so uhh the beatmap is corrupt for me when i tried to download it, i did some tweaking and was able to extract the files, but you might want to confirm if others are having the same issueThank you!
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i think the osz corruption is due to a file called "__ - normal-hitclap2" (yes it has 2 extra underscores and the dash) in the osz, not sure where it came from but you probably want to check if you have that in your local map folder and delete it → okay! (it's copy files. it's my mistake. removed)
the timing at 01:05:110 is a bit off; add a red line at 01:05:145 and then restore the timing with another red line at 01:05:748. make sure to resnap everything! → nice. i don't know how thinking this fact
00:04:471 (2) - might want a finish on the end to catch the cymbal crash → Fixed.
00:26:173 (1) - sounds more fitting if you ended this at 00:27:290; also add a finish on the start here → fixed, but.. umm, it's too hard? well- i don't know. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1259465
00:32:397 (2) - the rhythm difference here is somewhat hard to grasp for a newbie player; make this a slider ending at 00:32:876 instead → Fixed. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1259470
00:36:386 (1) - finish on start → Fixed.
01:00:003 - add a note here to cover for the vocals → Fixed.
01:02:876 (2) - use this rhythm instead, covers the down beat at 01:03:195: → Fixed. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1259509
01:05:748 (1) - finish on start → Fixed.
00:04:312 (3,4,5,6) - could use some whistles here so it doesnt sound too blant; i would add it on 00:04:312 (3,6) → i missed. i'm already fixed this mod, but... umm where is my whistle sound?.. Fixed.
00:22:024 (2) - lower this a bit, would flow better with 00:21:387 (1,3) (e.g. x:228 y:164) → Fixed.
00:42:290 - this should be covered with something; you can add a note here or use a 1/2 slider and then delete 00:42:450 (3) → http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1259528 you find nice sound. Fixed. ah. but i think hard rhythm? umm..
01:02:876 (2) - use a 3-point slider here for a more natural curve → http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1259532
01:09:418 (3,6) - you can add whistles here too → Fixed.
use HP6, fits the overall note density of this diff better → Fixed.
00:10:056 (2) - should have a finish on the start here to match the cymbal in the music → Fixed.
00:23:620 (1,2) - use a better blanket here will make it look a lot nicer → like this! http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1259559
00:33:354 - i would add a note here to catch the drum roll → change this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1259581
00:42:290 (1) - NC here is not really necessary; if you want to keep this then move the next NC to start on 00:43:088 (2) instead → remove NC '1' note
00:45:003 (1,2) - this would fit the music better if you used a rhythm like this: → Fixed. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1259586
01:00:641 (8) - NC here since combo is quite long → Fixed.
01:05:110 (4) - uhh break this into 3 notes? would fit the drum pattern in the music nicely (or repeat slider or anything else that covers 01:05:269) → Fixed. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1259605 and changed some rhythm. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1259632
01:09:737 (7) - clap with sliderslide? the clap is skipped over at 01:09:897 → umm. fixed sliderslide. (but it's bad sound?.. i don't know.)
01:15:163 (6) - i would add a NC here to emphasize the finishing pattern → fixed, and changed some axis http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1259638
00:05:269 (6) - the stacking here is quite flow breaking; i would place this at somewhere like x:200 y:164 for a nice circular flow → Fixed.
00:10:056 (3) - finish on start → Fixed.
00:13:407 (8) - NC here, combo is way too long → Fixed.
00:25:216 (6,7) - try ctrl+g on this, would give a more interesting flow for playing → nice.
00:28:727 (1) - forgot clap on end → Fixed.
00:33:833 (5) - add a NC here, remove the one at 00:36:067 (1) and add one onto 00:36:386 (3); this way its neater and fits the music better → like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1259691
00:42:290 (5,1,2) - these 3 should be the same color since they belong to one jump → 00:42:450 (1) - remove NC
00:52:663 (11,12) - try moving these two like this, flows much better imo: → it's pretty
01:01:280 (3) - delete this note, because of the way you handled 00:50:907 (4,5) its really easy to think that the same rhythm applies here and miss-hit the note → hmmmm. make sure -change too hard this part? okay-
01:04:790 (5,6) - due to the timing change mentioned before you could change this to one 3/4 slider to avoid timing confusion → like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1259785
01:12:135 (6,7,8,9) - this is easier to handle if you stacked 01:12:135 (6,7) together and 01:12:454 (8,9) together, leaving 01:12:773 (10) out of the stack → Fixed.
Well thats about it from me, let me know when you are done with fixing
also, re-check some hitsounds. redownload plz~~