Hi! From my queue~

[General]

No background? Maybe you'll remark it before I put my mod. Or. it's just me...

Video?

[Normal]

01:28:088 (3) - Like 01:26:825 (1) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/830820

03:23:036 to 03:26:510 - Heart slider?

[Hard]

00:09:773 (3,4,5,6) - Maybe something like that? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/830834

00:12:299 (3,4,5,6) - ^?

00:14:825 (3) - Not well stack with 00:12:615 (4)

01:05:983 (7) - Not well stack with 01:07:246 (3)

01:38:194 (5) - Something like that? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/830845

03:14:825 (7) - Not well stack

[Insane]

00:46:878 (4) - Stack with 00:46:562 (2) ?


Good Luck and Star!

@sheela901

sheela901 wrote:

Hi! From my queue~

[General]

No background? Maybe you'll remark it before I put my mod. Or. it's just me...

Video? change the BG!

[Normal]

01:28:088 (3) - Like 01:26:825 (1) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/830820

03:23:036 to 03:26:510 - Heart slider?

[Hard]

00:09:773 (3,4,5,6) - Maybe something like that? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/830834

00:12:299 (3,4,5,6) - ^?

00:14:825 (3) - Not well stack with 00:12:615 (4)

01:05:983 (7) - Not well stack with 01:07:246 (3)

01:38:194 (5) - Something like that? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/830845

03:14:825 (7) - Not well stack

[Insane]

00:46:878 (4) - Stack with 00:46:562 (2) ?


Good Luck and Star!

thanks modding and star~
fixed some stuff!!

hey, great map~

[Hard]
Isn't the movement speed overall not a bit fast? I mean, it is a Hard diff..
03:29:352 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is too fast.
Maybe like this..

but I'm newbie modder, so I could be wrong...

star~

Sup :3
from my queue~

[Normal]

00:18:615 (2) - someone miss NC :3

00:43:868 - this green section unsnap...move at 00:43:878 (in all diff)

[Hard]

00:27:615 (5,6,7) - this 3 sliders not following rhythm...set all slider only one reverse then move 00:28:088 (6) - at 00:27:931 - and 00:28:404 (7) - at 00:28:246 - .....and add circle at 00:28:562 - ...here we go)
00:58:878 (8,9,1) - maybe should move this two circle and become it "running" for wave...
01:01:246 (8) - move end in right a little and stack with previous slider
01:07:246 (3,4) - same^
02:00:299 (3,4,5,6,7) - awesome place for jumps...stack end of the slider 02:00:299 (3) - with 02:00:931 (4) - ..then 02:01:088 (5) - with 02:01:562 (6) - and 02:01:720 (7) - forever alone ^_^ lol...distance maybe like 1/1
02:07:088 (8,9,1) - one again need "runing circles"
02:15:457 (3,4) - stack
02:17:194 (8,9,1) - "runing circles" forgot it... one by one would be awesome :3
03:21:141 (3,4) - stack

[Insane]

mmmmm dat streams...a like that ^_^ pro) faster ranked..FASTEER) i want play it!


Done ) have fun...
/me runs

@alex_98

@Onisakura

DEAncientNaga's Mod Queueから

[General]
とてもいいマッピングです、だいぶokと思う
Offsetは8,494と思う、変わってやって見てください

[Normal]
>.o)b

[Hard]
>.o)b

[Insane]
>.o)b

ほとんどパーフェクトだと思います >.o /
Kudosu Star +1　追加した
Good luck!

DEAncientNaga wrote:

DEAncientNaga's Mod Queueから

[General]
とてもいいマッピングです、だいぶokと思う
Offsetは8,494と思う、変わってやって見てください　8,494だと早すぎる気がしたのでkeep

[Normal]
>.o)b

[Hard]
>.o)b

[Insane]
>.o)b

ほとんどパーフェクトだと思います >.o /
Kudosu Star +1　追加した
Good luck!

thanks modding and star~!!

Hi..

[Insane]
00:28:088 (9) - NC
00:28:720 (5) - NC and finish
00:35:667 (9) - Ctrl+J ?
01:36:931 (5) - Finish at the head
02:40:562 (3) - Remove finish from head.. it's too loud and maybe change it to a whistle

[Hard]
01:10:088 (4) - Ctrl+G maybe for some fun xD
01:53:983 (6) - Ctrl+J

[Normal]
00:46:404 (1) - 1 grid down
02:35:983 (2) - Remove finish

Nice map allready.. good luck~

@Momochikun

Momochikun wrote:

Hi..

[Insane]
00:28:088 (9) - NC
00:28:720 (5) - NC and finish
00:35:667 (9) - Ctrl+J ?
01:36:931 (5) - Finish at the head
02:40:562 (3) - Remove finish from head.. it's too loud and maybe change it to a whistle

[Hard]
01:10:088 (4) - Ctrl+G maybe for some fun xD
01:53:983 (6) - Ctrl+J

[Normal]
00:46:404 (1) - 1 grid down
02:35:983 (2) - Remove finish

Nice map allready.. good luck~

thanks modding!!
some fixed! :3

Hi~ from queue. noob modder coming through :'3 mostly suggestions

[General]

• Nico Nico Douga as the Source? i'm not really sure, since Source is only for the name of a series/game where the song come from.

