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JauiPlaY

Autumn wrote:

哇 挖出来丽!
没来得及射星 加油°ω<
我疯狂挖 结果图还是在坟里
我明天再试试吧...
Atrue
Hello~
From your request.

[Notion]
This color means it is a suggestion. I prefer to do this, but you can either choose to fix or not.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.


[General]
Good map and a little suggestions here.
Feeling not too much to say here. But it's really a pity that you didn't map 02:24:115 - to the end because there are vocals... Btw, just saying that, I'm not meaning that you need to map that or should do that. Just a personal opinion.
Personally I'd suggest you find some more mods before asking me for recheck. Starred for now and good luck.
[Normal]
General
我觉得复制粘贴有点明显了= =
00:35:114 (2) - 01:47:114 (3) - unsnapped object's end. (That's not a bug of AImod, please fix it.)
Nothing more than that.
[Hard]
General
我觉得复制粘贴有点明显了= =
Fine overall...
Beats
00:19:615 - Missing a important drum here.. And giving next 1/4 beat a hit sounds a little bit strange. Adding a circle here would be fine. Just stack it on next circle. Example:01:01:615 - You know missing the clap here is really not good to listen.. It's my suggesting but you can either choose fix or not. 01:08:115 - Same issue as above mentioned. But a little different with the one before it, the vocal at 01:07:865 is kinda important and better to be followed. Example:
[Insane]
General
Ok, creative beats.. But you the distance is a little bit messed up here for me...
Placement
00:11:240 (2,3,4) - I think changing the distance a little larger is needed. Because you just used distances like 00:10:115 (2,3) , and follows this kind of distance.. So just make the distance a little bigger is recommended. Example(not big cahnges):
SPOILER
396,364,11240,2,0,P|348:360|320:352,1,50
480,260,11615,2,0,P|435:277|406:282,1,50,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,128,11990,2,0,P|439:163|415:180,1,50,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:28:115 (1) - Here the distance is bit strange imo.. Because you added an NC to make the distance suddenly slowed down and just jump to next note.. Staciking it on slider 3's head is a good choice. Example:
00:33:365 (4) - Also this jump is not that reasonable for me. The start of the slider even didn't get a vocal on it, and you set the jump here which seems a little over-emphasized. To get better distance here, I suggest making the distance with the previous slider smaller. Example:00:57:865 (7) - If you made this slider on purpose that would be fine.. If not, you can avoid overlapping here by moving the slider to around 100,300. Example:01:44:990 (3) - Another distance issue comes out here.. The jump is kinda reasonable, but I still recommend that making the distance more clear to read. Example(though bad pattern here..):Hitsound
00:10:615 - A clap here? Not sure though. The music is really about to be emphasized here imo.
01:36:115 (1) - Really noisy.. Consider lower the volume down to 50% around here since the instrument you are following is obviously weaker than vocal.
That's my suggestions. Thanks for requesting.:)

As I said in General, consider finding some more mods before asking for recheck.. But it depends on you. 我不是很喜欢复制粘贴啊。。
Topic Starter
JauiPlaY

Atrue wrote:

Hello~
From your request.

[Notion]
This color means it is a suggestion. I prefer to do this, but you can either choose to fix or not.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.


