Misawa Sachika - Unite (TV Size)

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Tsukuyomi wrote:

Hi~hi~from my queue
reply to m4m req

Hard
00:01:759 (5) - NC
00:04:313 (1,2) - NC 2 and remove NC on 1
00:15:003 (4) - NC
NC is a mess try more regular way,NC every 1 long white tick in hard and insane,2 in easy and normal → remake NC of hard diff
00:05:747 (6) - move it a bit down → Fixed.
00:10:694 (4) - repalce it bt stream or repeater → Fixed reverse slider.
00:26:652 (3) - try 3/4 rhythm → i think better now
00:27:290 (1) - i prefer a slider here → Fixed.
00:37:503 (4) - a 1/1 slider + 1 note is better → Fixed.
00:56:971 (7) - be care for distance between sliders,current one looks not so good → Fixed.
01:02:237 (1) - rhythm here is complex,don't use a long slider to cover these drums → Fixed.
for example
01:11:812
01:12:131
some parts like these,you miss loud drum or other things this make diff inconsistent → Fixed.

Insane
too many empty notes,make diff looks inconsistent,you can use more slider to solve this problem
00:04:790 (3,4,5) - you can stack 5 on 00:04:312 (1) - 's tail and change 4 and 6's placement,current one looks random → Fixed.
00:10:774 add a note,make a stream to show the drum → Fixed.
00:20:429 (1) -make it a repeater,drum at 00:20:509 is loud → Fixed.
00:26:652 (6) - same as hard → i think better now
00:27:769 (3) - blanket,decrease its curve → Fixed.
00:37:503 (8) - same as hard → Fixed.
00:52:184 (8,9,10) - i think there is stream here → i think better now
01:02:237 you can here stream here,but change or no it's call you → ^ because it's follow vocal??
01:06:227 add note,i think you should change this pattern,it dosen't fit the music imo,music is consistent here → Fixed.

i think easy and normal's rhythm isn't good
especially beginning and end
they sound strange
here is my rhythm
http://puu.sh/5bjEV.rar
only map the beginning
they are not best but i hope they can help you

also arrangement can be improved

let's all
good luck
Thank you! ;)

I'll change easy,normal diff. because i'm sleep now-

Easy - non-fixed. because it's too hard. so i made easy pattern. umm

Normal - fixed some little.

ahh

sleep now. :o
kogasa
Boo! From my modding queue.

Easy
No problems here.

Normal
00:01:918 (3,4,5) - This is a little too fast and hard for normal mode.
00:05:269 (3) - Weird beat. Hard to read. Would be better on the white line. Try these:

It emphasizes the beat you wanted to but is more readable.

(Alternate suggestion)
00:54:259 (4,5,6) - If moved to curve more would flow better.

Hard
00:22:982 (5) - How about moving this to where the start of 00:22:024 (3) was?
00:34:312 (2) - Move to where 00:33:833 (3) is.

Insane
00:04:312 (1) - This combo's pattern was confusing and didn't flow well.

This is really good for your first map! Really nice. :)
Good luck!
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kogasa wrote:

Boo! From my modding queue.

Easy
No problems here.

Normal
00:01:918 (3,4,5) - This is a little too fast and hard for normal mode. → Fixed. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1091773
00:05:269 (3) - Weird beat. Hard to read. Would be better on the white line. Try these: :D→ umm, change rythem. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1091787

It emphasizes the beat you wanted to but is more readable.

(Alternate suggestion)
00:54:259 (4,5,6) - If moved to curve more would flow better. → change this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1091789

Hard
00:22:982 (5) - How about moving this to where the start of 00:22:024 (3) was? → Fixed.
00:34:312 (2) - Move to where 00:33:833 (3) is. → moved 00:34:631 (3) - and changed some notes axis. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1091799

Insane
00:04:312 (1) - This combo's pattern was confusing and didn't flow well. → hmm, if i fix this mod, change another NC pattern...

This is really good for your first map! Really nice. :)
Good luck!
Wait, i'll check your mod..

