Hi :3





Nice map <3
Good Luck >w<

Okay, I see the modding is on going, so I will finish the diffs really soon.

Warning, warning, well w/e

[General]

Warning, warning, some circles in Ono's diffs aren't snapped, you must fix them. (from 00:51:318 (1) - until 00:59:550 (1) -)

[Normal]

00:34:487 (4,1,2) - Not sure if it's just my eyes, but I guess the gap between 4 - 1 and 4 - 2 isn't the same. Consider fixing it, for the sake of doing it proper.

01:36:317 (1) - o.o imo a finish would fit better, this hitsound here just makes everything so.. quiet. If you understand what I mean, but it seems to be special, so it's up to you.

02:40:708 (1) - Watch out that this exactly touches the slider path of 02:39:061 (3) -. Doesn't affect the gameplay, yet you can see it quiet good in game.

02:40:708 (1,2,1) - Same issue as above: Check the gaps between 02:40:708 (1,2) - and 02:42:171 (2,1) - please!

03:01:013 (4) - Not so sure if this a good idea for a normal diff. Even I would get slightly confused by it, it's a slider where you just click, and afterwards you'll ask yourself: okwat? Well, at least, it's in my case like that. I guess two circles are the better option here? Would make everything slightly more difficult, but that's worth it, imo.

Feedback

Rhythm: Awesome rhythm, enough variation, and really good to play, good work.
Placing: Very neat and thoughtful. I like it.

[meiikyuu's Hard]

00:22:049 (2) - I would move this slightly downwards to have the same distance between 00:21:500 (1,3) - and 00:22:049 (2,3) - .

00:46:195 (6) - Mh. How about moving it a bit to the right? I can't really approve it because it's really close to 00:45:647 (5) - . Some more spacing wouldn't hurt.

00:54:152 - What do you think of adding a circle here? 1) It sounds awesome 2) 00:52:688 - You have the same rhythm here, so it would fit too!

01:30:098 (7) - It's kinda neat if you stack the slider end of this one with 01:29:000 (4) - , because it's a bit more hidden, and more interesting in my opinion!

01:47:476 (1) - duh.

02:18:025 (3,4) - At least it sounds like as you've followed the vocals most of the time.. this is kinda wrong then. 02:18:207 - The long slider should start here, according to your own rhythm. 02:18:391 (4) - It's also a rather bad idea to let a slider end on a big strong white tick.

03:09:426 (1) - duh. ok i stop xD

Feedback

Rhythm: Very constant, and following the rhythm really good.
Placing: Fine for me, sometimes i would use stacking a bit more, but that's entirely up to you, so i'm ok with it!

[Lunatic]

Gameplay / My Feelings: Was enjoyable to play, AR seems a bit high.. sometimes things are really hidden, i'm going to hate them playing it with hidden xD But no serious issues found.

00:36:316 (1,2,3) - I try to understand what you've mapped here to, but I .. still dont quite get it. Seems more like a combo breaker, maybe you consider staying consistent.

00:48:024 (6) - NC due to the strong beat here.

01:31:560 (3) - Guess you've missed a blanket here.

01:32:475 (5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - Mh well, this was one of the patterns I somehow disliked, it seems so unconsistent with the spacing, and 01:33:024 (8) - is so hidden. also 01:33:207 (9,10,1) - the jump here should be bigger, to emphasize the strong voice part here. I hope you can change it a bit! If you need some more support with it, you can find me in game

01:40:524 (4) - Blanket issue again.

01:46:560 (13) - I think the NC should be here, 01:46:926 (1) - not here. Also 01:47:475 (2) - make one here since there is obviously something different (duh.)

02:01:194 (7,8) - I'm sure you can get this blanketing better as well.

02:15:647 (4) - There's this hidden stuff again D: Isn't there any way to use the space a bit better? >< http://puu.sh/4GPZu.jpg ? Use this as a reference, well up to you though, as always

02:47:659 (3,5) - Make sure the spacing between those is the same as between those 02:48:025 (5,6) - , just for aesthetics.

02:50:860 (8) - Move this one to 300 160, to follow it's natural flow (well, not it's, just.. the natural flow)

03:08:513 (13,1,2) - ^

Feedback

Rhythm: Was okay, please take care of the combo breaker stuff mentioned above!
Placing: Yeah, let's put it like that: I wouldn't map like that, but I really enjoyed playing it! (so it's good, that's what I wanted to say. xD)

Overall

Unfortunately, I have to say that the Normal is rather easy in compare to the hard - nevertheless, I guess it's okay. the diffs are well designed, and there weren't any big big mistakes.

I wish you good luck, and I'll send some more QAT-Memberrrsss

See you in game!

Asphyxia wrote:

Hi o/ Here's the M4M I requested

General things:

1. No Easy diff? Yeah, it'll be fine

Normal>

1. 00:18:391 (3) - How about remove this repeat and adding a circle in 00:18:755 - ? I don't like this because you already have a repeative slider 00:17:476 (2) - here. Hmm I feel like the note would be harder
2. 00:45:647 (2) - I was thinking something like this because it would kinda catch 00:46:561 (1) - 's end nicely o.o You mean space them out? I'd rather not break distance snap here
   
   Example

   
3. 00:50:951 (3,1) - Blanket Fixed
4. 01:02:658 (3) - Giving this slider more curve would make it look better Fixed
   
   Example

   
5. 01:05:036 (2,3) - Blanket? I did?
6. 01:28:816 (3,1) - Stack Fixed
   
7. Nothing else I guess, pretty nice diff~

meiikyuu's Hard>

1. Ar7 is pretty low, +1 AR maybe?
2. 00:12:993 - your spinner could start here instead of 00:13:085 - ?
3. 00:46:195 (6) - Giving this slider more curve would make it look better and at the same time it would match with 00:45:647 (5) - better imo
   
   Example

   
4. 00:54:426 (8) - Totally unfitting (imo), why not like this? It would also be a better blanket with 00:54:976 (9,10) -
   
   Example

   
5. 00:55:342 (1,2) - Dat overlap, well tbh it kinda looks good xD
6. 01:04:122 (1,5) - I really can't stand how these two overlap, can't you do anything about it? :s
7. 01:20:769 (5) - Like this?
   