[General]
Good map and a little suggestions here.
Feeling not too much to say here. But it's really a pity that you didn't map 02:24:115 - to the end because there are vocals... Btw, just saying that, I'm not meaning that you need to map that or should do that. Just a personal opinion.
Personally I'd suggest you find some more mods before asking me for recheck. Starred for now and good luck.随着节奏变慢 map不仅麻烦而且没什么趣味性 所以放弃了 不过歌词sb做到这里是有意为之
[Normal]
General
我觉得复制粘贴有点明显了= =不要在意细节= =
00:35:114 (2) - 01:47:114 (3) - unsnapped object's end. (That's not a bug of AImod, please fix it.)改惹
Nothing more than that.
[Hard]
General
我觉得复制粘贴有点明显了= =不要在意细节= =
Fine overall...
Beats
00:19:615 - Missing a important drum here.. And giving next 1/4 beat a hit sounds a little bit strange. Adding a circle here would be fine. Just stack it on next circle. Example:在这个难度三连不合适 用slider代替
01:01:615 - You know missing the clap here is really not good to listen.. It's my suggesting but you can either choose fix or not. 改惹
01:08:115 - Same issue as above mentioned. But a little different with the one before it, the vocal at 01:07:865 is kinda important and better to be followed. Example:改惹
[Insane]
General
Ok, creative beats.. But you the distance is a little bit messed up here for me...
Placement
00:11:240 (2,3,4) - I think changing the distance a little larger is needed. Because you just used distances like 00:10:115 (2,3) , and follows this kind of distance.. So just make the distance a little bigger is recommended. Example(not big cahnges):
SPOILER
396,364,11240,2,0,P|348:360|320:352,1,50
480,260,11615,2,0,P|435:277|406:282,1,50,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,128,11990,2,0,P|439:163|415:180,1,50,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
其实这个故意的 前面跳了对应的这里不那么跳
00:28:115 (1) - Here the distance is bit strange imo.. Because you added an NC to make the distance suddenly slowed down and just jump to next note.. Staciking it on slider 3's head is a good choice. Example:改惹
00:33:365 (4) - Also this jump is not that reasonable for me. The start of the slider even didn't get a vocal on it, and you set the jump here which seems a little over-emphasized. To get better distance here, I suggest making the distance with the previous slider smaller. Example:老梗了 一般都能看得出来 放心= =
00:57:865 (7) - If you made this slider on purpose that would be fine.. If not, you can avoid overlapping here by moving the slider to around 100,300. Example:改惹
01:44:990 (3) - Another distance issue comes out here.. The jump is kinda reasonable, but I still recommend that making the distance more clear to read. Example(though bad pattern here..):同老梗 大丈夫
Hitsound
00:10:615 - A clap here? Not sure though. The music is really about to be emphasized here imo.这里按照下clap的规律是没有clap的
01:36:115 (1) - Really noisy.. Consider lower the volume down to 50% around here since the instrument you are following is obviously weaker than vocal.原曲就是这样 音效只是突出了这一块 如果你坚持 我再update一次好了
That's my suggestions. Thanks for requesting.:)

As I said in General, consider finding some more mods before asking for recheck.. But it depends on you. 我不是很喜欢复制粘贴啊。。谢谢and抱歉啊= =懒人一个...其实这一次上传的时候还是稍微改了一些地方 可以让copy part既视感不那么强
Thanks for modding~
Sagisawa-Yukari



[General]
Red: Must fix
Blue: Suggestion only
This map may need an epilepsy warning, as it contains frequently toggled storyboards.


[Normal]
你slider Tick没消音吧
00:24:115 (1,2) - 这两个ctrl+g一下,当然你这么做了记得相应的音效换过来
00:55:865 (1) - 你这个直接往后1/2从长白线开始多好
00:57:615 - 我没听错的话这里是有节奏的吧
01:03:115 (3) - 这里尾巴的地方是不是漏了个clap
01:44:115 (1) - 把这个改成肚子往外鼓吧


[Hard]
00:06:865 (1) - 我觉得吧你这里就不要用歌词起头,尝试长白线那边的伴奏开始,只跟背景音乐走
00:33:115 - 这个空的地方不是有节奏么?
01:01:115 (3,4,5) - 你这里完全可以复制前面的01:00:115 (1,2) - ,用相同的手法表现相同的节奏,而且你后面01:02:115 (1,2) - 不也是两个Slider组合么
01:03:615 (4) - 你这个是不是哪里复制来的slider,滑条头的clap漏了
01:18:865 (1) - 这里同开头
02:23:865 - 这里加个circle吧,红线也是有节奏的


