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tieff
[Gens' Boring Tuna]
00:46:18 (4) - This note shoud be here 00:46:12 (1/8), I think.
00:46:88 (5) - New combo?
00:49:22 (x) - Add note, maybe?
00:52:97 (x) - ^^

[vytalibus's Slap]
Love hitsounds here.
00:10:32 (4) - Whistle?
00:17:82 (4) - ^
01:47:58 (3) - Whistle here, maybe...
01:49:46 (3) - Same as ^
01:50:63 (1) - Whstle on end of slider.
01:52:51 (1) - Same as above.

[Fufe's Nuts]
00:41:72 (8) - New combo?
00:45:94 (4) - Slider should end here 00:46:124 (1/8), I think...
00:57:43 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - Awesome.
02:51:10 (3) - Clap here?

[Watch This]
00:35:16 (1) - Remove new combo?
No other "problems".

Star.
vytalibus
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Download: Dj Steve Porter - Rap Chop (strager) [vytalibus' Slap].osu
Gens

tieff wrote:

[Gens' Boring Tuna]
00:46:18 (4) - This note shoud be here 00:46:12 (1/8), I think. Using 1/8s it's not safe D:
00:46:88 (5) - New combo? strager can do it for me. ;p
00:49:22 (x) - Add note, maybe? It might be too though for beginners? I dunno, I'll wait a second opinion.
fufe
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Lokamp
You're right: I love this map! That's all.

Gens' Boring Tuna
All ok here! (maybe insert somethin' original in the final part...)

vytalibus's Slap
[01:36:800] (4) clap the end of this slider

Fufe's Nuts
[00:56:610] (4, 10) clap here
[01:47:580] (5, 5, 5, 5) clap here

Watch this
[General] there are too many mini-breaks in the beginning, aren't they?
[General 2] try to add MORE sliders (maybe by replacing some rapid beat series...)
[00:07:980] (3) whistle here
[00:09:850] (5, 7, 8) whistle on 5th, finish the others
[00:14:660] (1) another finish!
[00:24:620] (4, 7) in order, finish-whistle!
[00:26:020] (5) another whistle
[00:28:130] (5, 6) finish here
[00:32:350] (4) clap here
[00:33:290] (1) another clap! (remove the previous one on 8th red)
[00:34:230] (5) CLAP!
[00:40:790] (7, 8, 9) a clap and two finish here
[00:42:190] (3, 6) whistle on 3rd, clap and whistle on 6th
[00:43:600] (3, 4, 5, 7, 8) whistle on 3rd, clap on 4th and 5th, finish the others
[00:48:760] (3, 5) finish the 3rd, clap the 5th!
[00:50:160] (1, 7) clap here
[00:52:270] (6) finish here
[00:52:510] (1, 2, 3, 4, 5) whistle-clap-whistle-clap-finish!
[00:54:850] (4) clap here
[00:55:790] (5) clap?
[00:58:840] (2, 3, 4, 5) replace these 4 beats with a rapid slider (start on 2nd, end on 5th)
[01:02:59] (1, 2, 3, 4) clap-whistle-clap-finish!
[01:08:700] insert a beat around here
[01:09:380] (1, 2, 3, 4, 5) start these sliders with a whistle and end them with a clap
[01:11:730] (1, 3, 4) clap on 1st and 3rd, finish the 4th
[01:12:660] (1, 2, 3) finish the 3rd, whistle the others
[01:32:820] (1, 2, 4) finish on 1st, clap the others
[01:34:230] (1, 5, 8) clap on 8th, whistle the others
[01:42:787] (5) move this beat around here
[01:51:340] (5) clap here
[02:40:790] (3) like upper!
[02:50:280] (1) finish it
[03:04:230] (1) from here until the end, try to add sounds on EVERY 1st beat of EVERY series!

That's another demonstration about how collaboration beatmaps are SO awesome...
GOOD work! Star'd.
Wojjan
Fufe: Fix spacing

Watch this:
00:34:46 (7) - 1 grid 2 to the right
00:37:16 (12) - Prettier 1 grid right, 1 up.
00:44:19 (6) - Vertically align with (3)
00:48:29 (4) - Sounds better on blue tick before. Fix spacing accordingly
I love the SB'd arrows, but why aren't they there on every diff?
01:51:34 (5) - Clap for consistency
02:37:74 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Jumps like 02:30:24 for consistency

All others are great.

