Hi woc!
[All Diffs:]
Timing is off. All timing sections needs to move about -25 ms from the current offset and all notes resnapped.
Aimod is complaining about preview point/bitrate/BG resolution (but i think since osu! got HD support now it does not matter for the BG anymore)
Source title of the anime seems different than what got ranked before, yours says "Toaru Kagaku no Railgun S" ranked one says "To Aru Kagaku no Railgun"
I don't know myself since i never seen this anime but according to myanimelist.net your's is right and the other one spelled wrong lol, well i don't know..
Source:
http://myanimelist.net/anime/16049/Toar ... _Railgun_SOr maybe just copy the tags/source from this beatmap ->
t/130630[Easy:]
00:12:799 - here for the next measures the pattern should progress a bit to the right side every measure to go alongside with the bass:
00:14:253 (14253|1,14617|4,14981|1,15344|4) - move those 4 notes all 1 column to the right side. 00:15:708 (15708|1) - move this one to the 4th column and chose those notes placement a bit 00:17:163 (17163|3,17526|6,17890|4,18072|6) -
00:24:072 (24072|5) - move this one to one of the first 3 columns, 00:27:708 (27708|1,28435|1) - move those to the 6th column
00:50:253 - add note on 7th column?
Optional: Add notes here on 4th column, 00:50:617 - 00:51:344 - 00:52:072 - but its fine if you think that will make it too difficult
00:52:072 (52072|2) - better shorten the hold. it is too long, also will give a nice little break after the previous part
00:54:981 (54981|5,55344|2,55708|5,56072|2) - Move those notes all 1 column to the left?
00:56:617 - Suggest to change this measure to something like this:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/766346 You are missing a beat and it looks pretty unorganized right now.
01:00:799 (60799|3,61163|5,61526|3) - move those all 1 column left?
[Normal:]
00:14:253 (14253|2,14435|6) - move the notes both 1 column to the left and those notes: 00:15:708 (15708|1,15890|5) - like the following ones.
00:34:617 (34617|1,35163|2,35708|3) - Should remove the finish hitsounds for those holds and add extra notes with finish sound instead. Afterall it's a normal diff. 00:41:890 (41890|3) - same
00:44:799 - Same thing here for the transition between measures: 00:44:799 (44799|5) - remove this finish hitsound and move this note to the 5th column. 00:44:981 (44981|5) - addnote here. 00:46:253 (46253|4,46435|5) - move those notes into same location as the next notes. 00:47:708 (47708|2,47890|3) - same for those 2 notes.
01:15:163 (75163|3) - Hold 1 beat too long.
01:16:799 (76799|2) - add finish sound and move this 1 column to the right.
01:18:617 (78617|1) - this hold is confusing. It should be in the same column as this note 01:18:253 (78253|6) - since its both for the same guitar note. I suggest to change it like this
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/76636801:21:890 (81890|0,82072|0,82253|0,82435|0) - Better move those 4 notes to the third column. It has a very nice feeling to it because of the other pitch changes occuring
[Hard:]
00:25:117 - The part around here i think it would be alot better if the guitar conitued with 2 holds like that.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/76627700:26:890 - Same thing
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/76628000:56:481 - This part here feels really awkward to play for me. 00:57:163 - i think you should remove the guitar notes at this point and finish the keyboard stream. At the next measure here 00:57:890 - you should better map the notes according to the drum pattern
00:59:708 (59708|5,59753|4,59799|3) - Those 2 streams are all 2 notes too short. It should be like this
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/766290 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/76629201:04:253 - Some suggestion to improve this part:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/76629701:15:163 (75163|4,75163|2) - The 2 holds are 1 beat too long
The ending part im not sure but after the offsect corrections the notes should belong like this:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/766322 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/766323 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/766325Good map