Natsu wrote:

HI~ Losertic

Natsu's Modding

General:

1. Inconsistency in uninherited problem is on hard diff got 2 redlines → Fixed.
2. maybe try to get a better mp3? since this one sound a little bad → okay, i'll change mp3 file.
3. offset sound a little off try: 159 → Fixed.
4. your combo colours dont fit with BG maybe try this:
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 255,255,255
   Combo2 : 33,1,126
   Combo3 : 183,0,4
   Combo4 : 0,0,215

→ Fixed, and remove combo 5,6 (color is a anime character color. black,silver,sky...)

Insane

1. AR 8 don fit this map use 9 plz → YEP
2. 00:00:065 kinda weird you map this 3/4 sounds but you ignore 00:00:000 this one → Fixed. it's square! http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/897017
3. 00:04:613 (3,4) - what are you follow with this? souund bad cuz it dont fit the music try: → Fixed.
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:06:607 this circle is overmapped nothing in the music here remove it → Fixed.
5. 00:05:889 (8,9) - this two circles stackeds kill the flow of this song maybe try to add some jumpy pattern instead of stacks? → Fixed. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/897014 and 00:05:251 (1) - nc.
6. 00:07:166 (5) - try to stack this with previous (10) 00:06:208 slider just for mapping desing → changed move slider. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/897022
7. 00:08:602 this 1/4 repeat sound really bad here too is not following nothing correct rhythm here is maybe like: → Fixed.
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 00:09:559 finish head → Fixed.
9. 00:09:879 same as above → Fixed.
10. 00:12:113 add a circle here actually this place sound so empty → Fixed.
11. 00:14:187 finish → Fixed.
12. 00:19:772 this stream also is overmapped and dont fit this part try this sound better: → Fixed.
    
    SPOILER

    
13. 00:30:384 should be a circle here too → Fixed.
14. 00:34:612 I dont like how this antijump kill the flow but is just my opinion if you wanna keep this add New combo here 00:34:612 to make the antijump and the change of distance readable for the player → changed (4,5,6) note http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/897042
15. 00:37:006 try another slider shape since this one overlap himself and is hard to read try another one plz → Fixed.
16. 00:38:762 ctrl g better flow for the jump → Fixed.
17. 00:39:559 (1,2,3,4) - this stream is overmapped too try to just make a slider starting here 00:39:559 like: → Fixed.
    
    SPOILER

    
18. 00:45:783 I dont like so much the stack on the tail of the slider special this one the vocal here 00:45:783 is strong enought to make a small jump imo → Fixed.
19. 00:56:474 also this long slider dont fit very well the music try maybe : → Fixed.
    
    SPOILER

    
20. 00:58:230 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - this part look really overmapped try to make it clean actually is so painfull for play it x_x → Fixed.
21. 01:07:804 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is overmaped and sound bad x_X try atleast to delete 01:07:884 (2,4) - to follow the song better → Fixed.
22. 01:08:442 (7,1) - this overlap look really bad fix plz → Fixed.
23. 01:11:873 remove this one nothing in the music here → Fixed.
24. 01:12:751 add somethink here since sound empty → Fixed.
25. 01:12:910 (1,2,3,4,5) - exactly the same as 01:07:804 → Fixed.
26. 01:14:106 (2,3,4,5) - overmap x_x :C → Fixed. changed pattern
27. 01:15:304 add a circle here then start the spinner on 01:15:384 to follow better the music plz → Fixed. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/897065

Hard:

1. 00:01:262 (4,1) - stack they perfect → Fixed.
2. 00:05:571 (1,2) - avoid hidden circles on the slider tails player dont like this kind of pattern orz → Fixed.
3. 00:07:166 (6,7) - same as above → Fixed.
4. 00:08:762 this 1/4 repeat dont fit the song try to map just a 1/2 slider since the sound is just on downbeat (white tick) and upbeat (redtick) → Fixed.
5. 00:19:293 (1,4) - this two repeat dont fit the song try to hear this part to 25% and you will see and fix it with the correct rhythm → Fixed.
6. 00:23:442 New combo for jump and for the new vocals starting here fit alot → Fixed.
7. 00:37:804 (1,3) - this two slider touching look really bad try to avoid it → Fixed.
8. 00:58:708 (4,5,6) - fix the distance and make a better pattern here maybe? → Fixed. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/897085
9. 01:14:984 same here this repeat dont fit the music x_x also take the suggestion in the final spinner on insane here too → Fixed.

Normal:

1. AR 4 dont fit this map go AR 5 → Fixed.
2. 00:02:698 fix the distance with previous → Fixed.
3. 00:03:815 this slider dont follow the song orz try to move it to 00:03:655 will follow better the song → Fixed.
4. 00:07:805 fix the distance with next slider → Fixed.
5. 00:13:869 (3,1,2) - bad flow imo try another pattern? → Fixed. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/897093
6. 00:56:474 fix distance with next circle → Fixed.
7. 01:00:623 (6,1,2) - this overlap look really bad and so confuse for play try to make it clean → Fixed.

Easy:

1. AR 2 dont fit this map use AR 3 → Fixed.
2. 00:05:251 fix the distance with next slider → Fixed.
3. 00:09:879 add a circle here is so strong music for just ignore it imo → add note.
4. 00:19:932 (5,6,1,2) - all this circles are kinda hard to for a newbie try to make some 1/1 slider better? → Fixed.
5. 00:37:804 (1,2) - dont stack circles on easy diff because newplayers cant read this → Fixed.

