Andrea wrote:

I'll mod this tomorrow

• • Mind adding a "spinner-approachcircle.png" in order to complete your set?
  • I don't really like "Comboburst-0.png", this image is too much streched vertically imo.

• • 00:10:385 (4) - Use a ~ shape for a better flow:
  
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  • 00:16:310 (6,1) - I don't like the rhythm you used here, try this:
  
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  • 00:27:422 (3) - Rotate this slider 30° clockwise for a better flow.
  • 00:32:607 (3,4) - Select this circle and this slider and move them at x:326 y:308.
  • 00:38:903 (4) - Rotate this slider 30° clockwise.
  • 00:47:051 (1) - This new combo is useless, remove it.
  • 00:50:385 (4) - Rotate this slider 60° clockwise. (the end is not offscreen, don't worry)
  • 00:58:903 (1) - Remove this new combo.
  • 01:13:348 (1) - What about starting this spinner at 01:14:459 to better follow the music?
  • 01:17:422 (1) - This slider can be done better, look:
  
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  • 01:29:273 (1) - ^
  
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  • 01:40:014 (4) - Rotate this slider 30° clockwise.
  • 02:15:940 (1) - Remove this new combo.
  • 02:42:236 (1) - Start this spinner at 02:43:348.
  • 02:46:310 (1) - I don't like this slider, avoid using that red slider point:
  
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  • 02:56:681 (1) - Remove this new combo. (or add a new combo at 01:27:792 (6) to keep a consistency)
  • 03:33:718 (1,2) - Hmm... what about making a heart slider here?
  
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• • 00:18:162 (1) - End this slider at 00:18:533 and add a circle at 00:18:903.
  • 00:47:051 (1) - Remove this new combo.
  • 00:58:903 (1) - ^
  • 01:14:088 (1) - ^
  • 01:29:027 (5) - Delete this circle, this pattern sounds a lot better without it imo.
  • 01:30:261 (2) - Rotate this slider 15° clockwise.
  • 02:15:940 (1) - Remove this new combo.
  • 02:42:607 (1) - ^
  • 02:57:915 (5) - Delete this circle.
  • 03:27:792 (1) - Start this spinner at 03:30:755.
  • 04:01:372 (2) - I don't like how this slider sounds, delete it and add a circle at 04:01:496.
  • 04:09:027 (5) - Delete this circle.

1. ♥

1. 00:11:496 (5) - at first look this slider sounds a bit strange to me,why don't you try to finish it at 00:11:866 - sounds much better to me
2. 00:21:125 - a cirle before the spinner with a finish will sound good imo
3. 00:34:459 (5,6,1) - i don't really like how the whislte sound here i don't really understand if it don't fit here: 00:35:940 (1) - or 00:35:570 (6) - my main suggestion is to remove one of it, if it were for me i would remove it at 00:35:570 (6) - but if you try to put a really silet finish at 00:35:940 (1) - it will fit too,so try what is the best for you
4. 00:47:051 (6) - by this slider is the same thing that i mentioned before o3o try to finish it at 00:47:422 - it sound much better for me
5. 00:50:385 - to 00:55:940 - try to continue the clap pattern that you started it will sound better i think
6. 00:58:903 (8) - same again for this slider try to finish it at 00:59:273 -
7. 01:34:088 (4) - i don't think this drum whistle fit here
8. 01:58:903 (1) - i think a clap is better here
9. 01:59:644 (2) - try to replace the clap at slider-start with a whistle
10. 02:15:940 (4) - same again for this slider finish it at 02:16:310 -
11. 02:17:792 (2,3) - [nazi]spacing here[/nazi]
12. 02:46:310 (1) - this slider sound strange o.o try to finish it here: 02:47:792 -
13. 03:39:644 (1,2) - don't really like this little overlap
14. 04:13:718 (5) - the whistle on reversearrow don't fit really well

1. 00:09:150 - what about to add a circle here?
2. 00:21:125 - add a circle with a finish here before the spinner i think will give a better effect *3*
3. 01:24:459 (4) - uhm why don't you stack this one with 01:23:348 (1) - ?
4. 03:50:385 (4) - drum whistle :c whyy

Lally wrote:

hey <3

[General]

1. ♥

[Normal]

1. 00:11:496 (5) - at first look this slider sounds a bit strange to me,why don't you try to finish it at 00:11:866 - sounds much better to me nope the sound ends there.
2. 00:21:125 - a cirle before the spinner with a finish will sound good imo cool
3. 00:34:459 (5,6,1) - i don't really like how the whislte sound here i don't really understand if it don't fit here: 00:35:940 (1) - or 00:35:570 (6) - my main suggestion is to remove one of it, if it were for me i would remove it at 00:35:570 (6) - but if you try to put a really silet finish at 00:35:940 (1) - it will fit too,so try what is the best for you hm, okay~
4. 00:47:051 (6) - by this slider is the same thing that i mentioned before o3o try to finish it at 00:47:422 - it sound much better for me same
5. 00:50:385 - to 00:55:940 - try to continue the clap pattern that you started it will sound better i think I have all claps I need, lol.
6. 00:58:903 (8) - same again for this slider try to finish it at 00:59:273 - same
7. 01:34:088 (4) - i don't think this drum whistle fit here nope, it's in the song.
8. 01:58:903 (1) - i think a clap is better here nope, would be inconsistent.
9. 01:59:644 (2) - try to replace the clap at slider-start with a whistle would be inconsistent.
10. 02:15:940 (4) - same again for this slider finish it at 02:16:310 - same
11. 02:17:792 (2,3) - [nazi]spacing here[/nazi] hmhmh, it helps me to use the blanket and it's readable :c
12. 02:46:310 (1) - this slider sound strange o.o try to finish it here: 02:47:792 - HUE, fail. Fixed.
13. 03:39:644 (1,2) - don't really like this little overlap It's ok
14. 04:13:718 (5) - the whistle on reversearrow don't fit really well it's in the song.

