[General]
None.
[Easy]
Overall: maybe a bit hard for EASY
Nice sounds!
00:25:678 (2,1,2) - Make it like this?
→ Fixed.[Normal]
00:29:029 (3) - Place it at 00:29:188 ?
→ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/873352 changed your advice. and fixed.[Hard]
Overall: I felt the rhythm not so consistent when playing. Try to make it more "flowing".
00:19:933 (2,3,4,5,6) - This is so nazi.
→non-fixed.00:27:911 (1,2) - arrange it like this:
→ Fixed.00:30:465 (1,2,3) - The same 1/4 rhthym appeared before used 0.7DS but here it become 1.0, very confusing.
→ Fixed.00:33:656 (1,2) - ^
→ Fixed.00:35:890 (3,4,5,6) - nazi, try this?
→ Fixed.00:40:997 (1,2,3,4) - If you want to set a jump, use bigger DS such as 2.0
→ Fixed.00:41:954 (1,2,3) - nazi DS changing
→ changed distance. but not 0.7x.00:54:720 (1,2) - arrange it like this:
→ Fixed.01:02:539 (2,3) - For better map-reading, you may place it like this:
→ Fixed.01:03:656 (1,2,3) - As I said above.
→ I think.. Distance 0.7x too easy. changed different pattern.[Insane]
mmm...Please recheck all the DS and jumps. <<< Remaking. but, it's too hard.
00:10:677 (1) - This jump is nazi.
→ non-fixed.00:11:954 (5) - For better flowing, replace it with a slider
→ Fixed.00:14:188 (4) - ^
→ Fixed.00:25:199 (2) - Replace it with 1note+1slider or make 00:25:039 (1,2) into 1slider+1note
→ Fixed.00:26:794 (1) - This jump is nazi.
→ Fixed.00:37:486 (1,2,3,4,1) - Not much feel like a stream here.
→ Fixed.00:49:294 (8) - It fits the music, but a bit nazi when playing.
→ Fixed.00:54:720 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Bad map-reading arrangement.
→ Fixed.01:04:614 (1,2,3,4,5) - Not fitting the music.
→ Fixed.That's all~
Hope you good luck^_^