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Rohi - Kanata ni Mau wa Sakura no Shirabe [Taiko|Osu]
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well whatever...
Topic Starter
Revived, since i can't find the guests i fixed the mods myself.
Ready for checking.
Ready for checking.
Ahh, rank it Rin-sama owo (dat 1/12 stuff orz)
Sad no Rin diff
Taiko mod
(mapper好像afk了... whatever>_>)
[general]
no kd
看完...懂得~w
(mapper好像afk了... whatever>_>)
[general]
- video Taiko部分建議去了吧
- 00:14:909 - 這段建議用0.9 0.95快了點 180/210近似於0.905 如果用0.95速度變化會挺奇怪的
- 00:15:051 - ^ (delete...)
- 02:00:659 - 二段kiai?
- 02:04:484 (792,793) - 試試K K吧 做點層次
- 02:14:084 (876,877) - ^
no kd
看完...懂得~w
小王啊 玉米什么时候来收啊
Topic Starter
All fixed. Also changed the kat at the first kiai in oni diff.
after fixed green line volume, Taiko is get ready to rank 
[General]
Tick rate 2 fits this song best
[Easy]
00:33:659 (1,2,3) - I'm kind of wary of the flow here since this is an Easy diff. Going back after the launch from the repeat slider feels a bit odd after 00:28:859 (1,2) - and the rest of your instances of this rhythm seem to have not nearly as much of a cut backwards.
00:55:259 (1,1) - This overlap is pretty ugly
01:07:859 (1,1,1,1,1) - Yeah, everyone does the new combo spam here across the maps, but it feels too frequent with the number of hit objects. It'd look a lot better in sets of twos.
01:17:459 (1,1,1,1,1) - etc. won't bother pointing the rest out
02:38:459 - Not ending with the rest of the maps?
..well I started at least.
I'm really perplexed over the timing at the start. Why that mass of red lines?
Anyway, I'll continue later when I can.
Edit:
[Normal]
00:27:959 (3,4,5,6,1) - This looks pretty intimidating for a Normal. It's that really low AR I'm thinking (feels way slow compared to the slider speed, but the distance snap speed is super-low so it's kind of unbalanced-feeling.)
01:40:259 (1) - The only thing I can hear on this is the slider tick q:
01:44:459 (2,3) - This might be a bit tough for a Normal difficulty. Try to avoid stacking under slider ends - especially when you're using a different rhythm that's not even in the song.
01:55:559 (1,1,1,1,1) - Strange that you do the new combo spam here but not during the kiai parts that are the same.
02:23:459 (1,1) - This is pretty iffy for a Normal too. It'd probably read a lot better if you only set a circle at 02:24:959 - instead of having a slider at 02:24:659 (1) - .
02:27:659 (5,6,1) - And again with the weird 1/2 spacing. I recommend against it - when you have the same rhythm but different spacing in the next pattern at 02:29:159 (4,1) -
02:33:059 (1,1) - Same thing as before
02:35:159 (3,4,1) - And the 1/2 spacing changes. This is a Normal!
[Hard]
00:27:959 (4,1) - This jump doesn't read very well. Have the curve of the slider move towards the 1. Maybe also make the jump less intense.
01:21:059 (1,2) - Kind of a weird spot for a jump. If you made it more similar to what you did with 01:11:459 (1,2) - it would read and play a lot better.
01:27:059 (1) - This slowdown plays poorly. Breaks the pacing you've had up to this point.
01:30:809 (2,3,1,2) - This jump into ridiculously slow velocity is also pretty bad pacing. I'd have larger spacing between 01:31:559 (1,2) - so you don't have the identical spacing from the previous combos and it transitions better to this slow part. (I also disagree with slowing down to such a drastic amount, but eh)
01:52:259 (3) - Wrong rhythm
02:04:259 (1) - Slider track is audible
02:36:659 (1) - Wow this feels so badly placed. I guess you wanted to put a spinner somewhere, but it really breaks your pacing.
Eh, overall this map felt like it was trying too hard to suppress itself from being a low-level Insane. It's quite a big jump up from the Normal in difficulty as well.
I'll continue later. Not sure where to start since there are 3 insanes? Shouldn't one of these be an extra as well?
Edit 2:
[Nouk]
00:45:359 (1) - This would flow better if the kink was made earlier. Right now it's a big stab against your previous curved flow and it feels wrong. 00:46:109 (4,5) - Ctrl + g on these would also help towards the flow
01:25:859 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Erm, why sliders? They are clearly meant to be single notes.
01:31:109 - And after all that following of the piano, missing this beat is a crime.
01:31:559 (1) - Awkward spinner. Map through it or start it at 01:31:859 - so it matches the much better spinner at 01:36:659 (1) -
01:38:459 (2,3) - The rhythm is completely wrong on these. Use 1/2 rhythms to match the music.
01:43:559 (6) - End this at 01:43:659 - and give it a more audible end so that you can feel that it's ending with the drum part
01:46:259 (1,2,3) - Slider. Slider. Circle. What. Use circles for better impact for under-mapping like this.
02:09:059 (1,7,1) - At least line the end of the long slider up with these two stacked notes.
02:23:459 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - These silenced slider ends are just bad. Not only are they completely off rhythm, when they finally do sync up, you keep them silent anyway so it ends up leaving me wondering what exactly you were trying to accomplish with the music. The best part is that you decided to do a different incorrect rhythm than at 01:25:859 (1) -
02:33:059 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Yay, you've at least demonstrated that you are aware of the rhythm of the song and are capable of mapping it. Why aren't you doing this for the rest of the map though?
To be continued...