You can improve alot this mappu specially with rhythm also some patterns I suggest you to listen to the song at 25% GL with this :3

ts8zs wrote:

From mod 4 mod(Althouth I accept free mod anytimeXD) → ! REALLY? >< THANK YOU! ♥

ts8zs's Modding

[Insane]
00:01:447 (4) - Blanket → Fixed, Like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/899791
00:05:437 (5) - move to 164,320 to show bass's noise → 00:05:437 (5,1) - too long distance. but fixed.
00:12:139 (4,5,6,7) - Change to 4 sliders → Fixed.
00:16:607 (2) - Blanket → Fixed.
00:24:586 (8) - Try to make this more smooth http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/899498 → hmm... new pattern,new rythem fixed. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/899812
00:26:501 (5,6) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/899500 → Fixed.
00:27:777 (2) - Blanket → Fixed.
00:28:415 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/899514 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/899517 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/899521 → o.o! changed pattern.
00:30:969 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/899521 → Fixed.
00:34:160 (1,2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/899524 → Fixed.
00:36:075 (2,3,4,5,6) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/899529 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/899534 → Fixed.
00:38:309 (1,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/899538 → If i change this pattern, 00:37:511 (6,1) << too close..... but changed http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/899861
00:51:554 (6) - Use a red point http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/899543 ctrl+click twice:3 → Fixed.
01:15:889 (1) - End at 01:19:479 - → Fixed.
[Hard]
00:27:139 - note → Fixed.
00:56:660 (6) - "bu"is 00:56:979 - here, remove 3rd point if you don't want change slider's length → Fixed. new pattern.
01:04:479 (2,3) - swap → hmm.. this pattern is a .. pass. sorry.
01:08:628 (3) - If you only add slap clap here,plz remove clap:3 → Fixed.remove clap, add whistle.
01:15:889 (1) - End at 01:19:479 - → Fixed.
[Normal]
AR4 is better for hr+dt → Right....good AR. but, normal not for Mod HR+DT....
00:13:416 (1) - blanket → Fixed.
00:50:437 (2) - use 3 points plz:3 → Fixed.
[Easy]
00:12:777 (3) - Too narrow → Fixed.
00:35:437 (1) - Blanket → Fixed.

As a new mapper you did a good job:3
Good luck

1. how about adding "Kuroyuki Hime" for tags

1. 00:55:862 (3) - move to x:344 y:200. It looks better

1. 00:08:310 (1,2) - For normal, avoid overlap like this
2. 00:32:086 (3,1) - ^
3. 00:59:692 (1) - instead, add a note at 00:59:692
4. 01:04:480 (2) - move to x:295 y:101
5. 01:12:458 (4,5) - it is better not to stack

1. 00:39:586 (3) - move slider's end to x:164 y:292
2. 01:15:808 (5) - move to x:332 y:312
3. 01:15:489 (4,5) - it is better to interchange them

1. 00:23:628 (5) - NC
2. 00:53:149 (2) - delete
3. 01:01:287 (3,4) - it is better to uniform DS to 1.0x
4. 01:11:979 (1) - NC

RandomEffect wrote:

Hi~
Let me mod OK? Yep.

RandomEffect

[General]

1. how about adding "Kuroyuki Hime" for tags

[Easy]

1. 00:55:862 (3) - move to x:344 y:200. It looks better

[Normal]

1. 00:08:310 (1,2) - For normal, avoid overlap like this
2. 00:32:086 (3,1) - ^
3. 00:59:692 (1) - instead, add a note at 00:59:692
4. 01:04:480 (2) - move to x:295 y:101
5. 01:12:458 (4,5) - it is better not to stack

[Hard]

1. 00:39:586 (3) - move slider's end to x:164 y:292
2. 01:15:808 (5) - move to x:332 y:312
3. 01:15:489 (4,5) - it is better to interchange them

[Insane]

1. 00:23:628 (5) - NC
2. 00:53:149 (2) - delete
3. 01:01:287 (3,4) - it is better to uniform DS to 1.0x
4. 01:11:979 (1) - NC

is it your 1st beat map? good quality! → Thank you
~Good Luck~

Mira-san wrote:

Hi.

Sorry I didn't get to mod this yesterday. Was busy. :/

Note: the numbers I will give are coordinates. (x,y) respectively.

Mira-san's Modding

Easy

I think the AR in this one is too fast. I think that's just me.

00:58:096 (2) - Move the last point of this slider to (376,112) → Fixed.

Normal

00:59:692 (1) Move to (176,208). It will definitely look better. → Fixed.

Hard

Nothing to mod here.

Insane

Nothing here too.

Fun map to play.

CrazyErrorMan wrote:

Mod from me
==Normal==
The only thing I could find is the slider at 00:29:054 → I think, it's good beat...?( because it's a vocal part.) i don't know.
I think it could be moved a bit.
That is all I have.

neonat wrote:

neonat's Modding

Hard

00:07:990 (7) - clap
00:09:267 (4) - finish on the end

Insane

00:08:628 (2) - finish on end of slider
00:09:426 (5) - finish
00:26:501 (5,7) - swap these 2, circle slider slider instead of slider slider circle

SPOILER

00:32:564 (1) - replace with circle placed at 00:32:724
01:10:862 (1) - finish on start of slider

• 00:04:321 (1) - center point x 364 y 288, tail point x 376 y 256
  00:04:640 (2) - x 384 y 204
  00:04:798 (3) - x 372 y 136
  00:04:957 (4) - x 332 y 76

^ half heart shape

00:46:926 (4,2) -

^ hexagon shape

01:13:256 (7,1,2,3,4,6) -

Setsurei wrote:

some suggestions, all about positions
lol I can't do hitsounds here because I think it's perfect already

