1. Hard (4,61 stars, 265 notes)
2. Normal (2,79 stars, 172 notes)

1. Add Eurovision Song Contest 2013 in Source, then remove eurovision from tags
2. Maybe add danish in tags? Since it's a minor language and it doesn't appear in the current list you could add it
3. Just 2 combo-colour? ;w; It's fine as it is, but a lighter one would be appreciated
   Also, I like the idea of having a live recording mp3, hoping it won't be an unrankable stuff \o/

1. 01:56:756 (3) - What about a curve slider like this http://puu.sh/32ZqQ.jpg?
2. 02:06:080 (2,3) - I'd stack them on 02:05:675 (1) -
3. 02:34:323 (2) - Something like this is nicer (my example is not so accurate but you'll get what I mean)

1. 00:38:377 (1) - Don't be blanketfag pls, this beat plays bad here D:
2. 01:45:404 - I can clearly feel a note here, add beat or make a 1/2 slider
3. 02:43:242 (2,3,4,5) - Rhythm is a bit bad here, try this http://puu.sh/32ZSG.jpg ?

1. 00:12:161 (2,3) - Just a little comment here. You have used the slider (3) to make a blanket with the beginning of the second slider, but, I am wondering why you haven't made a blanket with both, I think it would look neater? You could actually do the same thing for 01:10:539 (2,3) -
   
   Example

   
2. 01:14:323 - It's sounding bad here, you have skipped this upbeat because of the previous and the next circle, it basically sound bad and weird at the same time because since it's an upbeat and it has a very strong sound, it would be very awful to skip it. I suggest you to change the circle (1) for a reverse-slider, just like that. It would sound better and plays better if you follow my suggestion above.
   
   Example

   
3. 01:44:053 (1,3) - The emplacement of the circle (3) looks terrible. It looks like you wanted to stack it with the end of the slider (1), but you might have "accidentally" moved it. I highly suggest you to either stack it perfectly or, move it somewhere else.
4. 02:55:404 - At this place, a whistle sounds too quiet. To be honest, a finish would make it louder, just like what you have done to the two previous downbeats. (for the next one, the part is softer, so that's alright). So.. a finish would be better than a whistle.
5. 02:59:729 (1) - I don't know why you have followed the applause from the public instead of the music.. The music ends to 03:03:512 - , so it will be better if you follow this instead by finishing the spinner here and after, you could use the 20% at the end of it, so it won't sound so loud.

1. 02:59:729 (1) - Do what I have told you for Normal

1. 00:11:080 - Add note here, definitely a piano sound there
2. 00:15:404 - ^
3. 00:19:729 - ^
4. 00:39:188 (3) - Slowdown on this slider like you did before? Fits since you're building up for the kiai here
5. 01:09:458 - Add note
6. 01:13:783 - ^
7. 01:52:161 (5) - Add finish on the end
8. 02:33:783 (1) - Instead of starting a new kiai after this slider, I think it fits way better to do this at the start of it

1. 00:11:891 - There has to be something over here, either add a note or add a repeat to the slider
2. 00:12:161 (2,3) - Would be great if you could make (2) be a blanket over (3) http://puu.sh/3auQv.jpg
3. 00:16:215 - Same as before
4. 00:20:539 - ^
5. 01:05:945 - ^ etc. You get it now
6. 01:14:053 (1) - Why did you do it over here, and not the other spots lolol
7. 01:52:702 (1) - Finish
8. 01:55:945 (2) - Remove finish
9. 02:41:891 (3) - Increase volume by 10%, it's nearly impossible to hear this one
10. 02:59:729 - Add a note here and place the spinner 1/4th ahead of it (Also make it 1/4th shorter)

1. That'd be great, if you change your BG to something related to artist, I think. Current one is fine, but you can find better one!
2. Try stop being lazy and map an [Easy], you've mapped two very nice diff, no map one more awesome diff! Som everyone can enjoy your mapping :3
   Note: [Normal] has quite fast sliders. making an [Easy] is a good idea, because [Normal] is TOO hard to be the easiest diff in this mapset.

1. Reduce HP Drain, please! Empy space like 00:14:323 - here and so on are kinda stressful for players and HP5 makes them TOO hard. This is the easiest diff, after all.
2. 00:13:242 - I really don't like these velocity changes, but if you change your velocity here - at least make these velocity changes readable!
   Note: same goes for EVERY slider with velocity changes. How else can we read velocity changes there? ;_;
3. 00:45:134 (3) - try to move this slider to 00:45:675 - and place a cirle at 00:45:134. it will help you to keep consistent rhythm and follow vocals better.
   Note: exactly the same happens to 01:39:188 (3) - fix both of them or ignore both of them to be consistent.
4. 00:47:837 (2) - kinda the same as above. Simpy add reverse o this slider, to follow vocals when she sings "teardrops''. It'll also help you to fix x0.5 spacing hereexample
   Note: aaand 01:41:891 (2) - same. I guess you should do it here.
5. 01:45:675 (3,1) - is it intentional? Feels like this jump doesn't really fits with song and is kinda off your regular pattern.