[RLQuillab]
00:53:309 (6,1) - This flowed poorly to me. Doubling back on itself compared to the zigzag approach at 00:49:409 (4,5,6,1) - ... I preferred the zigzag honestly.
00:56:759 (5) - These extended sliders with the silenced ends bugged me. The spacing after them is inconsistent and the hitsounding is as well. Referring to points such as 00:53:459 (1,2) - and 00:49:859 (1,2) -
00:59:609 (5,1) - Strange spot for a jump considering the music and pattern.
01:22:109 (3,1) - Uh. Please no. You can't hear it at all, and that tiny amount of time for such a drastic jump with no discernable emphasis in the music that I can tell to justify it makes this feel like it's trying too hard rather than going with the song.
01:27:209 (3,1) - ^ Though at least I could hear it since it was all whistles except for the end of the slider. Which is @#$(&*
01:45:659 (3) - Snap the end of this at 01:46:059 - if you -really- need to hit that beat. It still feels way out of character even when snapped to the right beat, though. A lot of this is probably because there are zero hitsounds going on here. Just the claps makes for a really boring section.
01:48:659 (1) - sliderslide.wav
01:59:459 (1,1) - After all the 1/2 use, and hearing this part enough times in the song, suddenly changing the rhythm on this so that it's not even following the music at all was a pretty poor decision imo.
02:04:259 (1,1,1) - Doubling back under a stack felt really against your general triangle patterns throughout most of the map. Same with repeat later
02:06:509 (3) - I didn't need that combo anyway
02:07:709 (3) - Nor any health
02:19:709 (2,1) - And again with the crazy jump during a transition. I don't get it. At least the sliders here actually worked fine.
02:21:809 - Neeeeeed a noooooote aaaaaaa
02:34:409 (3) - Eh
I really didn't like the stop/go/stop/go nature of this map. Felt like it was busy denying me of any fun the entire ride. q:
[Rin]
01:09:059 (3,1) - This felt waaay too close after the other three sets of jumps.
01:30:659 (1,1,1) - You followed the piano part fairly strongly up until this transition point. The sliders just feel gimmicky rather than a good translation of the phrase though. For example, the last slider at 01:31:259 (1) - In the music, it's more coming to a stop. Everything turns off waiting for the vocal to kick in again. But your' having the player keep moving anyway with this last slider. Just feels wrong against the song.
01:58:859 (2,3,4,5) - I didn't get why you suddenly put jumps in here. Not really anything new in the song to emphasize until 01:59:459 -
02:16:559 (1,2) - Sudden tiny spacing aaaaaa
Pretty fun map here, except for the weird spacing things I pointed out above.
One more to go!
[Yuko]
I... know that you can map better than this now, Yuko. This -is- an 8 month old map. You might want to look through this and see what you can improve on your own applying what you've learned over that large time span. As it stands now, it is mostly a disaster as a map. The flow is broken all over the place along with completely spastic velocity changes with seemingly zero connection with the music. Having me bitch about every other note isn't going to be helpful to anyone.
Tick rate 2 fits this song best
[Easy]
00:33:659 (1,2,3) - I'm kind of wary of the flow here since this is an Easy diff. Going back after the launch from the repeat slider feels a bit odd after 00:28:859 (1,2) - and the rest of your instances of this rhythm seem to have not nearly as much of a cut backwards.
00:55:259 (1,1) - This overlap is pretty ugly
01:07:859 (1,1,1,1,1) - Yeah, everyone does the new combo spam here across the maps, but it feels too frequent with the number of hit objects. It'd look a lot better in sets of twos.
01:17:459 (1,1,1,1,1) - etc. won't bother pointing the rest out
02:38:459 - Not ending with the rest of the maps?
..well I started at least.
I'm really perplexed over the timing at the start. Why that mass of red lines?
Anyway, I'll continue later when I can.
Edit:
[Normal]
00:27:959 (3,4,5,6,1) - This looks pretty intimidating for a Normal. It's that really low AR I'm thinking (feels way slow compared to the slider speed, but the distance snap speed is super-low so it's kind of unbalanced-feeling.)
01:40:259 (1) - The only thing I can hear on this is the slider tick q:
01:44:459 (2,3) - This might be a bit tough for a Normal difficulty. Try to avoid stacking under slider ends - especially when you're using a different rhythm that's not even in the song.
01:55:559 (1,1,1,1,1) - Strange that you do the new combo spam here but not during the kiai parts that are the same.
02:23:459 (1,1) - This is pretty iffy for a Normal too. It'd probably read a lot better if you only set a circle at 02:24:959 - instead of having a slider at 02:24:659 (1) - .
02:27:659 (5,6,1) - And again with the weird 1/2 spacing. I recommend against it - when you have the same rhythm but different spacing in the next pattern at 02:29:159 (4,1) -
02:33:059 (1,1) - Same thing as before
02:35:159 (3,4,1) - And the 1/2 spacing changes. This is a Normal!
[Hard]
00:27:959 (4,1) - This jump doesn't read very well. Have the curve of the slider move towards the 1. Maybe also make the jump less intense.
01:21:059 (1,2) - Kind of a weird spot for a jump. If you made it more similar to what you did with 01:11:459 (1,2) - it would read and play a lot better.
01:27:059 (1) - This slowdown plays poorly. Breaks the pacing you've had up to this point.
01:30:809 (2,3,1,2) - This jump into ridiculously slow velocity is also pretty bad pacing. I'd have larger spacing between 01:31:559 (1,2) - so you don't have the identical spacing from the previous combos and it transitions better to this slow part. (I also disagree with slowing down to such a drastic amount, but eh)
01:52:259 (3) - Wrong rhythm
02:04:259 (1) - Slider track is audible
02:36:659 (1) - Wow this feels so badly placed. I guess you wanted to put a spinner somewhere, but it really breaks your pacing.
