Arkimedes - Dreaming While I Wake

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hey. . . hi. . . sup
I've always wanted to try Shenmue -_-
naz-eemod GO!!!

[Fuku-San]

01:25:39 (1) - you can align this with (1) if you want, that's one level 3 grid to da right, then space accordingly
02:08:08 (6) - try extending this 1/4 to the next blue tick, or 1/2 to the next red tick, I think the 1/2 sounds better, you decide

[Ryo]
01:38:75 (4) - I think it sounds better 1/2 later to the white tick
01:40:06 (2) - ^ same, just suggestions
02:05:89 (1) - sounds better to me ending 1/2 later to red tick
02:07:64 (1) - alright, this may sound a bit odd, but I think I can't hear something or my timing just sucks, I think this should end 1/2 later!!! there, I said it
02:48:58 (6,7,8) - 2 grids right, and one down to align with (4) and make it equidistant with (5)

[Lan Di]
00:55:18 (9) - new combo, makes jumps more easier to recognize
01:31:088 (x) - note here? idk
01:38:53 (5) - end 1/2 later -_-
01:40:06 (2) - move 1/2 later
01:54:29 (4) - one grid down -_-
02:35:449 (timing section) - timing sections can't be completely silent, or else that's what I was told, so at least nudge it up even the slightest bit, or just put it to 1 tick
02:48:58 (5) - this is not spaced, notice how it's slight

that being said, I like the hitsounds
star4you
XepherX3
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Topic Starter
Real1

x3ns0r wrote:

Real1 wrote:

Oh, and x3ns0r, you are still welcome to submit your difficulty, even though I made my own Easy.
I'll include it if its good enough. ;)
well..song is too slow for me


good work on making your own

cuz mine could have taken a while :oops:
Okay. :)
If you change your mind... I think this map will be here for a while. <_<
minyeob
Long time no see, Real

[Ryo]
1:48:382(1)-> 1/4 beat backward



Your map looks fine.
Andrea
[Fuku-san]

00:43:36 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:14:043 - Maybe you can move here your soft section.

[Ryo]

00:55:18 (8) - New combo.
01:10:51 (5) - Add finish only on slider end.
01:48:27 (1) - Sounds bad.
02:35:66 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - These notes are too much silenced.

[Lan Di]

Maybe on this diff, you can add spinner on empty sections...

02:35:66 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - These notes are too much silenced.

Simple map, but really nice :D Star !!!
EEeee
Fuku-san
00:56:50 (8) - New combo
01:03:28 (1) - start 1/2 forward, end where it is
01:05:91 (1) - not really sure about this, but I think move it 1/4 forward, end where it is already
01:10:07 (2) - k delete this note, then add a slider that looks like 1, and start the slider at 01:09:853, then end at
01:10:072
01:48:38 (1) - end 1/4 forward, like the pattern of sliders following this note
02:09:39 (1) - start 1/4 forward, end same place

k that is all, but just for a neat map, delete the unused timing sections at the end of this diff ;)

Ryo
01:30:65 (1) - remove new combo
01:37:65 (1) - ^
?_? that's all T_T

Lan Di
00:22:13 (4,5) - add a new combo at 4 or 5, u pick
00:28:91 (6,7) - ^ 6 or 7
02:03:48 (1,2) - u wanna make this reflect to the previous 1 and 2, this is a big nazi, don't need to do
02:34:79 (1,2,3) - move 2 lvl 3 grids to the right
Gens
[Overall]

- Erm, [Fuku-san] has OCRemix as a Tag. Maybe add that tag to the other difficulties as well.

[Timing]
I'd say the BPM is 137.05.

[Fuku-san]
I dunno what to say about the ending... It's a little abrupt, but at the same time I think it's fine.

00:38:32 (1) - If you could make this slider more... spaced (instead of many repeats) would be great. Just tellin' you, avoid these kind of sliders, especially on Easy, because it's almost impossible to know how many repeats will be.

[Ryo]
I think it's great~

[Lan-Di]
Cool~

~ ~ ~

Hi, Real1, your style is getting pretty strong now.
I like it.
Starred~
Topic Starter
Real1
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BPM: 137,00

- Fuku-san
01:16:41 (1) - if you want to make it follow the voice, make it start 1/2 later
01:28:45 (1) - imho it's better if it ends at 1:31:083, but it's your choice ^^
01:48:37 (1) - 1/4 longer, maybe?

- Lan Di
01:06:78 (5) - if you want to follow the voice, make it 1/4 shorter
2:27:00 - 2:37:00 How about lowering gradually hitsound to fit the voices? I think it sounds pretty cool ^^

- Ryo:
01:48:26 (1) - sounds weird, but i guess it can't be fixed easily
2:27:00 - 2:37:00 Same as Lan Di

Great, very clean map ^^
Star'd
gyt
Hello!
I love all your maps and it's great song. So I decide to make another difficulty (don't know how to name it). If you don't like it, PM me why or write it here.

(+star, sorry for english)

Download: Arkimedes - Dreaming While I Wake (Real1) [Gyt's Lan Di].osu
Derekku
[Fuku-san]
00:54:08 (4,5,6,7) - Sounds a little awkward. (But it's fine if you don't want to change it) Maybe make (4) 1/2 shorter, move (5) backwards 1/2, and then new combo either (6) or (7). Don't forget to fix distance spacing if you do this =)
01:16:41 (1) - Vocals start 1/2 later, but then the slider doesn't sound right. Maybe it's the soft hitsound set that's throwing it off, I dunno D:
01:25:39 (1,2,3) - I don't like how (3) overlaps (1). :/ Maybe move these and have them going from right to left in a straight line like the ones before and after? =)

[Ryo]
Fine.

[Lan Di]
Fine.
Topic Starter
Real1
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Topic Starter
Real1

Derekku Chan wrote:

[Fuku-san]
00:54:08 (4,5,6,7) - Sounds a little awkward. (But it's fine if you don't want to change it) Maybe make (4) 1/2 shorter, move (5) backwards 1/2, and then new combo either (6) or (7). Don't forget to fix distance spacing if you do this =) Sounds good to me.
01:16:41 (1) - Vocals start 1/2 later, but then the slider doesn't sound right. Maybe it's the soft hitsound set that's throwing it off, I dunno D: This was fixed with CnF's post. I was making his edits when you made this post. xD
01:25:39 (1,2,3) - I don't like how (3) overlaps (1). :/ Maybe move these and have them going from right to left in a straight line like the ones before and after? =) Fixed

[Ryo]
Fine.

[Lan Di]
Fine.
Thank you. An extra thank you since it's been a looooong time since someone modded a map of mine without me asking first.
Derekku
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The_Priest_In_Yellow
Yes, nothing to add. Just yes.
Starrodkirby86
No worries...no fear...This is the perfect song to go to bed too. ^~^

I didn't do anything intensive...I'm tired...:<

[Ryo]:
01:07:22 (5) - Move 1/4 later? It would ruin the rhythm stream pattern but technically that's where it would belong...I think. Perhaps there would be other areas something like this would belong with.
02:15:51 (1,2,3) - Straighten?

[Gyt's Lan Di]:
02:04:13 (1,2) - Can you perhaps make this look like 02:02:60 (1,2) ?

Download: skin items.zip

Extract in your song folder.

I think the comboburst.png in there is an old version, so here's the good one:


Topic Starter
Real1
Awesome! Thank you very very much Starrodkirby86! ;)
Topic Starter
Real1
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Crusader
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Topic Starter
Real1
This map now has a Shenmue themes skin made by ImTheOne via ideas from me. :)

If you downloaded it earlier, maybe you need to re-download it.
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