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Kono Naka ni Hitori, Imouto ga Iru! Cast - Heavenly Lover (T

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P A N
2,346 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
P A N
ahhh thanks :3
scanter
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Joined July 2012
scanter
sry. my mod quality is a little bad. in slump :< anyway, o3o/

General

  1. Offset +2 (665)
  2. Your BG size is 16:9. (1366x768) but, your video is 4:3 (640x480) so, I recommend change to wide resolution. (like 854x480) or if you're find 4:3 bg, substitute it.

Easy

  1. In this bpm, HP +1 and CS +1 will be better.
  2. 00:49:038 (2) - More blanket this? move the slider midpoint to x:36, y:264 and endpoint to x:68, y:304. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/782777
  3. 01:17:538 (1) - HP bar little touched. move to better place.


Betsu's Normal

  1. 00:25:413 (2) - Players might confuse this overlap. how about this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/782131
  2. 00:58:788 - Add 1 circle? if so, turn down volume.
  3. 01:03:475 (3,4,5) - Rhythm suggestion. you've started with consistent 1/1 rhythm slider shapes. This may be a little get better. http://puu.sh/33Me3.jpg
  4. 01:07:600 (5) - Makes curve like number 4. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/782133
  5. 01:09:475 (4) - Add finish on 01:09:475 and 01:09:850 and 01:10:225 It may give a sense of rhythm alive
  6. 01:10:600 - If you're follow this, Add finish this point.
  7. 01:26:725 (2,3) - Same reason. add finish every point.

Xinely's Hard

  1. 00:10:975 (4,1,2) - Rhythm is a little strange. how about this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/782114
    This is code.
    SPOILER
    144,212,10975,6,0,P|204:260|296:240,1,150
    348,248,11538,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    390,189,11725,2,0,P|424:208|460:208,1,75,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    329,129,12100,2,0,P|296:148|260:148,1,75,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    336,56,12475,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  2. 00:57:475 (5,1) - Reverse NC. sound was changed since 00:57:475 here.
  3. 01:27:475 (3) - NC?

Insane

  1. 00:06:288 (8) - Rhythm is a little strange. how about add 2 circles? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/781992
  2. 00:15:663 (1) - Ctrl + G. stack is not suitable this sound.
  3. 00:26:913 (6,7,8,9,1) - A little bad overlap about 00:27:475 (9) this circle. I recommend this star shapes http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/782017
    This is code.
    SPOILER
    89,226,26913,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    44,62,27100,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    176,164,27288,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    9,160,27475,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    150,67,27663,5,0,0:0:0:0:
  4. 00:45:100 (1) - Really too hard to play this anti-jump. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/782022 this is more better.
  5. 00:57:475 (1) - It has unique sound. It would be better to jump. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/782819
    This is code.
    SPOILER
    176,238,56350,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    335,145,56538,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    176,146,56725,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    335,237,56913,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    256,100,57100,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    256,283,57288,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    87,196,57475,6,0,P|92:284|128:320,1,142.500005435944,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  6. 00:58:788 (5,6,7,8,1) - Don't you think this stream is too hard? how about reduce it?
  7. 01:06:475 (4,5) - Suddenly jump. how about this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/782043
    This is code.
    SPOILER
    236,200,66100,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    64,360,66288,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    56,144,66475,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    240,304,66663,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    60,248,66850,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  8. 01:13:225 (5) - Ctrl + G?. makes more perfect symmetry.
  9. 01:15:475 (3) - ^?
  10. 01:26:163 (1,2,3,4,5) - Really bad pattern before song's end. look at this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/782056
    This is code.
    SPOILER
    84,192,86163,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    428,192,86725,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    428,192,86913,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    256,20,87475,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    256,364,87850,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    256,364,88038,1,0,0:0:0:0:

Hinsvar's Lover

  1. 00:09:663 (1) - Ctrl + G. it has powerful sound. jump will more better.
  2. 00:16:975 (6) - Move to x: 196, y: 236? moving will better.
  3. 00:19:225 (2,3,4) - My opinion, this stack is not good. sound is too different. how about this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/781978
  4. 01:26:913 (3) - Ctrl + G? makes more perfect symmetry.
  5. 01:28:038 (2) - NC?
That's all :D GL ;)
P A N
2,346 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
P A N

scanter wrote:

sry. my mod quality is a little bad. in slump :< anyway, o3o/

General

  1. Offset +2 (665)
  2. Your BG size is 16:9. (1366x768) but, your video is 4:3 (640x480) so, I recommend change to wide resolution. (like 854x480) or if you're find 4:3 bg, substitute it. will fix it soon >_>

Easy

  1. In this bpm, HP +1 and CS +1 will be better. will consider :3
  2. 00:49:038 (2) - More blanket this? move the slider midpoint to x:36, y:264 and endpoint to x:68, y:304. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/782777 ok
  3. 01:17:538 (1) - HP bar little touched. move to better place. ok


