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DarknessAngel

Joined May 2010

DarknessAngel 2013-07-21T07:27:39+00:00

A ticket for a quick check.

[General]

Default combo color is always not a good idea, it looks really bad, for real. do not ignore how combo color shows how the whole map look like, since it can give a song a feeling and it can also collocate the background. so I highly recommend change to other combo colors for the whole mapset, or you can try the color I choose from the code below. it looks much better, isn't it ? :p

[Colours]
Combo1 : 243,148,41
Combo2 : 239,57,48
Combo3 : 231,247,30
Combo4 : 84,245,88

the place you need to add the code is here.

[Normal]

looks nice. moe neko lol

[Hard]

00:12:853 (3) - Just saying my thought for this. is this jump really needed ? I don't think so. the spacing among 00:12:478 (2,3,1) is the same with your normal spacing for 1/2 beat. It's likely confusing to players.

00:24:665 (1) - yes, I know you want to make Hard difficulty which is solid like this. But I would ask you "Don't you bore at this repeat slider ?" the beats are strong as they are, I would make a pattern like this if I were you. the pattern is not hard, but funner.

01:40:790 (2) - let me nazi a bit :p. move the second point of the slider to (334,238), third point to (361,178) for a perfect☆blanket with 01:40:228 (1). then don't forget to adjust 01:41:353 (3) for the wrong spacing after you do it.

02:43:978 (2) - loool. move second point to (276,186), third point to (339,173). and it would be like this.

don't like those 1/4 slider jumps but the rest is good. :3

[Insane]

nothing to say about this diff, good job you all. \:D/ the diff plays fun, especially frost's part <3

☆

Satellite

3,683 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Satellite 2013-07-21T21:50:33+00:00

ThoomyyxD's ty

and

combo color and many suggestion some fixed :3
thanks modding and star DarknessAngel

Et0iliS

59 posts

Joined March 2013

Et0iliS 2013-08-09T11:13:41+00:00

已經見識到高手作的譜了，我會以你為榜樣向前的

錯誤降到最低，音效使用恰到好處

Abe Nana

1,148 posts

Joined March 2011

Abe Nana 2013-09-08T07:14:35+00:00

わたしはちゃた。またあったな( ■`д■´)

little mod

[Hard]

00:50:728 - finish. same to 'SatelliteFrostMix'
00:52:228 - 00:52:978 - 00:53:728 - finish
01:25:790 (2) - NC?

[SatelliteFrostMix]

(*ﾉω・*)

00:04:040 (5) - NC or 00:05:540 (1) - remove NC
00:12:478 (8) - 1grid up?
00:52:228 - 00:52:978 - 00:53:728 - finish
00:55:134 (6,1) - why did you stack?
01:01:228 (8,1) - swap NC
01:13:228 (1) - NC. same to 01:37:228 (1)

(∀｀*ゞ)

02:04:228 - 02:04:978 - 02:05:728 - finish?
02:25:790 (3) - NC?

(*´艸｀*)

03:16:228 (9) - NC
03:16:415 (1) - 03:16:603 (1) - remove NC

nice senya

Satellite

3,683 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Satellite 2013-09-08T16:06:26+00:00

thanks modding -Chata- san :3

00:55:134 (6,1) - why did you stack?

I think better

other all fixed.

UnitedWeSin

889 posts

Joined July 2012

UnitedWeSin 2013-09-18T06:46:42+00:00

Woah pro mappers.
Sorry for taking so long.

Just small things.

[General]

For the echo volume effects that you do, I think 30% is too low, I can barely hear the hitsounds. Please consider raising all 30% volume sections to 40% or so.

[SatelliteFrostMix]

Frostmourne

00:05:728 (2,1,2) - Confusing spacing. Because the synth line that you're following starts on the 00:05:728 (2) maybe you could try something different here. You could try a 1/2 slider at 00:05:728 with a circle on the end of it:
Example

Removed NC from 00:05:540 (1) and have it at 00:05:728 where that idea in the music starts.
Just sample placement:
00:11:540 (3) - How about replacing this with a circle and then starting the stream on the downbeat. It seems more nice for the player. I won't make you change, but try it out and see what you think:
Example