   Example

   
8. 01:25:159 (2) - Move this a bit down? Just because it looks bad in the current + it plays better if you move it down
   
   Example

   
9. 01:42:171 (1,3) - Ughhhh dat overlap
10. 01:48:024 (2) - Distance ? o.o
11. 02:11:805 (2,1,2) - Not stacked perfectly
12. 02:34:854 (1,2) - It might look good but distance??
    
13. That's about it~

Lunatic>

1. +1 OD? People might SS this diff with first try, this would prevent it but your choice
2. 00:50:768 (5,6) - Stack
3. 01:05:951 (6,7) - Stack
4. 01:07:963 (4,1) - Stack
5. 02:01:744 (8,1) - Stack
6. 02:14:365 (1,2) - Blanket? o.o
7. 03:08:878 (1,2) - Stack
   
8. Loved this diff, niiiiice <3

Sorry for noob mod and best of luck for this o/

I will throw some stars because this song :3

sjoy wrote:

just as a Touhou song for mod
[Lunatic]
00:15:646 (1) - make a blanet with 00:16:560 (2) - 0 0 Fixed
00:17:475 (1) - ctrl+g and 00:17:841 (2) - ctrl+g? i'll keep
00:34:121 (5) - ctrl+g? ^
00:36:316 (1) - like this?http://puu.sh/4s2yl.jpg hmm wrong spacing in this case
00:39:792 (7) - like this?http://puu.sh/4s2C7.jpg nice idea, but i'd like to keep the symmetry here
00:43:999 (2) - move to 460,320? stacked on (6)
00:48:024 (6) - NC Fixed
00:50:951 (6) - ^
00:53:877 (5) - ^
00:56:804 (6) - ^
00:59:731 (5) - ^ I'll gather 2nd opinions about these NCs, its a good point
01:05:859 add a note on 364 ,180? keep
01:28:999 (7) - NC Fixed
01:43:451 (5) -stack perfectly with 01:42:902 (3) - and ctrl+g? stacked
02:04:122 (5) - NC
02:12:903 (7) - NC
02:13:269 (8) - move to 340 ,224? Fixed
02:21:683 (6) - NC
02:50:952 (9) - NC Fixed
03:09:427 (2) - add fin? kept the one on the tail
I hope I can help you
good luck
If you make Touhou map
You can PM me to mod it .I enjoy it

Satellite wrote:

haai

[General]
Letterbox not Unification.

[Lunatic]
00:17:292 (6,1) - Swap NC here,so the NC is on the downbeat. It makes more sense to have it on the stronger beat, and ths is where the drums repeat as well. hmm I'd like to warn players of the jump
00:17:475 (1) - First point add Finish? not really hearing anything in the bgm that could fit?
00:31:926 (1) - remove whistle? same as 00:26:073 (1) - Added whistle at the first spot
00:32:932 (6,7) - same as 00:28:542 (5,6) - use this pattern? Fixed

152,192,32932,6,2,L|240:208,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,164,33207,1,2,0:0:0:0:

SPOILER

00:36:591 - I think More better rhythm,follow with back music,like this I'll think about it, i was trying to be a bit lenient in the rest of the combo

00:39:060 (5,6,7,8) - first point sampleset Normal. add clap here? A bit loud imo
00:43:268 (6,8) - add whistle? follow with lyrics. nice idea but i would like to emphasize the crescendo here
00:44:548 (4) - Not too fond of the straight flow here.Try an arrange like this. Fixed

SPOILER

00:46:194 (8) - I don't think end point Normal sampleset fit.remove? Sounds ok imo
00:48:207 - The fact that you don't use any hitsound for that drum that goes every white tick in this section makes me sad, but oh well. i guess the hitsounds were a bit soft =v=
00:49:487 (1) - first point sampleset soft is fit? kept
00:56:621 (5) - 3grid down, because same as 00:56:073 (3) - here. same jump distance. it'll be alright
00:59:548 (4) - Move x290 y157.all distance x1.75 is better. Fixed
01:01:012 (12) - add clap? kept
01:02:658 (6,7) - First point add whistle? I think fit. kept
01:03:755 (8) - nazi sorry 1grid Left is better.because distance snap*1.50 Fixed
01:05:036 (4) - Cool pattern, but the flow feels a bit blah.try Ctrl+G i was going for a little oval flow?
01:05:402 (5) - ^

SPOILER

01:19:853 (3) - Let's more beautiful. Fixed

SPOILER

01:36:316 (1,1) - cooooooooooooooool <3 xD
01:38:694 (4) - back point add clap? kept whistles
02:00:646 (4,5,6) - Cool pattern, but the flow feels a bit blah
└ 02:00:829 (5) - stack is 02:01:012 (6) - here? and 02:01:012 (6) - stack is 02:00:646 (4) - here. Fixed in my own way

SPOILER

02:07:049 (6) - Not too fond of the straight flow here. try this. Fixed

SPOILER

02:11:256 (4) - add clap? no thxs
02:13:452 (9) - Cool pattern, but the flow feels a bit blah. try Ctrl+G? I think it'll be fine
02:16:927 (8) - back point add clap? kept for consistency
02:51:500 (10,11) - I don't like this Rhythm. try this. good idea, i just gotta find a good pattern now

03:05:220 (4) - why not Contrast? same as 03:04:122 (1) - here... Fixed

That'a all my Suggestion!! <3

Xinely wrote:

Hi :3

• 
  General
  Remove letterbox? Maybe when i get a cool sb lol
  add Onosakihito in tags? Fixed