Eh, overall this map felt like it was trying too hard to suppress itself from being a low-level Insane. It's quite a big jump up from the Normal in difficulty as well.
I'll continue later. Not sure where to start since there are 3 insanes? Shouldn't one of these be an extra as well?
Edit 2:
[Nouk]
00:45:359 (1) - This would flow better if the kink was made earlier. Right now it's a big stab against your previous curved flow and it feels wrong. 00:46:109 (4,5) - Ctrl + g on these would also help towards the flow
01:25:859 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Erm, why sliders? They are clearly meant to be single notes.
01:31:109 - And after all that following of the piano, missing this beat is a crime.
01:31:559 (1) - Awkward spinner. Map through it or start it at 01:31:859 - so it matches the much better spinner at 01:36:659 (1) -
01:38:459 (2,3) - The rhythm is completely wrong on these. Use 1/2 rhythms to match the music.
01:43:559 (6) - End this at 01:43:659 - and give it a more audible end so that you can feel that it's ending with the drum part
01:46:259 (1,2,3) - Slider. Slider. Circle. What. Use circles for better impact for under-mapping like this.
02:09:059 (1,7,1) - At least line the end of the long slider up with these two stacked notes.
02:23:459 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - These silenced slider ends are just bad. Not only are they completely off rhythm, when they finally do sync up, you keep them silent anyway so it ends up leaving me wondering what exactly you were trying to accomplish with the music. The best part is that you decided to do a different incorrect rhythm than at 01:25:859 (1) -
02:33:059 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Yay, you've at least demonstrated that you are aware of the rhythm of the song and are capable of mapping it. Why aren't you doing this for the rest of the map though?
To be continued...
[RLQuillab]
00:53:309 (6,1) - This flowed poorly to me. Doubling back on itself compared to the zigzag approach at 00:49:409 (4,5,6,1) - ... I preferred the zigzag honestly.
00:56:759 (5) - These extended sliders with the silenced ends bugged me. The spacing after them is inconsistent and the hitsounding is as well. Referring to points such as 00:53:459 (1,2) - and 00:49:859 (1,2) -
00:59:609 (5,1) - Strange spot for a jump considering the music and pattern.
01:22:109 (3,1) - Uh. Please no. You can't hear it at all, and that tiny amount of time for such a drastic jump with no discernable emphasis in the music that I can tell to justify it makes this feel like it's trying too hard rather than going with the song.
01:27:209 (3,1) - ^ Though at least I could hear it since it was all whistles except for the end of the slider. Which is @#$(&*
01:45:659 (3) - Snap the end of this at 01:46:059 - if you -really- need to hit that beat. It still feels way out of character even when snapped to the right beat, though. A lot of this is probably because there are zero hitsounds going on here. Just the claps makes for a really boring section.
01:48:659 (1) - sliderslide.wav
01:59:459 (1,1) - After all the 1/2 use, and hearing this part enough times in the song, suddenly changing the rhythm on this so that it's not even following the music at all was a pretty poor decision imo.
02:04:259 (1,1,1) - Doubling back under a stack felt really against your general triangle patterns throughout most of the map. Same with repeat later
02:06:509 (3) - I didn't need that combo anyway
02:07:709 (3) - Nor any health
02:19:709 (2,1) - And again with the crazy jump during a transition. I don't get it. At least the sliders here actually worked fine.
02:21:809 - Neeeeeed a noooooote aaaaaaa
02:34:409 (3) - Eh
I really didn't like the stop/go/stop/go nature of this map. Felt like it was busy denying me of any fun the entire ride. q:
[Rin]
01:09:059 (3,1) - This felt waaay too close after the other three sets of jumps.
01:30:659 (1,1,1) - You followed the piano part fairly strongly up until this transition point. The sliders just feel gimmicky rather than a good translation of the phrase though. For example, the last slider at 01:31:259 (1) - In the music, it's more coming to a stop. Everything turns off waiting for the vocal to kick in again. But your' having the player keep moving anyway with this last slider. Just feels wrong against the song.
01:58:859 (2,3,4,5) - I didn't get why you suddenly put jumps in here. Not really anything new in the song to emphasize until 01:59:459 -
02:16:559 (1,2) - Sudden tiny spacing aaaaaa
Pretty fun map here, except for the weird spacing things I pointed out above.
One more to go!
[Yuko]
I... know that you can map better than this now, Yuko. This -is- an 8 month old map. You might want to look through this and see what you can improve on your own applying what you've learned over that large time span. As it stands now, it is mostly a disaster as a map. The flow is broken all over the place along with completely spastic velocity changes with seemingly zero connection with the music. Having me bitch about every other note isn't going to be helpful to anyone.
Who in-game requested XD
maybe pieguy...
A long delay...because of Monthly #3,sorry
Ok then I won't mod taiko since there is an taiko iconXD
[RLQ]
00:19:559 (6) - Ctrl+g
01:11:309 (7) - move to 1
01:21:059 (1) - Ctrl+g
01:31:259 (4) - move to 3's head
[P's H(yper?)]
00:46:859 (1) - overlap
01:29:459 (1) - move to 256,220
02:05:309 (4) - move to 256,192 (are you sure this is hard?just change the diff name is easier I think...)