This way there are an even number of notes in the stream and the player clicks the repeating slider with their dominant finger. It makes for a more intuitive stream imo.
00:25:415 (2) - This slider would benefit from Ctrl+G imo, try it out and see what you think:
Example
00:59:540 (4) - Same as 00:11:540 (3). Seems more nice for players if you replace this with a circle and then start the stream at 00:59:728 on the downbeat.
Example
01:32:353 (2) - Seems nicer flow if you curve it like 1 and blanket 01:31:415 (2):
Example
01:32:728 (3) - Consider adding a repeat to follow the vocals.
01:38:353 (4) - Try replacing with 1/2 slider to make nice jump into the 5 with vocals.
Example
01:44:540 - I think you could benefit from adding a note here because the vocals are still sounding. Up to you, I just feel the section could be a bit stronger.
01:48:478 (3) - Try NC here like the 00:36:478 (1) seems nice.

Mixagi

02:13:790 (2) - Whistle for vocals?
02:23:353 (3) - Remove finish and add whistle? So much noise. ;_;
02:28:790 (5) - NC is nice imo. Tbh honest I think one at 02:29:353 (8) is also nice. It separates the different parts of this phrase and makes it more readable. The sections is a bit hard to understand anyways.
Example
02:50:821 - You can try adding spinner. It might make the transition to Satellite's part more exciting. Try it and see what you think.
Example

Spinner starting at 02:50:915 seems most effective.

Satellite

02:56:728 (1) - 1 grid down for blanket.

So fun.

[Hard]

00:06:478 (1,2) - How about placing more like this to reduce this 1/4 jump a bit and make it more similar in spacing to the others?
Example
02:40:228 (1,2,3,4,1) - Try to use a more clean and consistent spacing here. I think you can abandon the 02:41:540 (4,1) blanket.

Pretty difficult 1/4 jumps but it's fine.

[Normal]

03:04:228 - Lower volume?

Cool, that's all I guess.
Call me back.

Frostmourne

osu! Alumni

3,733 posts

Joined November 2009

Frostmourne 2013-09-18T07:38:06+00:00

I will look and fix by myself for this mod because I want to fix other stuffs in my map too.

Satellite

3,683 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Satellite 2013-09-18T07:59:49+00:00

UnitedWeSin wrote:
Woah pro mappers.
Sorry for taking so long.

Just small things.

[General]

For the echo volume effects that you do, I think 30% is too low, I can barely hear the hitsounds. Please consider raising all 30% volume sections to 40% or so.
volume5% up 35% done :3

[SatelliteFrostMix]

Mixagi

02:13:790 (2) - Whistle for vocals?
02:23:353 (3) - Remove finish and add whistle? So much noise. ;_;
02:28:790 (5) - NC is nice imo. Tbh honest I think one at 02:29:353 (8) is also nice. It separates the different parts of this phrase and makes it more readable. The sections is a bit hard to understand anyways.
Example
02:50:821 - You can try adding spinner. It might make the transition to Satellite's part more exciting. Try it and see what you think.
Example

Spinner starting at 02:50:915 seems most effective.
Satellite

02:56:728 (1) - 1 grid down for blanket.
So fun.

[Hard]

00:06:478 (1,2) - How about placing more like this to reduce this 1/4 jump a bit and make it more similar in spacing to the others?
Example
02:40:228 (1,2,3,4,1) - Try to use a more clean and consistent spacing here. I think you can abandon the 02:41:540 (4,1) blanket.
Pretty difficult 1/4 jumps but it's fine.

[Normal]

03:04:228 - Lower volume?
Cool, that's all I guess.
Call me back.

All sugestion Fixed.
really useful mod :3! thanks checking xD

Satellite

3,683 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Satellite 2013-09-18T08:00:08+00:00

Frostmourne wrote:
I will look and fix by myself for this mod because I want to fix other stuffs in my map too.

okay~ thanks check :3!