• 
  Normal
  00:27:537 (2) - try make better blanket? my suggestion : middle point 384|232 and tail point 400|152 Fixed?
  00:33:391 (3) - just opinion, maybe make it curve to have better flow? http://puu.sh/4zNlS.jpg i left it for some variety in notes =
  00:39:243 (2) - better if use 0,80x spacing here imo xD i already am?
  00:49:488 (1) - middle point 42|297 , tail 10|235 for better blanket?
  00:52:415 (1) - nazi, 2 grid right to make better blanket with 00:50:952 (3) - ?
  01:08:513 (3,4) - opinion again, i prefer to make them like http://puu.sh/4zOil.jpg for flow
  01:11:439 (3) - finish in tail? as i heard there is a cymbal here
  01:29:731 (4) - nazi here, try tail point 192|200 to make blanket? it will be great imo xD
  02:05:220 (4) - kinda feel weird with this flow, well feel free deny this , try to make like puu.sh/4zP2g.jpg?
  02:33:391 (3) - same as 01:11:439 (3) -
  02:55:342 (1) - nazi </3 , 1 grid up for better blanket
  Fixed the blankets and other minor things xD

• 
  Hard
  00:18:756 (1) - i prefer ctrl+G for flow here
  00:22:049 (2) - well, i prefer use normal spacing here since no heavy music to make jump feel nice ><
  00:39:244 (5) - make it little curve? it will have better flow imo
  00:47:658 (4) - make it like http://puu.sh/4AfB9.jpg ? [copy paste from (3) and rotate]
  00:53:513 (5) - imo ctrl+G will have better flow
  01:12:163 (5) - finish in head? the vocal so high here
  01:21:500 (7) - 308,248 for smooth curve? it will have better flow too
  01:33:939 (2) - make it little curve to have better flow? http://puu.sh/4AgaY.jpg
  01:46:561 (6) - clap in tail?
  01:48:025 (2) - 316,320? it will be easier to read by player and better flow
  02:53:513 (3) - try https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1003271 ? more neat and funplayable xD

• 
  Lunatic
  00:47:658 (4) - maybe need NC to can read 1/2 jump NC'd the long slider after these 2
  01:18:024 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - opinion here, maybe this stream https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1003279 to have better flow? hmm i like the wave xD
  01:39:243 (1) - i heard cymbal here, better if use normal finish imo also consistency with normal diff i actually went and changed Normal to match this now orz lol, i think this finish makes the map a bit special
  01:46:926 (1,2) - swap NC due SV change in (2) ? or add give NC in 01:47:475 (2) - Fixed
  03:01:195 (1) - same as 01:39:243 (1) -
  03:09:427 (2) - same as 01:46:926 (1,2) - Fixed

Nice map <3
Good Luck >w<

Irreversible wrote:

Warning, warning, well w/e

[General]

Warning, warning, some circles in Ono's diffs aren't snapped, you must fix them. (from 00:51:318 (1) - until 00:59:550 (1) -)

[Normal]

00:34:487 (4,1,2) - Not sure if it's just my eyes, but I guess the gap between 4 - 1 and 4 - 2 isn't the same. Consider fixing it, for the sake of doing it proper. Fixed, idk why this always looks screwed up

01:36:317 (1) - o.o imo a finish would fit better, this hitsound here just makes everything so.. quiet. If you understand what I mean, but it seems to be special, so it's up to you. orz lol

02:40:708 (1) - Watch out that this exactly touches the slider path of 02:39:061 (3) -. Doesn't affect the gameplay, yet you can see it quiet good in game. I think there's enough time in between

02:40:708 (1,2,1) - Same issue as above: Check the gaps between 02:40:708 (1,2) - and 02:42:171 (2,1) - please! they looked fine in gameplay?

03:01:013 (4) - Not so sure if this a good idea for a normal diff. Even I would get slightly confused by it, it's a slider where you just click, and afterwards you'll ask yourself: okwat? Well, at least, it's in my case like that. I guess two circles are the better option here? Would make everything slightly more difficult, but that's worth it, imo. Fixed

Feedback

Rhythm: Awesome rhythm, enough variation, and really good to play, good work.
Placing: Very neat and thoughtful. I like it. Thanks!

[meiikyuu's Hard]

00:22:049 (2) - I would move this slightly downwards to have the same distance between 00:21:500 (1,3) - and 00:22:049 (2,3) - .

00:46:195 (6) - Mh. How about moving it a bit to the right? I can't really approve it because it's really close to 00:45:647 (5) - . Some more spacing wouldn't hurt.

00:54:152 - What do you think of adding a circle here? 1) It sounds awesome 2) 00:52:688 - You have the same rhythm here, so it would fit too!

01:30:098 (7) - It's kinda neat if you stack the slider end of this one with 01:29:000 (4) - , because it's a bit more hidden, and more interesting in my opinion!

01:47:476 (1) - duh.

02:18:025 (3,4) - At least it sounds like as you've followed the vocals most of the time.. this is kinda wrong then. 02:18:207 - The long slider should start here, according to your own rhythm. 02:18:391 (4) - It's also a rather bad idea to let a slider end on a big strong white tick.

03:09:426 (1) - duh. ok i stop xD

Feedback

Rhythm: Very constant, and following the rhythm really good.
Placing: Fine for me, sometimes i would use stacking a bit more, but that's entirely up to you, so i'm ok with it!

[Lunatic]

Gameplay / My Feelings: Was enjoyable to play, AR seems a bit high.. sometimes things are really hidden, i'm going to hate them playing it with hidden xD But no serious issues found.

00:36:316 (1,2,3) - I try to understand what you've mapped here to, but I .. still dont quite get it. Seems more like a combo breaker, maybe you consider staying consistent. Fixed

00:48:024 (6) - NC due to the strong beat here. Fixed

01:31:560 (3) - Guess you've missed a blanket here. Fixed?

01:32:475 (5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - Mh well, this was one of the patterns I somehow disliked, it seems so unconsistent with the spacing, and 01:33:024 (8) - is so hidden. also 01:33:207 (9,10,1) - the jump here should be bigger, to emphasize the strong voice part here. I hope you can change it a bit! If you need some more support with it, you can find me in game Fixed spacing, kept (8) hidden (i'd think the AR is fast enough)

01:40:524 (4) - Blanket issue again. Fixed

01:46:560 (13) - I think the NC should be here, 01:46:926 (1) - not here. Also 01:47:475 (2) - make one here since there is obviously something different (duh.) NC's the 2nd note. kept the first because i wanted to give off a finished feeling i guess

02:01:194 (7,8) - I'm sure you can get this blanketing better as well.

