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ave;new feat. Sakura Saori - kiss my lips

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Topic Starter
Miya
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 28 Mei 2013 at 23:44:19

Artist: ave;new feat. Sakura Saori
Title: kiss my lips
Tags: true my heart
BPM: 129
Filesize: 5258kb
Play Time: 03:22
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.75 stars, 397 notes)
  2. Normal (2.77 stars, 213 notes)
Download: ave;new feat. Sakura Saori - kiss my lips
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Kiss My Lips!!
<3<3

Special thanks for all the modder who have give their time for modding my map. Love you guys <3
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
first
Kurai
Go go :3
Topic Starter
Miya
ty ty ty <3

Yeah, gonna rank this, i haven't taste ranked map for a while ><
S o r d a
wow i love this song
gogo <333
Topic Starter
Miya
ty ty Sorda <3
Kiss My Lips!! <333
Andrea

Miya wrote:

Kiss My Lips!! <333
Okay! *kisses Miya's lips and runs*

Good luck <3
Topic Starter
Miya

Andrea wrote:

Miya wrote:

Kiss My Lips!! <333
Okay! *kisses Miya's lips and runs*

Good luck <3
=3=

but ty ty Andrea <3
HeatKai
pro mapper is coming back. I quit. lol
Topic Starter
Miya

HeatKai wrote:

pro mapper is coming back. I quit. lol
Go quit! xD
Konei
truely a loveable song, take my support. Somehow lol.

01:07:625 (4) - End is slightly offscreen, hehe.
02:26:695 (1) - And this is pretty much offscreen.
Topic Starter
Miya
Woops, didn't notice that since im on widescreen. Thank you for mentioning that stuff xD
Konei

Miya wrote:

Woops, didn't notice that since im on widescreen. Thank you for mentioning that stuff xD
no problem xD

/me kisses Miya's lips

I'll be back to full mod this when it's finished, you may call me then.
Topic Starter
Miya
rawr =3=

><

Ok, i will cal you later when this finish :3
Kirino Kousaka
SPOILER
11:30 *Kirino Kousaka is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/252606 ave;new feat. Saori Sakura - Kiss My Lips [Hard]]
11:30 Kirino Kousaka: =w=
11:30 Kirino Kousaka: just a quick look =w=
11:30 Miya: o.o
11:30 Miya: how is it? inb4 its bad ><
11:30 Kirino Kousaka: no no :O
11:30 Kirino Kousaka: it's awesome :O
11:32 Kirino Kousaka: http://puu.sh/30zFk
11:32 Kirino Kousaka: unicode, ;w;
11:32 Kirino Kousaka: ArtistUnicode*
11:33 Miya: o.o
11:33 Miya: what do you mean? :o
11:33 Miya: ups
11:33 Miya: lol
11:33 Miya: wth
11:33 Miya: xD
11:33 Kirino Kousaka: ArtistUnicode is incosistent o.o
11:34 Kirino Kousaka: Also on hard, I think 01:11:348 (2,5) - is not nice to stack, unstack 01:12:278 (5) - from 01:11:348 (2) - 's end
11:34 Kirino Kousaka: and do something like [http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/774223 this.] :3
11:37 Kirino Kousaka: orz dc
11:37 Miya: ><
11:37 Kirino Kousaka: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/774230
11:37 Miya: btw, i will consider it :P
11:37 Kirino Kousaka: did you get my messages? :o
11:37 Miya: yeah ><
11:38 Miya: eh, what message?
11:38 Miya: :o
11:38 Kirino Kousaka: I mean those lines in the ss^ did you get them before I dc? :o
11:41 Miya: oh gimme the something like this :P
11:41 Miya: i didnt get it
11:41 Kirino Kousaka: oh lol
11:41 Kirino Kousaka: did you see what I said about the slider on hard before I dc? (You should get it now ;w;)
11:41 Miya: yeah
11:42 Miya: i will consider it xD
11:42 Kirino Kousaka: oh okay XD
11:42 Kirino Kousaka: also add a spinner on 00:20:418 - that ends on 00:23:906 - to follow the long vocal, add finish on it too :3
11:42 Kirino Kousaka: just like 01:36:697 (1) - this
11:42 Miya: hmm, okay ><
11:43 Miya: i will add that spinner on normal too then :3
11:43 Kirino Kousaka: :3
11:46 Kirino Kousaka: 03:12:860 (3,4) - nazi, stack them properly and align with 03:14:139 (6) -
11:46 Miya: woops, ok xD
11:47 Kirino Kousaka: also, cut mp3? meh. =w=
11:47 Kirino Kousaka: that's all, I see that normal isn't finished yet, good luck for this moe map =w=
11:47 Miya: i dont think it's need to be cutted xD
11:47 Miya: ty ty :3
Just some irc mod. Gl Miya with this moe map~ =w=
Topic Starter
Miya
Ty for the quick mod Kiri :3