[Normal]

• 00:24:931 (3) - only suggestion, but prefer if this slider would be a bit curvier since most of the previous sliders are all curve
  00:45:457 (2,3,4) - you can variate them so the formation isn't linear
  
  SPOILER

  http://puu.sh/3x0U7.jpg
  00:54:931 (2,3) - only suggestion, but how about making them blanket?
  
  SPOILER

  
  01:05:352 (3) - you can make this curvier so it can blanket (2) better
  
  SPOILER

  
  01:34:404 (1) - add finish at slider's head? the music has cymbal sound
  01:47:036 (1,2,3) - only suggestion
  
  SPOILER

  
  02:03:141 (2,3) - same as 00:54:931 (2,3) -
  02:08:510 (3) - same as 01:05:352 (3) -
  02:24:931 (1) - only suggestion, but i prefer if this spinner ends at 02:29:983 - because that's where most of the instruments start to mute
  02:43:878 (4) - nc

[Hard]

• 00:21:141 (1,3) - only suggestion, why not make them cut like this?
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:28:720 (1,2,3) - only suggestion, but for 00:29:352 (3) - you can copy (1)'s shape
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:39:931 - 00:41:194 - 00:42:457 - add a note? idk i assume you follow the vocal, but adding those notes can make the rhythm flow continuously
  01:06:457 (8,1) - only suggestion, why not blanket them?
  
  SPOILER

  
  01:34:404 (2) - add finish at slider's head? the music has cymbal sound
  01:36:931 (1) - add finish at slider's head
  01:48:141 - 01:50:667 - add a note?
  02:24:931 (1) - same as normal
  03:07:404 (7) - a bit weird when this slider is slowed down even though the music is already energetic at this part
  03:20:352 (8,1) - blanket them?

[Insane]

• i can't even play this =w= killer diff
  
  00:28:404 (1) - i would remove nc, so the stream will have consistent combo since it's not really long, like this 01:03:457 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
  01:36:615 (1) - ^
  01:41:667 (1) - add finish at slider's tail
  02:24:852 (1) - same as the other diff

Really nice! i like it
good luck~ :3

edit : double-post. my internet is crap -__-

@AlpacaCokelat

AlpacaCokelat wrote:

Hi~ from queue. noob modder coming through :'3 mostly suggestions

[General]

• Nico Nico Douga as the Source? i'm not really sure, since Source is only for the name of a series/game where the song come from.

this song is the same as this something like this map

SourceURL--->http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm20605397

[Normal]

• 00:24:931 (3) - only suggestion, but prefer if this slider would be a bit curvier since most of the previous sliders are all curve
  00:45:457 (2,3,4) - you can variate them so the formation isn't linear
  
  SPOILER

  http://puu.sh/3x0U7.jpg
  00:54:931 (2,3) - only suggestion, but how about making them blanket?
  
  SPOILER

  
  01:05:352 (3) - you can make this curvier so it can blanket (2) better
  
  SPOILER

  
  01:34:404 (1) - add finish at slider's head? the music has cymbal sound
  01:47:036 (1,2,3) - only suggestion
  
  SPOILER

  
  02:03:141 (2,3) - same as 00:54:931 (2,3) -
  02:08:510 (3) - same as 01:05:352 (3) -
  02:24:931 (1) - only suggestion, but i prefer if this spinner ends at 02:29:983 - because that's where most of the instruments start to mute
  02:43:878 (4) - nc

[Hard]

• 00:21:141 (1,3) - only suggestion, why not make them cut like this?
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:28:720 (1,2,3) - only suggestion, but for 00:29:352 (3) - you can copy (1)'s shape
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:39:931 - 00:41:194 - 00:42:457 - add a note? idk i assume you follow the vocal, but adding those notes can make the rhythm flow continuously
  01:06:457 (8,1) - only suggestion, why not blanket them?
  
  SPOILER

  
  01:34:404 (2) - add finish at slider's head? the music has cymbal sound
  01:36:931 (1) - add finish at slider's head
  01:48:141 - 01:50:667 - add a note?
  02:24:931 (1) - same as normal
  03:07:404 (7) - a bit weird when this slider is slowed down even though the music is already energetic at this part
  03:20:352 (8,1) - blanket them?

