M4M
[General]
your hitsound in kiai time is really noisy,try normal-hitclap in http://osu.ppy.sh/s/50835 (sry...my puush doesn't work now so I can't upload the file directly)and add 24clap,it will better than yours
[Easy]
00:08:301 (1) - I strongly suggest shortening this by 1/4.First,00:08:939 matches nothing.Second,if you do so,the time distance between 00:08:301 (1,2) - will be 2/1,which is easier for newbies.
00:09:418 (2) - the head need a finish
00:10:854 (3,1,2) - a little crowded,I advise you to use 1.2x when you make your next map
00:13:407 (3) - use tick to follow the drums like 00:15:961 (3) - ?
00:19:790 (2,3) - add clap sounds very good
00:21:705 (1,1,2) - try like this? your flow is bad. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1190651
00:28:407 I'd add a note with clap
00:31:280 (1) - use tick to follow the drums
00:37:503 (2) - head - finish tail - clap
00:38:939 (1) - add whistle?
[Normal]
00:04:312 (3,5) - add whistle sounds good
00:09:099 (2,3,4) - 2's tail-finish 3-whitle 4-finish
[Hard]
00:22:024 (3) - head-clap
a little easy,maybe you can add some more 1/2s
[Insane]
00:05:110 (5,6) - ctrl+g for better flow
I advise you to reset all the NCs.add NC for downbeat,and each downbeat one NC
much better than the last time I modded.
you need take pains to find out the good method of adding NC and hitsound,but the map is ok enough since it's your first one?
maybe you can ask mod from BAT now
[General]
your hitsound in kiai time is really noisy,try normal-hitclap in http://osu.ppy.sh/s/50835 (sry...my puush doesn't work now so I can't upload the file directly)and add 24clap,it will better than yours
[Easy]
00:08:301 (1) - I strongly suggest shortening this by 1/4.First,00:08:939 matches nothing.Second,if you do so,the time distance between 00:08:301 (1,2) - will be 2/1,which is easier for newbies.
00:09:418 (2) - the head need a finish
00:10:854 (3,1,2) - a little crowded,I advise you to use 1.2x when you make your next map
00:13:407 (3) - use tick to follow the drums like 00:15:961 (3) - ?
00:19:790 (2,3) - add clap sounds very good
00:21:705 (1,1,2) - try like this? your flow is bad. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1190651
00:28:407 I'd add a note with clap
00:31:280 (1) - use tick to follow the drums
00:37:503 (2) - head - finish tail - clap
00:38:939 (1) - add whistle?
[Normal]
00:04:312 (3,5) - add whistle sounds good
00:09:099 (2,3,4) - 2's tail-finish 3-whitle 4-finish
[Hard]
00:22:024 (3) - head-clap
a little easy,maybe you can add some more 1/2s
[Insane]
00:05:110 (5,6) - ctrl+g for better flow
I advise you to reset all the NCs.add NC for downbeat,and each downbeat one NC
much better than the last time I modded.
you need take pains to find out the good method of adding NC and hitsound,but the map is ok enough since it's your first one?
maybe you can ask mod from BAT now