Finally, pending ><
riffy
IRC
18:27 -Bakari-: hey, how about quick IRC mod? :3
18:28 Miya: sure :3
18:28 -Bakari-: great :3
18:29 -Bakari-: At first, I should say that you can cut your mp3 :<
18:30 Miya: no need
18:30 Miya: AI Mod doesnt show warning either
18:30 Miya: :P
18:30 -Bakari-: Well, just think about it, we dowbload 1mb of extra data. That's ok for AiBat but this may be not okay for users like me :<
18:30 -Bakari-: Well, just think about it, we dowbload 1mb of extra data. That's ok for AiBat but this may be not okay for users like me :<
18:31 Miya: oh cmon, its not that big xD
18:31 -Bakari-: well, k.
18:31 -Bakari-: [Hard]
18:32 -Bakari-: How about using HP Drain/Overall Diff 7 to keep diff settings balanced?
18:32 Miya: ok ok, shoot another problem :P
18:32 -Bakari-: It also makes map more interesting to play :3
18:32 Miya: i will increase OD to 7 but not with hp ><
18:33 -Bakari-: oh, silly me. >3< I forgot to mention, that you should move preview point to 01:06:695 -
18:33 Miya: why? :o
18:33 -Bakari-: This part is the most recognizeable, isn't it?
18:34 Miya: hmm, looks same to me, but whatever, ok ok xD
18:36 -Bakari-: 01:10:183 - not sure about this, but I'd add a circle here, it kinda fits with rhythm here
18:37 Miya: all this part is following vocal >< 01:09:253 (7,8,9,1,2) -
18:37 Miya: so, no, it will break my consistencies xD
18:38 -Bakari-: oh, i see
18:39 -Bakari-: 01:34:369 (5) - previous pattern was kinda jumpy, so we can place here NC to emphasize start of new "pattern".
18:39 -Bakari-: It will fit with vocals, too.
18:40 Miya: i dont think it's necesarry
18:40 Miya: that 1/1 jump is not that hard to pass too
18:40 -Bakari-: Well, it is not really needed, it just looks better here, imo
18:41 Miya: no thanks, break my nc pattern :P
18:42 Miya: but well, i will consider this
18:42 Miya: xD
18:42 -Bakari-: cool, let's go on :3
18:42 Miya: go go, dont wait for me :3
18:42 -Bakari-: 02:24:834 (3) - same as above. And I guess your reply will be the same.
18:43 Miya: haha, yeah xD
18:43 -Bakari-: Just keep in mind that you should change/don't touch both of them :)
18:43 Miya: i know :P
18:44 Miya: shoot, anything else? :D/
18:44 -Bakari-: sure
18:44 -Bakari-: 02:48:788 - how about adding circle here, sounds like something is missed here.
18:45 Miya: there is no beat here 02:48:788 - :o
18:45 -Bakari-: there is D:
18:46 Miya: no use 25% playback rate o.o
18:46 -Bakari-: already D:
18:47 Miya: hmm ok ok o.o
18:47 -Bakari-: anyway, even if i'm wrong it won't take too much time to remove it :)
18:48 Miya: yup ><
18:48 -Bakari-: let me check the diff again, maybe I overlook something important
18:51 -Bakari-: Diff is well-mapped and looks cute. Good job!
18:51 Miya: ty ty :3