You're gonna love my star!
Topic Starter
anonymous_old
@Lokamp, Thanks for your many hit sound suggestions. I took about a third of them and added my own hit sounds based on your comments. For Watch This Claps are for "Slap," "Chop," and chops in the music only.

Wojjan wrote:

Watch this:
00:34:46 (7) - 1 grid 2 to the right // No; jump is intentional
00:37:16 (12) - Prettier 1 grid right, 1 up. // Did my own thing here
00:44:19 (6) - Vertically align with (3) // Redid this design a bit; almost looks like a fish now
00:48:29 (4) - Sounds better on blue tick before. Fix spacing accordingly // Don't know what you mean here
I love the SB'd arrows, but why aren't they there on every diff? // "Watch This" gets the arrows; do you other guys want the arrows as well?
01:51:34 (5) - Clap for consistency // Thanks
02:37:74 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Jumps like 02:30:24 for consistency // No; jumps get tiring and frustrating after a while... I think two is enough

Wojjan wrote:

You're gonna love my star!
=D
eee

strager wrote:

// Redid this design a bit; almost looks like a fish now
I didn't notice it was supposed to look like a fish? anyways, MOVING ON!!
eeemod GO!!!

okay, I was gonna up n' go to give this map a star, couldn't find anything wrong with any of the difficulties, that is UNTIL I WENT TO [Watch This]
oh, no, mmhmm, this is not good, yup. .. . . . . yeah,

ur offsets are incorrect different on the difficulties, I'm definitely sure that this is not rankable. . . so you know, fix it, I like the one on [Watch This] as it doesn't start too sudden and sounds right

that is all. . . . . . good map. . . . them jumps were just surprising to me, I guess they can stay though.
starager. . . . . that was kinda lame, STAR!!!
Topic Starter
anonymous_old

eee wrote:

strager wrote:

// Redid this design a bit; almost looks like a fish now
I didn't notice it was supposed to look like a fish? anyways, MOVING ON!!
eeemod GO!!!

okay, I was gonna up n' go to give this map a star, couldn't find anything wrong with any of the difficulties, that is UNTIL I WENT TO [Watch This]
oh, no, mmhmm, this is not good, yup. .. . . . . yeah,

ur offsets are incorrect on the difficulties, I'm definitely sure that this is not rankable. . . so you know, fix it, I like the one on [Watch This] as it doesn't start too sudden and sounds right

that is all. . . . . . good map. . . . them jumps were just surprising to me, I guess they can stay though.
starager. . . . . that was kinda lame, STAR!!!
Still trying to find the right offset. Mine is like 14ms, theirs is 11ms, and PandaCath suggested 15ms.

What do you guys think (fufe, vyt, Gens)?
Gens

Lokamp wrote:

Gens' Boring Tuna
All ok here! (maybe insert somethin' original in the final part...)
I don't get it :<
I think the ending is fine.
EDIT: Oh yeah, and strager will fix the correct offset for me kthnx. (Discussed in IRC)
Lokamp
I'm here again!
Answering to Gens, I think there is an "incoerence point" between the four modes (it's a bit hard to explain...)
I mean, each of the four modes end in a different point...
If we want to rank (and love) this song, let the modes end at the same point (maybe adding some original beat pattern!)
Shinxyn
Interesting song

Gens'-
00:46:89 (1) - remove slider whistle please
01:00:01 (1) - I don't like how this ends with a clap... just discontinues.. finish instead?

vytalibus'-

00:55:79 (7) - add hitsound here?
I love the hitsounds on this

Fufe's-

after modding the first two, this one's hitsounds are painfully loud... lower a bit of the normal sections please?
01:13:60 (1) - left a tick please?
01:15:01 (1) - up a tick please~
01:16:89 (1) - up a tick (align) or down a tick (making it head down)
01:18:76 (1) - left a tick please
01:26:96 (2) - add finish to end?
02:43:84 (2) - this slider was almost hidden during play D:
hmm I don't like how there's a break then spam spinner ending... map the break or map a bit more?

Watch this-
Maybe also lower volume a bit? (for normal sections)
00:58:72 (1) - remove this if your just following the vocal... or move to white tick if it matches the clap
01:45:71 (3) - extreme nazi- this note's distance is off x_x
hmm I would think some of the streams would sound better with a bit of hitsounds, but oh well

Somehow this is catchy... >_<
fufe
Download: Dj Steve Porter - Rap Chop (strager) [Fufe's Nuts].osu


ignored some allignment. New ending. Messy combo placement, wasnt sure what to do with it. Change it up at your will. Also made 00:56:034 area deathstreams less evil.
Spierek
Star. Can't wait to see this ranked.
Agka
WATCH THIS you gonna love my nuts.