Thank you! ;)
ritsu-tanaika
Hey, M4M

EASY

00:00:642 (1) - Add a finish at the beginning, to emphasize the start of the song

00:03:195 (1) - Would suggest stacking this on top of 00:00:642 (1) - to avoid the overlap (caused by low approach rate)

X:124 Y:184

00:10:854 (3) - - I think this note would be better if it was on 00:10:695 instead

00:15:961 (3) - Add a clap at the turn back point, clap should be at regular intervals

00:17:556 (4) - ^ but at the end of this slider instead

00:31:280 (1) - Should extend slider to 00:32:070, Easy difficulty shouldnt really follow complicated vocals, more on regular drum rhythm

00:52:024 (5) - Suggest adding this slider here to avoid the gap, gaps break rhythm and makes the player lose focus sometimes


01:02:876 (2) - Add a clap at beginning

01:05:110 (3) - I think its better if this slider started at 01:05:748 instead, and ending at 01:06:067

NORMAL

00:00:642 (1) - Add finish at the beginning, again, same reason as the first note on Easy

00:22:024 (2) - This note appears to be too high off screen, try to lower it to X:212 Y:48 to make it easier to hit

00:25:535 (1) - Add whistle at beginning, without it its totally silent

00:41:812 (2) - Try this rhythm, it sounds better than the current one, more accurate rhthym


00:44:046 (3,4) - Try not to stack these notes together, because it may be hard to distinguish under the same color

01:11:174 (1,2) - Its not recommended to have so many 1/2 sliders on a Normal difficulty, try separating them through white ticks only, or replace them with individual circles on the white ticks. many alternative ways so you'll have to experiment it yourself

01:12:450 (4,5) - Doesnt really fit the rhythm, try changing to one long slider from 01:12:450 to 01:13:088

HARD

00:10:376 (3) - Suggest adding a Finish to emphasize a note on the red tick

00:13:408 (1) - Spacing error, too far apart from 00:13:089 (4) -

00:26:971 (4) - I think the flow of the map would be better if this was stacked at the head of 00:26:173 (2) - instead of the tail, the tail forces the player to make awkward movements

00:29:684 (5) - Add this note here to avoid confusion in the rhythm, the gap creates the confusion

00:35:269 (4,5) - watch for spacing here

00:41:493 (2,3,4,5) - increase the volume of hitsounds of this square pattern, preferably 80%, and then add claps to 2 and 5

00:52:024 (5,6,7,8) - This pattern doesnt really flow well, consider changing to 2 1/2 sliders instead

01:06:865 (3) - Add a clap here, the note is silent without it

01:11:971 (1) - NC this note to make the two seperate patterns more obvious


Cant mod insane, sorry. but I hope I helped
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ritsu-tanaika wrote:

Hey, M4M

EASY

00:00:642 (1) - Add a finish at the beginning, to emphasize the start of the song → Fixed.

00:03:195 (1) - Would suggest stacking this on top of 00:00:642 (1) - to avoid the overlap (caused by low approach rate)

X:124 Y:184 → okay, stack '1' slider's tail.

00:10:854 (3) - - I think this note would be better if it was on 00:10:695 instead → add slider 00:10:695 ~ 00:10:854

00:15:961 (3) - Add a clap at the turn back point, clap should be at regular intervals → Fixed hit clap (add some slidertick)

00:17:556 (4) - ^ but at the end of this slider instead → Fixed 00:17:556 - add hitclaps

00:31:280 (1) - Should extend slider to 00:32:070, Easy difficulty shouldnt really follow complicated vocals, more on regular drum rhythm → hmm, well. i think better now. it's slider. and 00:32:397 (2) - this note. follow vocal+drum sound. so.. i think better now!..

00:52:024 (5) - Suggest adding this slider here to avoid the gap, gaps break rhythm and makes the player lose focus sometimes → Fixed.


01:02:876 (2) - Add a clap at beginning → Fixed.

01:05:110 (3) - I think its better if this slider started at 01:05:748 instead, and ending at 01:06:067 → Fixed.

NORMAL

00:00:642 (1) - Add finish at the beginning, again, same reason as the first note on Easy → Fixed.