SPOILER

[Easy]
00:02:564 (2) - x 276 y 208 < blanket with 00:00:650 (1) -
00:03:203 (1) - x 332 y 360 < blanket with 00:02:564 (2) -
00:05:118 (2) - x 276 y 208 < stack 00:02:564 (2) -
00:05:756 (1) - x 380 y 84
00:22:352 (3) - x 272 y 192
00:22:990 (4) - x 348 y 304, center point x 392 y 288
00:23:628 (1) - x 348 y 224, center point x 368 y 200
00:24:586 (2) - x 272 y 192 < stack 00:22:352 (3) - head
00:24:905 (3) - x 316 y 124
00:31:926 (2) - x 380 y 152, tail point x 340 y 276
00:32:884 (1) - x 244 y 192
00:34:160 (3) - x 404 y 236
00:34:639 (4) - x 412 y 124
00:34:958 (5) - x 352 y 72
00:36:394 (2) - x 200 y 116 < blanket with 00:35:437 (1) -
00:37:192 (3) - x 248 y 296
00:37:511 (4) - x 300 y 236
00:38:309 (1,2) - y 48
00:50:437 (1) - x 176 y 128
00:51:235 (2) - x 251 y 157 < unsnap grid to make this
00:51:554 (3) - x 324 y 188

[Normal]
00:13:415 (1) - x 464 y 244, center point x 424 y 308, tail point x 364 y 328 < blanket with 00:12:777 (4,5) -
00:14:054 (2) - x 280 y 268
00:16:288 (1) - x 192 y 244 < blanket with 00:15:650 (5) - tail
00:16:927 (2) - x 372 y 104
00:23:310 (1) - x 32 y 276 < blanket with 00:22:990 (4,2) -
00:25:543 (1) - x 364 y 336 < blanket with 00:25:224 (4) -
00:26:501 (2) - x 356 y 84
00:29:852 (4) - x 280 y 356, center point x 216 y 292, tail point x 220 y 208 < more curve so it will be blanket with 00:29:532 (3) -
00:30:969 (1) - x 438 y 108
00:31:607 (2) - x 328 y 160, tail point x 280 y 212
00:32:086 (3) - x 212 y 108
00:36:395 (2) - x 256 y 196, center point x 288 y 112 < blanket with 00:35:596 (1) - tail
00:47:884 (2) - x 200 y 60, tail point x 132 y 164 < blanket with 00:48:522 (3,4) -
00:58:735 (3) - tail point x 280 y 36 < blanket with 00:58:416 (2,3) -
01:02:884 (2) - x 320 y 260 < blanket with 01:02:245 (1) -
01:04:161 (1) - x 400 y 148
01:04:480 (2) - x 292 y 112
01:05:756 (1) - x 140 y 196, tail point x 160 y 72 < blanket with 01:04:480 (2) - tail
01:06:395 (2) - x 264 y 72
01:06:874 (3) - x 432 y 132
01:07:193 (4) - x 424 y 252 → ALL FIXED!

[Hard]
00:01:288 (3) - x 276 y 280→ Already Fixed.
00:01:767 (4) - x 236 y 208, center point x 304 y 200, tail point x 356 y 260→ Fixed.
00:04:321 (1,2,3,4) - curvy flow

• 00:04:321 (1) - center point x 364 y 288, tail point x 376 y 256 → Fixed.
  00:04:640 (2) - x 384 y 204 → Fixed.
  00:04:798 (3) - x 372 y 136 → Fixed.
  00:04:957 (4) - x 332 y 76 → Fixed.

00:17:884 (4) - x 424 y 224, tail point x 304 y 316 < blanket with 00:18:522 (1) - → Fixed.
00:30:650 (6) - x 260 y 252 → too short (distance.) change slider pattern. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/908752
00:46:447 (3) - tail point x 340 y 304 → Fixed.
00:46:926 (4) - x 268 y 256 → Fixed.
00:47:564 (1) - x 220 y 176 → Fixed.
00:47:883 (2) - x 360 y 160, center point x 304 y 88, tail point x 276 y 104

^ half heart shape

00:46:926 (4,2) → Fixed.

00:48:522 (3) - copy 00:47:883 (2) - then ctrl+H and ctrl+G, move to x 140 y 120 → uh.. wait, like a heart. ♥ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/908761 like it?
00:49:000 (4) - x 88 y 244 → moved (231,96)
01:14:532 (1) - x 152 y 120 → moved (148,124)
01:15:011 (2,3) - x 188 y 308 → Fixed.
01:15:489 (4) - x 328 y 308 → Fixed.

[Insane]
00:00:650 (1) - x 164 y 224 → Fixed.
00:00:809 (2) - x 220 y 292 → Fixed.
00:01:129 (3) - x 368 y 256 → Fixed.
00:01:447 (4) - x 232 y 164, red point x 280 y 124 → Fixed.
00:01:926 (1) - x 352 y 64 → Fixed.
00:02:245 (2) - x 236 y 72 → Fixed.
00:02:564 (3) - x 144 y 116 → Fixed.
00:02:884 (4) - x 80 y 192 → Fixed.
00:03:203 (1) - x 104 y 300 → Fixed.
00:03:362 (2) - x 104 y 300, tail point x 192 y 332 < blanket 00:03:681 (3) - →non fixed. because it's mirror 00:04:001 (5) .
00:12:139 (4) - center point x 132 y 316 < blanket 00:12:458 (5) - head →non fixed.
00:12:458 (5) - center point x 164 y 180 < blanket 00:12:777 (6) - head →non fixed.
00:12:777 (6) - center point x 304 y 192, tail point x 348 y 208 < blanket 00:13:096 (7) - head →non fixed.
00:16:607 (2) - x 288 y 312, center point x 212 y 356, tail point x 132 y 328 < blanket 00:17:086 (3) - → Fixed.
00:17:884 (6) - tail point x 460 y 88 < to make 00:18:203 (7) - stacks 0.00x DS → Fixed.
00:18:203 (7) - x 447 y 92 → Fixed.
00:26:501 (5) - x 260 y 172 → Fixed.
00:26:660 (6) - x 176 y 200 → Fixed.
00:26:979 (7) - x 236 y 44 → Fixed.
00:29:532 (5) - x 160 y 128 < blanket 00:29:213 (4) - → Fixed.
00:29:852 (6) - x 132 y 208 < blanket 00:29:532 (5) - → Fixed.
00:33:362 (4) - x 340 y 260 < blanket 00:33:043 (3) - → Fixed.
00:37:511 (6) - x 412 y 96 < blanket 00:37:192 (5) - → Fixed.
00:46:288 (6) - x 356 y 200 < blanket 00:45:969 (5) - → Fixed.
00:47:884 (2) - center point x 140 y 312, tail point x 232 y 316 < to make 00:48:362 (3) - stacks 0.00x DS → Fixed.
00:48:362 (3) - x 224 y 319 → Fixed.
00:48:522 (4) - x 316 y 264 → Fixed.
00:50:915 (4) - tail point x 264 y 216 < to make 00:51:235 (5) - stacks 0.00x DS → Fixed.
00:51:235 (5) - x 269 y 222 → Fixed.
00:51:554 (6) - x 436 y 212 → Fixed.
00:52:352 (7) - x 472 y 88 → Fixed.
00:52:511 (8) - x 512 y 168 → Fixed.
00:52:671 (1) - x 436 y 212 → Fixed.
00:56:181 (4) - x 180 y 160 → Fixed.
00:57:777 (1) - ^ →non fixed. overlap.
00:58:894 (4) - ^ →non fixed.
00:59:054 (5) - x 160 y 244 →non fixed.
00:59:213 (1) - x 176 y 328, center point x 224 y 304, tail point x 240 y 272 < blanket 00:59:054 (5) - →non fixed.
00:59:532 (2) - x 256 y 200 < stack tail with 00:58:894 (4) - →non fixed.
00:59:852 (3) - x 252 y 120 < stack with 00:58:734 (3) - →non fixed.
01:00:011 (4) - x 336 y 144 →non fixed.
01:13:894 (4) - x 220 y 72 → Fixed.
01:14:213 (5) - x 276 y 236 → Fixed.
01:14:532 (6) - x 260 y 156

