nice Muzukashii here i am going to improve some patterns and also try to manage the usage of the breaks on this diff too~ don't worry, it's not complicated you can see the suggestions on the Notes box later Okay.

Notes

• swap these notes, 00:05:644 - and 00:05:894 - . a kat on 00:05:644 - will support the snare sound perfectly Okay.

• here, try to delete 00:06:394 - one. well i think you want to follow the drum hits there or another sounds. okay, it's nice~ but we should have a little break there which is more than 2/2 break. if you delete 00:06:394 - , the break between 00:05:894 - and 00:06:644 - becomes 3/2 and it's perfect for this kind of breaks for Muzukashii players, so they will get some extra breaks in some parts Okay.

• 00:10:394 - same like above. you can just move it to 00:11:644 - Okay.

• hm i have a little idea from 00:10:644 - until 00:13:894 - . you can see this one :


you can see and hear the sounds which are given from those notes, especially the kats. they support the snare sounds perfectly and it feels more enjoyable for playing because we can follow the snare sounds perfectly, like we play drums :3 Sounds more nicer.

• add a note (don) on 00:16:394 - and delete this one 00:17:394 - . there's not any reasons for using xxxx notes from 00:17:144 - until 00:17:894 - (even though you want to follow the drums). you can hear that the guitars come out on 00:17:144 - ; 00:17:644 - and 00:17:894 - , and it gives a 2/2 break in 00:17:394 - Okay.

• remove the finisher on 00:19:144 - , make it consistent like 00:03:144 - which you didn't use a finisher on there Okay.

• delete 00:25:394 - and 00:26:394 - . the reason is same like the first part, for adding some extra breaks Okay.

• awh, move 00:27:394 - to 00:27:644 - . it's really clear that the vocal comes out on 00:27:644 - (ah actually it comes out on 00:27:519 - , but it would be much better if we follow the white strikes for taikos) Okay.

• i have another idea again from 00:30:644 - until 00:33:894 - . you can see below :


in my suggestion above, i tried to make your patterns to focus on the vocals+snare sounds there. you can hear the usage of the kats and also the xx-xx patterns there which follow the the snares and vocals perfectly Sounds great.

• no, remove the finisher on 00:35:144 - please. there is not any reasons to use it since the song is calm and there's not any cymbal sounds there. Fixed.

• try to change 00:37:144 - until 00:37:894 - to be o o o o I'd change a bit the pattern; I'd put the last note intact (which is a kat) because of the strong drum beat.

• change 00:45:144 - until 00:45:894 - to be o o o o, if you change above ^ This would be applied, because the drum on where the last note in the pattern lands isn't strong.

• a kat please 00:47:894 - . make it consistent like 00:39:894 - Okay.

• delete 00:56:394 - to make some extra breaks (i mean a 3/2 break) Okay.

• move 00:58:144 - to 00:58:394 - . following the vocals there would be nice like you did for the next patterns after this with xx-xxxx patterns This time, I think that pattern here sounds weird, and there's a beat on 00:58:144 so I don't want to change.

• here delete too 00:59:394 - Okay.

• delete 01:07:394 - even thought you followed the guitar . i don't get any ideas for the usage of the notes on 01:07:394 - . much be better with a break there Okay.

• same here 01:08:394 - Okay.

• no a finisher on 01:09:144 - . change it to be a normal one Okay.

• remove 01:11:394 - please. well i deleted this one to give a 2/2 break there after the finisher comes out on 01:11:144 - . and swap 01:11:644 - with 01:11:894 - Okay.

• move 01:14:394 - to 01:12:394 - Okay.

• delete 01:18:394 - for the break Okay.

• here an inconsistent pattern suddenly from 01:18:644 - until 01:25:704 - . why? look on your pattern. you mostly use 1/2 pattern in the red strikes. it becomes inconsistent if we connect with the previous and next pattern which the 1/2 notes aren't single, but always xx or xxxx. here you can look this one for the suggestion : Fixed why did I follow the vocal...

it's 01:18:644 - to 01:25:704 -

• move 01:26:829 - to 01:26:329 - . a triplet before a finisher will just increase the difficulty of the Muzukashii, so that's why i tried to move it earlier Okay.

