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Itou Kanako - At Last

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Topic Starter
Konei
Added one of the missing ones, thanks ~

Also I forgot xD

@xxheroxx: I didn't change the loop aswell because I think this way it's easier to read for newbies.
Megurine Luka
[General]

nah

[E]

00:47:051 (6) - I don't know but try add whistles on both head and end. Sounds good to me
01:21:866 (3) - maybe

01:27:792 (6) - try add a clap on head
02:15:940 (4) - same as previous
02:19:644 (4) - move down and right a little bit ? to make the slider more encircle 3

[H]

00:30:755 (2) - whistle on head
00:31:310 (3) - ^
00:32:483 (5) - ^
00:37:298 (3,1) - ^
00:58:903 (5) - try

01:13:224 (1) - I think this group of stream should have less spacing with previous note.. hmm current is too sudden imo
01:53:718 (1,3) - whistle
01:59:644 (2) - ^
02:01:125 (5) - ^on head
02:06:187 (3,1) - ^
04:18:162 (1) - try



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Topic Starter
Konei
Thanks Luka, all fixed :3
Lally
hey <3

[General]
[Normal]
  1. 00:11:496 (5) - at first look this slider sounds a bit strange to me,why don't you try to finish it at 00:11:866 - sounds much better to me
  2. 00:21:125 - a cirle before the spinner with a finish will sound good imo
  3. 00:34:459 (5,6,1) - i don't really like how the whislte sound here i don't really understand if it don't fit here: 00:35:940 (1) - or 00:35:570 (6) - my main suggestion is to remove one of it, if it were for me i would remove it at 00:35:570 (6) - but if you try to put a really silet finish at 00:35:940 (1) - it will fit too,so try what is the best for you
  4. 00:47:051 (6) - by this slider is the same thing that i mentioned before o3o try to finish it at 00:47:422 - it sound much better for me
  5. 00:50:385 - to 00:55:940 - try to continue the clap pattern that you started it will sound better i think
  6. 00:58:903 (8) - same again for this slider try to finish it at 00:59:273 -
  7. 01:34:088 (4) - i don't think this drum whistle fit here
  8. 01:58:903 (1) - i think a clap is better here
  9. 01:59:644 (2) - try to replace the clap at slider-start with a whistle
  10. 02:15:940 (4) - same again for this slider finish it at 02:16:310 -
  11. 02:17:792 (2,3) - [nazi]spacing here[/nazi]
  12. 02:46:310 (1) - this slider sound strange o.o try to finish it here: 02:47:792 -
  13. 03:39:644 (1,2) - don't really like this little overlap
  14. 04:13:718 (5) - the whistle on reversearrow don't fit really well
[Hard]
  1. 00:09:150 - what about to add a circle here?
  2. 00:21:125 - add a circle with a finish here before the spinner i think will give a better effect *3*
  3. 01:24:459 (4) - uhm why don't you stack this one with 01:23:348 (1) - ?
  4. 03:50:385 (4) - drum whistle :c whyy
really relaxing mapset *.*)/ a staru-chan for you good luck :3
Topic Starter
Konei

Lally wrote:

hey <3

[General]
[Normal]
  1. 00:11:496 (5) - at first look this slider sounds a bit strange to me,why don't you try to finish it at 00:11:866 - sounds much better to me nope the sound ends there.
  2. 00:21:125 - a cirle before the spinner with a finish will sound good imo cool
  3. 00:34:459 (5,6,1) - i don't really like how the whislte sound here i don't really understand if it don't fit here: 00:35:940 (1) - or 00:35:570 (6) - my main suggestion is to remove one of it, if it were for me i would remove it at 00:35:570 (6) - but if you try to put a really silet finish at 00:35:940 (1) - it will fit too,so try what is the best for you hm, okay~
  4. 00:47:051 (6) - by this slider is the same thing that i mentioned before o3o try to finish it at 00:47:422 - it sound much better for me same
  5. 00:50:385 - to 00:55:940 - try to continue the clap pattern that you started it will sound better i think I have all claps I need, lol.
  6. 00:58:903 (8) - same again for this slider try to finish it at 00:59:273 - same
  7. 01:34:088 (4) - i don't think this drum whistle fit here nope, it's in the song.
  8. 01:58:903 (1) - i think a clap is better here nope, would be inconsistent.
  9. 01:59:644 (2) - try to replace the clap at slider-start with a whistle would be inconsistent.
  10. 02:15:940 (4) - same again for this slider finish it at 02:16:310 - same
  11. 02:17:792 (2,3) - [nazi]spacing here[/nazi] hmhmh, it helps me to use the blanket and it's readable :c
  12. 02:46:310 (1) - this slider sound strange o.o try to finish it here: 02:47:792 - HUE, fail. Fixed.
  13. 03:39:644 (1,2) - don't really like this little overlap It's ok
  14. 04:13:718 (5) - the whistle on reversearrow don't fit really well it's in the song.
[Hard]
  1. 00:09:150 - what about to add a circle here? Sure
  2. 00:21:125 - add a circle with a finish here before the spinner i think will give a better effect *3* Yep
  3. 01:24:459 (4) - uhm why don't you stack this one with 01:23:348 (1) - ? because it's a jump xD
  4. 03:50:385 (4) - drum whistle :c whyy because it's in the song :>
really relaxing mapset *.*)/ a staru-chan for you good luck :3