Insane

  1. 00:06:288 (8) - Rhythm is a little strange. how about add 2 circles? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/781992 hmm I like the current one :/
  2. 00:15:663 (1) - Ctrl + G. stack is not suitable this sound. ok
  3. 00:26:913 (6,7,8,9,1) - A little bad overlap about 00:27:475 (9) this circle. I recommend this star shapes http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/782017 ok
    This is code.
    SPOILER
    89,226,26913,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    44,62,27100,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    176,164,27288,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    9,160,27475,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    150,67,27663,5,0,0:0:0:0:
  4. 00:45:100 (1) - Really too hard to play this anti-jump. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/782022 this is more better. ok
  5. 00:57:475 (1) - It has unique sound. It would be better to jump. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/782819 ok
    This is code.
    SPOILER
    176,238,56350,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    335,145,56538,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    176,146,56725,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    335,237,56913,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    256,100,57100,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    256,283,57288,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    87,196,57475,6,0,P|92:284|128:320,1,142.500005435944,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  6. 00:58:788 (5,6,7,8,1) - Don't you think this stream is too hard? how about reduce it?
  7. 01:06:475 (4,5) - Suddenly jump. how about this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/782043 ok
    This is code.
    SPOILER
    236,200,66100,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    64,360,66288,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    56,144,66475,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    240,304,66663,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    60,248,66850,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  8. 01:13:225 (5) - Ctrl + G?. makes more perfect symmetry. no, i think the cursor will not smooth as current one
  9. 01:15:475 (3) - ^? ^
  10. 01:26:163 (1,2,3,4,5) - Really bad pattern before song's end. look at this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/782056 ok
    This is code.
    SPOILER
    84,192,86163,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    428,192,86725,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    428,192,86913,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    256,20,87475,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    256,364,87850,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    256,364,88038,1,0,0:0:0:0:
That's all :D GL ;)
thanks so much scanter ^0^
Kodora
Kodora
Hello, sorry for delay

[General]

Nothing

[Easy]

Not really fun with such huge circles, it can be considered as unreadable, so better use cs 3 for me
HP Drain +1 for better balance between diffs

00:02:913 (3) - add whistle to beginning of slider
00:09:288 (3) - NC should begins here follow pattern, not at 00:09:663 (1) -
00:12:663 (1) - hitfinish to the beginning of slider
00:18:663 (1) - ^
00:28:788 - add note here, feels so empty
00:32:538 (2) - raplace all claps here with whistles
00:55:788 (2) - dont really like those rhytm, you missed strong part with spinner. try this:

SPOILER

01:22:413 (2) - NC should begins here, not at 01:23:163 (1) - follow vocals

[Betsu's Normal]

Not really fun with such huge circles, it can be considered as unreadable, so better use cs 4 for me

00:23:913 (5,2) - dont stack them please, it may be too hard for a normal diff
00:28:788 (4) - NC here
00:46:788 (2,4) - claps here
00:48:663 (1) - clap to the end of slider
00:49:975 (3) - whistle to beginning of slider

ending have no hs, it was planned? oh well, add some whistles at least, you begin it so good but end it so bad.

[Xinely's Hard]

00:04:975 (4) - replace it with slider, guitar sounds much more stronger here:

SPOILER

00:08:069 (1) - end this spinner at 00:09:288 -
00:09:663 - map this part, spinner placed strongly against rhytm for now
00:27:288 (5) - better rhytm suggestion:

SPOILER

00:30:288 (4) - nc begins here, not at 00:30:663 (1) -
00:31:788 (1,2,3) - use more spacing between those notes, it may confuse as hell
00:33:663 (1) - why nc here? this slider is following lyrics, remove it, its unnesessary.
00:34:788 (3) - NC begins here
00:46:975 (1) - remove nc
00:47:913 (4) - NC should begins here, not at 00:48:663 (1) -
00:53:163 (1) - remove nc
00:54:100 (3) - NC should begins here, not at 00:54:475 (1) -
00:58:788 (4) - NC should begins here, not at 00:59:163 (1) -
01:06:475 (1) - remove nc
01:15:288 (3) - NC should begins here, not at 01:15:475 (1) -

[Insane]

AR & OD +1 because you use too huge jumps what too hard to read with ar 8

00:12:663 (1) - I'd stack it with beginning of 00:12:288 (8) - (just suggestion)
00:26:913 (6) - NC here follow new pattern
00:40:788 (4) - NC begins here follow lyrics
00:45:663 (4) - Better rhytm suggestion:
SPOILER

00:47:913 (5) - NC begins here, not at 00:48:663 (1) - follow lyrics
00:49:413 (2) - NC begins here, not at 00:48:663 (1) -
00:50:725 (6) - Better rhytm suggestion:

