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Emmelie De Forest - Only Teardrops

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Kyshiro
Elite Mapper
1,642 posts
Joined January 2011
Kyshiro
Haelo

Hard
  1. 00:11:080 - Add note here, definitely a piano sound there
  2. 00:15:404 - ^
  3. 00:19:729 - ^
  4. 00:39:188 (3) - Slowdown on this slider like you did before? Fits since you're building up for the kiai here
  5. 01:09:458 - Add note
  6. 01:13:783 - ^
  7. 01:52:161 (5) - Add finish on the end
  8. 02:33:783 (1) - Instead of starting a new kiai after this slider, I think it fits way better to do this at the start of it
Normal
  1. 00:11:891 - There has to be something over here, either add a note or add a repeat to the slider
  2. 00:12:161 (2,3) - Would be great if you could make (2) be a blanket over (3) http://puu.sh/3auQv.jpg
  3. 00:16:215 - Same as before
  4. 00:20:539 - ^
  5. 01:05:945 - ^ etc. You get it now
  6. 01:14:053 (1) - Why did you do it over here, and not the other spots lolol
  7. 01:52:702 (1) - Finish
  8. 01:55:945 (2) - Remove finish
  9. 02:41:891 (3) - Increase volume by 10%, it's nearly impossible to hear this one
  10. 02:59:729 - Add a note here and place the spinner 1/4th ahead of it (Also make it 1/4th shorter)
Paki map pro map k.
riffy
osu! Alumni
8,060 posts
Joined December 2010
riffy
oh hi

[General]
  1. That'd be great, if you change your BG to something related to artist, I think. Current one is fine, but you can find better one!
  2. Try stop being lazy and map an [Easy], you've mapped two very nice diff, no map one more awesome diff! Som everyone can enjoy your mapping :3
    Note: [Normal] has quite fast sliders. making an [Easy] is a good idea, because [Normal] is TOO hard to be the easiest diff in this mapset.
[Normal]
  1. Reduce HP Drain, please! Empy space like 00:14:323 - here and so on are kinda stressful for players and HP5 makes them TOO hard. This is the easiest diff, after all.
  2. 00:13:242 - I really don't like these velocity changes, but if you change your velocity here - at least make these velocity changes readable!
    Note: same goes for EVERY slider with velocity changes. How else can we read velocity changes there? ;_;
  3. 00:45:134 (3) - try to move this slider to 00:45:675 - and place a cirle at 00:45:134. it will help you to keep consistent rhythm and follow vocals better.
    Note: exactly the same happens to 01:39:188 (3) - fix both of them or ignore both of them to be consistent.
  4. 00:47:837 (2) - kinda the same as above. Simpy add reverse o this slider, to follow vocals when she sings "teardrops''. It'll also help you to fix x0.5 spacing hereexample
    Note: aaand 01:41:891 (2) - same. I guess you should do it here.
  5. 01:45:675 (3,1) - is it intentional? Feels like this jump doesn't really fits with song and is kinda off your regular pattern.
[Hard]
  1. You really should point out velocity changes with New Combos. Otherwise, SV changes are unreadable and will confuse players. If slowdown fits with music, NC will fit, too!
  2. 00:23:512 - make this section a bit louder, it's quite hard to hear it. AS you know, all hitsounds MUST be hearable, that's a rule.
  3. 01:48:377 (1) - add repeat to this slider, it sounds kinda empty without it.Similar slider on 01:39:729 (1) - has a reverse on it, too!
  4. 01:52:161 (5,1) - on previous kiai you used stacked 1/4s, what happened here? Do the same as you did it earlier, sliders are boring and may confuse players because it's too hard to read how many repeats does each slider has.
    Note: 02:32:431 (5,6) - 02:49:729 (6,7) - 02:49:729 (6,7) - same. o3o/
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Good luck!
Kyshiro
Elite Mapper
1,642 posts
Joined January 2011
Kyshiro
scumbag ayu not replying to any of the mods
Ayu
1,125 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
Ayu
fixed all
rezoons
rezoons
Hi :),

M4M:

[General]
  1. Color 2, 3 and 4 are too similar imo. I think you can remove color 3.
[Normal]
  1. 00:38:107 - Add a note?
  2. 01:48:377 (5,2) - Maybe avoid the overlapping.
  3. 01:53:242 (2) - Move it to x=272 y=232 for a perfect parallelogram with 01:50:539 (2,3,1).
  4. 02:35:404 (3,1) - There is a nearly (far) blanket here.
  5. 02:43:242 (2,3) - DS issue. 3 needs to be closer to the slider.
  6. 02:45:675 - Add a note?
[Hard]
  1. 00:30:810 (1) - Maybe you can avoid this slier to be partially hidden under the previous slider.
  2. 01:07:026 (4,1) - Move it to x=84 y=60 for a better overlap.
  3. 01:19:188 (3,4) - Move it to x=60 y=284 for a better overlap.
  4. 01:23:512 (3,1) - Same as 00:30:810.
Good map ^^ i hardly find anything. And good song too so ~star~
Ayu
1,125 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
Ayu

rezoons wrote:

Hi :),

M4M:

[General]
  1. Color 2, 3 and 4 are too similar imo. I think you can remove color 3.
done

[Normal]
  1. 00:38:107 - Add a note? nah, there's nothing besides some background music, so I rather don't to keep it consistent to vocals
  2. 01:48:377 (5,2) - Maybe avoid the overlapping. fixed
  3. 01:53:242 (2) - Move it to x=272 y=232 for a perfect parallelogram with 01:50:539 (2,3,1). fixed
  4. 02:35:404 (3,1) - There is a nearly (far) blanket here. ???
  5. 02:43:242 (2,3) - DS issue. 3 needs to be closer to the slider. fixed
  6. 02:45:675 - Add a note? I think that will make the rythm more boring
[Hard]
  1. 00:30:810 (1) - Maybe you can avoid this slier to be partially hidden under the previous slider.
  2. 01:07:026 (4,1) - Move it to x=84 y=60 for a better overlap.
  3. 01:19:188 (3,4) - Move it to x=60 y=284 for a better overlap.
  4. 01:23:512 (3,1) - Same as 00:30:810.
Good map ^^ i hardly find anything. And good song too so ~star~
no changes made at hard. Thanks for your time.
rezoons
rezoons
Well, i couldn't find much. Really sorry :o. And i love this song.... Take another ~~star~~.
Teara
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814 posts
Joined June 2009
Teara
Take my little

