ljqandylee wrote:

壮我开ww
light check~
[Hard]

1. 00:06:253 (6253|2) - end at 00:06:981
2. 00:11:344 (11344|1) - delete
3. 00:38:981 (38981|3) - delete
4. 00:38:981 (38981|2) - end at 00:39:344
5. 00:52:799 - add a note
6. 00:56:890 (56890|5) - delete
7. 00:57:072 (57072|3) - delete
8. 01:02:526 (62526|2) - move to 5th column
9. 01:26:981 (86981|3,87026|4) - didn't match the sound, move them to 01:26:890 and 01:26:981
10. 01:28:344 (88344|2,88435|3,88526|4) - actually here are four 1/8 sounds, from 01:28:344 to 01:28:481

[Normal]

1. 01:03:708 - add a note
2. 01:21:163 - add a note at 1st column
3. 01:26:890 - add a note
4. 01:28:344 (88344|2,88435|3,88526|4) - the same as Hard

[Easy]

1. 00:18:072 - add a note at 7th column
2. 00:52:072 (52072|2) - end at 00:53:163, and↓
3. 00:53:163 - add a note

fixed

这里是MOD

先说下动漫曲子的一些特点，很多部分会有节奏单一的地方，这些地方可以考虑做人声，来配合下鼓点，这样比较好~~
从00:12:072 (12072|3) - 到00:17:526 (17526|5,17526|0) - 这一段只有鼓点，你把重音和低音都写成两个NOTE本身也是有问题的，你可以低音写两个，重音写三个，也可以低音写一个，重音写两个NOTE
00:19:344 (19344|1) - 这里用两个NOTE来修饰，因为这里除了一个低音外，还有忽然出现的一个鼓点音，加上去，表现力会有所加强
00:20:072 (20072|3) - 这里漏音了，最好再好好听下~~，低音是一个 长音，加上去
00:19:890 (19890|1,19981|2,20072|3) - 这里是1/8
00:22:799 (22799|1,22890|2,22981|3) - 同上
从00:24:799 (24799|2) -开始，加上人声试试，加在哪就看你的思路了~~尽量做到不卡手为前提
00:29:344 (29344|4) - 这里不要和后面的滑条连在一起,同前面几个滑条，这里明显有一个停顿
从00:50:617 (50617|0) - 到00:52:072 (52072|2) - 为什么第一个写了鼓点之后两个都不写呢~~
01:01:163 (61163|5) - 这里是1/8，仔细听歌曲，这歌曲很多地方都是1/8，不要急着写，放慢听，新手一次肯定听不出所有的音
01:10:981 (70981|5) -
01:22:253 (82253|3) - 这里试着把NOTE从最左边向右摆成阶梯
01:23:708 (83708|2) - 人声写上
01:24:799 (84799|6) -
机关枪单点尽量避免，动漫曲子要写好并不容易，再仔细做一下吧~~
谱子尽量美观一点，但是这是在排列熟练的前提下，所以继续努力~~

以上

Lieselotte wrote:

这里是MOD

先说下动漫曲子的一些特点，很多部分会有节奏单一的地方，这些地方可以考虑做人声，来配合下鼓点，这样比较好~~
从00:12:072 (12072|3) - 到00:17:526 (17526|5,17526|0) - 这一段只有鼓点，你把重音和低音都写成两个NOTE本身也是有问题的，你可以低音写两个，重音写三个，也可以低音写一个，重音写两个NOTE
00:19:344 (19344|1) - 这里用两个NOTE来修饰，因为这里除了一个低音外，还有忽然出现的一个鼓点音，加上去，表现力会有所加强
00:20:072 (20072|3) - 这里漏音了，最好再好好听下~~，低音是一个 长音，加上去
00:19:890 (19890|1,19981|2,20072|3) - 这里是1/8
00:22:799 (22799|1,22890|2,22981|3) - 同上
从00:24:799 (24799|2) -开始，加上人声试试，加在哪就看你的思路了~~尽量做到不卡手为前提
00:29:344 (29344|4) - 这里不要和后面的滑条连在一起,同前面几个滑条，这里明显有一个停顿
从00:50:617 (50617|0) - 到00:52:072 (52072|2) - 为什么第一个写了鼓点之后两个都不写呢~~
01:01:163 (61163|5) - 这里是1/8，仔细听歌曲，这歌曲很多地方都是1/8，不要急着写，放慢听，新手一次肯定听不出所有的音
01:10:981 (70981|5) -
01:22:253 (82253|3) - 这里试着把NOTE从最左边向右摆成阶梯
01:23:708 (83708|2) - 人声写上
01:24:799 (84799|6) -
机关枪单点尽量避免，动漫曲子要写好并不容易，再仔细做一下吧~~
谱子尽量美观一点，但是这是在排列熟练的前提下，所以继续努力~~