SPOILER

00:56:350 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Try to make perfect 5-corner star here, it will looks better
00:58:788 (5) - begin nc here, not at 00:59:163 (1) -
00:58:788 (5,6,7,8) - spacing at this stream is just jysb and will make people rage, decrease it to x0.6, fits much better for me
01:04:788 (5) - better rhytm suggestion:

SPOILER

01:06:100 (3,4,5,6,7) - very, very, very dislike this pattern, try to make something symmetrial here
01:07:038 (7) - NC here
01:13:788 (6) - Short this slider to 01:13:975 - and add notes at 01:14:069 - and 01:14:163 -
01:16:788 (6) - ^ (just keep consistency while adding triples)
01:19:319 - - ADD note
01:28:225 (1) - whistle here

Poke me when i will be online, i want discuss some hs here (too much to write here)

[Hinsvar's Lover]

Hins, you're cool, love this diff, but hs needs more work

00:11:725 (3) - whistle to beginning of slider
00:12:100 (4) - remove whistle
00:13:225 (3) - whistle to beginning of slider & remove from end
00:13:600 (4) - whistle to beginning of slider
00:16:225 (4) - whistle to beginning of slider & remove from end
00:16:225 (4,5) - to both - whistles to the beginning
00:26:725 (2) - add whistle
00:41:163 (1) - Remove NC from here & place to 00:42:100 (2) -
00:44:163 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - just placement suggestion:

SPOILER

00:58:413 (1) - rhytm suggestion (dont forget to fix all whistles & slowdowns here if you will apply this)

SPOILER

01:02:069 - add note
01:05:069 - ^
01:05:444 - remove note, its unnesessary
01:11:069 - add note
01:17:069 - ^
01:17:819 - remove note

will be glad to talk with you IRC too, diff is good overral, but hitsounds needs more work.

Good luck + star for you because i'm too late.
P A N
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Topic Starter
P A N
thanks for mod :D

FIX:
Insane
Easy
Hard
Normal
All diff offset change to 665
Last edited by P A N , edited 1 time in total.
xHappy-
443 posts
Joined May 2012
xHappy-
offset : 619
maybe very better ;)
P A N
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Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
P A N

Peeoil555 wrote:

offset : 619
maybe very better ;)
ehh i think 665 is fine :|
Hinsvar
osu! Alumni
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Joined December 2011
Hinsvar

Kodora wrote:

[Hinsvar's Lover]

Hins, you're cool, love this diff, but hs needs more work ok...

00:11:725 (3) - whistle to beginning of slider The whistle sounds... weird. I don't know why; it just doesn't click. Well, added one and removed the whistle at the end.
00:12:100 (4) - remove whistle There isn't any whistle here.
00:13:225 (3) - whistle to beginning of slider & remove from end Done.
00:13:600 (4) - whistle to beginning of slider ^
00:16:225 (4) - whistle to beginning of slider & remove from end ^
00:16:225 (4,5) - to both - whistles to the beginning ^
00:26:725 (2) - add whistle ^
00:41:163 (1) - Remove NC from here & place to 00:42:100 (2) - ...Why? It's (1) that starts on a new stanza...
00:44:163 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - just placement suggestion: The second (1,2) is intentionally placed like that to follow how the music goes here.

SPOILER

00:58:413 (1) - rhytm suggestion (dont forget to fix all whistles & slowdowns here if you will apply this) ...No I guess. Ending a slider on the beginning of a new stanza just won't do, and it's not really fitting with the instruments anyway.

SPOILER

01:02:069 - add note I'm okay with what I have now. Yes, that one's naturally mappable, but won't try it here I guess.
01:05:069 - ^ ^
01:05:444 - remove note, its unnesessary I heard an instrument being played (although kinda faint) on the background.
01:11:069 - add note Not necessary, I think.
01:17:069 - ^ ^
01:17:819 - remove note Same as 01:05:444.

will be glad to talk with you IRC too, diff is good overral, but hitsounds needs more work. oh lol
Thanks for modding ;)

http://puu.sh/35QKp.osu
P A N
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Topic Starter
P A N
all diff updated
[Luanny]
8,248 posts
Joined April 2011
[Luanny]
m4m~ https://osu.ppy.sh/s/96059

Hello Hinsvar |:3/ nothing for your diff today~

[Insane]

00:11:165 (5) - Just a little suggestion, I'd pprefer this note here, flows better imo
SPOILER
00:20:165 (1) - I think this wasn't the best place to start changing the spacing. Make this note at least 1.0 spacing and let the rest be. The first two notes with normal spacing and the 3rd with increased spacing looks weird. Another option is to increase spacing for 00:19:790 (4,5) - instead
00:32:915 (6,7,8) - unstack the 1/4 notes and make them with 0.5 spacing. This stack breaks the flow because the player have to stop from a circular movement
SPOILER