SPOILER
03:24 Teara: -pokes-
03:24 Teara: ready for that mod?
03:24 Ayu: OMG YOU
03:24 Teara: oh, you busy. alright, alright
03:24 Ayu: no
03:24 Ayu: D:
03:24 Teara: :3
03:25 Ayu: :3
03:25 Ayu: -pokes-
03:25 Ayu: lol my connection
03:26 Teara: heh
03:26 Teara: alright
03:26 Teara: on to normal
03:26 Teara: 00:13:242 (1) -
03:26 Ayu: im updating
03:26 Ayu: it
03:26 Teara: ah
03:26 Ayu: asdkfanfe okay imma just redownload
03:26 Ayu: to update
03:26 Ayu: because that seems to be faster
03:26 Teara: haha
03:26 Ayu: right now I already have that loading circle
03:26 Ayu: circling trough the flashy updating button
03:26 Teara: ye, I know that feeling
03:26 Teara: clicks and it just keeps on getting bigger and bigger and never updates
03:26 Ayu: yep
03:27 Ayu: and now when I just deleted it it almost crashed my osu
03:27 Ayu: CHANGES
03:27 Ayu: IN
03:27 Ayu: FOLDER
03:27 Ayu: AGDASLRKGMSA
03:27 Teara: :O
03:27 Ayu: wtf
03:27 Ayu: NOW ITS BACK
03:27 Ayu: WITHOUT DOWNLOADING IT
03:27 Teara: not meant to be
03:28 Ayu: AND IT TELLS ME I HAVE TO UPDATE
03:28 Ayu: BOTH DIFFS
03:28 Teara: ggwp
03:28 Ayu: this is like
03:28 Ayu: torture
03:28 Teara: delete it, close osu
03:28 Teara: download
03:28 Teara: open osu
03:28 Ayu: hard managed to update
03:28 Teara: import song
03:28 Ayu: normal isn't updating
03:28 Ayu: UPDATED
03:28 Ayu: OK
03:28 Ayu: RDY
03:28 Teara: are you reaaady?
03:28 Ayu: I'm readdyyyyy
03:28 Teara: ok
03:28 Teara: 00:13:242 (1) -
03:29 Ayu: 13 seconds
03:29 Teara: I noticed you did the same in both diffs
03:29 Teara: but, where it ends
03:29 Teara: just doesnt feel right you know?
03:29 Ayu: ...
03:29 Teara: end it on the next white tick alteast
03:29 Ayu: what
03:29 Ayu: the
03:29 Ayu: WHY DO I ALWAYS
03:29 Ayu: END UP WITH ERRORS LIKE THESE
03:29 *Teara giggles
03:29 Ayu: it's just supposed to end at the red tick
03:30 Teara: I'm just picky with things like that
03:30 Ayu: it wasn't supposed to be unsnapped lol
03:30 Teara: ah, red tick works too
03:30 Ayu: I usually end up
03:30 Ayu: with having an error like that
03:30 Ayu: like on my other map i had this slider on same tick with another slider
03:30 Teara: hehe, when you resnap it does that sometimes
03:30 Teara: or when you change SV
03:30 Ayu: ya
03:31 Ayu: and then forget to resnap the end etc
03:31 Ayu: anyway fix'd ofc
03:32 Teara: 00:42:431 (2,3) -
03:33 Teara: this feels awkward too
03:33 Teara: maybe try this
03:33 Ayu: hmm
03:33 Ayu: wouldn't it like
03:33 Ayu: be fixed if I'd use a higher tick rate
03:33 Teara: lets see
03:34 Teara: nope, still feels awkward, its the slider slide imo
03:34 Teara: doesnt fit the vocals
03:34 Teara: imo
03:34 Ayu: are you suggesting to replace the slider with 2 circle's?
03:34 Teara: no, a shorter slider
03:34 Teara: http://puu.sh/3hqXR.jpg
03:34 Teara: something like that maybe?
03:35 Teara: whistle on 3
03:35 Teara: and finish on start of 4
03:35 Teara: (soft)
03:36 Ayu: but there's a finish on (1)
03:36 Teara: ye, double finish
03:36 Teara: we need to work on the kiai portion too, it feels a little void =p
03:36 Ayu: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/817098
03:36 Teara: looks good
03:37 Teara: ok, next part you can either do a few things
03:38 Teara: http://puu.sh/3hr4L.jpg
03:38 Teara: in this one, whisle on the middle repeat
03:38 Teara: and a finish on 3
03:38 Teara: its the next part
03:38 Ayu: wait wait where
03:38 Teara: 00:44:323 -
03:39 Teara: thats (2)
03:39 Teara: you can also make it 3 circles, or 1 slider 1 circle
03:39 Teara: whichever you prefer
03:40 Ayu: well apparently circles are easier for beginners
03:40 Teara: for the repeatable one
03:40 Ayu: and since easiest diff I guess circle's are most fit
03:40 Ayu: although lotsa circles then lol
03:40 Teara: its fine
03:40 Teara: its not a super fast bpm song
03:40 Teara: easily clickable
03:41 Teara: 00:47:296 (1) - finish on the start here too
03:41 Teara: to go with our finish spam =p
03:42 Ayu: god damnasdasdfaseasef
03:42 *Teara runs
03:42 Ayu: ya no wait