Thank you Lally \:D/
Yasora
/'-')/

Normal
  1. 00:21:125 (1) - remove this nc, make same with 00:12:236 (1) - (6)
  2. 00:45:940 (5) - add whistle in end? in music the sound same w/ begin and 00:47:051 (6) - 's end
  3. 00:54:088 (2,3) - maybe ctrl + g here? so can add clap in 00:54:459 -
  4. 00:56:681 (5) - add nc, too long imo.. and make same with previous combo (1-4)
  5. 01:08:533 (3) - remove clap in the end, sound strange w/ finish
  6. 01:11:125 (4) - add drum sound like 01:08:533 (3) - 's reverse?
  7. 01:33:718 (3,4,5,6) - more symmetry square like this -> http://puu.sh/3iiSc
    260,192,93718,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    240,124,94088,1,2,3:0:0:0:
    172,144,94459,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    192,212,94829,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  8. 01:59:644 (2) - this slider shape seems random.. maybe try this? http://puu.sh/3ij0V.jpg
  9. 02:12:977 (2) - add clap in end
  10. 02:26:310 (5) - add whistle in begin and end? sound good imo
  11. 02:37:422 (4) - why suddenly clap in end? change to whistle sound more fit o3o
  12. 02:55:940 (5) - add nc?
  13. 03:49:273 (3) - move 3 grid up
  14. 04:21:125 (1) - remove nc for make same combo w/ 04:10:014 (1) - (5)
Hard
  1. 00:11:866 (4) - I guess this note should at 00:11:743 - to follow piano
  2. 00:35:940 (1) - remove whistle in start, the rhythm sounds more better without it
  3. 00:53:718 (1) - move 1 grid up so that align w/ (4)
  4. 01:10:385 (4) - maybe in reverse more fit finish instead clap..
  5. 01:23:718 (2) - move 1 grid down just make triangle symmetry
  6. 01:24:459 (4) - why not stack with (1)?
  7. 01:34:088 (4) - add whistle
  8. 01:53:718 (1) - remove this combo, make same w/ 01:56:310 (1) - (6)
  9. 01:58:162 (5) - add clap
  10. 02:04:829 (1) - spacing is too close imo. make same spacing like 02:04:088 (5) - to (6)
  11. 02:27:422 (4) - move this into x:376 y:288 seems more good
  12. 02:29:644 (2) - add whistle in beginning
  13. 03:03:718 (6) - move 1 grid to right
  14. 03:28:903 (2) - remove clap, weird with finish..
  15. 04:04:459 (3) - make this more symmetry http://puu.sh/3ikbf.jpg
  16. 04:21:125 (1) - remove this nc
nice mappu~
Topic Starter
Konei
Fixed most of them, thanks :>
eveless
[general]
add "yaoi""nitro+chiral""bl" in tags?

[Hard]
01:10:014 (3,4) - Anti-flow for me, I'd like to do it like this 01:32:236 (1) - ^Same, 01:40:014 (2,3,4) - Too crowded imo, Can you make them a bit more far?
03:16:496 (2) - Incorrect position, use 1/4 or 1/12 then hear it carefully, you can found that it should be put in 03:16:496.
Topic Starter
Konei

eveless wrote:

[general]
add "yaoi""nitro+chiral""bl" in tags? added all~

[Hard]
01:10:014 (3,4) - Anti-flow for me, I'd like to do it like this sure
01:32:236 (1) - ^Same, yep
01:40:014 (2,3,4) - Too crowded imo, Can you make them a bit more far? yep
03:16:496 (2) - Incorrect position, use 1/4 or 1/12 then hear it carefully, you can found that it should be put in 03:16:496. oops, fixed~
eveless
OTL
[Hard]
03:16:496 (2,3) - Still incorrect, it sounds too odd imo...try sth like that: move the note to 03:16:496, then use 1/6 beat snap, put the slider start from 03:16:681, end in 03:17:175
03:17:915 (5) - and snap this to 1/6 please ;w;
Topic Starter
Konei
all fixed and it sounds good now :>
eveless
03:15:940 (1) - I think they're still off tho..anyways, I wont say anything about it if you really want to keep them, try asking some other bats' viewpoints about that.
Topic Starter
Konei
Okay, fixed that problem with Miya irc.