Frostmourne

osu! Alumni

3,733 posts

Joined November 2009

Frostmourne 2013-09-18T16:22:55+00:00

UnitedWeSin wrote:
Frostmourne
00:05:728 (2,1,2) - Confusing spacing. Because the synth line that you're following starts on the 00:05:728 (2) maybe you could try something different here. You could try a 1/2 slider at 00:05:728 with a circle on the end of it:
Example

Removed NC from 00:05:540 (1) and have it at 00:05:728 where that idea in the music starts.
Just sample placement:
fixed with other way, I'm sure it's less confusing.
00:11:540 (3) - How about replacing this with a circle and then starting the stream on the downbeat. It seems more nice for the player. I won't make you change, but try it out and see what you think:
Example

This way there are an even number of notes in the stream and the player clicks the repeating slider with their dominant finger. It makes for a more intuitive stream imo.
don't know why I already see it's fixed lol so ok haha
00:25:415 (2) - This slider would benefit from Ctrl+G imo, try it out and see what you think: again, it's already fixed O_oa"
Example
00:59:540 (4) - Same as 00:11:540 (3). Seems more nice for players if you replace this with a circle and then start the stream at 00:59:728 on the downbeat.
Example
^
01:32:353 (2) - Seems nicer flow if you curve it like 1 and blanket 01:31:415 (2):
Example

~.~
01:32:728 (3) - Consider adding a repeat to follow the vocals. changed to something different
01:38:353 (4) - Try replacing with 1/2 slider to make nice jump into the 5 with vocals.
Example
em.. I'm sure the current way is fine and plays nice imo :<
01:44:540 - I think you could benefit from adding a note here because the vocals are still sounding. Up to you, I just feel the section could be a bit stronger. this punctuation sounds differently interesting imo, I will leave it here
01:48:478 (3) - Try NC here like the 00:36:478 (1) seems nice. I removed NC notes on both because they aren't the way I do in these days, sorry = ="

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113,148,118884,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,128,118978,6,0,B|144:104,7,21.25
164,108,119353,2,0,B|180:84,8,21.25,0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,192,120290,5,2,0:0:0:0:
44,192,120853,1,2,0:0:0:0:

Thank you UnitedWeSin!
I didn't touch any green line so only a hitobject section is enough~

Satellite

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Topic Starter

Satellite 2013-09-18T16:31:09+00:00

all diff update~

Mixagji

625 posts

Joined March 2011

Mixagji 2013-09-18T16:41:28+00:00

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UnitedWeSin

889 posts

Joined July 2012

UnitedWeSin 2013-09-19T02:20:38+00:00

[SatelliteFrostMix]

00:49:228 (1) - Unsnapped.

[Hard]

00:38:540 (4) - Remove clap? Three in a row is too much here.

Satellite

3,683 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Satellite 2013-09-19T05:53:40+00:00

all Fix~~

UnitedWeSin

889 posts

Joined July 2012

UnitedWeSin 2013-09-19T09:09:35+00:00

...

:3

Oyatsu

1,909 posts

Joined December 2012

Oyatsu 2013-09-19T10:02:51+00:00

2 maps bubbled!!

Scorpiour

2,633 posts

Joined May 2011

Scorpiour 2013-09-19T13:15:33+00:00

hi ~~ call me senya stalker >_<

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions

[SatelliteFrostMix]

AR+1? many streams and jmp patterns and 160bpm .. please consider
01:47:165 (3) - heard weird a bit..i suppose 1/2 repeat + note is better

no kds ~

Satellite

3,683 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Satellite 2013-09-19T13:23:06+00:00

Mixagji say AR8 o.o
AR8 keep okay? = =

◾01:47:165 (3) - heard weird a bit..i suppose 1/2 repeat + note is better

Done

thanks :3

Frostmourne

osu! Alumni

3,733 posts

Joined November 2009

Frostmourne 2013-09-19T13:25:46+00:00

Satellite sann

please move 00:19:228 (4,1) - (2 notes) to x:440 y:220 please (avoid overlapping)

about AR, I agree with Mixagji, AR8 plays better for this because it isn't too much energetic song plus the map itself was intentionally designed for AR8 imo

Satellite

3,683 posts

Joined June 2012

Topic Starter

Satellite 2013-09-19T13:31:20+00:00

Frostmourne wrote:
Satellite sann

please move 00:19:228 (4,1) - (2 notes) to x:440 y:220 please (avoid overlapping)

about AR, I agree with Mixagji, AR8 plays better for this because it isn't too much energetic song plus the map itself was intentionally designed for AR8 imo

ok update~~

Scorpiour

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Scorpiour 2013-09-19T14:04:28+00:00

Ranked~~!!