haha i don't know what that black haired chick is named but I would do her multiple times.
00:00:801 (4) - This feels weird to play mostly because it starts on the red tick, whereas the emphasis is on the white tick beforehand.
00:04:631 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - I'd rather have the jumps more spaced out from (6). I'm not saying to increase spacing, but I'm getting really confused having to go back to (8) since it's so close to (6)
00:09:737 (1,2,3) - Would prefer it if these were in the same order as the previous notes
00:38:461 (2) - I know stacks are pretty but proper spacing is like having a personal stripper on your own private island. Make this spacing even so (3) isn't awkwardly shorter
00:45:801 (4) - ^
00:17:237 (2) - Remove clap.
00:34:312 (2) - WOAH. Jumps are fun when they're natural, and this doesn't feel all too natural
00:38:301 (1) - Spinners should have some sort of meaning, weather it be a long held out note, or a low-key transitional area. This spinner is REALLY random. I'd personally just map this part.
00:52:024 (5) - Add normal hitnormal on the end of this slider
01:15:481 (2,3) - This is dying to be a jump
CLAPS ON 2 AND 4 pls
00:26:173 (1) - This would be better not overlapping
00:38:860 (1) - Add some sort of hitsound to this. Maybe like a whistle or finish or something
CLAPS ON 2 AND 4 ALSO pls
It's a good start. The biggest issues I'm finding is that although you have a decent grasp of sparsely using jumps, its important to also look at how jumps play. Even if something looks visually pleasing and looks cool to play, sometimes it might be awkward to actually achieve.