以上

fixed

Hi woc!


[All Diffs:]

Timing is off. All timing sections needs to move about -25 ms from the current offset and all notes resnapped.
Aimod is complaining about preview point/bitrate/BG resolution (but i think since osu! got HD support now it does not matter for the BG anymore)
Source title of the anime seems different than what got ranked before, yours says "Toaru Kagaku no Railgun S" ranked one says "To Aru Kagaku no Railgun"
I don't know myself since i never seen this anime but according to myanimelist.net your's is right and the other one spelled wrong lol, well i don't know..
Source: http://myanimelist.net/anime/16049/Toar ... _Railgun_S

Or maybe just copy the tags/source from this beatmap -> t/130630


[Easy:]

00:12:799 - here for the next measures the pattern should progress a bit to the right side every measure to go alongside with the bass:
00:14:253 (14253|1,14617|4,14981|1,15344|4) - move those 4 notes all 1 column to the right side. 00:15:708 (15708|1) - move this one to the 4th column and chose those notes placement a bit 00:17:163 (17163|3,17526|6,17890|4,18072|6) -
00:24:072 (24072|5) - move this one to one of the first 3 columns, 00:27:708 (27708|1,28435|1) - move those to the 6th column
00:50:253 - add note on 7th column?
Optional: Add notes here on 4th column, 00:50:617 - 00:51:344 - 00:52:072 - but its fine if you think that will make it too difficult
00:52:072 (52072|2) - better shorten the hold. it is too long, also will give a nice little break after the previous part
00:54:981 (54981|5,55344|2,55708|5,56072|2) - Move those notes all 1 column to the left?
00:56:617 - Suggest to change this measure to something like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/766346 You are missing a beat and it looks pretty unorganized right now.
01:00:799 (60799|3,61163|5,61526|3) - move those all 1 column left?



[Normal:]

00:14:253 (14253|2,14435|6) - move the notes both 1 column to the left and those notes: 00:15:708 (15708|1,15890|5) - like the following ones.
00:34:617 (34617|1,35163|2,35708|3) - Should remove the finish hitsounds for those holds and add extra notes with finish sound instead. Afterall it's a normal diff. 00:41:890 (41890|3) - same
00:44:799 - Same thing here for the transition between measures: 00:44:799 (44799|5) - remove this finish hitsound and move this note to the 5th column. 00:44:981 (44981|5) - addnote here. 00:46:253 (46253|4,46435|5) - move those notes into same location as the next notes. 00:47:708 (47708|2,47890|3) - same for those 2 notes.
01:15:163 (75163|3) - Hold 1 beat too long.
01:16:799 (76799|2) - add finish sound and move this 1 column to the right.
01:18:617 (78617|1) - this hold is confusing. It should be in the same column as this note 01:18:253 (78253|6) - since its both for the same guitar note. I suggest to change it like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/766368
01:21:890 (81890|0,82072|0,82253|0,82435|0) - Better move those 4 notes to the third column. It has a very nice feeling to it because of the other pitch changes occuring



[Hard:]

00:25:117 - The part around here i think it would be alot better if the guitar conitued with 2 holds like that. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/766277
00:26:890 - Same thing http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/766280
00:56:481 - This part here feels really awkward to play for me. 00:57:163 - i think you should remove the guitar notes at this point and finish the keyboard stream. At the next measure here 00:57:890 - you should better map the notes according to the drum pattern
00:59:708 (59708|5,59753|4,59799|3) - Those 2 streams are all 2 notes too short. It should be like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/766290 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/766292
01:04:253 - Some suggestion to improve this part: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/766297
01:15:163 (75163|4,75163|2) - The 2 holds are 1 beat too long
The ending part im not sure but after the offsect corrections the notes should belong like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/766322 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/766323 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/766325


Good map

All fixed.
Source should be "Toaru", DJpop made a mistake.