[Insane]

• i can't even play this =w= killer diff
  
  00:28:404 (1) - i would remove nc, so the stream will have consistent combo since it's not really long, like this 01:03:457 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
  01:36:615 (1) - ^
  01:41:667 (1) - add finish at slider's tail
  02:24:852 (1) - same as the other diff

Really nice! i like it
good luck~ :3

thanks modding and star-
almost fixed !! blanket nice idea :3

from my queue!
こんばんは～

[Normal]

1. 00:48:931- finish
2. 00:49:404- ^
3. 00:49:878- ^
4. 00:50:352- ^
5. 01:57:141- ^
6. 01:57:615- ^
7. 01:58:088- ^
8. 01:58:562- ^ (ここまでHard,Insaneでも同じです）
9. 02:32:510 (1) - delete (個人的にはもっと休憩ほしかったので)
10. 02:40:088 (5) - 終わりが02:40:562の方がいいかと
11. 03:03:299- finish
12. 03:04:246- ^

[Hard]

1. 00:10:720 (6) - 00:10:088 (4) - と揃えて x:244 y:36
2. 00:13:246 (6) - ^と同じでこっちは x:288 y:108
3. 02:41:510 (2,3,4,5) -　02:41:036 (1) - のendと合わせて五角形とかどうでしょう？
   
   SPOILER

   

   403,91,161510,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   233,112,161825,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   382,195,162141,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   309,43,162457,1,2,0:0:0:0:

4. 03:00:299～03:07:720-　減速するsliderは03:00:299 (1) - と03:05:352 (3) - だけにした方がインパクトあると思いました　（Insaneも同じ）
5. 03:29:352 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - cool!

[Insane]

1. 01:16:562 (8) - x:256 y:192の位置がいいかなと
2. 02:24:773 (8) - ^

再びリクエストいただいてありがとうございます
ゆいこんぬさん良いですよね～
~Good Luck~

Awh this song... :3

Well, hello from my queue
my mod is noooooooob

[Normal]

00:40:088 (2) - this is not exactly on the center, you might arrange it.
01:10:404 (3) - better blanket for (2)
01:14:194 (1) - (slider's end) sounds better with a finish instead of clap
02:22:404 (1) - ^
03:28:089 (1) - ^
02:09:773 (1,2,3) - why don't to make this ? :
02:35:983 (2) - 1 grid left (to be a nice blanket for 1) but you also have to move 02:36:931 (3)


[Hard]

00:21:141 (1,3) - this overlap is weird because 1 is a bit overlapped to 3's end
00:29:352 (3,5) - ^ same thing and many more...
00:23:036 (1) - make something like this for a little better movement :
00:27:615 (5,6,7) - it's really hard to play this for a "normal player who begins hard" because (5) is longer than 6 and 7, you have to ad a NC on 6 or do this :
00:36:299 (2) - for a better movement you can do this :
00:59:667 (5,6,7) - Why don't to make something like this ? :
01:14:825 (3) - Finish sounds better instead of clap (end)
02:23:036 (3) - ^
03:28:720 (3) - ^
01:44:194 (1,2,3,4) - You can make this pattern better :
02:13:562 (5) - why don't to make a blanket for 4 ?
02:15:457 (3) - Better blanket for 2, second point x216 y100, tail x216 y156
02:16:720 (7) - better blanket for 6, beginning x36 y168, second point x100 y140, tail x164 y168
02:41:825 (3,5) - CTRL+G, it can be better
03:05:036 (2) - 1 grid down

[Insane]
i'm noob at modding insane so.. >.>

00:10:088 (4,6) - CTRL-G ?
00:40:878 (4) - why don't tu use the reversed 00:40:088 (1) instead of this slider ? i mean

00:42:141 (4) - same thing as ^, for a better movement you can do this :
00:52:404 (5) - move to x152 y64
01:15:141 (2) - Sounds better with finish instead of clap (beginning)
02:23:352 (2) - ^
01:32:194 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - this kind of pattern is really hard to play when the jumps are close, space further like airmanfor example, i know /me runs away x)
01:54:457 (4,1,2,3,4) - why don't to make a symmetrical pattern with these notes ? like this :
02:05:352 (4) - Better blanket for 2
03:16:720 (1,2,3,4) - why don't to do this ? (i didn't use DS)




That's all, well mapped, nice map.
Good Luck ~

@RandomEffect

RandomEffect wrote:

from my queue!
こんばんは～

[Normal]

1. 00:48:931- finish
2. 00:49:404- ^
3. 00:49:878- ^
4. 00:50:352- ^
5. 01:57:141- ^
6. 01:57:615- ^
7. 01:58:088- ^
8. 01:58:562- ^ (ここまでHard,Insaneでも同じです）
   べつのいい音探してるので保留で＞＜何も見つかりそうになかったらfinishいれます！
9. 02:32:510 (1) - delete (個人的にはもっと休憩ほしかったので)
10. 02:40:088 (5) - 終わりが02:40:562の方がいいかと okay
11. 03:03:299- finish okay
12. 03:04:246- ^ okay

[Hard]

1. 00:10:720 (6) - 00:10:088 (4) - と揃えて x:244 y:36 4,5の中心をとおるようにおいてるのでnochange
2. 00:13:246 (6) - ^と同じでこっちは x:288 y:108 fixed
3. 02:41:510 (2,3,4,5) -　02:41:036 (1) - のendと合わせて五角形とかどうでしょう？ codeまでありがとうございます！
   
   SPOILER

   

   403,91,161510,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   233,112,161825,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   382,195,162141,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   309,43,162457,1,2,0:0:0:0:

4. 03:00:299～03:07:720-　減速するsliderは03:00:299 (1) - と03:05:352 (3) - だけにした方がインパクトあると思いました　（Insaneも同じ）
   nice idea
5. 03:29:352 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - cool!