00:22:024 (2) - This note appears to be too high off screen, try to lower it to X:212 Y:48 to make it easier to hit → i checked this problem. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1096798

00:25:535 (1) - Add whistle at beginning, without it its totally silent → hmm, i think... not? i don't have another hitwhistle sound.

00:41:812 (2) - Try this rhythm, it sounds better than the current one, more accurate rhthym → I first tried your rhythm..


00:44:046 (3,4) - Try not to stack these notes together, because it may be hard to distinguish under the same color → it's normal diff. it's alright!

01:11:174 (1,2) - Its not recommended to have so many 1/2 sliders on a Normal difficulty, try separating them through white ticks only, or replace them with individual circles on the white ticks. many alternative ways so you'll have to experiment it yourself → well, okay. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1096813

01:12:450 (4,5) - Doesnt really fit the rhythm, try changing to one long slider from 01:12:450 to 01:13:088 → i think better now.

HARD

00:10:376 (3) - Suggest adding a Finish to emphasize a note on the red tick → Fixed.

00:13:408 (1) - Spacing error, too far apart from 00:13:089 (4) - → i think better now. maybe not hard.

00:26:971 (4) - I think the flow of the map would be better if this was stacked at the head of 00:26:173 (2) - instead of the tail, the tail forces the player to make awkward movements → Fixed.

00:29:684 (5) - Add this note here to avoid confusion in the rhythm, the gap creates the confusion → changed. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1096834

00:35:269 (4,5) - watch for spacing here → Fixed.

00:41:493 (2,3,4,5) - increase the volume of hitsounds of this square pattern, preferably 80%, and then add claps to 2 and 5 → Fixed.

00:52:024 (5,6,7,8) - This pattern doesnt really flow well, consider changing to 2 1/2 sliders instead → Fixed.

01:06:865 (3) - Add a clap here, the note is silent without it → Fixed.

01:11:971 (1) - NC this note to make the two seperate patterns more obvious → Fixed.


Cant mod insane, sorry. but I hope I helped
Thank you! ;)
TatsumiAlicekawa
Hello~ M4M~

It is the color that fit your background ←Though they are chinese,you know what to do.
[Easy]
Maybe AR+1
00:10:695 - feel uncomfortable.You can change it to a note at 00:10:854
[Normal]
00:06:067 - change to this
[Hard]
00:40:216 - add a clap
[Insane]
00:00:801 - Ctrl+G
00:04:790 - move to x:283 y:225 00:04:950 - move to x:156 y:225 00:05:110 - move to x:156 y:93 00:05:269 - move to x:286 y:94
00:30:163 - move to x:211 y:221

That`s all.I think your map is nice. :DAnd I will shoot a star.
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TatsumiAlicekawa wrote:

Hello~ M4M~ hi!

It is the color that fit your background ←Though they are chinese,you know what to do. → hmm? i added background image. so... pass?
[Easy]
Maybe AR+1 → umm... okay.
00:10:695 - feel uncomfortable.You can change it to a note at 00:10:854 → Fixed.
[Normal]
00:06:067 - change to this→ i think better now
[Hard]
00:40:216 - add a clap → no, wait... 00:41:173 - add clap.
[Insane]
00:00:801 - Ctrl+G → maybe it's too easy?
00:04:790 - move to x:283 y:225 00:04:950 - move to x:156 y:225 00:05:110 - move to x:156 y:93 00:05:269 - move to x:286 y:94 → it's quadrangle o.o non-fixed. because it's too easy...?
00:30:163 - move to x:211 y:221 → i missed. change perfect star

That`s all.I think your map is nice. :DAnd I will shoot a star.
Thank you! ;)
-Teina-
[Insana]
00:06:705 (1,2) - try to reversion the qualify ↓


Sorry I can don't other uncomfortable thing.

Your map is very nice.
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tellertheworld wrote:

[Insanae]
00:06:705 (1,2) - try to reversion the qualify ↓


Sorry I can don't other uncomfortable thing.

Your map is very nice.
Fixed your mod.