02:15:647 (4) - There's this hidden stuff again D: Isn't there any way to use the space a bit better? >< http://puu.sh/4GPZu.jpg ? Use this as a reference, well up to you though, as always It'll be fine imo

02:47:659 (3,5) - Make sure the spacing between those is the same as between those 02:48:025 (5,6) - , just for aesthetics. A screenshot would help. I guess i kinda liked the symmetry of (3,4)?

02:50:860 (8) - Move this one to 300 160, to follow it's natural flow (well, not it's, just.. the natural flow) this was on purpose to "prepare" for the linear stream?

03:08:513 (13,1,2) - ^ what?

Feedback

Rhythm: Was okay, please take care of the combo breaker stuff mentioned above!
Placing: Yeah, let's put it like that: I wouldn't map like that, but I really enjoyed playing it! (so it's good, that's what I wanted to say. xD) Thanks again! xD

Overall

Unfortunately, I have to say that the Normal is rather easy in compare to the hard - nevertheless, I guess it's okay. the diffs are well designed, and there weren't any big big mistakes.

I wish you good luck, and I'll send some more QAT-Memberrrsss

See you in game!

Thanks everyone sry for late reply ansdkgfdcxm

LunarSakuya wrote:

insert Irreversible's mod here

i lol'd

☢！！ＷＡＲＮＩＮＧ！！☢  ＱＡＴ  ＷＡＶＥ  ＩＮＣＯＭＩＮＧ

[General]

• 
  ☢ - Add the album in the tags?
  ☢ - Not sure about the artist, the arranger (DJ Command) is missing. DJ Command ft. 3L,mariapolo perhaps?

[Normal]
Solid diff here.

• 
  ☢ - 00:48:025 (3,4,1) - Is this jump necessary? I think it's less confusing to leave this out, even if the sliderspeed changes, and use this spacing only after the sliderspeed has happened.

[Meiikyuu's Hard]
Nice to see AR7 coming back

• 
  ☢ - 00:24:427 (6) - Not sure about the irregular prev/next spacing of this note. The jump to the next note looks a bit weird, maybe make the spacing equal?
  ☢ - 00:24:976 (2,3) - Perhaps make the spacing here the same as (5) -> (1)(1.30x) a few notes later? For consistency.
  ☢ - 00:40:342 (7) - for consistency, make the prev spacing of this note 1.10x? Since 1.30 and 1.10 are similar this doesn't feel like a jump but like an error.
  ☢ - 01:48:025 (2) - this overlap looks really odd.
  ☢ - 02:24:060 - The vocal here is missing in your map I would suggest a rhythm like you did here: 02:26:988 (2) -

[Lunatic]

• 
  ☢ - The spacing is really inconsistent in this diff. At a lot of places the spacing jumps from 1.58 to 1.68 or so. the extra 0.10 doesn't make them feels as jumps but make them look a bit messy.
  ☢ - 02:28:635 (7,8,1) - Instead of stacking, make the prev/next 0.50x? I didn't find it fitting here like at the other places.

[Ono's Muzukashii]

• 
  ☢ - You might want to finish this diff quickly or else we will have to set this map on hold in our queue

[Ono's oni]

• 
  ☢ - Love, but fix unsnapped notes.

[Lunatic][meiikyuu's Hard][Normal][Closing]
Great mapset overall! Your jump patterns in Lunatic were especially enjoyable to play through, and everything flowed quite nicely on the whole. There were a few bits in Lunatic and Hard with weird rhythm, but other than that the difficulties are fun and well-designed. Good work!

happy30 wrote:

☢！！ＷＡＲＮＩＮＧ！！☢  ＱＡＴ  ＷＡＶＥ  ＩＮＣＯＭＩＮＧ

[General]

• 
  ☢ - Add the album in the tags? added "flash" lol for Touhou Euro Flash vol.2
  ☢ - Not sure about the artist, the arranger (DJ Command) is missing. DJ Command ft. 3L,mariapolo perhaps? not fully sure either but many other Touhou maps use the singer as the artist (senya, mai kotoge, etc.) I'll prob end up changing the artist to this after Ono sends me updates

[Normal]
Solid diff here.

• 
  ☢ - 00:48:025 (3,4,1) - Is this jump necessary? I think it's less confusing to leave this out, even if the sliderspeed changes, and use this spacing only after the sliderspeed has happened. Fixed

[Meiikyuu's Hard]
Nice to see AR7 coming back

• 
  ☢ - 00:24:427 (6) - Not sure about the irregular prev/next spacing of this note. The jump to the next note looks a bit weird, maybe make the spacing equal? Fixed
  ☢ - 00:24:976 (2,3) - Perhaps make the spacing here the same as (5) -> (1)(1.30x) a few notes later? For consistency. Fixed
  ☢ - 00:40:342 (7) - for consistency, make the prev spacing of this note 1.10x? Since 1.30 and 1.10 are similar this doesn't feel like a jump but like an error. Fixed
  ☢ - 01:48:025 (2) - this overlap looks really odd. Fixed
  ☢ - 02:24:060 - The vocal here is missing in your map I would suggest a rhythm like you did here: 02:26:988 (2) - Fixed

[Lunatic]

• 
  ☢ - The spacing is really inconsistent in this diff. At a lot of places the spacing jumps from 1.58 to 1.68 or so. the extra 0.10 doesn't make them feels as jumps but make them look a bit messy. Alright, hope I fixed them up lol
  ☢ - 02:28:635 (7,8,1) - Instead of stacking, make the prev/next 0.50x? I didn't find it fitting here like at the other places. Fixed

[Ono's Muzukashii]

• 
  ☢ - You might want to finish this diff quickly or else we will have to set this map on hold in our queue

[Ono's oni]

• 
  ☢ - Love, but fix unsnapped notes.