[Insane]

1. 01:16:562 (8) - x:256 y:192の位置がいいかなと okay
2. 02:24:773 (8) - ^ okay

再びリクエストいただいてありがとうございます
ゆいこんぬさん良いですよね～
~Good Luck~

もっでぃんぐありがとうございます！
助かりました~!

@Cherry Blossom

Cherry Blossom wrote:

Awh this song... :3

Well, hello from my queue
my mod is noooooooob

[Normal]

00:40:088 (2) - this is not exactly on the center, you might arrange it.
01:10:404 (3) - better blanket for (2)
01:14:194 (1) - (slider's end) sounds better with a finish instead of clap
02:22:404 (1) - ^
03:28:089 (1) - ^
02:09:773 (1,2,3) - why don't to make this ? :

SPOILER

02:35:983 (2) - 1 grid left (to be a nice blanket for 1) but you also have to move 02:36:931 (3)


[Hard]

00:21:141 (1,3) - this overlap is weird because 1 is a bit overlapped to 3's end
00:29:352 (3,5) - ^ same thing and many more...
00:23:036 (1) - make something like this for a little better movement :

SPOILER

00:27:615 (5,6,7) - it's really hard to play this for a "normal player who begins hard" because (5) is longer than 6 and 7, you have to ad a NC on 6 or do this :
00:36:299 (2) - for a better movement you can do this :

SPOILER

00:59:667 (5,6,7) - Why don't to make something like this ? :

SPOILER

01:14:825 (3) - Finish sounds better instead of clap (end)
02:23:036 (3) - ^
03:28:720 (3) - ^
01:44:194 (1,2,3,4) - You can make this pattern better :

SPOILER

02:13:562 (5) - why don't to make a blanket for 4 ?
02:15:457 (3) - Better blanket for 2, second point x216 y100, tail x216 y156
02:16:720 (7) - better blanket for 6, beginning x36 y168, second point x100 y140, tail x164 y168
02:41:825 (3,5) - CTRL+G, it can be better
03:05:036 (2) - 1 grid down

[Insane]
i'm noob at modding insane so.. >.>

00:10:088 (4,6) - CTRL-G ?
00:40:878 (4) - why don't tu use the reversed 00:40:088 (1) instead of this slider ? i mean

SPOILER

00:42:141 (4) - same thing as ^, for a better movement you can do this :

SPOILER

00:52:404 (5) - move to x152 y64
01:15:141 (2) - Sounds better with finish instead of clap (beginning)
02:23:352 (2) - ^
01:32:194 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - this kind of pattern is really hard to play when the jumps are close, space further like airmanfor example, i know /me runs away x)
01:54:457 (4,1,2,3,4) - why don't to make a symmetrical pattern with these notes ? like this :

SPOILER

02:05:352 (4) - Better blanket for 2
03:16:720 (1,2,3,4) - why don't to do this ? (i didn't use DS)

SPOILER

That's all, well mapped, nice map.
Good Luck ~

thanks a lot modding~!!!
helpful your modding~
Normal and Hard almost fixed
Insane some fixed

go go ! \o/

scanter wrote:

go go ! \o/

yay~!\o/

Hello, from popner and Azure's modding

Nice song and ゆいこんぬ (ｏ´艸｀ｏ)

[General]
move "Nico Nico Douga" to tags, and remove the Source
add " sm20605397 Rokugen Astrology" to tags

You can try this http://puu.sh/3BBn9.wav as "soft-hitclap" if you need (●゜c_゜●)

[Normal]

1. 00:10:720 (4) +clap
2. 01:15:141 (1) -finish +clap
3. 02:23:352 (1) ^
4. 03:29:036 (1) ^

[Hard]

1. 00:28:720 (1) +finish
2. 01:12:931 (1) -clap
3. 02:23:352 (3) -finish +clap

[Insane]

1. 00:18:062 (2) move it up to x172, y292
   00:18:378 (6) x60, y208
   00:18:457 (7) x56, y172
2. 00:24:457 (6,7) use ctrl+G follow with vocal (Lyrics: 聞き..)
3. 00:35:667 (9,1) change to http://puu.sh/3BBaD.jpg flow will be better
4. 00:28:720 (1) +finish
   00:33:773 (1) ^
   01:36:931 (1) ^
5. 01:15:141 (2) -finish +clap
6. 02:08:983 (2,3) move (2) to (3) slider's tail
7. 02:12:220 (8) move it left to x436, y164
8. 02:50:036 (3) move it to x136, y88
9. 02:52:088 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) so ugly.. fix it or you can try this http://puu.sh/3BBBM.jpg
10. 03:02:510 (3,4) use ctrl+G follow with vocal (Lyrics: なんで..)

nice job, good luck (*ゝω・*)ノ

@Azure

Azure wrote:

Hello, from popner and Azure's modding

Nice song and ゆいこんぬ (ｏ´艸｀ｏ)

[General]
move "Nico Nico Douga" to tags, and remove the Source other map ("歌ってみたutattemita") in Nico Nico Douga Source...
add " sm20605397 Rokugen Astrology" to tags ok

You can try this http://puu.sh/3BBn9.wav as "soft-hitclap" if you need (●゜c_゜●) wow thanks!!