03:42 Ayu: im faucking shiwt up
03:42 Teara: alright, I'll go grab some coffee
03:42 Ayu: tyt
03:42 Teara: while you untangle the mess I'm suggesting
03:42 Teara: btw, you can say no =p
03:43 Teara: remember
03:43 Teara: this is all mostly suggestions
03:43 Teara: nothing unrankable
03:43 Ayu: I usually just accept it since
03:43 Ayu: it helps me improving
03:43 Ayu: etc
03:45 Ayu: lol i just made it 2 sliders
03:45 Teara: that works too
03:45 Ayu: EJYA WHY DID
03:45 Ayu: THEY EVEN INVENT DISTANCE SNAP
03:46 Teara: to be annoying ofcourse!
03:46 Ayu: I agree!
03:46 Ayu: aaanyway fixed
03:47 Teara: yay
03:47 Teara: upload it quickly =p
03:47 Ayu: wut
03:47 Ayu: you mean update map already or ss
03:47 Teara: uh, SS works too
03:47 Ayu: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/817106
03:47 Ayu: hurr
03:47 Teara: remember the finish on 00:47:296 (1) -
03:48 Teara: looks good
03:48 Ayu: yes
03:48 Ayu: i already added that one hehe :p
03:48 Teara: :3
03:48 Teara: ok, the rest is good
03:48 Ayu: yey
03:49 Teara: hmm
03:49 Teara: for that section anyway =p
03:49 Teara: 01:06:215 (2) -
03:49 Ayu: D:
03:49 Teara: I'd prefer it if you end this on the next red tick
03:49 Ayu: how so
03:49 Teara: well, that akwardness comes into play again
03:50 Ayu: I TRY TO MAKE NOT BORING 1/2 RYTHM NORMALS
03:50 Ayu: k ty
03:50 Ayu: but ok lemme check :3\
03:50 Ayu: fasdlfm
03:50 Teara: !faq caps
03:50 Ayu: abuse
03:50 Ayu: okay red tick ending sounds actually pretty good
03:51 Teara: 01:56:756 (3,1) -
03:51 Ayu: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/817108
03:51 Teara: looks good :3
03:52 Ayu: sup with (3,1)
03:52 Teara: that placement
03:52 Ayu: little triangle
03:52 Teara: might be a little tricky for a normal
03:53 Ayu: so how to place
03:53 Teara: in a regular normal, this wont be an issue per say
03:53 Teara: but sionce this is your "easiest" diff
03:53 Ayu: sionce
03:53 Teara: epic teara typo
03:53 Teara: hm
03:53 Teara: lets see
03:54 Teara: slight 01:56:756 (3,1) -
03:55 Teara: change to the pattern, but not to much
03:55 Ayu: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/817111
03:55 Ayu: this is what I did
03:55 Teara: what I had in mind too :3
03:55 Teara: great
03:55 Ayu: i know im great.
03:55 Ayu: ty
03:55 Ayu: you too
03:56 Teara: hah
03:56 Teara: anyway
03:56 Teara: 02:06:215 (4) -
03:56 Teara: this will sound like a stupid suggestion
03:56 Teara: but
03:56 Teara: its slightly to loud.
03:56 Ayu: what a stupid suggestion
03:56 Teara: 2 new greenpoints kthxbai
03:56 Teara: make it a tad bit softer
03:56 Teara: *(the clap)*
03:56 Ayu: -10%?
03:56 Ayu: :D
03:56 Teara: sounds good
03:57 Ayu: what about the clap on the repeat
03:57 Teara: that is fine
03:57 Ayu: oki
03:57 Ayu: done
03:57 Teara: :3
03:57 Ayu: :3
03:59 Teara: 02:44:053 (3) -
03:59 Teara: whislte here
04:00 Ayu: fix
04:00 Teara: 02:45:404 (2) -
04:00 Teara: ye, this has to die
04:00 Teara: and be replaced with a slider
04:00 Ayu: and you have to make me a sandwich k
04:01 Teara: with poison on it? alright
04:01 Ayu: :-(
04:01 Ayu: aaanyway how long should te slider be and why exactly
04:01 Teara: and to finish normal off
04:02 Teara: red tick to white tick
04:02 Teara: at the moment, that part is breaking the rhyhem imo
04:02 Teara: but ye, to finish normal off 02:57:566 (3) - < finish on start to be consistant with the rest of the diff
04:03 Ayu: done
04:03 Ayu: done
04:03 Ayu: done
04:03 Ayu: well fak
04:03 Ayu: i wanted to make a cool wave
04:04 Ayu: done
04:04 Ayu: done
04:04 Ayu: done
04:04 Ayu: done
04:04 Ayu: done
04:04 Ayu: done
04:04 Ayu: done
04:04 Ayu: k done.
04:04 Teara: watch out
04:05 Teara: =p
04:06 Ayu: we got a badass over here
04:06 Ayu: !!!
04:07 Ayu: but okay everything fixed
04:07 Teara: great
04:07 Teara: hard seems to be fine as is
04:07 Teara: ima testplay it quickly
04:07 Ayu: oki :3
04:11 Ayu: :3
04:11 Teara: upload the changes to normal =p
04:12 Ayu: submitting
04:13 Ayu: done
Niko-nyan
1,990 posts
Joined June 2011
Niko-nyan
m4m