11t wrote:

[Lunatic]

00:36:316 (1,2,3) - I'm not sure this fits the rhythm. You skip over the synth note at 00:36:591 and then transition into a somewhat unexpected double. How about something like this instead? Fixed, took the second one

This could also work, though I find it a bit awkward:


01:06:134 (7) - Not sure if you care much about something like this, but something like midpoint:429,109 startpoint:414,24 would match the angles of 01:05:402 (5) better. Fixed

02:23:147 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern seems arbitrary, especially in comparison to the rest of the map which is arranged using clear structures. There's nothing particularly bad about this pattern, and it's not as if it doesn't fit the music, but I'm sure that there's a much more interesting arrangement that you could use here. As they are now, these sliders have little to do with each other and they feel standalone, rather than parts of a whole. Trying to convey separation present in the music doesn't always need to lead to disorganization; see 02:26:074 (1,2,3) . I'm not going to give specific suggestions here because if this is something you do end up wanting to change, I think that it should be a change that you come up with on your own, for stylistic reasons. Fixed hopefully

02:31:926 (5) - This slider shape fits the vocals nicely but it doesn't seem to be consistent with the clean visual style of the rest of your map. Something simpler would appear more compatible with the aesthetics of this map: Fixed

image

But of course you lose out on the more constant vibration effect.
You could try making the slider like this:

image

And then Ctrl+Shift+R ~60 degrees clockwise:

image

This would make it look cleaner, at least.

02:48:574 (6) - midpoint:66,165 for a neater blanket. Fixed

02:58:268 (1) - This could look much neater. Make the slider like this: Fixed, thanks

image

And then Ctrl+Shift+R 15 degrees clockwise:

image

It looks like this is what you were doing, but for some reason the points got all messed up and weren't correctly grid-aligned. Though maybe you did that on purpose, but personally I think this slider fits the rest of your map better if it looks neater.

[meiikyuu's Hard]

00:41:438 (2) - An NC here would look nice, and would reinforce the fact that these are two beats apart. not sure, i'll see what meii does

01:47:476 (1,2) - The placement here is awkward for a section finisher. (1) and (2) very slightly overlap, and the motion isn't particularly interesting. I don't think this arrangement is strong or impactful enough for something that occurs right before a break. Maybe you could try something like:

image

Though I'm sure there are better patterns. Spaced them apart

02:24:060 - You skip a vocal beat here, and I think it's more necessary that you map it for consistency with the music and with the rest of your map. Any of the patterns you use previously or after with these same vocal rhythms would work here. Fixed

02:38:694 - Another vocal beat skip. There doesn't seem to be anything in the music to suggest this skip, nor the 02:38:878 (3) repeat slider.

[Normal]

Tick Rate: The ticks are too frequent. Having a spam of 10s pop up with pretty much every slider is somewhat distracting, and I have to admit that a 700 combo 3 minute Normal is a bit strange. If you decrease tick rate to 1, though, you'll lose the tick symmetry on your 3/2 sliders, so I could see why you would keep it at 2. Fixed

01:24:610 (1,2) - Since you were so good about the blankets at 01:28:816 (3,4,1) I think you should blanket these as well. kept it for now unless meii wants it
01:24:610 (1) - midpoint:88,204
01:26:074 (2) - midpoint:232,115; endpoint:179,28

02:14:366 (1) - Consider fixing this blanket. midpoint:169,182; endpoint:255,65. Don't think it's supposed to be a blanket?

03:07:781 (3) - Considering blanketing. midpoint:92,188; endpoint:42,70. Note that doing this will place 03:08:878 (4) at a 0.84x distance from (3). what?

[Closing]
Great mapset overall! Your jump patterns in Lunatic were especially enjoyable to play through, and everything flowed quite nicely on the whole. There were a few bits in Lunatic and Hard with weird rhythm, but other than that the difficulties are fun and well-designed. Good work! Thanks a lot

Thanks so much!!
just waiting for Ono~

hi~

[Lunatic]
00:28:268 (4,5) - Those change of spacing threw me off a bit, i catched the trick eventually. I guess im just a bad player buttt, I tell you just in case.
01:36:316 (1,1) - I'm ok with overlaps in general, but when they look unintentional bug me a bit, and this one looks messy and divorced from the rest of the map. Just and opinion though.

[meiikyuu's Hard]
03:15:830 (1) - here I wanted something like this:03:17:293 (5) -

[Normal]
No problems with normal for me

I wont mod taiko diffs cuz with my "extended" knowlegde of taiko would be the same mod it and not mod it.

Good luck~

My god, all these tries. But finally I'm satisfied with the Oni. Tell me how far the Muzu is done. Else I can continue to map it and finish it really soon this time.
Download: http://puu.sh/4TqaH.zip

Once again, happy birthday and sorry that we didn't managed it at your date to rank it. orz
Still, I hope you had a nice party.

Just a suggestion

How about adding a kiai flash 01:24:609 - ?
and here 02:46:560 -

o:

Videogame (English)
LOLL. Need fix this plzz

The engrish is too strong

xD anyway pretty sure it's right

getting an error when osu is trying to extract this :<

Dangaard wrote:

getting an error when osu is trying to extract this :<

yeah, i am too. warning warning this beatmap has moved to the failed folder.

aw shiz lol ok i will try to fix this, thanks for checking =v=

the issue appears to be fixed now.

I thought this is ranked already.. o_O

Will come back here tomorrow.

M4M before you guys do something lol



good map you two

irre can i snake you cause i really feel like nuking approving the standard diffs of this map

fight fight

Ono is here. Ono will finish.
(Is this ML here?)

Call me back for rank then.

jonathan stealer i het u

im da snake

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
taiko oni is missing "flash" in tags, please add it to keep tags consistent
for artist instead of using "3L, maria♂polo" i think its better to use "3L・maria♂polo", the "・" is a special character similar to "♂" and was used on the official title of this track

[Normal]
00:30:463 (3) - position it like this? 01:15:830 (1,2) - not perfectly parallel, blame my OCD
02:14:366 (1) - probably can fix the blanket here to look nicer with 02:16:195 (2)
03:17:659 (4,2) - would be cool if you can make these two have the same shape for nice reflection

[meii's Hard]
01:22:780 (4) - forgot clap here
01:48:025 (2) - i would actually use a jump here considering how the finish effect comes in here after the vocal hold
02:28:817 (8) - use a 1/4 repeat slider? there are some drum rolls in the music which warrants that
03:09:426 (1) - sv change is glitched here, the slider is snapped to 03:09:426 but the green line is snapped to 03:09:427; manually snap the green line to get the sv working properly
03:20:952 (6) - add a finish here?