[Skystar]
00:17:159 (5) - 236,28
00:33:059 (6,1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1193985
00:46:109 (4,5) - Swap
00:40:109 (3,4) - swap
00:43:409 (2,3) - Swap
真够扯 Editing
[Nouk]
00:33:659 (1) - move to 304,20
00:38:759 (2) - move to 440,168?
00:39:509 (5) - move to 84,116?
00:41:609 (7) - Ctrl+G
00:45:359 (1) - last point 236,98?
01:03:059 (1,2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1194010
01:10:559 (4) - NC
01:11:459 (1) - 172,328
01:18:059 (3) - Ctrl+G
02:01:259 (4) - move to 472,248
02:28:259 (1) - Ctrl+G
>02:28:859 (1,1) - move to 496,168
>>02:29:309 (2) - 416,156
>>>02:29:459 (3) - Ctrl+g
02:36:209 (6) - move to 244,68
>02:36:359 (7) - Ctrl+G
[Insane]
01:18:959 (1,2) - Ctrl+G
01:19:559 (1,2) - ^
>01:19:859 (3) - move to 304,264
[Normal]
remove some useless greenline?
00:18:959 (4) - blanket
00:20:459 (2) - 112,216
00:53:159 (2) - ......If you want
00:57:959 (2) - ^
01:14:459 (5) - 2nd point right 1 small gird
[Easy]
._.
maybe pieguy...
A long delay...because of Monthly #3,sorry
Ok then I won't mod taiko since there is an taiko iconXD
[RLQ]
00:19:559 (6) - Ctrl+g
01:11:309 (7) - move to 1
01:21:059 (1) - Ctrl+g
01:31:259 (4) - move to 3's head
[P's H(yper?)]
00:46:859 (1) - overlap
01:29:459 (1) - move to 256,220
02:05:309 (4) - move to 256,192 (are you sure this is hard?just change the diff name is easier I think...)
[Skystar]
00:17:159 (5) - 236,28
00:33:059 (6,1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1193985
00:46:109 (4,5) - Swap
00:40:109 (3,4) - swap
00:43:409 (2,3) - Swap
真够扯 Editing
[Nouk]
00:33:659 (1) - move to 304,20
00:38:759 (2) - move to 440,168?
00:39:509 (5) - move to 84,116?
00:41:609 (7) - Ctrl+G
00:45:359 (1) - last point 236,98?
01:03:059 (1,2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1194010
01:10:559 (4) - NC
01:11:459 (1) - 172,328
01:18:059 (3) - Ctrl+G
02:01:259 (4) - move to 472,248
02:28:259 (1) - Ctrl+G
>02:28:859 (1,1) - move to 496,168
>>02:29:309 (2) - 416,156
>>>02:29:459 (3) - Ctrl+g
02:36:209 (6) - move to 244,68
>02:36:359 (7) - Ctrl+G
[Insane]
01:18:959 (1,2) - Ctrl+G
01:19:559 (1,2) - ^
>01:19:859 (3) - move to 304,264
[Normal]
remove some useless greenline?
00:18:959 (4) - blanket
00:20:459 (2) - 112,216
00:53:159 (2) - ......If you want
00:57:959 (2) - ^
01:14:459 (5) - 2nd point right 1 small gird
[Easy]
._.
Topic Starter
ts8zs wrote:
Who in-game requested XD
maybe pieguy...
A long delay...because of Monthly #3,sorry
Ok then I won't mod taiko since there is an taiko iconXD
[RLQ]
00:19:559 (6) - Ctrl+g the current one seems have better flow
01:11:309 (7) - move to 1 it's a new jump to the next 1 i guess, understandable in my eyes
01:21:059 (1) - Ctrl+g changed in another way.
01:31:259 (4) - move to 3's head i don't get...
真够扯 Editing
[Nouk]
00:33:659 (1) - move to 304,20 fixed.
00:38:759 (2) - move to 440,168? this is a good idea.
00:39:509 (5) - move to 84,116? guess this is his original idea, no change for now.
00:41:609 (7) - Ctrl+G good.
00:45:359 (1) - last point 236,98? in another way.
01:03:059 (1,2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1194010 no.
01:10:559 (4) - NC added
01:11:459 (1) - 172,328 i think the current one is better.
01:18:059 (3) - Ctrl+G no.
02:01:259 (4) - move to 472,248 这也太远了
02:28:259 (1) - Ctrl+G
>02:28:859 (1,1) - move to 496,168 current one is enough for me
>>02:29:309 (2) - 416,156
>>>02:29:459 (3) - Ctrl+g
02:36:209 (6) - move to 244,68
>02:36:359 (7) - Ctrl+G
[Insane]
01:18:959 (1,2) - Ctrl+G 注意音阶
01:19:559 (1,2) - ^
>01:19:859 (3) - move to 304,264
[Normal]
remove some useless greenline? lazy to do that.
00:18:959 (4) - blanket not designed for a blanket.
00:20:459 (2) - 112,216 personally i prefer current one.
00:53:159 (2) - ......If you want same thing...
00:57:959 (2) - ^
01:14:459 (5) - 2nd point right 1 small gird
[Easy]
._.
Edit: @Garven, i'll check after you finish, for the timing, the beginning of the song has an obvious speed change, those hell red lines are to adjust the timing. Sadly i didn't find a better way to do that.
Kind of a major issue in Skystar's diff:
The two red combo colors are wayyyy too similiar, which makes the last kiai even tougher to read.
The two red combo colors are wayyyy too similiar, which makes the last kiai even tougher to read.
Hi.
Is lankd just around the corner.
General
旋律→律べ good arrange.
good arrange music.Nice.
