Hanazawa Kana - Monochrome*HAPPY DAY (TV Size) · forum

wcx19911123

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wcx19911123 2013-05-17T17:06:31+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年7月7日 at 1:09:33

Artist: Hanazawa Kana
Title: Monochrome*HAPPY DAY (TV Size)
Source: Ore no Imouto ga Konna ni Kawaii Wake ga Nai.
Tags: ED ending Monokuro*HAPPY DAY Oreimo Kuroneko Gokou Ruri 俺の妹がこんなに可愛いわけがない。俺妹
BPM: 134
Filesize: 2714kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:

Easy (1.95 stars, 96 notes)
Hard (4.94 stars, 228 notes)
Normal (4.17 stars, 148 notes)

Download: Hanazawa Kana - Monochrome*HAPPY DAY (TV Size)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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anime「俺の妹がこんなに可愛いわけがない。」ending「モノクロ☆HAPPY DAY」
黒猫 theme

Last edited by wcx19911123 2013-07-06T17:09:43+00:00, edited 11 times in total.

Scorpiour

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Scorpiour 2013-05-19T07:35:47+00:00

2 - 4

Kotone

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Kotone 2013-05-19T13:43:27+00:00

4 - 8

[CSGA]Ar3sgice

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[CSGA]Ar3sgice 2013-06-26T10:40:36+00:00

8 - 10

Aurele

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Aurele 2013-06-26T10:43:30+00:00

0 - 0

Cerulean Veyron

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Cerulean Veyron 2013-06-27T16:20:11+00:00

Umm... Hi, From my queue *^*

[General]
Why no tags?
Your map doesn't have a BG... But that's okay

[Easy]
01:12:317 (3,3) - Slider's end overlapped
01:23:735 (4,3) - ^

Nice diff ~ Why not add some hitsounds?
[Hard]
00:29:556 (1,2,3) - Make a different move than you did this 00:28:661 (2,3,4) -

You added some hitsound in this diff, why didn't you add some on the other diffs?
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Anyways, My first time modding a BAT's map, i hope my mod is useful. (o_o'')

Zero__wind

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Zero__wind 2013-06-27T22:13:31+00:00

＊ for moe Kana~

No_Gu

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Joined January 2011

No_Gu 2013-06-28T09:10:41+00:00

request from QQ

Source:Ore no Imouto ga Konna ni Kawaii Wake ga Nai. (第二季多个句号you know

[Easy]
00:15:004 (1) - 这开头没音你放个note相当维和啊
00:27:541 (1,2) - 我觉得这样的你还是放一个slider里
00:34:705 (1,2) - ^
01:12:317 (3,3) - 没问题？
01:23:735 (4) - 开头不补个whi?

[Normal]
00:00:676 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 我觉得normal的note足够的话不如把whistle都加到重音白线跟钢琴
00:15:004 (2) - 维和
00:32:914 (3,4,1) - 真是挺难看。。
00:49:034 (1,2) - 确定不是作死节奏?

[Hard]
开头同N
00:18:362 (1,2,3) - 不等距?
00:25:750 (1,2,1) - 120度多好看啊。。

凑完数

Fycho

Global Moderator

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Fycho 2013-06-28T13:57:11+00:00

Req from our queue

All just suggestions

[General]
TV Size 没视频 0.0？
建议把00:52:616 - 01:21:273 段设置为瞎眼段（KIAI）0.0

[Hard]

00:05:153 (3) –弧度可以小点
00:15:004 (1,2,3) –滑条首均clap
00:19:258 (3) –滑条首whistle
00:21:273 (5) -^
00:26:646 (2) -^
00:33:810 (2) -^
00:40:526 –add note?
00:48:138 (2) –首whistle
00:49:705 (2) –add whistle ，clap保留
00:59:780 (1) –whistle
01:15:004 (3) –首段whistle去掉和前面三段一样0.0？

[Normal]

NC要不要考虑剪短，一根大白线一放如何0.0，有些到7最后到8感觉不怎么好.
00:20:377 (1) –whistle
00:23:959 (1) –好震撼0.0 ，H的时候都没这样感觉
00:25:750 (3) –首端不来发whistle;w;
00:27:541 (1) -^
00:28:661 (2,3) –折返处whistle
00:32:243 (2) –改成reserve
00:33:810 (4,1) –首whistle0.0
00:35:825 (2,3) –折返whistle
00:38:735 (2) –滑条把后面00:40:750 (5) –给交♂合了，不怎么好看0.0
00:48:138 (5,1) –首whistle
00:54:183 (4) –首whistle，后面两段歌曲的相同部分同样和第四段统一了比较好（虽然第四段特殊）
01:04:258 (3) –加个clap感觉空空的0.0

[Easy]
貌似摸不出什么，似乎有位置间距不对不过应该没问题0.0
wcx神麻婆求指0.0导~><

Jycool

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Joined April 2012

Jycool 2013-06-30T02:16:53+00:00

[easy]
nothing
[normal]
00:03:362 (4) - 拉到00:03:698 - 结束
00:28:661 (2) - 中间加whistle
00:29:556 (3) - 同上
01:28:437 (8) - 加finish（sc:2的finish可能好点？
[hard]
00:28:885 (3) - 加whistle
00:29:780 (2) - 同上
00:29:332 - 建议加note
00:30:228 - 同上
00:36:496 - 同上
00:37:728 (5) - 建议方向

SPOILER

01:28:437 (6) - 建议加finish

祝rank

Andrea

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Andrea 2013-06-30T14:31:06+00:00

~Easy~

Increase OD by 1 tick to balance with the difficulty settings.

01:27:317 (5) - Add a new combo here due to the new stanza and music change.

~Normal~

Increase OD by 1 tick to balance with the difficulty settings.

