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Jun - Silver Dream

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Wizard Of Orz
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Wizard Of Orz
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, July 31, 2009 at 7:04:28 PM

Artist: Jun
Title: Silver Dream
Tags: DDR Dance Dance Revolution Hottest Party Wii Music Orz
BPM: 192
Filesize: 2785kb
Play Time: 01:33
Difficulties Available:
  1. Basic (4.85 stars, 211 notes)
  2. Beginner (3.95 stars, 149 notes)
  3. DaRRi Difficult (4.9 stars, 312 notes)
  4. Expert (4.9 stars, 343 notes)
Download: Jun - Silver Dream
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Last edited by Wizard Of Orz , edited 40 times in total.
DaRRi
267 posts
Joined January 2009
DaRRi
one of my favourite song in DDR!
so i quickly mapped one Difficult difficulty :O

Download: Jun - Silver Dream (supergarlic) [DaRRi Difficult].osu
Wizard Of Orz
965 posts
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Wizard Of Orz
added it but why did you make a new acc ?_?
DaRRi
267 posts
Joined January 2009
DaRRi
ダリでございます！！
spinner AUTO 2000+ now
also changed the sequence of combo color (blue silver blue silver)

Download: Jun - Silver Dream (supergarlic) [DaRRi Difficult].osu
Wizard Of Orz
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Wizard Of Orz
orz
blissfulyoshi
osu! Alumni
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Joined July 2008
blissfulyoshi
Offset:2925

Basic:
no mistakes.

Darri:
00:31:68 (1,2,3,4) - make a parallelogram

Difficult:
00:14:96 (8) - make parallel to 6?
00:46:52 (9) - relalign with the ends of 7 and 8
01:22:30 (2) - change the placement of 2 so the start is centered between the starts of 1 and 3

Expert:
00:12:93 (1) - make a 90 degrees counterclockwise turn of 3
00:15:11 (13) - make a vertical reflection of next combo's 3, or make this a line with 11 and 12
00:17:14 (6,7,8,9) - very hard to read
00:18:08 (1,2) - reposition both of these so they end on the exact same location
00:23:86 (5) - y does this start at a different location than 10
00:35:43 (3) - make a horizontal reflection of 2
00:48:39 (7) - make a horizontal reflection of 5
00:49:18 (1) - nazi post: center this slider on the y-axis
00:53:55 (8) - not the same distance from 5 as 6 is (few pixels off)

I would advise you turn down the drain 1 or 2 notches because the parts without notes or slow sliders really drain your guage.

Great beatmap. Star.
skyflying
80 posts
Joined March 2009
skyflying
:) COOL！
I like it
expert:1:04:336~1:05:586 add a slider? :P Because in I play behind cannot catch the rhythm

Star
Wizard Of Orz
965 posts
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Wizard Of Orz
fixed some things
v2b
504 posts
Joined October 2008
v2b
:)
DaRRi
267 posts
Joined January 2009
DaRRi
it's not supposed to be a parallelogram

here's some fix

Download: Jun - Silver Dream (supergarlic) [DaRRi Difficult].osu
tobebuta
123 posts
Joined June 2008
tobebuta
very good!
　 ε　⌒ﾍ⌒ヽﾌ
　（ 　　( 　・ω・）　~☆
　　しー し─Ｊ
azuki
351 posts
Joined January 2009
azuki
awesome map :)
anonymous_old
0 posts
Here since the beginning
anonymous_old
Basic
More like "Hard" for most map sets. Make an easier one. (This is good though; keep it.)

DaRRi Difficult
Not a DaRRi Mix D=

Looks great though.

Difficult
00:22:46 (2) - New combo and maybe unstack.
00:39:18 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Ugly stacking. Decrease Stack Leniency one tick.
00:50:58 (6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - Unreadable because of (5), thus requires memorization. I dunno if you need to do something about this though.
00:54:18 (1) - Put timing section before the note.
01:04:18 (1) - Same here.
01:06:68 (1) - Same here.

Expert
00:34:80 (2,3) - H-flip.
00:59:18 (1,3,4,5,6,7,1,3,1,3,4,6,7) - Clap?

I didn't get too far into this map because it's too fast for my wings. xD Was tons of fun while it lasted though.
Wizard Of Orz
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Topic Starter
Wizard Of Orz
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
DJPop
osu! Alumni
3,549 posts
Here since the beginning
DJPop
Just suggestions.


~Beginner~
01:04:18 (1) - hitfinish

~Basic~
01:04:18 (1) - hitfinish
01:05:58 (2,3,4) - hitnormal or hitfinish
Try use custom hitsounds to silence some unused sounds.

~DaRRi Difficult~
00:44:18 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - omg O_O
01:14:18 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
Whatever... all fine.

~Expert~
01:04:18 (1) - hitfinish
01:05:58 (2,3,4) - hitnormal or hitfinish
Try use custom hitsounds to silence some unused sounds.