A bit difficult
Normal
00:28:409 - Dl
00:28:709 - Dl
01:22:259 - No stack
02:35:309 - Dl
Pieguy's Hard
for Heaven's sake
want you to make Circle Size just a little bit bigger
the degree to which one is serious or grave
Insane
01:02:459 - move
01:13:859 (1)～（4）square or oblong
good luck
Is lankd just around the corner.
General
旋律→律べ good arrange.
good arrange music.Nice.
A bit difficult
Normal
00:28:409 - Dl
00:28:709 - Dl
01:22:259 - No stack
02:35:309 - Dl
Pieguy's Hard
for Heaven's sake
want you to make Circle Size just a little bit bigger
the degree to which one is serious or grave
Insane
01:02:459 - move
01:13:859 (1)～（4）square or oblong
good luck
Hey Rin~
[Easy]
01:31:859 -Normal whistle.
01:34:559 -Slider under the note.
01:39:359 -^
[Normal]
00:55:259 -Make the slider till 00:56:159
00:56:459 -Add a note.
00:58:859 -Make the slider till 00:59:759
01:00:059 -Add a note.
01:21:959 -^
01:31:859 -Normal whistle.
01:34:259 -Make the slider long till 01:35:459
01:36:659 -Normal whistle.
01:39:059 -Remove that circle and add a slider till 01:39:959
And yet these other insane diff's aren't submitted, I'll mod them when they're submitted.
Well actually, I can't mod maps that are really fastbut I can mod some but anyways, GL ~ ! 
[Easy]
01:31:859 -Normal whistle.
01:34:559 -Slider under the note.
01:39:359 -^
[Normal]
00:55:259 -Make the slider till 00:56:159
00:56:459 -Add a note.
00:58:859 -Make the slider till 00:59:759
01:00:059 -Add a note.
01:21:959 -^
01:31:859 -Normal whistle.
01:34:259 -Make the slider long till 01:35:459
01:36:659 -Normal whistle.
01:39:059 -Remove that circle and add a slider till 01:39:959
Well actually, I can't mod maps that are really fast
Topic Starter
ayaka2000 wrote:
Hi.
Is lankd just around the corner.
General
旋律→律べ good arrange.
good arrange music.Nice.
A bit difficult
Normal
00:28:409 - Dl ok...i worried a bit before.
00:28:709 - Dl ^
01:22:259 - No stack stack is the best way i can think of (compared to move it some random place)
02:35:309 - Dl nope.
Pieguy's Hard
for Heaven's sake
want you to make Circle Size just a little bit bigger i think it's the common size of hard...
the degree to which one is serious or grave
Insane
01:02:459 - move nope.
01:13:859 (1)～（4）square or oblong nope, current one is following the pitch.
good luck
Lapis Aoki wrote:
Hey Rin~
[Easy]
01:31:859 -Normal whistle. i can understand that but personally, that sound is too annoying for me so i only use it in rare cases.
01:34:559 -Slider under the note. in fact the sound is not really accurate so i'm trying to avoid.
01:39:359 -^ ^
[Normal]
00:55:259 -Make the slider till 00:56:159 i may think about it later, your opinion is right in this part, but the current one seems playing better.
00:56:459 -Add a note.
00:58:859 -Make the slider till 00:59:759
01:00:059 -Add a note. same.
01:21:959 -^ i'm a bit afraid it would be too hard (cause i probably won't move it)
01:31:859 -Normal whistle. same as Easy.
01:34:259 -Make the slider long till 01:35:459 trying to follow the vocal.
01:36:659 -Normal whistle.
01:39:059 -Remove that circle and add a slider till 01:39:959And yet these other insane diff's aren't submitted, I'll mod them when they're submitted.
Well actually, I can't mod maps that are really fastbut I can mod somebut anyways, GL ~ !
General
sad that no more Rin diff name here.. also a gap between Easy and Normal is a bit huge. I think it's because Normal diff is a bit harder.
Normal
01:11:159 (4) - move a bit left apart from 01:10:559 (3) - ?
I feel this Normal a bit harder but that should be fine!
pieguy's Hard
01:33:059 (1,2,3,4) - shouldn't this be 1/3 according to somewhere you follow here 01:37:859 (3,4,5,1) - ?
02:09:959 (1) - a slider under triplet like this might be a bit hard for Hard diff players because they might alternate wrongly and get a miss easily on 02:09:959 (1) -
It would be better if you could unstack between 02:09:659 (5,1) - .
02:28:859 (5,1) - similar to above ^
Insane
nothing to say
nouk's Insane
All kiai part volume should be 80% instead of 90%.. It's way too loud when the part before kiai uses only 50% and then suddenly goes 90% with normal-hit
Skystar's Extra
02:29:309 (2) - I don't know why I am suggesting this lol but... NC here would be better (not nc spam at all) when you can see that it is similar to
02:30:059 (3,4,5) - , 02:34:859 (2,3,4) - where they are 1/4 beat while this new combo suggestion is 1/2 beat.
RLQuillab Insane
02:37:859 (1,2,3,4,5) - trolling part D:
I see Garven is currently working on it so I will not distract.
sad that no more Rin diff name here.. also a gap between Easy and Normal is a bit huge. I think it's because Normal diff is a bit harder.
Normal
01:11:159 (4) - move a bit left apart from 01:10:559 (3) - ?
I feel this Normal a bit harder but that should be fine!
pieguy's Hard
01:33:059 (1,2,3,4) - shouldn't this be 1/3 according to somewhere you follow here 01:37:859 (3,4,5,1) - ?
02:09:959 (1) - a slider under triplet like this might be a bit hard for Hard diff players because they might alternate wrongly and get a miss easily on 02:09:959 (1) -
It would be better if you could unstack between 02:09:659 (5,1) - .