[Normal]

1. 00:10:720 (4) +clap
2. 01:15:141 (1) -finish +clap
3. 02:23:352 (1) ^
4. 03:29:036 (1) ^

[Hard]

1. 00:28:720 (1) +finish
2. 01:12:931 (1) -clap
3. 02:23:352 (3) -finish +clap

[Insane]

1. 00:18:062 (2) move it up to x172, y292
   00:18:378 (6) x60, y208
   00:18:457 (7) x56, y172
2. 00:24:457 (6,7) use ctrl+G follow with vocal (Lyrics: 聞き..)
3. 00:35:667 (9,1) change to http://puu.sh/3BBaD.jpg flow will be better
4. 00:28:720 (1) +finish
   00:33:773 (1) ^
   01:36:931 (1) ^
5. 01:15:141 (2) -finish +clap
6. 02:08:983 (2,3) move (2) to (3) slider's tail the same as other(01:00:773 (2,3) - and 03:20:983 (2,3) - ) no stack sorry><
7. 02:12:220 (8) move it left to x436, y164
8. 02:50:036 (3) move it to x136, y88
9. 02:52:088 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) so ugly.. fix it or you can try this http://puu.sh/3BBBM.jpg
10. 03:02:510 (3,4) use ctrl+G follow with vocal (Lyrics: なんで..)

nice job, good luck (*ゝω・*)ノ

thanks modding and HitSound wav~!
almost fixed

Hello Mod From My Queue





Hope This Helpful
Good On RANKED

@Helios_Zul

Helios_Zul wrote:

Hello Mod From My Queue

General

-

Normal

Approach Rate = -1
00:43:878(1) Like This?

01:10:404(3) Out From Grid - Fix It
01:16:404(3) Move To x:337 y:80
01:28:088(3) Move To x:316 y:248
01:49:562(5) Like This?

02:14:510(4) Move To x:236 y:160
02:14:825(1) Move To x:180 y:104
02:24:615(3) move To x:308 y:40
02:48:773(1) Move Middle Point To x:312 y:264 Then End Point , x:256 y:288
02:57:773(1,2) Move Like This?

03:15:457(1) Move Middle Point To x:232 y:92
03:30:299(3) Move To x:336 y:272

Other Are Perfects.

Hard

00:10:720(6) Move To x:208 y:36
00:11:036(1) move To x:104 y:148
00:21:615(2) Move To x:260 y:180
01:00:299(5) Move Middle Point To x:296 y:128 Then End Point To x:300 y:100
01:09:615(2) Move To x:388 y:148
01:09:773(3) ^ x:316 y:100
01:29:352(1) ^ x:472 y:92
01:41:352(5,1) Make Like THis?

01:53:983(6) Move To x:56 y:88
01:57:141(1,2,3,4) Make More Neat Like This Pic

02:41:036(1,2,3,4) Make It Like This (Star Patterns)

03:01:878(2) Move To x:132 y:272
03:02:194(3) ^ x:236 y:340
03:02:510(4) ^ x:356 y:308

Insane

00:10:404(5) Move To x:64 y:240
00:10:720(6) ^ x:424 y:240
00:24:773(8) Move To x:252 y:120

I Can't Mod Insane Too Hard For Me (sorry)

Hope This Helpful
Good On RANKED

thanks a lot modding!

Hi :3




Good Luck ~

@Xinely

Xinely wrote:

Hi :3

• 
  Normal
  00:27:773 (2) - imo, straight like http://puu.sh/3WN0k.jpg have a kinda bad flow, try make http://puu.sh/3WN07.jpg ? okay~!
  00:56:194 (4) - just like above lol ^
  01:05:036 (2) - 348,136?
  01:41:667 (3) - 24,248?
  02:35:983 (2) - remove finish, no need imo Cymbals in back sound
  02:52:720 (4) - nazi, NC for consistency
  03:07:246 (5) - end in 03:07:562 - , more follow vocal follow Snare in back sound
  03:10:089 (4) - 112,160

• 
  Hard
  00:30:931 (8) - try ctrl+G?
  00:53:667 - add note here?
  01:28:720 (3,1) - touched
  02:01:878 - add note?
  02:18:299 (4) - can ctrl+G for jump
  03:05:352 (3) - NC for SV change
  fun diff but it's more fun if you add a few jump :3

• 
  Insane
  00:24:457 (6) - NC to easier read?
  00:46:878 (4) - 352,236?
  nice

Good Luck ~

thanks nice modding Xinely~!
some fixed :3

Hi!