^ hexagon shape

01:13:256 (7,1,2,3,4,6) - → Fixed.

01:14:851 (7) - x 384 y 32
01:15:011 (8) - x 320 y 92 → Fixed.

your placement are tidy
that's all, good luck for ranked!
omg this is long[/color]

DingGGu wrote:

DingGGu's Modding

[General]
특별한 일이 없다면 슬라이드 틱을 1로 설정하는게 나아보입니다. → 수정.
왜 히트사운드가 없나요? 제겐 알맞는 히트사운드가 없지만 찾아서 넣어보세요.
전체적으로 슬라이더 모양이 아쉽습니다. 곡선을 그릴거면 확실하게, 모양을 만들거면 이쁘게 만들어주세요. → 사실 제가 첫 맵이라서 히트사운드 쪽은 이해를 잘 못했습니다. 어렵기도 하고요. 조만간 히트사운드 관련 모딩큐나 아니면 맵퍼 한명을 잡아서(..) 강의라도 들어야 겠네요.

[Hard]
00:55:862 (4) - Ctrl + G → 수정.
00:59:212 (4) - 빨간점을 분기점으로 서로 균형이 맞게 이쁘게 해보세요. → http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/909651 ... 이렇게요?


[Insane]
00:14:054 (3) - 의도하신 건가요? 그냥 곡선으로 처리하는게 낫습니다. → 수정.
00:15:490 (7) - Ctrl + G → 수정.
00:32:086 (8) - 이런식으로 이쁘게 바꿔주세요. → 수정.

SPOILER

Dosirack wrote:

안녕하세요~ 모딩 바로 갈께요!

Dosirack's Modding

[General]

커스텀 힛사 추가하셔서 피니쉬 징 울리는 소리로 바꿔주세요.
클랩도 노래 소리에 가까우면 좋겠지만 안되면 박수 소리라도 해주세요. → 히트사운드 한번 찾아볼게요. 징징징징

[Easy]

00:09:426 (2,3) - 2번 슬라 꼬리하고 3번 노트에 피니쉬 추가 → 수정 완료.
00:12:139 (2) - 이 노트를

이렇게 휘게 하면 더 부드러울거 같은데 어떠세요? → 수정 완료.

00:20:437 (1) - 여기 뉴콤하면 어떨까요? → 수정 완료.
00:25:543 (1,2) - 이 두개도 조금 휘게 해서

이런건 어떠신가요?

00:26:181 (2,1) - 이렇게 겹치는거 별로 보기 좋지 않아요. → 수정 완료.
00:29:692 (2) - 이 슬라이더를 00:29:532 (2) - 여기까지 당겨주세요. → 수정 완료.
00:31:926 (2) - 틱 하나 줄이시고 00:32:086 (2) - 여기로. → 수정 완료.

[Normal]

00:03:203 (1) - 슬라이더 꼬리를 좀 더 휘게 해서 다음 슬라이더하고 맞춰 주세요. → 수정 완료.
00:38:309 - 이부분 박자를 슬라 리버스 하고 스핀을 한칸 오른쪽으로 당긴 형태로.

이렇게 해주세요. → (물론 제 주관적 의견은)약간 어색하달까? 그리고 노말답지않게 조금 어려운 느낌이 있다랄까.. 그렇네요.

00:17:884 (4) - 꼬리에 클랩 → 수정 완료.
00:18:841 (2) - 클랩 → 수정 완료.
00:19:160 (3) - 꼬리에 클랩 → 수정 완료.
00:32:724 (1) - 이 슬라를 좀 부드럽게 휘어주세요. → 수정 완료.
00:46:448 (2,1) - 별로 흐름이 좋지 못해요 2번 슬라를 조금 다르게 하시는걸 추천 → 수정 완료. 콧수염 모양 ㅋ.
00:52:032 (5) - 아래쪽으로 휘에 하면 더 부드러울거 같아요. 그리고 이 슬라이더 뉴콤 어떠신가요? → 수정 완료. NC는 제외... 뉴콤보를 얘만 넣어주기엔 뭔가 이펙트가 약하네요.. 아마도?
01:02:884 (2) - 이 슬라이더

그냥 이렇게 3각형으로만 찍어도 이런 모양이 나와요.
→

[Hard]

00:01:288 (3) - 이 슬라이더

이렇게 하는것도 괜찮을것 같은데. → 지금이 더 이쁜것 같아요.(?) 제 맵들 중 저렇게 생긴게 몇몇 있어서 그냥 유지할게요.