~Difficult~
01:04:18 (1) - hitfinish
01:05:58 (2,3,4) - hitnormal or hitfinish
Try use custom hitsounds to silence some unused sounds.


+Star
Wizard Of Orz
965 posts
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Wizard Of Orz
i like my little slient sections :(
DaRRi
267 posts
Joined January 2009
DaRRi
HPDrain a bit too high for ME :(
Wizard Of Orz
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Wizard Of Orz
expert and difficult were at 7. its not that high :<
Takuma
osu! Alumni
1,704 posts
Joined October 2008
Takuma
Dropping by to say I love this map/song. Sorry this is late. >:
I'm not going to mod this just yet, but oh my god the star ratings are all so high.
rust45
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Joined May 2009
rust45
I don't feel like modding this right now but you get a star.
Yuukari-Banteki
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Joined June 2008
Yuukari-Banteki
[Beginner]
this is a bit difficult for a lowest diff
00:29:33 (4) - kill whistle plz
00:54:18 (1) - bpm changes in lowest diff???
00:59:80 (2,4) - remove claps
01:04:18 (1) - insert break
im going to go ahead and say this is too hard for a lowest difficulty to be rankable


[Basic]
00:21:68 (1) - unintuitive bpm change
theres a lot of unnecessary whistles but other than that pretty nice


[darri]
00:22:61 (1) - overusing hitsounds
01:33:86 (1) - kill the whistle


[Expert]
00:11:83 (6,7,8,9,1,2,4,6) - clusterfucky
00:18:08 (1,2,3,4) - stack the endpoints
00:51:68 (1,2,3,4) - ^


[Difficult]
00:21:68 (1) - unintuitive
w/e zzzz


not exactly stellar but have a star anyways *sleep*
Wizard Of Orz
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Wizard Of Orz

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Beginner]
this is a bit difficult for a lowest diff
00:29:33 (4) - kill whistle plz done
00:54:18 (1) - bpm changes in lowest diff??? killed
00:59:80 (2,4) - remove claps done
01:04:18 (1) - insert break no
im going to go ahead and say this is too hard for a lowest difficulty to be rankable
made drain lower by 2

[Basic]
00:21:68 (1) - unintuitive bpm change its fine
theres a lot of unnecessary whistles but other than that pretty nice


[darri]
00:22:61 (1) - overusing hitsounds
01:33:86 (1) - kill the whistle
these are fine imo >.>

[Expert]
00:11:83 (6,7,8,9,1,2,4,6) - clusterfucky readable imo
00:18:08 (1,2,3,4) - stack the endpoints its fine >.>
00:51:68 (1,2,3,4) - ^ same


[Difficult]
00:21:68 (1) - unintuitive its fine
w/e zzzz


not exactly stellar but have a star anyways *sleep*
DaRRi
267 posts
Joined January 2009
DaRRi

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Beginner]
this is a bit difficult for a lowest diff
00:29:33 (4) - kill whistle plz
00:54:18 (1) - bpm changes in lowest diff???
00:59:80 (2,4) - remove claps
01:04:18 (1) - insert break
im going to go ahead and say this is too hard for a lowest difficulty to be rankable


[Basic]
00:21:68 (1) - unintuitive bpm change
theres a lot of unnecessary whistles but other than that pretty nice


[darri]
00:22:61 (1) - overusing hitsounds no it's not
01:33:86 (1) - kill the whistle it's fine


[Expert]
00:11:83 (6,7,8,9,1,2,4,6) - clusterfucky
00:18:08 (1,2,3,4) - stack the endpoints
00:51:68 (1,2,3,4) - ^


[Difficult]
00:21:68 (1) - unintuitive
w/e zzzz


not exactly stellar but have a star anyways *sleep*
ztrot
osu! Alumni
4,378 posts
Joined February 2008
ztrot
okay very good star :3
Soaprman
1,392 posts
Joined January 2008
Soaprman
Beginner
The difficulty settings are fine but the layout is far too heavy for a "beginner" map.

00:36:68 (1) - Maybe separate the endpoints on these sliders. When playing, I thought the timing on these would be closer together like on the three sliders a bit before it.

Basic
Feels more like a "hard" than a "normal", which is what I'm assuming "basic" to mean. Not as big an issue as with beginner, though.

Overall
The difficulty names are kind of bad. Are they lifted from another game or something? I'd recommend sticking with traditional easy/normal/hard/insane.

Griping about difficulty names aside, this is a nice mapset. It definitely deserves a star! :)
Wizard Of Orz
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Wizard Of Orz
the names are from ddr hence the tag says ddr
Wizard Of Orz
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Wizard Of Orz
cmon i need a bat beginner has no 1/2 note now >.>
Yuukari-Banteki
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Joined June 2008
Yuukari-Banteki
[Beginner]
nothing you wont refuse to change


[Basic]
as above

[Darri]
unchanged


[Expert]
00:11:83 (6,7,8,9,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - cluttered


[Difficult]
unchanged
Kerensa
167 posts
Joined January 2009
Kerensa
wow o.O awesomeness!!!!
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