18:52 -Bakari-: Now [Normal] :3
18:52 Miya: go, shoot :D
18:52 -Bakari-: Since this is the easiest diff and song is quite calm, I'd consider using AR4 (other diff settings should be reduced too, ofc)
18:52 -Bakari-: Since this is the easiest diff and song is quite calm, I'd consider using AR4 (other diff settings should be reduced too, ofc)
18:52 Miya: no, will be toooo far from hard Dx
18:53 -Bakari-: well, poor beginners :<
18:54 Miya: lol
18:54 Miya: its normal :P
18:54 -Bakari-: 00:35:067 (1) - anyway, isn't it too soon after spinner? /This is the easiest diff [2]
18:54 -Bakari-: just ask Sekai for an [Easy] diff and problems will be solved
18:54 -Bakari-: /runs
18:54 Miya: idk, since this is normal, i dont think it's a problem
18:54 Miya: lol
18:54 Miya: 2.7 stars
18:54 Miya: no xD
18:56 -Bakari-: 00:38:788 (1) - background music is quite loud here, we can mix it with vocals. Try to [http://puu.sh/31vfy.jpg curve] this slider and see if you like it or not
18:56 -Bakari-: 00:38:788 (1) - background music is quite loud here, we can mix it with vocals. Try to [http://puu.sh/31vfy.jpg curve] this slider and see if you like it or not
18:57 Miya: well okay ><
18:57 -Bakari-: 00:49:951 (1) - I'd add whistle hitsound to slider body, or something like this. It fits with that whistle-sound D:
18:57 Miya: not too narrow like your pattern tho xD
18:58 Miya: its same with hard o.o
18:58 Miya: lol
18:59 -Bakari-: seems like you can't do this slider-slide hitsound in hard diff
18:59 Miya: too lazy xD
19:00 -Bakari-: 01:21:579 (1) - same for hard D: - you can drag the break here, it'll look better
19:01 Miya: break? :o
19:01 -Bakari-: wrong copypasta ;_;
19:01 Miya: lol
19:01 -Bakari-: it's supposed to be 01:47:625 - here
19:01 Miya: you mean the spinner?
19:02 -Bakari-: no, break :V
19:02 -Bakari-: http://puu.sh/31vqy.jpg
19:03 Miya: ok ok
19:03 -Bakari-: if you drag break to this point, HP Bar will appear right after that loud beat. it looks good
19:04 -Bakari-: 02:38:323 - oh, and maybe you should place a circle here.
19:04 Miya: yup, applied
19:04 Miya: following previous rhythm :3
19:04 -Bakari-: 03:00:648 - have you missed a spinner here? D:
19:04 Miya: no, intentional
19:04 Miya: eh
19:04 Miya: no, its same for hard
19:04 Miya: :o
19:05 -Bakari-: for a [Normal] diff, it's too long D:
19:05 Miya: what do you mean? :o
19:05 -Bakari-: http://puu.sh/31vwg.jpg
19:06 Miya: spinner? from there? o.o
19:06 Miya: oh a break?
19:06 Miya: lol
19:06 Miya: bakabakari xD
19:06 Miya: ok fixed xD
19:06 -Bakari-: [http://puu.sh/31vxV.jpg what I was thinking about]
19:07 Miya: hooo yeah, looks cool :o
19:07 -Bakari-: yes :3
Topic Starter
Miya
Ty bakakari for the mod :D
Dark_Ai
Hey Miya
m4m as we said o3o