[Hard]

1. 00:09:150 - what about to add a circle here? Sure
2. 00:21:125 - add a circle with a finish here before the spinner i think will give a better effect *3* Yep
3. 01:24:459 (4) - uhm why don't you stack this one with 01:23:348 (1) - ? because it's a jump xD
4. 03:50:385 (4) - drum whistle :c whyy because it's in the song :>

really relaxing mapset *.*)/ a staru-chan for you good luck :3

1. 00:21:125 (1) - remove this nc, make same with 00:12:236 (1) - (6)
2. 00:45:940 (5) - add whistle in end? in music the sound same w/ begin and 00:47:051 (6) - 's end
3. 00:54:088 (2,3) - maybe ctrl + g here? so can add clap in 00:54:459 -
4. 00:56:681 (5) - add nc, too long imo.. and make same with previous combo (1-4)
5. 01:08:533 (3) - remove clap in the end, sound strange w/ finish
6. 01:11:125 (4) - add drum sound like 01:08:533 (3) - 's reverse?
7. 01:33:718 (3,4,5,6) - more symmetry square like this -> http://puu.sh/3iiSc
   

   260,192,93718,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   240,124,94088,1,2,3:0:0:0:
   172,144,94459,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   192,212,94829,1,0,0:0:0:0:

8. 01:59:644 (2) - this slider shape seems random.. maybe try this? http://puu.sh/3ij0V.jpg
9. 02:12:977 (2) - add clap in end
10. 02:26:310 (5) - add whistle in begin and end? sound good imo
11. 02:37:422 (4) - why suddenly clap in end? change to whistle sound more fit o3o
12. 02:55:940 (5) - add nc?
13. 03:49:273 (3) - move 3 grid up
14. 04:21:125 (1) - remove nc for make same combo w/ 04:10:014 (1) - (5)

1. 00:11:866 (4) - I guess this note should at 00:11:743 - to follow piano
2. 00:35:940 (1) - remove whistle in start, the rhythm sounds more better without it
3. 00:53:718 (1) - move 1 grid up so that align w/ (4)
4. 01:10:385 (4) - maybe in reverse more fit finish instead clap..
5. 01:23:718 (2) - move 1 grid down just make triangle symmetry
6. 01:24:459 (4) - why not stack with (1)?
7. 01:34:088 (4) - add whistle
8. 01:53:718 (1) - remove this combo, make same w/ 01:56:310 (1) - (6)
9. 01:58:162 (5) - add clap
10. 02:04:829 (1) - spacing is too close imo. make same spacing like 02:04:088 (5) - to (6)
11. 02:27:422 (4) - move this into x:376 y:288 seems more good
12. 02:29:644 (2) - add whistle in beginning
13. 03:03:718 (6) - move 1 grid to right
14. 03:28:903 (2) - remove clap, weird with finish..
15. 04:04:459 (3) - make this more symmetry http://puu.sh/3ikbf.jpg
16. 04:21:125 (1) - remove this nc

eveless wrote:

[general]
add "yaoi""nitro+chiral""bl" in tags? added all~

[Hard]
01:10:014 (3,4) - Anti-flow for me, I'd like to do it like this

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sure
01:32:236 (1) - ^Same,

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yep
01:40:014 (2,3,4) - Too crowded imo, Can you make them a bit more far? yep
03:16:496 (2) - Incorrect position, use 1/4 or 1/12 then hear it carefully, you can found that it should be put in 03:16:496. oops, fixed~

eveless wrote:

So why didnt you believe me ;_;

/me back to play mmorpg

1. 00:41:681 (1) - This should actually be on the 1/12 snap according to the music, but since it is a repeat slider and is going to play the same regardless, I will let you choose what to do with it.
2. 01:14:582 (1) - It would be a nice touch to end this spinner here 01:16:866, to represent that powerful part of the music.
3. 01:18:903 - Adding a note here is crucial to establishing a solid rhythm for this section of the music. So, I would add a note. http://puu.sh/3lTR5.jpg Works well.
4. 01:30:755 - ^
5. 01:52:977 (1) - This should be on 1/8 snap according to the music.
6. 02:10:508 (1) - This is on 1/12 too, like my first suggestion.
7. 02:47:792 - Add a note here to establish a better rhythm, like the last kiai.
8. 02:59:644 - ^
9. 03:47:051 - ^
10. 04:10:755 - ^ and I recommend you use a slider like before, for consistency.

1. 00:14:829 (4) - Spacing from 3 to 4 is messed up. Move 4 out a little bit to fix it.

CDFA wrote:

IT IS RANKED

AT LAST

im not funny

Kei wrote:

<33333333333333333333 grats! *goes back to play dmmd*