02:28:859 (5,1) - similar to above ^
Insane
nothing to say
nouk's Insane
All kiai part volume should be 80% instead of 90%.. It's way too loud when the part before kiai uses only 50% and then suddenly goes 90% with normal-hit
Skystar's Extra
02:29:309 (2) - I don't know why I am suggesting this lol but... NC here would be better (not nc spam at all) when you can see that it is similar to
02:30:059 (3,4,5) - , 02:34:859 (2,3,4) - where they are 1/4 beat while this new combo suggestion is 1/2 beat.
RLQuillab Insane
02:37:859 (1,2,3,4,5) - trolling part D:
I see Garven is currently working on it so I will not distract.
Goodbye all Rin diffs
If you think you can move this forward without me, feel free Frosty. Now that Christmas is over, it's a lot harder for me to mod these harder map sets. I'll try and continue when I can, but it's slow going, sorry Rin.
Lemme see what's going on here
Kodora
thanks Rin for fixing ts8zs's mod. i would do the same as you did lolGarven wrote:
[Nouk]
00:45:359 (1) - This would flow better if the kink was made earlier. Right now it's a big stab against your previous curved flow and it feels wrong. Fixed!
00:46:109 (4,5) - Ctrl + g on these would also help towards the flow Fixed!
01:25:859 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Erm, why sliders? They are clearly meant to be single notes. Fixed!
01:31:109 - And after all that following of the piano, missing this beat is a crime. Fixed!
01:31:559 (1) - Awkward spinner. Map through it or start it at 01:31:859 - so it matches the much better spinner at 01:36:659 (1) - Fixed!
01:38:459 (2,3) - The rhythm is completely wrong on these. Use 1/2 rhythms to match the music. Fixed!
01:43:559 (6) - End this at 01:43:659 - and give it a more audible end so that you can feel that it's ending with the drum part I don't get it, leave the way it is
01:46:259 (1,2,3) - Slider. Slider. Circle. What. Use circles for better impact for under-mapping like this. Fixed!
02:09:059 (1,7,1) - At least line the end of the long slider up with these two stacked notes. It is lined up?
02:23:459 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - These silenced slider ends are just bad. Not only are they completely off rhythm, when they finally do sync up, you keep them silent anyway so it ends up leaving me wondering what exactly you were trying to accomplish with the music. The best part is that you decided to do a different incorrect rhythm than at 01:25:859 (1) - Fixed!
02:33:059 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Yay, you've at least demonstrated that you are aware of the rhythm of the song and are capable of mapping it. Why aren't you doing this for the rest of the map though? Sorry. Fixed all mistakes
also sorry for taking too long to look at this please accept my apologies
here: http://puu.sh/6ki4N.osu
me and rlc really need a better diff name
Topic Starter
looooooooooool well give me oneNyquill wrote:
me and rlc really need a better diff name
its very difficult to be creative with naming
NyquRiLCola
Hmm, it seems like that I should explain something here.
I'm honestly confused of why would you say that was a disaster as a map. Like, calling a map is bad but which I don't think it is. The Skystar diff in this mapset was literally one of my best maps, which was told from a majority of people, including Rin for sure or else he would not accept it into the mapset.
In fact, the map was mapped in 2012. I still remember that, I created my own set for this song after getting my first ranked and after looking in Rin's kodoku egoism (which let me know who Rohi is). And after it's finished, I once showed it to Rin for judging the quality like, I was not sure if I did it good or not. Rin had a quick look through it then, and he told me that the map was pretty good and I would be a potential mapper if I could keep mapping things as good as it.
Turn into 2013, Rin created his set for it as well. As I have no time to rank my own set, I just left my diff to Rin as a guest diff as you can see here. Before that, I have done remapping some parts that I thought they're bad and improvable. You can just compare it with my own set and see how they're different from each other.
Hope you can understand it Garven! I'd like to appreciate it if it's the truth, but I really don't see what's bad as you said there.
Besides, due to some reasons, I need to be afk since tomorrow to February, so I think I'm not able to remap the entire map now...
I'm honestly confused of why would you say that was a disaster as a map. Like, calling a map is bad but which I don't think it is. The Skystar diff in this mapset was literally one of my best maps, which was told from a majority of people, including Rin for sure or else he would not accept it into the mapset.
In fact, the map was mapped in 2012. I still remember that, I created my own set for this song after getting my first ranked and after looking in Rin's kodoku egoism (which let me know who Rohi is). And after it's finished, I once showed it to Rin for judging the quality like, I was not sure if I did it good or not. Rin had a quick look through it then, and he told me that the map was pretty good and I would be a potential mapper if I could keep mapping things as good as it.
Turn into 2013, Rin created his set for it as well. As I have no time to rank my own set, I just left my diff to Rin as a guest diff as you can see here. Before that, I have done remapping some parts that I thought they're bad and improvable. You can just compare it with my own set and see how they're different from each other.
Hope you can understand it Garven! I'd like to appreciate it if it's the truth, but I really don't see what's bad as you said there.
Besides, due to some reasons, I need to be afk since tomorrow to February, so I think I'm not able to remap the entire map now...