[Xyneli's Hard]

00:04:040 (2) - make this a curve
SPOILER
00:12:102 (4) - suggestion: delete this slider, make 00:11:727 (3) - a reverse and add a note here 00:12:290 - . The jump for (4) is really weird. This suggestion also fits more with the song
01:07:040 (2,3) - make a curve
SPOILER

[Betsu's Normal]

00:19:790 (2,3,4) - Just saying I liked it~
Nothing for this diff

[Easy]

00:19:790 (2,3,4) - a bit nazi but

looks useless but the difference is visible here, please fix this

Nothing here~

Good luck
P A N
2,346 posts
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Topic Starter
P A N

[Luanny] wrote:

m4m~ https://osu.ppy.sh/s/96059

[Insane]

00:11:165 (5) - Just a little suggestion, I'd pprefer this note here, flows better imo
SPOILER
00:20:165 (1) - I think this wasn't the best place to start changing the spacing. Make this note at least 1.0 spacing and let the rest be. The first two notes with normal spacing and the 3rd with increased spacing looks weird. Another option is to increase spacing for 00:19:790 (4,5) - instead
00:32:915 (6,7,8) - unstack the 1/4 notes and make them with 0.5 spacing. This stack breaks the flow because the player have to stop from a circular movement
SPOILER

[Easy]

00:19:790 (2,3,4) - a bit nazi but

looks useless but the difference is visible here, please fix this

Nothing here~

Good luck
thanks mod Insane Easy updated
KokoroStudiox3
1,272 posts
Joined April 2011
KokoroStudiox3
Kiai Inconsistency in Kiai Times:
- [Betsu's Normal] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:59:165, ends on 01:11:071
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:11:165, ends on 01:26:165

- [Easy] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:59:165, ends on 01:11:071
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:11:165, ends on 01:26:165

- [Hinsvar's Lover] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:59:165, ends on 01:11:071
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:11:165, ends on 01:29:540

- [Insane] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:59:165, ends on 01:11:071
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:11:165, ends on 01:26:165

- [Xinely's Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:59:165, ends on 01:11:071
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:11:165, ends on 01:26:165

Tags - Consider adding "Betsu" to all of your tags

[Normal]
00:31:227 - add note ?
00:03:665 (1) - move to 1 grid left
BeatofIke
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Joined September 2011
BeatofIke
Have a star k bye!
P A N
2,346 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
P A N

BeatofIke wrote:

Have a star k bye!
omg thanks BeatofIke :D
Xinely
5,014 posts
Joined April 2012
Xinely
@Luanny : fix all expect the last one
also another new of my name LOL

given update to PAN in game
P A N
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Topic Starter
P A N
yea all updated (mean the diff that luanny mod :3)

edit: woops also fix the kial time on eLtigreXXx's mod
@hinsvar if you dont want to change the kial time to same as other diff please tell me i will fix it.
Hinsvar
osu! Alumni
3,789 posts
Joined December 2011
Hinsvar
I'm fine with the new kiai time; don't worry :P

Also, forgot to check scanter's mod. Stupid me.

scanter wrote:

Hinsvar's Lover

  1. 00:09:663 (1) - Ctrl + G. it has powerful sound. jump will more better. Done.
  2. 00:16:975 (6) - Move to x: 196, y: 236? moving will better. It will completely ruin the pattern here.
  3. 00:19:225 (2,3,4) - My opinion, this stack is not good. sound is too different. how about this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/781978 The current pattern I have fits the song more, I believe...
  4. 01:26:913 (3) - Ctrl + G? makes more perfect symmetry. Intentional. The jump between 01:26:915 (3,1) will feel weird if I do that, anyway.
  5. 01:28:038 (2) - NC? Why should I? I don't see any reason for that.
Thanks for modding ;)

http://puu.sh/37q3T.osu
P A N
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Topic Starter
P A N
All diff UPDATED!!!! HOORAYYY :D
Guy
Former osu! Champion: 2014
2,049 posts
Joined March 2009
Guy
Hi! from my m4m queue~

Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.


[General]
  1. Almost fine.
[Hinsvar's Lover]
  1. 01:02:540 (2) - Why you used soft hit-clap? lol Please change normal hit-clap.

    SV2,40.. very fast :P
[Insane]
  1. 00:16:790 (4) - Ctrl+G? ofcourse up to you.
  2. 00:50:727 (7) - remove finish of slider start. not fitting the song for me.
  3. 01:19:790 (5) - add slider instead note. like this.
    SPOILER

[Xinely's Hard]
  1. 01:17:540 (2) - maybe you forgot here. add clap of slider start and end.

[Betsu's Normal]
  1. 00:15:665 (1) - hm,i think that not fitting finish in the song. remove it?
  2. 00:22:790 (3,4,5) - this place fit the vocal line. like this rhythm?