[Nuke]
01:09:975 (5) - based on your NC pattern NC should be here instead of 01:08:512 (1)
02:00:646 (4) - stack this on 01:59:731 (1)? or move it more left to avoid the overlap
02:31:926 (5) - same as 01:09:975 (5)
02:58:268 (1) - peppy might get mad, im not sure

3 months ago jonathanlfj wrote:

☢☢☢☢☢☢☢☢☢☢-Warning-☢☢☢☢☢☢☢☢☢☢

my intention has not yet changed.

Kuria wrote:

M4M before you guys do something lol

from AIBAT

AIBat v3.1 wrote:

[Skin/SB]

SB Elements Not .png
nuke\black.jpg
nuke\blank.jpg

Should be ok
[All .osu Files]

Combo Colours
Inconsistency in combo colours:

- [Lunatic] :
Combo1 : 255,51,51
Combo2 : 0,152,225
Combo3 : 255,128,64
Combo4 : 155,126,194

- [meiikyuu's Hard] :
Combo1 : 255,51,51
Combo2 : 0,152,225
Combo3 : 255,128,64
Combo4 : 155,126,194

- [Normal] :
Combo1 : 255,51,51
Combo2 : 0,152,225
Combo3 : 255,128,64
Combo4 : 155,126,194

- [Ono's Taiko Muzukashii] :

- [Ono's Taiko Oni] :

General and Metadata

Inconsistency in EpilepsyWarning:
- [Lunatic] : 1
- [meiikyuu's Hard] : 1
- [Normal] : 1
- [Ono's Taiko Muzukashii] :
- [Ono's Taiko Oni] :

Inconsistency in Tags:
- [Lunatic] : reiuji utsuho sun worship of gnosis nuclear fusion dj command njk record meiikyuu eurobeat flash onosakihito
- [meiikyuu's Hard] : reiuji utsuho sun worship of gnosis nuclear fusion dj command njk record meiikyuu eurobeat flash onosakihito
- [Normal] : reiuji utsuho sun worship of gnosis nuclear fusion dj command njk record meiikyuu eurobeat flash onosakihito
- [Ono's Taiko Muzukashii] : reiuji utsuho sun worship of gnosis nuclear fusion dj command njk record meiikyuu eurobeat onosakihito
- [Ono's Taiko Oni] : reiuji utsuho sun worship of gnosis nuclear fusion dj command njk record meiikyuu eurobeat onosakihito

Kiai
Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

- [Lunatic] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:12:902, ends on 01:36:316
Kiai #2: Starts on 02:34:854, ends on 02:58:268

- [meiikyuu's Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:12:903, ends on 01:36:317
Kiai #2: Starts on 02:34:854, ends on 02:58:269

- [Normal] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:12:903, ends on 01:36:317
Kiai #2: Starts on 02:34:854, ends on 02:58:269

- [Ono's Taiko Muzukashii] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:12:903, ends on 01:48:025
Kiai #2: Starts on 02:34:853, ends on 03:09:975

- [Ono's Taiko Oni] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:12:902, ends on 01:48:024
Kiai #2: Starts on 02:34:853, ends on 03:09:975

Tags
- Consider adding "Ono" to all of your tags

[Ono's Taiko Muzukashii]

Audio Lead-In
There is only 1195 ms of audio lead-in, which is less than the minimum of 2000 ms.

Breaks
You need a break before 02:16:195.

Snapping
00:51:318 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
00:51:501 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
00:51:684 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
00:51:867 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
00:52:050 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
00:53:879 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
00:54:062 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
00:54:245 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
00:54:428 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
00:54:611 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
00:54:794 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
00:54:977 (1) - Unsnapped circle.

[Ono's Taiko Oni]

Audio Lead-In
There is only 1195 ms of audio lead-in, which is less than the minimum of 2000 ms.

Breaks
You need a break before 02:16:195.

from me

Normal:

1. 00:28:999 (1) - dunno why but i think use 1/4 repeat here is a bit hard to normal, why not make it 1/2 like 00:27:537 (2,3) - ? Fixed
2. 00:27:537 (2,3,1,2) - something like this for above, but maybe you can do it vice versa for rhythm consistency Fixed?
3. 00:41:804 - note here? because you do add it on 00:47:659 (2) - hmm there is no drum here unlike the later part
4. 00:59:366 (2) - just my preference about the patternflow, but i think it's better if place this on the right side Fixed
5. 01:02:110 (2,3) - can't really feel the flow here, perhaps you're positioning the 01:02:110 (2) - a bit up? should be fine i guess xD
6. 02:00:830 (2,3) - fix the blanked Fixed
7. 02:11:439 (1) - why you make this straight slider? it kinda ruins the flow the what it was directed, would prefer using curved instead for this lol tried to make it symmetrical with (2)

meikyuu's Hard:

1. 00:20:037 (6) - new combo here? Fixed
2. 00:25:342 (3,4,5) - kinda hard to put the note between slider stream like this for hard, why not make it just with the sliders instead? remove 00:25:615 (4) - , move 00:25:707 (5) - to that (4) and then make it's tail longer to 00:25:890 - ? i'll ask meii
3. 00:50:952 (5) - new combo keep
4. 00:53:878 (6) - new combo keep
5. 00:56:805 (4) - same as above ?
6. sometimes i saw the combo last for 1/1 but sometimes 1/2. like 00:52:415 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - and 00:58:452 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - , why not make them all 1/2 or 1/1 instead? i will play around with this
7. 02:09:976 (4) - just my opinion, why not use slider instead a note for this spot? It's a bit makes sense though if you wanna make some short break 02:10:158 - Fixed
8. 02:22:415 (6,7,8) - wanna tell the same for this but i guess it doesn't really matter because we're already in the middle of the map and ppl are warmed up already hm yeah lol
9. 02:25:158 (4,5) - blanket? it'll be ok

Lunatic:

1. 00:27:536 (1,2,3) - haha actually i'm prefer you make it 5 note stream for this like 00:26:073 (1,2,3,4,5) - , along with other similar triplet with reverse slider pattern, i feel it's match the song beat the most XD Fixed in a different way. i wanted to keep this type of rhythm bc theres a hold in the synth
2. 00:33:390 (1,2,3) - something like this too, i prefer you make it 5 note stream instead because the beat match the music same as above
3. 00:33:390 (1,2,3) - no notes for this spot? you can form a jump between 00:40:707 (1,2,3,4) - though, here, like 00:47:292 (2,3,4,5) - Fixed
4. 00:56:621 (5,6) - i'm not really feel the flow here, make the 00:56:804 (6) - rotated clockwise a bit? i think it's ok
5. 01:05:951 (6,7) - ugh, don't like how the jumps played here, why not make the 01:05:951 (6,7) - stacked on the headslider instead tail? Q_Q i kinda wanted to emphasize the "jump" in the vocals =v=
6. 01:36:316 (1) - make it like this? http://puu.sh/5cI4T.jpg , stacked it with 01:34:853 (4) - head, much better flow imo yea this is a great idea actually but i felt the deeper angle increased the intensity of this part more
7. 02:18:756 (6) - reverse this slider? i think the flow works better it's started from up instead down, knowing that the previous flow plays from down to up 02:18:208 (4,5) - kept this, another vocal tone thing i tried to capture orz xD
8. 02:46:378 (11,12,1) - Q_______Q well i think it's ok if you intended to make a symmetric pattern between 02:46:013 (8,9,10,11,12) - but i still don't like how this part played orz xD

good map you two

jonathanlfj wrote:

im da snake

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
taiko oni is missing "flash" in tags, please add it to keep tags consistent Fixed
for artist instead of using "3L, maria♂polo" i think its better to use "3L・maria♂polo", the "・" is a special character similar to "♂" and was used on the official title of this track do you have any proof lol i was thinking of putting DJ Command ft. asdfdsf for the artist but idk

[Normal]
00:30:463 (3) - position it like this? Fixed in another way

SPOILER

01:15:830 (1,2) - not perfectly parallel, blame my OCD Fixed
02:14:366 (1) - probably can fix the blanket here to look nicer with 02:16:195 (2) Fixed
03:17:659 (4,2) - would be cool if you can make these two have the same shape for nice reflection Fixed but i had to angle the new one up more

[meii's Hard]
01:22:780 (4) - forgot clap here Fixed
01:48:025 (2) - i would actually use a jump here considering how the finish effect comes in here after the vocal hold increased spacing
02:28:817 (8) - use a 1/4 repeat slider? there are some drum rolls in the music which warrants that Fixed
03:09:426 (1) - sv change is glitched here, the slider is snapped to 03:09:426 but the green line is snapped to 03:09:427; manually snap the green line to get the sv working properly Fixed
03:20:952 (6) - add a finish here? Fixed

[Nuke]
01:09:975 (5) - based on your NC pattern NC should be here instead of 01:08:512 (1) it was consistent before? but i NC's this and the later one
02:00:646 (4) - stack this on 01:59:731 (1)? or move it more left to avoid the overlap Fixed
02:31:926 (5) - same as 01:09:975 (5) Fixed
02:58:268 (1) - peppy might get mad, im not sure hmph

3 months ago jonathanlfj wrote:

☢☢☢☢☢☢☢☢☢☢-Warning-☢☢☢☢☢☢☢☢☢☢

my intention has not yet changed. asjknfdscajnkf

Thanks kuria and jonny <333
i need to figure out this artist now

hmm i just searched up some japanese sources, most english sources uses commas to split it which is why im also not 100% certain
http://nijika.net/TEF2.html
http://www16.atwiki.jp/toho/pages/6071.html

let me actually download the cd and see what is written on the song info there

EDIT: ☢

Thank you 家你

i see what u did there
where is 铅笔??

铅笔在一个美丽的神话

Awesome Map.
I can only play CTB, but the map is very good in ctb, too.
I hope for a ranked version.
Good luck

no kds

[General]
- Change the artist as I suggested before?

I checked the taikos and I find it odd that muzukashii is slightly shorter than Oni?
Other than that they're fine

happy30 wrote:

no kds

[General]
- Change the artist as I suggested before?

I checked the taikos and I find it odd that muzukashii is slightly shorter than Oni?
Other than that they're fine

hey~!

For the artist, I decided to stick with the original album booklet:

thanks for the recheck

Essays I have to write are soon done. Though, I have to admit that I struggle in making the Muzu in a way I like. lol

wow

someday

eventually

nowday

Hi Ono.
Mod from online request.

[General]

1. You set HP7 in Oni,why not set OD6 ?OD5HP7 seems no difference with those players who can play this diff.I'd rather increase the difficulty by OD6↑ . HP6 OD6 or HP7 OD6 both fine. It's my suggestion,not a must.It's up to you :3
   
   
   
   [Ono's Taiko Oni]
   1. 00:25:341 - A suggestion here. d dd dd can also suit well...not a must to change.
   2. 00:18:573 - to 00:23:694 - of course k d k d k etc. suit the song.but it seems no fun here.why not user other patterns to let it more fun?(Suggestion also.)
   3. 00:27:719 (3) - k here suits well.And you use kkk in previous pattern.
   4. 00:28:725 (2,1) - change to dk here because a higher pitch sound.
   5. 00:30:280 (1) - how about k here?
   6. 00:32:109 (3) - ^
   7. 00:37:323 - add a d here? there exist a hit-sound.
   8. 01:18:573 (2) - delete this note? set a little break here give me a good feel.and the same at 01:30:280 (1) -
   9. 01:22:231 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1) - dddkkkd maybe better.(suggestion.)
   10. 01:23:694 (1) - D can be better.because lyric change from the next note.
   11. 01:41:804 (1,2,3,4,1) - here actually is k(1/4 and kkkkd(1/8),but that patten is unrankable.So I recommend you delete 01:41:804 (1,2,3,4) - .It will set a little break here and nothing unsuit the song.
   12. 01:42:902 - to 01:47:475 - those patterns ugly.please fix them.
   13. 01:59:274 - add a d here.
   14. ....what's that?the 2nd KIAI part?.....All right.All patterns rankable and almost suit the song well.But a funny and rankable map is what we need.Or you can tell me this map is a ddddk and ddddd kkkkk practice map.The first 1/2 part of the song looks just fine,and I would like to remap from 01:41:804 - to the end.
   Important:I strongly recommend you take a rest of mapping.I hope Taikosaki will come back soon ;w;
   
   [Ono's Taiko Muzukashii]
   1. 00:27:902 (1) - k here?
   2. 00:31:560 (1) - k ?Just suggestion.
   3. 00:37:414 (1) - ^
   4. 00:46:194 (3) - ^
   5. please fix those oxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo patterns.They are too long and boring .00:49:487 - to 01:01:194 - and 01:59:731 - to 02:23:146 -
   6. ......maybe you wanna try jirou style,but could you please think about that funny map is more important than a neat map but not fun at all.