Perhaps when you return you can take a look and see what I'm talking about, but here's a quick synopsis of the intro: There is almost zero consistency through this, even though the music itself doesn't have any hint of changes to that degree of intensity. You use giant jumps then near-spacing with no musical cue at all and change your rhythm use all over. Stack use is random at best. The flow is spastic in a sense that I have no idea where I should be going. I'm reading circles instead of feeling and enjoying the map. It's not something that I would promote for ranking. Perhaps this did have potential back when it was first submitted, but you've obviously grown beyond it - this is no where near the mapping I saw in SAVIOR OF SONG in terms of enjoyability and playability, so I know you can do better than this.
lol This skystar is quite fine for me, idk how it is going to other players though,
I don't think remapping is so necessary. It may be too strict with yuko
Hope that it could be ranked soon o/
I don't think remapping is so necessary. It may be too strict with yuko
Hope that it could be ranked soon o/
Topic Starter
Garven wrote:
[General]
Tick rate 2 fits this song best
[Easy]
00:33:659 (1,2,3) - I'm kind of wary of the flow here since this is an Easy diff. Going back after the launch from the repeat slider feels a bit odd after 00:28:859 (1,2) - and the rest of your instances of this rhythm seem to have not nearly as much of a cut backwards. it's there because the vocal goes a really high pitch and the other parts are not.
00:55:259 (1,1) - This overlap is pretty ugly
01:07:859 (1,1,1,1,1) - Yeah, everyone does the new combo spam here across the maps, but it feels too frequent with the number of hit objects. It'd look a lot better in sets of twos. seems fine.
01:17:459 (1,1,1,1,1) - etc. won't bother pointing the rest out ^
02:38:459 - Not ending with the rest of the maps? i think compared to a tough part at the end (as it's an Easy), better to just stop it...
..well I started at least.
I'm really perplexed over the timing at the start. Why that mass of red lines?
Anyway, I'll continue later when I can.
Edit:
[Normal]
00:27:959 (3,4,5,6,1) - This looks pretty intimidating for a Normal. It's that really low AR I'm thinking (feels way slow compared to the slider speed, but the distance snap speed is super-low so it's kind of unbalanced-feeling.) Already fixed in previous mods.
01:40:259 (1) - The only thing I can hear on this is the slider tick q: increased the volume
01:44:459 (2,3) - This might be a bit tough for a Normal difficulty. Try to avoid stacking under slider ends - especially when you're using a different rhythm that's not even in the song. i still think i need that (it's in the song btw...)
01:55:559 (1,1,1,1,1) - Strange that you do the new combo spam here but not during the kiai parts that are the same. the sliders in kiai are in consistent shape/flow so i simply think no new combo will looks better = =
02:23:459 (1,1) - This is pretty iffy for a Normal too. It'd probably read a lot better if you only set a circle at 02:24:959 - instead of having a slider at 02:24:659 (1) - . but wouldn't that be musically incorrect..?
02:27:659 (5,6,1) - And again with the weird 1/2 spacing. I recommend against it - when you have the same rhythm but different spacing in the next pattern at 02:29:159 (4,1) -
02:33:059 (1,1) - Same thing as before
02:35:159 (3,4,1) - And the 1/2 spacing changes. This is a Normal! eh well, in all 1/2 parts with 2 or more circles, i use a close spacing, while when it's slider-circle or slider-slider, the spacing is larger. It's to prevent average player to move too frequently when continuously hitting circles, personally i think it's in fact easier.
[Hard]
00:27:959 (4,1) - This jump doesn't read very well. Have the curve of the slider move towards the 1. Maybe also make the jump less intense. i changed in another way.
01:21:059 (1,2) - Kind of a weird spot for a jump. If you made it more similar to what you did with 01:11:459 (1,2) - it would read and play a lot better. changed.
01:27:059 (1) - This slowdown plays poorly. Breaks the pacing you've had up to this point. i'm fine with that at least..
01:30:809 (2,3,1,2) - This jump into ridiculously slow velocity is also pretty bad pacing. I'd have larger spacing between 01:31:559 (1,2) - so you don't have the identical spacing from the previous combos and it transitions better to this slow part. (I also disagree with slowing down to such a drastic amount, but eh) ok.
01:52:259 (3) - Wrong rhythm from what i understand, pieguy is not trying to follow the vocal (it's all the way 3/2+1/2 in fact.
02:04:259 (1) - Slider track is audible fixed.
02:36:659 (1) - Wow this feels so badly placed. I guess you wanted to put a spinner somewhere, but it really breaks your pacing.
Eh, overall this map felt like it was trying too hard to suppress itself from being a low-level Insane. It's quite a big jump up from the Normal in difficulty as well. dunno..
I'll continue later. Not sure where to start since there are 3 insanes? Shouldn't one of these be an extra as well?
[Rin]
01:09:059 (3,1) - This felt waaay too close after the other three sets of jumps. it should be ok... anyway the main idea is still start a new part.
01:30:659 (1,1,1) - You followed the piano part fairly strongly up until this transition point. The sliders just feel gimmicky rather than a good translation of the phrase though. For example, the last slider at 01:31:259 (1) - In the music, it's more coming to a stop. Everything turns off waiting for the vocal to kick in again. But your' having the player keep moving anyway with this last slider. Just feels wrong against the song. my opinion is there's 3 strong drum sounds, it's in fact more noticable than the piano's stop (as a translation part), also the slider's are in a tiny slow down, it would help players to get in the new part better.
01:58:859 (2,3,4,5) - I didn't get why you suddenly put jumps in here. Not really anything new in the song to emphasize until 01:59:459 - well it's just a way to increase the spacing gradually (i have no really good idea how to do it with common spacing)
02:16:559 (1,2) - Sudden tiny spacing aaaaaa ._.
Pretty fun map here, except for the weird spacing things I pointed out above.
Frostmourne wrote:
General
sad that no more Rin diff name here.. also a gap between Easy and Normal is a bit huge. I think it's because Normal diff is a bit harder. it seems my maps tend to be like that orz.