  3. 00:27:477 (1) - remove finish.
  4. 00:39:665 (1) - ^

[Easy]
  1. hm, I think that HP1 is low in Easy diff. If you have not special reason, should be change HP+1.
  2. 01:09:290 (1) - add finish of slider end. (like a 01:15:290 (2) - here)
  3. 01:20:540 - 01:21:290 - add clap of tick?
  4. 01:23:165 (3) - same suggestion above.
shoot my star!
Good luck :)
P A N
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Topic Starter
P A N
thanks Guy ><
I will back home and fix it.
_Azusa_
144 posts
Joined September 2010
_Azusa_
[General]

Still thinking artist is wrong...

Aritist is wrong, artist should be: Ishihara Kaori, Sakura Ayane, Taketatsu Ayana, Oogame Asuka & Hidaka Rina (石原夏織 , 佐倉綾音, 竹達彩奈, 大亀あすか & 日高里菜.)
Lantis official product site: http://lantis.jp/release-item2.php?id=a ... 2a7db43a41

says the same.

[Easy]

Can't find anything, i liked this diff ^^

[Normal]

01:14:165 (1,2,3,4,5,6): Pattern looks a little boring here, try this:

SPOILER

I think will be more fun like this.

[Hard]

00:07:977 (4): nazi - move this note to: x:400 y:216;
00:08:071 (1): Try end this spinner in 00:09:290, and add note in 00:09:655 and in 00:09:852.
00:37:977 (4): Stack this 2 notes works too, but i think this pattern can be better. I would substitute (4) into a 2/2 slider and add a note in 00:38:540.
SPOILER

[Insane]

00:15:290 (9,10,1,2,3,4,1): I think this pattern can be improved, try this suggestion:
SPOILER


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288,36,17165,5,0,0:0:0:0:

00:37:977: Add a note here? If you fix this add a note in 00:32:071 and stack with previous note.

[Extra]

The diff itself is good, but i think the sv is too high for this diff, i know is a extra insane diff but lower the sv a bit it's better imo.

The map is pretty good but i think needs more improvement...just a bit.

GL! :)
Last edited by _Azusa_ , edited 1 time in total.
P A N
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Topic Starter
P A N

azu-nyan14 wrote:

Posting here to don't forget about the mod :D

Will edit tomorrow.
hmm what do you mean?
did u mean the Artist? 0.0
Xinely
5,014 posts
Joined April 2012
Xinely

P A N wrote:

azu-nyan14 wrote:

Posting here to don't forget about the mod :D

Will edit tomorrow.
hmm what do you mean?
did u mean the Artist? 0.0
maybe azu-nyan want to mod it
reserved it and will mod tomorrow

also my update :3
http://puu.sh/37WVP.osu
P A N
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Topic Starter
P A N
hmm i see
@Xinely i will update your diff when im home :3
RikiH_
1,149 posts
Joined February 2011
RikiH_
Ohai, m4m!

General

There is a whistle on the final spinner, but it's not in all diffs. Put it in all diffs or remove it!

Insane

00:16:790 (4) - What about using ctrl+g here?
01:06:102 (2,3,4,5,6) - If I were you I'd rearrange these notes in order to make a star or someting like that (Like you did here 01:19:040 (1,2,3,4,5) )

Hinsvar's Lover

00:57:477 (1) - Maybe move last sliderpoint to 224|284, I'd prefer this symmetrical
01:02:915 (3) - Why so straight? I'd make this curved

Xinely's Hard

00:05:915 (3) - 304|336 is better maybe
00:49:977 (3) - A finish on the beginning is really necessary imo
00:51:477 (4,1,2) - imo a spacing like this here is really confusing and pretty useless :o
01:25:415 (3) - 3rd point to 200|100 maybe?

Betsu's Normal

00:51:477 (1) - Like this for a better flow?
01:14:540 (2) - The line you made with notes is too straight, move this note 1 or 2 grids up or down
01:23:165 (1,2,3,4) - This way flow much better imo
01:28:040 (1) - Add a note with finish and start the spinner 1/4 later?

