Combobursts must be oriented for the left side of the screen Combobursts are aligned to the bottom and left sides of the screen by default, and are just horizontally flipped for the right side Thus, you only need to worry about making sure that the comboburst is cleanly cropped on the top and right sides of the image

1. 00:09:615 (4) - There's a lot of places like this on the opening part where you could put whistle to emphasize the synth though...
2. 00:15:115 (5) - Make this encircle (5)'s start instead and adjust (6) afterwards? Makes this part neater while keeping your pattern here imo:
   
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3. 00:17:365 (3) - Minor stuff, I'd put this on ~x:182 y:261 so (1,2,3,4)'s angle would be more balanced xD
4. 00:20:865 (3,1) - The sole clap on (3) sounds weird imo, why don't use clap on both :3
5. 00:21:865 (3,1) - Same here (they help to emphasize the synth somehow though)
6. 00:25:615 (1) - You can use Sampleset : Drum to get a more authentic sound here though (this applies to your next sliders like this)
7. 00:26:115 (1,2,3) - Just a suggestion here, you can make an encircle like this here though:
   
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8. 00:40:115 (8) - Finish here for the cymbals?
9. 00:55:865 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Umm this... I don't really like the (3)'s position here personally, it clusters too much on the center imo... I experimented a bit around here with linear sliders and got this though (:
   
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10. 00:58:615 (2) - Place this in ~x:35 y:87 so that (2,3,4) will form a better triangle?
11. 01:18:865 (1,2,3) - To keep the symmetry in play mode here, use a small manual-stacking perhaps? If you do this feel free to adjust the following (5) as well if you think it's necessary:
    
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12. 01:21:115 (3,4,5) - Err, that synth is VERY distinct here, why no whistle o.o - I think you should add whistle here somewhere, on (3)'s end and (4) perhaps?
13. 01:27:740 (3,1) - Umm, this overlap doesn't look really good imo... I tried experimenting but the space is so narrow orz >_< - I got this though, nice enough imo:
    
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14. 01:32:865 (5) - Move clap to (1) here? Your previous and following (1) had clap on it though
15. 01:43:365 (6) - You can consider CTRL+G-ing this one for a circular movement on (5,6,7,8) here - up to you though~
16. 01:52:615 (2,3,4) - Give them more space among each other here (at least as 01:55:115 (3,4,5)'s space) to avoid overlapping here? Looks nicer with a bit wider spacing and won't hurt to do though (:
    

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    273,88,112990,2,0,L|237:182,1,100
    355,79,113365,2,0,L|319:173,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

17. 02:03:115 (3,4,5) - Umm... Again another code to make the fan balanced here - (4) and (5) doesn't have to be fully identical with (3) for a better arc here though:
    
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    100,260,123490,2,0,P|73:217|76:149,1,100,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    150,194,123865,2,0,P|152:143|192:94,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

18. 02:07:865 (7) - Finish on slider's end? (the cymbals are obvious here)

1. 00:06:865 (1,2,3) - Err, no whistle to follow the vocals here (as you did on Insane)? o.o
2. 00:14:115 (1) - Umm... I instantly thought of this slider shape here, it works perfectly as well with 00:13:115 (6) :
   
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3. 00:16:115 (1,2) - Another suggestion here, I prefer a cross-slider like this here because it looks more natural imo:
   
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4. 00:20:490 (1,2) - Same as Insane here, put clap on (2)'s start instead?
5. 00:23:490 (2) - Not a major stuff here, I'd put this on ~x:481 y:202 so that (2) and (3) will spaced equally to the yellow (1)'s body~
6. 00:25:865 (5,1) - Yet another suggestion, perhaps add a slight arc on (5) like this and copy-paste its shape to (1) like this?
   
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7. 00:56:115 (2,3,4) - Err, I think it's best to use a small jump on (3,4) here (with dist. snap off) and aim for (4) to be perfectly encircled instead:
   
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8. 01:04:615 (2,3) - Copy-pasting (3) directly from (2) doesn't really flow well here imo, perhaps try this? The arc helps build the flow to your next (1,2) though imo xD
   
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9. 01:09:615 (6,1) - For a circular movement you can try CTRL+G-ing (6) here and putting (1) around ~x:336 y:364 perhaps (:
10. 01:11:865 (6,7) - Umm... Again I experimented here and I thought you can put (6) in the center and (7) in ~x:303 y:105 (small jump) for a center-oriented symmetry here before the break - your call though (:
11. 01:18:865 (1,2,3) - Again, add whistle here for the vocals (as you did on Insane)?
12. 01:25:615 (6) - Add a slight curve to the right perhaps? (if you freeze your editor on 01:24:874 for example you can see it'll create a fancy fan pattern around here :3)
13. 01:32:115 (1,2) - Another suggestion with a small jump here, looks much less forced imo rather than using normal spacing xD
    
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14. 01:32:115 (1,2,3) - Also with this part, same clapping suggestion here (put claps on every slider's start?)
15. 01:54:115 (1) - Minor (and also personal) stuff, this deserves to be curved more imo... Just my thoughts though (:
16. 02:01:490 (6,7) - Another suggestion here which I think flows more solid rather than directly copy-pasting each other:
    
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17. 02:17:865 (7) - Same as above here (as it's a copy-paste)