Normal
01:11:159 (4) - move a bit left apart from 01:10:559 (3) - ? done.
I feel this Normal a bit harder but that should be fine!
pieguy's Hard
01:33:059 (1,2,3,4) - shouldn't this be 1/3 according to somewhere you follow here 01:37:859 (3,4,5,1) - ? ah yep, it's wrong.
02:09:959 (1) - a slider under triplet like this might be a bit hard for Hard diff players because they might alternate wrongly and get a miss easily on 02:09:959 (1) -
It would be better if you could unstack between 02:09:659 (5,1) - . consider this is used a lot in this diff i think it should be okay...
02:28:859 (5,1) - similar to above ^
Insane
nothing to say
nouk's Insane
All kiai part volume should be 80% instead of 90%.. It's way too loud when the part before kiai uses only 50% and then suddenly goes 90% with normal-hit
This map learned me to play with feeling instead of reading circles..Garven wrote:
Perhaps when you return you can take a look and see what I'm talking about, but here's a quick synopsis of the intro: There is almost zero consistency through this, even though the music itself doesn't have any hint of changes to that degree of intensity. You use giant jumps then near-spacing with no musical cue at all and change your rhythm use all over. Stack use is random at best. The flow is spastic in a sense that I have no idea where I should be going. I'm reading circles instead of feeling and enjoying the map. It's not something that I would promote for ranking. Perhaps this did have potential back when it was first submitted, but you've obviously grown beyond it - this is no where near the mapping I saw in SAVIOR OF SONG in terms of enjoyability and playability, so I know you can do better than this.
(While I can't do it for SAVIOR OF SONG though D: )
Just dropping this here: your 3/4 sections are supposed to be 6/4 instead.
Topic Starter
fixed.those wrote:
Just dropping this here: your 3/4 sections are supposed to be 6/4 instead.
How about NyquilLC?
yo, from #modreqs (no kds)
[Easy]
[RLQuillab Insane]
[Nouk's Insane]
[Insane]will mod other diffs soon done xD
[Easy]
- 01:18:059 (1,1,1,1) - it isn't really good idea spamming NCs on low diffs (well but if you really want to keep this delete some NCs at lesat like 02:05:459 (1,2,1,2) - here)
- 01:56:459 (1,1,1,1) - ^
- 02:15:659 (1,1,1,1) - ^
- uncheck wide screen support? it doesn't needed
- 01:34:259 (3) - hmm try adding a repeat here? fits nice and less empty
- 02:06:359 (3) - off screen
- 02:38:159 (1) - delete NC? it seems unnecessary
- 00:57:059 - i think this section is inappropriate part for increasing SV, previous vocal parts are still sustained, it would be much better if 00:58:859 - this part has x0.8 SV instead
- 01:31:109 (3) - how about extending this slider by 1/1 and delete repeat? it has better fit with the music
- 01:52:259 (3) - 3/4 slider feels kinda awkward imo, i recommend using two 1/2 sliders insead
- 00:14:759 (2) - same opinion with RLQuillab Insane
- 01:57:959 (1) - um maybe missed whistle on start?
- 02:19:709 (1,1) - adding claps for consistency? and those fit quite well
[RLQuillab Insane]
- lol that diff name
- 00:14:759 (2) - i'm not sure if it's acceptable, try chagning it into 2 notes fo r sure? http://puu.sh/6FENO.jpg
- 00:30:884 (6) - accroding to the music, you'd better to move this note to 00:30:734 - here to fit with hat sound
- 01:42:659 (1) - what about adding clap on end? current one feels too empty imo (on 01:45:059 (1) - here too)
- 01:45:659 (3) - this slider's end should be snapped on 1/6 beat 01:46:059 - here
[Nouk's Insane]
- missing video file?
- 00:14:926 (3) - i have no idae why you snapped this note on 1/16 beat, this should be snapped on previous white tick to have perfect match with the music (i mean on the red line)
- 00:15:051 (4) - maybe you missed clap on start?
- 00:35:759 (11) - inappropriate for accelerating imo, since this section has high ptich vocal sound, i think this part doesn't good place for SV changes, just giving a jump works much better (not only here but also all of similar parts for example like 00:17:759 (1) - here and 00:39:959 (7,8) - here etc.)
- 01:02:459 - try using NC:3 hitsound here,this sounds better
- 01:07:259 (1) - how about adding finish here?
- 01:16:859 (1,1) - swap NC for consistency
- 01:34:859 (1,3) - ^
- 01:38:459 (2,3) - i highly recommed using 4/6 slider here because this part is many vocal sounds, not drum or some instruments
- 01:43:259 (5,6) - but in this part, all of your objects snapped on drum sound but these aren't, so try deleting 01:43:559 (6) - this slider and changing 01:43:259 (5) - this slider into a note instead. or if you really wanna keep this, adding a note 01:43:559 (6) - here is also nice
- 02:08:159 (1) - delete NC for consistency
- 02:34:259 (3,1) - isn't it better for play if you reverse these sliders each?
- 02:28:559 (1,1) - delete these NCs, they don't needed
- 02:33:859 (1,3) - swap NC, 02:33:859 (1) - this part is still 1/6 beat actually.
placement itself is quite good but hitsounds are (sorry ;_;) totally messed up orz, could you try to arrange some claps? like adding them consistently
[Insane]
- 00:17:759 (6) - the clap sound on this slider end isn't audible enough imo, how about deleting clap on the end??
- 00:33:359 (1) - delete NC for consistency? and it doesn't really needed
- 00:54:809 (4,5,6) - it would be much more funny if you give more distances rahther than stack
awesome diff as always