Easy

00:47:540 (4) - 256|92 for a better flow
01:22:790 (2) - 428|212 for the same reason

_______________________________

Good map :P
Hinsvar
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Hinsvar

RikiH_ wrote:

Hinsvar's Lover

00:57:477 (1) - Maybe move last sliderpoint to 224|284, I'd prefer this symmetrical I don't, though. Making everything symmetrical is boring, don't you think?
01:02:915 (3) - Why so straight? I'd make this curved Same as above. The flow is still good this way, and curving every slider possible is just... idk, making less variance? lol
Thanks for modding anyway~ :D
P A N
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P A N
ok! fix about guy and RikiH_'s mod

updated!
zorefire
429 posts
Joined October 2012
zorefire
m4m has arrived
The background is a little bit under quality D:.
[Easy]
Perfect ❤ Complete :D.
[Normal]
  1. 00:03:665 (1) end point y:108
  2. 00:45:665 (1) move a little closer to before hit circle?
    [Hard]
    00:15:665 (1) rotate a little bit upward
    [Insane]
  3. maybe tiny stream here 00:04:977 (5)?
  4. 00:20:540 (2) a little bit to low move up a lill
Sorry my modd so small the map so gud
Yasora
2,702 posts
Joined May 2010
Yasora
0.0

Easy
  1. 00:05:540 (2) - maybe add whistle in reverse since you added one in 00:02:915 (3) - ?
  2. 00:33:665 (1) - move 1 grid down for consistent spacing and blanket (2)
  3. 00:52:790 (2,3,4,1) - try this code for more symmetry?
    380,144,52790,2,0,P|348:100|344:60,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    260,28,53540,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    180,72,53915,2,0,P|173:104|133:144,1,89.9999999999999,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    96,68,54665,6,0,P|44:144|80:216,1,180
Normal
  1. 00:10:040 (1) - I think this note is too fast for normal after spinner. change into circle and put in 00:10:415 -
  2. 00:28:977 (2) - add finish (soft) in beginning? the sounds like 00:27:477 (1) -
  3. 00:28:977 (2,3,4) - still in here, maybe make all these more symmetry like this? -> http://puu.sh/39lDJ.jpg
    156,336,28977,2,0,P|96:320|68:272,1,120,4|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    60,224,29540,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    104,140,29915,2,0,P|148:184|144:264,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  4. 00:30:665 (1) - also, this current spacing is too close i guess. check with ds?
  5. 00:49:977 (3,4,5,1,2) - this rhythm sounds little weird for me.. maybe delete all and try this one? http://puu.sh/39lTy.jpg 
    192,284,49977,2,0,P|216:220|196:168,2,120
    120,220,51102,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    180,88,51665,6,0,P|248:104|284:164,1,120,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    348,208,52415,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    380,300,52790,1,8,0:0:0:0:
  6. 01:14:540 (2,3) - move (2) into 184|264 and (3) 92|236 ? make the curve pattern just like 01:15:290 (4,5,6) -
Hard
  1. 00:03:290 (4) - whistle in here sounds more better instead in (1), follow the instrument in music
  2. 00:06:290 (4) - add whistle too in beginning
  3. 00:15:665 (1) - I guess the flow more be better if no jump in here.. just blanket (2) -> http://puu.sh/39mj6.jpg
  4. 00:19:415 (3) - sorry nazi, move 1 grid down?
  5. 00:26:915 (3) - remove whistle? make the rhythm duk-duk-tak lol
  6. 00:49:977 (3) - add finish in beginning
Insane
  1. 00:19:977 (5) - move 1 grid down? just make spacing same between (4) & (1)
  2. 00:25:415 (3) - add finish in beginning, since you added in (1) and (4)
  3. 01:22:415 (7) - maybe start new combo in here, remove 01:23:165 (1) - and add again in 01:23:727 (2) - ?
  4. seems more good if add some finish in some places: 01:26:165 (1) - 01:26:915 (2) - 01:27:477 (1) - 01:28:040 (2) -
Hinsvar's Insane
  1. 00:03:665 (1) - change whistle in beginning with custom whistle?
  2. 00:05:165 (1) - add custom whisle in beginning too, more consistent
  3. 00:09:477 (6) - remove this circle seems more epic just end in 00:08:915 (5) - o3o
  4. 00:21:665 (1) - change whistle into soft? I think the bell sound just like in 00:20:540 (3) -
  5. 01:02:540 (2) - I think using soft hitclap is weird.. use normal just like 00:59:540 (3) -
  6. 01:15:102 (2) - move 1 grid up so align with (1)?
  7. 01:28:040 (2) - add whistle
that's all~
cie hinsvar sama xinely xD
Hinsvar
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Hinsvar

Yasora wrote:

Hinsvar's Insane Lover plz
  1. 00:03:665 (1) - change whistle in beginning with custom whistle? Done.
  2. 00:05:165 (1) - add custom whisle in beginning too, more consistent ^
  3. 00:09:477 (6) - remove this circle seems more epic just end in 00:08:915 (5) - o3o Feels weird to suddenly have a 1/1 gap here orz
  4. 00:21:665 (1) - change whistle into soft? I think the bell sound just like in 00:20:540 (3) - Done.
  5. 01:02:540 (2) - I think using soft hitclap is weird.. use normal just like 00:59:540 (3) - ^
  6. 01:15:102 (2) - move 1 grid up so align with (1)? ^
  7. 01:28:040 (2) - add whistle The instrument doesn't indicate that it needs a whistle.
that's all~
cie hinsvar sama xinely xD Oh you~
Thanks for modding~

http://puu.sh/39AoU.osu
P A N
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P A N
thanks mod ><