Modding queue :


Normal
- 00:30:931 Use the same Y position as the previous circle? (This or the other it doesn't matter)
- 01:30:615 Same thing as the previous one, use same Y position as the slider n°1?
- 02:40:088 Again.
- 03:09:895 Same X as the previous slider?
-03:17:983 Is it possible that you can finish this slider at the same position of the pink slider n°2? (168 ; 185)



Hard

- 03:03:299 Be carefull it touches a little the HP bar, you should fix it.
- 03:03:773 Try to start this slider as the same position of the violet slider n°1.
- 03:10:878 Imo, i don't like where the 3 circles are, they don't put a beautifull line (if you know what i mean. )
- 03:20:983 Same Y position as the previous circle.
- 03:21:141 The curve of the slider doesn't really match with the previous circle, if you can fix it.
- 03:30:299 You will kill me if i say that the X position here doesn't match with the circle n°2? =D


Insane

- 00:10:404 Well... This patter is ind of strange, for the circle n°6, i agree that you put it at the same position of the slider n°2, here this is ok, but if you take a look at the Y position difference between the circle 1 and 2 ther's 8 of difference, and not on the circle 5 and 6, i suggest you to down the circle 5 to Y = 264, but the snap position will be higher, so you should think at a solution Imo.
- 00:23:194 Is it impossible to move this circle to (98;272)? =D
- 00:26:825 How about move this to the begining of the pink slider n°5?
- 00:44:352 Same position as the red circle n°3 before?
- 01:11:667 Aww, too bad that this hasn't the same position as 01:10:878 :<
- 02:02:825 Position! =D (Comparing to the first green slider)

Anyway, that's all good map you did just some minor fixes, imo the hard one is kinda too fast but it's ok.

Gl for ranking!

@Aldwych

Aldwych wrote:

Hi!

Modding queue :


Normal
- 00:30:931 Use the same Y position as the previous circle? (This or the other it doesn't matter)
- 01:30:615 Same thing as the previous one, use same Y position as the slider n°1?
- 02:40:088 Again.
- 03:09:895 Same X as the previous slider?
-03:17:983 Is it possible that you can finish this slider at the same position of the pink slider n°2? (168 ; 185)



Hard

- 03:03:299 Be carefull it touches a little the HP bar, you should fix it.
- 03:03:773 Try to start this slider as the same position of the violet slider n°1.
- 03:10:878 Imo, i don't like where the 3 circles are, they don't put a beautifull line (if you know what i mean. )
- 03:20:983 Same Y position as the previous circle.
- 03:21:141 The curve of the slider doesn't really match with the previous circle, if you can fix it.
- 03:30:299 You will kill me if i say that the X position here doesn't match with the circle n°2? =D


Insane

- 00:10:404 Well... This patter is ind of strange, for the circle n°6, i agree that you put it at the same position of the slider n°2, here this is ok, but if you take a look at the Y position difference between the circle 1 and 2 ther's 8 of difference, and not on the circle 5 and 6, i suggest you to down the circle 5 to Y = 264, but the snap position will be higher, so you should think at a solution Imo.
- 00:23:194 Is it impossible to move this circle to (98;272)? =D
- 00:26:825 How about move this to the begining of the pink slider n°5?
- 00:44:352 Same position as the red circle n°3 before?
- 01:11:667 Aww, too bad that this hasn't the same position as 01:10:878 :<
- 02:02:825 Position! =D (Comparing to the first green slider)

Anyway, that's all good map you did just some minor fixes, imo the hard one is kinda too fast but it's ok.

Gl for ranking!

thanks modding Aldwych~
some fixed!

I was asked to check the timing, but it feels good to me. Tick rate 2 fits this song best though. Good luck! <3 Yuiko

@Garven

Garven wrote:

I was asked to check the timing, but it feels good to me. Tick rate 2 fits this song best though. Good luck! <3 Yuiko

Thanks timing check!
I don't like Tick rate 2 >< sorry

yuiko~<3

遅れてすみません；；；；；

Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.


[General]

1. Clear.

[Insane]

1. 00:10:404 (5) - 1grid left & 4grid down で 00:10:088 (4,6) - こっちと同じ角度、スペーシングになります。
   
2. 00:15:141 (4) - 1grid up & 1grid rightで 00:14:825 (3,5) - ＾
   
3. 00:17:510 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - この6つにwhistle入れるといい感じにピアノがとれると思います。
   
4. 00:41:352 (1) - ここの終端は結構音が大きいのでwhistleが入りそうです。
   
5. 00:47:352 (2) - 終端もしくは両端にclap追加
   
6. 00:48:931 (8) - NC
   
7. 00:49:088 (1) - NC削除　以降もこんな感じにしてまとまりがあるようにすると良いと思います。
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 00:53:510 (3) - 1/4伸ばせそうですがスライダーの形とかの調整もあると思うので任せます。
   
9. 01:13:404 (1,2,3,4,5,7) - 上の00:17:510 (4,5,6,7,8,1) -と同じで全部whistle入れるといい感じです。
   
10. 01:14:667 (3) - 始端のwhistleは曲と合ってない気がしたので削除?
    