00:20:437 (3,4,5,6) - 모양이 별로 좋지 않은데 다른걸로 바꿔 보시는건 어떠신가요? → 수정 완료.
00:21:394 (1,2,3,4) - 이런 형태의 슬라이더는 하나를 만들고 복붙하셔서 일정한 각도로 돌리시는게 좋아요. → 수정 완료. 30도설정
00:31:607 (4,5) - 좀 어색해 보이는데 4번 슬라이더를 위로 솟게가 아니라 밑으로 솟게 하는건 어떨까요?

이런 식으로여. → 수정 완료.

00:36:394 (3) - 3번 리버스를 푸시고 00:36:873 - 여기에 노트 하나 추가 해주세요.

대충 이런 식으로여 모양은 맘에 안드시면 다른걸로! → 슬라이더 끝부분에 노트 추가.

01:03:841 - 여기 박자 추가하시는건? → 수정 완료.
01:12:617 (6,7) - 하드에서 이런식으로 겹치는 노트는 별로 좋지 않아요. → 수정 완료. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/921718

[Insane]

00:03:362 (2,3,5) - 모양 맞도록 위치 이동해주세요. → 수정 완료.
00:05:118 (3,4,5) - 이 3개를

이렇게 해주시면 더 자연스러울거 같아요. → 수정 완료.2번 슬라이더 복붙.

00:07:352 (3) - 이 슬라이더 00:07:671 (4) - 슬라이더를 복사하셔서 3번 자리에 붙여넣고 ctrl+h ctrl+j 해주세요.

이렇게요. → 수정 완료.

00:10:064 (3,4) - 이 두개 머리 부분에 피니위 해주세요. → 수정 완료.
00:22:990 (2) - 2번 노트를 조금 더 왼쪽편으로 튀어나오게 하시면 좋을꺼 같아요. → 수정 완료.
00:26:181 - 여기 박자 추가하셔서 연타로 하시는것도 좋을거 같아요. → 스트림은 그렇게 많이 넣지 않을 생각입니다.
00:41:022 (9) - 좀 더 왼쪽으로 튀어나오게 해주시면 좋을것 같습니다. → 수정 완료.
00:42:298 (5,2) - 완전히 겹치게 해주세요. → 수정 완료. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/921737 아마 2번이 그 2번이 아니라고 생각합니다.
00:42:777 (3,1) - 거리가 조금 어중간하네요.. 좀 더 거리를 늘려주시면 좋을거 같은데. → 수정 완료. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/921746
00:51:554 (6) - 뭐랄까..이런 모양은 뭔가 무리수같은.. → 수정 완료. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/921753 패턴이랑 이것저것 변경.
00:53:947 (3,4) - 여기

이런것도 괜찮아 보이는데. → 지금이 낫네요. 이렇게 웃는 느낌도 있고, 인세인 치곤 단조롭긴한데 깔끔해 보여요.

00:57:139 (5) - 머리에 클랩 → 수정 완료.
01:05:756 (1) - 이걸 단타로 바꿔주세요. → 수정 완료.

끄으으으으으으으응으ㅡ으으으으읏~~~~~~~~~~~!

그럼..굿럭!

Asphyxia wrote:

Hi (: Mod from my modding queue! <3

Please respond to my suggestions, thanks!

Red = Unrankable

Blue = Highly recommended

Black (aka normal) = Just a suggestion

SPOILER

General thoughts: Not really.

Easy

This is too hard for an easy diff, try doing something to make it actually an easy diff!
And if I recall correct, the easiest diff has to be under 3 starts (I might be wrong here tho)
Anyway, let's get started here!
00:11:181 (1,2) - Do it like this? http://puu.sh/48XXm.jpg
00:20:437 (1) - Ugly slider, try to make a better shape?
00:28:415 (1,2) - I would put these like this http://puu.sh/48Y1K.jpg
00:30:969 (1,2) - You could do this better, add more curve or something? It doesn't look good now s:
00:38:628 (2) - I would add this note like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/944065
00:42:777 (1) - Starting here, please reduce the volume, hurts my ears >:
00:48:522 (3) - Ugly slider ):
00:58:096 (2) - ^ This could be a nice slider but just make it symmetrical

→ Allright, I'll remake it. but, not now. (I making Guest Diff.)

Normal

Try to use 0.9 Distance Snap, I think that 1.0 is too much here. → Well, i think 'not'.. hmm. it's normal+ ?
00:19:160 (3) - try to bring it a bit down → Fixed.
00:44:373 (2,3,4) - I would do it like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/944077 and if you do this, fix the spacing with the next objects → hmm. maybe too monotonous. so i used another pattern '2' slider.
00:50:437 (2) - Something like this? http://puu.sh/48YlY.jpg → '2' slider center→'3'note,'4'note. pass
00:54:586 (2) - This place doesn't fit for this slider, try to rethink this? → changed slider→three note.

Hard

00:03:522 (2) - Do it like this? http://puu.sh/48YrP.jpg → i like that. but '2' slider tail->'3'note i think it's small strange
00:05:277 (5) - Either this slider is staright or more curvy, current one is not good. → I can't think of straight slider shape.
00:39:586 (3) - This slider could be like 00:38:309 (1,2) - → changed '1' , '2' slider.
00:41:501 (1) - Same as easy, my ears hurt, please do something about the hitsounds / volume → changed

Insane

+1 OD → Fixed.
00:02:884 (4) - Like this? http://puu.sh/491cE.jpg → Fixed.
00:15:490 (7) - CTRL - G? → it was mirror.
00:19:160 (5) - Something like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/944208 → Changed.
00:23:628 (1) - Please copy this slider and paste it 00:23:947 (2,3,4,5) - so it would look better? → non-copy,paste. but Changed.
00:25:543 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - This feels very weird ): → Changed.
00:42:777 (3) - Same as every diff, ears hurt → Fixed.
Just flow issues, spacing etc → ;_; too many?