It's easy it's like one hand n' CHOP CHOP CHOP CHOP CHOP CHOP CHOP



i had to.
Starrodkirby86
I did love your nuts. Too bad I'm so late.

[Fufe's Nuts]:
02:02:59 (3) - Space it out wider so it becomes a horizontal flip of the red (3) ahead and other things like that.

[Watch This]:
00:34:46 (7) - Space this (7) a bit closer. I know I'm treading on dangerous territory here, but for something like this you should try having a stream have some consistent spacing. :S Why not just lodge it to the left of (6)?
01:08:10 (1,2,3) - Do you need to add some beats after that? Don't know, just sounds so incomplete, especially since it's done on 1/4.
02:31:65 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Trap much? XD

Those are purely suggestions. Feel free to ignore them.
Sleep Powder
[Gens Tuna]
00:57:20 (3) - End the repeat on the red tick maybe?
00:59:07 (3) - ^
00:40:32 (2,3,4) - ^
02:46:89 (1) - ^
02:48:76 (1) - ^
Sleep Powder
[Slap]
01:04:70 (3) - Maybe make this a slider on the white ticks instead?
01:06:34 (3) - ^
01:12:90 (3) - Take out clap on repeat?

[Nuts]
00:20:28 (x) - Add a Note here?
00:44:54 (6) - End on red tick?
00:55:79 (7) - White Tick
00:57:43 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - This part is a little confusing...
maybe move 13,14,15 a bit farther? not overlapping
02:23:92 (6) - Clap here?
02:27:67 (6) - ^
02:55:56 (x) - Add Note here?

[Watch this]
00:11:38 (5) - Delete Clap?
00:14:78 (2) - Add a clap here
00:33:29 (1,2,3) - Spacing...bad...fix it lol
00:34:46 (7) - ^
00:34:58 (1,2,3) - ^ stuff in here
00:58:76 (1) - Delete and just make the slider start there
01:08:33 (3) - No slider after this one?
01:54:85 (6) - New Combo?
01:54:74 (5) - (optional) Delete this note
01:56:61 (5) - ^
01:56:73 (6) - new Combo
Apply that to the rest in that pattern
02:30:71 (3,4) - Use the same spacing before the jumps on these parts?
For having a deathstream in here the maximum stars I will rate this will be 9 when its ranked lolz
03:11:85 (1) - White Tick...change spacing too
Gens
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Remco32
Hi,

? - up to you/suggestion
(?) - not entirely sure myself


Gens' Boring Tuna
There are allot of places where the spacing changes a little bit. This is hard to notice, especially for new players, because it's very subtle.
00:49:70 (2) - Spacing
00:52:51 (1) - Spacing
01:11:26 (1) - Clap hitsound at the end - ?
01:14:54 (2) - Spacing
02:28:84 (2) - Spacing
Nice ending with Kiai time.

vytalibus' Slap
Nice use of hitsounds.
00:28:25 (4) - Extra note - ?
I love the full-clap repeating sliders!
02:43:14 (1) - Kiai time - ?
03:08:92 (1) - End with a soft hitsound - ?

Fufe's Nuts
01:27:90 (1) - I find the break a little too long for a Hard/Insane difficulty. It takes the speed out of the map. Try to start it later - ?
02:57:31 (8) - Extra note - ?
03:12:31 (1) - End with a soft hitsound - ?

Watch This
00:15:24 (1) - I don't like this break, it takes the speed out of the map. - ?
I lolled at the SB :)
02:43:14 (1) - Kiai Time - ?
02:50:87 (1) - I don't like this break, it takes the speed out of the map.
03:09:62 (1,1,1,1,1) - Get rid of the finishhitsounds - ?

You have my star!
EiJi
One slap, you're gonna love my nuts.

Two slaps, you're gonna love my nuts.

Add a mushroom, you're gonna love my nuts.

The more you do it, you're gonna love my nuts.

<3 Vince.
Sushi
get this ranked already.

and put the skin to the bottom
Gens
Remco: I know, right? AIMod hates my maps :)

And now that I have free kudosu, I'm shooting some stars at this map~ 2 should be enough :P

Aaaaand another update.
Wizard Of Orz
i didn't even dl this.
Sonny
Awesome.
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