M4M From My Queue (:thanks a lot for your mod
Thank you for helpful mod!
Legenda wrote:→ Unrankable things, must fix
→ My human doubts, things to consider
→ Tips & Tricks to make your map better
* → Just comments, not mods
♥ → Greetings
Naked Lines → Mods[easy]I think it's not very hard..becouce of 138BPM
00:03:110 (1,2) - I recommend strongly doing these sliders like these → http://puu.sh/2QUHs.jpg OK add
00:07:458 (1,2) - Rotate these by 30º Anti-Clockwise (make Ctrl-Shift-R, enter 30 in the field, mark "Anti-Clockwise" in the options and then hit OK).
00:10:936 (4) - Move to x:408 y:256 and...
00:11:806 (1) - Move to x:408 y:112 and...
00:12:675 (2) - Move to x:272 y:152 to make a better pattern of notes (:
00:46:588 (1) - This slider looks a bit strange, but it is passable imo ...
00:51:806 (2) - ...but this other is strangest In this case, could make like tihs → http://puu.sh/2QVmt.jpg ← Once doing this, you must set 00:54:415 (1) at x:344 y:312 and 00:55:284 (2) to x:372 y:176 to fix spacing (:difficult to do so i change it to another form
01:02:241 (2) - Remove whistle from the whole slider, select the head (on timeline) and add whistle, select the tail (on timeline) and add whistle too. done
01:03:980 (1,2) - Try avoid a overlap here. done
01:06:588 (3) - Too many repeats confuse the newbies imo. Could make like this instead → http://puu.sh/2QVBJ.jpg
01:24:849 (1) - remove NC
01:28:328 (1) - ^ (only if you followed the last mod. Just Apply or reject both to keep consistency between them)
I find I hadn't addNC before..?
01:30:936 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Some kind of strangeness on this comboing pattern... seems not fitting the song (or yes?)
02:14:849 (2,1) - *screams* A JUMP? Newbies can't handle a jump >_< at first I didn'notice it becouse the slider can't be moved, now I changed it
02:05:719 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - Could arrange them in a pattern like triangles, lines or something according to commonsense and song feelings (: OK
02:09:197 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Could arrange this in some way too, I could suggest many forms...
Grid Size Tiny is needed to apply following mods:
00:08:328 (4,2) - Not a nice overlap here, unless you set the note (2) in the same place as (4)'s head. If you do this don't forget rearrange the further notes to keep spacing safe. add
00:24:849 (2) - Could be a better blanket here by setting the slider at x:208 y:260 and the middle point to x:100 y:240 and the last dot (tail) to x:104 y:128. fixed
01:38:328 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Try arranging these beats in lines or stairs, or just aligning them in their current patterns.
02:00:284 (2,1) - Make this perfect by moving 02:01:588 (1) to x:144 y:200 and the 2nd dot to x:180 y:148 and the last dot (tail) to x:144 y:108. fixed
02:03:762 (2) - Move to x:60 y:200 and the 3rd dot to x:72 y:88, better pattern with previous sliders.
00:10:067 (2) - Ctrl-J and move to x:96 y:48 better forms. fixed
00:37:784 (2) - Better at x:128 y:288 and... fixed
00:37:893 (3) - Better at x:104 y:272 to make better patterns.fixed
00:56:154 (1,2,3,4) - Kinda a bit hard to read here imo, could be like this → http://puu.sh/2QWGI.jpg → and set 00:57:458 (1) at x:136 y:176. add
00:58:762 (4,5,6,1,2) - could be rearranged in the same fashion as above, possibly moving further notes as needed by spacing issues.
I think it is not very haed to read if follow the music
01:20:501 (1,2) - Could make (1) at x:72 y:192 and (2) at x:224 y:192 ? add
00:17:023 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Could make like this → http://puu.sh/2QX4P.jpg pretty! add
02:08:871 (1) - Move 1 grid down, better stream...OH,I didn't notice it. fixed
* The last stream is for Cookiezi, no?
Well in general, your mapset still needs work, but it's fine... Really seems to me a bit "the harder the diff is, the nicer it's too".
Good luck ^.^
and I don't konw how to input image ,can you teach me ?