1. 00:08:115 (2) - Would be better imo if the bezier waypoints are further from each other, for example:
   
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2. 00:11:365 (2) - Missing clap on slider's start? o.o
3. 00:23:615 (2) - Err, because the previous 00:21:615 (2) already had a clap on it why don't you put a clap here as well :3 (it fits the instrument though)
4. 00:28:115 (1) - Use this looping shape instead to fit the vocals? (umm, idk if it's too tricky for a Normal in your opinion... I'm not really used to this shape either but this plays good here with the vocals)
   
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5. 00:56:865 (3,1) - Umm, yep, considering the yellow (1)'s placement it's better to made these two as an elbow-ish slider imo, rather than curving it simply with a single waypoint:
   
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6. 00:59:115 (2) - Same here, would be better if the bezier waypoints are made further from each other imo (:
7. 01:12:115 (4) - New combo here perhaps to make the combo-ing 1-2-3-1-2-3-1?
8. 01:18:865 (1,2) - Err... Rather than combining this into a single slider I much prefer to follow the vocals with this rhythm instead:
   
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9. 01:22:115 (1,2) - Also here, consider using an elbow-ish slider?
10. 01:26:115 (1) until 01:50:615 (2) - Same suggestion as the first half here (as it's copy-pasted)
11. 01:53:115 (3) - Small suggestion here for symmetry :3
    

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yurunneram wrote:

*mao* why was this song graveyarded? I was hoping for it to be ranked :/

JauiPlaY wrote:

yurunneram wrote:

*mao* why was this song graveyarded? I was hoping for it to be ranked :/

I'm now on my long vacation. Besides, BATs do not love me. :<

Autumn wrote:

哇 挖出来丽！
没来得及射星 加油°ω<

Atrue wrote:

Hello~
From your request.

[Notion]
This color means it is a suggestion. I prefer to do this, but you can either choose to fix or not.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.

[General]
Good map and a little suggestions here.
Feeling not too much to say here. But it's really a pity that you didn't map 02:24:115 - to the end because there are vocals... Btw, just saying that, I'm not meaning that you need to map that or should do that. Just a personal opinion.
Personally I'd suggest you find some more mods before asking me for recheck. Starred for now and good luck.随着节奏变慢 map不仅麻烦而且没什么趣味性 所以放弃了 不过歌词sb做到这里是有意为之

[Normal]
General
我觉得复制粘贴有点明显了= =不要在意细节= =
00:35:114 (2) - 01:47:114 (3) - unsnapped object's end. (That's not a bug of AImod, please fix it.)改惹
Nothing more than that.

[Hard]
General
我觉得复制粘贴有点明显了= =不要在意细节= =
Fine overall...
Beats
00:19:615 - Missing a important drum here.. And giving next 1/4 beat a hit sounds a little bit strange. Adding a circle here would be fine. Just stack it on next circle. Example:

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在这个难度三连不合适 用slider代替
01:01:615 - You know missing the clap here is really not good to listen.. It's my suggesting but you can either choose fix or not.

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改惹
01:08:115 - Same issue as above mentioned. But a little different with the one before it, the vocal at 01:07:865 is kinda important and better to be followed. Example:

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[Insane]
General
Ok, creative beats.. But you the distance is a little bit messed up here for me...
Placement
00:11:240 (2,3,4) - I think changing the distance a little larger is needed. Because you just used distances like 00:10:115 (2,3) , and follows this kind of distance.. So just make the distance a little bigger is recommended. Example(not big cahnges):

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480,260,11615,2,0,P|435:277|406:282,1,50,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,128,11990,2,0,P|439:163|415:180,1,50,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

其实这个故意的 前面跳了对应的这里不那么跳
00:28:115 (1) - Here the distance is bit strange imo.. Because you added an NC to make the distance suddenly slowed down and just jump to next note.. Staciking it on slider 3's head is a good choice. Example:

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改惹
00:33:365 (4) - Also this jump is not that reasonable for me. The start of the slider even didn't get a vocal on it, and you set the jump here which seems a little over-emphasized. To get better distance here, I suggest making the distance with the previous slider smaller. Example:

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老梗了 一般都能看得出来 放心= =
00:57:865 (7) - If you made this slider on purpose that would be fine.. If not, you can avoid overlapping here by moving the slider to around 100,300. Example:

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改惹
01:44:990 (3) - Another distance issue comes out here.. The jump is kinda reasonable, but I still recommend that making the distance more clear to read. Example(though bad pattern here..):

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同老梗 大丈夫
Hitsound
00:10:615 - A clap here? Not sure though. The music is really about to be emphasized here imo.这里按照下clap的规律是没有clap的
01:36:115 (1) - Really noisy.. Consider lower the volume down to 50% around here since the instrument you are following is obviously weaker than vocal.原曲就是这样 音效只是突出了这一块 如果你坚持 我再update一次好了

That's my suggestions. Thanks for requesting.

As I said in General, consider finding some more mods before asking for recheck.. But it depends on you. 我不是很喜欢复制粘贴啊。。谢谢and抱歉啊= =懒人一个...其实这一次上传的时候还是稍微改了一些地方 可以让copy part既视感不那么强

Sonnyc wrote:

Sorry if I'm bothering, but I think the jump of 01:57:490 (4) in insane is way too massive compared to other part of the map...