The lineart sucks. The anatomy is still not proper. The coloring is ugg :/ and the bg..Have you tried relaxing?
everything about my fanart sucks
it's a noob's work. orz
I tried my best. but my best is just not enough.
Anyway I have a looong way to go. and this is the first step.
The last thing you really want is to degrade yourself and your art.