your hitsound in kiai time is really noisy,try normal-hitclap in http://osu.ppy.sh/s/50835 (sry...my puush doesn't work now so I can't upload the file directly)and add 24clap,it will better than yours → okay! I changed your hitsound
00:08:301 (1) - I strongly suggest shortening this by 1/4.First,00:08:939 matches nothing.Second,if you do so,the time distance between 00:08:301 (1,2) - will be 2/1,which is easier for newbies. → like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1191278
00:09:418 (2) - the head need a finish → Fixed.
00:10:854 (3,1,2) - a little crowded,I advise you to use 1.2x when you make your next map → ahhh-. right... (but, change 1.2x → maybe it's too hard..? hmm. anyway. nice advice o_o)
00:13:407 (3) - use tick to follow the drums like 00:15:961 (3) - ? → it's my mistake. Fixed.
00:19:790 (2,3) - add clap sounds very good → Fixed.
00:21:705 (1,1,2) - try like this? your flow is bad. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1190651 → Fixed.
00:28:407 I'd add a note with clap → Fixed.
00:31:280 (1) - use tick to follow the drums → Fixed.
00:37:503 (2) - head - finish tail - clap → Fixed.
00:38:939 (1) - add whistle? → umm. like another diff. (not use whistle → it's fine.)
00:04:312 (3,5) - add whistle sounds good → Fixed.
00:09:099 (2,3,4) - 2's tail-finish 3-whitle 4-finish → okay, and add custom whistle sound(it's original osu! soft-hitwhistle.wav file)
00:22:024 (3) - head-clap → Fixed.
a little easy,maybe you can add some more 1/2s → add some notes. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1191186 , http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1191196 - etc.
00:05:110 (5,6) - ctrl+g for better flow → Fixed.
I advise you to reset all the NCs.add NC for downbeat,and each downbeat one NC → okay. but umm.. it's too hard ;_;
much better than the last time I modded.
you need take pains to find out the good method of adding NC and hitsound,but the map is ok enough since it's your first one?
maybe you can ask mod from BAT now