早灣 woc醬 >w<
自己到處覓食決定吃這個 w


鍵位都好nice ;w;
就這些了 :3
good luck ~ star

All fixed, thanks.

very good .. this map

Easy
00:09:865 (9865|2) - move to 5 track
00:11:319 (11319|4) - move to 3 track

00:34:592 (34592|2) - move to 5 track
00:35:683 (35683|4) - move to 3 track

00:52:047 (52047|2) - move to 7 track

Normal
00:01:683 (1683|5) - i think this circle change to hold over at next circle same as [easy]00:17:865 (17865|4,18047|6) -
00:04:592 (4592|1) - ^
00:07:501 (7501|3) - ^

00:09:865 (9865|6) - & 00:10:592 (10592|2) - I just feel that change to hold can correspond next two hold sound

00:34:592 (34592|1,34592|4,35138|2,35138|5,35683|3,35683|6) - just image reversal same as [Easy]
01:02:228 (62228|4,62592|3,62956|2,63319|1,63683|0) - ^

Hard
00:01:683 (1683|0) - same as [Normall]
00:04:592 (4592|6) - ^
00:07:501 (7501|4) - ^

Finally,All hail our Open source brother!!!

All fixed

\o/ 來mod一下

[Easy]

1. 00:01:138 (1138|4,1138|2) - I guess you can add a finish hitsound there to fit the first strong downbeat there. It can also fit the music quite well.
2. 00:04:047 (4047|4,4047|2) - I prefer to add a clap here.
3. 00:18:047 (18047|6) - Add a finish here to fit the strong downbeat?
4. 00:59:319 (59319|1) - How about moving this to 5th column to fit the previous pattern?

[Normal]

1. 00:01:138 (1138|6) - I guess you can add a finish hitsound there to fit the first strong downbeat there. It can also fit the music quite well.
2. 00:03:865 - How about adding a note at 1st(red) column to fit the previous pattern?
3. 01:05:228 (65228|0) - I would recommend to add a note at 5th column (the placement is same as previous note)? So that the note can fit the drum and instrument there.
4. 01:05:319 (65319|0) - How about adding a note here to follow the vocal?

[Hard]

1. 00:01:138 (1138|6,1138|0,1138|2,1138|4) - I guess you can add a finish hitsound there to fit the first strong downbeat there. It can also fit the music quite well.
2. 00:18:047 (18047|2,18047|5,18047|1,18047|4) - Add some finish hitsound there to fit the strong downbeat?
3. 00:55:501 (55501|2,55592|3,55683|4) - The rhythm is quite weird there. I don't think a triplet fits the music there. I would suggest removing this note: 00:55:592 (55592|3) -
4. 00:57:138 (57138|0,57183|1,57228|2) - ^Same, I would suggest removing the note which on the blue tick.
5. 01:05:047 (65047|5) - Add a clap here to fit the drum sound?

kanpakyin wrote:

\o/ 來mod一下

[Easy]

1. 00:01:138 (1138|4,1138|2) - I guess you can add a finish hitsound there to fit the first strong downbeat there. It can also fit the music quite well.
2. 00:04:047 (4047|4,4047|2) - I prefer to add a clap here.
3. 00:18:047 (18047|6) - Add a finish here to fit the strong downbeat?
4. 00:59:319 (59319|1) - How about moving this to 5th column to fit the previous pattern?

all fixed

[Normal]

1. 00:01:138 (1138|6) - I guess you can add a finish hitsound there to fit the first strong downbeat there. It can also fit the music quite well.
2. 00:03:865 - How about adding a note at 1st(red) column to fit the previous pattern?
3. 01:05:228 (65228|0) - I would recommend to add a note at 5th column (the placement is same as previous note)? So that the note can fit the drum and instrument there.
4. 01:05:319 (65319|0) - How about adding a note here to follow the vocal?

all fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:01:138 (1138|6,1138|0,1138|2,1138|4) - I guess you can add a finish hitsound there to fit the first strong downbeat there. It can also fit the music quite well.
2. 00:18:047 (18047|2,18047|5,18047|1,18047|4) - Add some finish hitsound there to fit the strong downbeat?
3. 00:55:501 (55501|2,55592|3,55683|4) - The rhythm is quite weird there. I don't think a triplet fits the music there. I would suggest removing this note: 00:55:592 (55592|3) -
4. 00:57:138 (57138|0,57183|1,57228|2) - ^Same, I would suggest removing the note which on the blue tick. I slow down to 25% and there's has three drum sounds, and the same to second.
5. 01:05:047 (65047|5) - Add a clap here to fit the drum sound?

all fixed except red comment.

Nice one!

Bubbled.

(ノ・ω・)ノ

壮我开

好图，想不到开源哥这么快就领悟下落式图的做法了量产有望（误

7K HARD的问题感觉有些面条后边的NOTE有些阴，是刻意的吗？

7k hard:

add: 00:57:047 (57047|3) -

改成这样会比较爽快。


01:05:047 (65047|6) -
移到5
01:05:138 (65138|6) -
移到7

发现违和的大概是这么多。

感谢指出问题

Bubble repaired.

Hi~

[7K Easy]
00:14:228 Something Repetitive
00:27:683 (1,2,3) Ctrl + H
00:54:956 (1,2,3,4,5) ^

Pretty Good diff

[7K Normal]
00:30:774 Move to colum 1
00:31:138 ^ 2
00:31:501 ^ 3
00:33:501 ^ 7
00:34:047 ^ 6
00:34:410 ^ 5
00:41:865 Penis! O___O
01:19:683 http://puu.sh/30RSK.png
01:21:138 http://puu.sh/30RU4.png

[7K Hard]
00:21:501 http://puu.sh/30RWe.png
00:48:228 http://puu.sh/30RXM.png
01:17:138 http://puu.sh/30RZU.png
01:20:047 http://puu.sh/30S17.png

Good Luck : 3

all fixed, thanks alot.

Hi there. From the osu!mania Mod Thread. Incoming rage mod.

[General]
- The bit rate of the MP3 used is 121 kb/s. I think the minimum was 128 kb/s.

[Easy]
(If I were a BAT, I'd pop that bubble so hard when I see this chart.)
00:04:410 (4410|2,5138|2,5865|2) Move to 7th column.
00:04:774 (4774|6,5501|6,6228|6) Move to 3rd column.
00:06:592 (6592|2) Move to 5th column.
00:07:319 (7319|3,8047|3,8774|3) ^
00:14:228 (14228|3,14956|3) Move to 3rd column.
00:15:683 (15683|3,16410|3) Move to 2nd column.
00:17:138 (17138|3) Move to 1st column.
00:17:865 (17865|4) Move to 1st or 3rd column and change to a normal note. A long note that short is a nuisance in an Easy difficulty.
00:19:319 (19319|1) Move to 3rd column.
00:22:956 (22956|3) Change to normal note.
00:25:138 (25138|3) Move to 3rd column.
00:25:865 Do this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/777014
00:31:319 (31319|3) Move to 2nd or 3rd column.
00:32:047 Do this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/777017
00:34:592 (34592|4) Move to 7th column.
00:35:138 (35138|3) Move to 5th column.
00:36:774 (36774|1) Move to 3rd column.
00:41:138 (41138|4) Move to 4th column.
00:41:865 (41865|3) Move to 1st, 2nd, or 3rd column.
00:43:319 (43319|3,44410|3) Move to 2nd or 3rd column.
00:44:774 (44774|5,45501|3,46228|3,46956|5,47683|3) Move to 1st or 2nd column.
00:52:047 (52047|6) Have the long note end at 00:52:774.
00:59:319 Do this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/777271
01:08:047 (68047|1,69501|1) Move to 3rd column.
01:08:774 (68774|5,70228|5) Move to 5th column.
01:13:865 (73865|2,74774|4) Move to 2nd column.
01:14:410 (74410|4,75138|4) Move to 6th column.
01:18:228 (78228|0) Move 3rd column.
01:18:592 (78592|6) Remove this note.