11. 01:36:299 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - このストリームにもwhistleを入れたいです。全部入れてもいいんですがやかましいって人がいたりするので、自分が音付けするなら最初の5つくらいにwhistle入れると思います。
    
12. 01:43:720 - add note?
    
13. 01:57:141 (8) - この辺のNCも上記と同じ指摘です。
    
14. 02:00:615 - ここからドラムの音が大きくなってるのでVolumeを15%くらい上げてみてはどうでしょう？
    
15. 02:21:615 (1,2,3,4,5,7) - ここと00:17:510 (4,5,6,7,8,1) -同じです
    
16. 02:45:694 - note追加して3連にしましょう。
    
17. 03:15:615 (2,4) - Ctrl+G? 突然スライダーの終端に隠れてしまう配置なのでこっちの方が安定して叩けると思いました。
    
18. 03:27:299 (1,2,3,4,5,7) - ここと00:17:510 (4,5,6,7,8,1) -同じです
    

[Hard]

1. 特に気になった点はありませんでした　流れもいいし問題ないと思います。

[Normal]

1. 01:49:562 (3) - 1番のとこと同じでCtrl+Jして上下対象にした方がいいと思いました。
   
2. 02:03:457 (3) - 終端のpointを1grid下げると更に綺麗に見えます。
   
   こっちも特に気になる点はなし。

頑張ってください

@Guy

Guy wrote:

遅れてすみません；；；；；

Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.


[General]

1. Clear.

[Insane]

1. 00:10:404 (5) - 1grid left & 4grid down で 00:10:088 (4,6) - こっちと同じ角度、スペーシングになります。
   
2. 00:15:141 (4) - 1grid up & 1grid rightで 00:14:825 (3,5) - ＾
   
3. 00:17:510 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - この6つにwhistle入れるといい感じにピアノがとれると思います。
   
4. 00:41:352 (1) - ここの終端は結構音が大きいのでwhistleが入りそうです。
   
5. 00:47:352 (2) - 終端もしくは両端にclap追加
   
6. 00:48:931 (8) - NC
   
7. 00:49:088 (1) - NC削除　以降もこんな感じにしてまとまりがあるようにすると良いと思います。
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 00:53:510 (3) - 1/4伸ばせそうですがスライダーの形とかの調整もあると思うので任せます。 現状維持で！
   
9. 01:13:404 (1,2,3,4,5,7) - 上の00:17:510 (4,5,6,7,8,1) -と同じで全部whistle入れるといい感じです。
   
10. 01:14:667 (3) - 始端のwhistleは曲と合ってない気がしたので削除?
    
11. 01:36:299 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - このストリームにもwhistleを入れたいです。全部入れてもいいんですがやかましいって人がいたりするので、自分が音付けするなら最初の5つくらいにwhistle入れると思います。
    
12. 01:43:720 - add note?
    
13. 01:57:141 (8) - この辺のNCも上記と同じ指摘です。
    
14. 02:00:615 - ここからドラムの音が大きくなってるのでVolumeを15%くらい上げてみてはどうでしょう？
    
15. 02:21:615 (1,2,3,4,5,7) - ここと00:17:510 (4,5,6,7,8,1) -同じです
    
16. 02:45:694 - note追加して3連にしましょう。
    
17. 03:15:615 (2,4) - Ctrl+G? 突然スライダーの終端に隠れてしまう配置なのでこっちの方が安定して叩けると思いました。
    
18. 03:27:299 (1,2,3,4,5,7) - ここと00:17:510 (4,5,6,7,8,1) -同じです
    

[Hard]

1. 特に気になった点はありませんでした　流れもいいし問題ないと思います。

[Normal]

1. 01:49:562 (3) - 1番のとこと同じでCtrl+Jして上下対象にした方がいいと思いました。
   
2. 02:03:457 (3) - 終端のpointを1grid下げると更に綺麗に見えます。
   
   こっちも特に気になる点はなし。

頑張ってください

modありがとうございます！
記載の無い所はfixedです！！

一ヶ月前くらいのrandom queueからきました。

[General]

1. 00:00:931 - ここから音楽が始まるので、赤線を移動してください。

[Insane]