Thank you! ;)
Mythiax
Hi, mod from



[General]
  1. Remove (TV Size) from the title.

    Ranking Criteria wrote:

    Do not alter the song's title. This includes adding any marker to describe the cut of the song such as "Short Ver.", "TV Size" and so forth unless those markers are part of the official song title as listed by a reputable source.


[Easy]
  1. 00:48:993 (2) - I'm not sure about this note. It's in a red tick and it's confusing even for me :P
  2. 00:52:982 (1) - This sliders has a weird rhythm. Try this. Makes more sense with the song.
  3. 01:02:876 (2) - Remove the repeat and add a note at 01:04:471 - to emphasize the downbeat.
  4. 01:09:578 (2) - This slider doesn't look really good. Can you make a nicer one?


[Normal]
  1. Not much. All i can say is that it looks like a Normal +. So many notes lol


[Hard]
  1. AR +1 This is a High BPM map (188) and it plays much better with AR8. It helps map's reading.
  2. 00:34:152 (1,2) - This notes are confusing. You're using same spacing as 00:33:514 (2,3) - but it's closer in the time line. Read carefully: you should fix this ONLY if you DON'T change the AR. Having a higher AR makes it readable imo so, if you use AR8 this shouldn't be a problem at all.


[Insane]
  1. 00:15:003 (5) - NC here. The music asks for it.
  2. 00:53:461 - Add a note here, it feels so empty


I think that's all, some parts of your map are awkward but they're ok after all.

Good luck with this o/
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Zeroarg wrote:

Hi, mod from



[General]
  1. Remove (TV Size) from the title. → umm, really?.. i think it's wrong answer. because http://osu.ppy.sh/s/110803 it's ranked. (actually, i don't know ↓this sentence. because i have bad english skill. maybe it's do not use a short ver, tv size.. etc.?)

    Ranking Criteria wrote:

    Do not alter the song's title. This includes adding any marker to describe the cut of the song such as "Short Ver.", "TV Size" and so forth unless those markers are part of the official song title as listed by a reputable source.


[Easy]
  1. 00:48:993 (2) - I'm not sure about this note. It's in a red tick and it's confusing even for me :P→ well, it's follow vocal. umm... i changed simple slider http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1152995
  2. 00:52:982 (1) - This sliders has a weird rhythm. Try this. Makes more sense with the song. → fix some hitsound. umm, not bad this slider ;_;.
  3. 01:02:876 (2) - Remove the repeat and add a note at 01:04:471 - to emphasize the downbeat. → Fixed.
  4. 01:09:578 (2) - This slider doesn't look really good. Can you make a nicer one? → okay


[Normal]
  1. Not much. All i can say is that it looks like a Normal +. So many notes lol → OwO


[Hard]
  1. AR +1 This is a High BPM map (188) and it plays much better with AR8. It helps map's reading. → nice!
  2. 00:34:152 (1,2) - This notes are confusing. You're using same spacing as 00:33:514 (2,3) - but it's closer in the time line. Read carefully: you should fix this ONLY if you DON'T change the AR. Having a higher AR makes it readable imo so, if you use AR8 this shouldn't be a problem at all. → i changed ar8


[Insane]
  1. 00:15:003 (5) - NC here. The music asks for it. → Fixed.
  2. 00:53:461 - Add a note here, it feels so empty → change slider


I think that's all, some parts of your map are awkward but they're ok after all.

Good luck with this o/
Thank you! ;)
Mythiax

Losertic wrote:

[General]
  1. Remove (TV Size) from the title. → umm, really?.. i think it's wrong answer. because http://osu.ppy.sh/s/110803 it's ranked. (actually, i don't know ↓this sentence. because i have bad english skill. maybe it's do not use a short ver, tv size.. etc.?)

    Ranking Criteria wrote:

    Do not alter the song's title. This includes adding any marker to describe the cut of the song such as "Short Ver.", "TV Size" and so forth unless those markers are part of the official song title as listed by a reputable source.
Here is a korean translation. Thanks to ykcarrot

곡의 제목에 공식적(신뢰할 수 있는 사이트로부터 제공된 정보)으로 "Short Ver." 혹은 "TV Size"가 붙어있지 않은 이상은 곡의 제목을 바꾸지마십시오.