[Normal]
(If I were a BAT, I'd pop the bubble even harder when I see this chart.)
HP Drain +1
00:03:865 (3865|1) Remove this note.
00:04:774 (4774|2) Move to 5th or 7th column.
00:24:956 (24956|2,25319|2,25683|2) Move to a column that uses the right hand (4th to 7th).
00:30:592 (30592|1,30956|2,31319|3) Move right by one column.
00:33:501 (33501|5,33865|4,34228|3) Move left by two columns.
00:37:683 (37683|5,38047|5) Move to 3rd column.
00:38:774 (38774|1) Move to a column that uses the right hand.
00:39:501 (39501|5) Move to 2nd column.
00:44:774 ...: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/777288
01:02:228 (62228|2,62592|3,62956|4,63319|5) DON'T DO THAT HERE, GODDAMMIT. This looks more like a < Lv12 in O2Jam standards, so it should have a max. of two holds at a time. I recommend that you either do this or this.
01:04:228 (64228|0,64774|0) Move to 2nd column.
01:04:228 (64228|6,64774|6) Move to 6th column.
01:08:047 (68047|5,68228|3,68410|1) Move left by one column.
01:11:683 (71683|5,72047|5,72410|4,72774|4,73138|3,73501|3,73865|2,74228|2) Move left by two columns.
01:14:410 (74410|1,74774|1) Move to 3rd column.
01:18:592 (78592|3) Remove this note.
01:18:956 (78956|4,79319|4) Move to 4th column.
01:19:683 (79683|2) Remove this note.
01:21:138 (81138|4) ^
01:20:047 ...: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/777310
01:23:865 (83865|5) Move to 1st or 5th column.

[Hard]
(This is the point where I was supposed to rage like hell, but I decided to stay calm and mod nicely. Maybe.)
HP Drain +1 or 2
OD +1, 2, or 3
00:06:592 Add a note in 6th column (whistle hitsound).
00:21:683 (21683|3,22047|3) Move left by one column.
00:22:774 (22774|1,22834|2,22895|3,22956|4) ^
00:24:047 (24047|1) Move to 7th column.
00:24:410 Add a note in 4th column (finish hitsound) and 6th column (no hitsound).
00:32:410 (32410|6,32774|4) Move to 3rd column (to fit with violins).
00:32:956 (32956|3) Move to 6th column (same reason).
00:46:956 (46956|3,47319|3) Move to 2nd column. Some intermediate right-handers may struggle in this part since the right hand is entirely used here.
01:03:501 (63501|1,63683|1,63865|1,64047|1) Move to 3rd column.
01:03:501 (63501|5,63683|5,63865|5,64047|5) Move to 5th column.
01:28:410 (88410|4) Remove this note.
01:28:441 (88441|5) Move to 01:28:410.

Hope this helps, maybe.

PROGUY wrote:

Hi there. From the osu!mania Mod Thread. Incoming rage mod.

[General]
- The bit rate of the MP3 used is 121 kb/s. I think the minimum was 128 kb/s.

[Easy]
(If I were a BAT, I'd pop that bubble so hard when I see this chart.)
00:04:410 (4410|2,5138|2,5865|2) Move to 7th column.
00:04:774 (4774|6,5501|6,6228|6) Move to 3rd column.
00:06:592 (6592|2) Move to 5th column.
00:07:319 (7319|3,8047|3,8774|3) ^
00:14:228 (14228|3,14956|3) Move to 3rd column.
00:15:683 (15683|3,16410|3) Move to 2nd column.
00:17:138 (17138|3) Move to 1st column.
00:17:865 (17865|4) Move to 1st or 3rd column and change to a normal note. A long note that short is a nuisance in an Easy difficulty.
00:19:319 (19319|1) Move to 3rd column.
00:22:956 (22956|3) Change to normal note. remain
00:25:138 (25138|3) Move to 3rd column.
00:25:865 Do this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/777014
00:31:319 (31319|3) Move to 2nd or 3rd column.
00:32:047 Do this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/777017
00:34:592 (34592|4) Move to 7th column.
00:35:138 (35138|3) Move to 5th column.
00:36:774 (36774|1) Move to 3rd column.
00:41:138 (41138|4) Move to 4th column.
00:41:865 (41865|3) Move to 1st, 2nd, or 3rd column.
00:43:319 (43319|3,44410|3) Move to 2nd or 3rd column. remain
00:44:774 (44774|5,45501|3,46228|3,46956|5,47683|3) Move to 1st or 2nd column.
00:52:047 (52047|6) Have the long note end at 00:52:774.
00:59:319 Do this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/777271
01:08:047 (68047|1,69501|1) Move to 3rd column. remain
01:08:774 (68774|5,70228|5) Move to 5th column. remain
01:13:865 (73865|2,74774|4) Move to 2nd column.
01:14:410 (74410|4,75138|4) Move to 6th column.
01:18:228 (78228|0) Move 3rd column.
01:18:592 (78592|6) Remove this note.