GL with your mapset and read the forum PM if you didn't =P edit: insane modded already, also feel free to poke me to check again if you want!

Graph1te Edge wrote:

Hi from Unlimited Queue Works

My NM as requested :3

Graph1te Edge's Modding

* Should be fixed
* Suggestion only
* General Comment


[easy]
*Skiped, as requested.


[normal]
*Skiped, nothing to mod here, looks well done to me.


[hard]
*I have to say it is hard without mods and patterns need more spacing maybe, but is playable, anyway i didnt see any unrankable stuff here so keep it as it is till other mods suggest you to change things in this diff.


[insane]
*In general, looks well done, but more diffculty can be added if want, just play with the patterns to make it a bit more tricky, anyways the map looks nice and fun to play. Well now my suggestions/mods:

* Beat Snap Divisor 1/1, maybe its only me but when open the insane diff this is 1/1. → Fixed.

* 00:09:745 (1) - exchange positions with 00:09:904 (2) - → Fixed.

* 00:20:517 -This pattern looks and feel a bit wrong with the rhytm, try something like this:

SPOILER

00:20:517 (2) - Delete
00:20:756 (3) - Delete
00:20:437 - Add a note here
00:20:517 - ^
00:20:437 - NC here
00:20:437 (1) - Move to 124;64
00:20:517 (2) - ^ 92;84
00:20:596 (3) - ^ 68;104 → changed your pattern. and shape.. like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/947678 changed your shape

Thank you!

changed normal(only hitsound) , hard , insane!


easy.... wait ;_;

[Navy] wrote:

오스에서 왔습니다 ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ → :>

Navy's Modding

[Easy]

00:11:181 (1) , 00:13:415 (3) - 직선형 슬라이더보다는 좀 둥근 슬라이더가 괜찮을듯..? → 괜찮네요. 근데 이걸 적용시키면 2번 슬라이더가 적용하기 난해해서 일단은 패스..

00:33:522 (1) - 채팅에서말한 부분인데요..
00:33:203 - 여기로 당기고 00:33:761 - 에서 리버스? → 정박부분인 하얀색 선에서 소리가 제대로 들립니다.. ;ㅅ;
00:34:639 ,00:34:958 슬라나 노트추가 → 00:34:958 - 이부분 노트 추가시 뒤에 있는 나머지 노트 2개가 초보자들에게 어려울 것 같아요.

00:38:309 - 슬라이더 추가 → 이지라서 지웠습니다. 이부분은 노말에는 있지요...

00:49:033 - 서클 추가 (다음슬라이더위에) → 00:49:001 이부분이네요. 여튼 추가, 그리고 1번 3번 슬라이더 위치, 모양 변경.

01:05:756 - 슬라이더 추가 → 이부분은 굳이 안넣어도 될것 같아요 뒤에 일정하게 노트를 깔아놨으니깐..


[Normal]

00:44:054 (1) ~00:46:447 (2)
http://puu.sh/4qkPG.jpg <<이렇게..? → 약간 다르게 해봤어요. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/981978

00:58:735 (3) - 00:59:213 <<여기서 끝나는 그냥슬라로 → 수정 완료.

[Hard]

00:30:650 (6,7,8,1,2,3) - 연타후 점프는 어려운..
연타 3개를 짧은 리버스슬라로 → 수정 완료.

00:40:064 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - 5랑6, 7이랑 8을 겹치게 → 수정은 했는데 노트 박자이런게 이상한것 같아서 그냥 일단 스핀 하나+슬라이더 하나로 나뒀습니다.

00:42:298 (5,1) - 슬라로 변경 → 그것도 좋지만 이렇게 해봤어요. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/982578

00:56:181 (5,6,7,1) - http://puu.sh/4ql7m.jpg 점프간격도 맞춰주시고.. → 직접 플레이하면 지장 없는 간격입니다.

01:07:670 (6,7) - 6이랑 7이랑 바꿔주세요 (슬라뒤에 서클) → 수정 완료.

[Insane]

00:20:277 (3,4,1) - 4를 약간 왼쪽위로 → 수정 완료.

00:32:724 ~00:36:155 -
http://puu.sh/4qlrg.jpg 제가 만들어본.. → 수정 완료.

00:53:309 (2,3) - 서클 두개로 → 수정 완료.

00:59:532 (2,3) - 2가 3, 3이 2 자리로 → 수정 완료.

궁금하신거 있으시면 물어보세요~

• 00:18:203 (5) - 다른곳에 배치하심이 어떨까요 ? 처음 볼때는 빨리 쳐아하는 줄 ;w;
  00:24:267 (2,3) - DS ?
  00:52:990 (1,2) - 꽤 많이 휜 것 같다고 생각됩니다. 곡선을 조금 줄이시는건 ..ㅎ
  01:02:884 (2,1,2) - 흰 서클 (1),(2)를 슬라이더 (2) 끝 부분에 스택시키는 건 어떠신가요 ?
  
  [Normal]
  
  • Nice :3
    
    [Hard]
    
    • 00:43:096 (4,1) - 더 멀리 배치해도 괜찮을것 같습니다
      00:52:032 (2) - NC
      00:52:671 (1) - Ctrl + H 후에 디스턴스 수정하시는게 보기에 좋은 것 같아요
      01:13:734 (2) - 약간 휘게 설정하시는 건 어떨까요 ?
      