No kds for this post ofc.
Andraxy
Very nice beatmap!
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TheANDRAXY wrote:

Very nice beatmap!
Thank you! ;)
No_Gu
M4M

[General]
your hitsound in kiai time is really noisy,try normal-hitclap in http://osu.ppy.sh/s/50835 (sry...my puush doesn't work now so I can't upload the file directly)and add 24clap,it will better than yours

[Easy]
00:08:301 (1) - I strongly suggest shortening this by 1/4.First,00:08:939 matches nothing.Second,if you do so,the time distance between 00:08:301 (1,2) - will be 2/1,which is easier for newbies.
00:09:418 (2) - the head need a finish
00:10:854 (3,1,2) - a little crowded,I advise you to use 1.2x when you make your next map
00:13:407 (3) - use tick to follow the drums like 00:15:961 (3) - ?
00:19:790 (2,3) - add clap sounds very good
00:21:705 (1,1,2) - try like this? your flow is bad. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1190651
00:28:407 I'd add a note with clap
00:31:280 (1) - use tick to follow the drums
00:37:503 (2) - head - finish tail - clap
00:38:939 (1) - add whistle?

[Normal]
00:04:312 (3,5) - add whistle sounds good
00:09:099 (2,3,4) - 2's tail-finish 3-whitle 4-finish

[Hard]
00:22:024 (3) - head-clap
a little easy,maybe you can add some more 1/2s

[Insane]
00:05:110 (5,6) - ctrl+g for better flow
I advise you to reset all the NCs.add NC for downbeat,and each downbeat one NC

much better than the last time I modded.
you need take pains to find out the good method of adding NC and hitsound,but the map is ok enough since it's your first one?
maybe you can ask mod from BAT now
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No_Gu wrote:

M4M

[General]
your hitsound in kiai time is really noisy,try normal-hitclap in http://osu.ppy.sh/s/50835 (sry...my puush doesn't work now so I can't upload the file directly)and add 24clap,it will better than yours → okay! I changed your hitsound

[Easy]
00:08:301 (1) - I strongly suggest shortening this by 1/4.First,00:08:939 matches nothing.Second,if you do so,the time distance between 00:08:301 (1,2) - will be 2/1,which is easier for newbies. → like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1191278
00:09:418 (2) - the head need a finish → Fixed.
00:10:854 (3,1,2) - a little crowded,I advise you to use 1.2x when you make your next map → ahhh-. right... (but, change 1.2x → maybe it's too hard..? hmm. anyway. nice advice o_o)
00:13:407 (3) - use tick to follow the drums like 00:15:961 (3) - ? → it's my mistake. Fixed.
00:19:790 (2,3) - add clap sounds very good → Fixed.
00:21:705 (1,1,2) - try like this? your flow is bad. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1190651 → Fixed.
00:28:407 I'd add a note with clap → Fixed.
00:31:280 (1) - use tick to follow the drums → Fixed.
00:37:503 (2) - head - finish tail - clap → Fixed.
00:38:939 (1) - add whistle? → umm. like another diff. (not use whistle → it's fine.)

[Normal]
00:04:312 (3,5) - add whistle sounds good → Fixed.
00:09:099 (2,3,4) - 2's tail-finish 3-whitle 4-finish → okay, and add custom whistle sound(it's original osu! soft-hitwhistle.wav file)

[Hard]
00:22:024 (3) - head-clap → Fixed.
a little easy,maybe you can add some more 1/2s → add some notes. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1191186 , http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1191196 - etc.

[Insane]
00:05:110 (5,6) - ctrl+g for better flow → Fixed.
I advise you to reset all the NCs.add NC for downbeat,and each downbeat one NC → okay. but umm.. it's too hard ;_;

much better than the last time I modded.
you need take pains to find out the good method of adding NC and hitsound,but the map is ok enough since it's your first one?
maybe you can ask mod from BAT now
i love hitsound mod

Thank you! ;)
DNR
haha i don't know what that black haired chick is named but I would do her multiple times.