General

  1. seem fine for me


[Normal]

  1. 00:19:253 (6) - I wouldnt make reverse-slider here just end it on 00:19:718 and begin the spinner at 00:19:951. look better for me imo
  2. 00:55:765 (4,5) - since this is the easiest Diff wouldnt I stack these two notes. it's also not good for beginner to play too. I just would make a short slider here or unstack these
  3. 00:57:393 (1) - also making only finish-hitsound is okay here instead of finish+whistle
  4. 01:35:997 (6) - I would remove this slider and add a note instead and let the spinner begin at 01:36:230. I think its better imo
  5. 02:00:648 (3,4) - unstack this. It may confuse the beginner with this stack
  6. 02:17:393 (1,2) - blanket these notes better together
  7. 02:25:997 (4,5) - remove note (4) and move the slider there instead. sounds better for me imo
  8. 02:30:416 (1,2) - same as 02:17:393
  9. 02:48:323 (4,6) - these two notes doesnt even fit with the rhythm ._. I would delete it
  10. 03:00:183 (-) - 03:03:904 (1) - why you dont map this part? ><
  11. 03:10:648 (4,5) - same as 00:55:765
That's all on Normal. ah also I think all these note after spinner are comimg too quickly because this is the easiest diff. may it is a bit hard for all new players. Just wanted to pointing it out ><

[Hard]

  1. 00:10:416 (5) - may NC here?
  2. 00:19:951 (10,1) - I would remove these two notes and let the spinner begin there instead.
  3. 00:37:393 (5,6,7,8,9) - nazi xD but make this pattern better >.<
  4. 00:39:718 (-) - may add a note here? like you can hear it also fit with the rhythm too
  5. 00:40:648 (-) - same here
  6. 01:55:997 (-) + 01:56:927 (-) - same as above
  7. 02:47:160 (4) - move 1 grid right to fit it with 02:47:858 (6)
  8. 03:00:183 (-) - same as Normal
Nice Diff even if I dont like thise kind of Hard xDD

Sorry for ma noobi mod >.< its also a nice map.
Good luck with rank ~ ♥
Topic Starter
Miya

Dark_Ai wrote:

Hey Miya
m4m as we said o3o




General

  1. seem fine for me


[Normal]

  1. 00:19:253 (6) - I wouldnt make reverse-slider here just end it on 00:19:718 and begin the spinner at 00:19:951. look better for me imo I dont want to skip the finish at 00:20:183 - :<
  2. 00:55:765 (4,5) - since this is the easiest Diff wouldnt I stack these two notes. it's also not good for beginner to play too. I just would make a short slider here or unstack these This is normal, not easy :3
  3. 00:57:393 (1) - also making only finish-hitsound is okay here instead of finish+whistle ok
  4. 01:35:997 (6) - I would remove this slider and add a note instead and let the spinner begin at 01:36:230. I think its better imo
  5. 02:00:648 (3,4) - unstack this. It may confuse the beginner with this stack
  6. 02:17:393 (1,2) - blanket these notes better together Idk, fixed somehow, its already good to me.
  7. 02:25:997 (4,5) - remove note (4) and move the slider there instead. sounds better for me imo Nope, following vocal.
  8. 02:30:416 (1,2) - same as 02:17:393
  9. 02:48:323 (4,6) - these two notes doesnt even fit with the rhythm ._. I would delete it If you listen carefully there is a beat on it
  10. 03:00:183 (-) - 03:03:904 (1) - why you dont map this part? >< No vocal, fit for break.
  11. 03:10:648 (4,5) - same as 00:55:765
That's all on Normal. ah also I think all these note after spinner are comimg too quickly because this is the easiest diff. may it is a bit hard for all new players. Just wanted to pointing it out ><
This is not easy :3

[Hard]

  1. 00:10:416 (5) - may NC here? Break my consistencies :<
  2. 00:19:951 (10,1) - I would remove these two notes and let the spinner begin there instead.
  3. 00:37:393 (5,6,7,8,9) - nazi xD but make this pattern better >.< I made this using ctrl+shift+d o.o
  4. 00:39:718 (-) - may add a note here? like you can hear it also fit with the rhythm too I know, but i'm following vocal at this point.
  5. 00:40:648 (-) - same here
  6. 01:55:997 (-) + 01:56:927 (-) - same as above
  7. 02:47:160 (4) - move 1 grid right to fit it with 02:47:858 (6) Fixed
  8. 03:00:183 (-) - same as Normal
Nice Diff even if I dont like thise kind of Hard xDD :(

Sorry for ma noobi mod >.< its also a nice map.
Good luck with rank ~ ♥
Ty for the mod :3
Konei
Hellow Miya ~


[General]

  1. 00:05:299 ~ 00:20:183 - KIAI here? It's the same musical part as the chorus.