      [Insane]
      
      • 좋네요
        
        모딩 늅이라 많은걸 못집어내겠네요 ㅠㅠ..
        암튼 멋진맵이네요 ~

Pandiar wrote:

hi~ from my Queue

Pandiar's Modding

[General]
KIAI TIME start 00:42:450 ~? → i think 00:42:769 better kimi-no(hard voice)

[Easy]
00:08:620 - remove inherited point. i think it is better → Fixed. (not hear slidertick)
00:12:769 (2) - add clap end point → Fixed.
00:12:769 (2) - add finish start point → umm i think. not great sound..?
00:28:727 (3) - ^ → Fixed.
00:31:280 (1) - i feel it not follow the music,like this rhythm? → Fixed.

SPOILER

00:33:195 (1) - add finish middle point → Fixed.
00:34:950 (2) - i feel it needs note → okay. 00:34:950 ~ 00:35:429 - add slider.
00:51:546 (2) - add finish? → Fixed.

[Normal]
00:42:450 (3) - add finish → Fixed.
00:52:663 (1) - ^ end point → Already Fixed.
00:57:769 (1) - ^ → Fixed.

[Hard]
00:31:120 (2) - remove finish? → Fixed.
00:42:450 (1) - add finish start point → Fixed.
00:52:663 (1) - add finish end point → Fixed.


[Insane]
00:01:120 (5) - i feel not fit, how about this? → great. but too easy. so... only note! http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1015871

SPOILER

00:21:067 (5) - change slider? → i think better now.

SPOILER

00:21:386 (1)~00:22:344 (7) how about this? → Fixed.

SPOILER

00:25:216 (6) - remove finish and add clap → Fixed.
00:25:376 (7) - i think it needs note here → Fixed.
00:28:727 (2) - how about this? → Fixed only rythem.

SPOILER

00:37:184 (7) - add clap end point → Fixed.
00:42:450 (1) - add finish → Fixed.
00:47:876 (2) - add finish start point? → Fixed.
00:52:663 (1) - add finish end point → Fixed.
00:58:088 (2) - add finish start point? → Fixed.
01:02:237 - change inherited point setting S:C1→N:C1(volume50%) → Fixed.
01:09:817 - add note? it stack 01:09:896 (3) → Fixed.
01:10:854 (1) - add finish start point → Fixed.

nice song!
good luck!

Gloria Guard wrote:

늦은 모딩 죄송합니다.

Gloria Guard's Modding

[General]

Fine

[Easy]

00:03:195 (1,2) 이 (1)번 슬라이더를 (2)번 슬라이더 머리에 blanket 하시는게 모양이 더이쁠거 같아요 → 수정 완료.

SPOILER

00:06:386 (2,2) f5로 돌려보시면 뒤에 보라색 슬라이더 잔상이 남으면서 앞에 빨간색 슬라이더 부분이 겹치네요, 빨간색 (2)번슬라이더를
위로 조금만 올려주시거나, 다른 방법으로 겹치지 않게 해주세요. → 수정 완료.
00:17:556 (4,5) 초보자들은 이렇게 겹쳐진 노트는 박자를 제대로 읽지못하고 그냥 비슷한 박자라고 생각하고 치다가 틀리는 경우가 많아요.
노트끼리 스택하는것은 Easy나 Normal 에서는 되도록 자제해주시고, 겹친 두 노트는 서로 떨어트려서 배치해주세요. → 수정 완료.
00:38:939 (1) 이 스피너 끝은 00:41:493 여기에 끊는게 더 자연스러운것 같네요 → 수정 완료.
00:51:227 (1,2) 위에서 언급했듯이 쉬운 난이도에서 이렇게 겹쳐진 노트는 초보자들이 읽기 어렵습니다, 여기는 노트대신에 슬라이더로
만드시는게 더 쉽게 읽을 수 있을것 같네요. → 수정 완료.
01:01:120 (2,3,4) 여기도 마찬가지로 슬라이더 1개 노트 1개로 하시거나 아니면 짧은 1/2 슬라이더 반복1번으로 바꿔주세요.
01:05:110 (1,2) 여기도 슬라이더로 바꿔주시는게 더읽기 쉽습니다 → 수정 완료.

[Normal]
뉴콤보가 매우 짧습니다, 뉴콤보를 넣는 부분을 늘려주세요

00:12:768 (4,5) 이지 난이도와 같습니다. → 수정 완료.
00:14:365 (3,4,5) 흐름이 별로 좋지가 않네요, 이런 흐름은 어떻습니까? → 수정 완료.

SPOILER

00:38:301 (1) 뉴콤보 제거해주세요, 여기서 뉴콤할만한 이유가 없습니다. → 수정 완료.

[Hard]
제 개인적인 의견이지만, 하드는 조금 흐름이나 패턴이 복잡하게 되있어서 지저분하게 보이네요.
조금만 패턴이랑 흐름에 신경을 쓰셨다면 좀더 좋은 하드가 되었을것 같네요.

00:35:588 (1) 뉴콤제거해주세요 그리고 00:36:386 여기다가 뉴콤넣어주시구요 → 수정 완료.

[Insane]
인세인은 제작자님이 직접 흐름을 보시면서, 몇가지를 개선하시는게 더좋은 방법이라고 판단하여 모딩을 하지 않았습니다.
몇가지 말씀드리자면, 인세인치고 노트간의 길이가 짧고, 밀도도 높고 ar9라고해도 제법 읽기가 난잡해서 어떤부분은 리매핑이나, 패턴자체를 바꾸셔야 될것같습니다. → 하드,인세인 문제는 역시 제 맵핑 경험 부족이네요. 알겠습니다!

감사합니다

1. 00:08:301 (1,2) - prepare a line. Of course you should do form of 00:07:024 (2) with form of 00:08:301 (1) symmetrically.
   
   SS

   ↓prepare a line
   
   
   
   
   ↓do form of 00:07:024 (2) with form of 00:08:301 (1) symmetrically.
   
   

1. 00:55:216 (1) - remove NC and add NC to 00:55:535 (2)

1. 00:02:237 (2) - Ctrl+g

1. 00:02:876 (4) - ^

1. 01:05:110 (6,7,8) - I suggest that add note at 01:05:189 and 01:05:349.