Insane:
00:00:801 (4) - This feels weird to play mostly because it starts on the red tick, whereas the emphasis is on the white tick beforehand.
00:04:631 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - I'd rather have the jumps more spaced out from (6). I'm not saying to increase spacing, but I'm getting really confused having to go back to (8) since it's so close to (6)
00:09:737 (1,2,3) - Would prefer it if these were in the same order as the previous notes
00:38:461 (2) - I know stacks are pretty but proper spacing is like having a personal stripper on your own private island. Make this spacing even so (3) isn't awkwardly shorter
00:45:801 (4) - ^

Hard:
00:17:237 (2) - Remove clap.
00:34:312 (2) - WOAH. Jumps are fun when they're natural, and this doesn't feel all too natural
00:38:301 (1) - Spinners should have some sort of meaning, weather it be a long held out note, or a low-key transitional area. This spinner is REALLY random. I'd personally just map this part.
00:52:024 (5) - Add normal hitnormal on the end of this slider
01:15:481 (2,3) - This is dying to be a jump

Normal:
CLAPS ON 2 AND 4 pls

Easy:
00:26:173 (1) - This would be better not overlapping
00:38:860 (1) - Add some sort of hitsound to this. Maybe like a whistle or finish or something
CLAPS ON 2 AND 4 ALSO pls

It's a good start. The biggest issues I'm finding is that although you have a decent grasp of sparsely using jumps, its important to also look at how jumps play. Even if something looks visually pleasing and looks cool to play, sometimes it might be awkward to actually achieve.
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CDFA wrote:

haha i don't know what that black haired chick is named but I would do her multiple times. → she's really.. :oops:
Insane:
00:00:801 (4) - This feels weird to play mostly because it starts on the red tick, whereas the emphasis is on the white tick beforehand. → changed rhythm. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1211440
00:04:631 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - I'd rather have the jumps more spaced out from (6). I'm not saying to increase spacing, but I'm getting really confused having to go back to (8) since it's so close to (6) → hmm.. right. too close '6' note. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1211459
00:09:737 (1,2,3) - Would prefer it if these were in the same order as the previous notes → okay.
00:38:461 (2) - I know stacks are pretty but proper spacing is like having a personal stripper on your own private island. Make this spacing even so (3) isn't awkwardly shorter → (...maybe)it's pretty shape hmm. changed http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1211697
00:45:801 (4) - ^ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1211694 like this?

Hard:
00:17:237 (2) - Remove clap. → Fixed.
00:34:312 (2) - WOAH. Jumps are fun when they're natural, and this doesn't feel all too natural → hmm. okay. it's too hard o.o i changed 1.1x distance.
00:38:301 (1) - Spinners should have some sort of meaning, weather it be a long held out note, or a low-key transitional area. This spinner is REALLY random. I'd personally just map this part. → remove spinner. add note(slider) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1211403
00:52:024 (5) - Add normal hitnormal on the end of this slider → hitnormal?.. umm. i don't know. (it's N:C1 Sound)
01:15:481 (2,3) - This is dying to be a jump → remove NC

Normal:
CLAPS ON 2 AND 4 pls → MAYBE IT'S MY MISTAKE.

Easy:
00:26:173 (1) - This would be better not overlapping → Fixed.
00:38:860 (1) - Add some sort of hitsound to this. Maybe like a whistle or finish or something → add soft-whistle
CLAPS ON 2 AND 4 ALSO pls → ALSO MAYBE IT'S MY MISTAKE.

It's a good start. The biggest issues I'm finding is that although you have a decent grasp of sparsely using jumps, its important to also look at how jumps play. Even if something looks visually pleasing and looks cool to play, sometimes it might be awkward to actually achieve. → thanks advice. (maybe it will be improved)
Thank you! ;)
Andraxy
HARD: Add a circle on white tick 00:34:152 (x383,y273)
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TheANDRAXY wrote:

HARD: Add a circle on white tick 00:34:152 (x383,y273)
nice~ fixed this axis (444,320)

(it's my mistake. where is my note?)
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