General~
BG must be 16:9 / 4:3
02:34:188-02:34:323 - i think you should remove this timing because it doesn't fit

Normal
00:13:242 - looks better if you reduce volume or remove finish
00:17:566 - ^
01:07:296 - ^
01:11:621 - ^
03:02:972 - reduce volume to 5% more better for me

Hard~
00:13:242 and 00:17:566 - same with easy
00:21:891 - looks better if you remove finish in here
00:58:918 - add break from here
01:05:134 - remove finish is better in here
01:07:296 and 01:11:621 - same with easy too
01:52:161 (5,6,7,8,9) - looks better if you make it like 02:06:485 -
02:32:431 (5,6,7,8,9) - ^
03:02:672 - same with easy

because i love the song so catch my moe
Ayu
1,125 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
Ayu

Frans Niko wrote:

m4m

General~
BG must be 16:9 / 4:3 BG has legit Widescreen resolution and should be good.
02:34:188-02:34:323 - i think you should remove this timing because it doesn't fit It emphasize's the music with a nice kiai fountain here.

Normal
00:13:242 - looks better if you reduce volume or remove finish Fixed
00:17:566 - ^ Fixed
01:07:296 - ^ Fixed
01:11:621 - ^ Fixed
03:02:972 - reduce volume to 5% more better for me Fixed

Hard~
00:13:242 and 00:17:566 - same with easy Fixed
00:21:891 - looks better if you remove finish in here Keeping it as to keep it consistent to [Normal].
00:58:918 - add break from here break is supposed to be at 01:00:810 hurr durr
01:05:134 - remove finish is better in here Fixed
01:07:296 and 01:11:621 - same with easy too Fixed
01:52:161 (5,6,7,8,9) - looks better if you make it like 02:06:485 - nah, I'd rather keep these stacked as they're just some simpler background claps. at 02:06:485 in the other hand it just felt more emphasizing to have it moving slowly because there are more claps
02:32:431 (5,6,7,8,9) - ^ ^
03:02:672 - same with easy Fixed

because i love the song so catch my moe
Thanks for your time and your mod.
Hard
696 posts
Joined February 2013
Hard
again forced to do this. fark you. Good map already, so just take some halfassed nazi/hitsound/combomod and then leave.


Normal


  1. 00:55:945 (1) - try to stack the end of that slider with 00:53:783 (4) - it would look better, i think
  2. 01:09:729 (1,2,1) - i'm not sure which sound you're following here. Maybe you should put something on the read ticks to make it easier to read for dumb people like me.
  3. 01:35:404 - i think you should use a higher volume for the hitsounds. it's really hard to hear what i'm clicking at. i dont know, try to go with 60% volume, maybe? I suggest to do the same in the other diffs, too.
  4. 02:57:566 (3) - to make it look better (just something asthetic) move this one some grids down.


Hard


  1. 00:11:080 (1) - maybe add whistle here. you're going with the piano note, but it feels like you thought there could be vocals. i think it would be better, if you use different sounds for when you follow the vocals and the rhythm. it's easier to understand for the player.
  2. 00:15:404 - ^
  3. 00:19:729 (1) - ^
  4. 02:32:431 (5) - maybe add nc here, because you're following a new rhythm. dunno really.
  5. lol. nothing here i just put another of those points by accident. dont mind.


now go die. thank you.
Teara
osu! Alumni
814 posts
Joined June 2009
Teara
Ok, between me, roddie and lolcubes.

The offset is +13
Ayu
1,125 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
Ayu
Done, updated and fixed the offset and all the timing points. Also fixed a typo in the Creators Words thanks to Inverness :D
Teara
osu! Alumni
814 posts
Joined June 2009
Teara
Alright.

Looking good.
Ayu
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Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
Ayu
Thank you really much Teara :D
Elly-chan
969 posts
Joined January 2011
Elly-chan
some small irc stuff

ranked
vipto
716 posts
Joined May 2011
vipto
Gratz!

Nice map and the song is just luv ><
Ayu
1,125 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
Ayu
I actually started to realize that the short empty spaces are kinda not working out that well, though

I guess overall it's still a nice map. Thanks \:D/
Birdy
5,720 posts
Joined April 2011
Birdy

Ayu wrote:

I actually started to realize that the short empty spaces are kinda not working out that well, though

I guess overall it's still a nice map. Thanks \:D/
yea I guess it's better than GILL'S FUCKING PASSOVER

grats scrub
Niko-nyan
1,990 posts
Joined June 2011
Niko-nyan
o3o fast rank lol
ryuu
802 posts
Joined February 2011
ryuu
congratulations, cool aaayuuuuu >:3
69653863
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Joined January 2012
69653863
is very good map
i rate 1
Dark_Ai
1,832 posts
Joined July 2010
Dark_Ai
Omg yes. Congratz >w<
I wanted to map this song too ;w;
maal
maal
really =_=

gratz on map ranked tho
raww_old
raww_old

maal wrote:

really =_=

gratz on map ranked tho
SkyDevil
1,771 posts
Joined October 2010
SkyDevil
Gratzz ayu *A*
Konei
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Joined March 2012
Konei

inverness wrote:

is very good map
i rate 1
me too cuz it is number one
Mikarunoel131_DELETED
Mikarunoel131_DELETED
I love the song ~ So great it won :)
Good beatmap x3 Congratz to the rank :D
Aurele
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Aurele
Congratulation Ayu! :D
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