ave;new feat. Sakura Saori - kiss my lips

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i cant find issue >< good luck miya chan always good map!
Xinely
hallooo ~
karena q lihat hinsvar sama miya mau m4m. Xinely juga ngemod map miya deh :D

[Normal]
00:55:760 (4,5) - just nazi thing. 112,256
02:17:388 (1) - nazi again.. one grid down
02:26:225 (5) - 120,172?
02:28:085 (2) - 340,288?
02:31:806 (2) - spacing issue (1,07x)
02:42:969 (2) - ^ (1,08x)
03:19:248 (2) - err how about 176,272?
03:20:643 (5) - remove NC for consistency and add NC in 03:22:504 (7) -

[Hard]
00:18:667 (2) - spacing 1,08 is it itentional?
00:19:015 (3) - nazi. 1 grid up
00:50:643 (3) - 360,176?
00:54:364 (4) - nazi again. 1 grid up
01:11:922 (3) - 108,276?
01:23:783 (6) - 1 grid left?
02:18:318 (3) - 1 grid up and 02:18:085 (2) - 1 grid up
02:20:178 (3) - 340,176?
03:04:829 (3) - nazi. 1 grid left to make straight with 03:03:667 (1,4,1) -
03:08:550 (4) - keluar batas dikit miya http://puu.sh/32VxC.jpg

lovely moe song <3
Good Luck miya ~
Hinsvar
Hi there; going for M4M~ :D

*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the harder diffs of the mapset..

>Normal
  1. ...You used clap ticks on Hard, so why not here too? I can't see any reason why.
  2. 00:07:155 - I personally think that adding a finish would be better here, as it actually goes well with the song. At least that's what I believe. I just feel that it fits nicely and will spice the map better.
  3. 00:07:853 - ^
  4. 00:10:876 - We can clearly hear the cymbal being played here, so why no finish to follow that?
  5. 00:35:760 - Uhm, add whistle here to emphasize the vocal? I also don't like how the vocal is followed to the point where there are rarely any hitsounds on this part (verse) of the song, btw, and it made me feel really weird while playing the diff, so I guess you can add whistles for some varieties. There's no must to stay using hitsounds every white tick on the verse, I believe, especially with your way of mapping this diff.
  6. 00:36:690 (3) - ^ (In case I need to say it again, this applies to the later stanzas.)
  7. 01:20:876 (5,6,1) - Considering how close (5) is to (1), won't it be a bit trapping, visually? Players might think that (6) is not really long from (1), and thus might hit them faster than expected...
  8. 02:13:667 (1,2,3) - Looks messy, IMO. How about this?


>Hard
  1. 00:17:853 (1) - Remove the NC so the combo pattern will be consistent?
  2. 00:53:667 (1,2,3,4) - ...Is the spacing change here intentional? Feels weird to suddenly switch the spacing to 1.5x.
  3. 02:04:364 (4) - Uhm, the cymbal is clearly being played here. Why no finish?
  4. 02:43:434 - ^


Hmm, that's it I guess. The map's pretty good, IMO :D

Good luck on the way 8-)

Kok pake Inggris yah `-`
Aleks719
hope i won't copy suggestions of prev modder.

General
i'd cut mp3, but it's not necessary since it fits rules.

Hard
00:49:481 (8,1) - even with nc this jump is sudden,cuz you used that spacing with 3/4patterns and 1/2 here. replace 1 a bit closer to 8
01:32:736 (1,2,3,4) - here vice versa, raise spacing, it looks as 3/4 again but in fact it's 1/1
02:19:248 (1,2,3,4) - same as before 1/1
02:49:015 (1,2,3,4) - same as before (about 1.7x would be fine imo)
02:57:853 (1,2,3) - starting from triple right after break is not nice, turn it into 1/4 slider with reverse?
03:14:597 (7) - start and end are not parallel? if it's on target then okay
03:18:783 (1,2,3,4) - same as before orz

Normal
00:36:225 (2,3) - add soft whistles? you put notes on red ticks and better to add hitsounds to make them more clear to hear
00:39:946 (2,3) - same pattern, same suggestion
00:51:108 (2,3) - here and next to the end of map
01:09:713 - add note here to keep 1/1 rhythm between objects? (or make 1/2 slider)
02:16:457 - add note here to keep 1/1 rhythm between objects?
03:10:643 (4,5) - all diff before you stacked notes/objects with 1/1 rhythm, here 1/2, can be confusing.
Topic Starter
Miya
Thanks guys, im too tired to make a reply right now.
But i use some suggestion from all of you guys :3
Updated~
Aleks719
bubbled
Topic Starter
Miya
Thanks a lot aleks :)
Konei
fast :o
those
佐倉紗織 lastname,firstname.
Sakura Saori is more correct.

Title should be kiss my lips, without the caps.

It would also be great if you could find a higher quality mp3 file.
Topic Starter
Miya
Woops, okay, i'll change that when a BAT modding this map.
I also already try finding more higher quality mp3, but it's so hard to get it. This is the best i can do :<
those


o_ov Okay, if you say so
Topic Starter
Miya
You just checking, not modding :P
Konei
I lol'd hard.
Topic Starter
Miya
okay, fixed both artist and tittle q.q

yay, thanks for the rebubble those xD
Kawayi Rika
Hi ~ Miya ~ :)



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Need to consider
Purple : Just suggestions

[Hard]

  1. HP-1 much better in Hard diff.
  2. 01:08:550 (5,7) - Missing symmetrical.
  3. 01:21:574 (1,3,4) - ^
  4. 02:47:155 (4,6) - ^

[Normal]

  1. 01:20:876 (5) - Try move to X:140,Y:224,looks much better.
  2. 02:17:155 (6) - X:308 Y:36.
  3. 02:48:783 (6) - Remove circle,sound much better.
  4. 03:18:550 (6) - ^
  5. 03:09:481 (3,1) - Missing symmetrical.

Moe song :3

Call me back ~
;)
Topic Starter
Miya

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ Miya ~ :)



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Need to consider
Purple : Just suggestions

[Hard]

  1. HP-1 much better in Hard diff. Okay
  2. 01:08:550 (5,7) - Missing symmetrical.
  3. 01:21:574 (1,3,4) - ^
  4. 02:47:155 (4,6) - ^ All fixed

[Normal]

  1. 01:20:876 (5) - Try move to X:140,Y:224,looks much better. Since a lot of people like this shape, okay then, i'll change q.q
  2. 02:17:155 (6) - X:308 Y:36. no for this one ><
  3. 02:48:783 (6) - Remove circle,sound much better. There is a beat on it. Feels weird if remove this.
  4. 03:18:550 (6) - ^ Same reason as a above.
  5. 03:09:481 (3,1) - Missing symmetrical. Really? I copy paste this when making this shape o.o Oh, well, somehow fixed.

Moe song :3

Call me back ~
;)
Ty for the mod Rika. Updated~ :)
Kawayi Rika
OK ~ Looks much better ~

Here you go <3


UnderminE
this is getting more stupid day by day
Kodora
omg i remember kiddly's ver to this song
awesome, congratz <3
Topic Starter
Miya
Thanks Rika <3
And thank you Kodora <3

~Kiss My Lips~
:P
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