I like this song though.But I would like to remap ,to let it become a funny ,rankable and neat map.
Also,all above are my suggestions.It's up to you.The set now is fine,nothing unrankable.

Good luck.

edit: no kds for this post if you think its unhelpful.
edit2:change 1/40 to 1/4

- Kagami Yuki - wrote:

SPOILER

Hi Ono.
Mod from online request.

[General]

1. You set HP7 in Oni,why not set OD6 ?OD5HP7 seems no difference with those players who can play this diff.I'd rather increase the difficulty by OD6↑ . HP6 OD6 or HP7 OD6 both fine. It's my suggestion,not a must.It's up to you :3 It's not all about the higher players. We have also lower guys. OD 5 suits here actually well if you ask me.
   
   
   
   [Ono's Taiko Oni]
   1. 00:25:341 - A suggestion here. d dd dd can also suit well...not a must to change. Possible, but if I use these notes I can't differe the parts from each other. It is importat to make clear where a new section starts, else the map is made in a too consecutive way.
   2. 00:18:573 - to 00:23:694 - of course k d k d k etc. suit the song.but it seems no fun here.why not user other patterns to let it more fun?(Suggestion also.) It's not all about making hard maps, - Kagami Yuki -. Also, if I would do so, the up coming part at 00:26:073 would be less emphasized. In Taiko it is important to differ parts from each other by having different patterns, SV changed or the common use of kiai. If we wouldn'T do so, a map can become monotonically - after all, we have only one achse (the x-achse) in Taiko game play so we have to vary sometimes when mapping.
   3. 00:27:719 (3) - k here suits well.And you use kkk in previous pattern. The idea is good, but you should have noticed that I'm using the abekobe style in this part. Additional to this, if I would add a kat I should have add a don at 00:33:573 .
   4. 00:28:725 (2,1) - change to dk here because a higher pitch sound. Abekobe style + alternate way dk kd kkkkk
   5. 00:30:280 (1) - how about k here? Not a bad idea, but it would interrupt the "don-beat" I'm using.
   6. 00:32:109 (3) - ^ Again, idea is good but ^. I will check it later once again.
   7. 00:37:323 - add a d here? there exist a hit-sound. Hm, about that one I wasn't sure. But it is rather a significant sound compared to the one I'm actually mapping to.
   8. 01:18:573 (2) - delete this note? set a little break here give me a good feel.and the same at 01:30:280 (1) - Not sure to be honest. For now I will keep it due to self preferences. But not a bad idea.
   9. 01:22:231 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1) - dddkkkd maybe better.(suggestion.) No, doesn't fit well here.
   10. 01:23:694 (1) - D can be better.because lyric change from the next note. Okay, I will think about this.
   11. 01:41:804 (1,2,3,4,1) - here actually is k(1/4 and kkkkd(1/8),but that patten is unrankable.So I recommend you delete 01:41:804 (1,2,3,4) - .It will set a little break here and nothing unsuit the song. Hm 1/4 on 1/8 is possible, but I find your idea much better at this point. Applied.
   12. 01:42:902 - to 01:47:475 - those patterns ugly.please fix them. Yeah, I found that pattern since the very beginning not fitting so I changed it now.
   13. 01:59:274 - add a d here. same reason as before.
   14. ....what's that?the 2nd KIAI part?.....All right.All patterns rankable and almost suit the song well.But a funny and rankable map is what we need.Or you can tell me this map is a ddddk and ddddd kkkkk practice map.The first 1/2 part of the song looks just fine,and I would like to remap from 01:41:804 - to the end.
       Hopfully you are not telling such stuff to other mappers which are less experienced than me? Mapping is not about making hard maps, it should suit the song in a fair way. One can't say what is fun and what not. Everyone has its own view about that which is skill-based. Maybe for us it isn't fun, but for a lower player it will be fun.
   Important:I strongly recommend you take a rest of mapping.I hope Taikosaki will come back soon ;w;
   
   [Ono's Taiko Muzukashii]
   1. nothing applied. Most patterns are mapped in an alternate way.

I think you misunderstood the modding process Kagami Yuki. It is not about forcing / recommending mapper your own opinion with the reason, that something is boring. That is rather subjective since this varies case by case, depending on players skill. The harder I make a map for example, the less people are able to play the map. Higher guys are always able to use HD / HR / DT for such "easier" maps; lower players are not.
You had some good suggestions, but in general you didn't look at the overall picture of this map. You focused on single patterns and short constellation of it instead of looking at their connection to each other. So didn't you noticed the abekobe style or the alternate way of some patterns either, which is really important in Taiko.
Another point is the emphasize of certain patterns in a map. As I said before, we have only one achse in the game(scrollbar), so there is less possibility in creativity than osu has. That means we have to use patterns in a smart way, so they emphasize each other in a fair way. I could have easily make this map harder without breaks and many complicated patterns, but then it would rather appear monotonically, which is the -well that's my own opinion here- dead for a Taiko map.

Ah, no. I'm not angry or anything like that. You don't have to worry. You are still new here, so I rather tell you right ahead some imput about the modding (Modding Academy? lol).
As I said, you had some good points, but which are only restricted to single patterns. You have to look more at the overall picture of a map and keep your personal preferences away from a map. Mod to the mappers style as long as it isn't unrankable (which wasn't in this case).

Thank you for checking it Yuki! Since I applied two things, I can give you the kd.
Download: http://puu.sh/6imDZ.zip