• 
  ~音量の提案です。

1. 最初~00:18:615 - 70%
2. 00:18:615 - ~00:28:720 - 50%
3. 00:28:720 - ~00:38:825 - 60%
4. 00:38:825 - ~00:43:878 - 50%
5. 00:43:878 - ~kiai前までに60->70% そして kiai time 80%につなげてみてください。
   スローパートの40%ですがあまりよく聞こえないので50%はあった方がいいと思います。後のパートは修正した場合確認をお願いします。
   ~
6. 00:17:510 (4) - 連打の開始ということでnew comboを追加すると個数などより分かりやすくなります。
7. 00:17:588 (5,6,7,8) - whistleが連続していて不自然に思えます。(1)のみにあった方がclapの音も目立ちますしより良いと思います。
8. 00:25:799 - 20%以下だとほとんど聞こえないので、20%まで上げて下さい。後のパートも同じくです。
9. 00:47:983 (4) - ,00:48:457 (6) - clap
10. 01:14:825 (1) - ちょっとしたnew comboの提案です。音をまとめた方がいいと思いました。
    
    img

    
11. 02:25:167 (1) - ここだけ不自然なので間つめてください。02:24:852 -
12. 02:38:036 (2) - 00:17:510 (4) - と同じです。前の(1)もはずしていいと思います
13. 02:49:799 (2) - ここにもwhistleあった方がピアノの音を強調できます。
14. 02:50:194 (1) - 始点にfinish.定期的に入れるのであればここにも必要です。
15. 02:51:615 (2) - ピアノの音をフォローするのであれば02:51:931 - ,02:52:010 - ここの二つは音がないので間をあけてください。
    また、後ろの音をとる場合はこちらを試してみてください。
    
    img

    
16. 02:52:167 (8) - 細かいですが、ここまで差があると見たときにわかってしまうので0.8にもう少し近づけてください
17. 03:07:404 (5) - 歌詞をフォローして、青線まで伸ばして3/4sliderにしたいです(願望　
18. 03:16:720 (1) - 1/8を4つおきたいところですが、03:16:799 - には音がないのでnote + 3sliderにしてください。
19. 03:26:826 (7) - 始点にwhistle.こちらも同じく音のないところ03:26:904 - などに折り返しがあるので後ろの音にあわせてこのようにしてみてください
    
    img

    

申し訳ないんですが、時間がなくなってしまったのでNormal Hardは後日見ます！

修正後に呼んでください～

@alacat

alacat wrote:

一ヶ月前くらいのrandom queueからきました。

[General]

1. 00:00:931 - ここから音楽が始まるので、赤線を移動してください。 全diff移動させました~

[Insane]

• 
  ~音量の提案です。

1. 最初~00:18:615 - 70%
2. 00:18:615 - ~00:28:720 - 50%
3. 00:28:720 - ~00:38:825 - 60%
4. 00:38:825 - ~00:43:878 - 50%
5. 00:43:878 - ~kiai前までに60->70% そして kiai time 80%につなげてみてください。
   スローパートの40%ですがあまりよく聞こえないので50%はあった方がいいと思います。後のパートは修正した場合確認をお願いします。
   全diff調整しました。
   ~
6. 00:17:510 (4) - 連打の開始ということでnew comboを追加すると個数などより分かりやすくなります。
7. 00:17:588 (5,6,7,8) - whistleが連続していて不自然に思えます。(1)のみにあった方がclapの音も目立ちますしより良いと思います。
8. 00:25:799 - 20%以下だとほとんど聞こえないので、20%まで上げて下さい。後のパートも同じくです。
9. 00:47:983 (4) - ,00:48:457 (6) - clap
10. 01:14:825 (1) - ちょっとしたnew comboの提案です。音をまとめた方がいいと思いました。
    
    img

    
11. 02:25:167 (1) - ここだけ不自然なので間つめてください。02:24:852 -
12. 02:38:036 (2) - 00:17:510 (4) - と同じです。前の(1)もはずしていいと思います
13. 02:49:799 (2) - ここにもwhistleあった方がピアノの音を強調できます。
14. 02:50:194 (1) - 始点にfinish.定期的に入れるのであればここにも必要です。
15. 02:51:615 (2) - ピアノの音をフォローするのであれば02:51:931 - ,02:52:010 - ここの二つは音がないので間をあけてください。
    また、後ろの音をとる場合はこちらを試してみてください。
    
    img

    
16. 02:52:167 (8) - 細かいですが、ここまで差があると見たときにわかってしまうので0.8にもう少し近づけてください
17. 03:07:404 (5) - 歌詞をフォローして、青線まで伸ばして3/4sliderにしたいです(願望　
18. 03:16:720 (1) - 1/8を4つおきたいところですが、03:16:799 - には音がないのでnote + 3sliderにしてください。
19. 03:26:826 (7) - 始点にwhistle.こちらも同じく音のないところ03:26:904 - などに折り返しがあるので後ろの音にあわせてこのようにしてみてください
    
    img

    

申し訳ないんですが、時間がなくなってしまったのでNormal Hardは後日見ます！

修正後に呼んでください～

all fixed
赤線と音量はNormal,Hard合わせて修正しました~.
thanks modding!!

Modded Normal and Hard diff via IRC.

Good luck for your first rank

Bubbled


I'm worry about video size haha

thanks alacat!! ('ω')

Rankedあくしろよ（せっかち）

Hi just dropping by leaving a heart and stuff.

Congratz!

litoluna おめえええええ^^

Congratz on your 1st ranked map! keep it up

KSHR wrote:

Congratz on your 1st ranked map! keep it up

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