• remove 01:27:454 - , a little break (2/2 break) after the finisher comes out Okay.

• a don would be nice 01:29:454 - Okay.

• delete 01:30:454 - Okay.

• add a note on 01:32:454 - Okay. I switched the next note to a kat, because of the beat.

• 01:33:454 - and 01:34:454 - delete Okay.

• add a note on 01:36:454 - and delete 01:38:454 - Okay.

• try to move 01:40:204 - to 01:39:954 - . this note will support the vocals perfectly there Okay.

• and delete 01:41:454 - . to give a little break there with 2/2 break after the ooo-triplet comes out on 01:40:954 - Okay.

• and also delete 01:42:454 - Okay.

• move 01:44:954 - to 01:44:704 - and change it with kat and change 01:45:204 - to be don Okay.

• i don't really recommend to use a ooo-triplet on 01:46:579 - . just map Muzukashii with the Muzukashii pattern, don't try to use a different triplet like Oni does Okay.

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[ Oni]

General

☞ first, this timing point is useless 00:03:144 - , just delete this one. the offset doesn't change and it becomes meaningless for using it Okay.

Notes Structure

☞ nice Oni here :3 it has a simple patterns which are fit perfectly with this slow song~ i just have some suggestions to improve your Oni in the Notes box later~

Notes

• try to move 00:13:769 - to 00:13:519 - . that ooo o flows better and naturally IMO there It does. Moved the note.

• here, you can try to change 00:14:894 - ; 00:15:019 - and 00:15:144 - to be ooo. you can hear that the vocal becomes lower on 00:15:144 - , so that's why i tried to use a don on there for the low vocal Fits perfectly.

• and also delete 00:15:519 - . not really clear for the usage of the triplet on there Okay.

• a don would be nice on 00:26:394 - , to avoid the usage of kat notes which are a bit many from 00:25:644 - ~ 00:26:644 - Okay.

• and same here, move 00:29:769 - to 00:29:519 - Okay.

• no a finisher on 00:33:144 - , it doesn't support any sounds, like a cymbal/vocal/strong sounds there. change to be a normal don there and change 00:32:644 - to be kat. you will see a o o o o there and it would be really nice to follow the dropping vocals there Okay.

• delete 00:38:144 - . first, there isn't any sounds come out there. and the second, it would be nice for having a little break there with a 2/2 break Okay.

• a don please 00:57:019 - . make it a ooo-triplet there Okay.

• move 00:58:144 - to 00:58:394 - Same reason in Muzukashii.

• try to change 00:58:894 - ; 00:59:019 - and 00:59:144 - to be ooo-triplet there Okay.

• add a don again on 01:09:519 - please Okay.

• add a don again on 01:31:079 - if you add it on 00:57:019 - Okay.

• try a kat on 01:32:954 - It fits.

• delete 01:44:204 - , try to add some break there and avoid that long 1/2 patterns from 01:43:204 - until end Okay.

• delete 01:46:204 - too Okay

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i'll do a recheck after you change these. Oni is fine actually, but Muzukashii needs more improvements. but don't worry, if you try to use my suggestions there, i believe this Muzukashii could be improve well
call me back later~ :3

mingmichael wrote:

[ Oni]

• same on 00:53:394 - , delete to give a little break after the stream comes out Seems a bit weird when removing this note. There's a beat that I might don't want to miss.

• 01:25:954 - and 01:27:454 - same like above ^ Only the first one though, the second is because of that high note.

Neku okazaki wrote:

Lets rank this!!!

Project Railgun wrote:

Neku okazaki wrote:

Lets rank this!!!

Awaken wrote:

you didn't reply to my mod one year ago though aha