Updated:
Insane
Easy
and Xinely & Hinsvar
Last edited by P A N , edited 1 time in total.
Xinely
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Xinely

Yasora wrote:

0.0

Moe Hard Moeee >////< *slapped
  1. 00:03:290 (4) - whistle in here sounds more better instead in (1), follow the instrument in music okay
  2. 00:06:290 (4) - add whistle too in beginning added
  3. 00:15:665 (1) - I guess the flow more be better if no jump in here.. just blanket (2) -> http://puu.sh/39mj6.jpg nice :3
  4. 00:19:415 (3) - sorry nazi, move 1 grid down? nazi is great, fixed <3
  5. 00:26:915 (3) - remove whistle? make the rhythm duk-duk-tak lol lol fixed
  6. 00:49:977 (3) - add finish in beginning added since this is not update =3=
that's all~
cie hinsvar sama xinely xD ditunggu Rei sama Yasora xD
Thank you Yasora :)

nyan
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10nya
2,746 posts
Joined February 2011
10nya
hi all~
m4m here~

[General]
  1. add to tags この中に１人、妹がいる！ and Studio Gokumi
[Easy]
  1. 00:09:290 (1,2)- : Swap NC? It'll make player easy to see next note (because of followpoint while playing).
  2. 00:45:290 (1,2)- : ^
[Betsu's Normal]
  1. 00:15:665 (1)- : didn't hear any finish here, so remove? and because previous also next similar note is not using finish
  2. 00:21:665 (1)- : ^
  3. 00:27:477 (1)- : ^
  4. 00:28:977 (2)- : for better symmetry, move last slider point 1grid to right
  5. 00:32:915 (5)- : for consistency, add whistle to slider head
  6. 00:41:165 (2)- : try this rhythm to follow vocal better?
  7. 00:51:477 (1)- : pretty sad because you ignored heavy finish at 00:51:665. so perhaps change the rhythm like this?
  8. 01:05:165 (7,1)- : Swap NC?
[Xinely's Hard]
  1. 00:02:165 (1)- : remove nc? to make player notice about 1/2 slider jump
  2. 00:03:665 (1)- : downbeat here, remove whistle?
  3. 00:05:727 (2)- : add whistle here to follow guitar
  4. 00:10:040 : make volume 50% here, cause this part is loud while 00:12:665 is so soft
  5. 00:34:790 (3,1,2) : to follow vocal here, try this rhythm?
  6. 00:39:477 (4)- : how about remove circle here and make slider (3) 00:39:196 length until 00:39:477 ?
[Insane]
  1. 00:10:790 (4)- : because slider 00:09:665 (1) is curved, how about make this slider curved too / copy paste slider 1 to here. like this perhaps?
    SPOILER
  2. 00:32:540 (3)- : you can make 4 circle stream here tough to follow music~ like this perhaps?
    SPOILER
[Hinsvar's Lover]
  1. 2.40 sv wtf damn stop killing player /runs
  2. 00:32:540 (1,2)- : same suggestion as Insane tough, you can make 4 circles stream here
  3. 00:44:915 (5)- : remove circle, music sound stopped at 00:44:727 and it start again at 00:45:102
good luck everyone ~
Xinely
5,014 posts
Joined April 2012
Xinely

- t e n n y a - wrote:

hi all~
m4m here~

[Xinely's Hard]
  1. 00:02:165 (1)- : remove nc? to make player notice about 1/2 slider jump stanza
  2. 00:03:665 (1)- : downbeat here, remove whistle? consistency, i always put whistle in downbeat if isn't use finish
  3. 00:05:727 (2)- : add whistle here to follow guitar added
  4. 00:10:040 : make volume 50% here, cause this part is loud while 00:12:665 is so soft nice, fixed
  5. 00:34:790 (3,1,2) : to follow vocal here, try this rhythm?
    it's okay imo
  6. 00:39:477 (4)- : how about remove circle here and make slider (3) 00:39:196 length until 00:39:477 ? nope, but change but not like that hehe
good luck everyone ~
Thanks 4 mod beb <3

update
osu file format v12

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 59106
Countdown: 0
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[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:Heavenly Lover (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Heavenly Lover (TV Size)
Artist:Takada Kyou, Suzuki Hiroaki
ArtistUnicode:Takada Kyou, Suzuki Hiroaki
Creator:P A N
Version:Xinely's Hard
Source:Kono Naka ni Hitori, Imouto ga Iru!
Tags:ending betsuto xinely hinsvar
BeatmapID:252918
BeatmapSetID:93554