[Normal]
(If I were a BAT, I'd pop the bubble even harder when I see this chart.)
HP Drain +1
00:03:865 (3865|1) Remove this note. remain
00:04:774 (4774|2) Move to 5th or 7th column.
00:24:956 (24956|2,25319|2,25683|2) Move to a column that uses the right hand (4th to 7th).
00:30:592 (30592|1,30956|2,31319|3) Move right by one column.
00:33:501 (33501|5,33865|4,34228|3) Move left by two columns.
00:37:683 (37683|5,38047|5) Move to 3rd column.
00:38:774 (38774|1) Move to a column that uses the right hand. remain
00:39:501 (39501|5) Move to 2nd column. remain
00:44:774 ...: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/777288
01:02:228 (62228|2,62592|3,62956|4,63319|5) DON'T DO THAT HERE, GODDAMMIT. This looks more like a < Lv12 in O2Jam standards, so it should have a max. of two holds at a time. I recommend that you either do this or this. remain
01:04:228 (64228|0,64774|0) Move to 2nd column.
01:04:228 (64228|6,64774|6) Move to 6th column.
01:08:047 (68047|5,68228|3,68410|1) Move left by one column. remain
01:11:683 (71683|5,72047|5,72410|4,72774|4,73138|3,73501|3,73865|2,74228|2) Move left by two columns.
01:14:410 (74410|1,74774|1) Move to 3rd column.
01:18:592 (78592|3) Remove this note.
01:18:956 (78956|4,79319|4) Move to 4th column.
01:19:683 (79683|2) Remove this note. remain
01:21:138 (81138|4) ^ remain
01:20:047 ...: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/777310
01:23:865 (83865|5) Move to 1st or 5th column.

[Hard]
(This is the point where I was supposed to rage like hell, but I decided to stay calm and mod nicely. Maybe.)
HP Drain +1 or 2
OD +1, 2, or 3
00:06:592 Add a note in 6th column (whistle hitsound).
00:21:683 (21683|3,22047|3) Move left by one column.
00:22:774 (22774|1,22834|2,22895|3,22956|4) ^
00:24:047 (24047|1) Move to 7th column.
00:24:410 Add a note in 4th column (finish hitsound) and 6th column (no hitsound).
00:32:410 (32410|6,32774|4) Move to 3rd column (to fit with violins).
00:32:956 (32956|3) Move to 6th column (same reason).
00:46:956 (46956|3,47319|3) Move to 2nd column. Some intermediate right-handers may struggle in this part since the right hand is entirely used here.
01:03:501 (63501|1,63683|1,63865|1,64047|1) Move to 3rd column.
01:03:501 (63501|5,63683|5,63865|5,64047|5) Move to 5th column.
01:28:410 (88410|4) Remove this note.
01:28:441 (88441|5) Move to 01:28:410. remain

Hope this helps, maybe.

great mod

事不過三 同樣泡也是 我只能再re一次。。。於是真的確定沒人來mod再來找我吧。。

I'll do it myself then.

Alright!

Ranked.

(ノ・ω・)ノ

Congrats woc

congratz woc醬 :3
速度無法直視(逃

壯我開
第一張恭喜了~

wocao

This map so great

congrats woc!! ~~

Congratz~

i don't like it , because can't change 7k to 4k playing