Log
14:50 Konei: miya, can I ask you a quick question?
14:51 Miya: yup? :o
14:51 Konei: eveless is a bit unsure about a part on my map sounding off
14:51 *Konei is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/252393 Itou Kanako - At Last [Hard]]
14:51 Konei: 03:16:125 (2) - this slider
14:52 Konei: could you check it?
14:52 Miya: hmm wait a minute
14:52 Konei: sure
14:55 Miya: yup
14:56 Miya: its off
14:56 Konei: alright
14:56 Miya: its 1/6 not 1/4
14:56 Konei: so when does it start?
14:57 Miya: 03:16:187 -
14:57 Miya: and 03:16:310 - are 1/6
14:57 Konei: end on 03:16:434 ?
14:57 Miya: but back to 1/4 here 03:16:496 -
14:57 Konei: ehh, Im a bit confused now xD
14:59 Miya: a picture may help >< https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/826854
15:00 Konei: oh okay owo
15:00 Konei: thanks a lot
15:00 Miya: this song is a mix 1/4 and 1/6 ew, a pain xD
15:00 Miya: careful~
15:01 Konei: I know right orz

Should be all fine now orz
eveless
So why didnt you believe me ;_;

/me back to play mmorpg
Topic Starter
Konei

eveless wrote:

So why didnt you believe me ;_;

/me back to play mmorpg
Ewwww, I'm sorry ;__;

Thanks a lot for your time eveless ;3
10nya
itou kanako w
go ></
Megurine Luka
\:D/ Koujaku sama -3-
Topic Starter
Konei
Thanks for your support :>
MMzz
Normal Text = Suggestion
Bold Text = Highly Suggested
Red Text = Unrankable/Must hange

[Hard]
  1. 00:41:681 (1) - This should actually be on the 1/12 snap according to the music, but since it is a repeat slider and is going to play the same regardless, I will let you choose what to do with it.
  2. 01:14:582 (1) - It would be a nice touch to end this spinner here 01:16:866, to represent that powerful part of the music.
  3. 01:18:903 - Adding a note here is crucial to establishing a solid rhythm for this section of the music. So, I would add a note. http://puu.sh/3lTR5.jpg Works well.
  4. 01:30:755 - ^
  5. 01:52:977 (1) - This should be on 1/8 snap according to the music.
  6. 02:10:508 (1) - This is on 1/12 too, like my first suggestion.
  7. 02:47:792 - Add a note here to establish a better rhythm, like the last kiai.
  8. 02:59:644 - ^
  9. 03:47:051 - ^
  10. 04:10:755 - ^ and I recommend you use a slider like before, for consistency.
[Normal]
  1. 00:14:829 (4) - Spacing from 3 to 4 is messed up. Move 4 out a little bit to fix it.
Nice map~ Call me back when you've looked over the mod.
Irreversible
nice konei o3o
Topic Starter
Konei
All done but the 1/12 sliders owo
MMzz
Ranked!
Topic Starter
Konei
Thanks a lot \:D/
Irreversible
sushi-desu!

gz konei <3~ ;)
Shohei Ohtani
IT IS RANKED

AT LAST

im not funny
Topic Starter
Konei

CDFA wrote:

IT IS RANKED

AT LAST

im not funny
I lol'd xD
Dark_Ai
glückwunsch ^^

Hast doch noch hinbekommen \:D/
Kei
<33333333333333333333 grats! *goes back to play dmmd*
Topic Starter
Konei

Kei wrote:

<33333333333333333333 grats! *goes back to play dmmd*
xDD

Gooooood~
Andrea
Grats Konei <3

Sad I was too lazy to mod this ><
Yasora
congrats~ o3o
Lion8980
Gratz! \o/
Sieg
congratz :3
Megurine Luka


OSU needs more BL ( me run
Miya

Andrea wrote:

Grats Konei <3

Sad I was too lazy to mod this ><
Lazy Andrea is always lazy :P
Gratz for the rank too :D
10nya
yeeey
Topic Starter
Konei
Thanks guys :>
scanter
congratz \o/ nice BL
Aurele
I am somehow late but,

Congratulation Darling <3
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