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OverallDifficulty:6
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P A N
2,346 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
P A N
thanks tennya for modding :D
@xinely & hinsvar I add tags on your diff too :3 maybe update it
updated:
Easy
Insane
Hard
and Normal..
Hinsvar
osu! Alumni
3,789 posts
Joined December 2011
Hinsvar
add to tags
lol what is this (on the Tags column)

- t e n n y a - wrote:

[Hinsvar's Lover]
  1. 2.40 sv wtf damn stop killing player /runs Wait for a 198 BPM 2 SV map! *runs*
  2. 00:32:540 (1,2)- : same suggestion as Insane tough, you can make 4 circles stream here ...Are you trying to make this diff crazier than before? Added anyway~
  3. 00:44:915 (5)- : remove circle, music sound stopped at 00:44:727 and it start again at 00:45:102 I'm following the subdued vocal here. That also explains why am I stacking that circle below the next one.
good luck everyone ~
Thanks for modding :D

http://puu.sh/3ajck.osu
HelloSCV
3,490 posts
Joined April 2011
HelloSCV
as m4m

Easy

00:56:914 (1) - move this spinner to 00:56:727 - here?

Betsu's Normal

00:32:915 (5) - soft whistle on start
00:52:415 (3) - ^
01:05:165 (7) - NC, 01:05:540 (1) - delete NC

Xinely's Hard

00:07:977 (4) - finish
00:31:790 (1,2,3) - i think this anti-jump may cuase confusing to players they appeared suddenly and i don't think that part needs such that anti-jumps :/
00:57:477 (1) - finish on start
00:58:790 (5) - ruduce 1 repeat feels much better imo
01:12:477 (4) - NC for consistence
01:23:915 (3,1,2) - please use 0.5x DS since you used it before and it fits well with song
01:27:477 (3) - maybe NC

Insane

00:32:071 (4) - maybe need a note here
01:05:540 (9) - add NC ,01:05:727 (1) - delete NC
01:15:477 (3) - NC ( like 01:03:477 (1) - here )
01:23:165 (1) - finish on start

Hinsvar's Lover

00:07:977 (1) - it will be much better if you make this part like http://puu.sh/3alRp.jpg this
00:30:665 (1) - soft whistle on start
00:40:415 (3) - missed whistle?
01:15:477 (1,2) - reverse rhythm
01:18:477 (5,1) - ^


Good luck~ ( already got lots of mods lol )
Hinsvar
osu! Alumni
3,789 posts
Joined December 2011
Hinsvar

HelloSCV wrote:

Hinsvar's Lover

00:07:977 (1) - it will be much better if you make this part like http://puu.sh/3alRp.jpg this Doesn't seem to have any difference. Heck, I'm sure enough the rhythm I have now is better.
00:30:665 (1) - soft whistle on start Okay.
00:40:415 (3) - missed whistle? ^
01:15:477 (1,2) - reverse rhythm I'm following how the stanza goes, and it feels weirder if they're reversed anyway...
01:18:477 (5,1) - ^ ^


Good luck~ ( already got lots of mods lol )
Thanks for the mod :D

http://puu.sh/3aLD8.osu

Also, Xinely fixed everything except the last thing on SCV's mod.

Xinely's diff
osu file format v12

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AudioFilename: Heavenly Lover (TV Size.).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 59106
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Heavenly Lover (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Heavenly Lover (TV Size)
Artist:Takada Kyou, Suzuki Hiroaki
ArtistUnicode:Takada Kyou, Suzuki Hiroaki
Creator:P A N
Version:Xinely's Hard
Source:Kono Naka ni Hitori, Imouto ga Iru!
Tags:ending betsuto xinely hinsvar add to tags この中に１人、妹がいる！ Studio Gokumi
BeatmapID:252918
BeatmapSetID:93554

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:2

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P A N
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P A N
At last, I can upload now! so
I update all diff because mod and fix the tags too.
orioncomet
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orioncomet
What a big video flie lol no audio, 1:30mins and.. 15.5 MBs >.>

[Hinsvar's Lover]
- It's an okay diff, but I don't really like random solft whistle here and there... Some parts were like missing sound.
00:08:915 (5) - Clap is a bit off here, maybe remove clap?

[Insane]
00:08:071 (1) - Clap is a bit off here, imo. maybe remove it.
00:15:665 (1) - Hidden slider's tail ):
00:32:165 (4) - Suggestion, maybe move it a bit further from (3)? for a better spacing.
00:33:290 (8) - Clap is a bit off here, maybe remove clap?

[Easy]
- Clap on slider tick is a bit loud here, -5~10% on their volume sound better, imo.
00:09:290 (3) - Clap is a bit off here, imo. maybe remove it.



จริงๆก็ว่าจะบับให้อ่ะนะ แต่พลอยไม่ชอบดิพสุดท้ายเลย -*- กัสดิพอ่ะ :o
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