[Insane]
00:13:490 (5,6) - 我觉得根据这里的节奏你5可以到前面那跟白线结束,变成1/2slider然后接个二连更好点
00:14:740 - 这里可以加个circle
01:20:365 - 这里同上
01:51:365 - 这里为什么要莫名空出一段,01:51:615 - 01:51:865 - 都可以放点什么
KIAI开始怎么给人感觉偷懒了,突然爆炸


good luck
Curisu
(7th June) Edit: 填坑
闲无事 我觉得还是把屙屎删了比较好

[General]
好BG
最后红线放着不map是remap吗

[Insane]
00:17:990 (1) - 这个-NC 下一个+NC其实我觉得好些
00:25:615 (1) - 这声音其实在00:25:490的位置就开始了 感觉可以前面+circle
01:19:115 (3,4) - 没叠好 仔细看下
01:21:740 - 总觉得这里缺circle // 01:21:865 (6) - 这里也换circle比较好 考虑drum
01:36:115 (1) - imo mute/vol-30~50 觉着这里的话default s-hit不适合这样玩

01:41:740 (5) - cw 20° rotate 摆左边一点
01:43:115 (5,6,7) - http://puu.sh/9hM6L/c0084a3f56.jpg
01:51:365 - +Break
01:57:115 (3,4,5) - 虽然跟前面的节奏一样 但是觉得这里搞成对称很初见杀
02:05:115 (3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/9hLCl/30d8e04bff.jpg

[Hard]
01:03:615 (4) - clap/+clap 其实听不太出你这里放whis的缘由
01:59:865 - +clap? 你这里像是漏了还是我理解偏差
02:23:115 (3) - 参照02:22:865 (2)的话02:23:240,02:23:365这两个时间点觉得不应该一个slider划过而不放元件

[Normal]
Copy的pattern就是同样改法
00:25:615 (3) - 删折返 // 00:26:115 - +circle
01:04:615 (2,2) - 这两个也可以看出是没叠准的
Topic Starter
JauiPlaY
Thank you for modding! The map should be more comfortable (especially the Insane diff) for playing imo. :D
Atrue
[Insane]
Placement
01:08:115 (1,2,3) - Only one thing.. Maybe here is a little bit messy, and just a little harder than the average diff to read. Consider stacking them completely? Example:
Call me back when you have checked here~
Topic Starter
JauiPlaY
Fixed.
Sonnyc
Sorry if I'm bothering, but I think the jump of 01:57:490 (4) in insane is way too massive compared to other part of the map...
Atrue
Will recheck after you checked Sonnyc's mod
Topic Starter
JauiPlaY

Sonnyc wrote:

Sorry if I'm bothering, but I think the jump of 01:57:490 (4) in insane is way too massive compared to other part of the map...
I did it on purpose and I do know that was a big jump. But it seems much bigger than I noticed.
You pointed that out, thanks.
Atrue
Ok~ Rechecked and every thing looks fine~
:)
Good luck!
Bubbled~
Topic Starter
JauiPlaY
Yay~
Many thanks!
Regou
23333333 我是不是超級慢
Topic Starter
JauiPlaY

Regou wrote:

23333333 我是不是超級慢
Say what all late.
Frostmourne
Ranked.
NaxelCL
Congratz owl city *moe*<3
F D Flourite
Gratz JPY~ :)
spboxer3
草 居然rank了 這樣鴨子不就要afk了
Topic Starter
JauiPlaY
Thank you, everyone here~
I'm so happy~
69653863
Yay, ranked already! Congratulations!

how
Zero__wind

spboxer3 wrote:

草 居然rank了 這樣鴨子不就要afk了
Kenezz
:(
yurunneram
Finally this song gets ranked! :D Gratz man!
Curisu

spboxer3 wrote:

草 居然rank了 這樣鴨子不就要afk了
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