ave;new feat. Sakura Saori - kiss my lips

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Aleks719
hope i won't copy suggestions of prev modder.

General
i'd cut mp3, but it's not necessary since it fits rules.

Hard
00:49:481 (8,1) - even with nc this jump is sudden,cuz you used that spacing with 3/4patterns and 1/2 here. replace 1 a bit closer to 8
01:32:736 (1,2,3,4) - here vice versa, raise spacing, it looks as 3/4 again but in fact it's 1/1
02:19:248 (1,2,3,4) - same as before 1/1
02:49:015 (1,2,3,4) - same as before (about 1.7x would be fine imo)
02:57:853 (1,2,3) - starting from triple right after break is not nice, turn it into 1/4 slider with reverse?
03:14:597 (7) - start and end are not parallel? if it's on target then okay
03:18:783 (1,2,3,4) - same as before orz

Normal
00:36:225 (2,3) - add soft whistles? you put notes on red ticks and better to add hitsounds to make them more clear to hear
00:39:946 (2,3) - same pattern, same suggestion
00:51:108 (2,3) - here and next to the end of map
01:09:713 - add note here to keep 1/1 rhythm between objects? (or make 1/2 slider)
02:16:457 - add note here to keep 1/1 rhythm between objects?
03:10:643 (4,5) - all diff before you stacked notes/objects with 1/1 rhythm, here 1/2, can be confusing.
Topic Starter
Miya
Thanks guys, im too tired to make a reply right now.
But i use some suggestion from all of you guys :3
Updated~
Aleks719
bubbled
Topic Starter
Miya
Thanks a lot aleks :)
Konei
fast :o
those
佐倉紗織 lastname,firstname.
Sakura Saori is more correct.

Title should be kiss my lips, without the caps.

It would also be great if you could find a higher quality mp3 file.
Topic Starter
Miya
Woops, okay, i'll change that when a BAT modding this map.
I also already try finding more higher quality mp3, but it's so hard to get it. This is the best i can do :<
those


o_ov Okay, if you say so
Topic Starter
Miya
You just checking, not modding :P
Konei
I lol'd hard.
Topic Starter
Miya
okay, fixed both artist and tittle q.q

yay, thanks for the rebubble those xD
Kawayi Rika
Hi ~ Miya ~ :)



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Need to consider
Purple : Just suggestions

[Hard]

  1. HP-1 much better in Hard diff.
  2. 01:08:550 (5,7) - Missing symmetrical.
  3. 01:21:574 (1,3,4) - ^
  4. 02:47:155 (4,6) - ^

[Normal]

  1. 01:20:876 (5) - Try move to X:140,Y:224,looks much better.
  2. 02:17:155 (6) - X:308 Y:36.
  3. 02:48:783 (6) - Remove circle,sound much better.
  4. 03:18:550 (6) - ^
  5. 03:09:481 (3,1) - Missing symmetrical.

Moe song :3

Call me back ~
;)
Topic Starter
Miya

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ Miya ~ :)



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Need to consider
Purple : Just suggestions

[Hard]

  1. HP-1 much better in Hard diff. Okay
  2. 01:08:550 (5,7) - Missing symmetrical.
  3. 01:21:574 (1,3,4) - ^
  4. 02:47:155 (4,6) - ^ All fixed

[Normal]

  1. 01:20:876 (5) - Try move to X:140,Y:224,looks much better. Since a lot of people like this shape, okay then, i'll change q.q
  2. 02:17:155 (6) - X:308 Y:36. no for this one ><
  3. 02:48:783 (6) - Remove circle,sound much better. There is a beat on it. Feels weird if remove this.
  4. 03:18:550 (6) - ^ Same reason as a above.
  5. 03:09:481 (3,1) - Missing symmetrical. Really? I copy paste this when making this shape o.o Oh, well, somehow fixed.

Moe song :3

Call me back ~
;)
Ty for the mod Rika. Updated~ :)
Kawayi Rika
OK ~ Looks much better ~

Here you go <3


UnderminE
this is getting more stupid day by day
Kodora
omg i remember kiddly's ver to this song
awesome, congratz <3
Topic Starter
Miya
Thanks Rika <3
And thank you Kodora <3

~Kiss My Lips~
:P
Kirino Kousaka
Congrats Miya! >w<
Umi
congratz Miya >3</
Oyatsu
Congratz!!!
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