1. You really should point out velocity changes with New Combos. Otherwise, SV changes are unreadable and will confuse players. If slowdown fits with music, NC will fit, too!
2. 00:23:512 - make this section a bit louder, it's quite hard to hear it. AS you know, all hitsounds MUST be hearable, that's a rule.
3. 01:48:377 (1) - add repeat to this slider, it sounds kinda empty without it.Similar slider on 01:39:729 (1) - has a reverse on it, too!
4. 01:52:161 (5,1) - on previous kiai you used stacked 1/4s, what happened here? Do the same as you did it earlier, sliders are boring and may confuse players because it's too hard to read how many repeats does each slider has.
   Note: 02:32:431 (5,6) - 02:49:729 (6,7) - 02:49:729 (6,7) - same. o3o/

1. Color 2, 3 and 4 are too similar imo. I think you can remove color 3.

1. 00:38:107 - Add a note?
2. 01:48:377 (5,2) - Maybe avoid the overlapping.
3. 01:53:242 (2) - Move it to x=272 y=232 for a perfect parallelogram with 01:50:539 (2,3,1).
4. 02:35:404 (3,1) - There is a nearly (far) blanket here.
5. 02:43:242 (2,3) - DS issue. 3 needs to be closer to the slider.
6. 02:45:675 - Add a note?

1. 00:30:810 (1) - Maybe you can avoid this slier to be partially hidden under the previous slider.
2. 01:07:026 (4,1) - Move it to x=84 y=60 for a better overlap.
3. 01:19:188 (3,4) - Move it to x=60 y=284 for a better overlap.
4. 01:23:512 (3,1) - Same as 00:30:810.

rezoons wrote:

Hi ,

M4M:

[General]

1. Color 2, 3 and 4 are too similar imo. I think you can remove color 3.

done

[Normal]

1. 00:38:107 - Add a note? nah, there's nothing besides some background music, so I rather don't to keep it consistent to vocals
2. 01:48:377 (5,2) - Maybe avoid the overlapping. fixed
3. 01:53:242 (2) - Move it to x=272 y=232 for a perfect parallelogram with 01:50:539 (2,3,1). fixed
4. 02:35:404 (3,1) - There is a nearly (far) blanket here. ???
5. 02:43:242 (2,3) - DS issue. 3 needs to be closer to the slider. fixed
6. 02:45:675 - Add a note? I think that will make the rythm more boring

[Hard]

1. 00:30:810 (1) - Maybe you can avoid this slier to be partially hidden under the previous slider.
2. 01:07:026 (4,1) - Move it to x=84 y=60 for a better overlap.
3. 01:19:188 (3,4) - Move it to x=60 y=284 for a better overlap.
4. 01:23:512 (3,1) - Same as 00:30:810.

Good map ^^ i hardly find anything. And good song too so ~star~

Frans Niko wrote:

m4m

General~
BG must be 16:9 / 4:3 BG has legit Widescreen resolution and should be good.
02:34:188-02:34:323 - i think you should remove this timing because it doesn't fit It emphasize's the music with a nice kiai fountain here.

Normal
00:13:242 - looks better if you reduce volume or remove finish Fixed
00:17:566 - ^ Fixed
01:07:296 - ^ Fixed
01:11:621 - ^ Fixed
03:02:972 - reduce volume to 5% more better for me Fixed

Hard~
00:13:242 and 00:17:566 - same with easy Fixed
00:21:891 - looks better if you remove finish in here Keeping it as to keep it consistent to [Normal].
00:58:918 - add break from here break is supposed to be at 01:00:810 hurr durr
01:05:134 - remove finish is better in here Fixed
01:07:296 and 01:11:621 - same with easy too Fixed
01:52:161 (5,6,7,8,9) - looks better if you make it like 02:06:485 - nah, I'd rather keep these stacked as they're just some simpler background claps. at 02:06:485 in the other hand it just felt more emphasizing to have it moving slowly because there are more claps
02:32:431 (5,6,7,8,9) - ^ ^
03:02:672 - same with easy Fixed

because i love the song so catch my moe

Ayu wrote:

I actually started to realize that the short empty spaces are kinda not working out that well, though

I guess overall it's still a nice map. Thanks \:D/