[Normal]

  1. Notes after Spinners are too sudden, you should either leave more space between them or add an Easy to the mapset lol, while first option seems more reasonable
  2. 00:17:858 (4) - 1/2 Slider seems useless to me as there is not really a good audible song, you don't need to make the diff harder than it is :P
  3. 01:20:648 (4,5,6,1) - Really a nice idea, I like it!
  4. 02:00:648 (3,4) - Hm, seems too hard. 1/4 rhythm and stacking this with the start can get really confusing for newbies, so at least try to unstack them?
  5. 02:47:160 (3) - Missing a whistle on the start, dont you?
  6. 02:59:718 (4) - Hm, could you change this to circles? Seems better to me so that you dont have a Slider end on the powerful point but a circle to click.
  7. I feel as if this diff would be too hard to be the easiest one >< The rhythm is often a bit complex and the stacks are a bit confusing but naah, star rating is fine so I guess it's ok. :3

[Hard]

  1. Slidertick costums should be 5 ~ 10 % quieter to match with the other hitsounds.
  2. 00:10:532 (6) - Hm, this note feels odd and too much considering you followed the vocal before, remove it?
  3. 01:19:834 (2) - It could be that I'm imagining things, but shouldn't this have the same angle as 01:18:788 (2) - ?
  4. 02:00:532 (4) - Nazi time, but if you moved 4 a bit down it would make more of that "V" pattern you are aiming to do if I'm right.


That's all :3

Very lovely song Miya and good work :>

Only thing I'm worrying about is that Normal could be a bit confusing for the easiest diff but meh, should be alright.

Star star and ganbatte ~
Topic Starter
Miya

Konei wrote:

Hellow Miya ~


[General]

  1. 00:05:299 ~ 00:20:183 - KIAI here? It's the same musical part as the chorus. Don't wanna adding more kiai, too much q.q

[Normal]

  1. Notes after Spinners are too sudden, you should either leave more space between them or add an Easy to the mapset lol, while first option seems more reasonable Guys, this is normal. q.q + slow bpm song
  2. 00:17:858 (4) - 1/2 Slider seems useless to me as there is not really a good audible song, you don't need to make the diff harder than it is :P No, there is audible beat here ><
  3. 01:20:648 (4,5,6,1) - Really a nice idea, I like it! <3
  4. 02:00:648 (3,4) - Hm, seems too hard. 1/4 rhythm and stacking this with the start can get really confusing for newbies, so at least try to unstack them?
  5. 02:47:160 (3) - Missing a whistle on the start, dont you? Oh yeah, Fixed
  6. 02:59:718 (4) - Hm, could you change this to circles? Seems better to me so that you dont have a Slider end on the powerful point but a circle to click. I will consider it.
  7. I feel as if this diff would be too hard to be the easiest one >< The rhythm is often a bit complex and the stacks are a bit confusing but naah, star rating is fine so I guess it's ok. :3 Normal o/ not mean for newbies

[Hard]

  1. Slidertick costums should be 5 ~ 10 % quieter to match with the other hitsounds. Nice suggestion. Fixed~
  2. 00:10:532 (6) - Hm, this note feels odd and too much considering you followed the vocal before, remove it? I'm sure the vocal use 1/4 rhythm here.
  3. 01:19:834 (2) - It could be that I'm imagining things, but shouldn't this have the same angle as 01:18:788 (2) - ? Ups, fixed~
  4. 02:00:532 (4) - Nazi time, but if you moved 4 a bit down it would make more of that "V" pattern you are aiming to do if I'm right. Too narrow Dx


That's all :3

Very lovely song Miya and good work :>

Only thing I'm worrying about is that Normal could be a bit confusing for the easiest diff but meh, should be alright.

Star star and ganbatte ~
Ty for the mod and star Konei :3
Yasora
lempaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrr
Topic Starter
Miya

Yasora wrote:

lempaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrr
Tangkeeep~


Ty Yasora for the stars :D
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