00:12:989 (4,1) - I don't really like such overlaps on a Normal difficulty, they might be confusing to read for beginners.
00:15:899 (4) - I'm not sure if this kind of slider shape is okay to go for this difficulty.
00:54:855 (5,6) - Maybe a bit too hard to hit these two notes in a row, what about making them as a slider? Better to me.
01:27:317 (6) - Same as Easy.

Hard is great, nothing to say.

wcx19911123

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Topic Starter

wcx19911123 2013-06-30T19:26:03+00:00

updated, thanks for modding :3

Chloe

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Chloe 2013-07-01T13:37:12+00:00

hi there, mod request from baldrace's queue~

Just some suggestions, not necessary. : )

[General]

why am I so lazy....

[Easy]

00:34:705 (1) - 我觉得开头应该加个whistle
00:45:676 (1) - 不太确定这个开头是不是应该加个whistle
00:50:377 (2) - whistle不太合适可以换个finish

[Normal]

00:06:049 (4) - top+whistle
00:09:407 (4) - ^
01:28:437 (8) - finish?
01:02:467 (7) - 3/4

[Hard]

00:30:452 (4,5) - 我打了2遍都没发现这是4分拍;______;
00:39:183 (5) - top+whistle
01:06:049 (4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/842813
01:11:870 (6) - ctrl + g了flow会更好虽然不美观不过你可以换成别的
01:20:153 (3) - 感觉不像你的作风.. 可以想想怎么变的更2 比如x229 y135？
01:23:735 (3) - flow and pattern not good D:

感觉需要多加一些whistle.

ts8zs

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ts8zs 2013-07-02T11:41:22+00:00

Hard
没问题
Normal
No problem
Easy
哈？这图还不rank想什么呢= =？
都6mod了……剩下的sp随便用星填上不就好了？

Verlaren

Verlaren 2013-07-02T15:40:57+00:00

From my queue.

[General]
remove anime from tags, because the map itself will be located in the section "Anime"
also select letterbox during breaks because you haven't a video.

[Easy]
00:25:302 (2,3) - spacing
00:25:750 (3,4) - ^
00:09:183 (2) - move on x:328 y:320 IMO better
01:28:437 (6) - NC?

[Normal]
00:45:676 (1) - maybe stack this tail on 00:44:108(5) ?
01:28:437 (8) - same as in easy, maybe NC(because note placed on downbeat)?

[Hard]
Hard is awersome, nothing to say.

Rakuen

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Joined March 2013

Rakuen 2013-07-03T07:41:11+00:00

DEAncientNaga's Mod Queue

[General]
>.o)b

[Easy]
00:28:437 - Slider here which replace the current (2)
00:29:332 - Add Circle
00:29:780 - Whistle / Clap
00:30:228 - Add Circle
01:27:317 - Spinner starts here and ends 01:29:332 - with a slicence at the tail

[Normal]
>.o)b

[Hard]
Approach Rate: -1 or -2 (cuz the song speed is not too fast)
01:06:049 (4) - Lower a little sound of this slider
01:06:273 (5) - Put some hitsound at this note to make it more clear
01:20:377 (4,5,6,1) - Suggenst the spacing to be closer a bit or make 01:19:705 (1,2,3) - further spacing

Good luck on the rank >.o /

wcx19911123

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Topic Starter

wcx19911123 2013-07-03T09:34:03+00:00

thanks for modding, updated

[Seraphin]

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[Seraphin] 2013-07-04T00:53:33+00:00

From mod queue~

Feel free to ignore any of these suggestions, I did not see anything critical.

[Easy]
00:18:810 (3) - possibly remove and make (2) end at where this is? feels a little hard for easy
01:10:526 (1,2) - combine to make one long slider? I think it feels better that way

[Normal]
00:06:049 (4,5) - make a little closer together or do something like http://puu.sh/3uxAZ.jpg? jump feels awkward
I like this normal

[Hard]
00:22:840 (3,4,5) - make 4 a long non-repeating slider or similar? feels too hard
00:30:564 (5,6) - make closer, jump is kind of hard to read and perform
00:50:937 (1,2) - kind of similar to ^
01:02:019 (2) - offscreen?
01:06:049 (4,5) - feels too hard, similar to 00:50:937 (1,2) - in a way
01:10:526 (1) - offscreen?
01:13:661 (4,5) - ^

I like the way this mapset feels.
Good luck on rank~!

Sonnyc

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Sonnyc 2013-07-04T11:52:38+00:00

Woo~ Cool sweet song.

General:

-- Adding a volume reduction at 00:15:004 will be cool.

Easy:

00:17:690 (2,3) - Make Hit sound consistent with 01:22:168 (2,3).
00:51:273 (3) - NC feels better imo.

Normal:

00:14:108 (1,2) - Starting NC from (2) may fit the song, but if this was an intention of you to make readable by 00:12:989 (4), then fine to keep.
00:15:899 (4) - Was this an intention to emphasize the Clap? Well just a smooth slider would be better in flow though,,
00:16:795 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Add some whistles where you want plz~
00:21:944 (4,5,6) - ^
00:45:676 (1,2) - Swapping NC feels better in emphasizing (2)'s rhythm.
00:51:720 (6) - NC?

Hard:

-- AR 7 please. Currently feels tooooo fast for a slow song, and also unbalanced between diffs.

00:14:444 (6) - Yes this fits the song, but changing to a single note will make 00:15:004 (1,2) look better.
00:22:840 (3) - I think this is too far with the previous note.
00:23:064 (4) - NC may make the slider jump better to read, imo.
01:21:049 (6) - I think rotating clockwise more would be better in looking<<

Nice clear map as usual (well actually some challenged in hard