1. 00:31:120 (2,3) - I feel that it is too difficult for hard dif.

EnixYuki wrote:

:) Hi from my queue!

EnixYuki's Modding

[Easy]

1. 00:08:301 (1,2) - prepare a line. Of course you should do form of 00:07:024 (2) with form of 00:08:301 (1) symmetrically. → Change 00:09:418 (2) slider.(i like 00:07:024 (2,1) slider) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1023795
   ↓prepare a line
   
   
   
   
   ↓do form of 00:07:024 (2) with form of 00:08:301 (1) symmetrically.
   
   

[Normal]

1. 00:55:216 (1) - remove NC and add NC to 00:55:535 (2) → change new NC pattern. and fixed NC

[Insane]

1. 00:02:237 (2) - Ctrl+g → i tried your idea. but, too easy..

1. 00:02:876 (4) - ^ → same problem.

1. 01:05:110 (6,7,8) - I suggest that add note at 01:05:189 and 01:05:349. → umm.. i tried. but, bad rythem..

[Hard]

1. 00:31:120 (2,3) - I feel that it is too difficult for hard dif. → Okay, I missed..

There is not so the place that I can point out, and I'm sorry.
As for me, most of this beatmap seems to be completed.
so i'm shooting a kudosu!

MetalJo wrote:

~ From Queue~

MetalJo's Modding

[Easy]
00:37:503 (2) - Probably just me but I don't like the look of this slider. 00:36:386 (1) - How about replacing it with a flipped version of this one? → Change slider axis, and shape. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1040656
01:06:386 (1,2) - It would be look better imo when these 2 sliders would look the same → Fixed.

[Normal]
Nothing wrong in here :3 → o.0

[Hard]
00:06:068 (1,2) - Why is (1) so far away from (2)? → change new pattern, and fixed distance. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1040623

[Insane]
00:03:833 (8,1,2) - How about reforming (2) to build a blanket with (8)?
00:04:631 (2,3) - Change spacing between those two. → Change another rythem. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1040646
00:38:301 (1) - Triple stack to the next red tick? → Fixed.
00:47:556 (1) - Change the placement of this cirle to build a blanket with 00:47:876 (2) - or to make it follow the slider path of 00:47:237 (5) - → Fixed. and add note 00:47:716
01:03:673 (6,7) - Weird spacing. → Fixed.
01:04:790 (5,6) - Add a cirle on the blue tick between these → Fixed.

Really good mapset so just found some nitpicks :/ Enjoyed modding it. I hope my mod helps you and good luck :3

frost-b-spec wrote:

thanks m4m~

really 1st map??
like this map → Thank you!

frost-b-spec's Modding

[General]
add tag : Wakeshima Kanon → Fixed. she's write lyrics.... right?

[Hard]
AR+1? → i think better now! maybe it's AR8... too hard?
00:25:216 (3) - x284 → change perpect stack, fixed.
00:36:865 (2) - x107 y131 → change perpect stack, fixed.

[Easy]
00:26:173 (1) - 3rd waypoint,1grid right and last waypoint,1grid up → Fixed.

Insane and Normal - fine. → x_x b

Thank you!

Asgard wrote:

Asgard's Modding

[Hard]
일단 초반 부분이 하드치곤 좀 어려운것같네요

00:05:269 (5) - 왼쪽으로 돌리면 어떨까요? 1번 슬라이더랑 평행이 되도록.. 이렇게요 http://puu.sh/4Wi9p.jpg → 수정 완료.
00:06:546 (2) - 이것도 마찬가지로 왼쪽으로 좀 더 돌려주면 보기 더 좋을거같아요 25도정도 → 이거는 음.. 2번 슬라이더가 3번부분을 감싸는 느낌으로 한거라서... 이게 더 나아보여요. [/color]
00:07:344 (4) - 디스탠스 조정해주세요 1.1로 → 수정 완료.
00:08:461 (2) - 이것도 디스탠스 좀 어긋났네요 → 수정 완료.
00:19:950 (2) - 1번 노트랑 스택시켜 주세요 http://puu.sh/4WicW.jpg 이렇게 → 수정 완료.
00:29:524 (4) - 5번 슬라이더 시작부분에 놔도 좋을꺼같아요 → 수정 완료.
00:31:599 (4) - 리버스? → 이부분은 뭐지.. 간격이 0.6x...; 제 실수인가 봅니다.
01:09:737 (7) - 너무 동그랗게 만거 같네요 → 이건 (제 생각엔) 이쁘다고 생각합니다. 하드락걸어도 괜찮고 이런 슬라이더 솔직히 대충 만들었는데 제 느낌엔 이쁘게 나와서 냅뒀던거에요....
01:15:881 - 시작부터 10퍼로 바로 하지 말고 처음엔 60퍼정도로 시작했다가 갈수록 조금씩 소리를 줄여나가는것도 괜찮을꺼같아요 이런식으로
http://puu.sh/4Wik0.jpg → 수정 완료. insane 난이도도 마찬가지로 수정 완료

[insane]
00:01:120 (5,6,7,8,9) - 이렇게 단순한 패턴 쓸꺼면 차라리 별모양을 만들어보세요 → 단타로 툭툭치는것 보다 슬라이더 섞는게 더 자연스러울것 같아서 수정 했습니다. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1053048 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1053049
00:03:195 (5) - 뉴콤보 → 수정 완료.
00:07:344 (3) - 리버스 → 수정 완료.
00:07:663 (4) - 리버스 → 수정 완료.
00:49:950 (5) - 152 248 → 수정 완료.
00:50:110 (6) - 256 114 → 수정 완료.
00:50:747 (3) - 236 250 → 수정 완료.

[Normal]
딱히 문제될건 안보이네요

[Easy]
마찬가지

감사합니다.

As님이 님이셨군요... 는 리맵핑 하시라 할줄 알았습니다ㅠ

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